I shall decide the fate, i am getting way to many comments telling me how to run this, It's not that it's annoying, i like some of the ideas, but i want to keep the idea the way it is for now.
Preview of whatever i´m going to do
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO , Natalie said crying as she saw the terrific scene
Please , just ...take him… more , please , the woman said getting weaker every moment she stays alive
Fuck , just don´t cry , could do?
Don´t touch him!
Welcome to...
Chapter 6 Episode 2
Eva: A Bite victim?! Who?!
Clementine: His Name is Dan, He was bitten on the Ankle.
Eva: Shit. What do we do?
… more Clementine: We're Deciding.
(They drive up to eva and everyone leaves wellington)
Trey: It's only been 20 minutes since he was bitten... We can amputate, Right?
Eva: Yes, But we need more bandages then what we have, same with water, we can risk it, But he could die...
Ryan: Damnit, Damnit, Damnit! Damnit! DAMNIT!
Dan: R-Ryan, Calm Down...
Trey: This is my fault...
Rebecca: I'm here! Dan! What happened to you?
Dan: Just what you would expect...
Trey: What do we do?
[PUT DAN OUT OF HIS MISERY] [AMPUTATE]
MEANWHILE...
Jarrod: They left...
Steve: You saved them, Your sons gonna die now. And IT'S YOUR FAULT YOU DICK!
Jarrod: He's already dead... I was sure of it the whole time.
Steve: Your a piece of shit. and now negan's gonna Kill us BOTH!
Jarrod: Not me, and… [view original content]
Chapter 6 Episode 2
Eva: A Bite victim?! Who?!
Clementine: His Name is Dan, He was bitten on the Ankle.
Eva: Shit. What do we do?
… more Clementine: We're Deciding.
(They drive up to eva and everyone leaves wellington)
Trey: It's only been 20 minutes since he was bitten... We can amputate, Right?
Eva: Yes, But we need more bandages then what we have, same with water, we can risk it, But he could die...
Ryan: Damnit, Damnit, Damnit! Damnit! DAMNIT!
Dan: R-Ryan, Calm Down...
Trey: This is my fault...
Rebecca: I'm here! Dan! What happened to you?
Dan: Just what you would expect...
Trey: What do we do?
[PUT DAN OUT OF HIS MISERY] [AMPUTATE]
MEANWHILE...
Jarrod: They left...
Steve: You saved them, Your sons gonna die now. And IT'S YOUR FAULT YOU DICK!
Jarrod: He's already dead... I was sure of it the whole time.
Steve: Your a piece of shit. and now negan's gonna Kill us BOTH!
Jarrod: Not me, and… [view original content]
Well, just remember this, (For future bite victims) My canon is that you must take off the infected limb within 40 minutes of being bitten, or it's to late.
Well, just remember this, (For future bite victims) My canon is that you must take off the infected limb within 40 minutes of being bitten, or it's to late.
GOOD NEWS EVERYONE! Since the Epic feedback from this story is of the charts, I have decided that after the 10 episodes are over, I have confirmed... SEASON 2! if you don't want it just tell me, it's fine, Besides I might get other people in season 2 anyway, but anywho, SEASON 2 CONFIRMED!
GOOD NEWS EVERYONE! Since the Epic feedback from this story is of the charts, I have decided that after the 10 episodes are over, I have con… morefirmed... SEASON 2! if you don't want it just tell me, it's fine, Besides I might get other people in season 2 anyway, but anywho, SEASON 2 CONFIRMED!
Awesome! I knew i could count on you! i thought about doing it a lot, because i like to be creative, but i suck at drawing, and my youtube channel is hard to manage, but since you guys love this story so much, i was like, "Hey, This is a good creative skill! SEASON 2 CONFIRMED" so yeah. thats why I'm gonna do it.
Awesome! I knew i could count on you! i thought about doing it a lot, because i like to be creative, but i suck at drawing, and my youtube c… morehannel is hard to manage, but since you guys love this story so much, i was like, "Hey, This is a good creative skill! SEASON 2 CONFIRMED" so yeah. thats why I'm gonna do it.
Nah, you don't wanna know, i record on windows xp,(Barely sometimes on 7) and all of my videos are unfunny, some of them lag bad, some lag mildly. but if you really want to know, i should introduce you to the channel with this video link. (Note, I'm not advertising, I'm just telling you about the channel)
Yay! He can have kids now! No unnecessary death! Yaaaaaaay! Whew, I got worried there. Celebrate for the Dan dude!
Please add in his "far" with Rebecca soon.
He has a bulky sweater on. It could be cut up and substituted for bandages. I also did read all the way. They could also try to cauterize the wound as well. Someone (cough cough Clementine cough cough) should have a lighter or candle.
Wait, Wait, Wait, Did you not read all the way?
We can amputate, Right?
Eva: Yes, But we need more bandages then what we have, … moresame with water, we can risk it, But he could die...
so it's a risk, not a sure thing, depends on what mood i'm in tonight. so far i feel pretty good. there may be hope for him yet...
Sarah: James, Please Don't do anything stupid honey!
James: I know... Samuel... Calm Down. Think About the kids, what would happen if you killed us and left Dan and Becca alone, they wouldn't stand a chance.
Samuel: Sorry James, But Unlike you, I know the only way to survive... Is to be cold-blooded...
(Samuel shoots Sarah)
James: NO!
Ryan: DAMNIT! (Ryan cuts off samuel's arm)
Ryan: Yeah, try to... Get up now.
James: I'm sorry honey... I'm sorry.
Sarah: James... Please... Live on.
(Sarah hands James the pocket watch)
James: I Love you okay?
Sarah: I know... I love you too...
James: Oh god...
(James shoots Sarah in the head)
Ryan: James what about--
James: Leave him.
Ryan: But he--
James: We're Not like him. And Dan and Bec won't be like that either.
He has a bulky sweater on. It could be cut up and substituted for bandages. I also did read all the way. They could also try to cauterize the wound as well. Someone (cough cough Clementine cough cough) should have a lighter or candle.
Comments
but please without anyone dying , please
I did, and I said that I can't write at all.
Well, I can't promise anything considering it's the walking dead, but I'll see what i can do.
Okay. I just don't want Dan to die- in this story.
or at least having others characters to interrupt the fight (and the peson who has the character can do wahtever he want to do)
You are an excellent writer , i envy you xd
We hope
Preview of whatever i´m going to do
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO , Natalie said crying as she saw the terrific scene
Please , just ...take him , please , the woman said getting weaker every moment she stays alive
Fuck , just don´t cry , could do?
Don´t touch him!
Welcome to...
You should try to use quotation marks for dialogue. Also, I couldn't tell what was happening after the "don't cry."
Thank you.
I see. Well, good luck.
Chapter 6 Episode 2
Eva: A Bite victim?! Who?!
Clementine: His Name is Dan, He was bitten on the Ankle.
Eva: Shit. What do we do?
Clementine: We're Deciding.
(They drive up to eva and everyone leaves wellington)
Trey: It's only been 20 minutes since he was bitten... We can amputate, Right?
Eva: Yes, But we need more bandages then what we have, same with water, we can risk it, But he could die...
Ryan: Damnit, Damnit, Damnit! Damnit! DAMNIT!
Dan: R-Ryan, Calm Down...
Trey: This is my fault...
Rebecca: I'm here! Dan! What happened to you?
Dan: Just what you would expect...
Trey: What do we do?
[PUT DAN OUT OF HIS MISERY] [AMPUTATE]
MEANWHILE...
Jarrod: They left...
Steve: You saved them, Your sons gonna die now. And IT'S YOUR FAULT YOU DICK!
Jarrod: He's already dead... I was sure of it the whole time.
Steve: Your a piece of shit. and now negan's gonna Kill us BOTH!
Jarrod: Not me, and not you either...
Steve: Why do you say that?!
Jarrod: Cause I'm going to find the others...
BANG!
(Jarrod shot steve in the head)
Jarrod: And your already dead...
CHAPTER END!
Haha, you know that Trey would kill Wilson that's why lol.
Chapter 6 out now!
Nah, you're always hating on Trey for no reason.
Chapter 6 out now!
[AMPUTATE AMPUTATE AMPUTATE]
Chapter 6 out now!
Damn, you really like dan, Don't you?
Put Dan out of his misery, 20 minutes is too late. I think Trey should do it since he thinks it's his fault.
Well, just remember this, (For future bite victims) My canon is that you must take off the infected limb within 40 minutes of being bitten, or it's to late.
NO! Please amputate! Dan is only 12 and has time. Please!
Yes! He still needs to have a kid!
Okay, I will see what everyone else thinks though.
Ok
Can you change your answer, then?
Oh ok, but you did a great job at writing that other part.
GOOD NEWS EVERYONE! Since the Epic feedback from this story is of the charts, I have decided that after the 10 episodes are over, I have confirmed... SEASON 2! if you don't want it just tell me, it's fine, Besides I might get other people in season 2 anyway, but anywho, SEASON 2 CONFIRMED!
HELL. YEAH. MAN.
Sure, for now.
Awesome! I knew i could count on you! i thought about doing it a lot, because i like to be creative, but i suck at drawing, and my youtube channel is hard to manage, but since you guys love this story so much, i was like, "Hey, This is a good creative skill! SEASON 2 CONFIRMED" so yeah. thats why I'm gonna do it.
Thank you and what's your YouTube channel name?
Nah, you don't wanna know, i record on windows xp,(Barely sometimes on 7) and all of my videos are unfunny, some of them lag bad, some lag mildly. but if you really want to know, i should introduce you to the channel with this video link. (Note, I'm not advertising, I'm just telling you about the channel)
VOTING CLOSED
Dan's Leg will be cut off
Yay! He can have kids now! No unnecessary death! Yaaaaaaay! Whew, I got worried there. Celebrate for the Dan dude!
Please add in his "far" with Rebecca soon.
Wait, Wait, Wait, Did you not read all the way?
so it's a risk, not a sure thing, depends on what mood i'm in tonight. so far i feel pretty good. there may be hope for him yet...
He has a bulky sweater on. It could be cut up and substituted for bandages. I also did read all the way. They could also try to cauterize the wound as well. Someone (cough cough Clementine cough cough) should have a lighter or candle.
Chapter 7 Episode 2
2 Years Earlier...
Ryan: DAMNIT SAMUEL! PUT DOWN THE GUN!
Sarah: James, Please Don't do anything stupid honey!
James: I know... Samuel... Calm Down. Think About the kids, what would happen if you killed us and left Dan and Becca alone, they wouldn't stand a chance.
Samuel: Sorry James, But Unlike you, I know the only way to survive... Is to be cold-blooded...
(Samuel shoots Sarah)
James: NO!
Ryan: DAMNIT! (Ryan cuts off samuel's arm)
Ryan: Yeah, try to... Get up now.
James: I'm sorry honey... I'm sorry.
Sarah: James... Please... Live on.
(Sarah hands James the pocket watch)
James: I Love you okay?
Sarah: I know... I love you too...
James: Oh god...
(James shoots Sarah in the head)
Ryan: James what about--
James: Leave him.
Ryan: But he--
James: We're Not like him. And Dan and Bec won't be like that either.
Ryan: Okay...
PRESENT DAY.
[CUT DAN'S LEG OFF]
Trey: Okay, is he asleep yet?
Ryan: Yeah...
Trey: Okay buddy... I'm sorry...
(Dan's Leg is cut off)
2 DAYS LATER...
Find out what happens...
NEXT CHAPTER!
Chapter end...
Hmm, well, chapter 7 is out already by the way...