Haha, like I said. I don't think I'm good at this stuff, so I don't mind. B] Well, I want to take the story in a certain direction. The readers don't know what I'm planning next, so they have to choose from the options I give them. If they go with the option that I think they would pick, then I continue on in the way I wanted to go. If not, then I have to change a bit of some of the parts and come up with another route that the character in the story will take. Idk that's the best way I can explain it, heh.
Well if you still have doubts in your writing skills, I can point you in the right direction. It's mostly that you stay true to what people … morewant and what their characters will behave like in your story. Everyone seems to agree with the direction you're taking most of them so far and the way you branch stories is impressive by itself. The only advice I could give you is "HOW" you write each character's story from their point of view...I can't quite put my finger on it but there's something in some of the stories that you wrote that didn't sit right with me...maybe it's the way you formulate sentences sometimes...I don't know... hey, you wanted constructive criticism, that's my only one XD
Haha, like I said. I don't think I'm good at this stuff, so I don't mind. B] Well, I want to take the story in a certain direction. The read… moreers don't know what I'm planning next, so they have to choose from the options I give them. If they go with the option that I think they would pick, then I continue on in the way I wanted to go. If not, then I have to change a bit of some of the parts and come up with another route that the character in the story will take. Idk that's the best way I can explain it, heh.
Haha, nah man, I'm sorry about that. I guess we can't help it. Really though, don't go crazy with trying to satisfy us. Just take your time and please have some time for yourself too
Haha, nah man, I'm sorry about that. I guess we can't help it. Really though, don't go crazy with trying to satisfy us. Just take your time and please have some time for yourself too
So much death and destruction...
If me and Guilty ever cross paths, I'm punching his soul in the face.
I can't wait to see Puncake's boat come back to life as a zombie, a zombie boat would fucking WREEEECK EVERRYTHIING.
Thank you for all this, it's really awesome.
I may or may not be able to vote for some of the chapters of Christmas-yet-to-come, some stuff's going on with me lately...
Chapter Two: NOTHING LEFT
Rafoli
1 Month In
I was sitting on a log outside in the woods, just staring at the camp fire. Remembering… more how I ended up here in the first place. I was able to escape the city in my R.V and I took as much supplies and food that I could. I met Alive_Clem and her older sister imighthavebrokenit along the way. I was able to save them, when I found them running away for their lives after their parents were killed by a horde of walkers. We barely managed to escape that night, but somehow we made it. After that, we trusted each other and we looked after one another. I never thought I would be stuck in this position looking after two other humans while a zombie apocalypse was happening.
Truth is, I had murdered someone just the night before all of this happened. A man came into my house while I was sleeping and stabbed my wife, when she came out of the bathroom. I heard her yelling and grabbed a baseball bat. I … [view original content]
Chapter Two: NOTHING LEFT
Rafoli
1 Month In
I was sitting on a log outside in the woods, just staring at the camp fire. Remembering… more how I ended up here in the first place. I was able to escape the city in my R.V and I took as much supplies and food that I could. I met Alive_Clem and her older sister imighthavebrokenit along the way. I was able to save them, when I found them running away for their lives after their parents were killed by a horde of walkers. We barely managed to escape that night, but somehow we made it. After that, we trusted each other and we looked after one another. I never thought I would be stuck in this position looking after two other humans while a zombie apocalypse was happening.
Truth is, I had murdered someone just the night before all of this happened. A man came into my house while I was sleeping and stabbed my wife, when she came out of the bathroom. I heard her yelling and grabbed a baseball bat. I … [view original content]
2) Alright. You can join us for now.
1) Open the front door and call them over.
So much death and destruction...
If me and Guilty eve… morer cross paths, I'm punching his soul in the face.
I can't wait to see Puncake's boat come back to life as a zombie, a zombie boat would fucking WREEEECK EVERRYTHIING.
Thank you for all this, it's really awesome.
I may or may not be able to vote for some of the chapters of Christmas-yet-to-come, some stuff's going on with me lately...
Chapter Two: NOTHING LEFT
Rafoli
1 Month In
I was sitting on a log outside in the woods, just staring at the camp fire. Remembering… more how I ended up here in the first place. I was able to escape the city in my R.V and I took as much supplies and food that I could. I met Alive_Clem and her older sister imighthavebrokenit along the way. I was able to save them, when I found them running away for their lives after their parents were killed by a horde of walkers. We barely managed to escape that night, but somehow we made it. After that, we trusted each other and we looked after one another. I never thought I would be stuck in this position looking after two other humans while a zombie apocalypse was happening.
Truth is, I had murdered someone just the night before all of this happened. A man came into my house while I was sleeping and stabbed my wife, when she came out of the bathroom. I heard her yelling and grabbed a baseball bat. I … [view original content]
Chapter Two: NOTHING LEFT
Rafoli
1 Month In
I was sitting on a log outside in the woods, just staring at the camp fire. Remembering… more how I ended up here in the first place. I was able to escape the city in my R.V and I took as much supplies and food that I could. I met Alive_Clem and her older sister imighthavebrokenit along the way. I was able to save them, when I found them running away for their lives after their parents were killed by a horde of walkers. We barely managed to escape that night, but somehow we made it. After that, we trusted each other and we looked after one another. I never thought I would be stuck in this position looking after two other humans while a zombie apocalypse was happening.
Truth is, I had murdered someone just the night before all of this happened. A man came into my house while I was sleeping and stabbed my wife, when she came out of the bathroom. I heard her yelling and grabbed a baseball bat. I … [view original content]
Chapter Two: NOTHING LEFT
Rafoli
1 Month In
I was sitting on a log outside in the woods, just staring at the camp fire. Remembering… more how I ended up here in the first place. I was able to escape the city in my R.V and I took as much supplies and food that I could. I met Alive_Clem and her older sister imighthavebrokenit along the way. I was able to save them, when I found them running away for their lives after their parents were killed by a horde of walkers. We barely managed to escape that night, but somehow we made it. After that, we trusted each other and we looked after one another. I never thought I would be stuck in this position looking after two other humans while a zombie apocalypse was happening.
Truth is, I had murdered someone just the night before all of this happened. A man came into my house while I was sleeping and stabbed my wife, when she came out of the bathroom. I heard her yelling and grabbed a baseball bat. I … [view original content]
Chapter Two: NOTHING LEFT
Rafoli
1 Month In
I was sitting on a log outside in the woods, just staring at the camp fire. Remembering… more how I ended up here in the first place. I was able to escape the city in my R.V and I took as much supplies and food that I could. I met Alive_Clem and her older sister imighthavebrokenit along the way. I was able to save them, when I found them running away for their lives after their parents were killed by a horde of walkers. We barely managed to escape that night, but somehow we made it. After that, we trusted each other and we looked after one another. I never thought I would be stuck in this position looking after two other humans while a zombie apocalypse was happening.
Truth is, I had murdered someone just the night before all of this happened. A man came into my house while I was sleeping and stabbed my wife, when she came out of the bathroom. I heard her yelling and grabbed a baseball bat. I … [view original content]
Chapter Two: NOTHING LEFT
Rafoli
1 Month In
I was sitting on a log outside in the woods, just staring at the camp fire. Remembering… more how I ended up here in the first place. I was able to escape the city in my R.V and I took as much supplies and food that I could. I met Alive_Clem and her older sister imighthavebrokenit along the way. I was able to save them, when I found them running away for their lives after their parents were killed by a horde of walkers. We barely managed to escape that night, but somehow we made it. After that, we trusted each other and we looked after one another. I never thought I would be stuck in this position looking after two other humans while a zombie apocalypse was happening.
Truth is, I had murdered someone just the night before all of this happened. A man came into my house while I was sleeping and stabbed my wife, when she came out of the bathroom. I heard her yelling and grabbed a baseball bat. I … [view original content]
Tobi and Guilty will develop a camp like the governor taking users as hostages to work for them.
Mark takes an interest when his enemies … moreare taking hostage. He sneaks up to the camp at night then pours cans of petrol around the camp. He uses loud noise to attract and surround the camp with walkers. He lits the petrol with a match leading to an inferno surrounding the camp no escape. The flaming walkers will attack all inside. Mission complete
Chapter Two: NOTHING LEFT
Rafoli
1 Month In
I was sitting on a log outside in the woods, just staring at the camp fire. Remembering… more how I ended up here in the first place. I was able to escape the city in my R.V and I took as much supplies and food that I could. I met Alive_Clem and her older sister imighthavebrokenit along the way. I was able to save them, when I found them running away for their lives after their parents were killed by a horde of walkers. We barely managed to escape that night, but somehow we made it. After that, we trusted each other and we looked after one another. I never thought I would be stuck in this position looking after two other humans while a zombie apocalypse was happening.
Truth is, I had murdered someone just the night before all of this happened. A man came into my house while I was sleeping and stabbed my wife, when she came out of the bathroom. I heard her yelling and grabbed a baseball bat. I … [view original content]
I don't know why lol? we should work together, we would be invincible we are the only villains. It's just crazy enough to work after seeing the effect of the decisions every path leads to my death well no more we can win this WAR!!
Me: Pizza? Did you just say pizza?
SweatPeaClem: Yes sir, with or without mushrooms?
Me: Pizza? PIZZA! PIIIIIIZZZZZAAAAA!!!!!! PIIIIIIIZZZZZZZAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
[SweatPeaClem runs away]
(Yeah I have a huge craving for pizza )
Dont_Look_Back: 1) Open the front door and call them over.
Aww I have a sister Together, we are Don'tLookBackAtAllThatRemains....? A little wordy, but I can't think of anything clever. You better not kill me off for her development >:P #IAintNoSarita
Chapter Two: NOTHING LEFT
Rafoli
1 Month In
I was sitting on a log outside in the woods, just staring at the camp fire. Remembering… more how I ended up here in the first place. I was able to escape the city in my R.V and I took as much supplies and food that I could. I met Alive_Clem and her older sister imighthavebrokenit along the way. I was able to save them, when I found them running away for their lives after their parents were killed by a horde of walkers. We barely managed to escape that night, but somehow we made it. After that, we trusted each other and we looked after one another. I never thought I would be stuck in this position looking after two other humans while a zombie apocalypse was happening.
Truth is, I had murdered someone just the night before all of this happened. A man came into my house while I was sleeping and stabbed my wife, when she came out of the bathroom. I heard her yelling and grabbed a baseball bat. I … [view original content]
Fuck yeah, GREAT entrance to my character! I'm impressed, I can easily imagine this as a Telltale game, and that means your work is great. Thank you for inviting me for this, bro.
Chapter Two: NOTHING LEFT
Rafoli
1 Month In
I was sitting on a log outside in the woods, just staring at the camp fire. Remembering… more how I ended up here in the first place. I was able to escape the city in my R.V and I took as much supplies and food that I could. I met Alive_Clem and her older sister imighthavebrokenit along the way. I was able to save them, when I found them running away for their lives after their parents were killed by a horde of walkers. We barely managed to escape that night, but somehow we made it. After that, we trusted each other and we looked after one another. I never thought I would be stuck in this position looking after two other humans while a zombie apocalypse was happening.
Truth is, I had murdered someone just the night before all of this happened. A man came into my house while I was sleeping and stabbed my wife, when she came out of the bathroom. I heard her yelling and grabbed a baseball bat. I … [view original content]
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Haha, like I said. I don't think I'm good at this stuff, so I don't mind. B] Well, I want to take the story in a certain direction. The readers don't know what I'm planning next, so they have to choose from the options I give them. If they go with the option that I think they would pick, then I continue on in the way I wanted to go. If not, then I have to change a bit of some of the parts and come up with another route that the character in the story will take. Idk that's the best way I can explain it, heh.
What are you talking about? You're absolutely awesome at this!
Thanks, bro! I'll try to post as much as I can so you guys don't end up going insane again, like earlier today, lol.
Haha, nah man, I'm sorry about that. I guess we can't help it. Really though, don't go crazy with trying to satisfy us. Just take your time and please have some time for yourself too
Heh, it's not a problem so don't worry about it! I'm trying to get to Ch.4. That's when things will get real. B]
Shiiit, I can't wait. Good thing we don't have school anymore!
Lol, hopefully some of the characters I want to keep alive survive by then, up to the votes you guys choose. B]
Hope that includes us 3. As long as you don't make the choices too painfully hard! xD
Let's just say, Ch.1 Had the easiest choices...
Shit, bro. You're a monster, lol.
Joseph. You must read. For it will make the moon of my life happy. :I
2) Alright. You can join us for now.
1) Open the front door and call them over.
So much death and destruction...
If me and Guilty ever cross paths, I'm punching his soul in the face.
I can't wait to see Puncake's boat come back to life as a zombie, a zombie boat would fucking WREEEECK EVERRYTHIING.
Thank you for all this, it's really awesome.
I may or may not be able to vote for some of the chapters of Christmas-yet-to-come, some stuff's going on with me lately...
Nah, that can't be it. It's a weird, though harmless gif.
Yeah, we already took care of it c:
Rafoli: 2) Alright. You can join us for now.
Dont_Look_Back: 1) Open the front door and call them over.
2) Alright. You can join us for now.
3) Do nothing
For now..... ._.
2) Alright. You can join us for now.
1) Open the front door and call them over.
aaaannnnd random but how do you guys get custom profile pictures? i can't seem to find that option
Yay!
2) Alright. You can join us for now.
1) Open the front door and call them over.
you have to use gravatar
my image isnt showing up in the gravatar tab
oh! nevermind, it has showed up
Rafoli: 2) Alright. You can join us for now.
Dont_Look_Back: 1) Open the front door and call them over.
1) Shoot him.
Not worth the risk save supplies and not risk a unknown person who could potentially kill everyone
2) Run to the back door and escape on my own.
A police officer trained to fight with a weapon if he turned on you your dead as your weaponless
2)Alright. You can join us for now.
3)Do nothing.
Me: Pizza? Did you just say pizza?
SweatPeaClem: Yes sir, with or without mushrooms?
Me: Pizza? PIZZA! PIIIIIIZZZZZAAAAA!!!!!! PIIIIIIIZZZZZZZAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
[SweatPeaClem runs away]
(Yeah I have a huge craving for pizza
)
Ever heard of secret tunnels? lol
[Tobi makes it out without a scratch]
WHY SO.... SCARED?
"Oh you're a mean one, Mr. Lee."
1) Join us for now (I want him to be my personal worker)
Hmmm [scratches beard] alright but I'm going to keep my eye on you.
God, what have I done?
Haha, don't worry, you're not the only one. 
Why do you people love to make me hungry?
Rafoli: 2) Alright. You can join us for now.
Dont_Look_Back: 1) Open the front door and call them over.
Aww I have a sister
Together, we are Don'tLookBackAtAllThatRemains....? A little wordy, but I can't think of anything clever. You better not kill me off for her development >:P #IAintNoSarita
Fuck yeah, GREAT entrance to my character! I'm impressed, I can easily imagine this as a Telltale game, and that means your work is great. Thank you for inviting me for this, bro.
Dont_Look_Back: 3) Do nothing.
Chocolate, pizza, chocolate, pizza, chocolate, pizza!!!
Lol, she's gonna hate us :'D