The Walking North (Episode 3 Part 4 out NOW)

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  • edited August 2014

    [Let Mike figure it out]

    Carley123 posted: »

    The Walking North Episode 3 Part 2 (100% of readers wanted to kiss Zack) "Zack..." I mutter and i lean forward Our lips touch and he m

  • [Tell Mike]

    If he can't trust his brother, then he's in deep trouble.

    Carley123 posted: »

    The Walking North Episode 3 Part 2 (100% of readers wanted to kiss Zack) "Zack..." I mutter and i lean forward Our lips touch and he m

  • Gonna need a tie breaker

    Carley123 posted: »

    The Walking North Episode 3 Part 2 (100% of readers wanted to kiss Zack) "Zack..." I mutter and i lean forward Our lips touch and he m

  • That's Me! [Tell Martin] He should know....

    Carley123 posted: »

    Gonna need a tie breaker

  • wow that was the closest vote ever. :3

  • :)

    Carley123 posted: »

    wow that was the closest vote ever.

  • Just finished part 3 of Episode 3, this was my favourite part to write possibly ever..

  • Can't wait :)

    Carley123 posted: »

    Just finished part 3 of Episode 3, this was my favourite part to write possibly ever..

  • edited August 2014

    The Walking North Episode 3 Part 3 'The Desert' (60% of readers wanted to tell Martin)

    "I'm sorry Mike" I say "I'm telling him"

    "No!" Mike exclaims "You cant he.... he will"

    Martin walks in and sees me and Mike standing there

    "Oh hey..." Martin says "Whats going on?"

    "Mike" i say as i gulp "He's bitten, your brother.."

    "WHAT!?!?" Martin exclaims "Is this a joke?... its not funny"

    "No..." Mike mutters and shows him the bite mark thats on his arm.

    "My head, feels hot.." Mike says as he rubs his temple

    The bushes rustle and Zack walks in

    "Katherine?" he asks me "Whats taking so long?"

    I turn around and i know its not fair to tell Zack

    "Its.. nothing" I say "We are ju-"

    "Mike is bitten!" Martin spits out

    "Goddammit Martin!" Mike sneers 'Ill be fine"

    "No you wont" Martin says calmly "You have a fever already, when did this happen?"

    "Back at the RV" I say

    "Oh my god... i to go get everyone..." Zack mutters and runs off

    "Wait!" i yell "Zack, come back!"

    "Dammit Katherine" Mike says "I told you not to tell Martin!"

    "You werent going to tell me?" Martin gasps

    "Guys!" I yell cutting into their fight "We need to make a plan"

    "I dont know..." Martin tears up

    Mike looks up at him and stands up, suddenly they hug tightly

    "Didnt i always say youd outlive me?" Mike smiles "Youll be fine, you have these kids to look after"

    Martin begins sobbing and Riley, Adam and Emma run into the woods towards us.

    "He's bit?" Riley asks

    "Yes.." Martin mutters

    "Can you cut it off Martin?" asks Riley

    "I cant, we dont have the supplies he'll bleed out, plus its already made it to his head..." Martin whisperes while looking down

    "This was her fault" Emma sneers at me

    "What?!?" I say "How?"

    "if she could actually kill them" Emma hisses "then-"

    "Emma" Riley says while putting her hand up "Not. Now"

    "We need to keep going" Mike says "I can go for awhile"

    "What about the fire?" Riley asks

    "We need to go to the highway, theres no time" Mike replies

    "Okay" Adam says in a strong tone "Lets go back to Willy, Zack and Olivia"

    • 7 hours later -

    Its only 4 in the morning, we are walking on the main highway and there are other survivors around us, they have goverment officals directing us to Vancouver every once in awhile. The nearest survivors are about half a mile away, they seem to be jogging.

    "Can you go on?" Riley asks Mike

    "Yeah.." He replies weakly, suddenly Mike coughs up blood.

    "oh god" Martin says and he wipes it off of his chin

    I walk beside Olivia and she is being very silent, so is everyone.

    "So Olivia" I say killing the silence "Are you okay?"

    "Yeah... you know" She whispers "I miss Nick i.... i think i could have saved him, you know?"

    "i dont know" I say "i dont think it was your fault or Willys.."

    "I know hes just a kid" She says looking down "I wish... if Prinicpal Charles killed me Nick would have been taken maybe and there could have been more room"

    "No" I say "Remember when i ceiling collapsed on him? You were a good sister only you wanted to save him"

    "Yeah..." She says "I remember.."

    "Sorry.." I apoligize "I didnt mean to.."

    Suddenly Mike falls forward face first.

    "Jesus!!" Martin yells "Mike?"

    Mike moves and flops on his back.

    "I'm...i'm fine" he coughs "i just need to rest"

    "We need to keep moving!" Emma replies in a harsh tone

    "No!" Martin yells at her "Just give him a sec"

    "Its fine" Olivia says smiling "He will be... he'll.."

    Olivia looks at something and walks off the road.

    "Olivia?" I say

    "Walkers!!" Adam yells as he sees the shadows of them pretty close to us

    "We have to go now!" I say

    "But..." Martin whispers "What about.."

    "Oh... oh my god" Olivia gasps and i walk over to her

    "Olivia, whats wrong?" I ask

    "NOOOOOOOOO!!!" Olivia screams as she goes onto her knees "AHHHH!! GOD!!! NOOOOOO... MELISSA!"

    "What the hell?!?" Riley sneers "Theyll come here if we yell"

    "Wait" I say and look into the distant.

    Then i see it, theres Melissa walking towards us her blonde hair is in patches, i can see the bite marks all over her and her stomach is open.. she is one of them.

    "NOOOOOOOOO!!!" Olivia sobs "MEELLIIISSAA! NNNNIIIIICCCKKK COME BACK!"

    "Oh my god" Adam exclaims as he relizes whats going on.

    "Jesus christ" Emma gasps

    "Willy!" I say while turning around, Willy is standing there with his eyes wide open and stepping back from all of us.

    "They are getting close!" I yell "Olivia we need to go!"

    "NOOOOOO!" She screams and walkers nearly run to her

    I pick her up but she falls over and a walker grabs onto her leg.

    "AHHHHH!" Olivia screams "NOOOO"

    Melissa nearly runs towards Olivia and grabs onto her, I kick what was Melissa in the face.

    "Grab my hand!" Zack says offereing to pull me up

    "No!" I say "im saving her"

    Olivia falls over on my foot and i cant move.

    BAM!

    Melissa's body falls over after Adam shot it with his gun.

    A walker crawls onto Olivia and i kick it off of her, another walker grabs her and then another.

    "Katherine!" A voice says I turn around and its Riley

    "I NEED to pull you up!!" She sneers "Dont let her kill you too"

    "HELP!!" Cries Olivia

    "I'm not letting my friend die!" I scream

    i manage to grab Olivia's arm to pull us up when suddenly a Walker grabs onto me

    [Let Riley pull you away] or [Save Olivia]

    (If you see the name 'Marcus' in the story it was supposed to be 'Martin' I forgot the name and wrote Marcus instead. If you see any lines involving the name 'Marcus' please tell me)

  • [Save Olivia]

    Carley123 posted: »

    The Walking North Episode 3 Part 3 'The Desert' (60% of readers wanted to tell Martin) "I'm sorry Mike" I say "I'm telling him" "No!"

  • edited August 2014

    Gonna need more votes, only 1 vote seems kind of cheap. Since many other readers may feel differently I dont know how to describe it.

    Carley123 posted: »

    The Walking North Episode 3 Part 3 'The Desert' (60% of readers wanted to tell Martin) "I'm sorry Mike" I say "I'm telling him" "No!"

  • idk about this decision but I'll just say [Save Olivia]

    Carley123 posted: »

    Gonna need more votes, only 1 vote seems kind of cheap. Since many other readers may feel differently I dont know how to describe it.

  • Same, i just hope Katherine doesnt get hurt

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    idk about this decision but I'll just say [Save Olivia]

  • [Save Olivia]

    Carley123 posted: »

    The Walking North Episode 3 Part 3 'The Desert' (60% of readers wanted to tell Martin) "I'm sorry Mike" I say "I'm telling him" "No!"

  • [Save Olivia]

    Carley123 posted: »

    The Walking North Episode 3 Part 3 'The Desert' (60% of readers wanted to tell Martin) "I'm sorry Mike" I say "I'm telling him" "No!"

  • [Let Riley pull you up]

    I mean, it's pretty clear Olivia is losing it, and I don't want a more 'capable' person to get hurt :(

    Carley123 posted: »

    The Walking North Episode 3 Part 3 'The Desert' (60% of readers wanted to tell Martin) "I'm sorry Mike" I say "I'm telling him" "No!"

  • edited August 2014

    Sorry for the wait! Part 4 will be out tomorrow

    EDIT: Wait wth? I meant to say Whats with the wait? Will part 4 be out tomorrow? I'm clearly losing it.. :p

  • Sooooo...Are you still making the episodes? =/

  • Carley pm'd me, said he is having issues and lots of re writing

    Sooooo...Are you still making the episodes? =/

  • edited August 2014

    The Walking North Episode 3 Part 4 (80% of readers want to Save Olivia)

    "No!" i scream at Riley as i shake the walker off of me "Im saving her"

    The walker grabs me and i keep struggling

    "Olivia!" I yelp and let go of the zombie to grab her, i manage to grab her shoulder and push her away from the Walkers on her.

    Just then the Walker on me bites the tip of my hand

    "AHHHHHHH!" I scream and the walkers prepares to bite my neck open when Riley stabs it on the head.

    "Im pulling you up!" Riley sneers and i look at my arm, my finger is open and blood has already covered my hand.

    "Katherine?" Olivia asks as we manages to stand up, a walker leaps on her back and she fights it off.

    "Oh god" Adam says "Katherine.. shes bit"

    "Ill be fine!" I whimper looking at it

    "Theres nothing we can do!" Riley says while laying me on the concrete road

    "Katherine" Emma says walking up to me "Close your eyes and squeeze Adams hand"

    "What?" I ask as i see Emma pull out her knife, Emma swings the knife and it goes through my finger

    "AHHHHHH!" I scream "NOOOO!" everything around me is dizzy

    "What the hell?!?" Riley exclaims

    "Katherine!" Emma sneers "You gotta be quiet!"

    "No she doesnt.." Adam says pointing at Olivia, shes walking towards me screaming and suddenly a walker grabs her foot and bites it.

    "AHHHHHHHHH!!" Olivia screams in pain and kicks it off, she crawls towards me.

    "You and me!" Olivia says looking at me "I was right..."

    She tries to get up when suddenly a walker bites the back of her neck open and then another walker pounces on her back.

    Olivia tries to move once again but with all the wieght on her shes unable to

    "NOOOO!" Olivia cries

    A walker bites her back open and about 5 other walkers climb ontop of her and start eating Olivia, her eyes roll to the back of her head.

    Meanwhile all this time everyone seemed to not care, Emma, Adam, and Riley were working on me, Marting was aiding Mike, and Willy was on the ground crying and Zack was talking to him.

    "Mike?" Martin says and Mike moves

    "Hes turned!" Adam exclaims

    "No!" Martin yells turning around "He was talking only a minute ago"

    Adam pulls out his gun

    BAM!

    Willy cries even louder

    "What the fuck!" Zack yells

    "No!" cries Martin and he yells at Adam

    "Katherine?" Riley askes me

    "Yeah..." I say smiling at her as i lay on the ground

    "You okay?" she askes

    "I am..." I trail off "I just wish Olivia.. w... w.... sh.."

    Riley slaps me across the face

    "Ow!" I yelp

    "Stay awake!" she sneers

    I look behind her and the walkers are tearing apart Olivia's body.. her eyes are still open... looking at me.

    "Why..." I moan "Why didnt you help h..."

    My eyes shutter

    "We need help!" Riley sneers "Martin do you have any-"

    "I see someone.." Willy mutters

    "Someones coming" Emma points

    I couldnt see who was coming but i hear footsteps

    "Hands up!" Riley sneers and grabs Mike's gun, Martin pulls out his gun too, Adam goes to fight walkers.

    "Hi" The voice was soft and light "My name is Rose, i mean no harm. Me and my friend here and driving survivors too Vancouver it will take a week or two to get there because of the walkers"

    "How can we believe you" Riley says glaring at her

    "Because" the lady says in a calm voice "Its a risk but, youll die if you dont take it.. from what im seeing one of youre group members is dead on the floor"

    Martin shoots a dirty glare at Rose

    "And another one is being eaten" She says "So take it or leave it"

    "Leave it" Riley sneers

    "What the hell?" Adam exclaims "We need to take it!"

    "We dont need this!" Riley says "We can survive on our own"

    "Im going.." Willy says in a soft tone

    "What?" Riley gasps

    "Me too" Zack says, Zack picked me up and i laid the side of my head against his chest as he carried me

    "Okay.." Riley says in a sad tone "But dont blame me when we find out it isnt flowers that Rose will be eating"

    6 Hours Later

    I looked out the window, there was a cliff right over us as we slowly drove.

    We were all in a mini bus it sat about 25 passengers, Rose was driving.

    Martin and Riley sat together, Willy sat near Rose, Adam and Emma sat together and me and Zack sat in the back

    "You feeling okay?" Zack asks

    "I just want Olivia back" I mutter and eyes water

    "Its okay" Zack says "Shes not hurting anymore"

    "I know.." I mutter "Its just all my friends are dead"

    "You still have me" Zack warmly replies while kissing my forehead

    "You see Willy over there?" Zack asks

    "Yeah?" I say looking over at him "Why am i looking at him?"

    "Because hes 13" Zack soberly replies "He is still a child isnt he? He had to kill his best friend, and saw Melissa turned.. he doesnt even know if his mom is alive. You know what? he is over there laughing with Rose talking about ice cream or something... if Willy is doing okay right now, you can do okay also"

    "Yeah.." I agree "You are right"

    "Of course i am" Zack says smiling "Now get some rest"

    "I dont want to fall asleep..." I argue

    "Youll be fine, we are safe now" He warmly says too me

    Zack leans over and kisses my lips, for the first time in awhile i think everthing will be okay

    The last thing i think of when i fall asleep is what Olivia said to me

    "You and me, I was right..."

    Episode 4 coming after No Going Back or possibly Saturday

  • Sorry for the wait, i didnt know how to wrap up episode 3

  • edited August 2014

    There will be plenty of death in Episode 4.

    What are your death predictions?

    Go Here to submit them!

  • I say Rose, Emma, Zack and Martin.

    Carley123 posted: »

    There will be plenty of death in Episode 4. What are your death predictions? Go Here to submit them!

  • r.i.p Olivia r.i.p Mike :(

    Carley123 posted: »

    The Walking North Episode 3 Part 4 (80% of readers want to Save Olivia) "No!" i scream at Riley as i shake the walker off of me "Im savin

  • How's the next part coming along? =)

  • He told me he has it all planned out, doesnt know if users are still here or not.

    How's the next part coming along?

  • I'm here. :-)

    #TeamSarah posted: »

    He told me he has it all planned out, doesnt know if users are still here or not.

  • Oh wow this was fun to read through :D Such a horrible way for Olivia to go T_T

  • Welp..

    I really thought no one cared about this fanfiction for some reason, apparently i was wrong. ill begin episode 4

  • Soo, how's it going?

    I see that Carley123 hasn't been here since 16th September. :(

  • When this will continue?

  • Do you want me to do it again??? Id love to

    Im i havent been on here in months

    supersagig posted: »

    When this will continue?

  • I wil like to join :P

    Carley123 posted: »

    Do you want me to do it again??? Id love to Im i havent been on here in months

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