Lol, noo, no! I was being sarcastic. I'm sure she was really wishing you luck, I was just joking around. I'm in a good mood today, and I want everyone to have some laughs! B]
fact that my incident spread around the internet and now lots of people know about it, well, at least some of it, was a bit discomforting. I… more was about to post a comment on all of the videos telling them my ordeal, but then I remembered “don’t reveal the secret.” I thought about this for a bit. Nothing bad has happened to me yet, and I don’t think anything bad will actually happen. I was starting to get a crazy feeling Rockstar put this into the game on purpose, to create buzz and have their game talked about more. But I don’t think Rockstar is that twisted. I mean, this entire story started from me hijacking a car with no driver in it, that was the event that seemed to start it all. The shadow attempted to kill me multiple times, hence the failed attempt when I spun off the mountainside road. The shadow finally became the victor after killed all 3 of the protagonists. I really have no accurate conclusion, and I don’t think I’ll ever get one, … [view original content]
Ok, first thing first, i got a bloody headache reading all that in one go, i suggest separating your paragraphs unless you want people to go " Too long didn't read LLOL".
Second, nicee story, but it's not really scary per se....not for me anyway, but then again it takes a lot to scare me. The fact that some "twisted dark shadow thing" haunts the game is extremely cliché and done to death.
Third, don't finish your creepypasta with something like " people are still trying to solve it to this day" as it's quite clear that all you said is a lie and in reality none of this happened. Slenderman was a creepy pasta but it was actually a reimagining of a real urban legend. "Ben Drowned" was creepy for the simple fact that the story was well told and actually creepy. Yours isn't enough to be called a creepypasta per se and would only be a "cool story bro" type of story.
Don't feel offended by what i'm saying, this is just constructive criticism after all. My advice to make a good GTAV creepypasta would be to use actual parts of the game and twist them a bit, there's a lot to work with there. The Epsilon program, the alien mystery, the ghost near the lighthouse and the murder mystery, which is all part of the game itself.
Just use aspects that are real and put your own creepy story around those elements. We all know that Trevor, Franklin and Michael are parts of the game, that isn't enough to make a creepy story. Inventing some creepy shadow figure out of nowhere isn't good enough either.
Just my opinion on the matter buddy, don't take it personally, but work on it to improve it :P
fact that my incident spread around the internet and now lots of people know about it, well, at least some of it, was a bit discomforting. I… more was about to post a comment on all of the videos telling them my ordeal, but then I remembered “don’t reveal the secret.” I thought about this for a bit. Nothing bad has happened to me yet, and I don’t think anything bad will actually happen. I was starting to get a crazy feeling Rockstar put this into the game on purpose, to create buzz and have their game talked about more. But I don’t think Rockstar is that twisted. I mean, this entire story started from me hijacking a car with no driver in it, that was the event that seemed to start it all. The shadow attempted to kill me multiple times, hence the failed attempt when I spun off the mountainside road. The shadow finally became the victor after killed all 3 of the protagonists. I really have no accurate conclusion, and I don’t think I’ll ever get one, … [view original content]
Nothing at all? What about that medieval torture method where they put rats in a pot, heat up the pot and put it on your stomach so the rats… more get frightened and eat their way out through your guts?
I didn't dislike you're comment in case you thought it was me >_<
Nope, although the description of the person i am they gave me when i was a kid did somehow allude to that...i'm not even joking, it's creepy and strangely accurate...some kind of tablet or something...
But i'm an atheist so that would be quite ironic wouldn't it ? XD
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Pro how do you do that red text? What is it for anyway?
You just doomed us all you fool!
You could at least seperated them into paragraphs...
Yeah, I think it's in Season 2.
At Harrenhal. Oh my God it was gross.
What AWESOMEO said...
Lol, I have no idea what you're talking about, ATR. B]
I'm not going to add paragraphs in the middle of the story and when it's unnecessary haha
PPFFFTTT don't say that. The trolls should probably learn to stop being to butt hurt. Its nothing about you.
Tackles woodbury
I don't want WtW to go crazy ;-;
People do that because they know the other persons personality is better then theirs.
pushes TDM off train
PLAY NICE GIRLS!
There was nothing to talk about at the moment. What do you expect??
@AllThatRemains did you see this?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rUgAgfO-16s
She's already wearing a basket on her head. That's step one right there, haha.
-runs him over with my car-
Ok, first thing first, i got a bloody headache reading all that in one go, i suggest separating your paragraphs unless you want people to go " Too long didn't read LLOL".
Second, nicee story, but it's not really scary per se....not for me anyway, but then again it takes a lot to scare me. The fact that some "twisted dark shadow thing" haunts the game is extremely cliché and done to death.
Third, don't finish your creepypasta with something like " people are still trying to solve it to this day" as it's quite clear that all you said is a lie and in reality none of this happened. Slenderman was a creepy pasta but it was actually a reimagining of a real urban legend. "Ben Drowned" was creepy for the simple fact that the story was well told and actually creepy. Yours isn't enough to be called a creepypasta per se and would only be a "cool story bro" type of story.
Don't feel offended by what i'm saying, this is just constructive criticism after all. My advice to make a good GTAV creepypasta would be to use actual parts of the game and twist them a bit, there's a lot to work with there. The Epsilon program, the alien mystery, the ghost near the lighthouse and the murder mystery, which is all part of the game itself.
Just use aspects that are real and put your own creepy story around those elements. We all know that Trevor, Franklin and Michael are parts of the game, that isn't enough to make a creepy story. Inventing some creepy shadow figure out of nowhere isn't good enough either.
Just my opinion on the matter buddy, don't take it personally, but work on it to improve it :P
Good luck !!
Stabs Woodbury in the eye with a shard of glass
That was also done in Fast in Furious.
Oh shit now she's REALLY the governor.
Well sorry if that wasn't really in my thoughts xD
But i assume that would be quite a terrifying experience :P
She was trying to make a fashion statement, okay? v_v
Alright, fine..... so where's my damn eyepatch??
Nope, although the description of the person i am they gave me when i was a kid did somehow allude to that...i'm not even joking, it's creepy and strangely accurate...some kind of tablet or something...
But i'm an atheist so that would be quite ironic wouldn't it ? XD
DAMMMIT, YOU BUTT HURT TROLLS COME AT ME !
s i g h
Hands out eye patch & pats head
stabs your zombie daughter in the face with a sword
BECAUSE you killed her and stole her car !! We abandoned you and hunted you down for a reason you hypocrite !! xD
May i remind you that you did the same thing to Rigtail ? He saved your life, then you killed him and stole his helicopter....
You abandoned him at the bottom of a mountain !!!
You deserve everything that you got coming towards you Elian...EVERYTHING!!
Oh shush. >.<
Anyone else wants to meet them in person just for once, and beat the holy fucking shit out of them?
DISLIKE THIS TROLL! I FEED OFF YOUR HATE! IT MAKES ME STRONGER!
I just realized that I have way too many fears for you to incorporate into the story so why not just say them? I will list them in random order.
I'm afraid of...
1.) Deep, murky water
2.) Fish
3.) Worms/maggots
4.) Turtles
5.) Clusters of things (Clusterphobia)
6.) Any kind of frog/toad
7.) Small, darty lizards
8.) Birds, especially pelicans (I'm not afraid of penguins or owls though)
9.) Dead baby birds
10.) Being eaten alive.
And so I don't look like a total pussy...
Common Fears I'm Not Afraid Of:
1.) Heights
2.) Snakes
3.) Alligators
4.) Clowns
5.) Spiders
6.) Needles
7.) Being chained up
8.) Blood, guts, or anything gory
Damnit TDM !! You really can't help it can you ?!
xD
I wish I had an Easter basket to put on..
AFTER YOU KILLED ME AND STOLE JOSEPHS CAR TO DUMP IT IN THE RIVER (WHICH I WOULD HAVE DONE IF YOU HAD ASKED!)
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AND I NEVER SAW THAT 1K EITHER!