Chapter 7 Episode 2
2 Years Earlier...
Ryan: DAMNIT SAMUEL! PUT DOWN THE GUN!
Sarah: James, Please Don't do anything stupid honey!
… more
James: I know... Samuel... Calm Down. Think About the kids, what would happen if you killed us and left Dan and Becca alone, they wouldn't stand a chance.
Samuel: Sorry James, But Unlike you, I know the only way to survive... Is to be cold-blooded...
(Samuel shoots Sarah)
James: NO!
Ryan: DAMNIT! (Ryan cuts off samuel's arm)
Ryan: Yeah, try to... Get up now.
James: I'm sorry honey... I'm sorry.
Sarah: James... Please... Live on.
(Sarah hands James the pocket watch)
James: I Love you okay?
Sarah: I know... I love you too...
James: Oh god...
(James shoots Sarah in the head)
Ryan: James what about--
James: Leave him.
Ryan: But he--
James: We're Not like him. And Dan and Bec won't be like that either.
Ryan: Okay...
PRESENT DAY.
[CUT DAN'S LEG OFF]
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Who here would be interested in reading a prelude of James', Dan's, Rebecca's, and Ryan's story before they met the group?
This would be in a different thread, by the way.
Not even close to writing yet, so will take some time. For that last chapter, Samuel comes back and screws the group over, losing Ryan (until now), and killing some other group members.
Could you also edit out the cutting Samuel's arm off? The way I wrote it in 7 1/2 was Sam doing it himself after Ryan gets away and pushes him into a walker. If you'd oblige, can you have Ryan incapacitate Sam somehow? It's all up to you, though.
Not even close to writing yet, so will take some time. For that last chapter, Samuel comes back and screws the group over, losing Ryan (unti… morel now), and killing some other group members.
Could you also edit out the cutting Samuel's arm off? The way I wrote it in 7 1/2 was Sam doing it himself after Ryan gets away and pushes him into a walker. If you'd oblige, can you have Ryan incapacitate Sam somehow? It's all up to you, though.
Chapter 6 Episode 2
Eva: A Bite victim?! Who?!
Clementine: His Name is Dan, He was bitten on the Ankle.
Eva: Shit. What do we do?
… more Clementine: We're Deciding.
(They drive up to eva and everyone leaves wellington)
Trey: It's only been 20 minutes since he was bitten... We can amputate, Right?
Eva: Yes, But we need more bandages then what we have, same with water, we can risk it, But he could die...
Ryan: Damnit, Damnit, Damnit! Damnit! DAMNIT!
Dan: R-Ryan, Calm Down...
Trey: This is my fault...
Rebecca: I'm here! Dan! What happened to you?
Dan: Just what you would expect...
Trey: What do we do?
[PUT DAN OUT OF HIS MISERY] [AMPUTATE]
MEANWHILE...
Jarrod: They left...
Steve: You saved them, Your sons gonna die now. And IT'S YOUR FAULT YOU DICK!
Jarrod: He's already dead... I was sure of it the whole time.
Steve: Your a piece of shit. and now negan's gonna Kill us BOTH!
Jarrod: Not me, and… [view original content]
Chapter 6 Episode 2
Eva: A Bite victim?! Who?!
Clementine: His Name is Dan, He was bitten on the Ankle.
Eva: Shit. What do we do?
… more Clementine: We're Deciding.
(They drive up to eva and everyone leaves wellington)
Trey: It's only been 20 minutes since he was bitten... We can amputate, Right?
Eva: Yes, But we need more bandages then what we have, same with water, we can risk it, But he could die...
Ryan: Damnit, Damnit, Damnit! Damnit! DAMNIT!
Dan: R-Ryan, Calm Down...
Trey: This is my fault...
Rebecca: I'm here! Dan! What happened to you?
Dan: Just what you would expect...
Trey: What do we do?
[PUT DAN OUT OF HIS MISERY] [AMPUTATE]
MEANWHILE...
Jarrod: They left...
Steve: You saved them, Your sons gonna die now. And IT'S YOUR FAULT YOU DICK!
Jarrod: He's already dead... I was sure of it the whole time.
Steve: Your a piece of shit. and now negan's gonna Kill us BOTH!
Jarrod: Not me, and… [view original content]
GOOD NEWS EVERYONE! Since the Epic feedback from this story is of the charts, I have decided that after the 10 episodes are over, I have con… morefirmed... SEASON 2! if you don't want it just tell me, it's fine, Besides I might get other people in season 2 anyway, but anywho, SEASON 2 CONFIRMED!
Chapter 8 Episode 2
2 Days Later...
Dan: Ugh... My head...
Rebecca: Hey...
Dan: Hi, I Guess you guys cut it off didn't you?
R… moreebecca: Yeah, It'll Be a while before we can get you a fake leg.
Dan: Thank you Becca. Wheres Everyone else?
Rebecca: Thinking of a plan outside, We found a nice setup at a gas station. it should be good for a while...
(Dan grabs rebecca and hugs her)
Dan: Please, Don't Leave me, Your all i have left.
Rebecca: I Would never leave you. I Care about you Dan.
Dan: Thank you...
MEANWHILE...
(Jake finally wakes up)
Jake: GUH! pant
Melisa: JAKE!
(Melisa hugs jake)
Jake: AH! Shit... My arm.
Melisa: Oh! Sorry!
Jake: Stop saying sorry... It doesn't matter, I'll always forgive you anyway...
(Melisa eyes widen)
Melisa: But no one ever forgives me for what i do...
Jake: Then I'm not no one.
(Melisa wraps her arms around jake and kisses him)
Trey: Hey Melisa, I … [view original content]
Chapter 8 Episode 2
2 Days Later...
Dan: Ugh... My head...
Rebecca: Hey...
Dan: Hi, I Guess you guys cut it off didn't you?
R… moreebecca: Yeah, It'll Be a while before we can get you a fake leg.
Dan: Thank you Becca. Wheres Everyone else?
Rebecca: Thinking of a plan outside, We found a nice setup at a gas station. it should be good for a while...
(Dan grabs rebecca and hugs her)
Dan: Please, Don't Leave me, Your all i have left.
Rebecca: I Would never leave you. I Care about you Dan.
Dan: Thank you...
MEANWHILE...
(Jake finally wakes up)
Jake: GUH! pant
Melisa: JAKE!
(Melisa hugs jake)
Jake: AH! Shit... My arm.
Melisa: Oh! Sorry!
Jake: Stop saying sorry... It doesn't matter, I'll always forgive you anyway...
(Melisa eyes widen)
Melisa: But no one ever forgives me for what i do...
Jake: Then I'm not no one.
(Melisa wraps her arms around jake and kisses him)
Trey: Hey Melisa, I … [view original content]
Who here would be interested in reading a prelude of James', Dan's, Rebecca's, and Ryan's story before they met the group?
This would be in a different thread, by the way.
It was just another day of living. Getting up , eating , working , eating more , working more , wasting time , sleeping and then all over again. Right now , Natalie was technically wasting time , because she was driving home to be with her son Jaylen. The bastard of the father left them when Jaylen got born. Jaylen is with a babysitter , Monica. She worked when Natalie needed someone to stay with Jay or when she needed money. Natalie was very tired of working and she was about to sleep when she receives a call
Natalie-Who is it?
???-It´s me Jacob.
Jacob , he was Natalie´s brother. A dickhead sometimes and the most helpful in others. Their relationship was bad in the moment because Natalie discovered him cheating his wife , Sally , with a co-worker of him and then Natalie told Sally about it. Sally and Jacob divorced and the co-worker left Jacob for a british man.
Natalie- What do you want?
Jacob- Nothing , just that you need to get out of the city NOW!. Jacob said in an altered tone
Natalie-Why? What´s happening?
Jacob- The dead are returning to life and they are eating people!!!. Jacov was more altered now
Natalie. Ha , very funny. Natalie said in a sarcastic tone. She didn´t believe him , she has no reason to did it
Jacob- I´m telling you the truth! I was in the funeral of the father of Ethan , which you didn´t go , and the corspe of him was alive and it eat Ethan!!
Natalie- Bla , bla , bla
Jacob- Believ AARRGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Jacob yelled and then the call ended
Natalie- That was very weird. Natalie told to herself
Natalie drived one kilometer more and she got home , but she didn´t knew what was happening there................
Natalie
It was just another day of living. Getting up , eating , working , eating more , working more , wasting time , sleeping and then … moreall over again. Right now , Natalie was technically wasting time , because she was driving home to be with her son Jaylen. The bastard of the father left them when Jaylen got born. Jaylen is with a babysitter , Monica. She worked when Natalie needed someone to stay with Jay or when she needed money. Natalie was very tired of working and she was about to sleep when she receives a call
Natalie-Who is it?
???-It´s me Jacob.
Jacob , he was Natalie´s brother. A dickhead sometimes and the most helpful in others. Their relationship was bad in the moment because Natalie discovered him cheating his wife , Sally , with a co-worker of him and then Natalie told Sally about it. Sally and Jacob divorced and the co-worker left Jacob for a british man.
Natalie- What do you want?
Jacob- Nothing , just that … [view original content]
I was gonna write longer but my computer gave me a notification that it was about to reset, so i had to finish it. Don't worry I'll show wilson soon. and everyone in the group is at the gas station they found, so nobody's dead.
I was gonna write longer but my computer gave me a notification that it was about to reset, so i had to finish it. Don't worry I'll show wilson soon. and everyone in the group is at the gas station they found, so nobody's dead.
I have an idea to make our timelines intertwined AND correct. Ten years in this story have passed since the start of the ZA, but that's not how everyone saw it.....
I will post a link to a different discussion for the continuation.
;_; so, your only here for advertising? you don't like my stories?
XD, Jk, i know what you mean. I was only saying that you should post 1 advertisment, and anyone who sees the first post, will see if you post another.
Hey, My sister says i bribed you all, and/or you guys are my fake accounts, could you send a comment showing her she's wrong? (Also telling her how much you like my story would help XD)
Hey, My sister says i bribed you all, and/or you guys are my fake accounts, could you send a comment showing her she's wrong? (Also telling her how much you like my story would help XD)
Comments
Is Sarah supposed to be the Girlfriend? I'd so, I had originally wrote her as Sally, but Sarah is better.
Yep, Sorry i misread sarah. also i'm going to private message you something.
Who here would be interested in reading a prelude of James', Dan's, Rebecca's, and Ryan's story before they met the group?
This would be in a different thread, by the way.
No, I didn't write that in 7 1/2, it was something I wrote that went unshared.
It'd be pretty cool, as long as you advertise the story so more people can join XD
Not even close to writing yet, so will take some time. For that last chapter, Samuel comes back and screws the group over, losing Ryan (until now), and killing some other group members.
Could you also edit out the cutting Samuel's arm off? The way I wrote it in 7 1/2 was Sam doing it himself after Ryan gets away and pushes him into a walker. If you'd oblige, can you have Ryan incapacitate Sam somehow? It's all up to you, though.
Sorry man, I like the story i wrote so far, but i will add in that he knocked him out.
I respect that. I could edit 7 1/2 to fit this one. In fact, that's what I'm doing next.
Chapter 8 Episode 2
2 Days Later...
Dan: Ugh... My head...
Rebecca: Hey...
Dan: Hi, I Guess you guys cut it off didn't you?
Rebecca: Yeah, It'll Be a while before we can get you a fake leg.
Dan: Thank you Becca. Wheres Everyone else?
Rebecca: Thinking of a plan outside, We found a nice setup at a gas station. it should be good for a while...
(Dan grabs rebecca and hugs her)
Dan: Please, Don't Leave me, Your all i have left.
Rebecca: I Would never leave you. I Care about you Dan.
Dan: Thank you...
MEANWHILE...
(Jake finally wakes up)
Jake: GUH! pant
Melisa: JAKE!
(Melisa hugs jake)
Jake: AH! Shit... My arm.
Melisa: Oh! Sorry!
Jake: Stop saying sorry... It doesn't matter, I'll always forgive you anyway...
(Melisa eyes widen)
Melisa: But no one ever forgives me for what i do...
Jake: Then I'm not no one.
(Melisa wraps her arms around jake and kisses him)
Trey: Hey Melisa, I brought you some wat--
(Trey sees them kissing)
Trey: Well, I'm going to leave... and pretend i didn't see that.
MEANWHILE...
Felix: Alright laura, lets get you to bed... AGH! Shit!
David: Hey, You Okay?
Felix: Yeah, I've just got some pain still.
David: Okay
CHAPTER END!
Amputate, let's not make anyone sad.
[AMPUTATE]
YEAH
Where´s Wilson? xd
Great Part!!
Can be Wilson enter the group of James before meeting the other group?
He can, but he would enter at the worst moment for them. Not telling anything..... Yet.
Then what's the point of this story, you want it to be happy all the time? That would be boring.
Clementine Voice
Yes
okay , thanks
Natalie
It was just another day of living. Getting up , eating , working , eating more , working more , wasting time , sleeping and then all over again. Right now , Natalie was technically wasting time , because she was driving home to be with her son Jaylen. The bastard of the father left them when Jaylen got born. Jaylen is with a babysitter , Monica. She worked when Natalie needed someone to stay with Jay or when she needed money. Natalie was very tired of working and she was about to sleep when she receives a call
Natalie-Who is it?
???-It´s me Jacob.
Jacob , he was Natalie´s brother. A dickhead sometimes and the most helpful in others. Their relationship was bad in the moment because Natalie discovered him cheating his wife , Sally , with a co-worker of him and then Natalie told Sally about it. Sally and Jacob divorced and the co-worker left Jacob for a british man.
Natalie- What do you want?
Jacob- Nothing , just that you need to get out of the city NOW!. Jacob said in an altered tone
Natalie-Why? What´s happening?
Jacob- The dead are returning to life and they are eating people!!!. Jacov was more altered now
Natalie. Ha , very funny. Natalie said in a sarcastic tone. She didn´t believe him , she has no reason to did it
Jacob- I´m telling you the truth! I was in the funeral of the father of Ethan , which you didn´t go , and the corspe of him was alive and it eat Ethan!!
Natalie- Bla , bla , bla
Jacob- Believ AARRGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Jacob yelled and then the call ended
Natalie- That was very weird. Natalie told to herself
Natalie drived one kilometer more and she got home , but she didn´t knew what was happening there................
PD: It was good or bad wrote , please tell me
well, it's gotta be happy sometimes.
The Story's Awesome! But um, the spelling is kinda off, but i understood it! I approve!
I was gonna write longer but my computer gave me a notification that it was about to reset, so i had to finish it. Don't worry I'll show wilson soon. and everyone in the group is at the gas station they found, so nobody's dead.
Thanks!
They left Wellington?
Yeah.... It was attacked, there were walkers, they got on the bus, did you see the rest of the chapters yet?
XD sorry
No problem, its okay.
Thank you , i will try tro make it better
I have an idea to make our timelines intertwined AND correct. Ten years in this story have passed since the start of the ZA, but that's not how everyone saw it.....
I will post a link to a different discussion for the continuation.
Chapter 9 Episode 2
Jarrod: Okay, well, where the hell did they go?
Wilson: Hey! I'm scouting out for more people from wellington! Who are you?!
Jarrod: My name is Jarrod.
Wilson: Oh, Your the guy who saved Melisa and Jake!
Jarrod: Yeah...
Wilson: Come on, We set up camp down the road, Your One of us now.
Jarrod: Okay...
MEANWHILE...
(Ryan Walks into Dan's Tent)
Ryan: Hey Dan, Your like a pirate now huh?
Dan: Heh, Not Exactly.
Ryan: Yep...
Dan: Ugh, Hmph... Here.
(Dan Hands Ryan the Pocketwatch)
Ryan: This is...
Dan: James' Pocketwatch. The one that Sarah gave him.
Ryan: Dan, I abandoned you guys...
Dan: We were separated. Your still like my brother.
Ryan: Thanks...
MEANWHILE...
Wilson: I'm back with a survivor.
Trey: Good.
(Wilson pushes Trey)
Trey: Hey, what was that for?
Wilson: Fun, I like doing it.
Trey: Ha. Very Funny...
Wilson: Well, What now?
Clementine: We Make a Plan...
CHAPTER END!
This is for James' continued story:
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/86412/the-walking-dead-ballad-of-the-fallen-unconnected-story?new=1
Story Link at Bottom.
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/86412/the-walking-dead-ballad-of-the-fallen-unconnected-story?new=1
NEW STORY ABOUT JAMES' PAST BEFORE THIS STORY. LINK BELOW IF YOU'RE INTERESTED.
James' Past
Please stop self advertising.... XD besides, if they saw these links, chances are they will just go there to see if there is a different part.
Hey! The only reason I'm at this thread Is because of YOUR self advertising. It's fine, though.
;_; so, your only here for advertising? you don't like my stories?
XD, Jk, i know what you mean. I was only saying that you should post 1 advertisment, and anyone who sees the first post, will see if you post another.
I do like them. Thanks for the advice.
Hey, My sister says i bribed you all, and/or you guys are my fake accounts, could you send a comment showing her she's wrong? (Also telling her how much you like my story would help XD)
Really? I'm not fake, his sister. We weren't bribed; the story is awesome.