soooo, these are the first few words of my looooong planned fanfiction "the resurrection of W". I just wrote it, and before I decide if I ma… moreke it a story with...well, a story, or if I simply make it a comedy-thingy, I wanted to hear first opinions about it. grammatical stuff, way of writing etc. lemme know what you think!
The resurrection of W
„Hey! What in the world do you think are you doing up there?“ Eryka yelled.
The one she yelled at slowly looked down with an arrogant look. His twisted body, made out of, as it seemed, all kinds of animal bodyparts, floated in the air just a few centimeters above the ground. A keyboard floated in front of his chest, following all of his movements.
„Well, isn't that obvious? Or do you lack either mind or eyes to see what I'm doing?“ He said while hitting the buttons in front of him.
„I am writing down what's happening! Someone simply needs to record this.“
Eryka raised an eyebrow in d… [view original content]
soooo, these are the first few words of my looooong planned fanfiction "the resurrection of W". I just wrote it, and before I decide if I ma… moreke it a story with...well, a story, or if I simply make it a comedy-thingy, I wanted to hear first opinions about it. grammatical stuff, way of writing etc. lemme know what you think!
The resurrection of W
„Hey! What in the world do you think are you doing up there?“ Eryka yelled.
The one she yelled at slowly looked down with an arrogant look. His twisted body, made out of, as it seemed, all kinds of animal bodyparts, floated in the air just a few centimeters above the ground. A keyboard floated in front of his chest, following all of his movements.
„Well, isn't that obvious? Or do you lack either mind or eyes to see what I'm doing?“ He said while hitting the buttons in front of him.
„I am writing down what's happening! Someone simply needs to record this.“
Eryka raised an eyebrow in d… [view original content]
soooo, these are the first few words of my looooong planned fanfiction "the resurrection of W". I just wrote it, and before I decide if I ma… moreke it a story with...well, a story, or if I simply make it a comedy-thingy, I wanted to hear first opinions about it. grammatical stuff, way of writing etc. lemme know what you think!
The resurrection of W
„Hey! What in the world do you think are you doing up there?“ Eryka yelled.
The one she yelled at slowly looked down with an arrogant look. His twisted body, made out of, as it seemed, all kinds of animal bodyparts, floated in the air just a few centimeters above the ground. A keyboard floated in front of his chest, following all of his movements.
„Well, isn't that obvious? Or do you lack either mind or eyes to see what I'm doing?“ He said while hitting the buttons in front of him.
„I am writing down what's happening! Someone simply needs to record this.“
Eryka raised an eyebrow in d… [view original content]
hold on... hits the keyboard oh no, it appears that you are suddenly surrounded by...hold on...VEGANS! but not the nice kind of vegans, noooo, those are the kind of vegans that tell you that eating meat is murder and that you should start eating vegan and life more healthy! DOESN'T THAT FREAK YOU OUT?
Yeah... tooootally not a plan of yours
Wait, sharks? Ha! They can't do shit ;D
BRING ALL THE SHARKS! Oops... Too far... Sorry, sometimes I get crazy xP
hold on... hits the keyboard oh no, it appears that you are suddenly surrounded by...hold on...VEGANS! but not the nice kind of vegans, nooo… moreo, those are the kind of vegans that tell you that eating meat is murder and that you should start eating vegan and life more healthy! DOESN'T THAT FREAK YOU OUT?
On my phone, the picture in the left lower corner looked like one of @Dracu98 ponies, a blue one with Rhys and Fiona being her black locks. Rhys' knee is an eye and stairs under Rhys are the opened mouth. O_O
I'm the main character in this "thing"
I was licking Dracu's beard. It was tasty. Some pizza were stuck in it.
Dracu : Continue to lic… morek, I need a good shower
"Of course, because I love you" I said.
lick lick lick lick lick lick
Dracu : Yeah Eryka, do it harder.
Eryka : I'm trying so damn hard.
Someone entered the room. It was Morphias.
Morphias : What are you guys doing?
"We started without you" I said.
Morphias : Oh, okay.
Eryka : Would you like to join us?
Morphias : I don't have a beard, so you'll have to lick something else
@Morphias @Dracu98
Comments
The meaning of this text evaded my grasp, like the long, shiny tail of Handsome Dracu !
Really, this is a nice one. Twist-y.
Your welcome,
This is a perfect image.
"when will senpai notice me??"
Tfw that story (or fanfic xd) made me ship you x Eryka ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Please don't kill me ;-;
JACK. JACK!!!! oh my.
-takes a dramatic bow-
at the moment, there is no meaning
it's maybe a liiiiiittle bit too short to form opinions yet, but you know me...I LOVE ZE ATTENTIONZ!
I'd never kill someone with such a gorgeous clown-nose! oh no...are those sharks about to hunt you down? that's totally not a plan of mine...
You want to ship everyone x everyone, Wolfenus
We all do, we all do, my friend
I ship it
When you stop staring and call her actually!
No, everyone × Eryka
Yeah... tooootally not a plan of yours
Wait, sharks? Ha! They can't do shit ;D
BRING ALL THE SHARKS! Oops... Too far... Sorry, sometimes I get crazy xP
Dracu, are you trying to be ship with me?
That too! But he shipped SirScrubbington x SmolGui some comments back
*and fuck her
Look what I found on Tumblr ;D
Before you ask, yes, those GIFs are new.
Dracu should watch his back
I'm sure you ship it
Goddammit why won't they just stop eye banging each other actually do it
*Fuck yeah
Yeah, they should bang instead.
hold on... hits the keyboard oh no, it appears that you are suddenly surrounded by...hold on...VEGANS! but not the nice kind of vegans, noooo, those are the kind of vegans that tell you that eating meat is murder and that you should start eating vegan and life more healthy! DOESN'T THAT FREAK YOU OUT?
I think they did already. But, there is no gif
They did it everywhere.
Nope. That doesn't freak me out.
Oh, I'm fucking ready to kick some asses
I love these guys.
REMINDER:
LOOK OUT EVERYONE. WE GOT A FANGIRL OVER HERE.
And there is still no gif!
I'm the main character in this "thing"
I was licking Dracu's beard. It was tasty. Some pizza were stuck in it.
Dracu : Continue to lick, I need a good shower
"Of course, because I love you" I said.
lick lick lick lick lick lick
Dracu : Yeah Eryka, do it harder.
Eryka : I'm trying so damn hard.
Someone entered the room. It was Morphias.
Morphias : What are you guys doing?
"We started without you" I said.
Morphias : Oh, okay.
Eryka : Would you like to join us?
Morphias : I don't have a beard, so you'll have to lick something else
@Morphias @Dracu98
On my phone, the picture in the left lower corner looked like one of @Dracu98 ponies, a blue one with Rhys and Fiona being her black locks. Rhys' knee is an eye and stairs under Rhys are the opened mouth. O_O
He promised to kill me, though. But I still love him.
You're treading dangerous waters, my dear.
What do you think about it?