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  • edited November 2014

    Name: Agrippina Wound

    Age: 14

    Job: Student

    Personality: Calm , Friendly , Dumb , Caring

    Appearance: red long heddle hair , blue eyes , 3,9 feet tall ,caucasian

    Are you willing to work with others or on your own? Both :p

    Are you willing for your character to go through gruesome events? Vomiting XD

    PD: She secretaly loves Valerian and she is the niece of James (Her fathers were killed by him[ordered])

  • Thanks for the character!

    Name: Anna Marie Fulton. Or just Marie is fine. Age: 34 years old. Job: Uh... Caretaker? Of the elderly...? Or children? Personalit

  • Awesome

    [Shoot Sniper]

    [Shoot the figure]

    Felix Davis [Give him his gun back] I handed him his gun back. I saw as he was just standing there, not knowing what to say. Felix:

  • Thanks again for your character. This will play out interestingly with what is going on right now with Valerian.

    supersagig posted: »

    Name: Agrippina Wound Age: 14 Job: Student Personality: Calm , Friendly , Dumb , Caring Appearance: red long heddle hair , blue

  • Lol. Its fine. That just makes it more interesting.

    supersagig posted: »

    I put that she was James´s cousin but i meant niece xd

  • I put that she was James´s cousin but i meant niece xd

    Thanks again for your character. This will play out interestingly with what is going on right now with Valerian.

  • Shoot james- cause why not.

    Shoot the figure.

    Felix Davis [Give him his gun back] I handed him his gun back. I saw as he was just standing there, not knowing what to say. Felix:

  • Valerian will attempt to shoot James(I flipped a coin) and Conrad will shoot the figure.

    Sorry for the delay-been busy. Next part should be out soon.

    Felix Davis [Give him his gun back] I handed him his gun back. I saw as he was just standing there, not knowing what to say. Felix:

  • edited November 2014

    Valerian Storm

    [Shoot James]

    I aim my sights at James and wait there for a while, I see that Arty has not taken his shot yet.

    Arty: Dude, come on, who are you going to shoot?

    Valerian: Its time to end this shit, we don’t need to be child soldiers, I can take out James right now!

    Arty: You cant be seri-
    I look back at Arty as he has a whole in his head and his body falls down. I stick my head up once more and see that the sniper guy saw that there was two people behind the tank and got an early shot at Arty, but he was aiming for me next. I knew I had to be quick. I aimlessly fired what was left of my round at the tank that James and Tyler was near.

    James Macolm

    I look over at the great view I have, bullets flying everywhere and bodies trembling on the ground. Not many people were left yet. But one thing that caught my eyes was a girl who got stabbed in the chest.

    ???: Felicia no!

    Thats all I could hear in the distance from the child soldiers, that and my army who was laughing at the death of this poor girl. bratatatat. Bullets fly over killing 2 of my guards and injuring one. I didnt really care that someone was trying to shoot me, maybe I should step into the playing field. Ring! Ring! Ring!

    James: STOP! The games are now over! Wow look at all this blood. Lets see who is let. From the blue team: Kyle, Jones, Agrippina and Joshua. And on the red team. Irma and Martin. Well looks like the Blue team will become my new guards, training will start tomorrow after my coffee break Now as for the red team. You will die! I aim my pistol right at the center of Martins head,* I pull the trigger and push his body down on the ground. Next! I hold my pistol at Valerians head.* You bastard, you were the one who tried to kill me. Don’t lie!

    Valerian: Yes...I tried...

    I lower my gun.

    James: I admire that. I will let you live a little bit longer don’t forget tomorrow after my coffee break. Gear up soldiers!

    Agrippina Wound

    I run up to Valerian and give him a big hug.

    Agrippina: I am so glad you are alive!

    Valerian: You heard what he said, gear up!

    Agrippina: I thought you nothing like him. How can you stand there and act like all this is ok.

    Valerian: Its not okay, but this is life or death. You either listen and wait for the right moment to finally leave this place or you give up and be killed. Which one is it going to be for you?

    Agrippina: I don’t want to die, but I don’t want to be a soldier either.But he is my uncle, I cant disrespect him.

    Valerian: He might understand. Hopefully. Why don’t you go talk to him.

    [Come with me to tell him]

    [Go talk to him]

    [ I changed my mind, I still want to be a soldier]

    Conrad

    [Shoot the figure]

    I didnt waste any time I fired a shot at his shoulder and brought the fallen officer to his feet.

    Conrad: Who the fuck are you and why are you harassing an officer?

    ???: This is life or death. I have kids, Im trying to protect them and my self, and you and your phony ass officers are getting in my way.

    Conrad: Well trying to go around and keep people as hostages isnt going to help buddy.* I punch him in the face as he tries to get up. *You didnt tell me your name yet.

    Abelard Storm

    Abelard: My name is Abelard, and touch me one more time and both you and your butt buddy here will be lying in each others blood.

    I raise my gun at the officer and quickly fire a few bullets into him and I reach for Conrads gun.

    Conrad: Come on buddy, I don’t mean any harm. Now, I will not let you get away with this. But you can become an officer and replace this guy on the ground here, or you can run right now and James will know what you did?

    [ Give me a damn uniform! Im in.]

    [Leave the alley way]

  • Valerian´s dead u.u [go talk to him] [give me a damn uniform! Im in]

    Valerian Storm [Shoot James] I aim my sights at James and wait there for a while, I see that Arty has not taken his shot yet. Arty:

  • Hes still alive. i accidently wrote irmas name after that part. But I fixed it. James dropped his gun and spared him.

    supersagig posted: »

    Valerian´s dead u.u [go talk to him] [give me a damn uniform! Im in]

  • edited November 2014

    [I changed my mind, I still want to be a soldier] James won't take kindly to disrespect.

    [Give me a damn uniform! Im in.] Hm... Probably not the best idea, but why not.

    Valerian Storm [Shoot James] I aim my sights at James and wait there for a while, I see that Arty has not taken his shot yet. Arty:

  • I had no expectations for this story to last long. It was my first interactive story and just wanted to try it out. With that being said, expect the story to start nearing towards the end.

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