Well at least it doesn't look like Erika is the killer, does make me wonder if she's going to make it far being the only character that is not white doesn't seem like a good thing in a horror/mystery story...
I mean there are several characters that their races weren't specified but so far it seems like only her and maybe Ricardo (who has a Hispanic) name are not white, seems like a pretty big red flag coughThis is the kind of logic I was hinting at with that whole unrealistic view of the world/thinking the world works like TV shows and moviescough though by that same token being one of the only few women in a horror/mystery story and the only one that seems to be working on the investigation could also mean she's the only one that survives...
In any case that was a pretty big twist, seems like we might have a problem that requires the army instead of the police, I mean 20 people or more just got killed in an instant...
Episode 1, Chapter 3-2.
You run to Officer Tinpenny’s room to see what happened. On your way, you see the women with the tattoo walk by, … morethe Group keeps running, they see the room door, out of nowhere they hear screams coming from the lobby (Where the party is) Again?! Every here and there they hear sounds, like something dropping or a body falling… And screams lots of screams.
Ricardo: Do we go back? I mean, something’s happening in the lobby, but, do we risk it?
Erika: We need to see if Tinpenny’s aright, then, I don’t know.
Jordan: Look! If we’ll going to checkup on Tinpenny, let’s do it fast!
They run in to Tinpenny’s room, only to see a bloody sheet on the bed, over something. They pull back the sheet and find Officer Tinpenny’s body, without his head.
Erika: Where the fuck is his head!
Ricardo: Do we... look for it?
Jordan: I’m not looking for his head! Let’s just get out of here and call the goddamn Police!
G… [view original content]
Well at least it doesn't look like Erika is the killer, does make me wonder if she's going to make it far being the only character that is n… moreot white doesn't seem like a good thing in a horror/mystery story...
I mean there are several characters that their races weren't specified but so far it seems like only her and maybe Ricardo (who has a Hispanic) name are not white, seems like a pretty big red flag coughThis is the kind of logic I was hinting at with that whole unrealistic view of the world/thinking the world works like TV shows and moviescough though by that same token being one of the only few women in a horror/mystery story and the only one that seems to be working on the investigation could also mean she's the only one that survives...
In any case that was a pretty big twist, seems like we might have a problem that requires the army instead of the police, I mean 20 people or more just got killed in an instant...
Well at least it doesn't look like Erika is the killer, does make me wonder if she's going to make it far being the only character that is n… moreot white doesn't seem like a good thing in a horror/mystery story...
I mean there are several characters that their races weren't specified but so far it seems like only her and maybe Ricardo (who has a Hispanic) name are not white, seems like a pretty big red flag coughThis is the kind of logic I was hinting at with that whole unrealistic view of the world/thinking the world works like TV shows and moviescough though by that same token being one of the only few women in a horror/mystery story and the only one that seems to be working on the investigation could also mean she's the only one that survives...
In any case that was a pretty big twist, seems like we might have a problem that requires the army instead of the police, I mean 20 people or more just got killed in an instant...
We had just left, won't be that long of a drive. We're on our way to find Kat Homes, whos staying at a motel in Umatilla in room 102. We left in the news van, everyone was there Erika, Jordan, Grant and Ricardo. Erika's phone starts ringing.
Erika: Hello?
???: Hello? Ah, you're on, i have a offer to make you, i know your plan, you're going after Kat, is that right?
Erika: Who... Who is this?
???: My name is Desmond, i have something you want, something you need.
Erika: What is it?
Desmond: I know what motel Kat's staying at.
Erika: Okay, what do you want in return?
Desmond: I want you to relay anything you find to me, it's not to much, it's not that hard, do we have a deal?
Erika: Yeah, i think i can do that, but, i'd like to know why you want to get involved. So tell me.
Desmond: Let's just say... i have a personal vendetta with the killer, i want him caught, now do we a deal?
Erika: Yeah, deal, now where is Kat homes staying?
Desmond: She's staying at the motel 8, room 102. Bye and good luck.
She hangs up, We have the motel Kat's staying at. Once there in they pull up to motel 8, get out start walking up the stairs.
Ricardo: Do we knock? Or... kick it down?
Jordan: I get this, stand back.
Grant: You can't kick a motel door down, their built to stop that.
He doesn't care, he get's ready to kick it. Right when as he's kicking, the door flies open, and someone runs out and past them. (Jordan falls on his back :P) Shit follow her! They run after her. As they chase her, she runs to a construction site, Grant, looks behind him, he sees someone in a mask running after them, they have a knife. The figure quickly catches up him, Grant pulls out his revolver.
Episode 2, Chapter 1-1.
5:13 AM, 8 hours later.
We had just left, won't be that long of a drive. We're on our way to find Kat Homes, w… morehos staying at a motel in Umatilla in room 102. We left in the news van, everyone was there Erika, Jordan, Grant and Ricardo. Erika's phone starts ringing.
Erika: Hello?
???: Hello? Ah, you're on, i have a offer to make you, i know your plan, you're going after Kat, is that right?
Erika: Who... Who is this?
???: My name is Desmond, i have something you want, something you need.
Erika: What is it?
Desmond: I know what motel Kat's staying at.
Erika: Okay, what do you want in return?
Desmond: I want you to relay anything you find to me, it's not to much, it's not that hard, do we have a deal?
Erika: Yeah, i think i can do that, but, i'd like to know why you want to get involved. So tell me.
Desmond: Let's just say... i have a personal vendetta with the killer, i want him caught,… [view original content]
Erika and Ricardo are chasing Kat, for [Try to shoot the killer while running] Grant would try to shoot the killer while he runs he'll just keep running if he shoots the killer (He may miss the shot if that happens the killer will catch him) and [Turn around and shoot him] He will try to shoot/kill the killer. (Again, he may miss) Hope this helps.
So regardless of the choice Erika an Ricardo will continue to chase after Kat, right?
In that case I'll choose [Turn around and shoot] because letting the 2 characters I think might be red shirts pursue a suspect on their own definitely sounds like a smart idea.
Erika and Ricardo are chasing Kat, for [Try to shoot the killer while running] Grant would try to shoot the killer while he runs he'll just … morekeep running if he shoots the killer (He may miss the shot if that happens the killer will catch him) and [Turn around and shoot him] He will try to shoot/kill the killer. (Again, he may miss) Hope this helps.
Episode 2, Chapter 1-1.
5:13 AM, 8 hours later.
We had just left, won't be that long of a drive. We're on our way to find Kat Homes, w… morehos staying at a motel in Umatilla in room 102. We left in the news van, everyone was there Erika, Jordan, Grant and Ricardo. Erika's phone starts ringing.
Erika: Hello?
???: Hello? Ah, you're on, i have a offer to make you, i know your plan, you're going after Kat, is that right?
Erika: Who... Who is this?
???: My name is Desmond, i have something you want, something you need.
Erika: What is it?
Desmond: I know what motel Kat's staying at.
Erika: Okay, what do you want in return?
Desmond: I want you to relay anything you find to me, it's not to much, it's not that hard, do we have a deal?
Erika: Yeah, i think i can do that, but, i'd like to know why you want to get involved. So tell me.
Desmond: Let's just say... i have a personal vendetta with the killer, i want him caught,… [view original content]
Episode 2, Chapter 1-1.
5:13 AM, 8 hours later.
We had just left, won't be that long of a drive. We're on our way to find Kat Homes, w… morehos staying at a motel in Umatilla in room 102. We left in the news van, everyone was there Erika, Jordan, Grant and Ricardo. Erika's phone starts ringing.
Erika: Hello?
???: Hello? Ah, you're on, i have a offer to make you, i know your plan, you're going after Kat, is that right?
Erika: Who... Who is this?
???: My name is Desmond, i have something you want, something you need.
Erika: What is it?
Desmond: I know what motel Kat's staying at.
Erika: Okay, what do you want in return?
Desmond: I want you to relay anything you find to me, it's not to much, it's not that hard, do we have a deal?
Erika: Yeah, i think i can do that, but, i'd like to know why you want to get involved. So tell me.
Desmond: Let's just say... i have a personal vendetta with the killer, i want him caught,… [view original content]
Episode 2, Chapter 1-1.
5:13 AM, 8 hours later.
We had just left, won't be that long of a drive. We're on our way to find Kat Homes, w… morehos staying at a motel in Umatilla in room 102. We left in the news van, everyone was there Erika, Jordan, Grant and Ricardo. Erika's phone starts ringing.
Erika: Hello?
???: Hello? Ah, you're on, i have a offer to make you, i know your plan, you're going after Kat, is that right?
Erika: Who... Who is this?
???: My name is Desmond, i have something you want, something you need.
Erika: What is it?
Desmond: I know what motel Kat's staying at.
Erika: Okay, what do you want in return?
Desmond: I want you to relay anything you find to me, it's not to much, it's not that hard, do we have a deal?
Erika: Yeah, i think i can do that, but, i'd like to know why you want to get involved. So tell me.
Desmond: Let's just say... i have a personal vendetta with the killer, i want him caught,… [view original content]
Episode 2, Chapter 1-1.
5:13 AM, 8 hours later.
We had just left, won't be that long of a drive. We're on our way to find Kat Homes, w… morehos staying at a motel in Umatilla in room 102. We left in the news van, everyone was there Erika, Jordan, Grant and Ricardo. Erika's phone starts ringing.
Erika: Hello?
???: Hello? Ah, you're on, i have a offer to make you, i know your plan, you're going after Kat, is that right?
Erika: Who... Who is this?
???: My name is Desmond, i have something you want, something you need.
Erika: What is it?
Desmond: I know what motel Kat's staying at.
Erika: Okay, what do you want in return?
Desmond: I want you to relay anything you find to me, it's not to much, it's not that hard, do we have a deal?
Erika: Yeah, i think i can do that, but, i'd like to know why you want to get involved. So tell me.
Desmond: Let's just say... i have a personal vendetta with the killer, i want him caught,… [view original content]
Name: Joe Tucker
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Appearance: 180cm, short brown hair, Johnny Depp like beard, always wears a black hoodie and … morejeans.
Personality: Lonely, he doesn't talk much, pretty smart.
Backstory: He's working in his dad's auto repairing shop and has 2 brothers
Random: He's not a virgin, (Might surprise you ) because he had a girl friend who moved away a couple of years ago.
Name: Teddy Wolfson
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Appearance: Short, Faux Hawk Hairstyle, 5'o clock shadow facial hair, mostly wears clothes… more with wolves on them.
Personality: Easily offended, short-tempered, too smart for his own good, drug addict
Backstory: He grew up in crack dens and spent a lot of time in prison
Random detail: Virgin (girls find him too creepy) also likes fluffy animals.
The killer jumps! Grant stops and quickly turns around and fires 3 shots, the first two miss, the 3th shot hits the killer in the shoulder. The killer lands on Grant, knocking him, repeatedly stabs him in the gut. Almost out of nowhere, Jordan runs up and tackles the killer, he tries to punch the killer, but the killer grabs his arm then slashes him across the gut. (It isn't that deep) Jordan grabs the killers knife and stabs him in the leg, then, the killer kicks Jordan in the face (knocking him out) and runs into the alleyway, the killer got away.
Jordan: Grant... Grant say something, goddamnit! "Pulls out his cell phone" 911, what is your emergency?
Ricardo and Erika continue to chase Kat, whose heading to a construction site, as they run they see someone following them. Who has a knife, Kat runs in the construction site, she starts climbing up a ladder. Erike starts climbing after her, Ricardo almost makes it but is grabbed by the masked figure, he starts stabbing him over and over again. Then, one of the construction worker grabs the killer, and throws him to the side, the killer jumps back up and stabs the man in the arm, the man punches him over and over again, until the killer gives up. The man can see something happening on the top of the construction site. He checks to see if Ricardo is still alive, he's dead.
Erika keeps up with Kat, once there at the top they look at each other, Kat walks to the luge of the building and jumps off.
Domenick (He's the construction worker) Runs to Kats dead body. Erika gets down. She runs over to him.
Erika: Oh my god.
Domenick: Why... why were you chasing her?!
Erika: We need to know what happened, who the killer was, she knew, but she ran.
Domenick: Lets call the police, so... they can take care of this, i'll take you to you car, that guy with you he's dead, the one who killed him is over there... What the fuck? where is he!
After they call the police Domenick takes Erika to his car, as there driving, they see Jordan on the side of the road.
Episode 2, Chapter 1-2.
The killer jumps! Grant stops and quickly turns around and fires 3 shots, the first two miss, the 3th shot hits t… morehe killer in the shoulder. The killer lands on Grant, knocking him, repeatedly stabs him in the gut. Almost out of nowhere, Jordan runs up and tackles the killer, he tries to punch the killer, but the killer grabs his arm then slashes him across the gut. (It isn't that deep) Jordan grabs the killers knife and stabs him in the leg, then, the killer kicks Jordan in the face (knocking him out) and runs into the alleyway, the killer got away.
Jordan: Grant... Grant say something, goddamnit! "Pulls out his cell phone" 911, what is your emergency?
Ricardo and Erika continue to chase Kat, whose heading to a construction site, as they run they see someone following them. Who has a knife, Kat runs in the construction site, she starts climbing up a ladder. Erike starts climbing after her, Ricardo almost makes… [view original content]
Episode 2, Chapter 1-2.
The killer jumps! Grant stops and quickly turns around and fires 3 shots, the first two miss, the 3th shot hits t… morehe killer in the shoulder. The killer lands on Grant, knocking him, repeatedly stabs him in the gut. Almost out of nowhere, Jordan runs up and tackles the killer, he tries to punch the killer, but the killer grabs his arm then slashes him across the gut. (It isn't that deep) Jordan grabs the killers knife and stabs him in the leg, then, the killer kicks Jordan in the face (knocking him out) and runs into the alleyway, the killer got away.
Jordan: Grant... Grant say something, goddamnit! "Pulls out his cell phone" 911, what is your emergency?
Ricardo and Erika continue to chase Kat, whose heading to a construction site, as they run they see someone following them. Who has a knife, Kat runs in the construction site, she starts climbing up a ladder. Erike starts climbing after her, Ricardo almost makes… [view original content]
Episode 2, Chapter 1-2.
The killer jumps! Grant stops and quickly turns around and fires 3 shots, the first two miss, the 3th shot hits t… morehe killer in the shoulder. The killer lands on Grant, knocking him, repeatedly stabs him in the gut. Almost out of nowhere, Jordan runs up and tackles the killer, he tries to punch the killer, but the killer grabs his arm then slashes him across the gut. (It isn't that deep) Jordan grabs the killers knife and stabs him in the leg, then, the killer kicks Jordan in the face (knocking him out) and runs into the alleyway, the killer got away.
Jordan: Grant... Grant say something, goddamnit! "Pulls out his cell phone" 911, what is your emergency?
Ricardo and Erika continue to chase Kat, whose heading to a construction site, as they run they see someone following them. Who has a knife, Kat runs in the construction site, she starts climbing up a ladder. Erike starts climbing after her, Ricardo almost makes… [view original content]
Episode 2, Chapter 1-2.
The killer jumps! Grant stops and quickly turns around and fires 3 shots, the first two miss, the 3th shot hits t… morehe killer in the shoulder. The killer lands on Grant, knocking him, repeatedly stabs him in the gut. Almost out of nowhere, Jordan runs up and tackles the killer, he tries to punch the killer, but the killer grabs his arm then slashes him across the gut. (It isn't that deep) Jordan grabs the killers knife and stabs him in the leg, then, the killer kicks Jordan in the face (knocking him out) and runs into the alleyway, the killer got away.
Jordan: Grant... Grant say something, goddamnit! "Pulls out his cell phone" 911, what is your emergency?
Ricardo and Erika continue to chase Kat, whose heading to a construction site, as they run they see someone following them. Who has a knife, Kat runs in the construction site, she starts climbing up a ladder. Erike starts climbing after her, Ricardo almost makes… [view original content]
Episode 2, Chapter 1-2.
The killer jumps! Grant stops and quickly turns around and fires 3 shots, the first two miss, the 3th shot hits t… morehe killer in the shoulder. The killer lands on Grant, knocking him, repeatedly stabs him in the gut. Almost out of nowhere, Jordan runs up and tackles the killer, he tries to punch the killer, but the killer grabs his arm then slashes him across the gut. (It isn't that deep) Jordan grabs the killers knife and stabs him in the leg, then, the killer kicks Jordan in the face (knocking him out) and runs into the alleyway, the killer got away.
Jordan: Grant... Grant say something, goddamnit! "Pulls out his cell phone" 911, what is your emergency?
Ricardo and Erika continue to chase Kat, whose heading to a construction site, as they run they see someone following them. Who has a knife, Kat runs in the construction site, she starts climbing up a ladder. Erike starts climbing after her, Ricardo almost makes… [view original content]
Episode 2, Chapter 1-2.
The killer jumps! Grant stops and quickly turns around and fires 3 shots, the first two miss, the 3th shot hits t… morehe killer in the shoulder. The killer lands on Grant, knocking him, repeatedly stabs him in the gut. Almost out of nowhere, Jordan runs up and tackles the killer, he tries to punch the killer, but the killer grabs his arm then slashes him across the gut. (It isn't that deep) Jordan grabs the killers knife and stabs him in the leg, then, the killer kicks Jordan in the face (knocking him out) and runs into the alleyway, the killer got away.
Jordan: Grant... Grant say something, goddamnit! "Pulls out his cell phone" 911, what is your emergency?
Ricardo and Erika continue to chase Kat, whose heading to a construction site, as they run they see someone following them. Who has a knife, Kat runs in the construction site, she starts climbing up a ladder. Erike starts climbing after her, Ricardo almost makes… [view original content]
I know 2 died, but one of them was not white, which leaves us with only one non-white character remaining which probably means she's dying, because this seems to be a slasher.
Episode 2, Chapter 1-2.
The killer jumps! Grant stops and quickly turns around and fires 3 shots, the first two miss, the 3th shot hits t… morehe killer in the shoulder. The killer lands on Grant, knocking him, repeatedly stabs him in the gut. Almost out of nowhere, Jordan runs up and tackles the killer, he tries to punch the killer, but the killer grabs his arm then slashes him across the gut. (It isn't that deep) Jordan grabs the killers knife and stabs him in the leg, then, the killer kicks Jordan in the face (knocking him out) and runs into the alleyway, the killer got away.
Jordan: Grant... Grant say something, goddamnit! "Pulls out his cell phone" 911, what is your emergency?
Ricardo and Erika continue to chase Kat, whose heading to a construction site, as they run they see someone following them. Who has a knife, Kat runs in the construction site, she starts climbing up a ladder. Erike starts climbing after her, Ricardo almost makes… [view original content]
Episode 2, Chapter 1-2.
The killer jumps! Grant stops and quickly turns around and fires 3 shots, the first two miss, the 3th shot hits t… morehe killer in the shoulder. The killer lands on Grant, knocking him, repeatedly stabs him in the gut. Almost out of nowhere, Jordan runs up and tackles the killer, he tries to punch the killer, but the killer grabs his arm then slashes him across the gut. (It isn't that deep) Jordan grabs the killers knife and stabs him in the leg, then, the killer kicks Jordan in the face (knocking him out) and runs into the alleyway, the killer got away.
Jordan: Grant... Grant say something, goddamnit! "Pulls out his cell phone" 911, what is your emergency?
Ricardo and Erika continue to chase Kat, whose heading to a construction site, as they run they see someone following them. Who has a knife, Kat runs in the construction site, she starts climbing up a ladder. Erike starts climbing after her, Ricardo almost makes… [view original content]
Episode 2, Chapter 1-2.
The killer jumps! Grant stops and quickly turns around and fires 3 shots, the first two miss, the 3th shot hits t… morehe killer in the shoulder. The killer lands on Grant, knocking him, repeatedly stabs him in the gut. Almost out of nowhere, Jordan runs up and tackles the killer, he tries to punch the killer, but the killer grabs his arm then slashes him across the gut. (It isn't that deep) Jordan grabs the killers knife and stabs him in the leg, then, the killer kicks Jordan in the face (knocking him out) and runs into the alleyway, the killer got away.
Jordan: Grant... Grant say something, goddamnit! "Pulls out his cell phone" 911, what is your emergency?
Ricardo and Erika continue to chase Kat, whose heading to a construction site, as they run they see someone following them. Who has a knife, Kat runs in the construction site, she starts climbing up a ladder. Erike starts climbing after her, Ricardo almost makes… [view original content]
Episode 2, Chapter 1-2.
The killer jumps! Grant stops and quickly turns around and fires 3 shots, the first two miss, the 3th shot hits t… morehe killer in the shoulder. The killer lands on Grant, knocking him, repeatedly stabs him in the gut. Almost out of nowhere, Jordan runs up and tackles the killer, he tries to punch the killer, but the killer grabs his arm then slashes him across the gut. (It isn't that deep) Jordan grabs the killers knife and stabs him in the leg, then, the killer kicks Jordan in the face (knocking him out) and runs into the alleyway, the killer got away.
Jordan: Grant... Grant say something, goddamnit! "Pulls out his cell phone" 911, what is your emergency?
Ricardo and Erika continue to chase Kat, whose heading to a construction site, as they run they see someone following them. Who has a knife, Kat runs in the construction site, she starts climbing up a ladder. Erike starts climbing after her, Ricardo almost makes… [view original content]
6:08 AM, 1 hour scents Grant and Ricardo’s murders and Kat’s suicide.
Domenick drops Erika and Jordan at Desmond. His office is pretty big, you can see it from the parking lot. The windows are pretty big too. Erika and Jordan get out of Domenick’s car.
Domenick: It seems like you’re in some pretty deep shit, if you need help with anything, he’s a phone number.
They walk in to the office, there he is waiting for them.
Desmond: Ah, you’re here, well what have you found out?
Erika: Nothing. Grant and Ricardo have been killer, and, there’s two of them, two killers. One of them is shot in the shoulder, and he has a limp.
Desmond: Well, I’m sorry to hear about your loss. We need to jump start the search, or, we can set a trap for the killers. Drake Josen, Dan Pips and Sarah June. There still all suspects.
Jordan: There’s another suspect, some women with a tattoo that says “Gina”, we think she killed Tinpenny.
Desmond: it’s time you two go home, be careful your all targets for the killer. I’ll contact you when it’s time.
Erika and Jordan leave his office. Once they are gone, Desmond walks over to his desk and pulls out a gun.
Desmond: I know you’re in here, come out, or I’ll have to find you. “A masked figure walks out of a cabinet.” Ah. There you are, so, I’ll give you 3 options, run, take off you mask and tell me who you are, or you can try to kill me. I’m going to count to 5, if you haven't removed you mask, or ran away, by the time I count to 5. I’m going to shoot you. 1… 2… “The killer starts slowly walking forward.” 3… 4… “Just then someone walks in the room, Mr. Grand, the there’s a gas lit…. Shit…” 5! “He pulls the trigger only to hear a click” Clever bitch.
Desmond grabs Reuben (The guard that walked in) by the shirt, pulls him over the desk, they both fly out the glass window. They run to the car and leave as the building blows up.
End of Episode 2, Chapter 1. (I'd love to know what you want in this next few chapters.)
Episode 2, Chapter 1-3.
6:08 AM, 1 hour scents Grant and Ricardo’s murders and Kat’s suicide.
Domenick drops Erika and Jordan at Desmo… morend. His office is pretty big, you can see it from the parking lot. The windows are pretty big too. Erika and Jordan get out of Domenick’s car.
Domenick: It seems like you’re in some pretty deep shit, if you need help with anything, he’s a phone number.
They walk in to the office, there he is waiting for them.
Desmond: Ah, you’re here, well what have you found out?
Erika: Nothing. Grant and Ricardo have been killer, and, there’s two of them, two killers. One of them is shot in the shoulder, and he has a limp.
Desmond: Well, I’m sorry to hear about your loss. We need to jump start the search, or, we can set a trap for the killers. Drake Josen, Dan Pips and Sarah June. There still all suspects.
Jordan: There’s another suspect, some women with a tattoo that says “Gina”, we think she killed … [view original content]
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I'll love to hear it :P
Well at least it doesn't look like Erika is the killer, does make me wonder if she's going to make it far being the only character that is not white doesn't seem like a good thing in a horror/mystery story...
I mean there are several characters that their races weren't specified but so far it seems like only her and maybe Ricardo (who has a Hispanic) name are not white, seems like a pretty big red flag coughThis is the kind of logic I was hinting at with that whole unrealistic view of the world/thinking the world works like TV shows and moviescough though by that same token being one of the only few women in a horror/mystery story and the only one that seems to be working on the investigation could also mean she's the only one that survives...
In any case that was a pretty big twist, seems like we might have a problem that requires the army instead of the police, I mean 20 people or more just got killed in an instant...
Fucking mutants. :P
Maybe it's something like a witch or a demon though, maybe just a monster or maybe we're up again Jason Vorhees.
It's like they're wearing red star trak shirt. :P
Star Trek convention :P
T^T
Maybe i will make my own character, and make him wear a Red Star Trek shirt. :P
Yeah, have someone cosplay as Jean-Luc Picard, I would approve of that.
The end is going to take place at a party, i'll have him show up thinking it was a costume party!!!
Episode 2, Chapter 1-1.
5:13 AM, 8 hours later.
We had just left, won't be that long of a drive. We're on our way to find Kat Homes, whos staying at a motel in Umatilla in room 102. We left in the news van, everyone was there Erika, Jordan, Grant and Ricardo. Erika's phone starts ringing.
Erika: Hello?
???: Hello? Ah, you're on, i have a offer to make you, i know your plan, you're going after Kat, is that right?
Erika: Who... Who is this?
???: My name is Desmond, i have something you want, something you need.
Erika: What is it?
Desmond: I know what motel Kat's staying at.
Erika: Okay, what do you want in return?
Desmond: I want you to relay anything you find to me, it's not to much, it's not that hard, do we have a deal?
Erika: Yeah, i think i can do that, but, i'd like to know why you want to get involved. So tell me.
Desmond: Let's just say... i have a personal vendetta with the killer, i want him caught, now do we a deal?
Erika: Yeah, deal, now where is Kat homes staying?
Desmond: She's staying at the motel 8, room 102. Bye and good luck.
She hangs up, We have the motel Kat's staying at. Once there in they pull up to motel 8, get out start walking up the stairs.
Ricardo: Do we knock? Or... kick it down?
Jordan: I get this, stand back.
Grant: You can't kick a motel door down, their built to stop that.
He doesn't care, he get's ready to kick it. Right when as he's kicking, the door flies open, and someone runs out and past them. (Jordan falls on his back :P) Shit follow her! They run after her. As they chase her, she runs to a construction site, Grant, looks behind him, he sees someone in a mask running after them, they have a knife. The figure quickly catches up him, Grant pulls out his revolver.
Flight or Fight?
[Try to shoot the killer while running]
[Turn around and shoot him]
Question, does shooting while running means we're still following the woman or are we just running for our lives?
Erika and Ricardo are chasing Kat, for [Try to shoot the killer while running] Grant would try to shoot the killer while he runs he'll just keep running if he shoots the killer (He may miss the shot if that happens the killer will catch him) and [Turn around and shoot him] He will try to shoot/kill the killer. (Again, he may miss) Hope this helps.
It's time i submit my own character!
Name: Ricky Feels
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Appearance: 5'11" tall, skinny, short black hair, wears glasses, red Star Trek shirt. >:3
Personality: He likes to think he's the smartest in the room, even when he isn't. Little bit of a asshole, still somewhat kind.
Backstory: Big fan of Star Trek, and slasher movies.
little detail: He's not a virgin and he's proud of it!
So regardless of the choice Erika an Ricardo will continue to chase after Kat, right?
In that case I'll choose [Turn around and shoot] because letting the 2 characters I think might be red shirts pursue a suspect on their own definitely sounds like a smart idea.
[Turn around and shoot him]
[Turn around and shoot him]
[Try to shoot the killer while running]
Voting closed!
Grant will turn around and shoot him
Name: Joe Tucker
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Appearance: 180cm, short brown hair, Johnny Depp like beard, always wears a black hoodie and jeans.
Personality: Lonely, he doesn't talk much, pretty smart.
Backstory: He's working in his dad's auto repairing shop and has 2 brothers
Random: He's not a virgin, (Might surprise you
) because he had a girl friend who moved away a couple of years ago.
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Name: Teddy Wolfson
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Appearance: Short, Faux Hawk Hairstyle, 5'o clock shadow facial hair, mostly wears clothes with wolves on them.
Personality: Easily offended, short-tempered, too smart for his own good, drug addict
Backstory: He grew up in crack dens and spent a lot of time in prison
Random detail: Virgin (girls find him too creepy) also likes fluffy animals.
awesome thanks for submitting!
Episode 2, Chapter 1-2.
The killer jumps! Grant stops and quickly turns around and fires 3 shots, the first two miss, the 3th shot hits the killer in the shoulder. The killer lands on Grant, knocking him, repeatedly stabs him in the gut. Almost out of nowhere, Jordan runs up and tackles the killer, he tries to punch the killer, but the killer grabs his arm then slashes him across the gut. (It isn't that deep) Jordan grabs the killers knife and stabs him in the leg, then, the killer kicks Jordan in the face (knocking him out) and runs into the alleyway, the killer got away.
Jordan: Grant... Grant say something, goddamnit! "Pulls out his cell phone" 911, what is your emergency?
Ricardo and Erika continue to chase Kat, whose heading to a construction site, as they run they see someone following them. Who has a knife, Kat runs in the construction site, she starts climbing up a ladder. Erike starts climbing after her, Ricardo almost makes it but is grabbed by the masked figure, he starts stabbing him over and over again. Then, one of the construction worker grabs the killer, and throws him to the side, the killer jumps back up and stabs the man in the arm, the man punches him over and over again, until the killer gives up. The man can see something happening on the top of the construction site. He checks to see if Ricardo is still alive, he's dead.
Erika keeps up with Kat, once there at the top they look at each other, Kat walks to the luge of the building and jumps off.
Domenick (He's the construction worker) Runs to Kats dead body. Erika gets down. She runs over to him.
Erika: Oh my god.
Domenick: Why... why were you chasing her?!
Erika: We need to know what happened, who the killer was, she knew, but she ran.
Domenick: Lets call the police, so... they can take care of this, i'll take you to you car, that guy with you he's dead, the one who killed him is over there... What the fuck? where is he!
After they call the police Domenick takes Erika to his car, as there driving, they see Jordan on the side of the road.
Jordan: Grants... Grants dead, the killer got away. he's shoot though.
Erika: Ricardo was killed, his murderer got away too.
Jordan: What the fuck are we going to next?
[See Desmond]
[Go home]
[See Desmond]
Great part
Intense part!
[See Desmond]
Thanks, it's going to cool down a little then pick up soon.
[See Desmond]
[See Desmond]
Wow, mate, nice job you're doing over here
Thank you, i'm glad you're enjoying it.
I knew it!
Of course one of them was going to die!
Well anyway I vote [See Desmond], we need to dig deeper.
See Desmond.
one cough maybe two cough
I know 2 died, but one of them was not white, which leaves us with only one non-white character remaining which probably means she's dying, because this seems to be a slasher.
[See Desmond]
[See Desmond]
[See Desmond]
I'm gonna go ahead and close the voting, next part will be up late tonight or sometime tomorrow. (I'm super tired from halloween XD)
Episode 2, Chapter 1-3.
6:08 AM, 1 hour scents Grant and Ricardo’s murders and Kat’s suicide.
Domenick drops Erika and Jordan at Desmond. His office is pretty big, you can see it from the parking lot. The windows are pretty big too. Erika and Jordan get out of Domenick’s car.
Domenick: It seems like you’re in some pretty deep shit, if you need help with anything, he’s a phone number.
They walk in to the office, there he is waiting for them.
Desmond: Ah, you’re here, well what have you found out?
Erika: Nothing. Grant and Ricardo have been killer, and, there’s two of them, two killers. One of them is shot in the shoulder, and he has a limp.
Desmond: Well, I’m sorry to hear about your loss. We need to jump start the search, or, we can set a trap for the killers. Drake Josen, Dan Pips and Sarah June. There still all suspects.
Jordan: There’s another suspect, some women with a tattoo that says “Gina”, we think she killed Tinpenny.
Desmond: it’s time you two go home, be careful your all targets for the killer. I’ll contact you when it’s time.
Erika and Jordan leave his office. Once they are gone, Desmond walks over to his desk and pulls out a gun.
Desmond: I know you’re in here, come out, or I’ll have to find you. “A masked figure walks out of a cabinet.” Ah. There you are, so, I’ll give you 3 options, run, take off you mask and tell me who you are, or you can try to kill me. I’m going to count to 5, if you haven't removed you mask, or ran away, by the time I count to 5. I’m going to shoot you. 1… 2… “The killer starts slowly walking forward.” 3… 4… “Just then someone walks in the room, Mr. Grand, the there’s a gas lit…. Shit…” 5! “He pulls the trigger only to hear a click” Clever bitch.
Desmond grabs Reuben (The guard that walked in) by the shirt, pulls him over the desk, they both fly out the glass window. They run to the car and leave as the building blows up.
End of Episode 2, Chapter 1. (I'd love to know what you want in this next few chapters.)
Awesome part
I want Matteo (if he isnt the killer)