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  • supersagigsupersagig

    Can i do my own Wilson part?

    ClemyClooAndBabyboo posted: »

    Chapter 4 Episode 2 So this chapter, there will be a lot of choices. and we will catch up with every group. so this will be a long chapte

  • ClemyClooAndBabybooClemyClooAndBabyboo

    PM me the wilson part you want to post, and if it fits well, I'll post it and give you the credit.

    supersagig posted: »

    Can i do my own Wilson part?

  • supersagigsupersagig

    after the decision :P (depending in another choice he will be with another person)

    ClemyClooAndBabyboo posted: »

    PM me the wilson part you want to post, and if it fits well, I'll post it and give you the credit.

  • UCAAV29784UCAAV29784

    [RUN]

    [SHOOT MAN]

    [SHOOT MAN]

    [HELP]

    [COVER DAN] So he can be safe from walkers.

    [CONTACT CLEM AND TELL HER]

    ClemyClooAndBabyboo posted: »

    Chapter 4 Episode 2 So this chapter, there will be a lot of choices. and we will catch up with every group. so this will be a long chapte

  • supersagigsupersagig
    edited November 2014

    I have 2 ideas:

    • The person who took care of him for a part of the apocalipse (He was like 3 or 4 when it started)
    • After the decision

    Which one do you like the most?

    ClemyClooAndBabyboo posted: »

    PM me the wilson part you want to post, and if it fits well, I'll post it and give you the credit.

  • ClemyClooAndBabybooClemyClooAndBabyboo

    I like the first one better, post the first one, and i will fit it into the story later on.

    supersagig posted: » [view original content]
  • kenny4presidentkenny4president Banned

    You better not shoot my brother.

    supersagig posted: »

    [RUN] Laura is always first [SHOOT MAN] Well he said that he was going to kill me so..... [SHOOT THE MAN] No one attack my characters

  • supersagigsupersagig

    I have an idea for the plot , but i think that is too long for one part xd

    ClemyClooAndBabyboo posted: »

    I like the first one better, post the first one, and i will fit it into the story later on.

  • ClemyClooAndBabybooClemyClooAndBabyboo
    edited November 2014

    So guys, I need your advice on something, I was thinking about after episode 2 is done, I wanted to take a break from this one and start a different story, So i wanted to do one of these 3: Silent Hill, Pokemon, and An alien apocalypse thing. what do you guys think?

  • supersagigsupersagig

    You already opened a Alien fan fiction thread

    ClemyClooAndBabyboo posted: »

    So guys, I need your advice on something, I was thinking about after episode 2 is done, I wanted to take a break from this one and start a d

  • ClemyClooAndBabybooClemyClooAndBabyboo

    Nah, it might be cool. it's fine if it's long.

    supersagig posted: »

    I have an idea for the plot , but i think that is too long for one part xd

  • ClemyClooAndBabybooClemyClooAndBabyboo

    Yeah, but i didn't do anything with it because i was focused on this.

    supersagig posted: »

    You already opened a Alien fan fiction thread

  • supersagigsupersagig

    I need your help with making my own Wilson part or at least an advice

    UCAAV29784 posted: »

    [RUN] [SHOOT MAN] [SHOOT MAN] [HELP] [COVER DAN] So he can be safe from walkers. [CONTACT CLEM AND TELL HER]

  • supersagigsupersagig

    Natalie see her own son be ate alive , she meet Wilson and his mother , but the mother is bitten and ask Natalie to take care of him

    ClemyClooAndBabyboo posted: »

    Nah, it might be cool. it's fine if it's long.

  • UCAAV29784UCAAV29784

    Okay. If you want me to proofread it or anything, let me know. For advice, don't add in too many characters because that makes the writing process harder; the more characters there are, the more dialogue you'd have to write. There are pro's and cons to how you could write it. The pro for paragraph format (Ch7 1/2 Ep 1) is that you can add more details. The con is that you would have to write much more. The pro for Dialogue and action format (all chapters besides 7 1/2 Ep 1) is that you can show dialogue easier. The huge con for this is the inability to write many details. Based on your preference, you can choose either one, or, a completely different one.

    supersagig posted: »

    I need your help with making my own Wilson part or at least an advice

  • UCAAV29784UCAAV29784

    Also, characterization, or things that show a character's personality is key. If you want to write Wilson as ruthless, you can outright say it, or imply it through his actions. It's easier to write in the third person, so I suggest you do that for Wilson. If you need any help, either PM me, or just simply reply. I may not get back to you immediately, but I will try to get back to you ASAP.

    supersagig posted: »

    I need your help with making my own Wilson part or at least an advice

  • ClemyClooAndBabybooClemyClooAndBabyboo

    Alright, I wanna post chapter 5 soon. So i will give you these last two choices.

    [SHOOT] Or [HELP]

    and

    [CONTACT CLEM] Or [CHASE LEO]

    choose from those options, and then chapter 5 will come out soon, because 1 voted Contact clem, while the other voted chase leo, same with the first choice.

  • UCAAV29784UCAAV29784

    Help

    Contact Clem

    ClemyClooAndBabyboo posted: »

    Alright, I wanna post chapter 5 soon. So i will give you these last two choices. [SHOOT] Or [HELP] and [CONTACT CLEM] Or [CHASE LEO

  • ClemyClooAndBabybooClemyClooAndBabyboo

    Okay thats good enough for me!.

    UCAAV29784 posted: »

    Help Contact Clem

  • ClemyClooAndBabybooClemyClooAndBabyboo

    VOTING CLOSED

    [RUN]

    [SHOOT MAN]

    [SHOOT MAN]

    [HELP]

    [COVER DAN]

    [CONTACT CLEM]

    Those are the decsions.

    Chapter 5 Out tomorrow!

  • UCAAV29784UCAAV29784

    Good night and happy writing.

    ClemyClooAndBabyboo posted: »

    VOTING CLOSED [RUN] [SHOOT MAN] [SHOOT MAN] [HELP] [COVER DAN] [CONTACT CLEM] Those are the decsions. Chapter 5 Out tomorrow!

  • ClemyClooAndBabybooClemyClooAndBabyboo

    Oh my god, I took a sip of my water, And there was a dead fly in it... I hate myself

    UCAAV29784 posted: »

    Good night and happy writing.

  • ClemyClooAndBabybooClemyClooAndBabyboo

    Episode 2 Chapter 5

    Felix and Laura

    [RUN]

    Felix: Damnit, I'm sorry man.

    Bystander: AHHHH! PLEASE! HELP!

    (He is eaten)

    Kenny: Is the girl alright?!

    Felix: Yeah, Shes Okay.

    Kenny: Come on! We gotta get to the bus!

    Felix: Got it!

    (The three run to the bus)

    Felix: Take Laura! I gotta find the others!

    Kenny: Where the hell are you going?!

    MEANWHILE...

    Wilson

    [SHOOT MAN]

    Wilson: I'm sorry man.

    (Wilson shoots the man in the head)

    Wilson: Ugh... (Wilson Vommits)

    (He closes the mans eyes)

    (Wilson limps to the bus)

    Kenny: Get on Kid, We got medical attention on there.

    Wilson: Oh shit, Laura! Hey. There you are. But wheres Felix?

    MEANWHILE...

    David And Zara

    David: Zara! Duck!

    (Zara Ducks)

    (David shoots the man)

    David: Lets Go!

    Melisa, Jake, and Jarrod

    [HELP]

    Jarrod: Okay, I'm putting the gun down. Let me help you.

    Melisa: Thank you.

    Jarrod: Alright, What Happened?

    Jake: I-I Don't know...

    Jarrod: Hang on, They have a bus with Medical Supplies, Lets get you there.

    (They carry him through the gun fire)

    Jarrod: ALRIGHT! GET HIM IN! I'LL HOLD THESE GUYS OFF!

    Melisa: Okay!

    Dan, Trey and Ryan

    [COVER DAN]

    Trey: Alright dan! Come on buddy!

    (Trey starts shooting)

    Dan: Trey, I'm almo--

    (A walker grabs Dan)

    Trey: NO!

    (Trey kills the walker)

    Dan: Trey... Please, lets go.

    Trey: Okay buddy.

    Ryan: COME ON! LETS GO!

    (They arrive at the RV)

    Trey: We're here dan, You'll be okay. Dan? Are you awake? Dan?!

    Leo, Eva, And Becca

    [CONTACT CLEM]

    Eva: Clem! Come in!

    Clem on Radio: Not now! We have a bite victim...

    Dan: Ugh...

    (Dan is bitten)

    CHAPTER END!!!

    Holy shit! what a twist! what do you guys think?

  • UCAAV29784UCAAV29784
    edited November 2014

    Amputate for his future. Immediately please.

    Can you also have the bite be down at his wrist so he can have a prosthetic arm?

    Also, if you want to get rid of Dan, Rebecca, and Ryan, can you make th m unknown so I can use them for my story?

    ClemyClooAndBabyboo posted: »

    Episode 2 Chapter 5 Felix and Laura [RUN] Felix: Damnit, I'm sorry man. Bystander: AHHHH! PLEASE! HELP! (He is eaten) Kenn

  • supersagigsupersagig

    I knew that we should save him ¬¬

    ClemyClooAndBabyboo posted: »

    Episode 2 Chapter 5 Felix and Laura [RUN] Felix: Damnit, I'm sorry man. Bystander: AHHHH! PLEASE! HELP! (He is eaten) Kenn

  • supersagigsupersagig

    We don´t know where the walker bit him

    UCAAV29784 posted: »

    He still can. I actually had this planned for my story (Dan getting bitten, amputating, and survives). Even if we saved him, someone else would've either been bitten or eaten. Covering was the safest option.

  • UCAAV29784UCAAV29784
    edited November 2014

    He still can. I actually had this planned for my story (Dan getting bitten, amputating, and survives).

    Even if we saved him, someone else would've either been bitten or eaten. Covering was the safest option.

    supersagig posted: »

    I knew that we should save him ¬¬

  • UCAAV29784UCAAV29784

    We don't know, but I hope for it to be at his wrist.

    supersagig posted: »

    I knew that we should save him ¬¬

  • supersagigsupersagig

    Well i like Dan more than Trey so...
    Can Wilson be in your story?

    UCAAV29784 posted: »

    He still can. I actually had this planned for my story (Dan getting bitten, amputating, and survives). Even if we saved him, someone else would've either been bitten or eaten. Covering was the safest option.

  • UCAAV29784UCAAV29784

    Sure. If you'd like to write his death, or don't want his death, I won't write it like that.

    supersagig posted: »

    Well i like Dan more than Trey so... Can Wilson be in your story?

  • supersagigsupersagig
    edited November 2014

    I want you to make him try filtring to Rebecca but failing and alive , please :P

    UCAAV29784 posted: »

    Sure. If you'd like to write his death, or don't want his death, I won't write it like that.

  • supersagigsupersagig

    also getting separeted of the group for a while but returning :P

    supersagig posted: »

    I want you to make him try filtring to Rebecca but failing and alive , please :P

  • ClemyClooAndBabybooClemyClooAndBabyboo

    I shall decide the fate, i am getting way to many comments telling me how to run this, It's not that it's annoying, i like some of the ideas, but i want to keep the idea the way it is for now.

    UCAAV29784 posted: »

    Amputate for his future. Immediately please. Can you also have the bite be down at his wrist so he can have a prosthetic arm? Also, if you want to get rid of Dan, Rebecca, and Ryan, can you make th m unknown so I can use them for my story?

  • kenny4presidentkenny4president Banned

    Can you stop with all the unnecessary Trey hate wtf?

    supersagig posted: »

    Well i like Dan more than Trey so... Can Wilson be in your story?

  • kenny4presidentkenny4president Banned

    Did you get my pms? I don't know because I don't know how to check them on my phone.

    UCAAV29784 posted: »

    Sure. If you'd like to write his death, or don't want his death, I won't write it like that.

  • kenny4presidentkenny4president Banned

    Can I suggest something for a future episode?

    ClemyClooAndBabyboo posted: »

    Episode 2 Chapter 5 Felix and Laura [RUN] Felix: Damnit, I'm sorry man. Bystander: AHHHH! PLEASE! HELP! (He is eaten) Kenn

  • ClemyClooAndBabybooClemyClooAndBabyboo

    Sure man, i might be able to use it soon.

    kenny4president posted: »

    Can I suggest something for a future episode?

  • kenny4presidentkenny4president Banned

    I think Trey and the guy who keeps pushing Trey, I think it's Wilson should get into a fist fight and MAYBE one gets killed or sustains a serious injury, like loses an eye or a limb.

    ClemyClooAndBabyboo posted: »

    Sure man, i might be able to use it soon.

  • ClemyClooAndBabybooClemyClooAndBabyboo

    I was actually gonna use that idea. Thanks!

    kenny4president posted: »

    I think Trey and the guy who keeps pushing Trey, I think it's Wilson should get into a fist fight and MAYBE one gets killed or sustains a serious injury, like loses an eye or a limb.

  • supersagigsupersagig

    I was saying that i like Dan more than Trey , that´s all

    kenny4president posted: »

    Can you stop with all the unnecessary Trey hate wtf?

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