Yes, actually I will change my vote because of missunderstanding it from the begining and realizing after re-reading and seeing Liquid post as well. ☺
[Convince Alex]
Eden McCoy
I just finished baking the pancakes when Alex woke up. She had Summer with her, who instantly ran up to me. I was always surpr… moreised dog's could run so fast. Just looking at her today made me wish i could take her on the trip, but it said so right in the pamphlet. No pets allowed. I rubbed the back of her ear as Alex came into the kitchen.
She yawned "Sorry i'm late sis. I just.......is that pancakes? Wow i wasn't expecting this. I thought i would have to cook for you today"
I smiled "Consider it a thank you gift"
"Then i accept it. I love it when you make them." she said as she grabbed a plate.
I stopped petting Summer and started to finish my own batch of pancakes.
"Anyway" she said in between eating "Be careful out there. I heard there's some pretty messed up news about what's happening in the streets lately. I would walk you out if i could but i have to go to work early"
Then i remembered what i wanted to tal… [view original content]
Eden McCoy
I just finished baking the pancakes when Alex woke up. She had Summer with her, who instantly ran up to me. I was always surpr… moreised dog's could run so fast. Just looking at her today made me wish i could take her on the trip, but it said so right in the pamphlet. No pets allowed. I rubbed the back of her ear as Alex came into the kitchen.
She yawned "Sorry i'm late sis. I just.......is that pancakes? Wow i wasn't expecting this. I thought i would have to cook for you today"
I smiled "Consider it a thank you gift"
"Then i accept it. I love it when you make them." she said as she grabbed a plate.
I stopped petting Summer and started to finish my own batch of pancakes.
"Anyway" she said in between eating "Be careful out there. I heard there's some pretty messed up news about what's happening in the streets lately. I would walk you out if i could but i have to go to work early"
Then i remembered what i wanted to tal… [view original content]
Also. great story. it took me 3 hours to read all.I just cant stop reading. one of the best stories i read here. today sucked, but your story made things better. Really. thanks a lot . There's is space for one more teacher? if not, im okay,i dont want to bother you. Im just excited for coming back. now im like... my reaction while reading this
Also. great story. it took me 3 hours to read all.I just cant stop reading. one of the best stories i read here. today sucked, but your stor… morey made things better. Really. thanks a lot . There's is space for one more teacher? if not, im okay,i dont want to bother you. Im just excited for coming back. now im like...
my reaction while reading this
First off i hope none of you were saddened by the wait. If you were im sorry. Next time parts start flowing i hope to not stop till we have a few good episodes in (can you believe the first one is only halfway done?). This last wait happened for a number of reasons.
First i recently had school and that took time away. Second i recently bought Witcher 2 and the entire Mass effect trilogy (which i almost have all the dlc for). And yesterday my copy of Dragón Age arrived......and im still in Mass Effect one.
The third reason is that this will be the part where i introduce the remaining submitted characters (minus one or two...exceptions which will appear in future eps). And suffice to say i have been nervous at my interpretation of one of them. Its only now that i have the confidence to do it.
So thats it guys. The story will start again soon. Hope you all have a good weekend.
Oh and by the way i plan on updating the thread and adding something i probably should have since the first place. So look forward to that. Anyway see you later
Hi guys. I should give you an update on stuff.
First off i hope none of you were saddened by the wait. If you were im sorry. Next time pa… morerts start flowing i hope to not stop till we have a few good episodes in (can you believe the first one is only halfway done?). This last wait happened for a number of reasons.
First i recently had school and that took time away. Second i recently bought Witcher 2 and the entire Mass effect trilogy (which i almost have all the dlc for). And yesterday my copy of Dragón Age arrived......and im still in Mass Effect one.
The third reason is that this will be the part where i introduce the remaining submitted characters (minus one or two...exceptions which will appear in future eps). And suffice to say i have been nervous at my interpretation of one of them. Its only now that i have the confidence to do it.
So thats it guys. The story will start again soon. Hope you all have a good weekend.
Oh and … [view original content]
Hi guys. I should give you an update on stuff.
First off i hope none of you were saddened by the wait. If you were im sorry. Next time pa… morerts start flowing i hope to not stop till we have a few good episodes in (can you believe the first one is only halfway done?). This last wait happened for a number of reasons.
First i recently had school and that took time away. Second i recently bought Witcher 2 and the entire Mass effect trilogy (which i almost have all the dlc for). And yesterday my copy of Dragón Age arrived......and im still in Mass Effect one.
The third reason is that this will be the part where i introduce the remaining submitted characters (minus one or two...exceptions which will appear in future eps). And suffice to say i have been nervous at my interpretation of one of them. Its only now that i have the confidence to do it.
So thats it guys. The story will start again soon. Hope you all have a good weekend.
Oh and … [view original content]
Hi guys. I should give you an update on stuff.
First off i hope none of you were saddened by the wait. If you were im sorry. Next time pa… morerts start flowing i hope to not stop till we have a few good episodes in (can you believe the first one is only halfway done?). This last wait happened for a number of reasons.
First i recently had school and that took time away. Second i recently bought Witcher 2 and the entire Mass effect trilogy (which i almost have all the dlc for). And yesterday my copy of Dragón Age arrived......and im still in Mass Effect one.
The third reason is that this will be the part where i introduce the remaining submitted characters (minus one or two...exceptions which will appear in future eps). And suffice to say i have been nervous at my interpretation of one of them. Its only now that i have the confidence to do it.
So thats it guys. The story will start again soon. Hope you all have a good weekend.
Oh and … [view original content]
Nah this is another group. Last one to introduce. Adam mentions in his first Part that some kids in the local university got picked for this along with his class. I don't think ill need anyone but if you want feel free to add.
Nah this is another group. Last one to introduce. Adam mentions in his first Part that some kids in the local university got picked for this along with his class. I don't think ill need anyone but if you want feel free to add.
This is very good, it gives a nice overview of the characters and it definitely makes it easier to keep track of all of them. Though, I have to ask, are all of these characters introduced already, or are some of them submitted characters who haven't been introduced yet? I looked through the list and there are a handful of names that I don't really recognize.
I only added characters who were introduced. They just haven't been mentioned alot. I'm betting you mean the members of Alpha squad and some of the scientists. In that case all the Alpha squad is in both of Nicks parts and the scientists appear in Emma Parts.
This is very good, it gives a nice overview of the characters and it definitely makes it easier to keep track of all of them. Though, I have… more to ask, are all of these characters introduced already, or are some of them submitted characters who haven't been introduced yet? I looked through the list and there are a handful of names that I don't really recognize.
Indeed, the characters I meant were a scientist and a member of Alpha squad, specifically Norman Laghdon and Rudolph Mervis. The other squad members and all of the other scientists sound familiar (or more than familiar in case of the scientists), but I can't recall these two.
I only added characters who were introduced. They just haven't been mentioned alot. I'm betting you mean the members of Alpha squad and some… more of the scientists. In that case all the Alpha squad is in both of Nicks parts and the scientists appear in Emma Parts.
Indeed, the characters I meant were a scientist and a member of Alpha squad, specifically Norman Laghdon and Rudolph Mervis. The other squad… more members and all of the other scientists sound familiar (or more than familiar in case of the scientists), but I can't recall these two.
Hey guys its been a while. First off i want to once again apologize for the lack of parts in the last weeks. If i have luck i can post the next part today. If not then i send you guys this to make sure you guys know that this is 100% continuing soon.
Ok guys here's an update. I have recently gotten back into writting. However it's not Prime yet (since i'm afraid my writting won't be as good after a long break unless i practice) its another secret project i'm working on which i plan on sharing with you guys if you're interasted. It should be done this weekend an after that Prime is up and going.
So basically, back to writting, secret project, might share, Prime comes back next week.
This secret project has me intrigued. If you're willing to share it, then I'm gladly going to read it. Also, I'm excited for the next parts of Prime, I'm sure it's going to be awesome
Ok guys here's an update. I have recently gotten back into writting. However it's not Prime yet (since i'm afraid my writting won't be as go… moreod after a long break unless i practice) its another secret project i'm working on which i plan on sharing with you guys if you're interasted. It should be done this weekend an after that Prime is up and going.
So basically, back to writting, secret project, might share, Prime comes back next week.
Ok guys here's an update. I have recently gotten back into writting. However it's not Prime yet (since i'm afraid my writting won't be as go… moreod after a long break unless i practice) its another secret project i'm working on which i plan on sharing with you guys if you're interasted. It should be done this weekend an after that Prime is up and going.
So basically, back to writting, secret project, might share, Prime comes back next week.
Ok guys here's an update. I have recently gotten back into writting. However it's not Prime yet (since i'm afraid my writting won't be as go… moreod after a long break unless i practice) its another secret project i'm working on which i plan on sharing with you guys if you're interasted. It should be done this weekend an after that Prime is up and going.
So basically, back to writting, secret project, might share, Prime comes back next week.
This secret project has me intrigued. If you're willing to share it, then I'm gladly going to read it. Also, I'm excited for the next parts of Prime, I'm sure it's going to be awesome
Comments
Yes, actually I will change my vote because of missunderstanding it from the begining and realizing after re-reading and seeing Liquid post as well. ☺
[Convince Alex]
Okay.
[Convince Alex]
[Let her beat you]
Why the second one?
I hope I can still vote. :P
Convince Alex, Fight back.
Great part as always. ^-^
BLUE!!!!!
Thanks for voting
No problem.
[Fight Back]
[Convince Alex]
if i can still vote
Why not
Im glad you're here
im glad im back and can see you guys again
Also. great story. it took me 3 hours to read all.I just cant stop reading. one of the best stories i read here. today sucked, but your story made things better. Really. thanks a lot
. There's is space for one more teacher? if not, im okay,i dont want to bother you. Im just excited for coming back. now im like...
my reaction while reading this
I could work one in but i might have to re write.
But.........private message me i think i could give you a......'special' offer.
Where is the new part? :-(
:0
Sry. I just rencently discovered Mass Effect......and Dragón Age......and Witcher....
Ill find time to write soon. Sorry for making you wait so long
.
Sorry again for the delay.
Ill try to post a Part this week
No problem, take your time, I know how those games can be time stealing... felt it myself :-)
Really which one?
And thank you for understanding.
It's fine man, life comes before writing.
Dragon Age and Witcher.
Hi guys. I should give you an update on stuff.
First off i hope none of you were saddened by the wait. If you were im sorry. Next time parts start flowing i hope to not stop till we have a few good episodes in (can you believe the first one is only halfway done?). This last wait happened for a number of reasons.
First i recently had school and that took time away. Second i recently bought Witcher 2 and the entire Mass effect trilogy (which i almost have all the dlc for). And yesterday my copy of Dragón Age arrived......and im still in Mass Effect one.
The third reason is that this will be the part where i introduce the remaining submitted characters (minus one or two...exceptions which will appear in future eps). And suffice to say i have been nervous at my interpretation of one of them. Its only now that i have the confidence to do it.
So thats it guys. The story will start again soon. Hope you all have a good weekend.
Oh and by the way i plan on updating the thread and adding something i probably should have since the first place. So look forward to that. Anyway see you later
You're back
!
Hey, no problem ☺take your time
Everyone please direct your attention to the top of the thread, right under the episode titles.
Yep i added a character list
. What do you guys think?
Nice, will the actual students "level up" to college students or you will need some more characters for this group?
Nah this is another group. Last one to introduce. Adam mentions in his first Part that some kids in the local university got picked for this along with his class. I don't think ill need anyone but if you want feel free to add.
If you don't need anyone, then I understand :-) Will just wait for another parts though.
This is very good, it gives a nice overview of the characters and it definitely makes it easier to keep track of all of them. Though, I have to ask, are all of these characters introduced already, or are some of them submitted characters who haven't been introduced yet? I looked through the list and there are a handful of names that I don't really recognize.
I only added characters who were introduced. They just haven't been mentioned alot. I'm betting you mean the members of Alpha squad and some of the scientists. In that case all the Alpha squad is in both of Nicks parts and the scientists appear in Emma Parts.
Indeed, the characters I meant were a scientist and a member of Alpha squad, specifically Norman Laghdon and Rudolph Mervis. The other squad members and all of the other scientists sound familiar (or more than familiar in case of the scientists), but I can't recall these two.
Great work as always
Well Norman basically said 3 things and Rudolph was called by his nickname 'Merv'.
I had to reread a few parts, but I remember them now. Thinking about it, I actually remembered Merv, it was his full name that kinda confused me
Thanks
Hey guys its been a while. First off i want to once again apologize for the lack of parts in the last weeks. If i have luck i can post the next part today. If not then i send you guys this to make sure you guys know that this is 100% continuing soon.
Ok guys here's an update. I have recently gotten back into writting. However it's not Prime yet (since i'm afraid my writting won't be as good after a long break unless i practice) its another secret project i'm working on which i plan on sharing with you guys if you're interasted. It should be done this weekend an after that Prime is up and going.
So basically, back to writting, secret project, might share, Prime comes back next week.
This secret project has me intrigued. If you're willing to share it, then I'm gladly going to read it. Also, I'm excited for the next parts of Prime, I'm sure it's going to be awesome
Share, share - made me curious.
Great! And if you share the secret project, I'll definitely give it a read.
Thank you Liquid, i hope you'll like it. And yes i hope it will be, i got big plans for Prime.....