<he offered her the slyest smile he could before lifting his hands up and moving his fingers
Oh my, not even discrete about this one (… more ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
No but serious this time. I was expecting something else when I read this line.
(Oh and anyways great job on this one!)
I know right? Two of my friends aren't ticklish and they always tease me because of my sensitivity to it. Even when they pretend that they're tickling me on a distance, I shrink and shiver. It's their mystery power...
She'd been waving him off the whole day.
Opening the door very slightly, as quietly as possible, he stole a peek at where she was sitting… more, too absorbed in her book to hear the wood squeak when he lightly pushed on it.
It was his chance.
If she wasn't going to acknowledge him, he´d make her.
Daring, he pushed on the door a bit more until he could fit through and stopped it from closing completely with his index finger; he could do without the extra noise. Fiona still hadn't noticed anything, turning a page of the book, and he grinned deviously. He'd think living around these parts would have made her more alert, senses acute, but perhaps he couldn't blame her for allowing herself to enjoy a rare moment of peace.
Rhys crouched down, using the couch to cover himself as he sneaked his way next to her. When she was in clear sight, he prepared himself.
'Alright, Rhys,' he bit his lip, 'time to pretend you're the best goddamn assas… [view original content]
a painting made by a person named nohuhhuh. A very talented person.
Ohmahgawd I didn't see that coming! you are so sweet. I'm so gl… moread that my art actually makes someone happy!
Back to the fanfic, this has improved a lot from the first part! And I'm glad you added so many details there, this story feels now so much richer. Good job. I'm almost crying because it feels like this story was taken from my resent testing! I felt exactly like Fiona there!
Ps. I like how you write young Fiona. Her solution to everything is to crash her head on the table!
I'm not the best to give fanfic ideas but maybe just a simple story where we find out how Fiona got that eyebrow scar? Maybe that would be somehow parallel to Rhys' hand? I don't know..
I'll probably have to buy a new pc, my old one has give up completely now -_-
My question is, does anyone have any recommendations as to what kind I should by? (I'll be playing a fair amount of games on it so the memory has to be rather large)
Sooo...
I'll probably have to buy a new pc, my old one has give up completely now -_-
My question is, does anyone have any recommendat… moreions as to what kind I should by? (I'll be playing a fair amount of games on it so the memory has to be rather large)
Speak more Swedish?
tries to remember random words from Swedish classes
Jättebra...uppseendeväckande....köttbullar....smörgås....katten… more..
Is this 2 hot 2 handle? (I swear I didn't use google. I will never forget Uppseendeväckande..such a weird word..)
I usually play every episode twice with different choices and then I'll watch one let's play of it (Cry is my favorite let's player) and then maybe once with my friends. I love episode one and two but I have played them way too many times now..
Replays wolf, replays..
I usually play every episode twice with different choices and then I'll watch one let's play of it (Cry is my fa… morevorite let's player) and then maybe once with my friends. I love episode one and two but I have played them way too many times now..
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You didn´t actually think I´d write something like that, did you? :P
Nah, they're just funny like that, I still love them.
And my kindness can overcome everything (and my modesty too).
That would be the cutest thing ever!
You´ve got evil friends. :P
<he offered her the slyest smile he could before lifting his hands up and moving his fingers
Oh my, not even discrete about this one ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
No but serious this time. I was expecting something else when I read this line.
(Oh and anyways great job on this one!)
We'll see. C:
It's so sexy when you speak Swedish to me.
Hmm...Nice idea, I will think about it.
Be sure to take advantage of their weak points as well. :P
I'm very happy that you enjoy it, mate! And don't be sad about your recent test. It is not the end of the world and you have other awesome talents.
Glad you like it, friend!
Poor Rhys. Trying so hard to come up with winning arguments. Unfortunately Fiona is always ready to strike back. Cruel woman.
I promise I will use my powers for good not evil!
Well, that could be interesting as well.
poor rhysie
Sooo...
I'll probably have to buy a new pc, my old one has give up completely now -_-
My question is, does anyone have any recommendations as to what kind I should by? (I'll be playing a fair amount of games on it so the memory has to be rather large)
I'm just nervous because I have no idea if I succeeded or failed it. Ugh I have to wait two months to get the answer.
Have you already wrote the 3rd part? So many comments here can't keep up with them
Hay, you never know :^)
IKR?! So tender..
Oh my, you're making me sweat ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Då ska jag verkligen komma ihåg att prata mer svenska med dig.
Oh hell yes.. wiggles eyebrows
Fiona was too eager to poke his no existing arm. Hmmm now I feel like drawing a comic where young Rhys loses his arm.
I don't know what your specs are now?
Speak more Swedish?
tries to remember random words from Swedish classes
Jättebra...uppseendeväckande....köttbullar....smörgås....katten..
Is this 2 hot 2 handle? (I swear I didn't use google. I will never forget Uppseendeväckande..such a weird word..)
I believe you.
Rhyiona shippers are a special case.
Their love is both cute and aggressive. Love the combo.
quiff pls
I would never.
He's a masochist, he likes that she's cruel. ;P
Leave for like five minutes.
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Nice.
I sure missed this a lot.
I have never experienced this speedy commenting in any other forums before. Only if the time zone differences didn't exist..
I really dig the love/hate trope.
Sleeping + punch combo? I was sold instantly.
Gotta go fast. :P
Oh, yeah. In like two or three hours this thread will be eerily quiet for a bit. It always does.
You missed the wonderful flirting when he asks for the boot back though. :P
That is a cute scene. I was sold when I didn't grab Rhys during the intro. Their hands just reached but never touched each other. I cri evertim.
Yeah, I should go to sleep too..just little longer..
Oh no that's perfect.
My knowledge level of Finnish:
Hyvää huomenta, lainanen, hyvää joulua, perkele. (I praise my father for teaching me this.)
(Uppseendeveckande is nice indeed, and if you like long word how about this one: Nagellackborttagningsmedelsradioreklam)
Replays wolf, replays..
I usually play every episode twice with different choices and then I'll watch one let's play of it (Cry is my favorite let's player) and then maybe once with my friends. I love episode one and two but I have played them way too many times now..
It's only 9PM for me so... gonna sit here quietly when the daily apocalypse hits this thread. ;P
I need that model swap of Rodrik and Elaena... ;_;
Fair enough. :P
I've watched a ton of youtubers play it, it's fun to hear people's reactions to stuff.