Episode 3 Chapter 3
Felix - Run
Felix begins to slow back away, he then grabs Bella's arm and pulls her with himself. He starts walk… moreing around Lucas, Lucas follows his movement by slowly turning so he's facing him. "Your a sad man...Felix..." Lucas said, Felix ignores him, Felix then pushes the button of the elevator and waits for it to arrive. Lucas smiles as Felix and Bella step into the elevator. "Nick, this is your lucky day...it's the day you're happy again." Lucas wait until the elevators doors begin to close, he then stabs Nick's ankle's and drops him on the floor. Bella starts screaming for nick."He'll live, but not without his fair share of pain" Lucas said as the door fully close and Bella screams can no longer be heard.
The elevator doors open on the second floor and they step out of it. Bella grabs hold of her own face and breathes heavily, she looks at Felix and laughs.
"We'll...We'll all going to die..." She then s… [view original content]
Episode 3 Chapter 3
Felix - Run
Felix begins to slow back away, he then grabs Bella's arm and pulls her with himself. He starts walk… moreing around Lucas, Lucas follows his movement by slowly turning so he's facing him. "Your a sad man...Felix..." Lucas said, Felix ignores him, Felix then pushes the button of the elevator and waits for it to arrive. Lucas smiles as Felix and Bella step into the elevator. "Nick, this is your lucky day...it's the day you're happy again." Lucas wait until the elevators doors begin to close, he then stabs Nick's ankle's and drops him on the floor. Bella starts screaming for nick."He'll live, but not without his fair share of pain" Lucas said as the door fully close and Bella screams can no longer be heard.
The elevator doors open on the second floor and they step out of it. Bella grabs hold of her own face and breathes heavily, she looks at Felix and laughs.
"We'll...We'll all going to die..." She then s… [view original content]
Episode 3 Chapter 3
Felix - Run
Felix begins to slow back away, he then grabs Bella's arm and pulls her with himself. He starts walk… moreing around Lucas, Lucas follows his movement by slowly turning so he's facing him. "Your a sad man...Felix..." Lucas said, Felix ignores him, Felix then pushes the button of the elevator and waits for it to arrive. Lucas smiles as Felix and Bella step into the elevator. "Nick, this is your lucky day...it's the day you're happy again." Lucas wait until the elevators doors begin to close, he then stabs Nick's ankle's and drops him on the floor. Bella starts screaming for nick."He'll live, but not without his fair share of pain" Lucas said as the door fully close and Bella screams can no longer be heard.
The elevator doors open on the second floor and they step out of it. Bella grabs hold of her own face and breathes heavily, she looks at Felix and laughs.
"We'll...We'll all going to die..." She then s… [view original content]
Sorcha isn't stupid, she believes Lucas 'saved' her from the killer (her dad) and now sees Lucas as her saveur. And it's because she's been hurt mentally.
Bella is alive, she's still in the hospital room that Felix barricaded.
Episode 3 Chapter 3
Felix - Run
Felix begins to slow back away, he then grabs Bella's arm and pulls her with himself. He starts walk… moreing around Lucas, Lucas follows his movement by slowly turning so he's facing him. "Your a sad man...Felix..." Lucas said, Felix ignores him, Felix then pushes the button of the elevator and waits for it to arrive. Lucas smiles as Felix and Bella step into the elevator. "Nick, this is your lucky day...it's the day you're happy again." Lucas wait until the elevators doors begin to close, he then stabs Nick's ankle's and drops him on the floor. Bella starts screaming for nick."He'll live, but not without his fair share of pain" Lucas said as the door fully close and Bella screams can no longer be heard.
The elevator doors open on the second floor and they step out of it. Bella grabs hold of her own face and breathes heavily, she looks at Felix and laughs.
"We'll...We'll all going to die..." She then s… [view original content]
The last part of dialogue has meaning, it is referencing the mountain town. (Episode 4) and other stuff... :P
I wouldn't say happy trio of killers...Laurel isn't a killer...Sorcha is...Kind of a killer...But is really being mislead, the one true killer in Lucas.
Thank you! I need to make sure the next chapter tops this one!
That last piece of dialogue was oddly sweet for a serial killer and a nutjob with Stockholm Syndrome. Now we have a happy trio of killers.
Great part! This gets even better with every part
You know, at first I have to admit I was shocked that Lucas was the killer, so I thought he might be brainwashed, given my own interpretation about what he and Sorcha said about the Remnant.
But now I get less and less confident with every chapter. While I still deeply hope for a redeeming side, I actually start to accept the whole "serial-killer" stuff. And surprisingly it does not really bother me, since you write him as such a fascinating villain. Thats the first time one of my characters is a villain and I find it strangely entertaining to actually root for him and the good guys. Go Team Remnant!
Two questions left: What exactly happened to Vincent? Will he appear next chapter? And would you mind me submitting another character for your Fallout Story?
The last part of dialogue has meaning, it is referencing the mountain town. (Episode 4) and other stuff... :P
I wouldn't say happy trio o… moref killers...Laurel isn't a killer...Sorcha is...Kind of a killer...But is really being mislead, the one true killer in Lucas.
Thank you! I need to make sure the next chapter tops this one!
I didn't explain everything in the first act, and i probably shouldn't explain some stuff out of the story. And I'm really happy some people are seeing some of this, some of the hidden stuff, i love how you and others explain your choices, it makes the choice matter more, for me at least.
I'm really glad you like Lucas as the villain, and he makes a good one. I understand what you mean by rooting for two sides and all, but when it comes down to it you can't just root for both, one's going to win and the other will lose. >:3
Vincent kind of dropped out of the story, sorry about that...But he's alive, it's kind of a plot hole...But i have ways to explain his disappearance...And just to be clear he hasn't been kidnapped or anything. The plot holes come up here and there, and when they do I just need to write a reason for it be like that, make it more than a plot hole.
Everyone can create as many characters as they want, just as long they don't over do it. by that i mean they can't submit too many, and the limit varies from story to story, but for the Fallout story...Your characters have been really amazing and will help make good plot points, so you're free to submit what you want, just don't go overboard.
You know, at first I have to admit I was shocked that Lucas was the killer, so I thought he might be brainwashed, given my own interpretatio… moren about what he and Sorcha said about the Remnant.
But now I get less and less confident with every chapter. While I still deeply hope for a redeeming side, I actually start to accept the whole "serial-killer" stuff. And surprisingly it does not really bother me, since you write him as such a fascinating villain. Thats the first time one of my characters is a villain and I find it strangely entertaining to actually root for him and the good guys. Go Team Remnant!
Two questions left: What exactly happened to Vincent? Will he appear next chapter? And would you mind me submitting another character for your Fallout Story?
So, since it's going to be a little while before this story returns, i thought i would ask you some questions.
Who is your favorite chara… morecter?
What is your favorite character death?
What is your favorite chapter so far?
What is your favorite episode so far?
What was your favorite thing about this story?
Who do you think will die next?
What do you think will happen in the next chapter/episode?
Who is your least favorite character?
What is your least favorite chapter?
1. A Murder Story is only as good as it's villain and Lucas is absolutely terrific and immensely entertaining. Trent is a close second.
2. This one goes to Trent without a doubt. He put up the best fight so far and will be greatly missed.
3. Episode 3 Chapter 3 was easily the best chapter so far, it was incredibly thrilling
4. Episode 3 was very intense, starting with the prologue that totally blew my mind to the magnificent last chapter
5. The suspense, unpredictability (not that it stops me from trying ) and the problem that I don't know who I should root for.
6. Either one of the Season 1 survivors (probably Teddy) or Sam
7. Team Remnant goes to the Mountain Town, some people will track them down, we finally get to know more about the Remnant
8. That's a tough choice. I'll go with Janet, since she had the smallest role and IMO the weakest death so far.
9. Now that's almost impossible to answer. But from my point you outdid yourself with every new chapter and especially every new episode. So, it's Episode 1 Chapter 1 for me, not because it was bad, but because the following chapters got even better.
So, since it's going to be a little while before this story returns, i thought i would ask you some questions.
Who is your favorite chara… morecter?
What is your favorite character death?
What is your favorite chapter so far?
What is your favorite episode so far?
What was your favorite thing about this story?
Who do you think will die next?
What do you think will happen in the next chapter/episode?
Who is your least favorite character?
What is your least favorite chapter?
I miss Trent CONSPIRACY BECAUSE I KILLED MOST OF HOPES CHARACTERS IN DARK ANGELS IT WAS PAYBACK!!! CONSPIRACY!!! This is a great story though..... Maybe too Great....
1. A Murder Story is only as good as it's villain and Lucas is absolutely terrific and immensely entertaining. Trent is a close second.
2… more. This one goes to Trent without a doubt. He put up the best fight so far and will be greatly missed.
3. Episode 3 Chapter 3 was easily the best chapter so far, it was incredibly thrilling
4. Episode 3 was very intense, starting with the prologue that totally blew my mind to the magnificent last chapter
5. The suspense, unpredictability (not that it stops me from trying ) and the problem that I don't know who I should root for.
6. Either one of the Season 1 survivors (probably Teddy) or Sam
7. Team Remnant goes to the Mountain Town, some people will track them down, we finally get to know more about the Remnant
8. That's a tough choice. I'll go with Janet, since she had the smallest role and IMO the weakest death so far.
9. Now that's almost impossible to answer. But from my point you… [view original content]
I miss Trent CONSPIRACY BECAUSE I KILLED MOST OF HOPES CHARACTERS IN DARK ANGELS IT WAS PAYBACK!!! CONSPIRACY!!! This is a great story though..... Maybe too Great....
Lucas had Felix's hands around his neck, he kicked his legs while choking, Lucas's eyes started to close as he was being choked, but then Felix's grip loosened. Lucas's eyes look as Felix slowly falls onto the ground coughing and gasping. Sorcha stands breathing heavily with the blood soaked knife in her hand. "You...You came back for me..." Lucas gasped while feeling his throat with his hand. "Well...You saved me from the killer, so i saved you..." Sorcha replied reaching her hand out while waiting for Lucas to take it. He grabs her hand and she helps pull him on his feet. "That's...Very kind of you, we need to leave this place, you can come to...With me, you and Laurel, come on...I'll carry her, you can hold the knife." Lucas smiled, Sorcha makes a small grin back to him. Lucas steps over Felix and walks past Nick making his way to Laurel, he picks her up with both arms and carries her out the hospital door while Sorcha walks next to him. The automatic doors close behind them as Sorcha takes his hand.
Nick's eyes slowly open sometime later. He looks at them mess of the lobby, then spots Felix on the floor surrounded by blood. Nick tries to stand up quickly only to fall back to the floor in pain, he forgot about the deep cuts on the back of his legs. Nick hits his fist onto the floor as he bites his lip. He looks at the fate movement on Felix's hand. Nick lays on the floor of the hospital as he looks up at the ceiling, with heavy breaths he starts pulling himself to the front desk, he sits himself up and reaches for the phone, knocking it off the desk and leaving it hanging off the edge by the wire.
8 Days later...
Felix sits in his office with a empty shot glass in his hand, he takes a bottle of alcohol sitting on his desk and fills the glass. He raises the glass he his lips as he takes the shot and cringes, it tasted awful. Someone knocks on the office door while opening it. Felix quickly puts the bottle and shot glass away as the men enter the office. Nick walked in while using a walking cane, he was followed by another man wearing a tie and a wrinkled dress shirt. They stand in front of his desk as Nick speaks up. "Felix, your looking a lot better. This is Vincent Harper" Vincent reaches out his hand waiting for Felix to shake it, Felix just looks at him. "Officer..." Vincent mutters under his breathe while he pulls his hand back awkwardly.
"Well what the hell do you want?" Felix blunted out while pulling the bottle and shot glass back out. "We want to find Lucas." Nick replies. "Good luck with that. I did everything i could in the last 3 days to find the fucker. We're not finding him." Felix answers.
"We know where he went, we'll like for you to come along. So, do yo want to come?" Nick asks. "Probably...But first i want to know how you came by this information. You didn't just find this on your own, right?" Felix replies while filling the glass with alcohol.
"We got a guy with a private jet willing to take us to Europe" Nick answers. "How the hell did Lucas get to Europe, well...We can't take a public plane there...Who is this guy?" Felix asks while pulling out another two shot glasses. "His name is Brandon Humble, just some rich kid with a plane." Vincent answers.
"Well, we go to Europe on this asshat's plane, but once we find Lucas...What are we gonna do?" Felix asks, he looks at them while they stand in silence. "Guess we'll have to come up with a plan on the spot. I'm coming with you, I'll meet you at the air fried later today. But for now lets have a toast." Felix fills the shot glasses and hands them to Vincent and Nick. "A toast to a safe trip to Europe." Felix raises his glass and waits while Nick and Vincent do the same. Felix quickly drinks it all while the others awkwardly follow.
End of Prologue
It's back! But I don't know how regularly I'll be posting new chapters, I've got a big plat of stuff to do for the next few days, but it's mostly at night. Hopefully I can try to keep it somewhat daily. Sorry it was kind of short. Anyway, thank you all for waiting and thank you for reading, I hope you have a good day!
Act 2 - Prologue
Lucas had Felix's hands around his neck, he kicked his legs while choking, Lucas's eyes started to close as he was being… more choked, but then Felix's grip loosened. Lucas's eyes look as Felix slowly falls onto the ground coughing and gasping. Sorcha stands breathing heavily with the blood soaked knife in her hand. "You...You came back for me..." Lucas gasped while feeling his throat with his hand. "Well...You saved me from the killer, so i saved you..." Sorcha replied reaching her hand out while waiting for Lucas to take it. He grabs her hand and she helps pull him on his feet. "That's...Very kind of you, we need to leave this place, you can come to...With me, you and Laurel, come on...I'll carry her, you can hold the knife." Lucas smiled, Sorcha makes a small grin back to him. Lucas steps over Felix and walks past Nick making his way to Laurel, he picks her up with both arms and carries her out the hospital door while Sorcha … [view original content]
Act 2 - Prologue
Lucas had Felix's hands around his neck, he kicked his legs while choking, Lucas's eyes started to close as he was being… more choked, but then Felix's grip loosened. Lucas's eyes look as Felix slowly falls onto the ground coughing and gasping. Sorcha stands breathing heavily with the blood soaked knife in her hand. "You...You came back for me..." Lucas gasped while feeling his throat with his hand. "Well...You saved me from the killer, so i saved you..." Sorcha replied reaching her hand out while waiting for Lucas to take it. He grabs her hand and she helps pull him on his feet. "That's...Very kind of you, we need to leave this place, you can come to...With me, you and Laurel, come on...I'll carry her, you can hold the knife." Lucas smiled, Sorcha makes a small grin back to him. Lucas steps over Felix and walks past Nick making his way to Laurel, he picks her up with both arms and carries her out the hospital door while Sorcha … [view original content]
Act 2 - Prologue
Lucas had Felix's hands around his neck, he kicked his legs while choking, Lucas's eyes started to close as he was being… more choked, but then Felix's grip loosened. Lucas's eyes look as Felix slowly falls onto the ground coughing and gasping. Sorcha stands breathing heavily with the blood soaked knife in her hand. "You...You came back for me..." Lucas gasped while feeling his throat with his hand. "Well...You saved me from the killer, so i saved you..." Sorcha replied reaching her hand out while waiting for Lucas to take it. He grabs her hand and she helps pull him on his feet. "That's...Very kind of you, we need to leave this place, you can come to...With me, you and Laurel, come on...I'll carry her, you can hold the knife." Lucas smiled, Sorcha makes a small grin back to him. Lucas steps over Felix and walks past Nick making his way to Laurel, he picks her up with both arms and carries her out the hospital door while Sorcha … [view original content]
Act 2 - Prologue
Lucas had Felix's hands around his neck, he kicked his legs while choking, Lucas's eyes started to close as he was being… more choked, but then Felix's grip loosened. Lucas's eyes look as Felix slowly falls onto the ground coughing and gasping. Sorcha stands breathing heavily with the blood soaked knife in her hand. "You...You came back for me..." Lucas gasped while feeling his throat with his hand. "Well...You saved me from the killer, so i saved you..." Sorcha replied reaching her hand out while waiting for Lucas to take it. He grabs her hand and she helps pull him on his feet. "That's...Very kind of you, we need to leave this place, you can come to...With me, you and Laurel, come on...I'll carry her, you can hold the knife." Lucas smiled, Sorcha makes a small grin back to him. Lucas steps over Felix and walks past Nick making his way to Laurel, he picks her up with both arms and carries her out the hospital door while Sorcha … [view original content]
It's noon while Felix drives down the road in his police car, he quickly spots the air fried as he speeds down the road, he pulls into it and parks near the only plane on the runway. Felix climbs out of his car and stands next to it. Someone pokes their head out of the plane, it was Nick, he waves his hand at Felix before returning to the inside of the plane. Felix looked down the runway, the plane was at the very beginning of it, he quickly looked back at the plane as Nick pokes out of the door way again. "You coming?" Nick asks. "I'm here and I'm ready to go. After all, you still haven't told me how to found out where Lucas went. When do you plan on telling me that?" Felix replies. "Just get on the damn plane, we'll talk about it there." Nick answers, then steps back inside the plane.
Felix steps inside he finds someone he didn't know messing with the controls of the plane, that must be Brandon. Vincent and Nick were in the far back of the plane talking, Felix starts walking to them, but as they see him coming they stop talking. "Well, you gonna tell me how you figured it out?" Felix asks somewhat annoyed. "I went to Vincent's house and I found stuff that was written down that made it clear where he was going" Nick answers. "Why the hell didn't you tell me at my office, you just avoided the question then, why not now?" Felix replies. "Wasn't completely sure about it, but now I'm sure. Look, for now you can go talk with Brandon." Nick answers.
Felix leaves the back of the plane walking back to the fount, he finds Brandon sitting in the pilot's seat with headphones on, he looks at Felix then continues doing his own thing with the plane's controls. Felix stands behind him for a few seconds before making a fake cough. "You want something?" Brandon said with a annoyed tone while still messing with the dials and other buttons. "Yes. I thought i would introduce myself, I'm Officer Felix Davis. I'm assuming your Brandon." Felix Answers while Brandon reaches his hand out, Felix takes his hand and shakes, when Felix pulls his hand back he finds the palm of his hand covered he grime. Brandon smiles as Felix wipes his hand on his jeans getting rid of the grime. "Yep that's me." Brandon replies while grabbing a dirty cloth and using it to wipe his hands. "You asshole." Felix mutters while grabbing the cloth from Brandon.
Brandon wore a white suit and dress pants, it was very clean and well kept. Brandon had a smug look as Felix cleaned the grim off his hands, Felix tosses the dirty cloth back at Brandon and it hits his clean suit leaving the black grime. Brandon looks pissed as Felix returns to talk with Nick and Vincent. Brandon tries to follow him back the wire connecting the headphones to the plane stops him as the wire knocks some stuff off, he walks back to the mess to pick it up while mumbling cruse words under his breath. "When are we-" Felix is cut off by the sound of Brandon as he yells from the fount of the plane. "We'll be taking off the runway in just a few minutes, please don't fuck with anything, just sit in a seat until we get there." Brandon looked in the back of the plane impatiently waiting for everyone to get in a seat.
Felix sat alone on one side of the plane while Vincent and Nick sat single file on the same side of the plane, Felix set his head on the headrest of the seat and quickly falls asleep. He slowly awakens sometime later to find Nick putting a pill in his mouth, he swallows the pill with a bottle of water then looks at Felix. "Oh your awake, we're over...I don't know where the hell we are, but we haven't left the U.S yet." Felix says.
"I've never been a fun of flying, hopefully we'll get soon, i really hate flying...So...Do you know what time it is?" Felix asks.
"I'll check my watch." It was Vincent, he pulled up the sleeve of his shirt and look at the time. His face looks puzzled as he looks at the wristwatch.
"So what time is it?" Felix asks getting a little inpatient. "Just look!" Vincent shouts while standing up, he holds his hand out while Nick and Felix look. The hands on the clock are spinning out of control. "What the hell...is it broken?" Felix asks. "No, it's was working fine just a few minutes ago..." Vincent answers. "Fuck! Fuck, goddammit! Someone get over here, you! Felix, everyone else get in your seats!" Brandon shouts from the fount of the plane. Nick and Vincent get back in their seats and buckle up while Felix starts walking to the fount of the plane. As Felix walks there the left side of the plane turns down slightly, Felix starts running and reaches the fount, he find Brandon trying to hold the plane in one place as all of the dials and gauges spin out of control. "Fuck! Help me!" Brandon shouts while the plane slowly starts to face further down, Felix grabs the lever and helps keep it still as they continue to be forced down. They fly past a mountain barely missing it by about 30 feet. Then Felix spots something hidden past the mountain, a lake, but on the lake was a bridge, it looked big enough to land on, if they could make it.
Episode 4 The Mountain Town Chapter 1
It's noon while Felix drives down the road in his police car, he quickly spots the air fried as he … morespeeds down the road, he pulls into it and parks near the only plane on the runway. Felix climbs out of his car and stands next to it. Someone pokes their head out of the plane, it was Nick, he waves his hand at Felix before returning to the inside of the plane. Felix looked down the runway, the plane was at the very beginning of it, he quickly looked back at the plane as Nick pokes out of the door way again. "You coming?" Nick asks. "I'm here and I'm ready to go. After all, you still haven't told me how to found out where Lucas went. When do you plan on telling me that?" Felix replies. "Just get on the damn plane, we'll talk about it there." Nick answers, then steps back inside the plane.
Felix steps inside he finds someone he didn't know messing with the controls of the plane, that must be Brandon. V… [view original content]
Episode 4 The Mountain Town Chapter 1
It's noon while Felix drives down the road in his police car, he quickly spots the air fried as he … morespeeds down the road, he pulls into it and parks near the only plane on the runway. Felix climbs out of his car and stands next to it. Someone pokes their head out of the plane, it was Nick, he waves his hand at Felix before returning to the inside of the plane. Felix looked down the runway, the plane was at the very beginning of it, he quickly looked back at the plane as Nick pokes out of the door way again. "You coming?" Nick asks. "I'm here and I'm ready to go. After all, you still haven't told me how to found out where Lucas went. When do you plan on telling me that?" Felix replies. "Just get on the damn plane, we'll talk about it there." Nick answers, then steps back inside the plane.
Felix steps inside he finds someone he didn't know messing with the controls of the plane, that must be Brandon. V… [view original content]
Episode 4 The Mountain Town Chapter 1
It's noon while Felix drives down the road in his police car, he quickly spots the air fried as he … morespeeds down the road, he pulls into it and parks near the only plane on the runway. Felix climbs out of his car and stands next to it. Someone pokes their head out of the plane, it was Nick, he waves his hand at Felix before returning to the inside of the plane. Felix looked down the runway, the plane was at the very beginning of it, he quickly looked back at the plane as Nick pokes out of the door way again. "You coming?" Nick asks. "I'm here and I'm ready to go. After all, you still haven't told me how to found out where Lucas went. When do you plan on telling me that?" Felix replies. "Just get on the damn plane, we'll talk about it there." Nick answers, then steps back inside the plane.
Felix steps inside he finds someone he didn't know messing with the controls of the plane, that must be Brandon. V… [view original content]
Episode 4 The Mountain Town Chapter 1
It's noon while Felix drives down the road in his police car, he quickly spots the air fried as he … morespeeds down the road, he pulls into it and parks near the only plane on the runway. Felix climbs out of his car and stands next to it. Someone pokes their head out of the plane, it was Nick, he waves his hand at Felix before returning to the inside of the plane. Felix looked down the runway, the plane was at the very beginning of it, he quickly looked back at the plane as Nick pokes out of the door way again. "You coming?" Nick asks. "I'm here and I'm ready to go. After all, you still haven't told me how to found out where Lucas went. When do you plan on telling me that?" Felix replies. "Just get on the damn plane, we'll talk about it there." Nick answers, then steps back inside the plane.
Felix steps inside he finds someone he didn't know messing with the controls of the plane, that must be Brandon. V… [view original content]
Felix and Brandon pull on the lever doing everything they can to keep it from crashing onto the ground or the lake. "Just keep it steady, we'll land on the bridge!" Brandon shouts while moves the lever trying to lineup with the bridge, Felix just does what he can to keep the plane from going out of control. Just as the plane is feet away from landing Felix feels a pain in his legs and lets go of the lever, the plane gets pulled to one side as it hits the railing of the bridge making Felix fly through the plane's front window while Brandon hits his head on the controls of the plane.
Felix flies out of the plane's window and lands on the lake, the coldness of the water hits as he starts swimming back up from the bottom of the lake he comes out gasping and shaking from the cold, he looks around the lake and spots a path that would hopefully lead back to the bridge, he starts swimming as fast as he can as he begins to lose feeling in some of his fingers. As he approaches the shore and the path that lead up he sees some sort of sewer leading into the the side of the hill. He climbs onto the shore and falls into the sand as he looks back at the plane, it looked like it wouldn't be able to get them out of here, but as he watches the plane from the shore, he saw small dots approach the plane from the other side of the bridge.
Felix looks at the path leading up the cliff, he started running before he felt a pain in his legs. He stops and sits on the ground, he pulls up the leg of his pants and looks at the makeshift casts he made for his legs, they weren't broken, but they were hurt badly from when he fell from the hospital's second story, he looks at the casts, they were dripping with water and soaked through. He looks at the surrounding area for something like a stick to help with walking. He used to walk up the path, as he walked he thought about what had just happened, everything in the plane, the controls and Vincent's watch were all spinning out of control, while the plane was forced into this valley, but where the hell did they crash. Then there was the people who came to the plane after it had crashed, maybe there was a town nearby. Felix thought about the whole walk back up the path until he reached the top.
The plane looked just as fucked as he did on the lake, the left wing hung over the edge of the bridge and the front of the plane was propped on the railing of the bridge, it wasn't going anywhere. Felix walked to the plane's doorway, it was wide open, he carefully stepped onto the plane and looked at the inside. Brandon wasn't in the front of the plane, but there was small amounts of blood on the controls of the plane. In the back of the plane there were a little signs of Nick, on the headrest of the sit in front of his, but the blood had to come from the impact when landing on the bridge. Vincent's seat had very few drops of blood, but the few drops lead to the very back of the plane where they put the suitcases.
Felix approaches the small door to the cargo compartment, the top edge of the door way had a small dent and a little bit of blood, someone might have hit their head on it while quickly getting into the cargo compartment. Felix reaches to open the door, inside he finds Vincent he has a large gash of his forehead and appears to have a concussion. "Vincent, what the hell happened to Nick and Brandon?!" Felix shouts.
Vincent acts as if he just saw Felix and reacts with a quiet yet stern voice. "Don't. Yell." Vincent grabs hold of Felix's hand and he pulls him up and helps him out of the compartment. Vincent starts walking to the front of the plane while holding his forehead. Vincent stopped and stood over what looked like a blood splatter on the wall. How did i miss that? Felix thought to himself.
"What the hell happened?" Felix said softly trying to stay quiet.
"After you went through the window and Brandon was knocked out some people started walking down from the path up ahead" Vincent pointed down the road past the bridge, the road lead on for a bit before turning. "There were about 5 people walking down from it and to there plane, Nick told me to find the first aid kit on the back, i climbed inside looking for it after hitting my head on the doorway, the door locked behind me and i couldn't get out." Vincent looked back at the door then the blood splatter.
"But do you know what happened to Nick and Brandon?" Felix asked while he spotted another blood splatter this time on the ground, he leaned to look at it, as Vincent continued to tell him what happened.
"I could see through the cracks on the doorway and saw Nick be approached by the people from up the road. They said something that sounded like they were speaking in Latin, I don't know Latin well enough to know what the were saying. But what ever it was made Nick react, maybe he knew what they said, but he tried to hit one of them with his cane. He didn't have time to do anything though, they slammed him on the wall and he fell there" Vincent pointed at the Blood splatter on the wall then the blood on the floor.
"What the fuck...Where did they take him?" Felix asked as he looked up the road.
"I don't know, i couldn't see where they went from inside the compartment. But my guess is back up the road. That's are best chance to find where Nick and Brandon were taken, but who the hell are these people?" Vincent asked while Felix looked down the road. "We'll going after them, right?" Vincent waited as Felix stared down the road.
"Yeah, we'll gonna show them a thing" Felix answered.
They start walking until the leave the bridge and the plane behind, they walk down the path for a bit. Felix thinks about how Lucas might be getting away right now, maybe there were going to be more murders when they got back to the home town. There was one thought in the back of Felix's mind, he wanted to ask Vincent about him, figure out what kind of person Lucas really was, and who Vincent was deep down. This thought remained with him for the next few minutes, until he finally let himself ask it. "I want to know about him, about Lucas"
"Well...What's there to say, he's a nice kid, was...But...He was always friendly to almost anyone, he liked listening, but he had trouble talkin' with people, he would always try to be nice, least that's how i saw it" Vincent answered with a somewhat sad voice.
"I heard there was a Ms. Harper, what happened to your wife?" Felix asked carefully to try to avoid anything he wouldn't want to talk about.
"My wife..." Vincent smiled. "She was kind, but it was my fault she left...I started drinking, heavily. I lost my job and later my marriage, she got custody of the kids and everything else, the house, but I'm not mad at her...It was my fault. I don't know where i would be if Lucas hadn't choose to stay with me. It felt like he pitied me...But we moved out to Minnesota, swore off drinking forever, and got a job for the high school. I never did keep the promise though...I've tried, but i always find myself in the bar again." Vincent stopped walking and looked at his shoes.
"You okay?" Felix asked.
"I bet...I bet it's my fault, what else could it be?" Vincent muttered.
"I don't think that's true, you weren't at the hospital...Lucas never said anything about that, nothing about it being your fault. But like i said you weren't there, Lucas...From what i could tell and from what he was talking about...This thing called the Remnant, he talked about it like it was something very real. If anything you should blame this Remnant. I...I...Almost hurt...Almost killed Lucas...Back at the hospital, i grabbed him by the neck and started choking him...If it wasn't for Sorcha...i would have killed him...but I promise you...I won't let him die, i won't do something like that again." Felix Waits in the road while Vincent continues to look down. Vincent places his hand on his face and wipes away a tears in his eyes.
"I don't know what to say...Just...Don't...Don't let him kill you, or anyone." Vincent takes a deep breath then continues walking down the road.
They approach the bend in the road and hug the edge of the woods, they start walking through the woods instead of the road. But this was the right choice, there was a man standing in front of a shed, he held a rifle and was dressed in something you would see a miner were, but the shed was what got Felix thinking, the man was guarding it with a rifle, maybe Nick and Brandon were in there, it made sense. Then only one choice was left to make, should he try to sneak around to the back on the shed and find a way in there from the back or try to take out the guard and enter from the front.
[Take out the guard and enter through the door]
[Sneak around the back of the shed and enter from there]
Episode 4 Chapter 2
Felix and Brandon pull on the lever doing everything they can to keep it from crashing onto the ground or the lake. "… moreJust keep it steady, we'll land on the bridge!" Brandon shouts while moves the lever trying to lineup with the bridge, Felix just does what he can to keep the plane from going out of control. Just as the plane is feet away from landing Felix feels a pain in his legs and lets go of the lever, the plane gets pulled to one side as it hits the railing of the bridge making Felix fly through the plane's front window while Brandon hits his head on the controls of the plane.
Felix flies out of the plane's window and lands on the lake, the coldness of the water hits as he starts swimming back up from the bottom of the lake he comes out gasping and shaking from the cold, he looks around the lake and spots a path that would hopefully lead back to the bridge, he starts swimming as fast as he can as he begins to lo… [view original content]
[Sneak around the back of the shed and enter from there]
As always, that was a great chapter! I loved that Vincent got to do something
Also, Vincents little speech made me doubt everything I thought to know about Lucas, yet again. Maybe he really is in some way controlled by the Remnant, but not in the way I originally thought...
Episode 4 Chapter 2
Felix and Brandon pull on the lever doing everything they can to keep it from crashing onto the ground or the lake. "… moreJust keep it steady, we'll land on the bridge!" Brandon shouts while moves the lever trying to lineup with the bridge, Felix just does what he can to keep the plane from going out of control. Just as the plane is feet away from landing Felix feels a pain in his legs and lets go of the lever, the plane gets pulled to one side as it hits the railing of the bridge making Felix fly through the plane's front window while Brandon hits his head on the controls of the plane.
Felix flies out of the plane's window and lands on the lake, the coldness of the water hits as he starts swimming back up from the bottom of the lake he comes out gasping and shaking from the cold, he looks around the lake and spots a path that would hopefully lead back to the bridge, he starts swimming as fast as he can as he begins to lo… [view original content]
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Felix came so close to actually finishing it. Just to die with a knife in his back.
Rest is peace Felix
(Kinda...He might not....Um...Be dead...yeah. :P)
God Dammit, WHY DO YOU HAVE TO MAKE IT SO SUSPENSEFUL!!!! Great Job Bro..... Maybe too Great.... xD
BECAUSE I CAN!!!!
Thank you... :P
Sorcha is stupid or what? XD
Bella is dead or she is still in the elevator?
Sorcha isn't stupid, she believes Lucas 'saved' her from the killer (her dad) and now sees Lucas as her saveur. And it's because she's been hurt mentally.
Bella is alive, she's still in the hospital room that Felix barricaded.
That last piece of dialogue was oddly sweet for a serial killer and a nutjob with Stockholm Syndrome. Now we have a happy trio of killers.
Great part! This gets even better with every part
So my suspicions might be correct! !!! Maybe
The last part of dialogue has meaning, it is referencing the mountain town. (Episode 4) and other stuff... :P
I wouldn't say happy trio of killers...Laurel isn't a killer...Sorcha is...Kind of a killer...But is really being mislead, the one true killer in Lucas.
Thank you! I need to make sure the next chapter tops this one!
I either missed your suspicions or forgot, could you tell me again please?
You know, at first I have to admit I was shocked that Lucas was the killer, so I thought he might be brainwashed, given my own interpretation about what he and Sorcha said about the Remnant.
But now I get less and less confident with every chapter. While I still deeply hope for a redeeming side, I actually start to accept the whole "serial-killer" stuff. And surprisingly it does not really bother me, since you write him as such a fascinating villain. Thats the first time one of my characters is a villain and I find it strangely entertaining to actually root for him and the good guys. Go Team Remnant!
Two questions left: What exactly happened to Vincent? Will he appear next chapter? And would you mind me submitting another character for your Fallout Story?
I didn't explain everything in the first act, and i probably shouldn't explain some stuff out of the story. And I'm really happy some people are seeing some of this, some of the hidden stuff, i love how you and others explain your choices, it makes the choice matter more, for me at least.
I'm really glad you like Lucas as the villain, and he makes a good one. I understand what you mean by rooting for two sides and all, but when it comes down to it you can't just root for both, one's going to win and the other will lose. >:3
Vincent kind of dropped out of the story, sorry about that...But he's alive, it's kind of a plot hole...But i have ways to explain his disappearance...And just to be clear he hasn't been kidnapped or anything. The plot holes come up here and there, and when they do I just need to write a reason for it be like that, make it more than a plot hole.
Everyone can create as many characters as they want, just as long they don't over do it. by that i mean they can't submit too many, and the limit varies from story to story, but for the Fallout story...Your characters have been really amazing and will help make good plot points, so you're free to submit what you want, just don't go overboard.
I just had a feeling Felix would live. At least he's in a hospital.
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/88358/twd-a-monument-to-all-our-sins
Thank you, i guess. :P
So, since it's going to be a little while before this story returns, i thought i would ask you some questions.
Who is your favorite character?
What is your favorite character death?
What is your favorite chapter so far?
What is your favorite episode so far?
What was your favorite thing about this story?
Who do you think will die next?
What do you think will happen in the next chapter/episode?
Who is your least favorite character?
What is your least favorite chapter?
1. A Murder Story is only as good as it's villain and Lucas is absolutely terrific and immensely entertaining. Trent is a close second.
2. This one goes to Trent without a doubt. He put up the best fight so far and will be greatly missed.
3. Episode 3 Chapter 3 was easily the best chapter so far, it was incredibly thrilling
4. Episode 3 was very intense, starting with the prologue that totally blew my mind to the magnificent last chapter
5. The suspense, unpredictability (not that it stops me from trying
) and the problem that I don't know who I should root for.
6. Either one of the Season 1 survivors (probably Teddy) or Sam
7. Team Remnant goes to the Mountain Town, some people will track them down, we finally get to know more about the Remnant
8. That's a tough choice. I'll go with Janet, since she had the smallest role and IMO the weakest death so far.
9. Now that's almost impossible to answer. But from my point you outdid yourself with every new chapter and especially every new episode. So, it's Episode 1 Chapter 1 for me, not because it was bad, but because the following chapters got even better.
I miss Trent CONSPIRACY BECAUSE I KILLED MOST OF HOPES CHARACTERS IN DARK ANGELS IT WAS PAYBACK!!! CONSPIRACY!!! This is a great story though..... Maybe too Great....
I didn't kill him to him to get back you. :P
Let's hope it can get better...Hopefully...
The excitement is killing me!
I'm glad you like!
Don't worry it will return soon, maybe after the holidays.
Act 2 - Prologue
Lucas had Felix's hands around his neck, he kicked his legs while choking, Lucas's eyes started to close as he was being choked, but then Felix's grip loosened. Lucas's eyes look as Felix slowly falls onto the ground coughing and gasping. Sorcha stands breathing heavily with the blood soaked knife in her hand. "You...You came back for me..." Lucas gasped while feeling his throat with his hand. "Well...You saved me from the killer, so i saved you..." Sorcha replied reaching her hand out while waiting for Lucas to take it. He grabs her hand and she helps pull him on his feet. "That's...Very kind of you, we need to leave this place, you can come to...With me, you and Laurel, come on...I'll carry her, you can hold the knife." Lucas smiled, Sorcha makes a small grin back to him. Lucas steps over Felix and walks past Nick making his way to Laurel, he picks her up with both arms and carries her out the hospital door while Sorcha walks next to him. The automatic doors close behind them as Sorcha takes his hand.
Nick's eyes slowly open sometime later. He looks at them mess of the lobby, then spots Felix on the floor surrounded by blood. Nick tries to stand up quickly only to fall back to the floor in pain, he forgot about the deep cuts on the back of his legs. Nick hits his fist onto the floor as he bites his lip. He looks at the fate movement on Felix's hand. Nick lays on the floor of the hospital as he looks up at the ceiling, with heavy breaths he starts pulling himself to the front desk, he sits himself up and reaches for the phone, knocking it off the desk and leaving it hanging off the edge by the wire.
8 Days later...
Felix sits in his office with a empty shot glass in his hand, he takes a bottle of alcohol sitting on his desk and fills the glass. He raises the glass he his lips as he takes the shot and cringes, it tasted awful. Someone knocks on the office door while opening it. Felix quickly puts the bottle and shot glass away as the men enter the office. Nick walked in while using a walking cane, he was followed by another man wearing a tie and a wrinkled dress shirt. They stand in front of his desk as Nick speaks up. "Felix, your looking a lot better. This is Vincent Harper" Vincent reaches out his hand waiting for Felix to shake it, Felix just looks at him. "Officer..." Vincent mutters under his breathe while he pulls his hand back awkwardly.
"Well what the hell do you want?" Felix blunted out while pulling the bottle and shot glass back out. "We want to find Lucas." Nick replies. "Good luck with that. I did everything i could in the last 3 days to find the fucker. We're not finding him." Felix answers.
"We know where he went, we'll like for you to come along. So, do yo want to come?" Nick asks. "Probably...But first i want to know how you came by this information. You didn't just find this on your own, right?" Felix replies while filling the glass with alcohol.
"We got a guy with a private jet willing to take us to Europe" Nick answers. "How the hell did Lucas get to Europe, well...We can't take a public plane there...Who is this guy?" Felix asks while pulling out another two shot glasses. "His name is Brandon Humble, just some rich kid with a plane." Vincent answers.
"Well, we go to Europe on this asshat's plane, but once we find Lucas...What are we gonna do?" Felix asks, he looks at them while they stand in silence. "Guess we'll have to come up with a plan on the spot. I'm coming with you, I'll meet you at the air fried later today. But for now lets have a toast." Felix fills the shot glasses and hands them to Vincent and Nick. "A toast to a safe trip to Europe." Felix raises his glass and waits while Nick and Vincent do the same. Felix quickly drinks it all while the others awkwardly follow.
End of Prologue
It's back! But I don't know how regularly I'll be posting new chapters, I've got a big plat of stuff to do for the next few days, but it's mostly at night. Hopefully I can try to keep it somewhat daily. Sorry it was kind of short. Anyway, thank you all for waiting and thank you for reading, I hope you have a good day!
So.... Diana , Sam and the others got out of the danger
and what happened to Bella?
She survived, but she probably doesn't know about them going to Europe. ;P
Awesome cant wait for more! Europe, here we come!
Can't wait for more! :>
And the hype is back
I'm really looking forward for what is going to happen in Europe!
Awesome!
Hopefully it'll work out... >:3
Glad to hear it!
Episode 4 The Mountain Town Chapter 1
It's noon while Felix drives down the road in his police car, he quickly spots the air fried as he speeds down the road, he pulls into it and parks near the only plane on the runway. Felix climbs out of his car and stands next to it. Someone pokes their head out of the plane, it was Nick, he waves his hand at Felix before returning to the inside of the plane. Felix looked down the runway, the plane was at the very beginning of it, he quickly looked back at the plane as Nick pokes out of the door way again. "You coming?" Nick asks. "I'm here and I'm ready to go. After all, you still haven't told me how to found out where Lucas went. When do you plan on telling me that?" Felix replies. "Just get on the damn plane, we'll talk about it there." Nick answers, then steps back inside the plane.
Felix steps inside he finds someone he didn't know messing with the controls of the plane, that must be Brandon. Vincent and Nick were in the far back of the plane talking, Felix starts walking to them, but as they see him coming they stop talking. "Well, you gonna tell me how you figured it out?" Felix asks somewhat annoyed. "I went to Vincent's house and I found stuff that was written down that made it clear where he was going" Nick answers. "Why the hell didn't you tell me at my office, you just avoided the question then, why not now?" Felix replies. "Wasn't completely sure about it, but now I'm sure. Look, for now you can go talk with Brandon." Nick answers.
Felix leaves the back of the plane walking back to the fount, he finds Brandon sitting in the pilot's seat with headphones on, he looks at Felix then continues doing his own thing with the plane's controls. Felix stands behind him for a few seconds before making a fake cough. "You want something?" Brandon said with a annoyed tone while still messing with the dials and other buttons. "Yes. I thought i would introduce myself, I'm Officer Felix Davis. I'm assuming your Brandon." Felix Answers while Brandon reaches his hand out, Felix takes his hand and shakes, when Felix pulls his hand back he finds the palm of his hand covered he grime. Brandon smiles as Felix wipes his hand on his jeans getting rid of the grime. "Yep that's me." Brandon replies while grabbing a dirty cloth and using it to wipe his hands. "You asshole." Felix mutters while grabbing the cloth from Brandon.
Brandon wore a white suit and dress pants, it was very clean and well kept. Brandon had a smug look as Felix cleaned the grim off his hands, Felix tosses the dirty cloth back at Brandon and it hits his clean suit leaving the black grime. Brandon looks pissed as Felix returns to talk with Nick and Vincent. Brandon tries to follow him back the wire connecting the headphones to the plane stops him as the wire knocks some stuff off, he walks back to the mess to pick it up while mumbling cruse words under his breath. "When are we-" Felix is cut off by the sound of Brandon as he yells from the fount of the plane. "We'll be taking off the runway in just a few minutes, please don't fuck with anything, just sit in a seat until we get there." Brandon looked in the back of the plane impatiently waiting for everyone to get in a seat.
Felix sat alone on one side of the plane while Vincent and Nick sat single file on the same side of the plane, Felix set his head on the headrest of the seat and quickly falls asleep. He slowly awakens sometime later to find Nick putting a pill in his mouth, he swallows the pill with a bottle of water then looks at Felix. "Oh your awake, we're over...I don't know where the hell we are, but we haven't left the U.S yet." Felix says.
"I've never been a fun of flying, hopefully we'll get soon, i really hate flying...So...Do you know what time it is?" Felix asks.
"I'll check my watch." It was Vincent, he pulled up the sleeve of his shirt and look at the time. His face looks puzzled as he looks at the wristwatch.
"So what time is it?" Felix asks getting a little inpatient. "Just look!" Vincent shouts while standing up, he holds his hand out while Nick and Felix look. The hands on the clock are spinning out of control. "What the hell...is it broken?" Felix asks. "No, it's was working fine just a few minutes ago..." Vincent answers. "Fuck! Fuck, goddammit! Someone get over here, you! Felix, everyone else get in your seats!" Brandon shouts from the fount of the plane. Nick and Vincent get back in their seats and buckle up while Felix starts walking to the fount of the plane. As Felix walks there the left side of the plane turns down slightly, Felix starts running and reaches the fount, he find Brandon trying to hold the plane in one place as all of the dials and gauges spin out of control. "Fuck! Help me!" Brandon shouts while the plane slowly starts to face further down, Felix grabs the lever and helps keep it still as they continue to be forced down. They fly past a mountain barely missing it by about 30 feet. Then Felix spots something hidden past the mountain, a lake, but on the lake was a bridge, it looked big enough to land on, if they could make it.
[Land on the bridge]
[Try to stay in the air]
[Land on the bridge]
[Try to stay in the air]
Try to stay in the air
Land on the bridge.
[Land on the bridge]
Episode 4 Chapter 2
Felix and Brandon pull on the lever doing everything they can to keep it from crashing onto the ground or the lake. "Just keep it steady, we'll land on the bridge!" Brandon shouts while moves the lever trying to lineup with the bridge, Felix just does what he can to keep the plane from going out of control. Just as the plane is feet away from landing Felix feels a pain in his legs and lets go of the lever, the plane gets pulled to one side as it hits the railing of the bridge making Felix fly through the plane's front window while Brandon hits his head on the controls of the plane.
Felix flies out of the plane's window and lands on the lake, the coldness of the water hits as he starts swimming back up from the bottom of the lake he comes out gasping and shaking from the cold, he looks around the lake and spots a path that would hopefully lead back to the bridge, he starts swimming as fast as he can as he begins to lose feeling in some of his fingers. As he approaches the shore and the path that lead up he sees some sort of sewer leading into the the side of the hill. He climbs onto the shore and falls into the sand as he looks back at the plane, it looked like it wouldn't be able to get them out of here, but as he watches the plane from the shore, he saw small dots approach the plane from the other side of the bridge.
Felix looks at the path leading up the cliff, he started running before he felt a pain in his legs. He stops and sits on the ground, he pulls up the leg of his pants and looks at the makeshift casts he made for his legs, they weren't broken, but they were hurt badly from when he fell from the hospital's second story, he looks at the casts, they were dripping with water and soaked through. He looks at the surrounding area for something like a stick to help with walking. He used to walk up the path, as he walked he thought about what had just happened, everything in the plane, the controls and Vincent's watch were all spinning out of control, while the plane was forced into this valley, but where the hell did they crash. Then there was the people who came to the plane after it had crashed, maybe there was a town nearby. Felix thought about the whole walk back up the path until he reached the top.
The plane looked just as fucked as he did on the lake, the left wing hung over the edge of the bridge and the front of the plane was propped on the railing of the bridge, it wasn't going anywhere. Felix walked to the plane's doorway, it was wide open, he carefully stepped onto the plane and looked at the inside. Brandon wasn't in the front of the plane, but there was small amounts of blood on the controls of the plane. In the back of the plane there were a little signs of Nick, on the headrest of the sit in front of his, but the blood had to come from the impact when landing on the bridge. Vincent's seat had very few drops of blood, but the few drops lead to the very back of the plane where they put the suitcases.
Felix approaches the small door to the cargo compartment, the top edge of the door way had a small dent and a little bit of blood, someone might have hit their head on it while quickly getting into the cargo compartment. Felix reaches to open the door, inside he finds Vincent he has a large gash of his forehead and appears to have a concussion. "Vincent, what the hell happened to Nick and Brandon?!" Felix shouts.
Vincent acts as if he just saw Felix and reacts with a quiet yet stern voice. "Don't. Yell." Vincent grabs hold of Felix's hand and he pulls him up and helps him out of the compartment. Vincent starts walking to the front of the plane while holding his forehead. Vincent stopped and stood over what looked like a blood splatter on the wall. How did i miss that? Felix thought to himself.
"What the hell happened?" Felix said softly trying to stay quiet.
"After you went through the window and Brandon was knocked out some people started walking down from the path up ahead" Vincent pointed down the road past the bridge, the road lead on for a bit before turning. "There were about 5 people walking down from it and to there plane, Nick told me to find the first aid kit on the back, i climbed inside looking for it after hitting my head on the doorway, the door locked behind me and i couldn't get out." Vincent looked back at the door then the blood splatter.
"But do you know what happened to Nick and Brandon?" Felix asked while he spotted another blood splatter this time on the ground, he leaned to look at it, as Vincent continued to tell him what happened.
"I could see through the cracks on the doorway and saw Nick be approached by the people from up the road. They said something that sounded like they were speaking in Latin, I don't know Latin well enough to know what the were saying. But what ever it was made Nick react, maybe he knew what they said, but he tried to hit one of them with his cane. He didn't have time to do anything though, they slammed him on the wall and he fell there" Vincent pointed at the Blood splatter on the wall then the blood on the floor.
"What the fuck...Where did they take him?" Felix asked as he looked up the road.
"I don't know, i couldn't see where they went from inside the compartment. But my guess is back up the road. That's are best chance to find where Nick and Brandon were taken, but who the hell are these people?" Vincent asked while Felix looked down the road. "We'll going after them, right?" Vincent waited as Felix stared down the road.
"Yeah, we'll gonna show them a thing" Felix answered.
They start walking until the leave the bridge and the plane behind, they walk down the path for a bit. Felix thinks about how Lucas might be getting away right now, maybe there were going to be more murders when they got back to the home town. There was one thought in the back of Felix's mind, he wanted to ask Vincent about him, figure out what kind of person Lucas really was, and who Vincent was deep down. This thought remained with him for the next few minutes, until he finally let himself ask it. "I want to know about him, about Lucas"
"Well...What's there to say, he's a nice kid, was...But...He was always friendly to almost anyone, he liked listening, but he had trouble talkin' with people, he would always try to be nice, least that's how i saw it" Vincent answered with a somewhat sad voice.
"I heard there was a Ms. Harper, what happened to your wife?" Felix asked carefully to try to avoid anything he wouldn't want to talk about.
"My wife..." Vincent smiled. "She was kind, but it was my fault she left...I started drinking, heavily. I lost my job and later my marriage, she got custody of the kids and everything else, the house, but I'm not mad at her...It was my fault. I don't know where i would be if Lucas hadn't choose to stay with me. It felt like he pitied me...But we moved out to Minnesota, swore off drinking forever, and got a job for the high school. I never did keep the promise though...I've tried, but i always find myself in the bar again." Vincent stopped walking and looked at his shoes.
"You okay?" Felix asked.
"I bet...I bet it's my fault, what else could it be?" Vincent muttered.
"I don't think that's true, you weren't at the hospital...Lucas never said anything about that, nothing about it being your fault. But like i said you weren't there, Lucas...From what i could tell and from what he was talking about...This thing called the Remnant, he talked about it like it was something very real. If anything you should blame this Remnant. I...I...Almost hurt...Almost killed Lucas...Back at the hospital, i grabbed him by the neck and started choking him...If it wasn't for Sorcha...i would have killed him...but I promise you...I won't let him die, i won't do something like that again." Felix Waits in the road while Vincent continues to look down. Vincent places his hand on his face and wipes away a tears in his eyes.
"I don't know what to say...Just...Don't...Don't let him kill you, or anyone." Vincent takes a deep breath then continues walking down the road.
They approach the bend in the road and hug the edge of the woods, they start walking through the woods instead of the road. But this was the right choice, there was a man standing in front of a shed, he held a rifle and was dressed in something you would see a miner were, but the shed was what got Felix thinking, the man was guarding it with a rifle, maybe Nick and Brandon were in there, it made sense. Then only one choice was left to make, should he try to sneak around to the back on the shed and find a way in there from the back or try to take out the guard and enter from the front.
[Take out the guard and enter through the door]
[Sneak around the back of the shed and enter from there]
[Sneak around the back of the shed and enter from there]
Awesome Chapter!!!!!
Thank you!
[Sneak around the back of the shed and enter from there]
As always, that was a great chapter! I loved that Vincent got to do something
Also, Vincents little speech made me doubt everything I thought to know about Lucas, yet again. Maybe he really is in some way controlled by the Remnant, but not in the way I originally thought...