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  • I've been wondering how close this thread was to becoming the most viewed and commented; it's nice to know we've got there. :D

    It's surely testament to everyone's wonderful stories and welcoming friendliness! Well done, everyone. :)

    EMMYPESS posted: »

    Here's me intruding outside of story context again. Sorry! But did you guys know that this is the most viewed and most commented on Communit

  • None of us would be here if it weren't for you, Dragon! I mean, we'd exist, but wouldn't be on this thread, so congratulations! And thanks for all the great challenges so far. :)

    I had a feeling this discussion had the most views/comments in comparison to a lot of other threads. FYI: if you guys didn't notice, this th

  • Redd jumping through the window was a brilliant idea! Proper thinking outside the box - I like it. :) These threats for answering incorrectly with the questions really make me wonder what's going to be asked.

    MasterStone posted: »

    The Costume Party 3 "Holy crap! It actually talks!" "Robby, look what you have gotten us into.." "We have been in worse Walter.."

  • LOL Its an extra head growing put of his chest; it has yet to fully develop, should they fail to remove the curse.

    Oh yes, the lust entry. XD Well, I didn't want to go TOO much into detail without it becoming a porn; figured what I had was enough for the need for, um, the 'D' Lyla wanted. XD

    Pride is VERY annoying and I can see where you are coming from; Ethan is REALLY deep in his curse and it can be seen. I too agree with Georgie; that's wonderful she has these 'feelings' but just knowing WHY, its hard to enjoy these moments and it shows. And yes, the children! Won't someone PLEASE think of the children!? XD

    And yes. Emily is indeed awesome. Hooray for awesome Emily. :D

    EMMYPESS posted: »

    What exactly IS protruding out of Henry's chest? I'm honestly not sure what to think XD BTW, I wrote a comment about the Lust one, but ac

  • To all the loyaly viewers and writers alike. This has been one hell of a ride and I'm glad to be a part of it. :) You folks are my second family. Here are to many more challenges, stories and Fable themed moments alike.

    EMMYPESS posted: »

    Here's me intruding outside of story context again. Sorry! But did you guys know that this is the most viewed and most commented on Communit

  • Snow always tries to sound so, oh what is the word...occupied with her current status in life. :) I love how all the cubs are doing their own thing in either Fabletown or out of the country. Also, the moments with the flashbacks make it for a very dramatic entry; who wouldn't stop to think about such inccidents in a person's life?

    And that ending. Damn you, Snow and your moments of being adorable! XD

    EMMYPESS posted: »

    October 24th Dear Diary, The weather is dreadful. It's too chilly outside, Therese is complaining about her vegetable garden, and we'r

  • October

    Dear Diary: Today we got a rain storm. Georgie woke up around four this morning and found all but Emily in our bed; Peter especially is deathly afraid of thunder and lightning. Georgie and I allowed it. Trying to get five fearful children back into their own beds is like pulling teeth. Trust me. We've tried before. When the sun was rising, I found Emily curled up in her bed fast alseep. Too much like Georgie, it scares me. Kid can sleep through ANYTHING.

    While playing outside, the kids found a black cat behind the house; I discovered this poor creature while putting the clean clothes away. Several towels were scattered in Junior's room. The six of them were in the closet, trying to clean the cat. Georgie wanted it gone; he's not much for cats and was worried the kids were too young for a responsibility like this. After much discussion and water works from Junior, Georgie gave in and let the kids keep the cat. Her name is Snowball. VERY interesting choice of name for a black cat.

    We have appointment tomorrow for holiday pictures. I found a photographer here in Fabletown willing to take holiday themed pictures for us. Snow recommended him to me; he's a very interesting young Goblin with a very humerous personality. He adored the children and seemed, um, astounded to know someone was with Georgie Porgie. I get that a lot. The kids are excited and want to give the images themselves to family and friends. Georgie wasn't too sure about it at first but he actually agreed we needed some new family themed pictures.

    The Tricky Tray fundraiser was a success. Emily did not win her Bike but instead she received a basket full of various skateboarding items; brand new board, helmet, pads and a years free pass to the local skate park. You would think this kid discovered the city of Atlantis when she saw it. The others won a few various baskets like a Halloween themed one, music and a video game one. They are ACTUALLY cooperating and discussing who gets what and when. Proud of them...:)

    Later tonight, Rosie and her brothers are coming by; Hans Junior and Mini will be by later as well. Sleepover at the Porgie house; next weekend Carla gets to deal with all these adorable little bundles of sugar. The kids are looking forward to the sleepover. We have the night planned, er uh, I mean, the KIDS have the night planned for them and the cousins. Oh and I discovered something the other day...apparently, almost every other week, Georgie and Peter go for a 'walk' and Bigby usually meets up with them at the park. I'll have to ask him about that...

    Well, better be going. I hear the kids in the kitchen and I'd hate to leave six longing children alone for too long. :D

    Until next time. <3 Lyla Porgie

  • Halloween Challenge

    Part 7: Gluttony

    "The Witch of Endor, huh?"

    Georgie scanned the enormous book before him. He found it difficult to concentrate; Snow had become a substantial pile of Sand upon his arrival. Blue had to locate the book and show Georgie the areas marked for him.

    "You alright, Georgie?"

    "Yeah, just um...strange seeing Snow like that, I 'uppose."

    "We were hoping it was only her skin turning, not the entire body. Honestly, she got it much easier than some of the Fables that came her for answers..."

    Georgie sighed and scanned the chapter. He had his family to worry about; all but two of his children were showing the curse of sin.

    "So, this witch. She have it out for someone or what?"

    "See, that is the thing. Chapter states the witch is an illusion; Snow and I believe the witch is an outlet to our world and uses us as the host. The whole phone thing was her way of sending the curse out."

    "I got that part, Blue."

    Blue clears his throat. "Many mundies and some Fables think the Witch is the lost soul of someone that passed years ago; some say the soul is immortal, no matter what. Others would argue the being is asleep for all eternity when you pass."

    Georgie looks up. "Which do you think it is, Blue?"

    Blue shrugs. "To be honest, think this Witch is the first option. This curse was inflicted by powers we have yet to understand. She wanted all of Fabletown to indure misfortune and misery."

    "A grudge?"

    "Must be. Who ever caused this Witch such hurt and harm is still in Fabletown. We all just happened to be in the crossfire..."

    Georgie sighed. "No. I think it was meant for us all. Like, a lesson or something. Fuck...I don't know."

    "Lesson?"

    "For example, my family got the seven deadly sins; I'm bloody 'ure ya' know 'bout my past, right?" Blue nods. "Alright. THOSE sins were commited by ME; now, my children and wife are stuck dealing with the fuckin' bullshit I did so long ago..."

    Blue touches his mouth. "And this beak? Snow?"

    "I can't tell you WHY you got a beak but my guess for Snow is her callous behavior she can sometimes have."

    Blue sighs. "Yeah...you may be onto something. The Witches on the Thirteenth floor almost have the remedy for removing the curse, so-"

    Georgie was already heading out the door. "HEY! Where are you going?! Georgie-"

    "Home Blue. I got my answer-this witch is punishing US for the shit we've done with in the homelands or here."

    "But some of the victims didn't do anything to get their curse."

    "Yes, they did."

    Blue paused to think. "You mean-"

    "If they became involved with those considered 'punishable,' they too received a curse."


    Penny sat on the couch and watched her sister open another bag of chips. This would be her eighth one in less than an hour.

    "Uh...Katie?"

    Katie ignored Penny. Instead, she continued pulling out handfuls of Potato Chips. Penny jumped from the couch and searched for her mother. As she looked in each of the rooms, Penny passed by her cursed siblings; Ethan was pasting cut out triangles to make a mosaic, Emily sat in the corner playing with almost every toy in the house. Junior was walking around complaining about the things he didn't have or wanted or traits others had, while Peter unceased his actions in destroying the Wolf toy.

    Penny found Lyla in the kitchen; her fingers traced the glass containing a picture of Georgie.

    "Mommy-"

    Lyla looked down and smiled. "My Penelope. Come here to mommy, sweetie."

    "Mommy, I think Katie got one of the curses."

    "Curse, baby? No, no. There is no curse."

    "Mommy, everyone is acting weird. Have you SEEN the others?"

    Lyla took the framed photo and licked the glass. "I love your daddy so much..."

    "Mommy, I know but-"

    "Such a handsome man...strong, sexy-"

    Muddled, Penny backed away. This was not her mother but the curse; she couldn't be mad, so instead, Penny walked away and returned to the living room. She noticed Katie had brought back leftovers and several defrosting Steaks.

    "Katie, are you going to eat ALL of that?"

    Katie gave a slight nod. "Hungry. Eat."

    "But ALL of that?!"

    "Hungry. Eating..."

    Katie opened her mouth and continued eating chips, cookies and the Steaks. Junior walked around the corner and sighed.

    "See!? I wish I could eat like that...I envy you, Katie. I wish I could do that-"

    Georgie opened the door; Penny rushed to her father's side. Georgie noticed Katie's eccentric behavior. He watched her stuff an entire Steak into her mouth and chew. She burped and repeated the process.

    "Gluttony..."

    "I'm next, huh daddy?"

    "We still have time, love. Daddy think he may 'ave found who is bloody doin' this."

    "A Witch?"

    "Yeah love...and the thirteenth floor is making a potion to remove this curse."

    "They are acting so strange, daddy...." Penny wraps her arms around Georgie's neck. "I want mommy and the others back."

    Georgie sighs. "I know, love. Daddy is so sorry..."

    Penny looks bewildered. "You didn't do this daddy?"

    Georgie holds Penny tightly against his chest. He whispers, as he kisses the top of her head. "I kinda did do this to you all, love. But I'll fix it.."

    Katie comes into the room. "Hey daddy-"

    Georgie watches his daughter eat another bag of chips. "Hungry Katherine?"

    Katie nods. "This is REALLY good, daddy!"

    Georgie smiles. "Good..."

    Georgie looks over at Emily. She returns to the room with another handful of toys. He walks over and watches Emily play in the corner. Not too far, Peter continues punching the Wolf toy.

    "Peter-"

    "He must go, daddy....for you...He must pay..."

    "Okay, Peter...okay..."

    Georgie wips a tear, Ethan yanks on his pant leg and lifts up construction paper.

    "LOOK daddy! My brilliant masterpiece! Its a farm with a setting sunset. Notice how I addedthe finishing touches located here on the Mountain tops and what I used to the colors..."

    "It's...beautiful, son."

    Junior sighs. "See-I wish I could do things like that..."

    Katie burps. "Daddy, I'm still hungry. Can we get burgers or something?"

    Emily looks up. "No! None for bloody you or you or you! All mine...everything....mine...."

    Penny compressed Georgie's hand. "I'm next, huh daddy?"

    Georgie did not notice Penny's question; he watched Katie walk to the kitchen and open the door. He walked to the entrance and saw Katie pull out a Ham and devour the hunk of meat. She reached inside and pulled out an entire loaf of bread and proceeded to make sandwiches. Lyla noticed Georgie and headed in his direction. Georgie noticed her behavior, grabbed Penny and headed for the living room.

    "Mommy is acting weird, too."

    "Yeah, tell daddy 'bout it..."

    As Georgie walked into the room, his pocket began to vibrate. He pulled out his cellphone; unknown was screaming on the screen and his heart sank. The Witch. Indignant, Georgie answered.

    "Who the bloody fuck is this!? Come an' get me, ya' fuckin' bastard! Leave me an' my family-"

    "Come to the woods tomorrow at dawn."

    Georgie paused. "Dawn-"

    "The time is drawing near, Georgie Porgie. I will lift the curse only if you promise to come at dawn."

    Georgie fell to his knees. "Why are ya' doin' this? I have learned my lesson-"

    The Witch snickers. "Have you? A lot of you Fables have so much to learn...."

    Georgie wiped his nose. "Where?"

    "Come with your family at Dawn on the highest peak."

    Before Georgie could answer, the Witch was gone. He tried calling back but there was nothing. Still on his knees, Georgie traced the screen with his finger.


    Part 8 soon :) The final part will happen with the final sin-Sloth. Georgie found out WHO now he will find out why. This was a lot of fun participating in. Also, I have a chance to catch up of some writings and drawings. Not too much but enough to keep my mind busy until Monday when the week starts up again. Worried about my sister is all; my GF is a sweetie keeping my spirits up and all your well wishes have helped as well. She is recovering and will call later to see her condition. IF you are waiting for an image, I will try getting it up soon; this unfortunate inccident has put me behind. :( HATE FAMILY EMERGENCIES!!

  • I love how the kids are so close; these sleepovers make me smile and it reminds me of myself and my cousins when we were kids. :)

    Oh snap! A cat! You mentioned to me you'd be giving the Porgies a cat. Typical Georgie behavior. He's not too pleased with the newest edition but glad he decided to let the cat stay. Can see Junior calling dibs on her, though. And Snowball. XD

    Taking the pictures with the Porgie Clan sounds like an adventure all in itself. XDI can see Emily and Georgie especially throwng the biggest fits Fabletown has EVER seen! lol And wow...Georgie is seeing Bigby with Peter!? Do explain more! 0.0

    I loved this. Lyla is the cutest, sweetest thing ever. :) I'm in love with the Porgie Clan!

    pudding_pie posted: »

    October Dear Diary: Today we got a rain storm. Georgie woke up around four this morning and found all but Emily in our bed; Peter especia

  • That is sick dude! XD

    HEY! Send me a link to the other image you made! :D I'll be out of town

    pudding_pie posted: »

    LOL Its an extra head growing put of his chest; it has yet to fully develop, should they fail to remove the curse. Oh yes, the lust entry

  • JJwolfJJwolf Banned
    edited October 2014

    -claps- I'm loving this Halloween Curse challenge; if there are various catagories your story needs to get 'Most Creative' or something. I'm not sure how Dragon plans on doing this but my vote would be 'most creative' for you. I enjoyed reading this; not because I'm a HUGE fan but the creativity, meaning and reason behind the curse. The 'caller' legend was a good choice.

    Anyways, enough of that ranting BS. I loved that you gave Katie Gluttony; she is very much like Lyla and expects to look a certain you. you giving her this curse to eat, eat and eat was a thumbs up in my book. I feel bad for Peter and all the others' Emily seems to be the only one ENJOYING her curse. Like, it doesn't seem to bother her!!! XD And damn, Lyla! Keep it in your pants, girl!!!!

    I can't WAIT to see how Georgie handles this! Go kick some ass, Porgie!! And Snow...a pile of sand. Nice. Also, keep my updated on your sister. You have me worried. I'll be out of town, as you know but do not hesitate to call me. We all are here for you and understand. :)<3 ya dude.

    pudding_pie posted: »

    Halloween Challenge Part 7: Gluttony "The Witch of Endor, huh?" Georgie scanned the enormous book before him. He found it difficult

  • I'm thrilled it's still growing in popularity after all of these months! You guys have been so nice, to both me and to each other. :) It's just amazing, simply amazing.

    LupineNoir posted: »

    None of us would be here if it weren't for you, Dragon! I mean, we'd exist, but wouldn't be on this thread, so congratulations! And thanks for all the great challenges so far.

  • Way to breeze through 2 out of the 3 challenges, guys. XD Loved it.

    MasterStone posted: »

    The Costume Party 3 "Holy crap! It actually talks!" "Robby, look what you have gotten us into.." "We have been in worse Walter.."

  • edited October 2014

    I don't have plans yet, but I'll think of something. You guys can count on it. ;)

    And how dare you say nice to Snow being a pile of sand. Snow's going to pummel you into the ground when she turns back to normal. XD

    JJwolf posted: »

    -claps- I'm loving this Halloween Curse challenge; if there are various catagories your story needs to get 'Most Creative' or something. I'm

  • edited October 2014

    Dammit, this is why I love Snow. She's so formal about everything!

    Besides, I bet some lady Fables were staring out of their windows watching Bigby work. :D

    EMMYPESS posted: »

    October 24th Dear Diary, The weather is dreadful. It's too chilly outside, Therese is complaining about her vegetable garden, and we'r

  • edited October 2014

    Not a problem with the wish, hopefully some Fable magic will be in the air that will make your sis feel better instantly. :D

    It's going to be interesting to see who the witch will be as well, if you're going to give her a name and a sultry appearance. :P

    pudding_pie posted: »

    Halloween Challenge Part 7: Gluttony "The Witch of Endor, huh?" Georgie scanned the enormous book before him. He found it difficult

  • Thanks. Again, appreciate it. :)

    The witch is actually ugly as sin but can always change it. After all, she is in a PIE story and about 99% of the time....well...you know. XD

    Not a problem with the wish, hopefully some Fable magic will be in the air that will make your sis feel better instantly. It's going to

  • Yep, pretty much there are eye-appealing ladies around every corner in your stories. :P

    pudding_pie posted: »

    Thanks. Again, appreciate it. The witch is actually ugly as sin but can always change it. After all, she is in a PIE story and about 99% of the time....well...you know. XD

  • Good stuff!

    pudding_pie posted: »

    Halloween Challenge Part 7: Gluttony "The Witch of Endor, huh?" Georgie scanned the enormous book before him. He found it difficult

  • The Costume Party, Conclusion

    "Alright you fools, lets get this final challenge moving, before we begin remember what is at stake. And also only one person is aloud to answer..so pick NOW."

    The group then decided to allow Robby to handle this one since he seemed very eager to handle this challenge. He then approached the evil doll and was prepared..

    "Of course that would choose the smart ass... Question one, which movie was inspired by me...?"

    "Childs Play."

    Correct.... Question two, who is the name of the urban legend that who made her victims stand in the corner before she killed them.."

    "Uh...was that the Blair Witch?"

    "Not to bad...but don't get so cute. Question 3, what movie is this; He came home on Halloween."

    "Halloween 1978."

    " Question 4, a monster with a Pumkin as a Head, this is a movie."

    "If i recall the movie you are talking about, the monster did'nt actually have a pumpkins as a head.."

    "Wha...what..? How many deadly sins are there?"

    "7 obviously."

    "What is my favorite flavor of ice cream?"

    "You look like a vanilla kind of guy.."

    "How many planets are in this solar system??"

    "8.."

    "WHAT IS 99 time 99?"

    "Suriously? If your out of questions, can we have those wives back already?"

    "But master said..." Robert as he breaking down into tears.

    "Master? Robert, who is your master?"

    "That would be me." A man dressed as a gypsy holding a gun and aiming it at everyone.

    "Master...! I'm sorry I failed."

    "You did good Robert, you got my the wives for the ransom. Now all I need to do is take care of these people and we be on our way- He what the hell?"

    "GET HIM!!" The group as they tackle the man knocking the gun out of his hand who Robby picks up and unloads the ammo.

    Robert then looks at Robby then looks at the man, and thinks about what he has done.

    "Robert quick save me!" The man calling for him.

    Robert then looks at Robby who sakes his head. Robert then releases the missing wives and pisses of the man who begins shouting and threatens to put him back in the box where he held him.

    "That's enough out of you, you in some serious trouble. You can either come quietly or face the wrath of the angry husbands down stairs searching for their wives.."

    "Damn you all! It was the perfect plan and you all messed it up! I would of gotten away with it if too if it weren't for you damn meddlings kids..!"

    "And that guys, that's the end of this scooby doo episode.."


    Back at the party, the wives has been safely retruned. The part is nearly over for as it nearly time for the childrens bedtime. The gang then meets outside of the building.

    "Well that was some party.. Robby." Lydia smiling.

    "Yep, best one I been to for a while. By the way, what happened to that doll, Robert?" Walter asking.

    "Robert appologized, and promised to make it up to us. He's somewhere safe..."

    Etan then walks by helping the drunken daren into the car and stops by to talk with the group."

    "Ahh, there you are Fabled Avengers. I wanted to thank you all for saving my lovely wife."

    "All in the days work, Etan."

    "Indeed Robby, there also something I want to tell you."

    "What is it? New mission for the Fabled Avengers?!"

    "Something like that... I awhile ago before I can here.. I spoken to my father Hati, he warned me of a group of gargoyles want me dead."

    "Dead...? But why..?"

    "Something me and this drunk did a long time ago."

    "Etan, what did You and Daren do too piss off a bunch of gargoyles??"

    "It's complicated Robby.. I'm sorry."

    "We can help you. With Lydia's power we can-"

    "No Robby, this is between Me and Daren and those gargoyles. We can handle them. What I need you need guys to do is watch over my wife and children while we go on this journey."

    "But.."

    "Can you do this for me Robby.."

    "Yeah... I will. I'll protect them .

    "Thank you Robby, my wifey will show you the path to our kingdom.. See ya in a few weeks."


    And so a new threat arises for the Fabled Avengers............

  • I know. Snow is a woman of status, of order, and of reminiscence. Very opposite to Rose, that's for sure. She loves her family most of all, but would be the last person to break down if bad things were to happen to any of them. Since the cubs are young adults at this period in time, I figured they would be doing their own things. Therese (One of my favs) Seemed the type to stay at home. She actually has a kingdom (If you've finished Cubs in Toyland, you'd know.) but it seems at though in the comics that she doesn't really want to go back to it just yet. She stated that she would stay for as long as she's needed. Who's to say that she would only be needed for a short amount of time, right?

    I wanted a good closure :) Figured Snow would end it that way.

    Sorry for answering this late BTW, had the busiest 2 days of my life, between going to Homecoming and running around all Sunday XD

    pudding_pie posted: »

    Snow always tries to sound so, oh what is the word...occupied with her current status in life. I love how all the cubs are doing their own

  • I love that about her too <3

    Lol, right? I know I would be staring for quite a while XD

    Dammit, this is why I love Snow. She's so formal about everything! Besides, I bet some lady Fables were staring out of their windows watching Bigby work.

  • edited October 2014

    Ashlyn sat on the corner of the street, hunched over and sitting next to her mundy friends from school. They were all losers to her, and the real reason she hung out with these Green Day bassist wannabes was because she seemed to fit in with their crowd. She didn't necessarily agree with all of their moral choices; She'd been raised better than that. She just didn't want to stick out like a sore thumb. Her hands curled around a hot cup of Starbucks, a cool wind blowing through that signaled another season of falling leaves and pumpkin spice flavored everything.

    Ugh, how she hated pumpkin spice. Her coffee, the same old blend of hazelnut creamer and dark roast, made it's way down her throat. She welcomed the feeling, considering the rest of her was freezing. This boy who'd had his eyes on her the past 2 monthes of school, a Freshman named Zeke, made his way to an empty spot next to her. She only cringed slightly, not wanting him to notice that she didn't want to talk with him, because despite the way she treated her siblings and closer friends, she was actually very considerate of other peoples feelings.

    "Hey," He said, a dumb smile spreading across his cheeks.

    She grunted a friendly,"What up?"

    "Oh, nothin'." He said.

    This was the literal extent of every conversation he ever tried to have with her. She stood, watching taxis and groups of people pass by. The motion of the city is what captured her interest the most; There was never a rest in the system, even at night. There was always someone doing something, and she longed to be in that position one day. Usually, she felt as if she were at a standstill. Go to school, go to work, hang out with the same deadbeats every day, repeat. It was taxing on her mental health. She began walking away from her friends with out saying much of a goodbye, but they were used to that by now. She did her own thing, and they did theirs. There was no doubt they would be leaving shortly to go over whoever had the most pot's house. They knew she didn't like that stuff and reveled in the moment whenever she finally left them. At least they were nice enough not to exclude her when she was present.

    She made her way down the same set of streets that led her to the same giant castle that held the same people she'd known since birth, that said the same exact things as she walked in the door since she was old enough to speak for herself. Nerves frayed, she dumped her empty cup in a trash can. Bullfinch street was approaching at an alarming rate and part of her wanted so bad not to walk in that direction. It wasn't that she hated it; She loved her family, she loved her real friends, and she didn't mind being in the position she was in.

    She just craved a change. Even a slight one would be enough to heal her of the funk she was currently in.

    Her body passing by a thin ally way, she was immediately pulled into the shadows by an unknown figure. Before she could scream, the person's hand was directly over her mouth. First instinct in this particular situation would be to turn into a wolf, but something was preventing her on doing so. Her panic soon seized as the light in her eyes faded to darkness. She was out cold.


    Sorry I haven't been on the past day and a half. SUPER busy with going all sorts of places and attending my school's Homecoming dance. Really decent this year, which was nice :) Saw my favorite teachers chaperoning, which was also great. I hope you liked this chapter. It was another one of those situations where I really had no plan whatsoever and just rolled with it. Still playing around with what I want to do, and I keep changing my mind on things I've told you guys I planned on doing. I suppose I should just keep my mouth shut and see what the final product comes out to be XD I hope things are well with you all, it's definitely been nice lately for me :) Any questions or concerns, don't be afraid to acknowledge them below.

  • Halloween October Challenge

    Part 8: Sloth and returns

    Georgie managed to drag the six kids and his lustful wife to the peak over looking the city of Fabletowm. The sun peaked over from the distance, as the group climbed over boulders and through the tall grass. Georgie found a giant tree on the peak, took off his hat and wiped the sweat growing on his forehead. The kids, still cursed with the sin, continued about as if was part of their daily routine.

    Lyla leaned against the tree beside Georgie and carefully exposed her left breast. Georgie, unamused, shrugged and stared off into the distance. She traced her finger across his shoulders and giggled. Lyla took a seat on Georgie's lap and began nibbling on his neck.

    "Hey there, handsome...my God look at you."

    Georgie sighed. "The fuckin' 'ell is she at?"

    "Who baby?" Lyla began grinding in Georgie's lap. "I'm right here and all you'll EVER need..."

    "I..know, love. Just...can you get off real quick?"

    Lyla huffed, stood up and walked to the edge. She crossed her arms and looked out to the city. The kids surrounded Georgie. Junior kicked the ground, causing a pebble to roll across the grass. He sighs.

    "Daddy, will I ever be big and strong like you?"

    "Yes."

    "When?"

    Georgie sighs. "Soon....just, soon son."

    Emily and Katie fought over a bag of chips, Penny, refusing to move, laid in the grass and stared up into the clouds. That morning, Penny refused to move from the couch. Georgie had to drag her to the peak; she declined to leave the comfort of her bed and with Sloth now invading her once pleasent characteristics, Georgie had to choice but to carry her.

    She continued to sit in the grass. Ethan built a circle of rocks around her body.

    "Brilliant! BRILLIANT! This wall of rocks shall be the biggest yet! Great Wall of China will have NOTHING on this-"

    Georgie watch Peter kick around the Wolf doll. He stangled it for a bit, kicked it across the dirt and began walloping on the doll.

    "This is for you, daddy. This must be done!"

    Behind Georgie, the bushes shuddered. The sound of twigs faintly broke as the footsteps grew louder with each step. Georgie sat up; Lyla was quickly by his side, trying to grab his groin area. Georgie smacked her hand away, just as the Witch appeared. In her hand, she held a dagger; a ruby gem sat in the middle, as the crooked blade gleamed in the sunlight. She snickered.

    "Georgie Porgie. Odd seeing you walking around the Earth."

    "You must be the Witch of Endor. You don't look anything like the images-"

    "Mundies are a humerous bunch of creatures. They assume they have ALL the answers."

    Georgie gently pushed Lyla to the side. He stood before the Witch.

    "Why are you doing this to my family? The fuck ya' tryin' ta' do?"

    The Witch smiled broadly. "You must be furious, Georgie."

    Georgie began grinding his teeth. "Answer me, ya' fuckin' bitch!"

    The Witch laughed. "You have no idea what you are dealing with; the powers I am capable of possesing and dishing out onto the sleeping town of Fable-"

    Georgie grabs the Witch's arm. "TELL ME...."

    "It was meant for a simply joke. A prank. But when Inoticed all the souls walking around this pathetic town, I knew what had to be done."

    "The bloody 'ell ya' talkin' 'bout!?"

    "You for example; the chance you were given to have this wonderful family. The Sheriff. The mundies would have put him down YEARS ago. Snow White-that stuck up bitch and her hidden feelings to this world..."

    "The phone?"

    "How else could I have distributed the curse? The mundies and their 'Caller' legend; creep in the back seat or watching the babysitter from the trees. Calling to mess with emotions...start some things. It was all a joke..."

    "So, what does this have to do-"

    "I wanted to see if you and the others were ready. Indeed, you have shown your family DOES indeed come first."

    Georgie released his grip. "You fuckin' testin' me?"

    "All of you. See how precious you ALL really think your lives are."

    "Tired of bein' tested-"

    The Witch held up the dagger. "Are you ready to remove the curse, Georgie Porgie?"

    Georgie could only nod. The Witch handed him the dagger; the handle felt cold against his skin, as Georgie's fingers wrapped around. He traced the blade with his other hand.

    "What do I do?"

    The Witch opened her palm; a tiny Amulet floated over her extended fingers. It glowed a deep red, as it twirled in mid air.

    "Take that dagger, slice open your palm and allow the blood to enter this charm."

    Georgie's eyes widened. "What?"

    "This Amulet will contain all the sins you have created. With your blood in here, I can burn this and allow the curse to free itself from their bodies."

    Georgie inhaled. He looked around and noticed his family. Today was the seventh day. He had no choice. So, with no other options left, he sliced open his palm. The burning sensation grew across the open wound, as the blood trickled down onto the object. The Witch watched as each of the sins lifted from the children and Lyla. Georgie crumbled to his knees as he continued to bleed.

    Lyla looked over. "Georgie? What are we-oh my God, sweetie! Your hand!"

    The Witch made a tiny fire, tossed it in and watched it burn. The kids stopped in their tracks and looked over.

    "EW! Cheetos!? I hate CHEETOS!" Katie throws the bag. "Ew, ew, ew!!"

    Peter noticed the torn up Wolf doll in his hands; stuck in is teeth were bundles of stuffing. He grabbed the object out.

    "What is this?" Peter looks at the mangled mess. "Did...did I do this?"

    Ethan came to a halt; the rocks structure was alarming him and he had nothing to say. Emily simply stood and looked around. Lyla grabbed Georgie and helped him up. The wound on his palm had closed up.

    "Georgie! What happened love?"

    Georgie looked over. "The curse...its been lifted..."

    Lyla smiled. "How?"

    Georgie pointed to the area but the Witch was gone. The couple searched the area but nothing could be traced to her where abouts. The kids walked over to their parents; Peter and Junior tugged on Georgie's pant leg, as he lifted the boys into his arms.

    "Daddy, what happened?"

    Georgie kissed the tops of their heads. "Nothin', boys. We just needed to go for a walk."

    The kids look around. "A walk?"

    "Yes, remember? Ya' all wanted to go outside and run around the woods..."

    The kids squealed, as they ran around the grass and jumped into the creek. Lyla tugged at her dress, as the couple stood beside the tree.

    "This dress is VERY short, Georgie. Why am Iwearing this?"

    Georgie laughs and grabs her hand. "Glad to have you back, Lyla...missed ya'."

    Lyla kissed his hand, as the kids continued to play around the woods. Behind them, the Amulet finished to burning embers. Everyone in Fabletown had been cured; those infected had to remove the curse the same way Georgie had done. Snow tried contacting the Witch of Endor but failed when there were no traces of her.

    Georgie and Lyla watched the children play, no longer living the life of sin.


    And that wraps up the curse challenge. :) I just got back from my mom's place; sister is home and recovering. Will check up on her on Tuesday. Gotta catch up on some writing and drawing now.

  • Trying to picture Snow: Success level = moderate XD I'm not sure exactly how she'd look, but I have a faint idea XD

    Very interesting, the conversation with Blue and Georgie. I really liked their speculation, opening a lot of theories out.

    Oh Katie XD I swear, I can DEFINITELY picture her pigging out on all the snacks. I find it interesting you made Penny the last. Not sure if that was on purpose or not, but she seems like she'd be in that position anyway. I feel like I never know what she's going to do, but that's not a bad thing. Broke my heart really, as she stepped through the house and watched everyone in their trances. Broke it even more when Georgie came in and hugged his only remaining shred of sanity :(

    I can just picture the world around him spinning as he stands there. It's a very defeating feeling, although you also have me on the edge of my seat because I can't wait to see the cause of all of this!

    I hope all is well with your sister. It sucks, I know. Glad your GF can keep your mind distracted and drawing too. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

    pudding_pie posted: »

    Halloween Challenge Part 7: Gluttony "The Witch of Endor, huh?" Georgie scanned the enormous book before him. He found it difficult

  • The question part reminded me of Monty Python. XD Not bad at all, Stone.

    MasterStone posted: »

    The Costume Party, Conclusion "Alright you fools, lets get this final challenge moving, before we begin remember what is at stake. And al

  • Haha, great to hear you had a good time! Things have been pretty well for me, same old same old. :P

    Always gotta be the alleyway, then again, that's New York for ya. XD

    EMMYPESS posted: »

    Ashlyn sat on the corner of the street, hunched over and sitting next to her mundy friends from school. They were all losers to her, and the

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    Hmm, the witch was surprisingly cooperative, fortunate enough for him it was that easy I suppose. :P

    I'm going to tell myself that she was super hot too, because I can. (bwahahahah!)

    pudding_pie posted: »

    Halloween October Challenge Part 8: Sloth and returns Georgie managed to drag the six kids and his lustful wife to the peak over looki

  • Yeah...a bit too easy...XD

    Yeah go ahead. She was super hot. Wasn't as good of an ending but I didn't want to drag it on. I tend to do that sometimes...lol

    Hmm, the witch was surprisingly cooperative, fortunate enough for him it was that easy I suppose. :P I'm going to tell myself that she was super hot too, because I can. (bwahahahah!)

  • Not a problem, I understand.

    pudding_pie posted: »

    Yeah...a bit too easy...XD Yeah go ahead. She was super hot. Wasn't as good of an ending but I didn't want to drag it on. I tend to do that sometimes...lol

  • Chapter 26

    Snake skinned boots

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    Enjoy. :)


    Georgie and Jersey sat in the Den; a roaring fire crackled and continued to warm the room up, as Jersey snuggled deeper into the couch. Georgie held a warm cup of tea in his hands, as the two men held various conversations. Lyla, Penny and Katie were in the kitchen; the girls played dolls and other childhood care-free games in the lving room. The hallways echoed with giggles and the ocassional argument. The rain unabating outside the window, trickling down the glass.

    "How ya' feelin, Jersey?" Georgie reaches over and grabs his exposed foot. "Ya' look like fuckin' shit."

    Jersey laughs. "Eh, been better. Had worse. Ya' know, this ain't nothin'! One time, these fuckin' mundies had an award out for my capture and there were hoardes of these things walkin' 'roud, lookin' for the blasted fuckin' Jersey Devil."

    Georgie sips his tea. "Yeah...I KINDA 'member hearin' 'bout that."

    "And when I lost these bad boys behind me? Good thing 'bout bein' a fuckin' Fable; things like wings, wounds and other fuckin' things tend to heal and grow back quicker."

    Georgia and Gianna ran around the corner. In their hand, they held a board game. Gianna climbed over the ottoman, grabbed Jersey's arm and sat comfortably in his lap.

    "What'ta want, ya' little bugger?"

    "Daddy, Bella and the others are not sharing. To make things worse, they kicked our game and now me and Georgia can't play."

    Georgia took some of Georgie's tea and drank it. "They made us lose our spot!"

    Not too long after the first set of girls migrated to the Den, Bella, Alice, Willow and Ivy entered and took their spot beside the chair.

    "Nuh uh! You guys started it!"

    Gianna leaned closer to Bella's face. "YOU and Alice kicked the game!"

    "I TOLD you to please move, Gianna! You were on OUR spot to play!"

    Jersey rubs his eyes with his thumb and index finger. "Girls, girls, please. One at a time. Now WHAT is goin' on here?"

    "Daddy, Gianna was in MY spot! We were playing dolls and that was gunna be the Mall and she took it and-"

    "Did you KNOW that your sister was there, Gianna?"

    "No! Me and Georgia took it and like, two minutes later here they come!"

    Bella stomps her foot. "No! I TOLD you we were gunna play there and you and Georgia just took it!"

    "No!"

    "Yes!"

    "NO!"

    "YES!!!"

    "Girls enough!" Jersey's commands roared among the walls, as the little girls came to a halt and looked at their father. "Now...all of ya' need to take a minute, calm down and talk like young ladies. STOP yellin'."

    After a minute of silence, Bella spoke again. "That was my spot, Gianna."

    Jersey sighs. "You girls need to come up with a solution..."

    Gianna and Bella could only look at one another. "She summoned birds, daddy..."

    Georgie shivered in his seat. "Bloody hate fuckin' birds..."

    "Birds?" Jersey glares at Gianna. "You called Birds into this house?"

    Gianna smiled. "Yes..."

    "They poked my neck and pulled my hair with their beaks!"

    Jersey again looks at Gianna, who is twidling her thumbs together. "This true?"

    "Maybe...she made me angry!"

    "So you summon Birds?"

    "They were little Birds, daddy..."

    Jersey pats Gianna's back. He extends his arms out, gathers the other girls and plants a kiss on their forehead.

    "Listen to me. You are sisters and I don't like seein' ya' girls fight like this! You love one another and I expect ya' all to learn how to TALK and not summon animals, change OR fight. Do ya' understand?"

    All the girls nod their heads. "Now, figure all this out. No more fighting or I'm gonna get mommy involved and she'll be so MUCH worse-"

    The girls again could only nod, as they kissed both Georgie and jersey and hand in hand, walked back to the living room. Jersey sighed, sat back and rubbed his neck. Georgie crossed his legs and continued sipping his tea.

    "You are SO lucky you and Lyla only had six kids. At least you HAD boys...."

    Georgie laughed. "Well, believe it or not, wasn't THAT much more quiet. Ya' don't remember but Katie and Penny were ALWAYS fighting over some dumb shit."

    Jersey looks up. "Like what?"

    Georgie smiles. "Where the bloody 'ell do I begin? Toys, clothes, who sleeps where, food, seating at the dinner table. Television shows. WHERE to bloody play outside. Hair. Shoes-"

    Jersey chuckles. "Oh yeah....Now I remember."

    "The boys were no better. For awhile Peter and Junior were ALWAYS fighting; Junior would use his powers and Peter would turn into a Wolf and the two would battle it out until either Lyla or myself found 'em!"

    "Ever find out why?"

    Georgie looks up. "They're BOYS, Jersey...that's what they like ta' do."

    Jersey and Georgie joined in a laughter, as the fire continued behind them. Meanwhile, the women sat in the Kitchen, drank a glass of Wine and held various topics of conversation. Josiah slept peacefully in his Bassinet beside Penny. Katie leans over the table and grabs another cracker.

    "You sure you're not hungry, Penny?"

    "No. I'm fine, Katie. Thank you."

    Lyla sips from her glass. "Seems like Jersey handled THAT pretty well out there."

    "I've learned, mom, to let him deal with the girls sometimes. IF he truely needs me, I'll step in."

    "Your father and I did that a lot with you kids. Mostly your father dealt with the punishments."

    Katie rolls her eyes. "Half the time dad was doin' it JUST so we knew who was the 'man' of the house."

    Penny snorts. "It was hillarious watching, though."

    Lyla smiles. "Your father was something else. But he loved you kids and did it because he cared."

    Katie bites into the cracker. "Jersey does the same. He HATES doing that to the girls but they need to learn. I told him, who ELSE will teach them if mot you or me?"

    Josiah begins to thrash in his Bassinet. The boy kicks around the blanket, as his tiny hands begin to form into paws. Penny grabs the hungry boy, pulls down her blouse and allows him to latch. Suckling away, Josiah's eyes open and look around. Katie lifts a hand and strokes the top of his head.

    "He's getting so big."

    Penny smiles. "He looks more and more like me everyday. Or, so that's what I've been told."

    "By Johann?"

    Penny gleams. "Yes. By Johann....Oliver, too...."

    Lyla and Katie are still, as the boy continues to nurse. "Oliver has been around him?"

    Penny pauses. "Yes...he has."

    "Think that is wise, sis, considering what he's done-"

    "Stop, Katie...he, he didn't mean to-"

    Katie clentched her fists into balls. "Seriously? Didn't MEAN to? He left you-"

    They both looked at one another, then at Lyla. Lyla held the Wine glass tightly in her grasp. She looked at her daughters; all she could see were two devious children prepared for anything headed their way. Katie and Penny may have had their diffferences but the two were closer than ever before. Lyla smiled; that's how it was with her sisters and how it should be. Lyla cleared her throat.

    "Talk, Penny."

    The girls stared at Lyla. "What?"

    "Talk. Tell us what really happened. Not just between you and Oliver. But the Butcher. You have this nasty habit of keeping shit in and its time you told us what REALLY went on. Stop acting like your father..."

    Penny sighs. Katie grabs her hand and holds it tight. Josiah continues to suckle, as Penny rocks her son.


    Hope washes her hands, as the toilet water circles in the bowl. As she wips her hands on a towel by the shower, the rain continues to pound the outside window. Thunder could be heard from the distance. Hope smiles; she does not mind the thunder but when lightning strikes, she'd find her way to either Jersey or Katie. Hope closed the light and headed back to the living room. Before her foot could touch the stairs, she heard a tapping on the window. Hope looked over. Oliver, drenched in rain water, waved to get her attention.

    Hope smiled, skipped to the window and opened it. Rain water poured in, as the wind blew.

    "Uncle Oliver!"

    "Hey, love. What 're ya' girls doin?"

    "Playing."

    Oliver beams. "What good little girls ya' all 're, ain't ya'? Listen, ya' Uncle Oliver is needin' some company. Ya' Auntie Penny is really mad at me and well, I need ya' Hope to come with me. Ya' Uncle Oliver is sad..."

    Hope grabs his hand. "What did you do, Uncle Oliver? My mommy and daddy are mad-"

    "Sssh. Not so loud, love." Oliver opens his palm. "Come with ma, Hope. Come hang out with your Uncle Oliver for a bit."

    "Just me?"

    Oliver nods, causing Hope to squeal and clap. She takes his hand. Oliver lifts her up, opens his jacket and places Hope inside. She buries her face in his shirt, as Oliver climbs down and into his car. He turns on the engine, cranks the heater up and buckles Hope in. She continues to clap; she didn't see what the others saw and was pleased to be spending time with Oliver. He took his seat, closed the door and turned on the Radio.

    "Ya' like Lady Gaga, Hope?"

    "YES! Yes, yes, yes!"

    Oliver smiles. "Alright. 'Ere we go-"

    Oliver pulls out and heads down the rainy road. Hope dances in her seat, as Oliver heads deeper into the city.


    Chapter 27 soon :) Sorry for not posting as much. Took this week off for my sister. Mush better. Saw her yesterday and she is at my mom's house. Doing much better and will stay with her on Tuesday. Thank you all for the well-wishes. :) Sorry if the chapter seems a bit long; I have not had a chance to write this week and this wan an idea that was brewing in my head for a bit now. If you have any questions, you know the drill. <3

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    October

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    Dear Diary:

    Hey. Georgie Porgie here. Lyla has the Flu. Rubbed some of that Vick's Vapor rub on her chest, had her take a bath and gave her medicine out the ass. She is currently asleep at the moment. Thought I'd take this moment to add a bit to this blasted thing.

    Peter and Ethan's class are having Pumpkin and Ghost shapped cookies toady. The teacher baked a ton and its a treat for those that read ten books or more. It was a piece of cake for these two; they are indeed my book worms and were pleased to know about the treat for their work. Emily has Football practice today. Lyla a tad disappointed she could not attend but John and Nancy are going with me. I promised her they would take a ton of pictures and I'd record her performance on my phone. Katie is on Honor's Roll and Penny and Junior won 'Character Counts' for the month of October. So proud of the kids.

    Lyla found out about me and Peter's trips to Central Park. A part of me didn't want to see them together; I feel like he has no right but then that other part, the one I refused to listen to all those years ago, was louder and more vocal than the other. Bigby understands that I'm dad and keeps it that way around Peter; all he wanted was to watch him grow and play. Peter is a bit timid around the Sheriff and hides the majority of the time. I can see the hurt in Bigby's eyes when he tries touching Peter and the boy growls. Lyla is worried the Folkers will find; those rat arsed bastards have eyes all over this bloody town but I'm watching. What they DON'T know can't hurt 'em....

    Tomorrow, Hans, Henry and I are going through the shed and looking for Christmas decorations. Yes. Already, right? Have you SEEN the way the mundies act 'round this time of year? Guess Jersey already bought Katie some gifts; that bloody Barbie convertable that makes all those noises and shit. Great. He's spoiling that girl...Also, you'll see this love but Bloody fuckin' Mary was at my door this morning when the kids left for school. She was lookin' for Junior. I gotta get rid of these mirrors in the house....the club...the Witches are NOT right. Nope! Nope, nope, nope....also, that one in his room has to go.

    Well, gotta go. Can hear Lyla calling me. xoxoxo to ya', love.

    Until next time. Georgie Porgie


    JUST so I don't take up too much room, more random images. XD Gotta do SOMETHING while in the Hospital room with your sister. :) She was like 'Hey, I thought Georgie was with that girl, Lyla or whatever.' Had to explain Junior's situation. XD

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  • Well, I liked it; yeah, it was a bit short but we get the picture: Georgie finds witch, witch lifts curse, snow tries finding witch and now she is gone; leaves it open for this lady to come back. I mean, she DOES have an amulet full of Porgie blood. :P Also, considering WHAT was going on, I can't blame you.

    I'm glad to hear she is home and recovering well. I was so worried; have NOT seen you that depressed in the short time we've known each other. :( If you need me, you know what to do, dude.

    Anyways, I liked this curse and the idea behind it. :) Thumbs up from me.

    pudding_pie posted: »

    Halloween October Challenge Part 8: Sloth and returns Georgie managed to drag the six kids and his lustful wife to the peak over looki

  • Shut up, no you don't! XD

    pudding_pie posted: »

    Yeah...a bit too easy...XD Yeah go ahead. She was super hot. Wasn't as good of an ending but I didn't want to drag it on. I tend to do that sometimes...lol

  • LOL Bring it on, Snow! XD

    I don't have plans yet, but I'll think of something. You guys can count on it. And how dare you say nice to Snow being a pile of sand. Snow's going to pummel you into the ground when she turns back to normal. XD

  • OKAY! LET'S TRY THIS AGAIN! Fuck, man! This damn site keeps kicking me off right as I'm in the middle of writting! Shit!

    Okay. First off I love that Jersey and Georgie are cool with one another; it was never like that and they put their differences aside because of miss Katie. :) LIKE that. Second, those girls are too much; I feel bad for Jersey cause it only gets wrose from there; periods, fighting, someone took someone's makeup and so forth. XD God speed, Jersey! lol Also, Peter and Junior. XD Nuff said!

    The women in the kitchen was fun to read; Josiah being cute as always and Lyla wanting to know what is really going on. I'm looking forward to Penny's tale on how her and Johann came to be. :3

    AND that ending!! DAFUQ man! He just TOOK Hope! He better not hurt my sweet little Hope!!! I'll make me a wallet and purse out of that shit! >:( I loved this chapter!!!

    pudding_pie posted: »

    Chapter 26 Snake skinned boots Enjoy. Georgie and Jersey sat in the Den; a roaring fire crackled and continued to warm the r

  • You REALLY need to do something in regards to these pictures. Like, seriously-go work for someone already! XD I loved the one with Georgie and Lyla....and damn, Mary! Rape face! XD Junior looks nervous. Well....I would be, too. Ya' know...losing your v-chip to Bloody Mary. XD

    Anyways, I love hearing from Georgie. Sucks Lyla is sick. Hate being sick. :( The kids are doing great and that makes me happy. I remember getting things like cookies as a reward for school work. :)

    That section with Peter and Bigby. I'm glad Gerogie is putting his PRIDE aside and allowing the Sheriff SOME time with Peter, even if its for a short moment. Peter afraid of Bigby can be understood; the kid has no idea and his stature is very itimidating to a kid that young. :( I'm curious now about this relationship and looking forward to when you DO write about Peter.

    And yes...xmas. My mom was doing that the other day, too. I was like 'damn, we ain't even passed out candy yet!' XD And mary.....sweet, sweet Mary and her baby daddy. Its nice seeing HOW and why. Poor Georgie...he was hoping they were wrong....

    Great! loved this!

    pudding_pie posted: »

    October Dear Diary: Hey. Georgie Porgie here. Lyla has the Flu. Rubbed some of that Vick's Vapor rub on her chest, had her take a

  • I saw the first sentence and was like 'DAFUQ JJ!' XD But it was good, so that's ok. :) Her rape face!? My GF said the same thing!!! lol

    Yeah the whole thing with Peter will explained when his time comes. Things were different back then, as you have noticed. :( AND that whole thing with the mirrors....I'll explain more. :)

    Glad you liked it.

    JJwolf posted: »

    You REALLY need to do something in regards to these pictures. Like, seriously-go work for someone already! XD I loved the one with Georgie a

  • Great entry. Glad you had a wonderful time. I remember stuff like that in HS. :3 Good times.

    EMMYPESS posted: »

    Ashlyn sat on the corner of the street, hunched over and sitting next to her mundy friends from school. They were all losers to her, and the

  • See!?im not the only one that said that!! Lol

    I'm looking forward to that. :)

    You need to do more with Mary and junior! :D

    pudding_pie posted: »

    I saw the first sentence and was like 'DAFUQ JJ!' XD But it was good, so that's ok. Her rape face!? My GF said the same thing!!! lol Yea

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