Continuing upon the end of S1(fan-fic)

That_1_Guy · March 2014

Looking forward to writing with you guys again!

TheZascaLivesOn · March 2014

Hey no omage to Omid,Christa and possibly jacob? oh well

TheZascaLivesOn · March 2014

FOR SECOND (Third?) SEASON

I propose that we do this

1.I will start a thread (Season 3)

2.I will send a PM to all people that are major contributurs (If anyone just reads and enjoys following the reading like a few of you just reply and let me know and you will get a PM too)

Its a pain that i dont have skype but that will be fixed soon. thanks

TheMissus · March 2014

Sorry, but @That_1_Guy said he'll prepare and create the new thread and I totally support him. Besides, we haven't finished with the summaries, the ebook etc. and people are still busy with S2E2...

MegaMoto · March 2014

We've already talked about this, That_1_Guy will be starting the thread once we finish all the preparations.

Snufkin_P · March 2014

I was thinking about number 3 in TheMissus' 'Preparing the next season' post last night while in bed and I'm not sure we even need a name for Season 2 (the season that has just finished).

That being said, my mind was racing with ideas and I settled on Loved and Lost as the suggestion I wanted to put forward if we are to have a name. Randomz's post a few pages back about the number of relationships we had going on and how these led to some disasters, such as the Gus, Melody and Jeremy situation, put the idea in my head.

It's not just about romantic love though; I thought about the platonic love that Kenny and Bryan had/have for Clementine and also the fraternal love between Kenny and Pascucci. Even earlier we had the brother-sister kind of relationship between Charlie and Clementine, and the established Christa-Omid awesome long-term relationship.

Throughout the five episodes, though, we saw time and time again, often in heartbreaking fashion, that we lost people. Love, in all its forms was a catalyst for so much of the story. Loss and the harsh realities of losing loved ones also remained an important theme. Love and loss: drove people on - Clementine carried on in memory of Lee, drove them to despair - Melody's suicide, drove them to be brave - Elizabeth after losing Robert, and drove them to do terrible things - Jack killed Jeremy due to his breakdown after losing so many of his loved ones.

Edit: Wow, I didn't realise I'd gone on for so long about my idea. It's awesome that you've all created this story that can be analysed and thought about. I don't care what the episode is called, I'm just looking forward to hearing other ideas and thinking about how it all fits in with the story that's been told.

TheMissus · March 2014

The title and your idea behind it is awesome. I would like the story to have a name, as our ebook needs a title. The title fits perfectly imo

Martin_The_Brit · March 2014

Agree with the above, That_1_Guy will do it.

That_1_Guy · March 2014

I honestly think it could even serve as a good episode title for Ep.1 Season 3, because we will probably be doing a lot of looking back and reminiscing. Great idea no matter what we use it for though, glad you took the time to think about the title, and our story overall.

TheMissus · March 2014

I am so excited. Got a great idea for the first part of the upcoming episode.

That_1_Guy · March 2014

Talking about episode names, I think we should consider a few of them.

So far I've come up with something which reflects the loneliness Clementine will be going through in this first episode:

''Fortress of Solitude.'' - Referring to Clementine's state of loneliness and the fact that she will be staying all alone in Bryan's cave.

''Don't look back.'' - Meaning Clementine has been ''reborn'' and is now a full-fledged survivor rather than the scared little girl she used to be.

And... That's all I've got so far, I really hope the others might be able to think of a good title as well.

TheMissus · March 2014

I choose "Fortress of solitude"
That is a damn good name

That_1_Guy · March 2014

Thanks! I thought pretty long about that one.

Snufkin_P · March 2014

Fortress of Solitude is a great name for the first episode of Season 3. There's a lot of scope we can work with if that's the title.

Snufkin_P · March 2014

Do we need to adjust the names of the first three episodes in Season 2 to make them three word titles or are we ok with them as they are?

Episode 1: Adrenaline
Episode 2: The Land of Men
Episode 3: A Settlement up North
Episode 4: Before The Storm
Episode 5: One Last Breath

Episode 2 could be fixed by making it 'Land of Men' and episode 3 could be 'Settlement up North'. Not sure about episode 1 but 'Fight or Flight' kind of fits the situation.

I'm not really sure whether we even need to stick to three word titles but if we are it's something worth thinking about during this break.

That_1_Guy · March 2014

Fight or Flight sounds good, actually. Your other suggestions make sense as well. I say it's a good idea.

I Waste My Time · March 2014

"Fortress of Solitude" Would work.

TheZascaLivesOn · March 2014

sorry didn't see that. it was already being done

Randomz89101 · March 2014

I like fortress of solitude, but Don't look back is the theme phrase for the walking dead, season 4, mid-season

That_1_Guy · March 2014

Is it? Didn't know, so I thought it was original. ; P

TheMissus · March 2014

I don't mind the changes. What do the others think?

That_1_Guy · March 2014

SUMMARY:

Dining hall

Jack and Kirkmin enter the hall
Jack walks up to the stage while Kirkmin stays in the back of the hall
Jack tells the people about the ''food-poisoning''
Robert, Elizabeth's wife, asks where Jack's dad is
Robert offers for Elizabeth to look at his ''illness'', but Jack refuses
Robert starts shouting, making the crowd panic
Kirkmin's men come in and fire three bullets, one of them hits Robert
He proceeds to finish one of the victims off, pushing Jack away and telling his guards to escort poisoned people out of the hall
Leaving Kirkmin alone with the large crowd, Jack picks up a gun and aims it at the man
The gun is out of ammo and emits a click, leading Kirkmin to pull his weapon on Jack.
Kirkmin leads Jack to the stage, where he orders him to kneel
Elizabeth witnesses the ordeal and finally decides to pick up a gun and aims it at Kirkmin, hitting him in the chest.
Jack stands up with relief, Elizabeth walks right past him and finishes Kirkmin's twitching body
Jack tries to reason with her, but she cuts him off and gathers the crowd around her, rallying them up to fight the remaining soldiers
Jack searches Kirkmin's body and discovers a walkie-talkie
Elizabeth runs out with ten other people wearing a few pieces of body-armor, Jack soon follows

Meanwhile, in the camper:

Clementine opens the door while calling out for Kenny and Danielle
Seeing they are both unconscious Clementine rushes to them and checks their pulse.
Danielle is steady, while Kenny's heart appears to be failing
As the group starts performing CPR they notice the drink that had caused the passing out in the first place

Somewhere in the settlement:

Frank talks to his cat, Oreo, about finding Kenny
He passes many dead bodies when he suddenly hears a feminine cry coming from inside a building
Peeking into the room Frank can see a woman tied to a chair and men who seem to go through all off her stuff.
Focusing on the task at hand, which is finding Kenny, Frank moves on but gets grabbed by walker, which he kills with his machete
Three members of the camper-group pass Frank, he recognizes Clem's name so he follows them to their camper

Back in the camper:

Clementine asks the group if they even know CPR, which they don't.
A noise comes from outside, Clementine goes to check.
Frank enters the camper, receiving hostile responses from Jeremy
He reveals he knows Pascucci and tells about his quest to find Kenny, and how he used to be a nurse
Frank asks questions, before performing CPR and letting Bryan vomit out the poisoned food

In Sarah's office:

One of Kirkmin's soldiers named Ralph looks at a photo and talks about Sarah's sister in a sexual manner
Commotion is heard outside, Ralph gets called to go outside to help them in their battle
He punches Sarah, telling her the community will pay for their boss' death
She hops to a corner of the room and breaks a few boards, revealing a secret stash containing:
A gun, ammunition, a hunting knife and a box with a small lock.
Sarah breaks out of her bindings and proceeds to pick up the contents of the small hole in the ground
She loads the gun and opens the box, revealing a necklace
She puts it around her neck and readies her weapon when a bolt of thunder ''wakes her up''
A moment of silence is interrupted by a large explosion, causing the room to collapse around her
She barely escapes through a window when a second explosion completely destroys her lodge
A large horde approaches and she runs to the wall, which she climbs
When she has reached the top a large army approaches, including two tanks.
She climbs back down the wall looking for Jack in a different crowd
She finds him, but is interrupted by another explosion, which has destroyed a part of the wall
A general uses his megaphone to call the settlement's leader, Jack walks over, but Elizabeth has already reached the general

Back in the camper:

Clementine gasps when Kenny finally wakes up
Kenny is confused by the person who has saved him, asking his name
Frank reveals he was Pascucci's friend, and that he didn't get revenge on his killer, which he regrets
A moment of silence ends when yet another explosion sounds from outside, flipping their camper on its side

Outside:

The group gathers outside of the camper, the plan is to simply run away as far as possible
They run to the wall, when Clementine spots an armory
she climbs in, picking up just one half of a machete, which she uses just once to kill a walker
Bryan throws himself to Frank's weapon, firing three shots at the already dead walker
After a brief argument, the group moves on
The tank's noises stop, and Clementine tells the group to wait when a bullet pierces through Jeremy's arm, making him and Bryan fall to the ground
Sarah appears, threatening to shoot Bryan and Jeremy
Bryan picks up Jeremy's gun and slowly stands up
Sarah resolutely aims her gun at Bryan, when a voice appears behind her
The voice is revealed to be Jack, who is angry at Sarah for causing his father's death
He shoots her, before reloading his gun
Realizing what he has done, Jack falls to his knees, staring at Sarah's pale face
Jeremy reaches out to him ,offering to help him up
He instead rises by himself and loosely holds the gun, making Jeremy flinch
Jeremy puts his hands in the air and tries to persuade Jack, he steps closer, leading to Jack shooting him in the face
Frank rushes over and tackles Jack, before furiously punching his face
Kenny pushes him off and tells him to take Jack and his gun with them, they will decide his fate once they're safe

At the wall:

Frank pushes Clementine over the wall, where a military convoy is waiting for her
Bryan and Kenny both become angry at Frank, and offer to go after her immediately
They argue over who should go, but Kenny is the strongest
Frank helps him to get on top of the wall and Danielle reaches him his crutches

Outside the walls:

Clementine gets hit in the head before a stranger pulls her away from the wall, ditching her gun and taking her into the woods
As they reach the treeline, the man's walkie-talkie begins emitting a message
Clementine picks up his knife and stabs the man, named Ralph, in his thigh
The man loses his grip, allowing Clementine to run away from him
As she runs through the forest, screams of soldiers sound behind her, making her change her route
When two lights and a set of screams approach, Clementine hides behind a large tree where she picks up a thick, pointy branch
She uses it to stab one of the soldiers in the chest, while the other starts shooting at her
She picks up the gun and hides behind a boulder, taunting the soldier
After he shoots many bullets, she stands up and scrapes his neck with one well-placed shot
She picks up his hunting knife and finishes him before picking up his walkie-talkie
She runs back into the woods and hides between two rocks
A German shepherd finds her, and barks to alert its masters
She stabs the dog in the neck, and crawls over his body and back into the forest
Running away once more, she reaches a cliff
Regaining her balance, she turns around and aims her gun at the woods, shouting weak threats to nothing

Outside the settlement's walls:

The group has reached the other side of the wall, but Kenny is worried about Clementine's absence
The entire group calls for her, but Kenny orders them to be silent
As the rain quickly lets up, Bryan crouches down to examine a set of footsteps
He determines that Clementine must have been taken away, and Kenny immediately runs off into the woods
Bryan, Danielle, Frank and Jack rush after him, but Kenny has somehow outran them

I would appreciate if someone else would continue from page 59 onward.

Snufkin_P · March 2014

Thank you for doing the summary. Here's the rest of the episode:

In the forest

Clementine wonders whether she should stay put or try to find her group.
Walkers surround her so she uses the last of her bullets and runs away from them.
She runs into a tree and is knocked down. She reaches for her hunting knife as a walker approaches.
The walker falls on her and as she struggles and is almost bitten, a bullet hits the walker.
Clementine runs away after her ordeal as a male voice calls after her.
She eventually reaches a clearing and meets a teenage girl and a pug.
Kenny, who had been the person to save Clementine from the walker, arrives on the scene.
Thalia, the teenage girl, introduces herself but is then attacked and killed by a walker.
Kenny and Clementine escape with Sandy, the pug, and Clementine notices a walker bite on Kenny’s shoulder.
Clementine and Kenny share an emotional exchange as Clementine reveals that she feels responsible for what is happening to Kenny as well as Lee’s death. Kenny tries to comfort her and explains that he and Lee had loved her like a daughter.
They decide to try and find Bryan before Kenny dies.
Kenny tries to lead them back to the group but to no avail. Clementine spots Bryan’s cave where they had stayed before they found Jack’s settlement.

Bryan’s cave

In the cave, Kenny’s condition worsens. Kenny and Clementine exchange extremely emotional farewells.
Kenny dies and Clementine shoots him to prevent him becoming a walker.
Sandy, the pug, runs from the cave and into the forest. Clementine tries to stop the dog but there are walkers nearby.
Clementine stays at the entrance of the cave and reflects on not being affected by Thalia’s death. She struggles to deal with Kenny’s death.
She wakes up later and decides she doesn’t want to go back in the cave and find Kenny’s body.
Clementine sees a walker killing Sandy and then coming towards her. She has no choice but to go back in the cave.

On the hill outside the settlement

Bryan, Danielle and Frank make their way to the top of the hill.
Danielle asks Bryan why Jack killed himself. Bryan suggests that he had lost all hope after what had happened to the settlement.
At the top of the hill a hell-like scene stands before them. Walker bodies, some freshly turned and others much more degraded, fill the field.
The three of them head down to check if any of the bodies are Clementine or Kenny.
Just before they finish checking the bodies, the group are shot at. Bryan grabs Danielle and makes for the woods nearby.
When Bryan looks back, Frank is sheltering behind a broken down vehicle and waving for them to keep running.
Upon reaching the woods, Bryan realises they have no place to hide other than the trees so gives Danielle a gun and lifts her up a tree.
He tells Danielle to climb the tree and hide there. A shot hits the tree so Danielle climbs the tree and tells Bryan to find Clementine. Bryan runs away.

Bryan’s cave

Three days have passed and Kenny’s body is rotting.
Clementine is starving but she decides that she must do something: “It’s time.”

TheMissus · March 2014

The eBook is finally done!

It contains the entire story we've built together in this thread - see it here:

http://ilovemydog.deviantart.com/art/The-Walking-Dead-fan-fic-Loved-And-Lost-439041104

I Waste My Time · March 2014

and now I need to download PDF.

I Waste My Time · March 2014

the episode directory was slightly off with episode 5. it was later than 101 for me.

TheMissus · March 2014

Thanks, I need to fix it

EDIT: Fixed it. Enjoy reading!

Snufkin_P · March 2014

You put so much hard work into this. It looks great and the cover art work is absolutely brilliant.

Great job, well done.

TheMissus · March 2014

:'-) thank you

Randomz89101 · March 2014

This may sound embarrassing, but how do I read it?

Randomz89101 · March 2014

Nevermind, figured it out.

Randomz89101 · March 2014

Wow! That was amazing! Nice work on that!

TheMissus · March 2014

Just press the download icon to save it on your computer.

TheMissus · March 2014

So, what do you guys think: Are the preparations done? I think there is one more thing to do: a list of (deceased) characters. Can't wait for the next season.

I Waste My Time · March 2014

Hopefully the characters I bring into the next one will actually stay for more than one post.

TheMissus · March 2014

I hope so, too :-S
Btw: I don't think there will be many characters in episode 1 as our task will be to make Clem survive on her own.

I Waste My Time · March 2014

Yeah, I'll just introduce the two characters I came up with in the second episode.

TheMissus · March 2014

So? Has everybody finished playing A House Divided?

TheZascaLivesOn · March 2014

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Yes....

TheMissus · March 2014

I see you're from the stache front. Though, haven't you said your PS3 isn't working, yet?

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