400 Days: Let's keep going! (fan-fic)

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  • Yes it got to be one of them...whoever continues with the next Post should keep this in mind! (yes i also hope that Ollie and Diddi died!)

    Jane is watching over Dan but Wyatt is going to get Laz and Russell so they can go... But yeah who's taking care of Dawn when they leave?... No it probably won't be Carver. I'm hoping Ollie died so I'm guessing Joe, and Breanna? OR Kenny?!?!

  • Sure feel free to use Laz. :) Just keep him to short, yet truthful answers.He doesn't lie no matter how hard the truth is. He talks to Dawn and Doc more as he knows them but if he sees that you mean well and are true to your word and loyal to your friends, he will talk to you more and become a person you can count on, even if it means dying for someone. But Dawn and yes the kitten Doc lol...are his main priority. He is a grandmaster in the martial arts of Muay Thai and Capoeira. Muay Thai is what you see Tony Jaa do in his movies and Capoeria is a form of martial arts that uses music. The fighter will fight to the beat or the words of a song. Las has a Ipad and a boom box he can place it in ( in his tent, which he will bring. With plenty of batteries. He has over 4000 songs stored on his Ipad. So if he ever says "I got this" (which he doesn't say a lot) that is when he will use his Music Fu, as I like to call it) And yes he does have an enemy Shakida Fang. But he doesn't know where Laz is right now. Their feud is over the master naming Laz the grandmaster and bowing to him. I will tell that story more in full later. But it adds a serious, and I mean serious threat. This guy is is on par with Laz in martial arts. He looks like Jet Li but with tattoos covering his face and taller. He has a love for snakes and has a pet Black Mamba. Feel comfortable yet? lol...

    Can we use Laz? Not that I will but just wondering. And sure! Write for whoever you want!

  • Ollie grinned as Pat and Hal walked over and stood beside him.Didi leaned against the door frame and pulled out a long knife and smiled. Ollie walked up to Laz and got real close to Laz's face.
    "Looks like you showed up in the wrong place at the right time. We are going to end you. You hear me! You rotten son of a b......." Ollie didn't get a chance to finish as Laz grabbed Ollie's bottom lip and yanked down on it, tearing his lip and skin all the way to his jaw off. Ollie spun away with his hands over his now bloody face. Hal came rushing at Laz the same time Didi went to go stab him. Laz just ducked and Didi's blade slid into Hal's chest and piercing his heart, killing him instantly. Pat had a look of awe as he reached for his shotgun and aimed it at Laz. Laz grabbed the barrel and spun around quickly,rolling the shotgun. Pat who had hold of the shotgun did a 360 and landed on the floor with a loud thud. Didi screamed and came running at Laz. As she neared him Laz grabbed her by the hair and ran with her and threw her out of the living room window. Laz heard a scream, than a loud wet splat. Pat had got to his feet and ran at Laz as well, Laz ran, dropped and slid, kicking Pat's feet out from under him. Pat gave out a surprised gasp as he fell and landed face first onto a shard of glass still in the window frame. With those three dead Laz walked over to Ollie who was crying and holding a shirt to his wound trying to stop the bleeding. Laz threw the lip and chin skin flap at Ollie. It landed on his lap. Laz looked around the room with satisfaction. He looked at Ollie as the door open and Wyatt looked in. Laz didn't take his eyes off Ollie. "You should have never hit her. Now go see the doctor and have him try to fix you, then I want you out of this town. Because if you are here when I get back, you know the story right. About how they could never put poor Humpty Dumpty back together again?" Ollie nodded and got up and ran past Laz and Wyatt, who was still standing there looking at the scene. Laz walked toward Wyatt and past him. "What about a cop or something? Shouldn't we notify them?" Laz looked at Wyatt."I am the law here. That is the job I was given." Laz walked down the hallway toward the stairs as Wyatt in disbelief followed. Laz opened the stairway door and said " Dawn and Doc will be going with us. Don't worry about Dawn, she has a short crossbow I gave her. It is cool, it holds ten arrows and you pump it like a shotgun to load them. And Doc will take care of all of us. He is as vicious as they come." Laz started to chuckle as he walked down the stairs. Wyatt, still silent, just followed.

  • LOL...Surprised me to see that you wanted Didi to die.....lmao. No one kill off Ollie as he is going to be part of Shakida's group. Next season or whatever. What ever season you need a big bad. And just so you know since you haven't seen his face yet, my character looks like Spike from Buffy except with neon red hair. Easy enough to look him up and see what he looks like if no one knows.

    Yes it got to be one of them...whoever continues with the next Post should keep this in mind! (yes i also hope that Ollie and Diddi died!)

  • Damn! Laz is an overpowered beast! Unique though :D. Can't wait to meet this Shakida character.

    tntlee2099 posted: »

    Sure feel free to use Laz. Just keep him to short, yet truthful answers.He doesn't lie no matter how hard the truth is. He talks to Dawn a

  • He is good at some things, but he does have his weaknesses which you will see as we go. One will surprise you. :)

    Damn! Laz is an overpowered beast! Unique though . Can't wait to meet this Shakida character.

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    The supply group headed out to search an abandoned cabin they found at the end of the last search, but didn't have time to check over. Dawn stuck behind Laz, who took up the back, while Wyatt and Jane lead, and Russel stayed in the middle. The cabin was near a cliff over a lake, in a dry area of the outskirts of town, and it was basically segregated from everything else. Entering, there was a kitchen, and living room, and a set of stairs.thy surveyed the area, and found some spoiled food, a few cans of vegetables, and that was about it. They ended up finding a hunting rifle, with no ammo, but they took it anyway, and that was it. The rest was empty. It was clearly a summer house, or just uninhabited, due to the lack of food, but at one point, a stair broke, when Russel was going down, causing a series of loud noises, which lead to Doc running outside the house, and Dawn chasing him, and everyone else went outside too. Running towards Doc, Laz noticed a walker chasing Dawn, and before he could react, 2 more walkers swarmed him, and he killed them, and fell on his back, with 2 walkers on top of him, and Dawn got grabbed by the walker, who charged her so fast, that she fell backwards, and tripped off the cliff, hugging the ledge for dear life, as Wyatt sprung forward, killing the walker, and running to save Dawn, as the rock she was holding onto broke off, and she fell down the cliff, screaming the whole way down. everyone gathered around Wyatt, looking down the cliff, seeing a rock on the ground below. Laz, with tears in his eyes, grabbed Doc and started to run down the cliff, yelling "DAWN! please.......PLEASE BE ALIVE! DAWN!" the others followed him, as they reached the bottom of the cliff, and saw Laz trying to push the boulder off of Dawn, as Doc sniffed at her hand. Wyatt helped roll the boulder off, and they saw Dawn, mangled, bleeding, and crushed, as Russel checked her pulse. "Guys, she's still alive! She has a pulse!" Laz smiled, and quickle scooped er up,and sprinted back to Wellington, while the others tried to keep up.

    BACK IN WELLINGTON.....

    Laz sat in the doctor's waiting room, as he assessed Dawn's condition. Laz's mind was racing, and he was panicking, as he jumped, as the doctor walked back in. "Laz...... do you want to see her?" Laz just nodded, as he was walked to her room. She was in intensive care, so he could only see her once a week, as the doctors had already told him, which absolutely broke his heart, but deep inside, Laz knew she would be lucky if she lasted a week. The doctor walked him in, and said "I was not expecting she would make it through diagnosis, but she did. She has a broken back and neck, and severe brain damage. She might have a facial tic, but luckily that's all mentally. Physically however, if she does indeed survive these next few months, which, I'm sorry to say, is almost impossible, and can go outside again, she will be paralyzed from the chest down, and will never walk again. I'm sorry Laz." Laz stood there in shock, staring at Dawn, as he leaned down next to her bed, and stared at her, the thing in life he cared about most, on her deathbed so young, and he thought......."what did I do wrong?"

  • Ummmmm, ok. Is there a reason you have basically killed off Dawn this quick? I don't going out for supplies and being gone for a month, then having this happen within the day or so and turning around and going back to Wellington. Her story arc hadn't even begun. Wow.....

    maxbear29 posted: »

    The supply group headed out to search an abandoned cabin they found at the end of the last search, but didn't have time to check over. Dawn

  • Yeah.... what he said. Dude why did they bring Dawn .... and then she dies.

    Tntlee sorry about him he likes to kill people :( (in story I mean)

    tntlee2099 posted: »

    Ummmmm, ok. Is there a reason you have basically killed off Dawn this quick? I don't going out for supplies and being gone for a month, then

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    She isn't dead........ and I have my reasons (yeah, I know, reasons.....) But basically, since I don't want to leave you in the dark, I'll post the next part. I know I just posted, but trust me, I do have a point.

    Yeah.... what he said. Dude why did they bring Dawn .... and then she dies. Tntlee sorry about him he likes to kill people (in story I mean)

  • Well that was supposed to happen when Laz decided to take a little girl with him, on a dangerous supplie searching trip. I am actually glad he did it, because otherwhise there would have been no consequences for this bad decision.

    Yeah.... what he said. Dude why did they bring Dawn .... and then she dies. Tntlee sorry about him he likes to kill people (in story I mean)

  • Ever since the injury, runs have been quick and cautious, and Dawn's health only improved. They mostly consisted of Laz leading, grabbing supplies, killing walkers maybe, and getting back before anyone caught up. Laz had become quiet, and would basically only talk to Dawn, when she was awake, and Doc. However, sometimes people got him in conversation, he basically cut them off. All he cared about was Dawn, and after 6 weeks of surgery and resting, Dawn was finally able to leave the hospital, and test out her wheelchair, but Laz would only allow her to leave when he was there, and wouldn't let her leave his sights. He constantly begged the doctor to let her sleep at his place, but he wouldn't allow it, when 1 night he woke up to a light knock on his door. He opened it, and saw Dawn sitting there, smiling. "I snuck out Laz!" she said, as Laz grabbed the handles on her wheelchair, and turned her towards the hall. "Dawnie! Don't sneak out! What if someone saw you, and thought you were a walker...." Laz started "I'm a little girl in a wheelchair, who would think I'm a walker!" Dawn replied. "I dunno, they could.....c'mon, I'm taking you back!" Laz said, as Dawn begged "please, let me sleep here, please Laz!" "I'm sorry sweetie, doctor's orders" Laz said, as he wheeled her back in silence.

    See, I didn't injure her for the purpose of maybe killing her (like I did with Kenny), I injured her to make Laz an over-protective father figure to her, just another layer to his character......sorry if that spits in the face of his character or something XD

  • No, I like that. In that post I can see why you did it. Good Job. Just means we all will have to pimp out her wheelchair with different jewelry we find. That could add a different kind of bonding as well within the group. And since when the ZA happened Laz was teaching a bunch of kids karate at his dojo and they were all killed I can see where this happening would have the most profound effect on him. Awesome.

    maxbear29 posted: »

    Ever since the injury, runs have been quick and cautious, and Dawn's health only improved. They mostly consisted of Laz leading, grabbing su

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    I just spent all day playing walking dead episode 2.......so I just checked this.........and it looks like everyone else is in the same boat XD

  • I'm glad :)

    tntlee2099 posted: »

    No, I like that. In that post I can see why you did it. Good Job. Just means we all will have to pimp out her wheelchair with different jewe

  • I am in the same boat and Kenny is on it to!

    maxbear29 posted: »

    I just spent all day playing walking dead episode 2.......so I just checked this.........and it looks like everyone else is in the same boat XD

  • Finished it yesterday :D. And Clementine-Everett your Kenny Confirmed for Season 2 gifs actually worked!

    I am in the same boat and Kenny is on it to!

  • Well, i always believed that it's gonna be him and i was right after all!

    Kennys godlike Stache confirmed for Season2 didn't work out though:D

  • I like the beard better but that's just my opinion

    Well, i always believed that it's gonna be him and i was right after all! Kennys godlike Stache confirmed for Season2 didn't work out though:D

  • Don't get me wrong, i love the beard! It's almost like his godlike Mustache evolved into a even more godlike beard!

    In my playthough Sarita said his beard was even bigger when she found him. I'm asking myself what that would have looked like! :D

    I like the beard better but that's just my opinion

  • Mind if I specially get Carver's part?

    Carver began to stalk Lola and her friends. He knew where they all worked, stayed, and where the would be and when. He decided that Jane would be first and then Breanna. Jane was closer to Lola but Wyatt was always by her side, they even shared a room! Carver decided that he was strong enough to take them both so he would attack them at midnight. He had devised a plan and would now put it in action. Carver walked to Wyatt and Jane's room and he put his ear to the door to make sure they were sleeping. He heard odd sounds but thought that it was probably nothing. He knocked on the door loudly. Carver heard voices whispering and footsteps towards the door. "Who is it?" said a tired Jane "I have a message for you." says Carver in a more friendlier tone than usual. The door opened to a beautiful woman who looked like she put her clothes on in a hurry "What is it?" she said with a yawn. Carver immediately grabbed her and put her in a headlock. He put his gun on the side of her head her back towards him. "One word and you die." Carver said. Jane was about to scream but didn't and was pushed towards Wyatt's room the door closed. "Who is it honey?" he said from behind the door. Carver opened it and Wyatt was in the bed in his underwear and no shirt. "HOLY F---" Wyatt was cut off as Carver pushed hard onto Jane's head with the gun. "Get dressed and get on your knees or your girlfriend dies," Carver said with a grin. Wyatt did as Carver said and went on his knees, Jane with him. Carver searched them then tied their hands, and taped their mouths. He walked them toward a specific room he ordered that was 6 doors down. He shoved them in and then tied into chairs. He put some food and water on the table. "You better eat. Its going to be a while" Carver said laughing as he walked out the door locking it behind him.

    (Try not to save them. I have a plan.)

  • Laz had been spending as much time with Dawn as possible. Everyday they would go for long walks around town and talk about what they were doing before everything went to hell. Doc was getting bigger and he usually sat on Dawn's lap during these walks. Laz had also been teaching Dawn how to fight and escape while in her chair. While he lived in the hotel now he still had his tent up in the trees. He had fixed it so that is where she spent the time he was gone. When he was around she stayed with him and Doc at the hotel. He had a steel door on the inside of the wooden door. And no one was getting through that unless they knew the special knock which they would do on the wall left of the door. No zombies though. Everyone had a different name for them but since he was a big Romero fan he called them zombies. He even taught Doc how to hide if something went down. Same place as Dawn. Laz had put a fake wall in the back of his closet where they could both( Doc and Dawn ) get to. There was food and water back there for a good 4 or 5 days if they needed it. He had become more at ease around Wyatt and his group. Even though he had told them very little of his life, it seemed to satisfy them. Laz liked Breanna. He thought she was beautiful. Of course he would never say so in case she was seeing someone. And the fact that she didn't the trouble that will one day find him. Shakida.... Laz hoped Shakida was dead but knew deep in his heart that he wasn't. If Shakida was in the United States he would have his four loyal subjects with him. All named after a famous serial killer. BTK, Ripper, Zodiac and Bathory. This was their kind of world, a world where they could inflict as much pain and suffering as they wanted. They were like a bad version of the movie Kill Bill. Laz took Dawn and Doc back to the hotel room and reminded Dawn to let no one in unless they did the special knock. And to lock both doors. He would be back in a bit. He was going to do one more sweep. "You should talk to her." Dawn said as he was walking to the door. " Like you told me Laz, you never know unless you try." Laz turned and gave her a smile. "Well thank you, Confucius. I would have never thought of that. Plus I believe she already has a man." Laz looked at Doc. "Keep her out of trouble, will ya." Doc meowed and jumped onto the couch and stretched out and flopped onto his belly. "I will be back within the hour Dawn" Laz said. Dawn rolled over and gave him a hug. " I love you and be safe." she said. Laz looked at her and smiled once more. "Ditto, Kiddo." And with that Laz left the room and headed back outside. He was going to do a sweep but he also wanted to get a few looks in at Breanna if she was outside.

  • I don't mind.

    Mind if I specially get Carver's part? Carver began to stalk Lola and her friends. He knew where they all worked, stayed, and where the w

  • Wow, guess everyone is playing the game. lol

    tntlee2099 posted: »

    Laz had been spending as much time with Dawn as possible. Everyday they would go for long walks around town and talk about what they were do

  • Nah I finished. And I think Clementine-Everett did as well. Maxbear I'm not sure. I'm not going because I usually go after 2 people have gone after my turn. Unless I'm bored. I'll probably go again if no one goes soon. And I like the love triangle idea :D.

    tntlee2099 posted: »

    Wow, guess everyone is playing the game. lol

  • edited March 2014

    Micheal and Johnny continued down the road, into a suburban neighborhood, where after 3 days of driving, sleeping, and repeating, they finally ran out of gas. Johnny rolled down the window, and looked outside, laughing. "A full tank of gas, eh? Lies, Steve! This car is so damn energy conserving, I'm surprised we didn't make it farther just on half a tank!" Johnny said with a laugh, as he turned to a confused Micheal "Steve was the leader. A real douche Steve was, always lyin' and killin'" Micheal and Johnny learned a lot about each other. Micheal talked about how he was in a crazy cult, and was looking to redeem himself, and Johnny told Micheal about how he joined the robbers out of desperation, and was just doing it for the protection. Johnny was friendly, and had a good sense of humor, so Micheal enjoyed the "road trip" as they called it. Regardless of Micheal's worries about his friends, he told Johnny about Wellington, and they decided to head there, just to be safe, despite Micheal's worries.

  • I finished yesterday. I love it :D

    Nah I finished. And I think Clementine-Everett did as well. Maxbear I'm not sure. I'm not going because I usually go after 2 people have gon

  • Carver knew that people would be looking for Wyatt and Jane so he made a note and put it on their door. It said "We have been asked to go on a business trip outside of Wellington. We will not be here for a while, so come back in a week." Carver smiled, even if they didn't believe it they would never find where he hid them. He walked out the building and saw Lola's other friend by the gate. Carver grinned and walked in the other direction already thinking about what his next move was.

    Russell went to Wyatt and Jane's room to ask when the next job was. He saw the note and scratched his head. What business trip? Russell said to himself. Its probably nothing he thought and he decided to go to Adam to look for a job. He found Adam sitting at a table in the restaurant across the street from the hotel. His fingers tapped on the wooden table, loud voices blocking out the sound. Russell pulled up a chair and sat opposite of Adam. "Is something wrong?" Russell asked. "I don't know... I'm worried that some of our citizens are... untrustworthy. Some of them don't contribute and others are very dark and secretive. Could you investigate maybe?" Adam said. "Well sure. What am I looking for?" Russell replied. "Our newest arrivals I assume. There is a man named Ollie who hasn't been seen in a while. The inmate and his hooded friend looked suspicious, an odd fellow named Bathory(hope you didn't mind), and a woman named Julia. Here are where they stay or hang out." Adam said passing a small piece of paper to Russell. "I'll get it done. Thank you for trusting me with this job" Russell said with a smile and left the building heading toward the place where Ollie was staying.

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    Episode 3: From Every Angle Summary

    The group is split. Eddie, Kenny, Caitlyn, Robert, and newest arrival Vince are headed to Wellington for safety. Robert is a killer and ends up killing Eddie, and Caitlyn silently. Vince and Kenny suspect Robert but before they can act Robert gets Vince bitten and beats Kenny up. In the end Vince, and Kenny beat Robert and left him in the woods. Vince helped Kenny to Wellington and Kenny was taken in. Vince however was bitten and before he could turn he shot himself. Meanwhile Lola and Michael go in search of the priests in hopes of finding their comrade Wyatt. They come across a group of three people. Breanna, Joe, and Drew. Breanna is Caitlyn’s sister and says that they are her old group and got separated from her and Jane. Michael admits that he was one of the priests but because he thought they were good. They worked together to kill all the evil priests and succeed but at the cost of Drew’s life. Breanna, Joe, and Lola head towards Wellington a place of safety and manage to get there successfully. Michael however says goodbye and leaves them to look for Breanna’s sister Caitlyn and Vince. He comes between a choice. To go one way to avenge his old group by killing Nate a perverted, “madman”, or go the other way to look for Vince, and Caitlyn. He goes after Nate his mind wanting only revenge. He manages to kill Nate’s comrades Thomas, and Dylan, but Nate escapes and Russell drives away in Nate’s car. Robert finds Russell and tries to kill him but Nate attacks him getting bit in the process. Russell retreats in Nate’s car to Wellington and makes it there safely. Michael walks toward Wellington and finds a zombified Nated eating the corpse of Robert. He stabs them both in the head and decides not to go to Wellington fearing Lola and Breanna’s reaction to his choice. Wyatt, James, and Jane also head to Wellington. In a frenzy of anger Jane kills James when he tells them that Robert was a killer and that their friends were probably dead. Wyatt is shocked but forgives her and they head to Wellington making it safely.

    If I am missing anything Please inform me.

    maxbear29 posted: »

    Ok, I'm starting episode 4 right now, so don't post, also...... Updated survivor guide This will go over anybody who is still alive, a

  • Laz walked over to the doctor's place and knocked on the door. "Come in." Laz walked in and shook hands with the Doctor. "Seems a little quiet in here today." Laz said as he looked around at the empty waiting area. Dr.Arness nodded his head in agreement. "It has been quiet Laz. Well earlier Ollie came in here with a serious injury but I patched him up as best as I could. He asked for some pain pills and once he got them he headed straight out of town." Laz was glad that Ollie had left town. If he had stayed there would be another body to bury. " I got Pat, Hal and Didi all ready for burial. Anything special I should do?" Laz thought for a moment and shook his head. "No.Bury all three in one hole and be sure they do not get a service. They were going to steal from this town and they had guns. A lot of good people might have gotten hurt. Dawn might have got hurt. And I am not going to let that happen again." Dr.Arness nodded in agreement. Laz started for the door when the doctor stopped him. "Look, there are questions going around about what happened to Ollie and these three thugs I have in here. I was at the restaurant earlier and a fellow by the name of Adam asked another guy by the name of Russel to see if he could find out what happened to Ollie. What should I tell them if they come here asking questions?" Laz opened the door and said " Don't worry, they won't bother you. I will go fill them in on what happened. Have a good day." Laz left the doctor's house and started over towards the restaurant when he caught sight of Breanna walking along the street. He walked up to her with a smile on his face. " Hello, Breanna. How are you doing today?" Breanna smiled back. "Going for a walk. It is a nice day out. How is Dawn?" "She is getting there. Still smiling as though everything was the way it used to be before her accident. She has a positive outlook on life in general. She is young though and still has hope that one day life will return to the way it once was." Laz replied. "She is a good girl with a pure heart and innocent mind. She doesn't let the negative overpower the positive. She loves life. She can see beauty in the face of ugliness. Not many people today can say that." Laz nodded his head. "Well Breanna I have to go talk to someone but when we both have some free time maybe you would like to have supper with Dawn and I?" Breanna's face turned red as she smiled. "Maybe I might take you up on that offer." Laz watched her leave than headed to see Adam. As Laz entered the restaurant he looked around. He caught the attention of a waiter and whispered in his ear. The waiter pointed to a man sitting in the back all by himself. Laz thanked the waiter and walked over to Adam and grabbed a chair at his table,spun it around and sat down. Adam looked at him. "I don't remember telling you to take a seat." Laz took off his cowboy hat and placed it on the table. "But I had to sit here. This chair I am sitting in is my favorite chair in here. And if I don't get to sit in it, I tend to feel uncomfortable and out of place." "Believe me you are out of place with a hair-do like that." Adam said. "And you seem out of place by sending someone out to see what is going on in events that do not apply to you." Laz responded. Adam and Laz stared at each other for a few seconds. "Hey I am just a concerned citizen."Adam said as he grinned. "And I am the law around here, who is not the type of person that likes it when someone like you sends a bitch boy out to do his dirty work for him. That makes you lazy in my book Adam. And I do not like lazy people." Laz retorted. Adam's cocky smile disappeared as did Laz's. " If there is something you want to know about than feel free to come to me and ask. There is something I never do and that is lie." Laz put his hat back on and stood up. Adam looked at him. "So where is Ollie?" Laz looked him straight in the eyes. "Ollie left town." Adam slowly stood up. "Why?" Laz shrugged his shoulders. "Because he did something wrong and I gave him two options. Leaving town sounded like the best one to him." Adam slowly slid his hand toward the knife on the table. He grabbed the knife and looked at it. Laz watched him. "Adam, you do not want to come at me with a blade." And what if I Mr.Lawman?" Laz got right nose to nose with Adam. "Because Adam, I will fuck you up." The other people began to leave, rushing outside yelling that there was going to be a fight. At this point Laz had to agree with them.

  • Adam made the first move, pushing Laz backward into a chair, that he tripped over. Adam grabbed a bar stool, and began jabbing him in the stomach with the legs. Laz dodged 1 shot, rolling out of the way, running forward, and ramming Adam onto a table. Sitting on Adam, repeatedly punching him, as Adam yelled in pain. Adam slipped out to behind Laz, off the table, jumping back on the table, grabbing Laz by the back of his neck, throwing him face first into a window, smashing it, landing him outside. Laz was on his back, just flat on the road, gathering his bearings, before jumping up, 30 seconds later, and running back through the broken window, running on the table, diving off, punching Adam, in the air, at full momentum off the jump, hitting so hard Adam collapsed, and Laz landed on his back a few feet away. Laz stayed on the attack, throwing Adam into a table, knocking the table over, Adam was quickly back to his feet, and walking, dizzily, over to the bar, grabbing a mug, and hitting Laz with it when he got close, knocking him onto a bench. Laz's face was bloody and bruised, he could feel the agony on his face from going through the window as if it just happened, but he knew Adam was far worse, as he had a broken nose, a black eye, and many assorted cuts and bruises all over his body. Adam pulled out the knife that Laz had forgotten he'd had, and began coming towards him, holing it as if he was going to cut him. Not stab, just cut. Laz swept his leg, so he fell down, dropping the knife he got back up, and Laz dived forward, tacking him so he'd go face first into the corner of the bar, the most painful part of it. Adam let out a scream, before crumpling into a heap on the ground. Laz could have been done, and gone to see Dawn, he could have just stopped, and leave Adam in the pain he was in. But Laz didn't "feel complete," so he just rolled Adam onto his back, punching him, over, and over, at least 16 times, so Adam spit blood all over his face, so he hoisted him up, and between heavy breaths, Adam was begging for mercy. Laz had none left for Adam. Adam wasn't even particularly in the wrong, he just had so much bottled up rage from Dawn almost dying, he kept attacking him. He grabbed the knife, pinned his hand to the bar, and stabbed it, blood going everywhere, as Adam's begs for mercy were even more desperate, as Laz threw him into a bunch of tables, as he collapsed, holding his hand in agony. Laz knew how much sheer rage was inside of him, so he knew the 1 way to release it. He pushed Adam up against the wall, and wrapped 1 hand around his neck, as Adam began flailing, and gasping for air. Laz wasn't thinking about the results of this, not thinking about Dawn, who needs him, or what people would think of him, or about how he would be affected by strangling Adam, he just knew that his rage was all being released. And in the heat of the moment, he wasn't thinking at all.

    Choice A: Strangle Adam to death

    Choice B: Leave Adam unconscious.

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    The fight scene was very intense! The choice had me thinking for a while because Laz is a good guy(I think) but you said he wasn't thinking so...

    Lola had been alone for a while. Jane was gone somewhere and Breanna kept talking about Joe and some "cute mysterious" man with a cowboy hat. In her spare time she was usually on the wall using a bow and arrow to kill the walkers that came close. Every day she would also visit Vince's grave. His gravestone read Here lies Vince. A hero who died saving another. Lola shed a tear. Why did you have to leave me Vince? She then headed into the woods to release her anger on some walkers.

    Laz knew that Adam was the leader. Whatever happened after this point meant exile or death. But in the heat of the moment he pushed Adam's back against a wall, both hands on his throat, and before he could strangle him he heard a voice. It was Dawn, she was in her wheelchair in the doorway with a scared expression on her face. Laz took his hands off and Adam fell to the floor unconscious "This isn't what it looks like honey... Hes a bad man." Laz said in an exhausted tone. "But... you were going to kill him?" Dawn said. "Trust me he was bad , he started the fight! Come with me we have to leave." Laz said.

    Choice A: Leave Wellington with Laz

    Choice B: Stay in Wellington

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    "Laz......This place is safe! I'm in a wheelchair, and I'm recovering, I know I won't last 5 minutes out there!" Dawn said, looking Laz in the eyes. He was sad. "I........honey I'll protect you." "You can't protect me forever-" "YES I CAN DAWN!!!!" Laz hollered. He was tearing up, and kneeling in front of her. "Please Dawnie.......come with me....." "I can't Laz, I'm sorry." Doc had walked up, and jumped on Dawn's lap. That was the 1 thing she liked about her wheelchair. Doc could sit there at all times, which he usually did, except for when she's sleeping. Dawn turned around, crying now, as Laz ran in front of her. "Dawn come with me......." Laz begged, as Dawn looked up, sobbing. "I wish I c-could Laz.......please stay with me.......Dawn egged, as Laz shook his head. "Naw, Dawnie....... I can't..........keep Doc with you........and stay with 1 of the supply group.........and stay outta trouble." Laz said, faking a smile. They hugged, for a long time, before Dawn went towards Wyatt's apartment, and Laz went past the gate. Breanna kept asking why he was leaving, but Laz stayed silent. Dawn went to Wyatt's apartment, but nobody was there. So she turned around, meeting Russel on the way back. "Hi Dawn, what's up?" Russel asked, as Dawn looked up, sobbing. "L-Laz is g-gone,
    c-c-can I stay with you.......Wyatt and Jane are gone." "Sure, I guess." Russel said, turning her toward his home, and pushing her. He didn't know why Laz left, or why he didn't tell anyone, and he wanted to ask Dawn if she knew why Wyatt and Jane were out, but he knew how close Dawn and Laz were, especially recently with her injury, so he didn't say anything. Laz was 3 hours away from Wellington, when he looked back on all his stupid mistakes, and cursed to himself about how he could have stopped it himself, as he grabbed his cowboy hat, throwing it on the ground, stomping on it, and looking at the night sky, and finding a broken down car, sleeping there for the night. When he awoke, he saw 2 figures coming his way. He raised his pistol, before lowering it, realizing they were alive. It was Johnny and Micheal, headed his way........

  • choice b

    maxbear29 posted: »

    Adam made the first move, pushing Laz backward into a chair, that he tripped over. Adam grabbed a bar stool, and began jabbing him in the st

  • No the next person that writes gets to choose. But yeah I chose B so no worries.

    tntlee2099 posted: »

    choice b

  • a or b. both are good choices.

    The fight scene was very intense! The choice had me thinking for a while because Laz is a good guy(I think) but you said he wasn't thinking

  • I will be posting my part later. I don't have to worry about a love interest right now. Which is the way it would happen in a real ZA..

    maxbear29 posted: »

    "Laz......This place is safe! I'm in a wheelchair, and I'm recovering, I know I won't last 5 minutes out there!" Dawn said, looking Laz in t

  • oh. ok....Cool. good idea on the choice making.

    No the next person that writes gets to choose. But yeah I chose B so no worries.

  • We usually don't vote on choices but I think its a good idea. But there isn't that many of us left...

    Clementine-Everett left I think? :(

    tntlee2099 posted: »

    oh. ok....Cool. good idea on the choice making.

  • Sorry for not posting yet. My landlord/friend had a seizure and is doing badly right now. I will try later to post or you guys can post. If you need to re read my post describing Laz so you know his weapons,skills and clothing (like the mesh steel long sleeved shirt.) I will be back as quick as I can.

    tntlee2099 posted: »

    I will be posting my part later. I don't have to worry about a love interest right now. Which is the way it would happen in a real ZA..

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