Gustac
(!) persuade her to do it
She was still looking at you, with her eyes begging for you to change your mind. But no. It was too l… moreate. She already was too deep in this.
Gustac: I am sorry, but you unfortunatly don 't have a choice.
Konni: Like hell I don 't! I will walk out of this and you can 't do anything about it!
Gustac: I guess you are not thinking of all the people who will die if you don 't.
Her eyes had started to become blue again. That meant she was mad. You had her right on the spot.
Gustac: I understand why you don 't want to do this. Taking a life without a reason can be hard even for me. But I am afraid that this is going to happen for the greater good of our city. Anyway, you have done it before. Why not this time?
Her face took a look that reminded you a killer looking at his victim, right before killing it. You had never seen her like taht before. Her fist was on the table, so tightly closed that … [view original content]
Name: Alex
Superhero/Supervillan name: EmotiBot
Age: 34
Basic apearence:
Clan: White
Super power: Doesn't have powers. Fi… moreghts with his weapons.
Special skill or weapon: His sword "light saber". Pincers. And in emergencies he uses his nuke that he has on his back.
**Suit appearance: **
Backstory: Alex was bullied through out his life. His hatred grew every single day. In his parent's garage, he created the EmotiBot. A small monitor that communicated by emoticons. One day, one of his high school bullies went into his garage and destroyed EmotiBot. Alex, crushed by this, said it was the last straw.
Every day after college, he came to his parent's garage and created EmotiBot 2.0, with a mechanic body. Alex noticed that EmotiBot couldn't function it's body parts, so he decided that he, himself, was going to control EmotiBot's body by going inside his torso. After that day, he started creating chaos around the cit… [view original content]
Gustac
(!) persuade her to do it
She was still looking at you, with her eyes begging for you to change your mind. But no. It was too l… moreate. She already was too deep in this.
Gustac: I am sorry, but you unfortunatly don 't have a choice.
Konni: Like hell I don 't! I will walk out of this and you can 't do anything about it!
Gustac: I guess you are not thinking of all the people who will die if you don 't.
Her eyes had started to become blue again. That meant she was mad. You had her right on the spot.
Gustac: I understand why you don 't want to do this. Taking a life without a reason can be hard even for me. But I am afraid that this is going to happen for the greater good of our city. Anyway, you have done it before. Why not this time?
Her face took a look that reminded you a killer looking at his victim, right before killing it. You had never seen her like taht before. Her fist was on the table, so tightly closed that … [view original content]
Gustac
(!) persuade her to do it
She was still looking at you, with her eyes begging for you to change your mind. But no. It was too l… moreate. She already was too deep in this.
Gustac: I am sorry, but you unfortunatly don 't have a choice.
Konni: Like hell I don 't! I will walk out of this and you can 't do anything about it!
Gustac: I guess you are not thinking of all the people who will die if you don 't.
Her eyes had started to become blue again. That meant she was mad. You had her right on the spot.
Gustac: I understand why you don 't want to do this. Taking a life without a reason can be hard even for me. But I am afraid that this is going to happen for the greater good of our city. Anyway, you have done it before. Why not this time?
Her face took a look that reminded you a killer looking at his victim, right before killing it. You had never seen her like taht before. Her fist was on the table, so tightly closed that … [view original content]
Gustac
(!) persuade her to do it
She was still looking at you, with her eyes begging for you to change your mind. But no. It was too l… moreate. She already was too deep in this.
Gustac: I am sorry, but you unfortunatly don 't have a choice.
Konni: Like hell I don 't! I will walk out of this and you can 't do anything about it!
Gustac: I guess you are not thinking of all the people who will die if you don 't.
Her eyes had started to become blue again. That meant she was mad. You had her right on the spot.
Gustac: I understand why you don 't want to do this. Taking a life without a reason can be hard even for me. But I am afraid that this is going to happen for the greater good of our city. Anyway, you have done it before. Why not this time?
Her face took a look that reminded you a killer looking at his victim, right before killing it. You had never seen her like taht before. Her fist was on the table, so tightly closed that … [view original content]
Gustac
(!) persuade her to do it
She was still looking at you, with her eyes begging for you to change your mind. But no. It was too l… moreate. She already was too deep in this.
Gustac: I am sorry, but you unfortunatly don 't have a choice.
Konni: Like hell I don 't! I will walk out of this and you can 't do anything about it!
Gustac: I guess you are not thinking of all the people who will die if you don 't.
Her eyes had started to become blue again. That meant she was mad. You had her right on the spot.
Gustac: I understand why you don 't want to do this. Taking a life without a reason can be hard even for me. But I am afraid that this is going to happen for the greater good of our city. Anyway, you have done it before. Why not this time?
Her face took a look that reminded you a killer looking at his victim, right before killing it. You had never seen her like taht before. Her fist was on the table, so tightly closed that … [view original content]
Name: Samantha Diana Jefferson
Superhero/Supervillan name: Yelly
Age: 9
Character: kind , extroverted , smart , funny , emotional
… more Basic apearence: brown eyes, brown Hair, 4 feet tall
Clan: none (at the start of the story then the legion/white)
Super power: Ultrasonic cry
Special skill or weapon: the one of above
Suit apearence: her ballet skirt
Backstory: A week ago , she saw her mother being killed by one of her "clients"( her mom was a hooker). She crying for her mother yelled at the killer but when her powers started and the killer get thrown to a building make of concrete and dying because of the impact. Now she is alone. She never get to know her father.
Name: Tobi
Age: 13
Appearance: A short 3 foot, walking and talking snow rabbit dressed like a ninja. His outfit is blue and his belt i… mores red. His bandanna is red. Silver hair and big, brown eyes.
Personality: Hyper-active, carefree, naïve. He can be very dangerous and unpredictable if angered. Not afraid to face danger, he loves the thrill of it. He's also a trickster. Known to be caring in tough times and always tries to make a positive atmosphere.
Clan: White
Super Power: Looney Toons physics, can create random shit in any shape and size, can fly by farting(beans is his fuel), explosive burping.
Weapon: Giant Red Scissor Blade
Backstory: It's a secret. Deal with it.
Have fun with this little guy.
You haven 't made clear weather you are the white or black clan so I am afraid that I won 't be able to use this character until you make it clear. Sorry.
Name: Cyril
Superhero Name: Writhe
Age: 36
Character: Quiet, contemplative, calm, enigmatic, amoral.
Writhe fought with the Sovi… moreets during their war in Afghanistan, before immigrating to America. His powers manifested themselves when he had a mental breakdown on the battlefield. He's conservative about using his power because it causes him great discomfort. Writhe mostly lacks a moral compass and plays the part of a villain because killing is one of the few skills at which he excels.
Appearance: Rather dark skin for a Russian. Bald, with brown facial hair and blue eyes. One of his ears was torn to shreds by shrapnel. Average build, around 5'8".
Special Power: Manipulation of pain -- Writhe has the power to cause an enemy's pain receptors to go out of control, incapacitating them like a taser. The results are messy, usually leaving the foe writhing on the ground, begging for death. A prolonged blast can cause the vict… [view original content]
You haven 't made clear weather you are the white or black clan so I am afraid that I won 't be able to use this character until you make it clear. Sorry.
You looked down from the rooftop you were standing on. It must have been taller than 15 floors. Only if you were not afraid of hights. You shallowed nervously. You lift your head up looking what was standing in front of you. And then, someone talked.
Figure: Teriffing, yet beautiful, isn 't it?
You turned around and saw a boy, about your age, with red eyes and black hair looking at you, smiling. No, it had been so long, what was he doing here? He had his hands behind his back, so he could be holding something. But that didn 't feel like something he would do. If he wanted you dead he would just go ahead and choke you. But it had been so long.... You looked at him for a second and then relized that he migtht actually be a threat after all. You shaped your bow and drew an arow on the air, aiming at him. The blue color was making your face look blue, revealing that you were not wearing your mask, and also that your eyes were turning blue. That either meant anger, fear or depression. No idea which one you were feeling back then, did it even matter anymore? If he hadn 't pointed that out you would have never even known.
Konni: What are you doing here?
Gustac: Oh, you know, just enjoing the scenery.
He didn 't even seem to care that you had an arow pointing at his head. Something was so wrong right there... He stared at you for a while, mustn 't have been more than a few seconds, 15 at most. He relized that you were not going to respond.
Gustac: To be honest I didn 't expect you to be here tonight. I thought I would be lucky enough to have fun with my "friends" without someone from your team interupting us.
Your eyes widened. Friends? No, this was confirmed to be an umbush before even you had time to relize what he was saying as a few shadows walked out from the dark parts of the roof. Dark parts? Being in New York, was that even possible? You saw a man with a green fedora and black shades, a girl, bit younger than you, with hands colored black, a boy around her age with white jeans, a bit older guy, about 30-35, bit fat and filthy, someone you guessed to be man, behing a black silk cloak wearing a mask which apeared to be representing a skull, one more man with a black suit and a bolt coming across his mask, a knight or something, he looked cool, a guy with a two colored coat, you knew the one was black but you couldn 't really make out the other one and one last with spicky boots and a red beared. They were so many.... You were dead. That was the best possible outcome at this point anyway. You decided to at least try and shoot one of them, maybe it would buy you time. You didn 't close your bow. You aimed at the guy with the red beard, he seemed the most mascular one, he would be the harder to take down. They were all aproaching, as if in slow motion. You were so scared. You drew the string back and got ready to shoot. But could you? You had never done it before. No, no, this was, important, your life was on the line. You felt the string getting deeper in your fingers. How long have you been holding it like that? You snaped out of it. You tended to have "blackouts" like this one. You were less that a second away from pulling your hand but thn you felt like you couldn 't move. The guy with the fedora had a smile even more creepy that the one he had just seconds ago. He really reminded you of....
Konni: Hey, Titan, I am not a fucking pupet!
You sudenly felt two hands on your shoulder. Who was that? You had hadn 't missed any of them, had you? Sudenly you felt such pain, like never before. You feel on you knees in less than a second and strugled not to scream from pain. You could feel every single inch of your boby begging for it to stop. You couldn 't handle it any more. You left a scream, so loud and so disturbing that even some of the people standing in front of you made a face filled with discuss.
Figure: STOP!
It was Gustac. What the fuck was he doing? The guy behind you stopped and you fell on the ground still feeling like your hole body was going to explode... You just lied there, trying to breath, feeling like a shot animal, about to die.
Gustac: She is mine...
He now had a soft smile. He walked up to you and grabbed you from your shirt and lifted you right above the ledge.
Marker: There is no cause in dropping her. She will just use her powers.
Gustac: No, she won 't. She is too weak right now to do anything.
You didn 't care. You wished he would just let you fall. You were so tired, so, so tired. You looked at him. He was enjoing this. You couldn 't just die there... You couldn 't just fall to your death! No, no, no! This was not going to happen!
Gustac: I am sorry in a way. I really am! But it doesn 't matter though, does it?
Konni: Yes... Yes it does. Cause I would feel awkard to say that I am sorry.
Gustac: Sorry? You are sorry? About what could any of you be sorry?
You gathered up all your strength, even some you didn 't have. You grabbed his hand and pulled back. He must have not been expecting this. His look was so suprized the whole time you two were falling. You got covered in blue light, for a few seconds, right before falling on a car, destroying it. You fell asleep...
You woke up, covered in blood. It was so warm... Wait, blood? When you relized you fell on the street and crawled back a bit. Was that yours? Then you relized the guy who had fallen behind the car. You got up and walked up to him. So much blood around him.... You took a closer look. His face was entirely painted red from the left side. You moved your face closer to his... Only then did you notice that a big piece of glass was stuck in his eye. You made a step back in suprize. You had done this. You. The people who had ambushed you were nowhere to be seen. They must have left. It was raining, making all the blood fall down the swer. Why? How? You, you killed someone....
You woke up in the black base 's bathroom. Your hands were relying on the sink to keep them from dropping your waight on the floor. The morror in front of it was still foggy, your cloths were still wet and so were your hair. Earlier today... he was right. You had caused someone to die before, and that someone was yourself. Taking a life is a big weight to take on you. Or at least it was the first time. You were going to do it. You were going to help... you were going to help yourself....
Comments
Awesome!
Thats okay man, you're doing great, no need to apologize.
I am not a man, but thanks anyway. :}
Damn!
I always mess up people's genders on the internet.
Theses introductions are amazing! Can't for the next part!
It 's ok. Not one person on the forums got mr right. :}
I am glad you liked them. :}
@blueneon
What do you think?
It is really good! Thanks for leaving a character!
Great part!
Thanks. :}
Hey! @Markd4547!
I'M ALIVE :'D
Hi! Did you read the new part yet?
That was awesome with so many feels well done blue :'D
I donb 't think there were that many feels, but thanks. :}
Nice. xD
Awesome part!! Team SamQ
you are a good writer. keep doing this, but take your time, im very patient
Just, congrats for the work, you have future doing this :P
Good character. A kid is something really cool to add in a dark story. It gives it deapth and a hint of innocence.
A fury like character, huh? Nice choice!
I wanted to give your story a little bit of comedy. Make things a little more fun for you. ;3
Thanks. I think it is needed too. Even horror needs a laugh now and then. :}
You shouldn 't expect a new part today. If I find time I will finish one chapter but don 't hope for much. For sure new part tommorow!
You haven 't made clear weather you are the white or black clan so I am afraid that I won 't be able to use this character until you make it clear. Sorry.![:\](https://community.telltale.com/resources/emoji/confused.png ":\")
HA-HA! I LIED!
Backstory spin off coming in an hour.
It says he plays the part of a villain...So I guess you could put him as white.
holy PLOT TWISST
I don 't think I saw that...Thanks for pointing it out, I tend to miss details.
YAS!
COMING THIS FALL: DEADLOCK: THE NOT SO TINY SPIN OFF!
Just trying to help!
Its in their character area or at least in the paragraph under it.
I'm excited for Leif Erikson
hinga dinga dorgen
I'm excited for the spin-off.
Hinka ding dong.
I working on a very cairten issue right now, with very cairten, but Leif will be around real soon! :}
Don't Rush yourself, just thinking aloud here!
Hinga
Dinga
Dorgen
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Hinkar
Dinger
Donger
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Thanks for being patient. And that goes for all of you! :}
Anyway, I am about done. Five minutes until release.
woooOOOOOOOHHHhh
M. Night Shyamalabingbong!
Spin off n1: Gustac 's death
Konni
You looked down from the rooftop you were standing on. It must have been taller than 15 floors. Only if you were not afraid of hights. You shallowed nervously. You lift your head up looking what was standing in front of you. And then, someone talked.
Figure: Teriffing, yet beautiful, isn 't it?
You turned around and saw a boy, about your age, with red eyes and black hair looking at you, smiling. No, it had been so long, what was he doing here? He had his hands behind his back, so he could be holding something. But that didn 't feel like something he would do. If he wanted you dead he would just go ahead and choke you. But it had been so long.... You looked at him for a second and then relized that he migtht actually be a threat after all. You shaped your bow and drew an arow on the air, aiming at him. The blue color was making your face look blue, revealing that you were not wearing your mask, and also that your eyes were turning blue. That either meant anger, fear or depression. No idea which one you were feeling back then, did it even matter anymore? If he hadn 't pointed that out you would have never even known.
Konni: What are you doing here?
Gustac: Oh, you know, just enjoing the scenery.
He didn 't even seem to care that you had an arow pointing at his head. Something was so wrong right there... He stared at you for a while, mustn 't have been more than a few seconds, 15 at most. He relized that you were not going to respond.
Gustac: To be honest I didn 't expect you to be here tonight. I thought I would be lucky enough to have fun with my "friends" without someone from your team interupting us.
Your eyes widened. Friends? No, this was confirmed to be an umbush before even you had time to relize what he was saying as a few shadows walked out from the dark parts of the roof. Dark parts? Being in New York, was that even possible? You saw a man with a green fedora and black shades, a girl, bit younger than you, with hands colored black, a boy around her age with white jeans, a bit older guy, about 30-35, bit fat and filthy, someone you guessed to be man, behing a black silk cloak wearing a mask which apeared to be representing a skull, one more man with a black suit and a bolt coming across his mask, a knight or something, he looked cool, a guy with a two colored coat, you knew the one was black but you couldn 't really make out the other one and one last with spicky boots and a red beared. They were so many.... You were dead. That was the best possible outcome at this point anyway. You decided to at least try and shoot one of them, maybe it would buy you time. You didn 't close your bow. You aimed at the guy with the red beard, he seemed the most mascular one, he would be the harder to take down. They were all aproaching, as if in slow motion. You were so scared. You drew the string back and got ready to shoot. But could you? You had never done it before. No, no, this was, important, your life was on the line. You felt the string getting deeper in your fingers. How long have you been holding it like that? You snaped out of it. You tended to have "blackouts" like this one. You were less that a second away from pulling your hand but thn you felt like you couldn 't move. The guy with the fedora had a smile even more creepy that the one he had just seconds ago. He really reminded you of....
Konni: Hey, Titan, I am not a fucking pupet!
You sudenly felt two hands on your shoulder. Who was that? You had hadn 't missed any of them, had you? Sudenly you felt such pain, like never before. You feel on you knees in less than a second and strugled not to scream from pain. You could feel every single inch of your boby begging for it to stop. You couldn 't handle it any more. You left a scream, so loud and so disturbing that even some of the people standing in front of you made a face filled with discuss.
Figure: STOP!
It was Gustac. What the fuck was he doing? The guy behind you stopped and you fell on the ground still feeling like your hole body was going to explode... You just lied there, trying to breath, feeling like a shot animal, about to die.
Gustac: She is mine...
He now had a soft smile. He walked up to you and grabbed you from your shirt and lifted you right above the ledge.
Marker: There is no cause in dropping her. She will just use her powers.
Gustac: No, she won 't. She is too weak right now to do anything.
You didn 't care. You wished he would just let you fall. You were so tired, so, so tired. You looked at him. He was enjoing this. You couldn 't just die there... You couldn 't just fall to your death! No, no, no! This was not going to happen!
Gustac: I am sorry in a way. I really am! But it doesn 't matter though, does it?
Konni: Yes... Yes it does. Cause I would feel awkard to say that I am sorry.
Gustac: Sorry? You are sorry? About what could any of you be sorry?
You gathered up all your strength, even some you didn 't have. You grabbed his hand and pulled back. He must have not been expecting this. His look was so suprized the whole time you two were falling. You got covered in blue light, for a few seconds, right before falling on a car, destroying it. You fell asleep...
You woke up, covered in blood. It was so warm... Wait, blood? When you relized you fell on the street and crawled back a bit. Was that yours? Then you relized the guy who had fallen behind the car. You got up and walked up to him. So much blood around him.... You took a closer look. His face was entirely painted red from the left side. You moved your face closer to his... Only then did you notice that a big piece of glass was stuck in his eye. You made a step back in suprize. You had done this. You. The people who had ambushed you were nowhere to be seen. They must have left. It was raining, making all the blood fall down the swer. Why? How? You, you killed someone....
You woke up in the black base 's bathroom. Your hands were relying on the sink to keep them from dropping your waight on the floor. The morror in front of it was still foggy, your cloths were still wet and so were your hair. Earlier today... he was right. You had caused someone to die before, and that someone was yourself. Taking a life is a big weight to take on you. Or at least it was the first time. You were going to do it. You were going to help... you were going to help yourself....