Anyone who hasn't been added to the tree yet? I'm going to add Lilium but I don't want to update the tree until I have a lot of people to ad… mored, so please if you want to be in it, reply to me with your country and gender (also preferred name to be called on it).
If you don't know what I'm talking about, here it is. http://i.imgur.com/45aNmEK.jpg
Hey.
Hey yourself
How have you been?
Alright I guess, you?
I... I'm fine.
Rhys...
No really I-I swear I... Oh god Fiona I'… morem trying I really am.
I know you are.
I miss you.
...
You're probably wondering how Sasha's doing.
Mmmhm
She's strong... A lot stronger than me. Sometimes it's almost like she's forgotten... And... And it pisses me off! I just I...
Rhys...
How could she just...
RHYS... Stop
I'm sorry I didn't mean it like that.
I know you didn't
You know I've stopped eating ice cream.
What!? What have you done with my husband you imposter!
Ha... It just doesn't taste the same I guess. I mean without you calling me fat... It's just... not the same.
...
Fiona?
Yeah.
Do you regret it?
No.
I knew you'd say that.
Rhys it's not that I don't want to be with you or Sasha or Vaughn...
I know it's important to you. I wouldn't of wanted you to say yes. That would just… [view original content]
I'm all caught up!!!
NOW... To get back at everyone who was talking so freely about Until Dawn on here ( @Kruzii was one of them...) I am… more going to do the same about the Mad Max game when it comes out on Tuesday. There is no fucking way that I am letting ANYONE here ruin that game for me!! BEEN WAITING FOR-FUCKING-EVER FOR IT TO COME OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anyways, I apologize to those I offended, but my emotions were real. Can we please spoiler tag anything to do with games that aren't TellTale on here? I mean, LiS has been spoiled enough for me by this thread, and Until Dawn nearly getting spoiled actually caused me to cry a little bit earlier. I'm being serious guys.
I adore this thread, and I love everyone on here like my own flesh and blood. But we all have our limits.
I upset Hanna and I was harsh to Chewbacca cuz of my mood earlier, I don't want that to happen ever again
Oh...my...god...finally!
Finally someone who agrees that tyrant Shu was what the show needed. It made perfect sense and was a necessary character development! Thank you! I was getting so sick of people treating that part as "trainwreck" and "pulling stuff out of their asses". It was by far the best part of the anime and definitely what got me hooked in the first place.
Yeah I feel that Guilty Crown gets a lot of hate. Mostly because of it's similarities to Code Geass, although they really are quite different. Btw Douche Shu was best shu.
Do you guys have any suggestions for dealing with an ear infection? A bad one, I'm going through hell because of it and can't sleep. Please, help guys, please. It's still nighttime I have to wait 5 or 6 hours until I can go to the doctor, help.
Tell me about it...I feel like they only produce one each year and if you are unlucky, it will suck.
All you get instead is harem filled with fanservice. There isn't even the finest bit of romance in there...just mindless cockteases everywhere. It's so frustrating.
Do you guys have any suggestions for dealing with an ear infection? A bad one, I'm going through hell because of it and can't sleep. Please, help guys, please. It's still nighttime I have to wait 5 or 6 hours until I can go to the doctor, help.
Tell me about it...I feel like they only produce one each year and if you are unlucky, it will suck.
All you get instead is harem filled … morewith fanservice. There isn't even the finest bit of romance in there...just mindless cockteases everywhere. It's so frustrating.
Ah, that's a pity. Might wanna stock up for future emergencies :P
Um, play games? Watch TV/YouTube? Find a non-dead thread and have long discussions about whatnot? Count sheep?
Hm, I just looked it up and it seems it can, Poor Air Quality is written down as a "risk factor". Although I believe it's usually caused by illnesses such as colds, flu, allergies etc.
I'm all caught up!!!
NOW... To get back at everyone who was talking so freely about Until Dawn on here ( @Kruzii was one of them...) I am… more going to do the same about the Mad Max game when it comes out on Tuesday. There is no fucking way that I am letting ANYONE here ruin that game for me!! BEEN WAITING FOR-FUCKING-EVER FOR IT TO COME OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anyways, I apologize to those I offended, but my emotions were real. Can we please spoiler tag anything to do with games that aren't TellTale on here? I mean, LiS has been spoiled enough for me by this thread, and Until Dawn nearly getting spoiled actually caused me to cry a little bit earlier. I'm being serious guys.
I adore this thread, and I love everyone on here like my own flesh and blood. But we all have our limits.
I upset Hanna and I was harsh to Chewbacca cuz of my mood earlier, I don't want that to happen ever again
I'm not sure how old this post is, since the thread is pretty dead now, but if you're in a city, just go to the emergency room of the nearest hospital, they should be able to help you there without the need to wait several hours.
If that is not possible and you don't have any pain killers, then alcohol maybe? I wouldn't recommend it though.
Do you guys have any suggestions for dealing with an ear infection? A bad one, I'm going through hell because of it and can't sleep. Please, help guys, please. It's still nighttime I have to wait 5 or 6 hours until I can go to the doctor, help.
Diese Idee ist vollkommen hirnrissig und lässt mich deine geistige Intelligenz anzweifeln. Mit absoluter Sicherheit besitzt du den IQ einer Nudel und bist dementsprechend sogar dümmmer als Brot. Der einzige Ausweg, den ich für dich sehe, ist deine erbärmliche Existenz unverzüglich zu terminieren um dem Rest der Menschheit mit deinem Dahinscheiden einen enormen Gefallen zu tun.
Something short I wrote while the thread was dead...
"Why are you crying?" The girl asks. Startled, the boy wipes the tears from his eyes.
"I wasn't crying!" The boy yells back. She smirks.
"Were to." She teases.
"I was not!" He insists. The girl steps closer and crouches down to match the boy. She leans forward untill her face is just inches from his.
"Your eyes are red." She says. He blushes and falls down from the close proximity. "Why are you all by yourself?" She questions. The boy's eyes fall and he begins to frown.
"No one wants to play with a 'jerk from Hyperion'," he mimics dejectedly. As he turns away from her, she grabs his hand and smiles.
"I'll play with you!" She beams. "My name's Fiona, what's yours?" She asks. The boy smiles back and stands up, with Fiona still in tow.
"My name's Rhys!" He exclaims. The two children run off together, hand in hand.
You seem to like writing dialogues. It's fun, isn't it? You should try writing fanfics. Though you would have to write more than just dialogues to tell a good story.
Something short I wrote while the thread was dead...
"Why are you crying?" The girl asks. Startled, the boy wipes the tears from his eyes… more.
"I wasn't crying!" The boy yells back. She smirks.
"Were to." She teases.
"I was not!" He insists. The girl steps closer and crouches down to match the boy. She leans forward untill her face is just inches from his.
"Your eyes are red." She says. He blushes and falls down from the close proximity. "Why are you all by yourself?" She questions. The boy's eyes fall and he begins to frown.
"No one wants to play with a 'jerk from Hyperion'," he mimics dejectedly. As he turns away from her, she grabs his hand and smiles.
"I'll play with you!" She beams. "My name's Fiona, what's yours?" She asks. The boy smiles back and stands up, with Fiona still in tow.
"My name's Rhys!" He exclaims. The two children run off together, hand in hand.
I've actually been writing dialogues because I do want to write full stories. I just don't really like how I write dialogue, so I've just been practicing.
You seem to like writing dialogues. It's fun, isn't it? You should try writing fanfics. Though you would have to write more than just dialogues to tell a good story.
Promiň že odpovídám tak pozdě, už jsem šel spát před tím, než jsi odpověděl.
To ani ne, pár měsíců zpátky jsem tu zahlédl pár Čechů, ale myslím, že už nejsou aktivní. A co jsem odpozoroval, většina hraje jenom TWD. Což je docela škoda, protože TftB je asi moje nejoblíbenější hra od Telltale. Taky je tu docela aktivní jeden Slovák, ale ten se spíš pohybuje v GoT sekci.
Ale jinak máš asi pravdu, v TftB sekci jsme možná jediní dva Češi.
So können Sie zur Verbesserung Ihrer deutschen möchten, so können Sie die Menschen zu beleidigen? Was zum Teufel ist los mit dir ?! Bist du auf Drogen?!
It's fine actually. I write my dialogues more or less the same. If I absolutely had to find something to critizize, then that would be the fact that you wouldn't have to mention who speaks if the same person from before merely continues to talk. I mean stuff like this:
"Your eyes are red." She says. He blushes and falls down from the close proximity. "Why are you all by yourself?" She questions.
This is unnecessary, since anyone would just assume the previous talker would still speak until stated otherwise. It's not an utter no-go, but you seem to keep doing that and if you do it too often, it will become noticeable and harms the reading flow. ALso, it might look better and not so linear if you tried putting discriptive sentences before your actual dialogue so that the text formation doesn't look so...uniform. I mean, it's not a problem to always start a new line with dialogue, but it looks kinda forced. Sometimes, you could put dialogues to the end of a line by putting the descriptive text first.
instead of:
"I'll play with you!" She beams. "My name's Fiona, what's yours?" She asks. The boy smiles back and stands up, with Fiona still in tow.
"My name's Rhys!" He exclaims. The two children run off together, hand in hand.
you could do:
"I'll play with you!" She beams. "My name's Fiona, what's yours?" She asks.
The boy smiles back and stands up, with Fiona still in tow, happily exclaiming: "My name's Rhys!"
Following these words, the two children could be seen running off together, hand in hand.
Nothing really changed, but the line didn't start a "....you know what I mean? It puts variety into the text layout. Might prevent the reader's mind from tuning out from falling into a trod since the structure always remains the same, thus making reading the text a task you can do without much brain activity. You may have realized how your mind turns off while you brush your teeth, right? That's because after starting the process, the task itself is simple and doesn't require paying attention. If the text is written in a way the reader can reliably tell how the next line will turn out to be, the same thing will happen. In dialogue less than in actual text, but I thought it might be a valuable tip anyway.
Other than that, I don't think there is much to say...writing dialogue is easy and fun *because *it is easy. You can spend most of the time thinking of ways to let characters interact with each other without having to worry much about sentence structure and reading flow, normally.
I've actually been writing dialogues because I do want to write full stories. I just don't really like how I write dialogue, so I've just been practicing.
Oh, you might also want to merge smaller sentences into slightly bigger ones. Be careful, though, as you might start creating too long and complex ones, which would be confusing and thus bad.
"Your eyes are red." She says. He blushes and falls down from the close proximity. "Why are you all by yourself?" She questions.
can be turned into: "Your eyes are red." She says, making him blush and fall down from the close proximity. "Why are you all by yourself?"
That way, there will also absolutely not be any confusion about who is talking, since Rhys is still not put into focus. At the same time, you still described his actions.
It's fine actually. I write my dialogues more or less the same. If I absolutely had to find something to critizize, then that would be the f… moreact that you wouldn't have to mention who speaks if the same person from before merely continues to talk. I mean stuff like this:
"Your eyes are red." She says. He blushes and falls down from the close proximity. "Why are you all by yourself?" She questions.
This is unnecessary, since anyone would just assume the previous talker would still speak until stated otherwise. It's not an utter no-go, but you seem to keep doing that and if you do it too often, it will become noticeable and harms the reading flow. ALso, it might look better and not so linear if you tried putting discriptive sentences before your actual dialogue so that the text formation doesn't look so...uniform. I mean, it's not a problem to always start a new line with dialogue, but it looks kinda forced. Sometimes, you could put… [view original content]
It's fine actually. I write my dialogues more or less the same. If I absolutely had to find something to critizize, then that would be the f… moreact that you wouldn't have to mention who speaks if the same person from before merely continues to talk. I mean stuff like this:
"Your eyes are red." She says. He blushes and falls down from the close proximity. "Why are you all by yourself?" She questions.
This is unnecessary, since anyone would just assume the previous talker would still speak until stated otherwise. It's not an utter no-go, but you seem to keep doing that and if you do it too often, it will become noticeable and harms the reading flow. ALso, it might look better and not so linear if you tried putting discriptive sentences before your actual dialogue so that the text formation doesn't look so...uniform. I mean, it's not a problem to always start a new line with dialogue, but it looks kinda forced. Sometimes, you could put… [view original content]
Oh, you might also want to merge smaller sentences into slightly bigger ones. Be careful, though, as you might start creating too long and c… moreomplex ones, which would be confusing and thus bad.
"Your eyes are red." She says. He blushes and falls down from the close proximity. "Why are you all by yourself?" She questions.
can be turned into: "Your eyes are red." She says, making him blush and fall down from the close proximity. "Why are you all by yourself?"
That way, there will also absolutely not be any confusion about who is talking, since Rhys is still not put into focus. At the same time, you still described his actions.
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Together in Heaven? Yep.
this is actually pretty cool. I like tragic romances.
you are better fighting for the Horde, soldier. Or Dahl officers will have to have a serious word with you, maggot!
If they're anything like this one then by all means, don't hesitate to post 'em
haha, comon bro!
just said this game was scary, what horror games supposed to be.
Now I get why you like Guilty Crown so much
true, true. Can't get enough of that stuff, really. Sadly, there isn't much of that genre to find in anime.
I feel like it's hard to find good romance anime in general.
Oh...my...god...finally!
Finally someone who agrees that tyrant Shu was what the show needed. It made perfect sense and was a necessary character development! Thank you! I was getting so sick of people treating that part as "trainwreck" and "pulling stuff out of their asses". It was by far the best part of the anime and definitely what got me hooked in the first place.
Do you guys have any suggestions for dealing with an ear infection? A bad one, I'm going through hell because of it and can't sleep. Please, help guys, please. It's still nighttime I have to wait 5 or 6 hours until I can go to the doctor, help.
Tell me about it...I feel like they only produce one each year and if you are unlucky, it will suck.
All you get instead is harem filled with fanservice. There isn't even the finest bit of romance in there...just mindless cockteases everywhere. It's so frustrating.
I don't think there's really anything you can do about it except wait until morning. Take some painkillers, paracetamol maybe?
I agree 100%
I don't have pain killers or paracetamol. How about ways to speed up the time until I have to go?
Ah, that's a pity. Might wanna stock up for future emergencies :P
Um, play games? Watch TV/YouTube? Find a non-dead thread and have long discussions about whatnot? Count sheep?
One more thing, can second hand smoke cause an ear infection? Cause everybody who lives with me smokes.
Hm, I just looked it up and it seems it can, Poor Air Quality is written down as a "risk factor". Although I believe it's usually caused by illnesses such as colds, flu, allergies etc.
I'm going to perfect my German so I can insult people in german
I agree with the spoiler tags in general, but damn, I literally just said the game was awesome and worth buying! That's no crime, is it?
I'm not sure how old this post is, since the thread is pretty dead now, but if you're in a city, just go to the emergency room of the nearest hospital, they should be able to help you there without the need to wait several hours.
If that is not possible and you don't have any pain killers, then alcohol maybe? I wouldn't recommend it though.
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Das ist eine wunderbare Idee
Diese Idee ist vollkommen hirnrissig und lässt mich deine geistige Intelligenz anzweifeln. Mit absoluter Sicherheit besitzt du den IQ einer Nudel und bist dementsprechend sogar dümmmer als Brot. Der einzige Ausweg, den ich für dich sehe, ist deine erbärmliche Existenz unverzüglich zu terminieren um dem Rest der Menschheit mit deinem Dahinscheiden einen enormen Gefallen zu tun.
mit freundlichen Grüßen,
HALT'S MAUL, DU SPAST!
Something like that, maybe?
Something short I wrote while the thread was dead...
"Why are you crying?" The girl asks. Startled, the boy wipes the tears from his eyes.
"I wasn't crying!" The boy yells back. She smirks.
"Were to." She teases.
"I was not!" He insists. The girl steps closer and crouches down to match the boy. She leans forward untill her face is just inches from his.
"Your eyes are red." She says. He blushes and falls down from the close proximity. "Why are you all by yourself?" She questions. The boy's eyes fall and he begins to frown.
"No one wants to play with a 'jerk from Hyperion'," he mimics dejectedly. As he turns away from her, she grabs his hand and smiles.
"I'll play with you!" She beams. "My name's Fiona, what's yours?" She asks. The boy smiles back and stands up, with Fiona still in tow.
"My name's Rhys!" He exclaims. The two children run off together, hand in hand.
You seem to like writing dialogues. It's fun, isn't it? You should try writing fanfics. Though you would have to write more than just dialogues to tell a good story.
I've actually been writing dialogues because I do want to write full stories. I just don't really like how I write dialogue, so I've just been practicing.
Promiň že odpovídám tak pozdě, už jsem šel spát před tím, než jsi odpověděl.
To ani ne, pár měsíců zpátky jsem tu zahlédl pár Čechů, ale myslím, že už nejsou aktivní. A co jsem odpozoroval, většina hraje jenom TWD. Což je docela škoda, protože TftB je asi moje nejoblíbenější hra od Telltale.
Taky je tu docela aktivní jeden Slovák, ale ten se spíš pohybuje v GoT sekci.
Ale jinak máš asi pravdu, v TftB sekci jsme možná jediní dva Češi.
Haha... Trust me, if worgens were on the Horde, I would be Horde :P
Alliance sucks a lot ;_;
BTW, I can't wait for Legion xD
So können Sie zur Verbesserung Ihrer deutschen möchten, so können Sie die Menschen zu beleidigen? Was zum Teufel ist los mit dir ?! Bist du auf Drogen?!
Lol xD
It's fine actually. I write my dialogues more or less the same. If I absolutely had to find something to critizize, then that would be the fact that you wouldn't have to mention who speaks if the same person from before merely continues to talk. I mean stuff like this:
This is unnecessary, since anyone would just assume the previous talker would still speak until stated otherwise. It's not an utter no-go, but you seem to keep doing that and if you do it too often, it will become noticeable and harms the reading flow. ALso, it might look better and not so linear if you tried putting discriptive sentences before your actual dialogue so that the text formation doesn't look so...uniform. I mean, it's not a problem to always start a new line with dialogue, but it looks kinda forced. Sometimes, you could put dialogues to the end of a line by putting the descriptive text first.
instead of:
"I'll play with you!" She beams. "My name's Fiona, what's yours?" She asks. The boy smiles back and stands up, with Fiona still in tow.
"My name's Rhys!" He exclaims. The two children run off together, hand in hand.
you could do:
"I'll play with you!" She beams. "My name's Fiona, what's yours?" She asks.
The boy smiles back and stands up, with Fiona still in tow, happily exclaiming: "My name's Rhys!"
Following these words, the two children could be seen running off together, hand in hand.
Nothing really changed, but the line didn't start a "....you know what I mean? It puts variety into the text layout. Might prevent the reader's mind from tuning out from falling into a trod since the structure always remains the same, thus making reading the text a task you can do without much brain activity. You may have realized how your mind turns off while you brush your teeth, right? That's because after starting the process, the task itself is simple and doesn't require paying attention. If the text is written in a way the reader can reliably tell how the next line will turn out to be, the same thing will happen. In dialogue less than in actual text, but I thought it might be a valuable tip anyway.
Other than that, I don't think there is much to say...writing dialogue is easy and fun *because *it is easy. You can spend most of the time thinking of ways to let characters interact with each other without having to worry much about sentence structure and reading flow, normally.
Oh, you might also want to merge smaller sentences into slightly bigger ones. Be careful, though, as you might start creating too long and complex ones, which would be confusing and thus bad.
"Your eyes are red." She says. He blushes and falls down from the close proximity. "Why are you all by yourself?" She questions.
can be turned into: "Your eyes are red." She says, making him blush and fall down from the close proximity. "Why are you all by yourself?"
That way, there will also absolutely not be any confusion about who is talking, since Rhys is still not put into focus. At the same time, you still described his actions.
Thanks for the advice
So, this is pretty dead ;_;
S takovou za chvíli zjistíme, že půlka fora je z Čech.
I agree. That's a pretty good advice.
People will get more active later, that's for sure.
what's legion? Haven't played WoW since cataclysm.
No problem, man. Always nice to see people interested in writing fanfics and stuff.