Who are your top three favorite characters and your reasons for liking them. Who are your least favorite characters and your reasons for disliking them.
He is the only one of your characters who i can honestly say is an idiot. Hell his University scores probably looked like this:
Laws: May… moreored ( Knows how to make the most stupid arguments sound good)
Military leadership: Failed ( This guy makes Benedict Arnold sound like a better strategist)
Doctorate: Failed ( He makes people WORSE)
Normal English: C minus ( Barely passesd his class by one point which may have been a typing error)
I'm just going to pick at your brain for a bit.
Who are your top three favorite characters and your reasons for liking them. Who are your least favorite characters and your reasons for disliking them.
Memories 1-22
Desmond- I say Shouna, Katherine, and Henry.
James- That sounds good.
Henry- But Leon put me in charge.
Desmond- H… moree did but we need you all safe. We can make this mission, you all need to stay safe.
Henry- But my plans.
Desmond- Your plans are good but we need you all back safe and sound, you all can get in there okay.
Henry- Alright, well what do we do about Infected Amiela?
Desmond- Let her come with us.
Jamie- That's pretty risky, I could still just...Snip her head off or better yet her arm.
Amiela- Like I said, stay the fuck away from me.
Desmond- We don't know if that will even work and we don't have any way to fix her up after it.
Amiela- I can make it, I can help.
Henry- Alright...Well, Desmond since you seem to be calling the shots now, I put you in charge.
William- Really? He's a teenager!
Henry- I don't know you all from Jack. Desmond is in charge. Final say.
William- Fin… [view original content]
I'm just going to pick at your brain for a bit.
Who are your top three favorite characters and your reasons for liking them. Who are your least favorite characters and your reasons for disliking them.
Favvorites in non specific order (So far)
1 Jessie : I think no explination is needed
2 Desmond: I think hes really cool.
3 Amelia:… more Yes i know shes dying but shes just so badass
Least Favorites in VERY specific order (So far):
Henry: i just think hes an absolute idiot. Im sorry but that plan he had i quite possibly the WORST idea in this scenario.
Jonh: Chose Henry as team leader. Also its my personal opinion that he will go power hungry and become a dictator.
Shouna: She hasent done anything defining yet. But considering your writting shell be off this list soon.
I'm just going to pick at your brain for a bit.
Who are your top three favorite characters and your reasons for liking them. Who are your least favorite characters and your reasons for disliking them.
Desmond- Let's go around back, see if there's an opening, and go in.
James is at the side of the roof with his rifle pointed at the Police Station. Jamie is blocking the door. Desmond, William, Michael, and Amiela gather their weapons. Desmond grabs his pistol, William takes one of the spare pistols, Michael grabs his shotgun, and Amiela takes the sword.
Desmond- Hey...Amiela, are you sure you're up for this?
Amiela- I'm already dead, hell, we could've cut it off but none of us thought about that and it's already too late now.
Jamie- It might not be...
Amiela- You just want to cut something. No, it's too late, I'm already feeling it. Well, might as well take a few assholes with me.
Desmond- That's very brave.
Amiela- Quit with the sob shit, let's go.
James- Guys! They're talking to the people in the parking lot. They might start executing soon.
William- Let's move quickly then.
Desmond, Amiela, Michael, and William all run down the fire escape and through the shadows to the back of the Police Station. There's a hole in the gate and they sqeeze through. The group moves to a wall and watches the scene. There's four Police Officers and three prisoners tied up in the Parking lot with seven Reapers, the gang members, in there with Assault Rifles and other various weapons.
Reaper- So, what do you all say? We get all this stuff and you live, or you die and we take it anyway?
One of the Prisoners spits on his shoes.
Prisoner- Go fuck yourself.
Reaper- Hmm...
The Reaper shoots the Prisoner in the head.
Reaper- Any one want to talk now?...No?...Lets see if you all care more about your Officers than your Prisoners.
The Reaper shoots one of the Officers in the head.
Reaper- Still no? I can keep this up all night.
Michael- Motherfucker...We can't allow this.
Amiela- I didn't come to watch more people die...
Michael- Me neither.
Michael runs out and blasts the Executioner in the head. Amiela then runs out and stabs another one. William goes out shooting and so does Desmond. A rifle blast kills another Reaper. Desmond soon runs over and starts cutting the Officers free. They all run and start attacking the Reapers. Another Officer gets shot and the Reapers start dying one by one. One of them takes cover behind and Cop Car.
Reaper- Everyone stop! This is attracting Criers! We'll all die!
Suddenly Criers climb over the walls and kill the Reaper. Both the Reapers and the Runners shoot at the Criers. The Criers kill the last Reapers and then one runs over and grabs William. It bites down heavily on his arm and William screams out in pain. Amiela runs over and cuts off Williams arm with a single slah and then grabs the Crier and snaps his neck.
Officer- Hurry! Get inside!
Amiela runs towards the doors with the Officers. The Officers grab the still tied up Prisoners and unlock the door. Desmond and Michael grab William and get him in while he's still bleeding out. Everyone gets in and then the Officers close the doors and then close the gate which stops the Criers from breaking in. One of the Officers escort the two surviving Prisoners to cells in the back, Desmond and Michael follow the other Officer's orders and gets William to a small infirmary in the back. Amiela sits down when a strange man walks into the hallway. She grabs the sword and prepares to kill him before he screams.
???- PLEASE, DON'T KILL ME, I'M WITH THE POLICE.
Amiela starts swinging and everyone runs back into the hallway. Everyone stops when they see Dr.Freeman who fell on the ground trying to get away from Amiela. The Officer quickly stops Amiela and sits her down.
Desmond- Dr.Freeman?!
Freeman- Desmond?!
Desmond- Holy shit, what's going on?
Officer- Everyone calm down! First off, I'm Officer Zachary. The highest ranking officer here.
Officer- And I'm Officer Shawn. We are the last surviving Officers of this Station. This man was one we saved the first night. He said he was a doctor and we got him to work on some of our wounded. None of them made it...
Desmond- He's not a real doctor.
Freeman- I actually am...I just worked in the school before this. I did go to Medical College and I know how to do anything a doctor working in a hospital knows how to do. I just went back for a teaching degree and well there I was.
Michael- Thank God! We have a wounded man in the back!
Freeman- Show me.
Michael shows Dr.Freeman to the back where William is.
Memories 1-23
Desmond- Let's go around back, see if there's an opening, and go in.
James is at the side of the roof with his rifle poi… morented at the Police Station. Jamie is blocking the door. Desmond, William, Michael, and Amiela gather their weapons. Desmond grabs his pistol, William takes one of the spare pistols, Michael grabs his shotgun, and Amiela takes the sword.
Desmond- Hey...Amiela, are you sure you're up for this?
Amiela- I'm already dead, hell, we could've cut it off but none of us thought about that and it's already too late now.
Jamie- It might not be...
Amiela- You just want to cut something. No, it's too late, I'm already feeling it. Well, might as well take a few assholes with me.
Desmond- That's very brave.
Amiela- Quit with the sob shit, let's go.
James- Guys! They're talking to the people in the parking lot. They might start executing soon.
William- Let's move quickly then.
Desmond, Amiela, M… [view original content]
Memories 1-23
Desmond- Let's go around back, see if there's an opening, and go in.
James is at the side of the roof with his rifle poi… morented at the Police Station. Jamie is blocking the door. Desmond, William, Michael, and Amiela gather their weapons. Desmond grabs his pistol, William takes one of the spare pistols, Michael grabs his shotgun, and Amiela takes the sword.
Desmond- Hey...Amiela, are you sure you're up for this?
Amiela- I'm already dead, hell, we could've cut it off but none of us thought about that and it's already too late now.
Jamie- It might not be...
Amiela- You just want to cut something. No, it's too late, I'm already feeling it. Well, might as well take a few assholes with me.
Desmond- That's very brave.
Amiela- Quit with the sob shit, let's go.
James- Guys! They're talking to the people in the parking lot. They might start executing soon.
William- Let's move quickly then.
Desmond, Amiela, M… [view original content]
Memories 1-23
Desmond- Let's go around back, see if there's an opening, and go in.
James is at the side of the roof with his rifle poi… morented at the Police Station. Jamie is blocking the door. Desmond, William, Michael, and Amiela gather their weapons. Desmond grabs his pistol, William takes one of the spare pistols, Michael grabs his shotgun, and Amiela takes the sword.
Desmond- Hey...Amiela, are you sure you're up for this?
Amiela- I'm already dead, hell, we could've cut it off but none of us thought about that and it's already too late now.
Jamie- It might not be...
Amiela- You just want to cut something. No, it's too late, I'm already feeling it. Well, might as well take a few assholes with me.
Desmond- That's very brave.
Amiela- Quit with the sob shit, let's go.
James- Guys! They're talking to the people in the parking lot. They might start executing soon.
William- Let's move quickly then.
Desmond, Amiela, M… [view original content]
Desmond- I'm Desmond, we're Runners from the Safe Zone.
Zachary- There's lots, you got to be specific.
Desmond- I thought all the others fell.
Zachary- Most did...You must be talking about the school, which is the closest. Well, that's great. We were planning to move to the Safe Zone.
Desmond- That's great, this place probably has a lot we can take.
Zachary- But first...Let's talk.
Zachary escorts Desmond into a different room while Shawn watches Amiela and Michael. It's a dark room which was once a room for meetings. Zachary sits down and so does Desmond.
Zachary- So...Tell me about the situation. Your people, your Safe Zone, all of it.
Desmond- Why?
Zachary- I need to make sure it's safe, espically the people we're with.
Desmond- Alright. We have me, Michael, Amiela, and William here...Also a few outside.
Zachary- They're in danger then.
Desmond- They're safe for now. Anyway, me and William are healthy. Amiela is...Sick and William doesn't have an arm.
Zachary- Sick?...Is she bitten?
Desmond- No.
Zachary- You're fucking lying to me.
Desmond- She's not, I swear.
Zachary- Kid, I'm a god damn cop, you're telling me that if I walk out there and look all over her for bites that i won't find any?
Desmond- Fine...She is.
Zachary-...Fuck...Listen kid, we need to lock her up or something.
Desmond- Fine, lock her up.
Zachary- Now, your Safe Zone, is it safe?
Desmond- Yes.
Zachary- I believe you. We'll stay here tonight, we will gather everything here tomorrow morning and take the squad cars to this Safe Zone.
Desmond- That brings questions of my own.
Zachary- Excuse me?
Desmond- You asked me, now I ask you.
Zachary- Fine. You already met me and Shawn, Officer Daniel died out there along with Prisoner Alex. We have two prisoners in the back locked up, they're Chad and Walter. They're assholes.
Desmond- What are they in for?
Zachary- Walt is in for Murder and Bulgary. Chad is in for Murder, counterfeit, blackmail, and robbery.
Desmond- Hmm...That complicates things.
Zachary- How?
Desmond- I don't know if we should take them to the Safe Zone.
Zachary- I don't either. You are the leader here right? I guess it's your choice.
Desmond- First, let me ask a few more things. How much medicine and other things do you have here?
Zachary- Multiple assasult rifles, shotguns, pistols, riot shields, medicine, ammo, and other various shit laying around. We got 5 Sqaud Cars which hold four people comfortably.
Desmond- Counting everyone, we have like eleven people here. We have enough.
Zachary- Then we should take all of them. Split people up.
Desmond- Good idea.
Zachary- Now before I go lock up your friend in the back, find you guys places to sleep, and prepare for tomorrow morning...Plus go grab your friends from outside where ever they are...Are the two prisoners coming with us?
Choice
[Bring the Prisoners with them to the Safe Zone]
[Leave the Prisoners locked up in the Police Station]
[Let the Prioners free but don't let them come to the Safe Zone]
Memories 1-24
Zachary- So who the hell are you people?
Desmond- I'm Desmond, we're Runners from the Safe Zone.
Zachary- There's lot… mores, you got to be specific.
Desmond- I thought all the others fell.
Zachary- Most did...You must be talking about the school, which is the closest. Well, that's great. We were planning to move to the Safe Zone.
Desmond- That's great, this place probably has a lot we can take.
Zachary- But first...Let's talk.
Zachary escorts Desmond into a different room while Shawn watches Amiela and Michael. It's a dark room which was once a room for meetings. Zachary sits down and so does Desmond.
Zachary- So...Tell me about the situation. Your people, your Safe Zone, all of it.
Desmond- Why?
Zachary- I need to make sure it's safe, espically the people we're with.
Desmond- Alright. We have me, Michael, Amiela, and William here...Also a few outside.
Zachary- They're in danger then.
Desmond… [view original content]
Memories 1-24
Zachary- So who the hell are you people?
Desmond- I'm Desmond, we're Runners from the Safe Zone.
Zachary- There's lot… mores, you got to be specific.
Desmond- I thought all the others fell.
Zachary- Most did...You must be talking about the school, which is the closest. Well, that's great. We were planning to move to the Safe Zone.
Desmond- That's great, this place probably has a lot we can take.
Zachary- But first...Let's talk.
Zachary escorts Desmond into a different room while Shawn watches Amiela and Michael. It's a dark room which was once a room for meetings. Zachary sits down and so does Desmond.
Zachary- So...Tell me about the situation. Your people, your Safe Zone, all of it.
Desmond- Why?
Zachary- I need to make sure it's safe, espically the people we're with.
Desmond- Alright. We have me, Michael, Amiela, and William here...Also a few outside.
Zachary- They're in danger then.
Desmond… [view original content]
Memories 1-24
Zachary- So who the hell are you people?
Desmond- I'm Desmond, we're Runners from the Safe Zone.
Zachary- There's lot… mores, you got to be specific.
Desmond- I thought all the others fell.
Zachary- Most did...You must be talking about the school, which is the closest. Well, that's great. We were planning to move to the Safe Zone.
Desmond- That's great, this place probably has a lot we can take.
Zachary- But first...Let's talk.
Zachary escorts Desmond into a different room while Shawn watches Amiela and Michael. It's a dark room which was once a room for meetings. Zachary sits down and so does Desmond.
Zachary- So...Tell me about the situation. Your people, your Safe Zone, all of it.
Desmond- Why?
Zachary- I need to make sure it's safe, espically the people we're with.
Desmond- Alright. We have me, Michael, Amiela, and William here...Also a few outside.
Zachary- They're in danger then.
Desmond… [view original content]
Memories 1-24
Zachary- So who the hell are you people?
Desmond- I'm Desmond, we're Runners from the Safe Zone.
Zachary- There's lot… mores, you got to be specific.
Desmond- I thought all the others fell.
Zachary- Most did...You must be talking about the school, which is the closest. Well, that's great. We were planning to move to the Safe Zone.
Desmond- That's great, this place probably has a lot we can take.
Zachary- But first...Let's talk.
Zachary escorts Desmond into a different room while Shawn watches Amiela and Michael. It's a dark room which was once a room for meetings. Zachary sits down and so does Desmond.
Zachary- So...Tell me about the situation. Your people, your Safe Zone, all of it.
Desmond- Why?
Zachary- I need to make sure it's safe, espically the people we're with.
Desmond- Alright. We have me, Michael, Amiela, and William here...Also a few outside.
Zachary- They're in danger then.
Desmond… [view original content]
Memories 1-24
Zachary- So who the hell are you people?
Desmond- I'm Desmond, we're Runners from the Safe Zone.
Zachary- There's lot… mores, you got to be specific.
Desmond- I thought all the others fell.
Zachary- Most did...You must be talking about the school, which is the closest. Well, that's great. We were planning to move to the Safe Zone.
Desmond- That's great, this place probably has a lot we can take.
Zachary- But first...Let's talk.
Zachary escorts Desmond into a different room while Shawn watches Amiela and Michael. It's a dark room which was once a room for meetings. Zachary sits down and so does Desmond.
Zachary- So...Tell me about the situation. Your people, your Safe Zone, all of it.
Desmond- Why?
Zachary- I need to make sure it's safe, espically the people we're with.
Desmond- Alright. We have me, Michael, Amiela, and William here...Also a few outside.
Zachary- They're in danger then.
Desmond… [view original content]
Liquid if we dont keep them incarcerated then they'll probably try to kill us. Atleast in the safe zone they'll be reincarcerated (unless that theory i told golde comes into play....)
Memories 1-24
Zachary- So who the hell are you people?
Desmond- I'm Desmond, we're Runners from the Safe Zone.
Zachary- There's lot… mores, you got to be specific.
Desmond- I thought all the others fell.
Zachary- Most did...You must be talking about the school, which is the closest. Well, that's great. We were planning to move to the Safe Zone.
Desmond- That's great, this place probably has a lot we can take.
Zachary- But first...Let's talk.
Zachary escorts Desmond into a different room while Shawn watches Amiela and Michael. It's a dark room which was once a room for meetings. Zachary sits down and so does Desmond.
Zachary- So...Tell me about the situation. Your people, your Safe Zone, all of it.
Desmond- Why?
Zachary- I need to make sure it's safe, espically the people we're with.
Desmond- Alright. We have me, Michael, Amiela, and William here...Also a few outside.
Zachary- They're in danger then.
Desmond… [view original content]
Memories 1-24
Zachary- So who the hell are you people?
Desmond- I'm Desmond, we're Runners from the Safe Zone.
Zachary- There's lot… mores, you got to be specific.
Desmond- I thought all the others fell.
Zachary- Most did...You must be talking about the school, which is the closest. Well, that's great. We were planning to move to the Safe Zone.
Desmond- That's great, this place probably has a lot we can take.
Zachary- But first...Let's talk.
Zachary escorts Desmond into a different room while Shawn watches Amiela and Michael. It's a dark room which was once a room for meetings. Zachary sits down and so does Desmond.
Zachary- So...Tell me about the situation. Your people, your Safe Zone, all of it.
Desmond- Why?
Zachary- I need to make sure it's safe, espically the people we're with.
Desmond- Alright. We have me, Michael, Amiela, and William here...Also a few outside.
Zachary- They're in danger then.
Desmond… [view original content]
Desmond- We'll take them with us, I hope Leon agrees with it.
Zachary- Leon?
Desmond- The Safe Zone's leader.
Zachary- Ah, alright well, come with me and we will find you a place to sleep.
Desmond follows Zachary out into the hallway where Michael and Amiela are sitting. Zachary goes up and puts cuffs on her.
Amiela- What the fuck?
Desmond- Don't worry, he's only doing this till you get to a cell, it's in case you turn.
Amiela- Alright, I understand but loosen the cuffs why don't ya.
Zachary- Shawn, fine these people a nice place to sleep, use the waiting room couchs or something.
Shawn- Yes sir.
Zachary takes Amiela away and Shawn escorts Michael and Desmond to a lounge area where he gives them couchs to sleep on.
Desmond- Hey, is William going to be alright?
Shawn- Don't know kid, don't worry, Freeman will work on him all night for you.
Michael- He better.
Shawn leaves the room and turns the lights off.
Michael- Get some sleep there kid.
Desmond and Michael fall asleep. Desmond wakes up in the earlier morning hours and looks around and sees Michael missing with Jamie sleeping where he was and James on the floor. Desmond gets up and walks around and goes into the hallway where Michael is talking with Freeman and Zachary. Desmond walks over to them.
Michael- I'm glad.
Desmond- For what?
Zachary- Hey, you're up. We got your two friends here last night, almost died in the process by we're even now.
Desmond- Yeah, thanks for that. So, what's going on.
Freeman- It took me a while but the bleeding stopped and he's all patched up.
Desmond- Great! What about leaving?
Zachary- I got Shawn on that right now. He's already moved the weapons, ammo, and other various things out there and is loading them. We should actually wake everyone up and get ready to move. I'll go get the people in the cells, Freeman go get William, and Zachary and Michael go get your friends.
Desmond- Wait, did Amiela make it?
Zachary- So far, yes.
Zachary and Freeman walk away and Michael goes to get everybody else. Desmond walks outside where Shawn is loading cars. The ground is wet from rain and Shawn almost had everything packed.
Desmond- Hi Shawn.
Shawn- Hello. You know I love rainy days, it fits this whole thing.
Soon Freeman comes out with a tired looking, one armed William and a bag of medicine.
Freeman- He should sleep on the way to the Safe Zone, he's still getting off the meds.
Michael, Jamie, and James come walking out and finds places to sit in the cars. Zachary comes walking out with handcuffed Walter, Chad, and Amiela. He puts each on in the backseat of a different car.
Zachary- Alright, everyone take a different car, no one sit in the back with Amiela and watch out if you sit next to one of the prisoners.
Everyone gets in the cars. Zachary and Desmond get in the front seat of the car with Chad in the back. Each car drives out seperately with Desmond's in front.
Memories 1-25
Desmond- We'll take them with us, I hope Leon agrees with it.
Zachary- Leon?
Desmond- The Safe Zone's leader.
Zach… moreary- Ah, alright well, come with me and we will find you a place to sleep.
Desmond follows Zachary out into the hallway where Michael and Amiela are sitting. Zachary goes up and puts cuffs on her.
Amiela- What the fuck?
Desmond- Don't worry, he's only doing this till you get to a cell, it's in case you turn.
Amiela- Alright, I understand but loosen the cuffs why don't ya.
Zachary- Shawn, fine these people a nice place to sleep, use the waiting room couchs or something.
Shawn- Yes sir.
Zachary takes Amiela away and Shawn escorts Michael and Desmond to a lounge area where he gives them couchs to sleep on.
Desmond- Hey, is William going to be alright?
Shawn- Don't know kid, don't worry, Freeman will work on him all night for you.
Michael- He better.
Shawn leaves the room and … [view original content]
Memories 1-25
Desmond- We'll take them with us, I hope Leon agrees with it.
Zachary- Leon?
Desmond- The Safe Zone's leader.
Zach… moreary- Ah, alright well, come with me and we will find you a place to sleep.
Desmond follows Zachary out into the hallway where Michael and Amiela are sitting. Zachary goes up and puts cuffs on her.
Amiela- What the fuck?
Desmond- Don't worry, he's only doing this till you get to a cell, it's in case you turn.
Amiela- Alright, I understand but loosen the cuffs why don't ya.
Zachary- Shawn, fine these people a nice place to sleep, use the waiting room couchs or something.
Shawn- Yes sir.
Zachary takes Amiela away and Shawn escorts Michael and Desmond to a lounge area where he gives them couchs to sleep on.
Desmond- Hey, is William going to be alright?
Shawn- Don't know kid, don't worry, Freeman will work on him all night for you.
Michael- He better.
Shawn leaves the room and … [view original content]
Memories 1-25
Desmond- We'll take them with us, I hope Leon agrees with it.
Zachary- Leon?
Desmond- The Safe Zone's leader.
Zach… moreary- Ah, alright well, come with me and we will find you a place to sleep.
Desmond follows Zachary out into the hallway where Michael and Amiela are sitting. Zachary goes up and puts cuffs on her.
Amiela- What the fuck?
Desmond- Don't worry, he's only doing this till you get to a cell, it's in case you turn.
Amiela- Alright, I understand but loosen the cuffs why don't ya.
Zachary- Shawn, fine these people a nice place to sleep, use the waiting room couchs or something.
Shawn- Yes sir.
Zachary takes Amiela away and Shawn escorts Michael and Desmond to a lounge area where he gives them couchs to sleep on.
Desmond- Hey, is William going to be alright?
Shawn- Don't know kid, don't worry, Freeman will work on him all night for you.
Michael- He better.
Shawn leaves the room and … [view original content]
The cars drive in a single file line throughout the streets. The day is quiet with little to no noise anywhere except the cars. Desmond looks back to see Chad laying down in the back seat. Chad was a black man with a buzzcut and brown eyes.
Chad- So...Warden, when are we getting to my new jail?
Zachary- Quiet down back there.
Chad- Hmm...The world ends and you stay to treating me like old rules still matter.
Zachary- You commited crimes, you have to pay the price.
Chad- Like the kid sitting next to you hasn't commited any crimes.
Zachary- Well, listen...The world is changing, shut up for now. The new autorities at this Safe Zone will deal with you like they want to.
Chad- Oh yes, the military will just fucking love me! I'm going to be sitting in a cell over there too.
Desmond- You don't know that.
Chad- Whatever...So kid, who are you?
Desmond- Desmond.
Chad- Chad. Although, I'm guessing Warden over there already told you. So, you in high school.
Desmond- Was before all of this.
Chad- You got an old woman?
Desmond- I have a girlfriend.
Chad- You have to kill anyone yet?
Desmond- A few...
Chad- Good kid, it'll get easier in time. I'll tell you it wasn't easy for me the first few times. Hell, I did it all for the fun...I was trying to actually start a new life, away from all the shit. I was running from the cops when I stopped at an old friends house for a bit. I bet a nice woman, big woman, she...Was working at this place...They had her in debt and was forcing her to do...Horrible things. I guess I found redemption in helping her so I paid off her debt, hell you know those guys weren't happy about it. They tried to kill me and her...
He laughs
Chad- Those fuckers didn't know what they got themselves into...I killed them all. Then I bought the place...Well...If you can call stealing the deed and shit, buying it. Anyway, it was a good life, my wife, Allison, she...wasn't scared of me, she knew I would never hurt her and I would try to stop hurting others. We loved each other. It was five years till one of my old buddies from the old life recognized me. Dude fucking snitched. I got sent to jail for 20 years. I was 25 so I only got through 15 years. Allison...She commited suicide...Couldn't live without me....Fuck.
Desmond- I'm so sorry, it really sounded like you were becoming a good man.
Chad- Kid...I'm a good man, I'm just an asshole. Thanks for listening though, I can consider you a friend already.
Zachary- You consider me a friend?
Chad- You?...Better than the rest in the prison...So hell, why the fuck not?
They soon approach the school and the gates open to let all five cars in. They stop in the Parking Lot with soldiers blocking the people. Leon and Henry walk up to the first car. Zachary and Desmond get out.
Leon- Thank God you all made it. When Henry, Katherine, and Shouna only came back last night I thought you all died. Who are you?
Zachary- You must be Leon.
Zachary shakes Leon's hand.
Zachary- I'm Officer Zachary and we have Officer Shawn in one of these cars. We brought many supplies from the Police Station along with your people and some of our Prisoners.
Leon- Prisoners? Excuse me...What?
Zachary- Desmond here said to bring them.
Leon- Desmond...You know how hard it will be to control these men? I'll get them a place somewhere under constant watch until we can make sure they won't cause trouble. Alright, is there any other surprises?
Desmond-...Yes. We have another doctor...A man with one arm...and Amiela who is bitten.
Leon- JESUS, ARE YOU FUCKING CRAZY?
Desmond-...No...
Leon- I'll get some soldiers to take Amiela somewhere safe and...Put her out before she goes crazy and we'll bury her. I'll get someone to take the one armed man to the infirmary with the new doctor. Everyone else can find some place, unless they're new...In which case I'll send them to my office. Anyone new?
Desmond- These cops and their prisoners along with the one armed man who is William and some guy named Jamie.
Leon- Like Jamie from Game of Thrones?
Desmond- Exactly.
Leon- Great, a crazy man, just perfect. Alright, Desmond, go to your room, I'll handle all of this.
Memories 1-26
The cars drive in a single file line throughout the streets. The day is quiet with little to no noise anywhere except the c… morears. Desmond looks back to see Chad laying down in the back seat. Chad was a black man with a buzzcut and brown eyes.
Chad- So...Warden, when are we getting to my new jail?
Zachary- Quiet down back there.
Chad- Hmm...The world ends and you stay to treating me like old rules still matter.
Zachary- You commited crimes, you have to pay the price.
Chad- Like the kid sitting next to you hasn't commited any crimes.
Zachary- Well, listen...The world is changing, shut up for now. The new autorities at this Safe Zone will deal with you like they want to.
Chad- Oh yes, the military will just fucking love me! I'm going to be sitting in a cell over there too.
Desmond- You don't know that.
Chad- Whatever...So kid, who are you?
Desmond- Desmond.
Chad- Chad. Although, I'm guessing Warden… [view original content]
Memories 1-26
The cars drive in a single file line throughout the streets. The day is quiet with little to no noise anywhere except the c… morears. Desmond looks back to see Chad laying down in the back seat. Chad was a black man with a buzzcut and brown eyes.
Chad- So...Warden, when are we getting to my new jail?
Zachary- Quiet down back there.
Chad- Hmm...The world ends and you stay to treating me like old rules still matter.
Zachary- You commited crimes, you have to pay the price.
Chad- Like the kid sitting next to you hasn't commited any crimes.
Zachary- Well, listen...The world is changing, shut up for now. The new autorities at this Safe Zone will deal with you like they want to.
Chad- Oh yes, the military will just fucking love me! I'm going to be sitting in a cell over there too.
Desmond- You don't know that.
Chad- Whatever...So kid, who are you?
Desmond- Desmond.
Chad- Chad. Although, I'm guessing Warden… [view original content]
Comments
No hes not. Percy is sometimes a coward and semi-evil yes, but he also was the only one smart enough to study magic. Henry is just an idiot.
He is the only one of your characters who i can honestly say is an idiot. Hell his University scores probably looked like this:
Laws: Mayored ( Knows how to make the most stupid arguments sound good)
Military leadership: Failed ( This guy makes Benedict Arnold sound like a better strategist)
Doctorate: Failed ( He makes people WORSE)
Normal English: C minus ( Barely passesd his class by one point which may have been a typing error)
I'm just going to pick at your brain for a bit.
Who are your top three favorite characters and your reasons for liking them. Who are your least favorite characters and your reasons for disliking them.
Do you mean dislike? lol
Yes.
[sneak around back and ambush them]
Always better to have some sort of advantage.
great chapter!
Favvorites in non specific order (So far)
1 Jessie : I think no explination is needed
2 Desmond: I think hes really cool.
3 Amelia: Yes i know shes dying but shes just so badass
Least Favorites in VERY specific order (So far):
Henry: i just think hes an absolute idiot. Im sorry but that plan he had i quite possibly the WORST idea in this scenario.
Jonh: Chose Henry as team leader. Also its my personal opinion that he will go power hungry and become a dictator.
Shouna: She hasent done anything defining yet. But considering your writting shell be off this list soon.
Jessie isn´t in the story yet.
Favourite
Less Favourites ( 3 is less disliked and 1 most)
LOOKS IRRIATATED
YES SHE IS
Ohh. i thought she was Scarlet cause Desmond called her like that in their first meet XD
Her hair is scarlet
:P
Memories 1-23
Desmond- Let's go around back, see if there's an opening, and go in.
James is at the side of the roof with his rifle pointed at the Police Station. Jamie is blocking the door. Desmond, William, Michael, and Amiela gather their weapons. Desmond grabs his pistol, William takes one of the spare pistols, Michael grabs his shotgun, and Amiela takes the sword.
Desmond- Hey...Amiela, are you sure you're up for this?
Amiela- I'm already dead, hell, we could've cut it off but none of us thought about that and it's already too late now.
Jamie- It might not be...
Amiela- You just want to cut something. No, it's too late, I'm already feeling it. Well, might as well take a few assholes with me.
Desmond- That's very brave.
Amiela- Quit with the sob shit, let's go.
James- Guys! They're talking to the people in the parking lot. They might start executing soon.
William- Let's move quickly then.
Desmond, Amiela, Michael, and William all run down the fire escape and through the shadows to the back of the Police Station. There's a hole in the gate and they sqeeze through. The group moves to a wall and watches the scene. There's four Police Officers and three prisoners tied up in the Parking lot with seven Reapers, the gang members, in there with Assault Rifles and other various weapons.
Reaper- So, what do you all say? We get all this stuff and you live, or you die and we take it anyway?
One of the Prisoners spits on his shoes.
Prisoner- Go fuck yourself.
Reaper- Hmm...
The Reaper shoots the Prisoner in the head.
Reaper- Any one want to talk now?...No?...Lets see if you all care more about your Officers than your Prisoners.
The Reaper shoots one of the Officers in the head.
Reaper- Still no? I can keep this up all night.
Michael- Motherfucker...We can't allow this.
Amiela- I didn't come to watch more people die...
Michael- Me neither.
Michael runs out and blasts the Executioner in the head. Amiela then runs out and stabs another one. William goes out shooting and so does Desmond. A rifle blast kills another Reaper. Desmond soon runs over and starts cutting the Officers free. They all run and start attacking the Reapers. Another Officer gets shot and the Reapers start dying one by one. One of them takes cover behind and Cop Car.
Reaper- Everyone stop! This is attracting Criers! We'll all die!
Suddenly Criers climb over the walls and kill the Reaper. Both the Reapers and the Runners shoot at the Criers. The Criers kill the last Reapers and then one runs over and grabs William. It bites down heavily on his arm and William screams out in pain. Amiela runs over and cuts off Williams arm with a single slah and then grabs the Crier and snaps his neck.
Officer- Hurry! Get inside!
Amiela runs towards the doors with the Officers. The Officers grab the still tied up Prisoners and unlock the door. Desmond and Michael grab William and get him in while he's still bleeding out. Everyone gets in and then the Officers close the doors and then close the gate which stops the Criers from breaking in. One of the Officers escort the two surviving Prisoners to cells in the back, Desmond and Michael follow the other Officer's orders and gets William to a small infirmary in the back. Amiela sits down when a strange man walks into the hallway. She grabs the sword and prepares to kill him before he screams.
???- PLEASE, DON'T KILL ME, I'M WITH THE POLICE.
Amiela starts swinging and everyone runs back into the hallway. Everyone stops when they see Dr.Freeman who fell on the ground trying to get away from Amiela. The Officer quickly stops Amiela and sits her down.
Desmond- Dr.Freeman?!
Freeman- Desmond?!
Desmond- Holy shit, what's going on?
Officer- Everyone calm down! First off, I'm Officer Zachary. The highest ranking officer here.
Officer- And I'm Officer Shawn. We are the last surviving Officers of this Station. This man was one we saved the first night. He said he was a doctor and we got him to work on some of our wounded. None of them made it...
Desmond- He's not a real doctor.
Freeman- I actually am...I just worked in the school before this. I did go to Medical College and I know how to do anything a doctor working in a hospital knows how to do. I just went back for a teaching degree and well there I was.
Michael- Thank God! We have a wounded man in the back!
Freeman- Show me.
Michael shows Dr.Freeman to the back where William is.
End of Chapter
Great part it was worth the wait
Yup, sorry for the wait of course but I do plan to make up for it.
Just imagine him as Dr.Freeman.
Great chapter!!
Take your time good writting sometimes takes years
Memories 1-24
Zachary- So who the hell are you people?
Desmond- I'm Desmond, we're Runners from the Safe Zone.
Zachary- There's lots, you got to be specific.
Desmond- I thought all the others fell.
Zachary- Most did...You must be talking about the school, which is the closest. Well, that's great. We were planning to move to the Safe Zone.
Desmond- That's great, this place probably has a lot we can take.
Zachary- But first...Let's talk.
Zachary escorts Desmond into a different room while Shawn watches Amiela and Michael. It's a dark room which was once a room for meetings. Zachary sits down and so does Desmond.
Zachary- So...Tell me about the situation. Your people, your Safe Zone, all of it.
Desmond- Why?
Zachary- I need to make sure it's safe, espically the people we're with.
Desmond- Alright. We have me, Michael, Amiela, and William here...Also a few outside.
Zachary- They're in danger then.
Desmond- They're safe for now. Anyway, me and William are healthy. Amiela is...Sick and William doesn't have an arm.
Zachary- Sick?...Is she bitten?
Desmond- No.
Zachary- You're fucking lying to me.
Desmond- She's not, I swear.
Zachary- Kid, I'm a god damn cop, you're telling me that if I walk out there and look all over her for bites that i won't find any?
Desmond- Fine...She is.
Zachary-...Fuck...Listen kid, we need to lock her up or something.
Desmond- Fine, lock her up.
Zachary- Now, your Safe Zone, is it safe?
Desmond- Yes.
Zachary- I believe you. We'll stay here tonight, we will gather everything here tomorrow morning and take the squad cars to this Safe Zone.
Desmond- That brings questions of my own.
Zachary- Excuse me?
Desmond- You asked me, now I ask you.
Zachary- Fine. You already met me and Shawn, Officer Daniel died out there along with Prisoner Alex. We have two prisoners in the back locked up, they're Chad and Walter. They're assholes.
Desmond- What are they in for?
Zachary- Walt is in for Murder and Bulgary. Chad is in for Murder, counterfeit, blackmail, and robbery.
Desmond- Hmm...That complicates things.
Zachary- How?
Desmond- I don't know if we should take them to the Safe Zone.
Zachary- I don't either. You are the leader here right? I guess it's your choice.
Desmond- First, let me ask a few more things. How much medicine and other things do you have here?
Zachary- Multiple assasult rifles, shotguns, pistols, riot shields, medicine, ammo, and other various shit laying around. We got 5 Sqaud Cars which hold four people comfortably.
Desmond- Counting everyone, we have like eleven people here. We have enough.
Zachary- Then we should take all of them. Split people up.
Desmond- Good idea.
Zachary- Now before I go lock up your friend in the back, find you guys places to sleep, and prepare for tomorrow morning...Plus go grab your friends from outside where ever they are...Are the two prisoners coming with us?
Choice
[Bring the Prisoners with them to the Safe Zone]
[Leave the Prisoners locked up in the Police Station]
[Let the Prioners free but don't let them come to the Safe Zone]
[Bring the Prisoners with them to the Safe Zone] - The more the merrier!
[Bring the prisoners to the Sade zone.] Hopefully these ingrates have some common sense and won't attack someone who is helping them.
[Bring The prisoners ] another great part bro
[Let the Prioners free but don't let them come to the Safe Zone]
I don't trust them and I don't think the safe zone needs them.
[Bring the Prisoners with them to the Safe Zone]
Liquid if we dont keep them incarcerated then they'll probably try to kill us. Atleast in the safe zone they'll be reincarcerated (unless that theory i told golde comes into play....)
[Leave the Prisoners locked up in the Police Station]
Awesome Chapter!!!
Damn Sagig, you just going to leave them to die in their cells?
They are dangerous. And i am pretty sure EVERYBODY will die anyways :P
No.
[Bring the Prisoners with them to the Safe Zone]
And Golden just killed your whole argument with one word.........Just WOW
Memories 1-25
Desmond- We'll take them with us, I hope Leon agrees with it.
Zachary- Leon?
Desmond- The Safe Zone's leader.
Zachary- Ah, alright well, come with me and we will find you a place to sleep.
Desmond follows Zachary out into the hallway where Michael and Amiela are sitting. Zachary goes up and puts cuffs on her.
Amiela- What the fuck?
Desmond- Don't worry, he's only doing this till you get to a cell, it's in case you turn.
Amiela- Alright, I understand but loosen the cuffs why don't ya.
Zachary- Shawn, fine these people a nice place to sleep, use the waiting room couchs or something.
Shawn- Yes sir.
Zachary takes Amiela away and Shawn escorts Michael and Desmond to a lounge area where he gives them couchs to sleep on.
Desmond- Hey, is William going to be alright?
Shawn- Don't know kid, don't worry, Freeman will work on him all night for you.
Michael- He better.
Shawn leaves the room and turns the lights off.
Michael- Get some sleep there kid.
Desmond and Michael fall asleep. Desmond wakes up in the earlier morning hours and looks around and sees Michael missing with Jamie sleeping where he was and James on the floor. Desmond gets up and walks around and goes into the hallway where Michael is talking with Freeman and Zachary. Desmond walks over to them.
Michael- I'm glad.
Desmond- For what?
Zachary- Hey, you're up. We got your two friends here last night, almost died in the process by we're even now.
Desmond- Yeah, thanks for that. So, what's going on.
Freeman- It took me a while but the bleeding stopped and he's all patched up.
Desmond- Great! What about leaving?
Zachary- I got Shawn on that right now. He's already moved the weapons, ammo, and other various things out there and is loading them. We should actually wake everyone up and get ready to move. I'll go get the people in the cells, Freeman go get William, and Zachary and Michael go get your friends.
Desmond- Wait, did Amiela make it?
Zachary- So far, yes.
Zachary and Freeman walk away and Michael goes to get everybody else. Desmond walks outside where Shawn is loading cars. The ground is wet from rain and Shawn almost had everything packed.
Desmond- Hi Shawn.
Shawn- Hello. You know I love rainy days, it fits this whole thing.
Soon Freeman comes out with a tired looking, one armed William and a bag of medicine.
Freeman- He should sleep on the way to the Safe Zone, he's still getting off the meds.
Michael, Jamie, and James come walking out and finds places to sit in the cars. Zachary comes walking out with handcuffed Walter, Chad, and Amiela. He puts each on in the backseat of a different car.
Zachary- Alright, everyone take a different car, no one sit in the back with Amiela and watch out if you sit next to one of the prisoners.
Everyone gets in the cars. Zachary and Desmond get in the front seat of the car with Chad in the back. Each car drives out seperately with Desmond's in front.
End of Chapter
Good part Golden
Awesome Chapter!!!
Great chapter!!!!
Memories 1-26
The cars drive in a single file line throughout the streets. The day is quiet with little to no noise anywhere except the cars. Desmond looks back to see Chad laying down in the back seat. Chad was a black man with a buzzcut and brown eyes.
Chad- So...Warden, when are we getting to my new jail?
Zachary- Quiet down back there.
Chad- Hmm...The world ends and you stay to treating me like old rules still matter.
Zachary- You commited crimes, you have to pay the price.
Chad- Like the kid sitting next to you hasn't commited any crimes.
Zachary- Well, listen...The world is changing, shut up for now. The new autorities at this Safe Zone will deal with you like they want to.
Chad- Oh yes, the military will just fucking love me! I'm going to be sitting in a cell over there too.
Desmond- You don't know that.
Chad- Whatever...So kid, who are you?
Desmond- Desmond.
Chad- Chad. Although, I'm guessing Warden over there already told you. So, you in high school.
Desmond- Was before all of this.
Chad- You got an old woman?
Desmond- I have a girlfriend.
Chad- You have to kill anyone yet?
Desmond- A few...
Chad- Good kid, it'll get easier in time. I'll tell you it wasn't easy for me the first few times. Hell, I did it all for the fun...I was trying to actually start a new life, away from all the shit. I was running from the cops when I stopped at an old friends house for a bit. I bet a nice woman, big woman, she...Was working at this place...They had her in debt and was forcing her to do...Horrible things. I guess I found redemption in helping her so I paid off her debt, hell you know those guys weren't happy about it. They tried to kill me and her...
He laughs
Chad- Those fuckers didn't know what they got themselves into...I killed them all. Then I bought the place...Well...If you can call stealing the deed and shit, buying it. Anyway, it was a good life, my wife, Allison, she...wasn't scared of me, she knew I would never hurt her and I would try to stop hurting others. We loved each other. It was five years till one of my old buddies from the old life recognized me. Dude fucking snitched. I got sent to jail for 20 years. I was 25 so I only got through 15 years. Allison...She commited suicide...Couldn't live without me....Fuck.
Desmond- I'm so sorry, it really sounded like you were becoming a good man.
Chad- Kid...I'm a good man, I'm just an asshole. Thanks for listening though, I can consider you a friend already.
Zachary- You consider me a friend?
Chad- You?...Better than the rest in the prison...So hell, why the fuck not?
They soon approach the school and the gates open to let all five cars in. They stop in the Parking Lot with soldiers blocking the people. Leon and Henry walk up to the first car. Zachary and Desmond get out.
Leon- Thank God you all made it. When Henry, Katherine, and Shouna only came back last night I thought you all died. Who are you?
Zachary- You must be Leon.
Zachary shakes Leon's hand.
Zachary- I'm Officer Zachary and we have Officer Shawn in one of these cars. We brought many supplies from the Police Station along with your people and some of our Prisoners.
Leon- Prisoners? Excuse me...What?
Zachary- Desmond here said to bring them.
Leon- Desmond...You know how hard it will be to control these men? I'll get them a place somewhere under constant watch until we can make sure they won't cause trouble. Alright, is there any other surprises?
Desmond-...Yes. We have another doctor...A man with one arm...and Amiela who is bitten.
Leon- JESUS, ARE YOU FUCKING CRAZY?
Desmond-...No...
Leon- I'll get some soldiers to take Amiela somewhere safe and...Put her out before she goes crazy and we'll bury her. I'll get someone to take the one armed man to the infirmary with the new doctor. Everyone else can find some place, unless they're new...In which case I'll send them to my office. Anyone new?
Desmond- These cops and their prisoners along with the one armed man who is William and some guy named Jamie.
Leon- Like Jamie from Game of Thrones?
Desmond- Exactly.
Leon- Great, a crazy man, just perfect. Alright, Desmond, go to your room, I'll handle all of this.
Desmond walks away inside the school.
End of Chapter
Great chapter!!!