I was looking through my computer and I found a story I writing a year ago, I called it "the man with the bag". Here's the first chapter:
it was a sunny day in the middle of june, year 1989. i was driving in my car heading to my mother's house, suddenly, i stopped. i saw a man wearing a leather jacket and holding what looks like a heavy bag. i stopped the car, "can i help you" i said. "yes, can you take me to my house? it's not too far from here" the man replied with a sad tone, he had a very deep voice. "sure, get in. i could use some company" i said. the man got in the car and i started driving again. "i'm Adam, by the way" i said. "alright" the man said with an annoyed tone. a couple of hours pass by... "wanna hear a joke?" i said. the man looked at me and didn't answer. "okay, two business men go to a bar and order a couple of drinks. then, they take sandwhiches out of their briefcases and begin to eat. the bar owner walks up to them and says "you can't eat your own sandwhiches here!". the two business men look at eachother and exchange sandwhiches." the man looked at me again and didn't even smile!
the night came and i was tired from driving, "can you drive while i rest for a bit?" the man exchanged seats with me and began driving and went to sleep. i woke up in the morning, my car was parked in front of really big house and the man wasn't in the seat next to me! i figured that was his house, i came out of the car, i found the man's bag in front of his house's door, i opened it, it was empty. it looked really heavy when he was carrying it. i knocked on his door, no answer. i knocked again no one answered me. and there was no sounds coming from inside the house too. there was another house next to his house. i went there and knocked on it's door, an old lady opened the door... "excuse me, ma'am. did you see a guy wearing a brown leather jacket and carrying a green bag?" "no" the lady answered. "do you know who lives in that house?" i said as i was pointing at the man's house. "yes, but i don't know his name" the lady replied. "is he a guy with a long beard and really deep voice" i asked. "yes, that's him. he died six years ago. i'm sorry, dear. was he a friend of yours?"
That's ironic because I just had the best summer of my life and that's why I'm so sad. It's coming to an unfortunate end. But, like I said to Rachel, I will do two last things before classes begin: going to the beach tomorrow and play TWD ep 5 on Tuesday.
I don't have online on my ps3 I'm using an internet stick right now on my laptop but I will as soon as I get online :'/
Markd4547 is my name on Ps3 though add me
That's ironic because I just had the best summer of my life and that's why I'm so sad. It's coming to an unfortunate end. But, like I said t… moreo Rachel, I will do two last things before classes begin: going to the beach tomorrow and play TWD ep 5 on Tuesday.
I had another stuff in mind, like Adam has nightmares and hallucinations about the stranger and then he meets him again and with a friend and and that friend can see him too. I was trying to make it so that you had no idea if what's happening is real or just another hallucination/nightmare.
How I would end it
Turns out in the end the stranger was always alive turns out there was a car crash you died but he survived the lady … moreat the door was also a ghost
or
You were the stranger that died in the car crash and the lady can see ghosts
I had another stuff in mind, like Adam has nightmares and hallucinations about the stranger and then he meets him again and with a friend an… mored and that friend can see him too. I was trying to make it so that you had no idea if what's happening is real or just another hallucination/nightmare.
I was getting the bus into town today and I was sitting next to this girl talking turned out she was a movie fanatic so I tell her Heath Led… moreger Joker was the best villain ever acted and scripted. She looks at me confused NO Loki is the best :'/ ^
WHY? because he did Shakespeare before you know on stage Tom hiddleston duh his a genius
Fangirls and Loki >:'/
Anyway
What's your top 10 or 5 villains in movies
Mine is
* Joker
* Darth Vader
* Freddie Kruger
* Agent Smith(matrix)
* Bane
* Chucky
* Magneto
* Bettlejuice
* Calvin Candie(Django)
* Joker(Jack Nicholson)
I was getting the bus into town today and I was sitting next to this girl talking turned out she was a movie fanatic so I tell her Heath Led… moreger Joker was the best villain ever acted and scripted. She looks at me confused NO Loki is the best :'/ ^
WHY? because he did Shakespeare before you know on stage Tom hiddleston duh his a genius
Fangirls and Loki >:'/
Anyway
What's your top 10 or 5 villains in movies
Mine is
* Joker
* Darth Vader
* Freddie Kruger
* Agent Smith(matrix)
* Bane
* Chucky
* Magneto
* Bettlejuice
* Calvin Candie(Django)
* Joker(Jack Nicholson)
Also for the first one it can be that he was murdered in his sleep by the stranger and doomed to roam the earth until the Criminal who has also murdered countless others and planning on more is either killed or arrested. You could Explore the serial killers side of the story in Chapter 2 Simon my thoughts I suck at this xD and in Chapter 3 go back to the Roaming soul and see him join others who was killed by the same guy.
How I would end it
Turns out in the end the stranger was always alive turns out there was a car crash you died but he survived the lady … moreat the door was also a ghost
or
You were the stranger that died in the car crash and the lady can see ghosts
XD I'd watch it though Better then paranormal Activity we could make millions if we made a film out of it we will use our phone cameras to record it and be the leading stars like Paranormal activity and pretend it's shitty camera work because it's part of the film
Also for the first one it can be that he was murdered in his sleep by the stranger and doomed to roam the earth until the Criminal who has a… morelso murdered countless others and planning on more is either killed or arrested. You could Explore the serial killers side of the story in Chapter 2 Simon my thoughts I suck at this xD and in Chapter 3 go back to the Roaming soul and see him join others who was killed by the same guy.
I was getting the bus into town today and I was sitting next to this girl talking turned out she was a movie fanatic so I tell her Heath Led… moreger Joker was the best villain ever acted and scripted. She looks at me confused NO Loki is the best :'/ ^
WHY? because he did Shakespeare before you know on stage Tom hiddleston duh his a genius
Fangirls and Loki >:'/
Anyway
What's your top 10 or 5 villains in movies
Mine is
* Joker
* Darth Vader
* Freddie Kruger
* Agent Smith(matrix)
* Bane
* Chucky
* Magneto
* Bettlejuice
* Calvin Candie(Django)
* Joker(Jack Nicholson)
XD I'd watch it though Better then paranormal Activity we could make millions if we made a film out of it we will use our phone cameras to r… moreecord it and be the leading stars like Paranormal activity and pretend it's shitty camera work because it's part of the film
I was getting the bus into town today and I was sitting next to this girl talking turned out she was a movie fanatic so I tell her Heath Led… moreger Joker was the best villain ever acted and scripted. She looks at me confused NO Loki is the best :'/ ^
WHY? because he did Shakespeare before you know on stage Tom hiddleston duh his a genius
Fangirls and Loki >:'/
Anyway
What's your top 10 or 5 villains in movies
Mine is
* Joker
* Darth Vader
* Freddie Kruger
* Agent Smith(matrix)
* Bane
* Chucky
* Magneto
* Bettlejuice
* Calvin Candie(Django)
* Joker(Jack Nicholson)
I'll split my favorite film villain list into five live action and five animated villains.
My top five live action villains:
1) Hannibal… more Lecter
2) Joker
3) Terminator (T-800)
4) Darth Vader
5) Hans Gruber
My top 5 animated villains:
1) Maleficent
2) Jafar
3) Grigori Rasputin (Anastasia)
4) Ursula the Sea Witch
5) Randall Boggs
Hans Gruber was played by Alan Rickman (Severus Snape) in the original Die Hard, and he did a magnificent job of it. I liked most of the Die Hard films, but the original is still the best in my opinion (and Hans Gruber is a big part of that).
You should definitely watch Anastasia. It's made by Don Bluth (an ex-Disney animator who also made The Secret of NIMH and All Dogs Go to Heaven) and is a quality film. Christopher Lloyd played Grigori Rasputin, who was a real life advisor to the Russian tsar (basically a real life Jafar), and did a superb job with the role.
I'm a huge animation fan, so I couldn't resist making an animated villain list too. If this was for television villains, the Joker would have been on that list too (Mark Hamill is still my favorite portrayal of The Joker in any media). I was tempted to list him there for Batman Beyond: Return of the Joker, but there are just so many quality animated villains (probably because it's so fun to be able to go over the top with your voice).
aaah I forgot Lecter I'm actually disappointed in myself quality choice acted and scripted :'/ and YES Joker second :'D
The Terminator th… moree ending of the first film still gives me nightmares I love the series nice.
Just googled Hans Grube(diehard) That's my dad favourite series of films I only saw a couple though :'/
Randall(Monster Inc) childhood feels an awesome villain :'D
@Allthatremains @Welcome_to_Woodbury
Jafar(Alladin) and Ursula(The little mermaid)
Your favourite films got a mention definitely creepy villains :'D
Maleficent
My childhood feels from seeing these villains dammit I should of asked that I'll have to rewatch a couple
I never seen Anastasia but my sister loves it
And of course thank you for answering Jennifer
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I was looking through my computer and I found a story I writing a year ago, I called it "the man with the bag". Here's the first chapter:
it was a sunny day in the middle of june, year 1989. i was driving in my car heading to my mother's house, suddenly, i stopped. i saw a man wearing a leather jacket and holding what looks like a heavy bag. i stopped the car, "can i help you" i said. "yes, can you take me to my house? it's not too far from here" the man replied with a sad tone, he had a very deep voice. "sure, get in. i could use some company" i said. the man got in the car and i started driving again. "i'm Adam, by the way" i said. "alright" the man said with an annoyed tone. a couple of hours pass by... "wanna hear a joke?" i said. the man looked at me and didn't answer. "okay, two business men go to a bar and order a couple of drinks. then, they take sandwhiches out of their briefcases and begin to eat. the bar owner walks up to them and says "you can't eat your own sandwhiches here!". the two business men look at eachother and exchange sandwhiches." the man looked at me again and didn't even smile!
the night came and i was tired from driving, "can you drive while i rest for a bit?" the man exchanged seats with me and began driving and went to sleep. i woke up in the morning, my car was parked in front of really big house and the man wasn't in the seat next to me! i figured that was his house, i came out of the car, i found the man's bag in front of his house's door, i opened it, it was empty. it looked really heavy when he was carrying it. i knocked on his door, no answer. i knocked again no one answered me. and there was no sounds coming from inside the house too. there was another house next to his house. i went there and knocked on it's door, an old lady opened the door... "excuse me, ma'am. did you see a guy wearing a brown leather jacket and carrying a green bag?" "no" the lady answered. "do you know who lives in that house?" i said as i was pointing at the man's house. "yes, but i don't know his name" the lady replied. "is he a guy with a long beard and really deep voice" i asked. "yes, that's him. he died six years ago. i'm sorry, dear. was he a friend of yours?"
End of chapter one.
I never wrote chapter two.
Wats your psn?
Puncake32
That's ironic because I just had the best summer of my life and that's why I'm so sad. It's coming to an unfortunate end. But, like I said to Rachel, I will do two last things before classes begin: going to the beach tomorrow and play TWD ep 5 on Tuesday.
Nice a bit clique I saw the end coming from a mile off but cool
finish it
I'm going to add you. This is not a permission.
Exactly that sounds awesome be happy you had such an awesome summer though.
then class you can't contain all that fun 
:
xD Fucking nice I'm about to join I could imagine Gavins face when he gets on and sees his face all over the place xDD
Yeah, it was supposed to be a short horror story, I never wrote chapter two because I didn't know how to end it.
How I would end it
Turns out in the end the stranger was always alive turns out there was a car crash you died but he survived the lady at the door was also a ghost
or
You were the stranger that died in the car crash and the lady can see ghosts
Class ain't fun ;-;
XD true
I had another stuff in mind, like Adam has nightmares and hallucinations about the stranger and then he meets him again and with a friend and and that friend can see him too. I was trying to make it so that you had no idea if what's happening is real or just another hallucination/nightmare.
:O that sounds like a brilliant read :'D
hopefully they wont have a really sad ending though...
ugh who am i kidding of course its gonna be really sad. -_-
I miss @Azlyn and @Welcome_to_Woodbury so much
They used to answer even my worst questions before they left they never let me down
Well, if I ever think of a way to end it and what's the man hiding in his bag. I'll finish it and send it to you.
Cool thanks bro
Meh, I haven't been that sad this season since episode 1. But we'll see.
Besides the joker, Scarecrow.
Also for the first one it can be that he was murdered in his sleep by the stranger and doomed to roam the earth until the Criminal who has also murdered countless others and planning on more is either killed or arrested. You could Explore the serial killers side of the story in Chapter 2 Simon my thoughts I suck at this xD and in Chapter 3 go back to the Roaming soul and see him join others who was killed by the same guy.
XD I'd watch it though Better then paranormal Activity we could make millions if we made a film out of it we will use our phone cameras to record it and be the leading stars like Paranormal activity and pretend it's shitty camera work because it's part of the film
Nice list thank you :'D
Thank you Simon I love scarecrow and an Irish actor played him as well
I'm a beast with recording horror shit just throw the camera around makes it mad epic xD
XDDD Yes we need special effects and hum some horror music like Jaws while doing it
I'll split my favorite film villain list into five live action and five animated villains.
My top five live action villains:
1) Hannibal Lecter
2) Joker
3) Terminator (T-800)
4) Darth Vader
5) Hans Gruber
My top 5 animated villains:
1) Maleficent
2) Jafar
3) Grigori Rasputin (Anastasia)
4) Ursula the Sea Witch
5) Randall Boggs
aaah I forgot Lecter I'm actually disappointed in myself quality choice acted and scripted :'/ and YES Joker second :'D
The Terminator the ending of the first film still gives me nightmares I love the series nice.
Just googled Hans Grube(diehard) That's my dad favourite series of films I only saw a couple though :'/
Randall(Monster Inc) childhood feels an awesome villain :'D
@Allthatremains @Welcome_to_Woodbury
Jafar(Alladin) and Ursula(The little mermaid)
Your favourite films got a mention definitely creepy villains :'D
Maleficent
My childhood feels from seeing these villains dammit I should of asked that I'll have to rewatch a couple
I never seen Anastasia but my sister loves it
And of course thank you for answering Jennifer
LMAO, SO MANY KITTIES
YAY you like it do you want me to keep tagging you in cute things?
Lol, yes! See, my evil partner isn't that evil after all.
Awww cute HEY!! I'm the most evil person on the forum promise but you have to be nice to your evil partner and share cute things :P
Hans Gruber was played by Alan Rickman (Severus Snape) in the original Die Hard, and he did a magnificent job of it. I liked most of the Die Hard films, but the original is still the best in my opinion (and Hans Gruber is a big part of that).
You should definitely watch Anastasia. It's made by Don Bluth (an ex-Disney animator who also made The Secret of NIMH and All Dogs Go to Heaven) and is a quality film. Christopher Lloyd played Grigori Rasputin, who was a real life advisor to the Russian tsar (basically a real life Jafar), and did a superb job with the role.
I'm a huge animation fan, so I couldn't resist making an animated villain list too. If this was for television villains, the Joker would have been on that list too (Mark Hamill is still my favorite portrayal of The Joker in any media). I was tempted to list him there for Batman Beyond: Return of the Joker, but there are just so many quality animated villains (probably because it's so fun to be able to go over the top with your voice).
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@Markd4547
I tried to make a Joker.
pls make owl
Edit: Never mind