I found time to do the next chapter, so this one won't introduce any new characters, I really want to give some development to the character… mores, I haven't given that much to any of them. So this chapter fully focuses on the characters
The Walking Dead: Right or Wrong
Episode 2: Starved For Help
Chapter 1 Part 1/6
[ADAM STARK]
THREE MONTHS LATER
I couldn't believe what happened today. Lee and I were in the forest hunting for some game, and Kenny and Mark were doing the same, but we had two different groups and we heard yelling, we ran over there and there was a man stuck to the bear trap and he had two other college kids with him, I heard one of the kids say that it was his teacher. We had to leave the teacher behind, I didn't like it..but it had to be done. I guess, that's who I am now. But we brought two more into the group, and Lilly wasn't really happy about that. Travis and Ben, I think. It seems Lee had to hand out food rations t… [view original content]
I found time to do the next chapter, so this one won't introduce any new characters, I really want to give some development to the character… mores, I haven't given that much to any of them. So this chapter fully focuses on the characters
The Walking Dead: Right or Wrong
Episode 2: Starved For Help
Chapter 1 Part 1/6
[ADAM STARK]
THREE MONTHS LATER
I couldn't believe what happened today. Lee and I were in the forest hunting for some game, and Kenny and Mark were doing the same, but we had two different groups and we heard yelling, we ran over there and there was a man stuck to the bear trap and he had two other college kids with him, I heard one of the kids say that it was his teacher. We had to leave the teacher behind, I didn't like it..but it had to be done. I guess, that's who I am now. But we brought two more into the group, and Lilly wasn't really happy about that. Travis and Ben, I think. It seems Lee had to hand out food rations t… [view original content]
I found time to do the next chapter, so this one won't introduce any new characters, I really want to give some development to the character… mores, I haven't given that much to any of them. So this chapter fully focuses on the characters
The Walking Dead: Right or Wrong
Episode 2: Starved For Help
Chapter 1 Part 1/6
[ADAM STARK]
THREE MONTHS LATER
I couldn't believe what happened today. Lee and I were in the forest hunting for some game, and Kenny and Mark were doing the same, but we had two different groups and we heard yelling, we ran over there and there was a man stuck to the bear trap and he had two other college kids with him, I heard one of the kids say that it was his teacher. We had to leave the teacher behind, I didn't like it..but it had to be done. I guess, that's who I am now. But we brought two more into the group, and Lilly wasn't really happy about that. Travis and Ben, I think. It seems Lee had to hand out food rations t… [view original content]
George and Callie are fine on their own reading up on how to be the St. Johns. Thanks for including Carley! Hopefully she doesn't have as lame a death in this as in canon. Nero's a perv, maybe Sonya will smack some manners into him... unlikely.
I found time to do the next chapter, so this one won't introduce any new characters, I really want to give some development to the character… mores, I haven't given that much to any of them. So this chapter fully focuses on the characters
The Walking Dead: Right or Wrong
Episode 2: Starved For Help
Chapter 1 Part 1/6
[ADAM STARK]
THREE MONTHS LATER
I couldn't believe what happened today. Lee and I were in the forest hunting for some game, and Kenny and Mark were doing the same, but we had two different groups and we heard yelling, we ran over there and there was a man stuck to the bear trap and he had two other college kids with him, I heard one of the kids say that it was his teacher. We had to leave the teacher behind, I didn't like it..but it had to be done. I guess, that's who I am now. But we brought two more into the group, and Lilly wasn't really happy about that. Travis and Ben, I think. It seems Lee had to hand out food rations t… [view original content]
I found time to do the next chapter, so this one won't introduce any new characters, I really want to give some development to the character… mores, I haven't given that much to any of them. So this chapter fully focuses on the characters
The Walking Dead: Right or Wrong
Episode 2: Starved For Help
Chapter 1 Part 1/6
[ADAM STARK]
THREE MONTHS LATER
I couldn't believe what happened today. Lee and I were in the forest hunting for some game, and Kenny and Mark were doing the same, but we had two different groups and we heard yelling, we ran over there and there was a man stuck to the bear trap and he had two other college kids with him, I heard one of the kids say that it was his teacher. We had to leave the teacher behind, I didn't like it..but it had to be done. I guess, that's who I am now. But we brought two more into the group, and Lilly wasn't really happy about that. Travis and Ben, I think. It seems Lee had to hand out food rations t… [view original content]
I found time to do the next chapter, so this one won't introduce any new characters, I really want to give some development to the character… mores, I haven't given that much to any of them. So this chapter fully focuses on the characters
The Walking Dead: Right or Wrong
Episode 2: Starved For Help
Chapter 1 Part 1/6
[ADAM STARK]
THREE MONTHS LATER
I couldn't believe what happened today. Lee and I were in the forest hunting for some game, and Kenny and Mark were doing the same, but we had two different groups and we heard yelling, we ran over there and there was a man stuck to the bear trap and he had two other college kids with him, I heard one of the kids say that it was his teacher. We had to leave the teacher behind, I didn't like it..but it had to be done. I guess, that's who I am now. But we brought two more into the group, and Lilly wasn't really happy about that. Travis and Ben, I think. It seems Lee had to hand out food rations t… [view original content]
I found time to do the next chapter, so this one won't introduce any new characters, I really want to give some development to the character… mores, I haven't given that much to any of them. So this chapter fully focuses on the characters
The Walking Dead: Right or Wrong
Episode 2: Starved For Help
Chapter 1 Part 1/6
[ADAM STARK]
THREE MONTHS LATER
I couldn't believe what happened today. Lee and I were in the forest hunting for some game, and Kenny and Mark were doing the same, but we had two different groups and we heard yelling, we ran over there and there was a man stuck to the bear trap and he had two other college kids with him, I heard one of the kids say that it was his teacher. We had to leave the teacher behind, I didn't like it..but it had to be done. I guess, that's who I am now. But we brought two more into the group, and Lilly wasn't really happy about that. Travis and Ben, I think. It seems Lee had to hand out food rations t… [view original content]
I found time to do the next chapter, so this one won't introduce any new characters, I really want to give some development to the character… mores, I haven't given that much to any of them. So this chapter fully focuses on the characters
The Walking Dead: Right or Wrong
Episode 2: Starved For Help
Chapter 1 Part 1/6
[ADAM STARK]
THREE MONTHS LATER
I couldn't believe what happened today. Lee and I were in the forest hunting for some game, and Kenny and Mark were doing the same, but we had two different groups and we heard yelling, we ran over there and there was a man stuck to the bear trap and he had two other college kids with him, I heard one of the kids say that it was his teacher. We had to leave the teacher behind, I didn't like it..but it had to be done. I guess, that's who I am now. But we brought two more into the group, and Lilly wasn't really happy about that. Travis and Ben, I think. It seems Lee had to hand out food rations t… [view original content]
[Equipment Center] Also, it's awesome that in this universe we had Adam go hunting too, so we saved Travis. We really have set this universe on a different course. Maybe Lee will live?
I found time to do the next chapter, so this one won't introduce any new characters, I really want to give some development to the character… mores, I haven't given that much to any of them. So this chapter fully focuses on the characters
The Walking Dead: Right or Wrong
Episode 2: Starved For Help
Chapter 1 Part 1/6
[ADAM STARK]
THREE MONTHS LATER
I couldn't believe what happened today. Lee and I were in the forest hunting for some game, and Kenny and Mark were doing the same, but we had two different groups and we heard yelling, we ran over there and there was a man stuck to the bear trap and he had two other college kids with him, I heard one of the kids say that it was his teacher. We had to leave the teacher behind, I didn't like it..but it had to be done. I guess, that's who I am now. But we brought two more into the group, and Lilly wasn't really happy about that. Travis and Ben, I think. It seems Lee had to hand out food rations t… [view original content]
[Equipment Center] Also, it's awesome that in this universe we had Adam go hunting too, so we saved Travis. We really have set this universe on a different course. Maybe Lee will live?
I found time to do the next chapter, so this one won't introduce any new characters, I really want to give some development to the character… mores, I haven't given that much to any of them. So this chapter fully focuses on the characters
The Walking Dead: Right or Wrong
Episode 2: Starved For Help
Chapter 1 Part 1/6
[ADAM STARK]
THREE MONTHS LATER
I couldn't believe what happened today. Lee and I were in the forest hunting for some game, and Kenny and Mark were doing the same, but we had two different groups and we heard yelling, we ran over there and there was a man stuck to the bear trap and he had two other college kids with him, I heard one of the kids say that it was his teacher. We had to leave the teacher behind, I didn't like it..but it had to be done. I guess, that's who I am now. But we brought two more into the group, and Lilly wasn't really happy about that. Travis and Ben, I think. It seems Lee had to hand out food rations t… [view original content]
I'm guessing you're doing the St. John thing next? They might need more people, since there's more people in the main group now. Or will the next chapters focus on the bandits, that could be cool.
Also, Daniel still sounds like he's from the south.
Well, I'm glad to see the pace slow down so everyone can get a bit more backstory/development. We know a little bit more about them now, especially Sonya (even though she didn't physically make an appearance.
I found time to do the next chapter, so this one won't introduce any new characters, I really want to give some development to the character… mores, I haven't given that much to any of them. So this chapter fully focuses on the characters
The Walking Dead: Right or Wrong
Episode 2: Starved For Help
Chapter 1 Part 1/6
[ADAM STARK]
THREE MONTHS LATER
I couldn't believe what happened today. Lee and I were in the forest hunting for some game, and Kenny and Mark were doing the same, but we had two different groups and we heard yelling, we ran over there and there was a man stuck to the bear trap and he had two other college kids with him, I heard one of the kids say that it was his teacher. We had to leave the teacher behind, I didn't like it..but it had to be done. I guess, that's who I am now. But we brought two more into the group, and Lilly wasn't really happy about that. Travis and Ben, I think. It seems Lee had to hand out food rations t… [view original content]
I'm guessing you're doing the St. John thing next? They might need more people, since there's more people in the main group now. Or will the… more next chapters focus on the bandits, that could be cool.
Also, Daniel still sounds like he's from the south.
I found time to do the next chapter, so this one won't introduce any new characters, I really want to give some development to the character… mores, I haven't given that much to any of them. So this chapter fully focuses on the characters
The Walking Dead: Right or Wrong
Episode 2: Starved For Help
Chapter 1 Part 1/6
[ADAM STARK]
THREE MONTHS LATER
I couldn't believe what happened today. Lee and I were in the forest hunting for some game, and Kenny and Mark were doing the same, but we had two different groups and we heard yelling, we ran over there and there was a man stuck to the bear trap and he had two other college kids with him, I heard one of the kids say that it was his teacher. We had to leave the teacher behind, I didn't like it..but it had to be done. I guess, that's who I am now. But we brought two more into the group, and Lilly wasn't really happy about that. Travis and Ben, I think. It seems Lee had to hand out food rations t… [view original content]
I liked it, I guess in the next chapter(s) we're gonna deal with the St. Johns and the bandits and know what happened to Carmen (I'm pretty sure they raped her)
I found time to do the next chapter, so this one won't introduce any new characters, I really want to give some development to the character… mores, I haven't given that much to any of them. So this chapter fully focuses on the characters
The Walking Dead: Right or Wrong
Episode 2: Starved For Help
Chapter 1 Part 1/6
[ADAM STARK]
THREE MONTHS LATER
I couldn't believe what happened today. Lee and I were in the forest hunting for some game, and Kenny and Mark were doing the same, but we had two different groups and we heard yelling, we ran over there and there was a man stuck to the bear trap and he had two other college kids with him, I heard one of the kids say that it was his teacher. We had to leave the teacher behind, I didn't like it..but it had to be done. I guess, that's who I am now. But we brought two more into the group, and Lilly wasn't really happy about that. Travis and Ben, I think. It seems Lee had to hand out food rations t… [view original content]
It sounds strange, but your story is kinda... inspiring. I am thinking about making my own interactive fanfiction, even though there is already a lot of them.
It sounds strange, but your story is kinda... inspiring. I am thinking about making my own interactive fanfiction, even though there is already a lot of them.
I found time to do the next chapter, so this one won't introduce any new characters, I really want to give some development to the character… mores, I haven't given that much to any of them. So this chapter fully focuses on the characters
The Walking Dead: Right or Wrong
Episode 2: Starved For Help
Chapter 1 Part 1/6
[ADAM STARK]
THREE MONTHS LATER
I couldn't believe what happened today. Lee and I were in the forest hunting for some game, and Kenny and Mark were doing the same, but we had two different groups and we heard yelling, we ran over there and there was a man stuck to the bear trap and he had two other college kids with him, I heard one of the kids say that it was his teacher. We had to leave the teacher behind, I didn't like it..but it had to be done. I guess, that's who I am now. But we brought two more into the group, and Lilly wasn't really happy about that. Travis and Ben, I think. It seems Lee had to hand out food rations t… [view original content]
Comments
Wait what about the other group?
i lost my shit! That line was perfect. I'm kind of surprise how smoothly you managed to integrate the group into the Motor Inn survivors. Nice job.
Go to the [equipment center].
Go to the [Equipment Center]
[Hardware Store]
George and Callie are fine on their own reading up on how to be the St. Johns. Thanks for including Carley! Hopefully she doesn't have as lame a death in this as in canon. Nero's a perv, maybe Sonya will smack some manners into him... unlikely.
LOL This was awesome! All the refrences to other things like the Outsiders and Metal Gear Solid XD
[Equipment Center]
lol that was great Larry: "Where's my food?' Nero: "I ate your food." XD
Edit: I hope you write the group into the St John situation that would be awesome!
SOMBRERO 4 LYFE DAWG!
[Hardware store]
Sweet Adam and Lee on a solo mission!
[Equipment Center]
[Go to the Hardware store]
What happened to Sonya last week?
Okay, discuss the latest chapter and give predictions, I want to hear everyone's thoughts
[Equipment Center] Also, it's awesome that in this universe we had Adam go hunting too, so we saved Travis. We really have set this universe on a different course. Maybe Lee will live?
The St. John's come over and somebody in the group shoots them, avoiding the whole conflict.
Maybe... maybe Carley will live?
I wonder what Travis will bring to the table... his dad was special forces!
Andy: We just were wonderin' if you could spare some gas?
Sonya: Why do you have creepy theme music?
Danny: Because we make people latch on to idiot balls while we fuck them up with our villainious behaviour...
Andy: Forget my idiot brother said that.
Carley: ... shoots both of them Well, that was easy.
[Hardware Store]
I'm guessing you're doing the St. John thing next? They might need more people, since there's more people in the main group now. Or will the next chapters focus on the bandits, that could be cool.
Also, Daniel still sounds like he's from the south.
Well, I'm glad to see the pace slow down so everyone can get a bit more backstory/development. We know a little bit more about them now, especially Sonya (even though she didn't physically make an appearance.
[Equipment Center]
I'm not from the south, but I say 'ain't'
Who isn't ready for Sombrero? That's the real question
lol THAT GIF!
SOMBREEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
IMMA ALSO SHIP ADAM AND LILY! (lol IDK XD)
ADAM LEVINE?
ALI?
LIL ADAM?
ALF? XD
I would go to the [Equipment center] though.
That gif is perfect...
[Equipment Center]
Hope I'm not too late.
How many chapters has Episode 2 anyway?
Nah. Voting is closed when I do the 'alright starting next part' :P
So you gonna do any more tonight or are you done for tonight?
No more tonight. It's 2:35 AM for me. Tomorrow's gonna be quite eventful depending on the choice.
I liked it, I guess in the next chapter(s) we're gonna deal with the St. Johns and the bandits and know what happened to Carmen (I'm pretty sure they raped her)
I'm very scared now.....
Oh yeah I forgot, good then
Holy shit, you cracked me up on some of those lines.
It sounds strange, but your story is kinda... inspiring. I am thinking about making my own interactive fanfiction, even though there is already a lot of them.
Yes, go for it! There's never enough interactive fanfictions!
Sounds awesome, there can never be enough ones! \o/
Go to [Equipment Center] seems to be a good idea.
Those who captured Carmen maybe are the bandits who will attack the farm?
By the way, really cool chapter! The group integrated smoothly the S1 story and the characters development is well do e.
That was great chapter. Good idea with character development, can't wait for new characters though
I think there'll be more wherever we go.
Actually, that story is inspiring me too...I'm thinking about a fanfic myself, not sure if interactive tho XD
ALF YES
I ship it.
I`m gonna think about this and probably open the submit box on next week. Well, who knows...