Chapter Two: NOTHING LEFT
Rafoli
1 Month In
I was sitting on a log outside in the woods, just staring at the camp fire. Remembering… more how I ended up here in the first place. I was able to escape the city in my R.V and I took as much supplies and food that I could. I met Alive_Clem and her older sister imighthavebrokenit along the way. I was able to save them, when I found them running away for their lives after their parents were killed by a horde of walkers. We barely managed to escape that night, but somehow we made it. After that, we trusted each other and we looked after one another. I never thought I would be stuck in this position looking after two other humans while a zombie apocalypse was happening.
Truth is, I had murdered someone just the night before all of this happened. A man came into my house while I was sleeping and stabbed my wife, when she came out of the bathroom. I heard her yelling and grabbed a baseball bat. I … [view original content]
never call a girl crazy man...llol anyway, if you guys want to read, join my first ever thread called "Some insight on Carver's community" , it's pretty much everything I've gathered from the story so far that people seem to have overlooked or just preferred to yell "bad writing durrrr" , although there are some things that could've been done better I believe...like that whole "clementine does everything for everyone" thing...or mostly the windmill part...
never call a girl crazy man...llol anyway, if you guys want to read, join my first ever thread called "Some insight on Carver's community" ,… more it's pretty much everything I've gathered from the story so far that people seem to have overlooked or just preferred to yell "bad writing durrrr" , although there are some things that could've been done better I believe...like that whole "clementine does everything for everyone" thing...or mostly the windmill part...
well we'll see...there might have been more to it than just a man wanting his baby in my opinion...I have my own theory in the thread I made where I explain all the information I could gather from the story to actually tell what happened before the event of In Harm's Way.
yeah, honestly, I think he shoulda lived on through the end of the 4th episode. I was expecting him to live longer and be as smart as he was portrayed in episode 2.
Awesome, man! I checked and you made some solid points. I have to agree, the things you mentioned make sense. That's why I wanted to find out a little more about Carver before his death.
well we'll see...there might have been more to it than just a man wanting his baby in my opinion...I have my own theory in the thread I made… more where I explain all the information I could gather from the story to actually tell what happened before the event of In Harm's Way.
yeah, honestly, I think he shoulda lived on through the end of the 4th episode. I was expecting him to live longer and be as smart as he was portrayed in episode 2.
thanks haha, I read your stories, you did a pretty good job, you have impressive writing skills. It's also pretty interesting to see forum members dying in terrible ways XD keep up the good work man ! As a fellow script writer, I find your dedication admirable
Awesome, man! I checked and you made some solid points. I have to agree, the things you mentioned make sense. That's why I wanted to find out a little more about Carver before his death.
EDIT: BTW welcome to the community!
I guess so, but you should try to get actual books. It's better than staring at a screen. ^_^
Just go to a library, it's free. If they even still exist.
Heh, I don't think I'm as good as you guys tell me, this is actually the first time I try something like this, but thanks! Lol, yeah, bro. So far everyone has done good with the votes, though. A lot more people could have died if they chose different options. I'm glad people are enjoying the story, it's something for us while we wait for the next episodes of TWDG.
thanks haha, I read your stories, you did a pretty good job, you have impressive writing skills. It's also pretty interesting to see forum m… moreembers dying in terrible ways XD keep up the good work man ! As a fellow script writer, I find your dedication admirable
Well if you still have doubts in your writing skills, I can point you in the right direction. It's mostly that you stay true to what people want and what their characters will behave like in your story. Everyone seems to agree with the direction you're taking most of them so far and the way you branch stories is impressive by itself. The only advice I could give you is "HOW" you write each character's story from their point of view...I can't quite put my finger on it but there's something in some of the stories that you wrote that didn't sit right with me...maybe it's the way you formulate sentences sometimes...I don't know... hey, you wanted constructive criticism, that's my only one XD
Heh, I don't think I'm as good as you guys tell me, this is actually the first time I try something like this, but thanks! Lol, yeah, bro. S… moreo far everyone has done good with the votes, though. A lot more people could have died if they chose different options. I'm glad people are enjoying the story, it's something for us while we wait for the next episodes of TWDG.
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Like I said, read a book.
It won't kill you, I promise.
Not even a textbook?
Well, yeah. But, would you honestly read a textbook in your spare time? ._.
If it meant not being bored anymore, then yeah.
Nevermind. I'm not bored anymore -_-
Pansy. I think you need to catch up on your literature.
Read this, sinner:
Ouch...
Hell hurts, doesn't it?
jk xD
Gosh, you really try to make me feel bad, huh?
Okay, gimme -starts reading-
1) Shoot him.
3) Do nothing.
since I am dead I will try to sabotage other people from now on
No, don't do that. That's not fair. >:(
Oh, you jerk..
just watch some Breaking Bad dude...duh ! XD
Ahh, good idea! She's crazy, man. Pfff, reading... I do plenty of that as it is :P
HEY!
We're not friends anymore. >:(
WHAT? You can't do this to me!
You don't read >:(
never call a girl crazy man...llol anyway, if you guys want to read, join my first ever thread called "Some insight on Carver's community" , it's pretty much everything I've gathered from the story so far that people seem to have overlooked or just preferred to yell "bad writing durrrr" , although there are some things that could've been done better I believe...like that whole "clementine does everything for everyone" thing...or mostly the windmill part...
I DO read! But just in school and Lee's stories, isn't that enough?
Do you guys think Carver died too early? I think he should have at least lived on until episode 4, but it's too late now.
Lol.... no.
“A mind needs books as a sword needs a whetstone, if it is to keep its edge.”
Hey, I have an "edge"...right? But, I guess you don't wanna be friends anymore, anyway.....
well we'll see...there might have been more to it than just a man wanting his baby in my opinion...I have my own theory in the thread I made where I explain all the information I could gather from the story to actually tell what happened before the event of In Harm's Way.
Lol, we can still be friends
... just read more, and maybe you'll be as clever as me one day.
yeah, honestly, I think he shoulda lived on through the end of the 4th episode. I was expecting him to live longer and be as smart as he was portrayed in episode 2.
Lol, really....? Alright fine. Who wouldn't like to be as clever as you? :P
Now you're getting it =P
Awesome, man! I checked and you made some solid points. I have to agree, the things you mentioned make sense. That's why I wanted to find out a little more about Carver before his death.
EDIT: BTW welcome to the community!
Yeah, but oh well. We'll have to see what TTG comes up with for the final two episodes.
Does reading stuff on the internet count? Besides here? lol
I guess so, but you should try to get actual books. It's better than staring at a screen. ^_^
Just go to a library, it's free. If they even still exist.
thanks haha, I read your stories, you did a pretty good job, you have impressive writing skills. It's also pretty interesting to see forum members dying in terrible ways XD keep up the good work man ! As a fellow script writer, I find your dedication admirable
You're beginning to sound like my mom and older sister, lol. Yeah, of course they exist.
Thanks for comparing me to your mother .-.
Heh, I don't think I'm as good as you guys tell me, this is actually the first time I try something like this, but thanks! Lol, yeah, bro. So far everyone has done good with the votes, though. A lot more people could have died if they chose different options. I'm glad people are enjoying the story, it's something for us while we wait for the next episodes of TWDG.
I didn't mean it as an insult ._.
Lol, I know, chill out.
Okay
Well if you still have doubts in your writing skills, I can point you in the right direction. It's mostly that you stay true to what people want and what their characters will behave like in your story. Everyone seems to agree with the direction you're taking most of them so far and the way you branch stories is impressive by itself. The only advice I could give you is "HOW" you write each character's story from their point of view...I can't quite put my finger on it but there's something in some of the stories that you wrote that didn't sit right with me...maybe it's the way you formulate sentences sometimes...I don't know... hey, you wanted constructive criticism, that's my only one XD