Dead City (Finale)

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  • Insert troll face

    BlueShadiw posted: »

    Hm, my memory's a bit hazy. If I recall he was last with Felix? ...Shit. Also, I'm the 400th comment. WOOT.

  • The Mission Chapter 10

    A-Maybe we should split into pairs?

    X-Smart but someone will be alone.

    A-Ill be the loner.

    G-Alright but still its a deathtrap to go through there.

    A-Not really, Command told me some info before we left, if we cover ourselves in their smell we will be protected.

    X-When did we learn this? My squad could have lived!

    A-A while ago, Command isnt too keen on using it though.

    G-Still sounds dangerous.

    R-Worth a try.

    The group kills a nearby walker and covers themselves in guts, they then break up into three teams, Roland and William, Xavier and Gerald, and Adam, they start walking.

    W-Shit...Shit...

    R-Keep quiet...

    W-Wheres my pills?

    R-You took the last ones when Veronica killed herself. You weren't suppose to take so many so fast.

    W-My going to freak out man...Shit...

    William starts breathing heavily, then crying a little bit

    R-Stay calm, were almost there.

    William starts crying and then freaking out

    R-Shit!

    Walkers start closing in, they bite William, Adam runs over trying to help. Adam gets grabbed, Roland hacks its arm off. William is pushed to the floor and his guts ripped out. Suddenly gun fire, Xavier and Gerald made it, they were shooting into the herd.

    X-Get over here!

    Roland and Adam run through the herd into the building

    End of Chapter

  • Well, shit.

    If Veronica lived William could've too. Then again, he'd run out of pills sooner or later.

    The Mission Chapter 10 A-Maybe we should split into pairs? X-Smart but someone will be alone. A-Ill be the loner. G-Alright but

  • The reason he took so many so fast was because of all the deaths...

    So yeah, he could have lived.

    BlueShadiw posted: »

    Well, shit. If Veronica lived William could've too. Then again, he'd run out of pills sooner or later.

  • edited September 2014

    The Hunters Chapter 12

    Madison wakes up, hand over her mouth and being picked up by three men

    Ma-Urhggh

    Madison struggles and is then knocked out

    Madison wakes up in a dim room, many voices talking

    ???-Shes awake, great!

    A familiar figure walks over to Madison...Miah

    Mi-Sorry about what Craig, Markus, and Wayne did.

    Ma-What?

    Mi-Well I thought we shouldnt leave you in the dark with what were going to do.

    Ma-Who?

    Madison looks around to see Craig, Markus, Wayne, Brady, Pete, Damon, Daniel, Violet, Lewis, and Vex all in one room, plus a strange boy

    Ma-What is this?

    Ve-A revolt.

    C-Yeah, we have been planning.

    Ma-But Lewis?

    L-Sorry kid, couldnt blow my cover.

    Ma-Violet?

    Vi-I was a slave too once, they only kept me after they were done was because I was a doctor.

    Ma-Vex?

    Ve-Yeah, im going to keep fighting.

    Ma- What about Kianna?

    Mi-I dont want her involved...

    Ma-What about that kid?

    C-This is Jonathan, he got out once, found his group dead, came back. We've been hiding him.

    Ma-Why cant we just leave?

    C-We need to stop these crazy assholes.

    Ma-So im stuck in this huh?

    Mi-Yes.

    Ma-Alright, what're we doing?

    The group fill Madison in on the plan for tomorrow

    End of Chapter

  • edited September 2014

    The Mission Chapter 11

    Xavier and Gerald run inside the building with Roland and Adam following

    X-Shit theyre in here too!

    G-Meet up...Dont know somewhere!

    Xavier and Gerald run off away from the many walkers, Roland and Adam run into a nearby room

    A-Oh we are so fucked captain!

    R-Stay calm, look for a way out.

    Roland and Adam look around the room, the walkers start hitting the door

    A-Fuck...Umm...That air vent!

    R-Its too small for both of us!

    The walkers start breaking the door, Adam takes a deep breath

    A-You go...

    R-I cant!

    A-Complete the mission, I signed up for this...I knew what I was walking into...

    R-You are a great soldier...

    A-No...Im a great medic. Now go!

    Roland climbs into the vent and starts crawling, he can hear Adam's voice behind him

    A-Fuck, why did I do this?...Okay you fuckers bring it on!

    Gunshots go off, then screams

    Roland keeps crawling until he gets to a room, inside the room are Xavier and Gerald, Xavier on one side with a assault rifle and Gerald on the other with a shotgun

    X-All most out!

    G-Me too!

    X-I hope Roland and Adam are okay!

    G-Yeah, you know its been a honor, you know working with you!

    X-Dont say that, keep fighting!

    G-I am...But theres so many!

    X-We blocked the door but there are still a lot in here, it will be okay, it always turns out okay...

    (Choice-Very important!)

    http://strawpoll.me/2660092

  • I also forgot to tell everybody the timeline of these.

    The Mission is before everything

    Then The Hunters

    The S&B

    S&B is 3-4 months into the outbreak

  • Fuck the rules, yo.

    First I will die, then Adam and William, then Gerald, then you and Xavier! It wont stop, theres only one way to stop it!

    If Veronica's crazyness keeps pulling through, Gerald will bite the dust next...

    The Mission Chapter 11 Xavier and Gerald run inside the building with Roland and Adam following X-Shit theyre in here too! G-Meet u

  • I put that answer there...

    JUSTFORYOU

    BlueShadiw posted: »

    Fuck the rules, yo. First I will die, then Adam and William, then Gerald, then you and Xavier! It wont stop, theres only one way to stop it! If Veronica's crazyness keeps pulling through, Gerald will bite the dust next...

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    I put that answer there... JUSTFORYOU

  • BTW Veronica wasnt as crazy as you thought, she was "gifted".

  • Wow, just noticed that Red Cross is the only group with everyone gone.

    This depresses me.

    I also forgot to tell everybody the timeline of these. The Mission is before everything Then The Hunters The S&B S&B is 3-4 months into the outbreak

  • Dont worry, that will change "VERY" quickly.

    BlueShadiw posted: »

    Wow, just noticed that Red Cross is the only group with everyone gone. This depresses me.

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    Dont worry, that will change "VERY" quickly.

  • Well a one man riot...So scary. XD

    I forget did you have any other characters?

    mr.quality posted: »

    No! Ima gonna riot. This is worse than AMC killing hershel! Poor Felix, he deserved better. ( especially since he was a character I made) lol

  • No! Ima gonna riot. This is worse than AMC killing hershel! Poor Felix, he deserved better. ( especially since he was a character I made) lol

    I wonder who the kid that was hung was?

  • Just remember Veronica's predictions for The Mission.

    And for the Hunters, remember the past when power is in your hands.

  • :( my felling are already busted.

    Dont worry, that will change "VERY" quickly.

  • Your post disappeared, but yeah I have other characters, do you want to know them all?

    Insert troll face

  • Yeah, im too lazy to look back.

    mr.quality posted: »

    Your post disappeared, but yeah I have other characters, do you want to know them all?

  • ...Thanks... ;P

    mr.quality posted: »

    I have a lot actually, Felix, Kianna, Miah, Wayne, Gerald, Damon. I think that's all of them

  • I have a lot actually, Felix, Kianna, Miah, Wayne, Gerald, Damon. I think that's all of them

    Yeah, im too lazy to look back.

  • No I...You know ill keep it to myself...Lets just say you wont like the ratio.

    mr.quality posted: »

    Yeah, I have a few of them don't I?

  • Yeah, I have a few of them don't I?

    Yeah, im too lazy to look back.

  • Your posts keep disappearing.

    Yeah, im too lazy to look back.

  • Wtf why?

    mr.quality posted: »

    Your posts keep disappearing.

  • I don't know why! The last few you sent disappeared!

    Wtf why?

  • edited September 2014

    The Hunters Chapter 13

    The next day, operation dawn of freedom starts

    C-Okay everyone know their teams and roles?

    Dan-Clear them up again.

    C-Team A is the main fighting force, we distract everybody,thats Vex, me, Markus, Brady, Lewis, and Damon.

    C-Team B is the destructive force, they destroy this place,thats Miah, Daniel, Pete, and Wayne.

    C-Team C is the escape group, they find our way out thats Madison, Violet, and Jonathan.

    C-Be ready when Lewis gives us weapons...Its freedom time.

    Lewis opens the gate, he passes out assault rifles to team A, grenades and handguns to team B, and handguns to team C. He instructs team C to the medical tent, team B to the main warehouse, and team A to follow him.

    Madison and Jonathan run to the medical tent where they meet Violet

    V-Okay, so we have to steal a old army truck from the compound then get the gates open.

    Suddenly gunfire starts going off

    V-Thats our queue.

    Team C runs to the compound where vehicles are stored, two guards were guarding it, Violet walks up to them

    V-Hey you all hear that?

    ???-Yeah we are staying here, we dont want to be caught in that shit!

    V-...Too late...

    Violet pulls her handgun out and shoots them, she then signals for the team, the run into the compound

    An explosion happens

    V-Shit! Hope that was team B!

    Team C runs over to a truck and then hears yelling

    ???-Okay we know theyre here!

    V-Shit! Fuck!...Im sorry...

    Violet shoots Jonathan in the leg then knocks him out

    Ma-Wha-

    Violet knocks out Madison

    V-I got them! Over here!

    End of Chapter

  • Clearly, Violet is trying to cover for her treason.

    It's all good :)

    The Hunters Chapter 13 The next day, operation dawn of freedom starts C-Okay everyone know their teams and roles? Dan-Clear them up

  • Or is she?

    BlueShadiw posted: »

    Clearly, Violet is trying to cover for her treason. It's all good

  • She is.

    Or is she?

  • Pretty confident there, huh?

    BlueShadiw posted: »

    She is.

  • I am always confident

    Except when Im not

    Pretty confident there, huh?

  • Good reasoning there...

    Dern sure good reasoning, but you forgot something...

    Im writing this, I can do anything, as you will see in a while...

    BlueShadiw posted: »

    I am always confident Except when Im not

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    I do love these comment chains we make after each story xD

    Good reasoning there... Dern sure good reasoning, but you forgot something... Im writing this, I can do anything, as you will see in a while...

  • I AM GOD OF THIS STORY!

    Me too. XD

    BlueShadiw posted: »

    I do love these comment chains we make after each story xD

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    Fuck yo rules, I'm out.

    I AM GOD OF THIS STORY! Me too. XD

  • PLZ NO!

    BlueShadiw posted: »

    Fuck yo rules, I'm out.

  • "Look at me. I am the captain now."

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    PLZ NO!

  • Please find the parodies of that gif.

    BlueShadiw posted: »

    "Look at me. I am the captain now."

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