Midnight Hollow (Interactive story) CHARACTER SUBMITTING OPEN FOR BONUS EPISODES

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  • Rip Percy

    You were awesome. You were a good......well you were sorta bad maybe it was kinda really ambiguos . But anyway you were cool and i really liked you. But i was afraid and i went with the choice i thought would save you im so sorry Percy :'(. I am so certain you're dead :'( im sorry.

    1. Percy
    2. Hope
    3. Barry.... The bastard
    4. Don
    5. The superhuman story sounds cool.
    6. ep4
    7. Lucius
    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Due to the final episode 4 chapter have lots of twists I have decided to release the traditional questionaire now. 1) Who do you think wi

  • The chapter should come out sometime today.

  • :( goodbye Percy i hardly knew ye.

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    The chapter should come out sometime today.

    1. Whiskers
    2. Percy
    3. Amy
    4. Percy
    5. Superhero
    6. The eclispe
    7. Judyn
    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Due to the final episode 4 chapter have lots of twists I have decided to release the traditional questionaire now. 1) Who do you think wi

  • WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM WITH PERCY i help you and this is the thanks i get ....:(

    supersagig posted: »

    * Whiskers * Percy * Amy * Percy * Superhero * The eclispe * Judyn

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    Midnight Hollow Episode 4: The Eclipse Chapter 8

    The Old Abandoned Castle

    The army of black cat clones began enlarging. Their claws began extending into thick knife-like silver claws that scraped away at Don's wolf flesh. Don howled in pain as glowing, blood-red pentagrams began pulsating on Whiskers' bony back. A large hole slowly appeared on his fur. Blood drooled out of it. The Whiskers clones began howling in pain as their skin tore apart, revealing spiked, hairy flesh tattooed in the same glowing pentagrams. A white patch was now visible on Whiskers' torso.

    "I am Cat Sith!" the demon screamed.

    A parade of white light exploded throughout the room. Laying on the ground was the original, friendly fun-loving cat who had been possessed by the demon.

    "Whiskers! No!" Hope screamed.

    Hope began writhing on the ground, tossing and turning. He dragged himself up and revealed an evil smile.

    The Cat Sith demons ripped though Don's body, tearing out his organs. Don yelped in pain and fell to the ground, morphing back into his human form. Don Lunar was dead. The Cat Siths feasted on his bleeding body. Barry's new pack were prying the demon cats from their new master and ripping their heads off. Hope had had enough. He unsheathed the silver sword from the holster next to his throne. Hope leapt up into the air, greatsword in hand and drove into Barry's stomach. Barry Cold howled in pain and fell to the ground.

    The Cat Siths and the werewolves stopped fighting so they could see a lake of blood emerge from the wound of the town's only remaining alpha werewolf. Barry's body twisted and compressed itself until it appeared as a human being once more.

    Barry was not moving.

    Hope sniggered as he crawled up to his cauldron. He smacked the edge of the cauldron hard with the tip of the blade that had fatally wounded Barry Cold, the son of a werewolf and a genie. Drops of scarlet red blood (that despite being of a werewolf, would make any vampire's mouth water) dripped from the killing device's tip. The steaming purple liquid in the cauldron exploded into vibrant colours as the werewolf blood met it.

    Barry opened his eyes and clutched at the hole in chest. He knew that he was dying. Blood spewed out of his wound. His chest was wet and stained with his own blood. Barry wanted his demise to come quicker so that he could avoid the agony that was burning him. But he grasped his wound so that he could do one final task.

    Barry pulled out a pistol from a holster that had been strapped to his leg. Thankfully it had survived Barry’s transformation. He took a deep breath and aimed the weapon at Hope’s silver collar. He squeezed the trigger tightly. A loud bang echoed throughout the room as a single bullet raced towards Hope Kat.

    The bullet collided with Hope’s collar, bursting through it like a knife through a chunk of meat. The bullet pierced into Hope’s trachea. A fountain of blood spewed out of the bullet wound as the collar span into the bubbling cauldron. Hope fell from his throne and his bleeding body made a wet, crunching sound as it splattered onto the concrete below.

    Barry managed to triumphantly smile before letting out a distorted grunt and having the life slip away from him.

    “Hope, no!” screamed Orma Greenlef as she ran to the dying body of her only friend in the world. She held him in her arms as Hope tried to form speech, but was only heard as deathly chokes and gargles.

    The cauldron exploded into a sky of green light and a large black fog monster zipped past the cat demons and werewolves and into the night.

    “I w-was p-possessed” Hope finally managed to choke out before his eyes closed and the life left him.

    END OF EPISODE 4


    NEXT TIME ON MIDNIGHT HOLLOW


    Mayor Ghastly: We are here today to mourn the loss of Lucius Grigorov.


    Female Genie: You are going to pay for everything you've done Ramsay Wolfson.


    Percy: This demon that is hiding within the town can shapeshift and could be anyone of us...

    MIDNIGHT HOLLOW EPISODE 5: MASTER OF DISGUISE COMING SOON

  • SO Percy....lived .......:):):):):):):):):):9'(:(:)-9:);(:(;9:(;);(;+?)!;);(;);(!+!(:!(:((;):)'):) HAPPPYNEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS OVERLOAAAAAAADDDDDDD

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 4: The Eclipse Chapter 8 The Old Abandoned Castle The army of black cat clones began enlarging. Their claws be

  • There's still episode 5...

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    SO Percy....lived .......:):):):):):):):):):9'(:(:)-9:);(:(;9:(;);(;+?)!;);(;);(!+!(:!(:((;):)'):) HAPPPYNEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS OVERLOAAAAAAADDDDDDD

  • Whoa.... now that was unexpected! Great part, probably my favourite part in my favourite episode so far.

    Sad to see Barry go... and oddly sad to see Hope go, seeing how he was possessed. I definitely did not see these two coming. But at least Hope died as himself and Barry went out with an awesome death.

    For now I'm very happy that Amy survived. And for some odd reason, given that Barry and the always enjoyable Hope Kat are gone, Percy is now my second favourite character. I'm excited for what his involvement in all of this is and definitely look forward for Episode 5

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 4: The Eclipse Chapter 8 The Old Abandoned Castle The army of black cat clones began enlarging. Their claws be

  • .........:( man just let me enjoy this for now.

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    There's still episode 5...

  • edited February 2015

    :) thanks i appreciate you enjoy my guy and i really want to find out his deal too (wich is weird since hes my guy).

    Whoa.... now that was unexpected! Great part, probably my favourite part in my favourite episode so far. Sad to see Barry go... and oddly

  • I just don´t like him. He left Lucius and the others to deal with Don on their own

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM WITH PERCY i help you and this is the thanks i get ....:(

  • And they did....your point

    supersagig posted: »

    I just don´t like him. He left Lucius and the others to deal with Don on their own

  • Excellent Chapter!!!

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 4: The Eclipse Chapter 8 The Old Abandoned Castle The army of black cat clones began enlarging. Their claws be

  • D:

    Rest is peace, Hope Kat. Not what I was expecting, like, at all, but I loved it! Amazing twist! I can sure as hell say that's not what I thought was behind it, but I'm happy with Hope's death, though it's sad to see him go, at least he died himself, like Liquid said. But I look forward to the climax of this amazing story!

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 4: The Eclipse Chapter 8 The Old Abandoned Castle The army of black cat clones began enlarging. Their claws be

  • End of episode questions:

    1) Were you surprised by Hope's death?

    2) What is your opinion on Hope's death?

    3) Who do you think will die next?

    4) Favourite episode so far?

    5) What are you looking forward to the most in the season finale?

    6) How do you think Percy survived the encounter with Cat Sith?

    7) Saddest character death?

    8) Most brutal character death?

    9) Who do you think the female genie in the episode 5 teaser is?

    10) Least favourite episode? Give reasons.

    1. Yes, a lot.
    2. Well, I'm a little sad he died and as it turned out, he was possessed.
    3. I've still got no idea.
    4. I'm gonna say Episode 3 again.
    5. I'm looking forward to it, I don't really know how it'll go.
    6. It could go both ways.
    7. Lucius' death was pretty sad. Hope's was also sad, but not the same way.
    8. The Don's death by far.
    9. I got no clue.
    10. Hmm... I'm gonna say Episode 1, not that it was bad, but it continued to improve from that, getting even better each chapter. I still really enjoyed it though.
    TheFurryOne posted: »

    End of episode questions: 1) Were you surprised by Hope's death? 2) What is your opinion on Hope's death? 3) Who do you think will

  • edited February 2015

    1. Yes, I did not see it coming at all

    2. It was a shocking twist and made it quite sad. At least he died as himself, but to be honest, that makes it even sadder

    3. After that finale? No idea. Though the list of alive (or at least not dead) people is pretty small right now. I think somewhere during the course of the Episode, Ramsay might bite it, but I wouldn't be too surprised if he is not the next to die

    4. Episode 4. The story had some of it's best twists in there. I also loved that the chapters got longer after the rather short Episode 3. And Amy coming back of course, I liked that a lot :D

    5. I'd say, pretty much everything. First I'm looking forward for the funeral

    6. Either he got very lucky or he is possessed now. Though I could also see the possibility of him being the one behind all of this and secretly controlling the demon

    7. Gotta say Lucius. After all he's gone through, he never found out that he succeeded in saving his daughter. Hope and Jack share the second place, for snapping out of their possession in the last moment

    8. Don being teared apart alive was very brutal. Lucius getting continually more and severe wounds over the course of a whole episode wasn't that soft either

    9. It could be Brail, seeing how she was last seen barely alive. But... writing this I realized it could also be Barry's mother

    10. It is Episode 1, for the same reason as Hope said. I liked it a lot, but you continually improved with the later episodes

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    End of episode questions: 1) Were you surprised by Hope's death? 2) What is your opinion on Hope's death? 3) Who do you think will

    1. Yes
    2. Sad u.u
    3. Alexander
    4. 3
    5. I just looking towards it
    6. HE IS EVIL
    7. Amy
    8. Lucius
    9. Brail
    10. 1 Cause everyone chapter was better
    TheFurryOne posted: »

    End of episode questions: 1) Were you surprised by Hope's death? 2) What is your opinion on Hope's death? 3) Who do you think will

  • Episode 5 starts on Sunday.

  • Ok cool :)

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Episode 5 starts on Sunday.

  • Decided to release it early :D


    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 1

    Midnight Hollow Graveyard

    The remains of Lucius Grigorov were gently laid on the slab. Amalia Grigorov, Mayor Ghastly and several of Lucius' colleagues had shown up at the funeral. They hadn't had time to make Lucius look decent. The burnt, gore-encrusted windpipe was visible, the crispy flesh from the werecat blood burns was still plastered on his face. He was wearing the same suit that he had died in. Amalia heard footsteps and saw that a man in a suit with crutches was limping towards the funeral site.

    "Did you know my father?" asked Amalia.

    When she got a better look at his face she noticed it was bruised and battered.

    "My name is Larry Stain and I didn't know your father all that well, but I figured I should pay my respects" Larry grunted. "I also really needed some fresh air after the events of the eclipse".

    "What happened to you?" asked Amalia.

    "Some vampire shot me in the leg with a silver bullet and now I'm kind of crippled for life" said Larry.

    "Should we begin the cremation Miss Grigorov?" questioned the town's not seen very often Mayor Ghastly.

    "Y-yes" Amalia managed to say whilst holding back her tears.

    Amalia picked up a burning torch and gently waved the torch onto the slab. Lucius Grigorov's corpse burst into flames.

    "Goodbye, father" Amalia whimpered.


    Percival Ronan

    Percy's eyes cracked open. He cold, naked and wounded. He looked around and saw all of the Whiskers' clones were gone.

    "How the fuck did I survive that?" Percy breathed.

    He tried to remember what had happened. He had ran into the lillies but Whiskers had tore right through and swallowed the Percy mouse whole. Percy then remembered shape-shifting into a giant dragon, bursting through Whiskers' chest and setting the place alight.


    Orma Greenlef

    Orma looked down at what she was carrying in her arms. The dead body of her best friend Hope Kat was wrapped in his favourite blue, fluffy blanket. He would have looked peaceful if it were not for the hole in his throat. Orma swept the warm tears away from her face and looked through the photobook of pictures of Hope as a kitten. The bright, blue eyes of the mischievous kitten was the feature that stood out the most. The town hall had refused Hope a proper funeral as they still believed him to be the culprit, so she decided to run her own funeral. She had crafted a small blue coffin with pictures of cute animals on; in the coffin was Hope's little brother Whiskers, who had been possessed by the demon Cat Sith and eventually left Whiskers lifeless when the demon regained it's own body. Whiskers was wrapped in a yellow blanket with ducklings on them. She gently placed the corpse of Hope next to Whiskers and dropped Hope's treasured catnip mouse in it with him. He couldn't sleep without it. Whatever the thing that caused Hope's death was, Orma was going to find it... and kill it.


    Ramsay Wolfson

    Ramsay looked at the gravestone with the name "Barry Cold" scrawled onto it. Ramsay was the only one who had came to his son's funeral. No one else knew him enough. Ramsay placed a worn out teddy bear that he had found in Barry's personal belongings next to the grave. He had buried Barry in the woods so he wouldn't blend in with the other gravestones. He wiped the tears off his face and turned around to leave when two silver bullets were fired into his kneecaps. He yelped in pain as he fell to the ground. He knees were bleeding like crazy. He looked up to see a female genie looming above.

    "Who are you?!" Ramsay cried.

    "My name is Brail Tellince and you are going to get away from my son's gravestone and then I'll sort out" Brail sneered.

    Ramsay dragged himself a few metres away from his son's grave.

    "You're going to pay for everything you've done you monster" Brail hissed.

    "I- I'm sorry for what I did to you Brail, but I want to turn over a new leaf, please give me a chance" Ramsay begged.

    [Kill him now]

    [Let him have a trial]

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    That funeral scene and Ormas PoV were sad :(

    [Let him have a trial]

    They can still kill him after hearing his side of the story. And seeing how one silver bullet kinda crippled Larry (well-deserved for what he did to Amy by the way. Glad that he didn't get out of this unscathed) two bullets will probably ensure Ramsays cooperation.

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Decided to release it early Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 1 Midnight Hollow Graveyard The remains of Luc

  • Cool part bro :)

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Decided to release it early Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 1 Midnight Hollow Graveyard The remains of Luc

  • [Let him have a trial]

    Awesome Chapter!!!

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Decided to release it early Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 1 Midnight Hollow Graveyard The remains of Luc

  • [Let him have a trial]

    That was really sad. :'c

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Decided to release it early Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 1 Midnight Hollow Graveyard The remains of Luc

  • I'm going to make the superhuman story thread now.

    I've decided to rename it as "The Hunters of Oblivion".

  • Kill him now

    My account has unfollowed some threads for some reason so I haven't been voting because of that :S

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Decided to release it early Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 1 Midnight Hollow Graveyard The remains of Luc

  • Voting closed!

    Ramsay will get a trial!

  • edited February 2015

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 2

    Percival Ronan

    As Percy wrapped the black coat around he heard a sudden smashing noise. An ancient demon was loose on the town and in hiding. Percy withdrew the long, sharp silver broadsword that he had recovered from the old abandoned castle. His heart thumped against his chest as he looked around the room. He slowly crept towards the room that the noise had emanated from. He clasped his hand around the doorknob and twisted it. He was then greeted with a loud, fiery explosion that sent Percy flying backwards. The silver sword had fallen out of reach attempted to drag himself up. He then saw a large, shadowy figure looming around the flames, and moving towards him. He tried to pull himself up using a fallen chair but realised he leg was stuck in a hole in wall.

    "FUCK, FUCK, FUCK, FUUUUUUUUUUCK!" Percy bellowed.

    Percy then heard a voice that would give even dragons goosebumps. The voice was like several voices speaking all at once. There was a deep, demonic voice that made to furniture vibrate, a hoarse, raspy voice and a ghostly, echoing high voice.

    "Mind your language, sorcerer" it said. It spoke in the calmest voice tones but still managed to make Percy's ears ring.

    "What are you and why are you doing this?" Percy cried.

    Percy then saw the creature in it's natural, true form; not the Hope Kat form, not the Robin Lampley form and not the black fog creature it assumed quite often.

    The Creature was over 11ft tall, it's flesh was decayed and a blood red colour, it's face looked like at had been stuck on as it looked almost like a human face except the eyes were bloodshot with the iris being yellow on the inside and red on the outside with the pupil being similar to dragon's pupil, it's teeth were long, yellow and shark-like with several rows of them that could tear through any wild beast's flesh. The Creature had several glowing red crystals sticking out of it's head. It's main body was like rotten and revealed the bones several beating organs.

    "Who are you?" Percy questioned, his heart beating so fast that he struggled to breathe.

    "My name is Diablus, and I have been locked in a contraption known as Pandora's Box for hundreds of centuries" it roared.

    [Try to negotiate]

    [Beg for your life]

    [Reach for the sword]

    [Try to transform into a dragon]

    [Try to transform into a mouse to escape through the hole in the wall]

  • [Try to transform into a mouse to escape through the hole in the wall]

    Awesome Chapter!!!!

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 2 Percival Ronan As Percy wrapped the black coat around he heard a sudden smashi

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    [Try to transform into a mouse to escape through the hole in the wall]

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 2 Percival Ronan As Percy wrapped the black coat around he heard a sudden smashi

  • O god pandoras box......are you serious........wow really good twist :)

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 2 Percival Ronan As Percy wrapped the black coat around he heard a sudden smashi

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    [Try to transform into a mouse to escape through the hole in the wall]

    Damn... I like Percy, I really do. But I have the bad feeling that if he tries to negotiate, he will end up working together with the demon and that could make things very bad for the remaining good guys. They could use Percy on their side and most of them had it bad enough already. And if he does not negotiate, I think his chances are the best when he tries to escape. Fighting is a bad idea, even when he can transform into a badass dragon.

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 2 Percival Ronan As Percy wrapped the black coat around he heard a sudden smashi

  • [Try to transform into a mouse to escape through the hole in the wall]

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 2 Percival Ronan As Percy wrapped the black coat around he heard a sudden smashi

  • Voting closed!

    Percy will try to transform into a mouse!

  • Alternate choices- Episode 1 Part 1

    [Dignity]- This would have lead to Larry passing out from the cold and either being found unconscious by Norman or Stan.

    [Decline the offer]- This would have pissed Hope off and Hope would have told Ramsay that Barry was responsible for the murder and not that he was Ramsay's son.

    [Investigate the blood trail]- This would have led to a passed out Larry or a conscious Larry but because he was covered in blood Larry would have been arrested. Stan would have gotten burned by the black liquid and would have died because of him being a normal human.

    [Run]- If Larry had ran away from Stan he would have eventually ran into Norman near the black liquid, on the ground with his hand burning away.

    [Bribe Stan]- Larry would have attempted to bribe Stan into leaving him alone but Stan would have refused and they would have gotten into a fight, knocking Stan back into the road nearby.

    If Norman followed the blood trail there would be 3 choices for Larry after being found unconscious or conscious: [Run]- Larry would have tried to escape Norman but would ultimately fail and been arrested, [Bribe Norman]- Larry would have tried to promise Norman money if he would leave him alone but Norman would refuse, beat him up and arrest him, instead of a punch Norman option there would have been [Let yourself be arrested]- Norman would arrest Larry and he would be taken to the station.

  • Alternate choices: Midnight Hollow Episode 1 Part 2

    [Cry for help]- This would have lead to Norman crying in pain on the ground, shouting for help. He would eventually have been found by Percy and taken to his house to get treatment.

    [Go into wolf form]- This would have lead to Norman attempting to morph into his half-wolf form, but he would have failed and passed out, eventually being found by Barry covered in blood. Barry would have used a potion in his pocket the heal Norman, but Norman would attempt to arrest him.Then the [Run] and [Explain what happened] choices would have appeared.

    [Leave Stan]- This would lead to Larry leaving Stan to get crushed by the approaching vehicles, but due to the green explosion he would have been crushed by a bus and knocked out.

    [Run]- Barry would have tried to run away from Norman but would have tripped over the body of Odessa/Stan or a rock if Barry had healed Norman.

    If Norman followed the blood trail he would have found Barry next to Stan's corpse and would have thought Barry killed him and then the [Run] and [Explain] choices would have popped up again.

    If Hope's offer was declined then Ramsay would have appeared at the police station to question Barry, but would have not known that he was his son. Barry would asked Norman to see him as opposed to collect him and Norman would allow him to enter the prison cell. After Ramsay sees Barry, he instantly knows that he is his son and would have then asked Norman to take him. Norman would have refused and then been murdered by Ramsay. However, if Larry had been taken to the cells when found by Norman in the woods, Ramsay would have killed him too.

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