Boy Blue Story Part 1 (This isnt real, just an idea.)
It was a midsummer's day while Snow white and Boy Blue were filing paperwork in the business office. When Snow got a phone call. "Hello, Deputy Mayor Snow White speaking how may I as-- Ah, no Sheriff Wolf is not here at the mome-- What about Colin? Well, I don't care how much money his aunt left him in her will! HE. IS. STAYING!" She said as she slammed down the phone. "I guess that Colin has some nerve asking to come back." Blue said. "You're telling me." Snow said. All of a sudden, a thud came from the door. "Did you hear that, Miss White?" Blue asked. The door opened. "Hel-p.. Me.. PLEASE!" the women said.
The women had red-orange hair with smooth curls. She was covered with a mixture of blood and dirt. Her clothes ripped, dirty, and a bit of ash. "Oh dear god! What happened?!" Snow exclaimed. "Uh, I don't think she can respond, her wounds look fatal. I'll go get Swineheart." A few minutes passed and Dr. Swineheart has arrived. "Where is she?" he said. "On the table, next to the magic mirror." Snow said. "It’s a good time you called me when you did. If you waited any longer she wouldn't have made it." Swineheart said. "So, uh, will she be okay?" Blue asked. "She'll be fine just, give me some time." he said.
"She's awake!" he exclaimed. "Uh, áit a bhfuil mé ?" the woman said. "Oh, we can't understand her." Snow whispered. "I think she’s speaking Irish. "I think I can talk to her, um, dia duit , tá mé Boy Gorm . Cad is ainm duit ? "M-M-Margaret." She said. "An féidir leat labhairt Béarla ?" Blue asked. 'Um, a little.." Margaret said. "Pardon me Blue, but mind telling us what you're doing?" Snow asked. "I'm asking her if she speaks English. I'm about to ask her about her story."
"Cad é do scéal ?" Blue asked. "And can you do it in English?" "I'll try." she said. "Whenever your ready." Snow said. " I was born in County Donegal. In west Ireland. I had a farm. One day I was doing my daily chores when I saw this beautiful man walk up towards me. His name was Simon, son of the King Of The East. His crew was running low on supplies. I told him I'd give him my cattle if I could go with him. It was hard, but I convinced him. And we were off. One day, the sea was covered in mist so we started rowing. On the third day, the mist lifted and we found ourselves lost at sea. Suddenly we saw a storm brewing. And then a serpent erupted in a burst of spray. The serpent wanted me but, Simon refused. He was so sweet. I miss him.. But I rowed away in a small boat making I didn't want to cause any more deaths. The serpent found me and tried to eat me. I pulled an ax , wounding it terribly. I was thrashed far from Simon's ship. I hit my head on my boat and was knocked out. I awoke by rain hitting me. I saw a house with lights on. I went to it and asked to come in. Lucky for me she let me in. She gave me milk and bread. She used to live in a castle but she was driven from it by a giant. There was a sword and ring above her fire place. Whoever fit the ring was fit to kill the giant. The storm raged for days. But whenever it was thin, I would go out and scan the sea. I vowed I would find him. The day I decide to go out and find Simon, there he is in the doorway. We just stared at each other. 'I haven't stopped looking for you.' he said. 'I was just about to go look for you.' l told him. I was about to leave when the old women said l could leave until the giant was slayed. Simon said he would kill it to set me free. But Simon couldn't fit the ring. So l couldn't leave. He thought he could take it with his OWN sword. I begged him not to but he didn't listen. The hag created a picture in her pot, showing Simon at the castle. 'FOR MARGARET!!' he yelled. I saw him, praying for him to give him the final blow. But- " "Do you need a tissue?" Blue asked. "No thanks." she said. "Continue." Snow said. "I saw the giant kill him. Right in front of my own eyes. I grabbed the ring and put it on. I was the chosen one. I grabbed the sword. And I was off. I got there and he laughed. And guess what I did." "What? Blue and Snow said together. "I chopped his head off." Margaret said with a smirk. "I knelt next to his body weeping. The hag came saying she could help. She had this healing bottle in her castle. She put it on Simon. He came back to me. And we returned to his ship. We were wed at his castle. Sadly, a few weeks after, the exile started and Simon tried to save is father from being beheaded but while they let the rope go, it was too late. Well there. That's my story."
"Wow. Uh, I don't know what to say." Snow said, " Do you plan on staying in Fabletown?" Blue asked. "If l had some clothes and a place to stay. Sure." she said. "She can stay with me!" Blue exclaimed. " I can sleep on the couch and she can sleep in my room. Um, I mean if that's okay with you.." "It sounds lovely. I will stay with Boy Blue. And Miss White may I borrow some of your clothing?" "Sure Margaret." Snow replied. "Wonderful!!" She said standing up. "Oh my, uh Miss Margaret. Your blanket, it uh fell off.." Blue said while blushing. "Oh oops! Pardon me." She replied. "Well come on, let's go get you some clothes." Snow said.
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An idea as in for next season..? Or something for else.
A bit of both. This is only part one, so much more will come. Did you read the entire thing? What did you think?
Honestly I didn't really like it, and its hard to read since there's no paragraphs or description of the setting, as well as what the characters are feeling or thinking
Im not a writer by trade but that's just my take.
I had paragraphs in the real one, but l guess something went wrong and no more paragraphs.
Okay, something is wrong. It doesn't look like it will add my changes. I made the paragraphs but it's not there.
Did you use your space bar? Try using your enter key to make the line breaks after the paragraphs instead.
Just tried, neither worked.