My mom made teriyaki chicken for dinner... I ended up mixing the chicken she gave me with two huge bowls of spinach and kale. It was so good… more I wanna cry. And super filling.
8 year old me would be screaming at the possibility of kale, but me now wants all the spinach and kale.
I like food cos it is yummy
I will put this in my tummy
We can have all the rice!
All we have to do is Go! Go! Grab a bowl!
Pastries abound made up with thick butter and cream
Doughs all around, so much to choose - I wanna scream!
I'll give you strength, you give me bread; oat, rye, and wheat!
Flavours won't fade. If you're with me, my enemies will never eat.
We will fry up all the bacon
Just the real stuff I ain't fakin!
There is nothing we can't sample
Nuggets or some fries - We will eat them all!
I like food cos it is yummy
Even if it's slightly soggy!
When fried up on the grill
All we need do's get first dibs!
I like food cos it is yummy
I will put this in my tummy
We can have all the rice!
All we have to do is Go! Go! Grab a bowl!
Hm... Ever since I started to improve on my writing with dialogue and character development, I noticed I now find it harder to visualize fight scenes in my mind like I used to. Before I focused heavily on combat so it was very fluid and dynamic, but now it seems stiff and sluggish in my visualizing.
Usually the dialogue and character development is more interesting than the fights. Of course, the fights should be interesting, too, but they should be used to show some aspects of the fighters. Do they "cheat"? Are they merciless? Are they cowards? How do they react to an unexpected move? Is this fight damaging the surroundings in any way? Is that important?
Hm... Ever since I started to improve on my writing with dialogue and character development, I noticed I now find it harder to visualize fig… moreht scenes in my mind like I used to. Before I focused heavily on combat so it was very fluid and dynamic, but now it seems stiff and sluggish in my visualizing.
Ha ha... hahaha... fuck. That's a problem.
Well, I grew up with Dragon Ball Z, Bleach and Naruto for the majority of my life. So the combat scenes were a huge inspiration to me, even the games Naruto Storm series, the Yakuza series and DBZ Budokai Tenkaichi series. I've always been leaning to the action genre. And as such, I thought up action stories.
The story I'm writing is heavily on the character development and world building side but I like to have my action scenes which are to be intense and fluid. So far the only way I can get close to the thought process I had with visualizing fight scenes is by writing it as I further the story, even then sometimes the movement is stiff and sluggish in my head. Which goes for all the characters, even the agile ones. Personality isn't the problem, it's fluidity and movement. Before, I had no problem fully visualizing the fight scenes in my head just by keeping up with the beat with music I listened to or just by spacing out. Now it's kinda disjointed, sluggish and stiff most of all. Like I'm lacking focus on this in favor of the other.
I just need to find a way to balance my mind's focus between world/character building and action scenes. Easier said than done though.
EDIT: Added in more. I appreciate the response btw.
Usually the dialogue and character development is more interesting than the fights. Of course, the fights should be interesting, too, but t… morehey should be used to show some aspects of the fighters. Do they "cheat"? Are they merciless? Are they cowards? How do they react to an unexpected move? Is this fight damaging the surroundings in any way? Is that important?
Hm... Ever since I started to improve on my writing with dialogue and character development, I noticed I now find it harder to visualize fig… moreht scenes in my mind like I used to. Before I focused heavily on combat so it was very fluid and dynamic, but now it seems stiff and sluggish in my visualizing.
Ha ha... hahaha... fuck. That's a problem.
Can't exactly say much at the moment since this is the project I like to earn a living off of and have it monetized (I will reveal more about it when I'm ready to start launching). Basically it's an old story I came up with during high school. It's a manga with supernatural and fantasy aspects, it focuses heavily on character/world building but with a good amount of emphasis on fighting as well (consider TWD Forum Comic as an appetizer). It even has romance in it, which I know is ironic since I have no interesting in dating in real life, but I feel like trying something interesting compared to my usual stories. I can say the story will involve spirits, demons and such in the modern world.
And there's one more thing I can san, one of my earlier posts mentioned it was a mature read. Meaning it's gonna be a bit of a dark story, not as dark as Walking Dead for example, but focuses on some themes that are relevant to real life such a depression and traumatic experiences. It will have it's light moments that are filled with hope and smile inducing. Bit of a feels trip. There may be another reason or two but I will explain that in the future as I have to get going, I'm meeting a friend today.
Honestly if I could change my username I'd probably make it something stupid like "Zooboo" or "SuperSandLesbian" so I don't know why I always complain like my current UN is the worst thing ever.
EDIT: This is the kind of shit I'm talking about.
No Battle Gear in missions, no chapter 3, no mission 51, disappointing ammount of bosses/boss variety/boss quality, mission creator removed, online co-op removed, adult Chico removed, etc.
That means nothing really, I change it weekly at this point. I'm just saying with that power I'd probably change my username on here to something stupid that I can't change.
That feeling when you set aside an hour of your time and spend tons of mental energy composing a thought-out post, in reply to somebody asking for elaboration on a topic that has never before been discussed, and yet apparently nobody is interested in the topic and your post goes completely unread.
And when you have a glimpse of hope before going to sleep that somebody might have liked it, or that the notification system could've broken down as usual and somebody left you anything in reply, and yet the post sits intact, in solitude.
A white box with a black circle lies inside a comment without reply.
The game that keeps on disappointing me.
No Battle Gear in missions, no chapter 3, no mission 51, disappointing ammount of bosses/boss variety/boss quality, mission creator removed, online co-op removed, adult Chico removed, etc.
I just spent 7 hours playing Dragon Ball Xenoverse. 3 of which were dedicated to unlocking Super Saiyan (which I did! ). I feel like a kid playing through Dragon Ball Z Budokai again trying to unlock all the characters. God the memories.
I just tried bashing my head really hard against a wall in an attempt to knock me out so I can go to bed. And it fucking failed, and now I'm less tired than before because of the pain.
That feeling when you set aside an hour of your time and spend tons of mental energy composing a thought-out post, in reply to somebody aski… moreng for elaboration on a topic that has never before been discussed, and yet apparently nobody is interested in the topic and your post goes completely unread.
And when you have a glimpse of hope before going to sleep that somebody might have liked it, or that the notification system could've broken down as usual and somebody left you anything in reply, and yet the post sits intact, in solitude.
A white box with a black circle lies inside a comment without reply.
This comment was not depressing at all.
That's... that's never a good idea... Do what I do, put on a Zelda soundtrack, sleep next to a fan and don't think about anything. Usually works for me.
I just tried bashing my head really hard against a wall in an attempt to knock me out so I can go to bed. And it fucking failed, and now I'm less tired than before because of the pain.
That feeling when you set aside an hour of your time and spend tons of mental energy composing a thought-out post, in reply to somebody aski… moreng for elaboration on a topic that has never before been discussed, and yet apparently nobody is interested in the topic and your post goes completely unread.
And when you have a glimpse of hope before going to sleep that somebody might have liked it, or that the notification system could've broken down as usual and somebody left you anything in reply, and yet the post sits intact, in solitude.
A white box with a black circle lies inside a comment without reply.
This comment was not depressing at all.
I just tried bashing my head really hard against a wall in an attempt to knock me out so I can go to bed. And it fucking failed, and now I'm less tired than before because of the pain.
That's... that's never a good idea... Do what I do, put on a Zelda soundtrack, sleep next to a fan and don't think about anything. Usually works for me.
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I should try that myself sometime. That sounds delicious!
Hooray Food!
Hm... Ever since I started to improve on my writing with dialogue and character development, I noticed I now find it harder to visualize fight scenes in my mind like I used to. Before I focused heavily on combat so it was very fluid and dynamic, but now it seems stiff and sluggish in my visualizing.
Ha ha... hahaha... fuck. That's a problem.
Usually the dialogue and character development is more interesting than the fights. Of course, the fights should be interesting, too, but they should be used to show some aspects of the fighters. Do they "cheat"? Are they merciless? Are they cowards? How do they react to an unexpected move? Is this fight damaging the surroundings in any way? Is that important?
Well, I grew up with Dragon Ball Z, Bleach and Naruto for the majority of my life. So the combat scenes were a huge inspiration to me, even the games Naruto Storm series, the Yakuza series and DBZ Budokai Tenkaichi series. I've always been leaning to the action genre. And as such, I thought up action stories.
The story I'm writing is heavily on the character development and world building side but I like to have my action scenes which are to be intense and fluid. So far the only way I can get close to the thought process I had with visualizing fight scenes is by writing it as I further the story, even then sometimes the movement is stiff and sluggish in my head. Which goes for all the characters, even the agile ones. Personality isn't the problem, it's fluidity and movement. Before, I had no problem fully visualizing the fight scenes in my head just by keeping up with the beat with music I listened to or just by spacing out. Now it's kinda disjointed, sluggish and stiff most of all. Like I'm lacking focus on this in favor of the other.
I just need to find a way to balance my mind's focus between world/character building and action scenes. Easier said than done though.
EDIT: Added in more. I appreciate the response btw.
What are you writing?
Can't exactly say much at the moment since this is the project I like to earn a living off of and have it monetized (I will reveal more about it when I'm ready to start launching). Basically it's an old story I came up with during high school. It's a manga with supernatural and fantasy aspects, it focuses heavily on character/world building but with a good amount of emphasis on fighting as well (consider TWD Forum Comic as an appetizer). It even has romance in it, which I know is ironic since I have no interesting in dating in real life, but I feel like trying something interesting compared to my usual stories. I can say the story will involve spirits, demons and such in the modern world.
And there's one more thing I can san, one of my earlier posts mentioned it was a mature read. Meaning it's gonna be a bit of a dark story, not as dark as Walking Dead for example, but focuses on some themes that are relevant to real life such a depression and traumatic experiences. It will have it's light moments that are filled with hope and smile inducing. Bit of a feels trip. There may be another reason or two but I will explain that in the future as I have to get going, I'm meeting a friend today.
You obviously got no regrets about your twitter name tho, since you can change it whenever.
So I just watched Sausage Party... I don't know what to think..... I didn't expect an orgy scene xD
Ooh thank you if I had found this earlier I would put all my force at you
Should I start reading the manga?
Finished for the night. Touka and her kagune.
The game that keeps on disappointing me.
No Battle Gear in missions, no chapter 3, no mission 51, disappointing ammount of bosses/boss variety/boss quality, mission creator removed, online co-op removed, adult Chico removed, etc.
That means nothing really, I change it weekly at this point. I'm just saying with that power I'd probably change my username on here to something stupid that I can't change.
I fell down the stairs today.
Whoa, this place has changed a lot. Anyone remember me??
I actually do, it's been a long time.
Yikes! That had to suck.
whimp
That feeling when you set aside an hour of your time and spend tons of mental energy composing a thought-out post, in reply to somebody asking for elaboration on a topic that has never before been discussed, and yet apparently nobody is interested in the topic and your post goes completely unread.
And when you have a glimpse of hope before going to sleep that somebody might have liked it, or that the notification system could've broken down as usual and somebody left you anything in reply, and yet the post sits intact, in solitude.
A white box with a black circle lies inside a comment without reply.
This comment was not depressing at all.
I remember you too. What's up? ^-^
Oh shit, you're a moderator xD
nu
Nothing much, just kind of hanging around.
Yep!
Hey!
I GOT AN A- ON MY IN-CLASS POLI SCI MIDTERM!!
Now I just gotta keep my ish together and do some extra credit and I can at least get a B+.
I'm legally an adult now.
Meh. So far I adore the game, even with the shit Konami wouldn't let Hideo put in.
Happy birthday and cheers on adulthood!
I just spent 7 hours playing Dragon Ball Xenoverse. 3 of which were dedicated to unlocking Super Saiyan (which I did!
). I feel like a kid playing through Dragon Ball Z Budokai again trying to unlock all the characters. God the memories.
I just tried bashing my head really hard against a wall in an attempt to knock me out so I can go to bed. And it fucking failed, and now I'm less tired than before because of the pain.
Is that the Randall one?
That sounds fucking scary as shit. Congrats tho.
That's... that's never a good idea... Do what I do, put on a Zelda soundtrack, sleep next to a fan and don't think about anything. Usually works for me.
Yo I'll read it. I'd honestly hate to see all that effort go to waste.
.... Why on Earth did you think that would have worked? And even if it did you'd be risking a concussion.
I'm an idiot that wants to sleep. That's why.
Music, fsr, never helps me sleep.
Then turn on some Late Night with Cry and Russ highlights on low volume while sleeping next to a fan. That also helps me sleep.
@clemyclooandbabyboo rip off D.Va