And here's the last hope you like him 2 ( yes i know thats not funny):
Joseph Blake
Age 24
Brown coat with black shirt (occasionally blue), Sunglasses (occationally), Black hair, clean shaven, average heigh, average weight ( but muscular)
Goverment Agent /Ally
Personallity: serious, friendly ( with those he knows), heroic, professional
Joseph was just 16 when both his parents we massacared by Count Hypnos. He has vowed to capture all of the organisations criminals and bring them to limbo ( wich to him is a fate worse than any death). He has had a particular obssesion with capturing Hypnos (even going as far as to pick a cell for him apart from all other inmates. He is also curious as to why his parents were targets as they were both scientists not very much involved in organization missions execept a poison reserchers. He will as well attept to capture anyone he thinks deserving of "Limbo" although he occasionally does kill non targeted villains for their crimes.
Well here's the first of 2 ( still finishing the other one) hope you like him...
Count Hypnos
Alias: Count Aldmerion Uliquei Gregor
… more Age : 28-32 Birth date unclear
Apperance: Dark Blond Hair, Average heigh, Small beard, Dark Blue eyes (wich glow bright in the dark), average weight, Wears a completelly black jacket ( with the exeception of red streaks in some places meant to symbolyze blood) which has several inside pockets filled with injections of his serum.
Alliance: Villain
Personality: Count Hypnos usually stays calm in situations even psycoticly joking however if pushed to far he will go compleatly insane even to a point of being compleatly irracional.
"Count Hypnos" is the second most wanted man by a secret organization ( you chose the name i cant come up with anything) for various crimes including Murder, Hacking into goverment computers and copying information, Terrorism and his most notable brainwashing several ci… [view original content]
And here's the last hope you like him 2 ( yes i know thats not funny):
Joseph Blake
Age 24
Brown coat with black shirt (occasional… morely blue), Sunglasses (occationally), Black hair, clean shaven, average heigh, average weight ( but muscular)
Goverment Agent /Ally
Personallity: serious, friendly ( with those he knows), heroic, professional
Joseph was just 16 when both his parents we massacared by Count Hypnos. He has vowed to capture all of the organisations criminals and bring them to limbo ( wich to him is a fate worse than any death). He has had a particular obssesion with capturing Hypnos (even going as far as to pick a cell for him apart from all other inmates. He is also curious as to why his parents were targets as they were both scientists not very much involved in organization missions execept a poison reserchers. He will as well attept to capture anyone he thinks deserving of "Limbo" although he occasionally does kill non targeted villains for their crimes.
Name: Rambo
Age: 35
Appearance: Likes exactly like Rambo
Alliance: Villain
Personality: Dark, sinister, killer, menace, determined, precise and deadly
Any other info: Screams every time he shoots,
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 1
I got a call from an old friend to meet up at a local Cafe.......
Peter: It's been a long time Jordan Wilkerson...
Jordan Wilkerson: Too Long....
Peter: So what did you want to talk about? And what happened to your eye!?
Jordan Wilkerson: Ever here about a douche bag called Sparker?
Peter: Dammit Jordan, I said I was done with this shit a long time ago.......
Jordan Wilkerson: Well let's just say he's a real asshole, Hopeless is dead, Arin is dead, and he did this to my eye......
Peter: Damn, What about the others?
Jordan Wilkerson: Jack is also dead, and Elsa, Jacob and a few newbies have been taken hostage by him, I'm trying to get as much help as I can.
Peter: Sorry, I can't help ya.
Jordan Wilkerson: It's okay, Nice to see you.
Jordan walks away
I was about to get up and leave but my phone rang so I decided to sit down and answer it
Male Voice: Hello.
Peter: Hi, Who is this?
Male Voice: You don't need to know my name Peter, but I know you.
Peter: What's this about?
Male Voice: I don't know if you were the top agent once but what I do know is.........
Peter: Get to the point, You trying to trace my signal? I'll give you 5 seconds to tell me why I should stay on.....
Male Voice: Shannon Clare
Peter: What about her?
Male Voice: Don't give me that shit She's dead, And we have leads that it was you.
Peter: Don't flatter yourself, I've been away from the states for 5 years ,and if you're some spook trying to get me back in then screw you. I talked to her yesterday
Male Voice: She was found dead this morning and we found your plane ticket and we have you on security cameras
Peter: That ain't shit
Male Voice: I'm good at telling when people are lying and you're full of it. You have 6 hours to go to the embassy and explain yourself.
Peter: And if I don't
Male Voice: Then the CIA, Navy Seals and every over-seas operative will be on your ass. 6 Hours or Else....... Hangs Up
Peter: Dammit, Something's wrong
Go to the Embassy OR Think about where to go to figure out what's happened
Tell me what you guys think! Sorry if this seems rushed to you.
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 1
I got a call from an old friend to meet up at a local Cafe.......
Peter: It's… more been a long time Jordan Wilkerson...
Jordan Wilkerson: Too Long....
Peter: So what did you want to talk about? And what happened to your eye!?
Jordan Wilkerson: Ever here about a douche bag called Sparker?
Peter: Dammit Jordan, I said I was done with this shit a long time ago.......
Jordan Wilkerson: Well let's just say he's a real asshole, Hopeless is dead, Arin is dead, and he did this to my eye......
Peter: Damn, What about the others?
Jordan Wilkerson: Jack is also dead, and Elsa, Jacob and a few newbies have been taken hostage by him, I'm trying to get as much help as I can.
Peter: Sorry, I can't help ya.
Jordan Wilkerson: It's okay, Nice to see you.
Jordan walks away
I was about to get up and leave but my phone rang so I decided to sit down and answer it
Male Voi… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 1
I got a call from an old friend to meet up at a local Cafe.......
Peter: It's… more been a long time Jordan Wilkerson...
Jordan Wilkerson: Too Long....
Peter: So what did you want to talk about? And what happened to your eye!?
Jordan Wilkerson: Ever here about a douche bag called Sparker?
Peter: Dammit Jordan, I said I was done with this shit a long time ago.......
Jordan Wilkerson: Well let's just say he's a real asshole, Hopeless is dead, Arin is dead, and he did this to my eye......
Peter: Damn, What about the others?
Jordan Wilkerson: Jack is also dead, and Elsa, Jacob and a few newbies have been taken hostage by him, I'm trying to get as much help as I can.
Peter: Sorry, I can't help ya.
Jordan Wilkerson: It's okay, Nice to see you.
Jordan walks away
I was about to get up and leave but my phone rang so I decided to sit down and answer it
Male Voi… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 1
I got a call from an old friend to meet up at a local Cafe.......
Peter: It's… more been a long time Jordan Wilkerson...
Jordan Wilkerson: Too Long....
Peter: So what did you want to talk about? And what happened to your eye!?
Jordan Wilkerson: Ever here about a douche bag called Sparker?
Peter: Dammit Jordan, I said I was done with this shit a long time ago.......
Jordan Wilkerson: Well let's just say he's a real asshole, Hopeless is dead, Arin is dead, and he did this to my eye......
Peter: Damn, What about the others?
Jordan Wilkerson: Jack is also dead, and Elsa, Jacob and a few newbies have been taken hostage by him, I'm trying to get as much help as I can.
Peter: Sorry, I can't help ya.
Jordan Wilkerson: It's okay, Nice to see you.
Jordan walks away
I was about to get up and leave but my phone rang so I decided to sit down and answer it
Male Voi… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 1
I got a call from an old friend to meet up at a local Cafe.......
Peter: It's… more been a long time Jordan Wilkerson...
Jordan Wilkerson: Too Long....
Peter: So what did you want to talk about? And what happened to your eye!?
Jordan Wilkerson: Ever here about a douche bag called Sparker?
Peter: Dammit Jordan, I said I was done with this shit a long time ago.......
Jordan Wilkerson: Well let's just say he's a real asshole, Hopeless is dead, Arin is dead, and he did this to my eye......
Peter: Damn, What about the others?
Jordan Wilkerson: Jack is also dead, and Elsa, Jacob and a few newbies have been taken hostage by him, I'm trying to get as much help as I can.
Peter: Sorry, I can't help ya.
Jordan Wilkerson: It's okay, Nice to see you.
Jordan walks away
I was about to get up and leave but my phone rang so I decided to sit down and answer it
Male Voi… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 1
I got a call from an old friend to meet up at a local Cafe.......
Peter: It's… more been a long time Jordan Wilkerson...
Jordan Wilkerson: Too Long....
Peter: So what did you want to talk about? And what happened to your eye!?
Jordan Wilkerson: Ever here about a douche bag called Sparker?
Peter: Dammit Jordan, I said I was done with this shit a long time ago.......
Jordan Wilkerson: Well let's just say he's a real asshole, Hopeless is dead, Arin is dead, and he did this to my eye......
Peter: Damn, What about the others?
Jordan Wilkerson: Jack is also dead, and Elsa, Jacob and a few newbies have been taken hostage by him, I'm trying to get as much help as I can.
Peter: Sorry, I can't help ya.
Jordan Wilkerson: It's okay, Nice to see you.
Jordan walks away
I was about to get up and leave but my phone rang so I decided to sit down and answer it
Male Voi… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 1
I got a call from an old friend to meet up at a local Cafe.......
Peter: It's… more been a long time Jordan Wilkerson...
Jordan Wilkerson: Too Long....
Peter: So what did you want to talk about? And what happened to your eye!?
Jordan Wilkerson: Ever here about a douche bag called Sparker?
Peter: Dammit Jordan, I said I was done with this shit a long time ago.......
Jordan Wilkerson: Well let's just say he's a real asshole, Hopeless is dead, Arin is dead, and he did this to my eye......
Peter: Damn, What about the others?
Jordan Wilkerson: Jack is also dead, and Elsa, Jacob and a few newbies have been taken hostage by him, I'm trying to get as much help as I can.
Peter: Sorry, I can't help ya.
Jordan Wilkerson: It's okay, Nice to see you.
Jordan walks away
I was about to get up and leave but my phone rang so I decided to sit down and answer it
Male Voi… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 1
I got a call from an old friend to meet up at a local Cafe.......
Peter: It's… more been a long time Jordan Wilkerson...
Jordan Wilkerson: Too Long....
Peter: So what did you want to talk about? And what happened to your eye!?
Jordan Wilkerson: Ever here about a douche bag called Sparker?
Peter: Dammit Jordan, I said I was done with this shit a long time ago.......
Jordan Wilkerson: Well let's just say he's a real asshole, Hopeless is dead, Arin is dead, and he did this to my eye......
Peter: Damn, What about the others?
Jordan Wilkerson: Jack is also dead, and Elsa, Jacob and a few newbies have been taken hostage by him, I'm trying to get as much help as I can.
Peter: Sorry, I can't help ya.
Jordan Wilkerson: It's okay, Nice to see you.
Jordan walks away
I was about to get up and leave but my phone rang so I decided to sit down and answer it
Male Voi… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 2
I got a call from some Agency Spook and something's wrong, They're accusing me of the murder of a former friend and I decided to go to the Embassy and sort this out......
Peter walked into the Embassy doors and receives a phone call
Peter: I'm here.
Male Voice: Didn't think you would show......
Peter: Who are you?
Male Voice: Well, Since you've been so cooperative, My Name is Phil Cunningham.
Peter: Okay Phil, What do you want?
Phil Cunningham: Go to the counter and say your name, Then we'll meet.
Peter slowly walks up to the counter and analyzes everything around him..... Something's off
Peter: Hi I'm Peterson Hunt, I was told that there's some issue that needs to be sorted out.
Secretary: Hello Mr. Hunt , These two men will take you to your "debriefing"
Peter: Hey Big Guy, You supposed to be the Terminator or something?
Guard: Walk.
Peter walks down the hall and up a few floors with the two guards into a room labeled Interrogation
Phil Cunningham: Welcome Mr.Hunt, Are you aware of the current situation?
Peter: Only from what you told me, But I haven't been in the states for years so there's no way I could have done anything.
Phil Cunningham: Not what these photos say Lays down folder with photos of Peter at airport You were in the country for 3 days and at the time of the murder
Peter: Me and Shannon were friends, Why would I kill her? And those photos aren't right.
Phil Cunningham: I don't fucking care, You could have fallen out with her, and the evidence doesn't lie.
Peter: But it can be tampered.
Phil Cunningham: I am the best at what I do, There's no way in hell shit like this would be "tampered with", Save that shit for a newbie, I rose to the top of the agency right when you left. You are going in the deepest darkest hole I can find... See you in 48 hours in D.C ,Hunt.....
Peter: You know, I'm not hand cuffed yet and I'm walking out of here, No matter what you say.
Phil Cunningham: That's what these guys are for Opens Door Have Fun.
There was 7 of them all pointing automatics at me..... I could choose to give up peacefully or I could try and fight my way out but that's risky.....
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 2
I got a call from some Agency Spook and something's wrong, They're accusing me o… moref the murder of a former friend and I decided to go to the Embassy and sort this out......
Peter walked into the Embassy doors and receives a phone call
Peter: I'm here.
Male Voice: Didn't think you would show......
Peter: Who are you?
Male Voice: Well, Since you've been so cooperative, My Name is Phil Cunningham.
Peter: Okay Phil, What do you want?
Phil Cunningham: Go to the counter and say your name, Then we'll meet.
Peter slowly walks up to the counter and analyzes everything around him..... Something's off
Peter: Hi I'm Peterson Hunt, I was told that there's some issue that needs to be sorted out.
Secretary: Hello Mr. Hunt , These two men will take you to your "debriefing"
Peter: Hey Big Guy, You supposed to be the Terminator or something?
Guard: Walk.
Peter wal… [view original content]
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And here's the last hope you like him 2 ( yes i know thats not funny):
Joseph Blake
Age 24
Brown coat with black shirt (occasionally blue), Sunglasses (occationally), Black hair, clean shaven, average heigh, average weight ( but muscular)
Goverment Agent /Ally
Personallity: serious, friendly ( with those he knows), heroic, professional
Joseph was just 16 when both his parents we massacared by Count Hypnos. He has vowed to capture all of the organisations criminals and bring them to limbo ( wich to him is a fate worse than any death). He has had a particular obssesion with capturing Hypnos (even going as far as to pick a cell for him apart from all other inmates. He is also curious as to why his parents were targets as they were both scientists not very much involved in organization missions execept a poison reserchers. He will as well attept to capture anyone he thinks deserving of "Limbo" although he occasionally does kill non targeted villains for their crimes.
Thanks!
Thank you Again! These are good.
Cool charcter Mark
When will the first chapter appear? Just asking :P
Probably within a few days, First I might write another chapter to Dark Angels and/or write the prologue to Forum Users:Jurassic Park
OK then. Did you saw my characters for these story or no? There would be a S2 of Dark Angels or not?
Yep, I saw your characters, Thank you for those and Season 2 is not confirmed Yet, It all depends on how things go down....
Umm dont you think youre overworking yourself with 3 stories?
A Saltlick is never over worked I can handle it
Part Names
Part 1- Nothing is Over
Part 2- The Tomb
Part 3- War Games
Part 4- A Helping Hand
Part 5- Game Over
ok when do we begin?
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 1
I got a call from an old friend to meet up at a local Cafe.......
Peter: It's been a long time Jordan Wilkerson...
Jordan Wilkerson: Too Long....
Peter: So what did you want to talk about? And what happened to your eye!?
Jordan Wilkerson: Ever here about a douche bag called Sparker?
Peter: Dammit Jordan, I said I was done with this shit a long time ago.......
Jordan Wilkerson: Well let's just say he's a real asshole, Hopeless is dead, Arin is dead, and he did this to my eye......
Peter: Damn, What about the others?
Jordan Wilkerson: Jack is also dead, and Elsa, Jacob and a few newbies have been taken hostage by him, I'm trying to get as much help as I can.
Peter: Sorry, I can't help ya.
Jordan Wilkerson: It's okay, Nice to see you.
Jordan walks away
I was about to get up and leave but my phone rang so I decided to sit down and answer it
Male Voice: Hello.
Peter: Hi, Who is this?
Male Voice: You don't need to know my name Peter, but I know you.
Peter: What's this about?
Male Voice: I don't know if you were the top agent once but what I do know is.........
Peter: Get to the point, You trying to trace my signal? I'll give you 5 seconds to tell me why I should stay on.....
Male Voice: Shannon Clare
Peter: What about her?
Male Voice: Don't give me that shit She's dead, And we have leads that it was you.
Peter: Don't flatter yourself, I've been away from the states for 5 years ,and if you're some spook trying to get me back in then screw you. I talked to her yesterday
Male Voice: She was found dead this morning and we found your plane ticket and we have you on security cameras
Peter: That ain't shit
Male Voice: I'm good at telling when people are lying and you're full of it. You have 6 hours to go to the embassy and explain yourself.
Peter: And if I don't
Male Voice: Then the CIA, Navy Seals and every over-seas operative will be on your ass. 6 Hours or Else....... Hangs Up
Peter: Dammit, Something's wrong
Go to the Embassy OR Think about where to go to figure out what's happened
Tell me what you guys think! Sorry if this seems rushed to you.
Now.
go to the Embassy
I like it!
Think about where to go to figure out what's happened
In the summary you already said that the governemt was after them so .....
Stuff might go down
Thanks!
Think about where to go to figure out what's happened
Awesome first chapter!
Thank You!
Embassy i guess
good part
Thanks, Glad I decided to get the first chapter out today
Go to the Embassy
Good start for a very promising fanfiction
Thanks
Im the one whose glad, this story and youre other one are fantastic
Think about where to go to figure out what's happened
More potential of violence another great chapter
Need a Tie-breaker :P
Salt? Anyone? New Part?
I'm also curious about that subject on all his fanfics
Need a Tie Breaker... No Pressure
will it let you make a new part ?
Yep.
okay i have a loyal friend who will vote Go to the embassy in a few minutes
Thanks
Go to the Embassy
TIE BREAKER!
I voted Go to the Embassy.
Golden did it now please post a new part
Thanks
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 2
I got a call from some Agency Spook and something's wrong, They're accusing me of the murder of a former friend and I decided to go to the Embassy and sort this out......
Peter walked into the Embassy doors and receives a phone call
Peter: I'm here.
Male Voice: Didn't think you would show......
Peter: Who are you?
Male Voice: Well, Since you've been so cooperative, My Name is Phil Cunningham.
Peter: Okay Phil, What do you want?
Phil Cunningham: Go to the counter and say your name, Then we'll meet.
Peter slowly walks up to the counter and analyzes everything around him..... Something's off
Peter: Hi I'm Peterson Hunt, I was told that there's some issue that needs to be sorted out.
Secretary: Hello Mr. Hunt , These two men will take you to your "debriefing"
Peter: Hey Big Guy, You supposed to be the Terminator or something?
Guard: Walk.
Peter walks down the hall and up a few floors with the two guards into a room labeled Interrogation
Phil Cunningham: Welcome Mr.Hunt, Are you aware of the current situation?
Peter: Only from what you told me, But I haven't been in the states for years so there's no way I could have done anything.
Phil Cunningham: Not what these photos say Lays down folder with photos of Peter at airport You were in the country for 3 days and at the time of the murder
Peter: Me and Shannon were friends, Why would I kill her? And those photos aren't right.
Phil Cunningham: I don't fucking care, You could have fallen out with her, and the evidence doesn't lie.
Peter: But it can be tampered.
Phil Cunningham: I am the best at what I do, There's no way in hell shit like this would be "tampered with", Save that shit for a newbie, I rose to the top of the agency right when you left. You are going in the deepest darkest hole I can find... See you in 48 hours in D.C ,Hunt.....
Peter: You know, I'm not hand cuffed yet and I'm walking out of here, No matter what you say.
Phil Cunningham: That's what these guys are for Opens Door Have Fun.
There was 7 of them all pointing automatics at me..... I could choose to give up peacefully or I could try and fight my way out but that's risky.....
Give Up OR Fight
Give Up
Awesome Writing!!!