The resting place
I'm making a murder story.
To make a character:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Appearance:
Other info:
I've no setting so a setting suggestion would also be welcomed.
Characters: Jeff Neil, Philip Hoff, Melissa Johnson, Quinn Jefferson, Patrick Willows, Violet Jefferson, Elvira Montgomery, Steven Royald, Christine Morgan, Trevor Pattinson, Character submissions closed
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Name: Jeff Neil
Gender: Male
Personality: Serious, Kind to others, Caring
Appearance: About 6'0, Brown Hair, Green Eyes, Brown Leather Jacket, blue jeans,
Other Info: Likes a challenge.....
Thanks for the character!
Good Luck! Looking forward to it!
Name: Phillip Hoff.
Age: 25.
Gender: Male.
Personality: Smart, cool, smartass, funny, nice.
Appearance: Wears a leather jacket and jeans, with boots. About 5'8, blond hair, blue eye.
Other info: Jokes around a lot, makes a lot of funny jokes...
Thanks for the character!
No problem.
Thanks!
Name: Mellisa Johnson
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Personality: Agressive , Smart , Envy , Brave
Appearance: black long heddle hair , blue eyes , white skin , 5,9 feet tall
Other info: She´s a cop
Also the story will be set in a mansion in The country side
Also I would like to get 8-10 characters on here. And submissions will be closed as soon as I begin the story
Name: Quinn Jefferson
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Personality: Dumb , Total Bitch , Mean
Appearance: blonde long curly hair , blue eyes , white skin , 5,8 feet tall
Other info: She the daughter of the owner of the mansion
YAY
Thanks!
And I'll be making chapters daily. So I'll start today or tomorrow
Name: Patrick Willows
Age: 9
Gender: Male
Personality: Smart for his age , Thoughtful , Happy , Coward
Appearance: black short heddle hair , brown eyes , african-american , 3,8 feet tall ,
Other info: He´s homeless.
Thanks!
Yep
Thanks!
Name: Violet Jefferson
Age: 55
Gender: Female
Personality: Calm , Weak , Kind , Serious
Appearance: white short curly hair , green eyes , white skin , 5,1 feet tall
Other info: She´s the owner of the mansion
We just need 2 more people, guys.
And I'm gonna make the chapter today at 9:00 so last chance
Name: Elvira Montgomery
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Personality: Nervous , A Bit Crazy , Dumb , Emotional
Appearance: brown short curly hair , brown eyes , brown skin , 6.0 feet tall
Other info: She´s pregnant
Name: Steven Royald
Age: 44
Gender: Male
Personality: Smart , Badass , Not-Talkative , Agressive
Appearance: bald head , brown eyes , african-american , 6,4 feet tall
Other info: He´s the guard of the mansion
Name: Christine Morgan
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Personality: Dumb , Curious , Coward , Talkative , Sarcastic
Appearance: red short heddle hair , green eyes , white skin , 5,7 feet tall
Other info: She´s the butler
Name: Trevor Pattinson
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Personality: Shy , Nervous , Dumb , Talkative
Appearance: brown short heddle hair , blue eyes , white skin , 6,1 feet tall
Other info: He´s a thief
Thanks!
Thanks!
Thanks!
So, change of plans. Part 1 is coming out today.
Thanks!
So I was going to wait for more people to join, but I'm bored.
The resting place part 1
Jeff Niel
So I was invited to a Party at the Jefferson's mansion. I got there, and there were 7 other people. So I went to talk to them.
Jeff: So... What's your name?
Guy: Philip Hoff.
Jeff: You know the Jeffersons?
Philip: Yeah.
Jeff: Huh.
Philip: So, this is gonna be fun.
Jeff: Yep.
Then I walked over to the cop
Jeff: Hey.
Cop: ...Hi...
Jeff: What's your name?
Cop: Melissa Johnson.
Jeff: Oh, I'm Jeff Niel.
Then the door opens.
Quinn Jefferson: Come on in, you looneys.
Then they all walk in, to where Violet Jefferson was standing.
Violet: Hello. Thank you for coming to the mansion, Trevor Pattinson, Elvira Montgomery, Patrick Willows, Melissa Johnson, Philip Hoff and Jeff Niel. And Christine Morgan and Steven Royald. Today is my birthday. And I wanted to celebrate it with you all. Come along now.
Then the man I think is Trevor is walking, then something falls out of his pocket.
Trevor: Shit!!
Jeff: Wha-
Then a gunshot is heard in the room next to them. Melissa drew her gun and Steven Leveled his rifle.
Melissa: Stay there. I'm gonna go check it out.
Then she walked over and opened the door
(No choice this part)
Tell me what you guys think!
It's great!
Great!!
Thanks!
Good Job!
So... Here's part 2
The resting place part 2
Melissa Johnson: Stay there. I'm gonna go check it out.
Then she walks over to the door which was slightly open.
Melissa: This is the police. Come out with yo-
Then she opens the door and a huge rock comes down on her head and crushes her skull. Half of the guests stare, and the other half start screaming. Patrick starts crying.
Philip: ...Holy SHIT...
Quinn: Who put the rock there?
Elvira: And who fired the gun?
Steven lowered his rifle and goes into the room. Philip and Jeff follow. They walk into an empty room. There were no bullet holes and no gun.
Philip: ...Is this paranormal activity or what?
Steven: No. Ghosts don't exist.
Philip: Well, I happen to believe in ghostbusters.
Then Jeff notices a crack in the wall. He walked toward it. He opens it up and see's a gun and a string attached to a timer.
Jeff: GUUUUUUYS?
Philip: What?
Then they walk over and see the gun
Steven: What happened?
Jeff: Soooo, I guess the killer- 'Cause we all know that's the reason, cause no one accidentally puts a huge rock on a door and hides a gun.
Philip: Or do they?
Jeff: No.
Then Philip get's the gun and looks at the ammo.
Philip: It's full of blanks.
Jeff: So, the killer probably loaded it with blanks to guarantee that The 1 of the 2 authority figures- Steven and Melissa- go to it and one of them are eliminated.
Steven: Now what?
Jeff: Get the hell out of here or Investigate further
Who do you think is the killer, who do think will die next?