??? We will have all of those. Action of course! Drama, Lola and Michael will be so awkward lol. Romance, we got love triangle up again.
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Michael slowly walked over to Lola, but not looking her in the eyes. Lola thought about hugging him but she was still upset for the choice he made. She decided to just stay quiet and walked by him and sat down in a chair. Michael went over to the windows and pretended to look out them. Wyatt picked Jane up and placed her on a table. "Here." Wyatt looked up and saw Laz hand him a first aid box. " It will do the job for now. There are a lot more supplies in here. We will look through these boxes." Wyatt thanked Laz and went to work on Jane. Johnny and Justin began searching crates. Joe was hugging Breanna and she was smiling, when she looked at Laz she gave him a little smile as well. "Laz, come here for a minute." Michael said. Laz walked over and peered out the windows through the boards that were being used for protection. Laz saw about 11 walkers headed toward the library. Laz whispered something into Michael's ear. Then Laz opened the door and went out. Michael pushed a heavy box in front of the door. "Why are you doing that?" Breanna asked rushing over leaving Joe with a puzzled look on his face. " "Because he told me to. He said to protect your family. I wouldn't worry about him, Johnny and I have seen him kick walker ass. They do not scare him." Breanna looked out the window as well. Outside Laz watched the walkers get closer. He took a joint out of his pocket and lit it. Taking a few puffs he took the joint, rubbed out the flame and stuck it back where it came from. The walkers were 20 feet away from him now. "Sorry, not today." Laz said while grinning. He reached once again into his jacket with both hands and pulled out matching modified hatchets. They were extra sharp and had brass knuckles welded to the grip. On the brass knuckles there was a steel, long spike on each knuckle. "Need more cowbell,baby." Laz said and laughed at his own joke as he walked toward the walkers.
I did a small part just in case someone wanted to have characters talk inside. They can be talking right after Carver died. And Laz's part that I wrote can be in the same scene while he was in the bookstore with them. A same situation from a different view sort of thing. lol... I hope you don't kill Laz off bc we have a lot to do with the character. Adam, Shikada and his henchmen,as well as Ollie and Molly. And Russel, Doc and Dawn. Plus don't forget besides his long trench coat he wears like a steel mesh kind of armor under his clothes. As for killing the other characters i will when needed next season as i do not know where you are headed with their story arc this season.
Episode 5 - Until The Last Breath
Michael slowly walked over to Lola, but not looking her in the eyes. Lola thought about hugging him but… more she was still upset for the choice he made. She decided to just stay quiet and walked by him and sat down in a chair. Michael went over to the windows and pretended to look out them. Wyatt picked Jane up and placed her on a table. "Here." Wyatt looked up and saw Laz hand him a first aid box. " It will do the job for now. There are a lot more supplies in here. We will look through these boxes." Wyatt thanked Laz and went to work on Jane. Johnny and Justin began searching crates. Joe was hugging Breanna and she was smiling, when she looked at Laz she gave him a little smile as well. "Laz, come here for a minute." Michael said. Laz walked over and peered out the windows through the boards that were being used for protection. Laz saw about 11 walkers headed toward the library. Laz whispered something into M… [view original content]
I like how Laz just randomly has a joint in his pocket. I find that funny. Plus, going out to fight walkers while stoned. I'm sure this is a great idea.
I did a small part just in case someone wanted to have characters talk inside. They can be talking right after Carver died. And Laz's part t… morehat I wrote can be in the same scene while he was in the bookstore with them. A same situation from a different view sort of thing. lol... I hope you don't kill Laz off bc we have a lot to do with the character. Adam, Shikada and his henchmen,as well as Ollie and Molly. And Russel, Doc and Dawn. Plus don't forget besides his long trench coat he wears like a steel mesh kind of armor under his clothes. As for killing the other characters i will when needed next season as i do not know where you are headed with their story arc this season.
Ok, I'll go next. BTW, for the purposes of the story, Russel, Dawn, and Doc went back, and saved Kenny, now they are outside of Wellington, trying to figure out what to do with a young, overly nervous 20 year old, and injured redneck (sorry Ken), a crippled little girl, and a cat. I didn't feel like writing that any longer than that.
Laz massacred the horde, and walked back inside. "We need to get moving soon. This city is dead, and we can't afford to die." Wyatt pointed out, and everyone agreed, as they heard Laz yell "Oh no! Guys!" and run inside, frantically trying to barricade the door even more. Micheal looked out the window, as it appeared that every inhabitant of the town, and the outskirts had surrounded the door. Quickly informing the group, everyone surrounded the door. Pushing, everyone was barely managing to keep it on the hinges as Johnny surveyed the room, spotting a hatch that lead to the roof. Abandoning the door, he climbed a shelf, opening the hatch, as an old, wooden ladder slid down, and Johnny yelled "GUYS! COME ON!" quickly climbing to the rooftop. Wyatt and Jane quickly followed suit, as they got to the top, leaving Micheal, Laz, Breanna, Justin, and Joe to hold the door. Joe and Laz were very strong, and everyone else was pretty in shape too, so they barely managed to keep the door on, as Joe managed to signal Breanna to run, making it up the ladder. Micheal made a run for it too, as the door collapsed, and Laz grabbed the others, and Justin tripped, while Laz made it to the top, leaving Joe to help him up, pushing him up the ladder, as Justin bent a rung, so when the heavy Joe went up, the rung broke off, and he fell to the ground. "JOE!" Breanna yelled, as he grabbed his leg in pain, barely able to stand up, as he immediately fell to 1 knee again, as he was almost surrounded. Jane noticed this, as she loaded her pistol, and yelled "JOE! CATCH!" as he looked up, and she dropped it down, and he barely caught it, as he solemnly said through the noise "Guys, leave. It's too late for me, no way, I'll make it up that ladder with a hurt knee in time. I'll find a hiding spot, or another way out or something, just leave me. Go!" he yelled, shooting 4 walkers down, limping out of their line of view. Justin closed the hatch, as they all faintly heard 2 more shots, a thump, and then everything was drowned out in walker noises. Everyone was standing on a roof, staring off at the horde of walkers all over the city, as Breanna began to sob, and Laz comforted her, and Wyatt sighed, and looked around. "Guys......how do we get out of here?" he said quietly, as everyone looked for a way out.
Ok, I'll go next. BTW, for the purposes of the story, Russel, Dawn, and Doc went back, and saved Kenny, now they are outside of Wellington, … moretrying to figure out what to do with a young, overly nervous 20 year old, and injured redneck (sorry Ken), a crippled little girl, and a cat. I didn't feel like writing that any longer than that.
I like how Laz just randomly has a joint in his pocket. I find that funny. Plus, going out to fight walkers while stoned. I'm sure this is a great idea.
:O feels like you did the trapped in attic scene and Kenny "Death" scene in one! Joe better be dead because I heard a thump. And I hope we do at least half the episode in the attic since it would be really depressing and such.
The group looked around but couldn't find anything. Breanna was crying in the corner hands in her face, Jane, and Laz trying to comfort her. Wyatt, Justin, Johnny, Lola and Michael were looking around for an exit at no avail. There was only a window but its was too far down to survive if you jumped out.
"I'm sorry... Breanna. It should have been me and it wasn't." Laz said. She said nothing and tried to ignore him. Michael was getting really angry and tried kicking the walls for no reason. Johnny and Lola were looking around and managed to find a weeks worth of food and water. There were 2 couches and a bed which must have been Carver's. Everyone was out of ammo and didn't have a weapon. Wyatt soon found a gun on a table with 3 bullets... the only weapon they had. Laz was equipped with his weapons and so Wyatt and Laz were the only armed people.
Wyatt spoke up "We're going to have to stay in here for a couple of days. We have enough supplies to keep us going and we'll wait until the walkers clear out." Everyone agreed and began to get comfortable. Breanna had stopped crying but wasn't talking to anyone except Jane and Lola on one of the couches. Johnny and Justin were sitting on one couch talking to each other. Michael was talking to himself while pacing the dark corner of the room. Laz and Wyatt were discussing they're escape.
Soon night fell upon the town and everyone was asleep. Breanna on the bed. Johnny on the couch. Jane on the other couch all patched up. Everyone else slept on the floor in sleeping bags Justin and Johnny found in the crates downstairs. Justin sighed. He saw that everyone was asleep and decided to check on his wound. He lifted his shirt and it revealed a bite mark that had got him when he was holding the walkers back. He didn't feel that bad, It would probably be better in the morning he thought to himself. He lowered his shirt and fell into a deep sleep never to awake....
(We need people dead. There is way too many people. Let him bite at least one person please!)
Justin got up as a walker. Breanna had not slept, because she was grieving over Joe's loss. Turning around to see Justin wandering around, she walked up to him, and noticed he wasn't paying attention to her, so when his hat he was wearing fell off, she went to pick it up, and hand it to him, as he turned, biting her on the hand, as she screamed, waking everyone up, as Micheal saw a zombified Justin biting Breanna, and he grabbed the gun Wyatt had set down, shooting his shoulder, and he fumbled the weapon. Wyatt reached out for it, as Justin continued to eat Breanna's hand, he cocked it, and shot again, this time Justin whipped around, tackling him, as he shot and missed due to the momentum of the tackle, and Laz ran over, killing him with the hatchet. "Micheal, you missed man." Laz said as Micheal was holding his shoulder "It's just......my aim under pressure, when I just awake is horrible, okay?" Micheal said, checking his shoulder. Luckily, it was just a bump from the floor hen he got tackled, and checking his whole body, he wasn't bitten, and neither was anybody else, as Justin turning made them all check themselves. Except for Breanna, of course, who stared at her bleeding, mangled hand, crying. Micheal picked up the gun. 1 bullet left. "Saveit." Breanna said, as she sobbed, looking at the hatch. "I want to......be with Joe in my final hour." Laz sadly hugged her, as he opened the hatch, holding the ladder. There was still a massive horde, but they had mostly gone outside. "Goodbye......everyone." Breanna sadly said, jumping down, as they watched her hold her hand, spotting Joe's corpse, lying in a corner, sitting there, white, a huge hole in his stomach area, as Breanna cried, as she lied down, hugging Joe, as she slowly went unconscious. They also threw Justin's corpse down, as Laz wiped tears away, as everyone silently went back to sleep.
Justin got up as a walker. Breanna had not slept, because she was grieving over Joe's loss. Turning around to see Justin wandering around, s… morehe walked up to him, and noticed he wasn't paying attention to her, so when his hat he was wearing fell off, she went to pick it up, and hand it to him, as he turned, biting her on the hand, as she screamed, waking everyone up, as Micheal saw a zombified Justin biting Breanna, and he grabbed the gun Wyatt had set down, shooting his shoulder, and he fumbled the weapon. Wyatt reached out for it, as Justin continued to eat Breanna's hand, he cocked it, and shot again, this time Justin whipped around, tackling him, as he shot and missed due to the momentum of the tackle, and Laz ran over, killing him with the hatchet. "Micheal, you missed man." Laz said as Micheal was holding his shoulder "It's just......my aim under pressure, when I just awake is horrible, okay?" Micheal said, checking his shoulder. Luckily,… [view original content]
It is cool. You never know when it is someones turn to go. Who knows who we run into next season. Laz is tough and it adds to the story. Right now in this group the most important characters ( from reading everything) is Lola and Wyatt. If my character's time has come while you are writing then feel free to do so. Just make sure it means something. Breanna's death did mean something. She wanted to be with Joe the whole time, so the way she chose to die was very respectable and I can see her doing that.
Michael motioned to Johnny and Laz to come talk to him. When the two got there,Michael whispered " We need to a house around here that we can stay in and feel safe. We need to heal physically and mentally." Johnny nodded "I agree. This place is way too big and the attic doesn't really say "temporary home" to me." Plus we need to resupply. Ammo, weapons,food and medical supplies. Plus I have to get my duffel bag outside. It is under Carver's truck. One problem, I am the only one with a gun and ammo for it. But as we came into town I saw a house with bars on it. Looked like a home with a business attached to it. The way it was built makes me think it use to be a weapons store of some kind. You just don't put bars on all your windows for nothing.And nothing was broken or smashed in and it would be perfect size for us. And the safest." Johnny looked at him. "Why would you say it is the safest?" Laz looked at Jane and Wyatt. "It is the first building when you drive into town. Do you know how many people actually do not look at the first building when they arrive in a town? 89 percent. Now to me, in this day and age you could probably add 4 more percent to that." "That makes sense and I am all for it." Michael replied. Laz looked around the room. " Everybody is tired and spent. They need rest as do you two. I will go out and take care of the rest of the walkers in this place and be nice and quiet about killing any others that are outside. Before you argue, Michael take this." Laz handed him the watch he was wearing. "It is 7:00 right now and the sun is going down. It will be dark soon. So I need to get going. And take my Golden Eagle, just in case. It has a silencer on it and a full clip." Reaching into his jacket he pulled out another clip and handed this one to Johnny. "Stay a team. You two know what we are trying to do. If I am not back in by 7 in the morning, then something happened. But you two will tell your friends here what we talked about. And give this to Jane. She looks like she can use it. Unless she is allergic to it than persist she smoke some." Laz handed Michael a joint and a lighter. Then he gave Johnny a joint. "That is in case anybody needs to release some stress. Now walk with me over to the door in the floor." Laz chuckled. The three of them walked over acting nonchalantly and stood by the attic door. Laz looked at them and all three men nodded. Laz whispered" Lock it and don't let no one leave. Give me till the morning. And do not show the gun unless it is a dire situation." In one swift movement Laz had unlocked the door jumped through and Johnny locked it back up. Michael and Johnny felt pretty confident. Laz was no lightweight. And he was a blades expert from the little they had seen. They gave each other a little smile and turned around and came face to face with Wyatt and Lola. "What the FUCK just happened?" Wyatt yelled at them.
Jane was very against drugs. She didn't even touch alcohol before the outbreak, and even forced Breanna to quit smoking. But after all that happened, her and Wyatt sat down on a couch, and shared a joint, to finally relax. Micheal considered joining them, and so did Johnny, but Johnny decided against it, because he needed to be alert, and Micheal simply didn't want to hurt his physical condition, hence why he didn't smoke before the outbreak, and hence why he hasn't since.The group had been heavily chipped away at. They were down to 6, Jane, Wyatt, Johnny, Laz, Lola, and Micheal, maybe Russel, Dawn, and Kenny. They were surviving though, even if Joe and Breanna were eaten, and Justin turned, they were still alive, and that was all that mattered. Johnny was the newest member of the team, and he was likable and nice, and Micheal and Laz trusted him a lot, so the others simply accepted it. Lola had been there longer than most of the team, except Wyatt, and Kenny and Russel if they were still alive. Micheal had been a member of the group for a long time, and was universally trusted, even if Lola had mixed emotions towards him, since he disappeared, Laz had been invaluable, and had really helped out a lot since they met at Wellington, Jane had been a trusted member since her and her sister accompanied them on the way to Wellington, and, of course, Wyatt, as one of the original core members that formed this group was very well trusted. The whole group was trusting each other, and even couples have been formed, so they were at least content with who they were around.
It was 3 o'clock when a walker blood-stained Laz climbed the bookshelf to open the attic, as he tiredly rolled into the attic, awaking everyone. "Sorry I'm late, I had a small funeral for Joe and Breanna, as well as Justin." Laz panted, as he lifted his shirt, checking for bites, then he rolled up his pants, sighing in relief. "I swear 1 bit me on the sole of my foot!" Laz chuckled, showing both of his feet to the group. They were bite-free. "It bit my thick boot. I'm one lucky son-of-a-bitch!" Laz exclaimed, as everyone gathered up their belongings. "Follow me." Laz whispered, as they snuck down the streets, and everyone spotted to the left, Justin's grave, and to the right, 1 a large grave, labeled "Joe and Breanna."
I know I just went, however it's been a day, and I want to post again. That's like an unwritten rule, don't go twice in a row, so I hope you guys don't mind!
They began down the street, hiding behind things, because Laz got the horde directly outside the shop, however there's plenty more walkers still around. So with Laz in the lead, and Lola taking up the rear, they snuck down the road. noticing a small horde, of about 10 or 15 just standing around, directly in their way. Laz pulled out his smallest weapon, a mousegun (If you don't know what that is, google it), but Jane stopped him "Let's save ammo....look!" she said, pointing to a ladder on the nearest building, "We'll go rooftop jumping until we're in the clear!" she suggested, as everyone agreed, and climbed the ladder. Reaching the top, everyone looked down into the alley between them, and the next building. Wide, and the fall was most likely fatal, but the length was possible. Taking a deep breath, without even consulting anyone, Laz leaped across the alley, getting from his waist up onto the building, and pulled himself up. Lola, being afraid of heights, decided to go last, and Micheal stayed there to talk to her. He kept talking, an apologising, as Johnny made the leap,almost missing, but as he began to plummet, Laz grabbed his hand, pulling him up. "Lola, I cannot apologize enough, I made a dumb decision. Please forgive me, Lola." Micheal said, as Jane successfully made the jump, and Wyatt followed. Now feeling conflicted, whether to forgive Micheal or not, Lola silently stood there, thinking about everything he said, and his actions, and after Micheal made the jump, successfully, Lola went for it, only realizing last minute how high up it was, and putting the brakes on, tripping over the edge of the roof, falling face-first into the alley. "LOLA NO!!!!" Laz screamed, as everyone gathered around to try and see Lola. "It's too damn dark!" Johnny exclaimed, as Micheal was ready to jump down. "Wait, Micheal!" La yelled, as he stopped, "I need to go help her!" Micheal said, desperately, as Laz shook his head. "IF she lived that fall, and that's a big if, and IF you live falling to go help her, she's definitely injured, and she won't be able to get up the ladder, and with all that blood, and lurkers being able to smell blood, she'd be a walker magnet, killing you BOTH! Plus, if she did live, she knows which way we're going, she'll follow us, and find us, and it'll all be fine. But to go help her........it'd be a death sentence." Laz said, as a frustrated Micheal, reluctantly agreed, asking for a weapon from Laz. "Just something small.....like a police baton." he said, as Laz handed him a sword-knife. "It's sharp and effective. Why?" Laz said, as Micheal dropped it into the alley. "If she lived, she'll be surrounded. It's to help her fight." Micheal said, as everyone moved on, continuing roof jumping.
About 1/2 an hour later
Lola awoke in a heap of garbage bags. She was disoriented, but she knew her left arm hurt like a bitch. Jesus christ, my mother-f*cking arm." she mumbled, moving the bags so she could see her arm. The fall had been so big, the force was enough to impale her elbow on a piece of rebar (the thing Bonnie killed Dee with). Luckily, she was right-handed, and managed to get her arm free, and wrap it in a garbage bag she emptied, so the bleeding would slow down temporarily. "I need to suture my arm, wrap it better, and, most importantly, find that gun store....." she stated, as she bent down, looking for a weapon. She spotted a sword-knife, just sitting on the ground. She picked it up, standing, checking for bites (she found none), and she limped off, clutching her arm, and wielding a sword-knife, as she walked off towards where her group was going.
I know I just went, however it's been a day, and I want to post again. That's like an unwritten rule, don't go twice in a row, so I hope you guys don't mind!
So sorry guys. I really don't feel like writing anymore.... I'm tired of 3 members maximum.... I think I'm going to leave . I will probably still be here reading but not writing. I have been here since page 5 and look... we have only got 10 pages more. No one is joining and I don't like our story anymore. Believe me its not you guys' fault its mine. Don't get me wrong you guys are great people and writers and I will miss contributing but I have simply lost interest. I hope you guys don't take offense and keep going until at least until season 1 is finished. I may write sometimes but not daily as I usually do. Bye guys .
Episode 4: From Every Angle
Everyone is Wellington alive and well. The only one in injured state is Kenny in the hospital. A new man name… mored Laz is introduced to the story and joins Wyatt. Jane, and Russell's supply group. He owns a cat named Doc and cares for a little girl named Dawn. Her guardian Ollie and his friends disrespect Laz and they decide to beat him up. Laz sends Dawn to Wyatt while he is fighting Ollie and his gang. Ollie's gang are killed and Ollie leaves Wellington injured.
Meanwhile bandits find Michael. A bandit named Johhny helps Michael kill his friends. They both have bad pasts and join up to go to Wellington since the outside is no longer safe. They drive facing many obstacles. They soon pick up an exiled Laz and still head to Wellington. They arrive finding the place in flames...
Before Breanna and Joe were gatekeepers with the newcomer Justin the inmate that Vince had saved on the prison bus. Breanna and Joe had… [view original content]
So sorry guys. I really don't feel like writing anymore.... I'm tired of 3 members maximum.... I think I'm going to leave . I will probably … morestill be here reading but not writing. I have been here since page 5 and look... we have only got 10 pages more. No one is joining and I don't like our story anymore. Believe me its not you guys' fault its mine. Don't get me wrong you guys are great people and writers and I will miss contributing but I have simply lost interest. I hope you guys don't take offense and keep going until at least until season 1 is finished. I may write sometimes but not daily as I usually do. Bye guys .
Guys, I don't know if we should continue after episode 5. I mean, let's finish this, but we're running low on people, and I can't be the only one posting for 2 days. I think I'll start a new one after we're done, or even maybe today, because we're so close to the end, but yeah. No season 2
Just end it quickly. Maybe 1-3 more posts. Make it happy ending since the story is basically over. I will probably join new thread but only if we have at least like 5-10 people because I'm sick and tired of 1-3 people only. If you agree on ending it now you should probably finish it off since you were the creator but if you don't want to I could.
Guys, I don't know if we should continue after episode 5. I mean, let's finish this, but we're running low on people, and I can't be the onl… morey one posting for 2 days. I think I'll start a new one after we're done, or even maybe today, because we're so close to the end, but yeah. No season 2
Laz lead the guys to the gun store. He opened the door, to see a small group of people in black clothing, who all turned around, and pointed their guns at them. Then, to the surprise of everyone, Ollie stepped out, recoiling in fear at the sight of Laz. The men in black surveyed the group, before 1 of them said "Johnny? Holy jesus man, where've you been!" He yelled, as Johnny looked surprised, and the guy looked beside him. "You switched sides eh? You were always shifty as hell, man. It looks like your betrayal will be the end of ya." The guy said, realizing that this is the group of bandits Johnny was a part of. On your knees, everyone." Ollie ordered, as everyone got on their knees, with their hands behind their heads. "Eh, Leon, you know this 'Johnny' kid?" Ollie asked, as the guy, Leon, nodded, and Ollie pulled out a pistol, cocking it, pointing it to Johnny's forehead. Laz got up, punching Ollie in the face. Micheal attacked Leon, while Jane, Wyatt, and Johnny dealt with the other 3. Laz and Ollie traded punches, and were in a fair fight, while Jane managed to kick a bandit in the knee, grabbing his weapon, as she shot him at close range, right in the eye, as he collapsed, and she shot the one who was about to kill Johnny, and the other was surprised, so she shot him too. Johnny pointed out that the noise attracted a massive herd, at least 70-80 walkers, as Micheal punched Leon so hard, he knocked him out, and Ollie got Laz down to his knees with 1 blot to the head with the butt of his rifle, as Wyatt pointed out the bandit's car, and everyone ran to get in. Micheal noticed last, as Johnny got in the back, Wyatt got in front, and Jane rode shotgun, and he went to run to get in, as the bandit he thought was knocked out grabbed his leg, and Ollie took advantage, shooting, getting Micheal directly in the temple, killing him. Johnny was shocked, as he watched his friend, his best friend, get killed by someone he could have killed back at the campsite. Leon. Laz attacked Ollie, as he liked Micheal, and he just murdered him, as he rolled Ollie into the wall, as he left a large crack, and began punching Ollie, as Wyatt yelled "Laz, come on!!!", but Laz didn't hear, as he was so enraged. "He doesn't hear us, we gotta go!" Jane yelled, as Wyatt put in the keys, which were in the glove box, as Johnny got out of the car, yelling "I'm not leaving Laz!" as Jane told Wyatt to drive, as they were surrounded, and he obeyed, driving off, leaving Laz and Johnny behind. Laz broke Ollie's jaw, as he begged for mercy, and Laz got up, and broke his knees, as he screamed in agony, and Laz rolled him out side, as he yelled, high-pitched and desperate, "LAZ" PLEASE DON'T LAVE ME TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!" and walkers surrounded him, eating him. Johnny ran over, pulling out the golden eagle Lax gave him, calling Leon a son of a bitch, before executing him. Laz got back inside, covered in Ollie's blood, as Johnny was similarly covered in Leon's blood, as they waited for the horde to pass.
Wyatt and Jane drove back up north, panicking, as they saw 3 travelers on the side of the road.......a little girl in a wheel chair, followed by a young african-american boy, and a long haired redneck, holding his stomach........ Wyatt was shocked, as he pulled over, and the redneck pulled out his gun, as Wyatt rolled down the window. "Kenny?! Russel?! Dawn?!" Wyatt exclaimed, as Kenny lowered his gun, walking over joyfully, before getting in the backseat, laughing with happiness. Russel folded up Dawn's wheelchair, placing her down, before getting in, and driving off, explaining what had happened.
After the herd left, Johnny and Laz buried Micheal outside, placing a piece of wood for a headstone, placing his name, the date (guessed), and going back inside. They both grieved silently, before Laz pulled out a joint, and they both smoked it, before falling asleep. At about midnight, a groggy Lola, with a bleeding arm, stumbled up to the building. Barely reading the sign, she began to sniffle, and sob uncontrollably saying "Micheal.....why.......I forgive you........Micheal." Lola walked inside, still crying, as she saw Johnny and Laz, asleep, as she decided to do that to, lying down on the cold floor, and sleeping.
Laz lead the guys to the gun store. He opened the door, to see a small group of people in black clothing, who all turned around, and pointed… more their guns at them. Then, to the surprise of everyone, Ollie stepped out, recoiling in fear at the sight of Laz. The men in black surveyed the group, before 1 of them said "Johnny? Holy jesus man, where've you been!" He yelled, as Johnny looked surprised, and the guy looked beside him. "You switched sides eh? You were always shifty as hell, man. It looks like your betrayal will be the end of ya." The guy said, realizing that this is the group of bandits Johnny was a part of. On your knees, everyone." Ollie ordered, as everyone got on their knees, with their hands behind their heads. "Eh, Leon, you know this 'Johnny' kid?" Ollie asked, as the guy, Leon, nodded, and Ollie pulled out a pistol, cocking it, pointing it to Johnny's forehead. Laz got up, punching Ollie in the face. Micheal attacked Leon, while … [view original content]
Laz lead the guys to the gun store. He opened the door, to see a small group of people in black clothing, who all turned around, and pointed… more their guns at them. Then, to the surprise of everyone, Ollie stepped out, recoiling in fear at the sight of Laz. The men in black surveyed the group, before 1 of them said "Johnny? Holy jesus man, where've you been!" He yelled, as Johnny looked surprised, and the guy looked beside him. "You switched sides eh? You were always shifty as hell, man. It looks like your betrayal will be the end of ya." The guy said, realizing that this is the group of bandits Johnny was a part of. On your knees, everyone." Ollie ordered, as everyone got on their knees, with their hands behind their heads. "Eh, Leon, you know this 'Johnny' kid?" Ollie asked, as the guy, Leon, nodded, and Ollie pulled out a pistol, cocking it, pointing it to Johnny's forehead. Laz got up, punching Ollie in the face. Micheal attacked Leon, while … [view original content]
Good Job! Sorry for not being able to post. a lot of homework and personal matters. I think anyone who plays should make their own character. different all the way around. no characters from anything b4. new story, different location. It might be just me but i feel as if maybe we should have the type of zombies in 28 days/weeks later. it would make it a hell of a lot harder and scarier. and you would have to be very careful of what you post as these are more intelligent and more dangerous as you can turn just by getting blood on a open sore, ur mouth and eyes. but i will do whatever you want to do. I came in late and didnt really know the other characters , and how they acted.
You should probably post the link to the other fan fic at the top.
And we should probably start over as our story should be done . I don't want to continue off the same people. I think we should start again from scratch without 400 day's characters.
Thanks. No problem . We are making a new fan fic with the same characters but I'm pretty sure you can introduce new ones. Laz and the others are still in it. I think were sticking to walkers because its called "The Walking Dead" but your idea sounds interesting as well! Thanks for joining!
Good Job! Sorry for not being able to post. a lot of homework and personal matters. I think anyone who plays should make their own character… more. different all the way around. no characters from anything b4. new story, different location. It might be just me but i feel as if maybe we should have the type of zombies in 28 days/weeks later. it would make it a hell of a lot harder and scarier. and you would have to be very careful of what you post as these are more intelligent and more dangerous as you can turn just by getting blood on a open sore, ur mouth and eyes. but i will do whatever you want to do. I came in late and didnt really know the other characters , and how they acted.
no prob. i will still be laz of course as my primary. plus molly might be inserted. i think shakida and his 4 henchmen should wait til next season as we have a lot healing emotionally and physically. I think this new season we are going into could actually be a very emotional one. I like writing emotional scenes. i didnt do it last time but will this time
Thanks. No problem . We are making a new fan fic with the same characters but I'm pretty sure you can introduce new ones. Laz and the others… more are still in it. I think were sticking to walkers because its called "The Walking Dead" but your idea sounds interesting as well! Thanks for joining!
no prob. i will still be laz of course as my primary. plus molly might be inserted. i think shakida and his 4 henchmen should wait til next … moreseason as we have a lot healing emotionally and physically. I think this new season we are going into could actually be a very emotional one. I like writing emotional scenes. i didnt do it last time but will this time
Just like a phoenix, the Walking Mustache will rise from the ashes and return even bigger and even better! I am Clementine-Everett, i am the Stache!
That's how it went...but for some reason i am not banned from the forum anymore.
No this thread is great basically half an hour ago stache asked me to take a look at this I said ok then I asked him for a link he responded fifteen minutes later that he couldn't find it but with that picture he said it still wasn't as good as Tobi's so just trolling the mighty stache lol
No this thread is great basically half an hour ago stache asked me to take a look at this I said ok then I asked him for a link he responded… more fifteen minutes later that he couldn't find it but with that picture he said it still wasn't as good as Tobi's so just trolling the mighty stache lol
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/60314/twd-forum-comic-series-new-threads-part-2-in-making-1st-preview-on-page-5152/p52
(talking at the bottom with stache lol)
Looked for 2 seconds just googled your names and 400 days with telltale and came up found it in about 2 seconds lol
This is quality stache I read a good few of your chapters knew you were a very talented writer you should write more I demand you write story on my thread your a terrific writer
Thanks for the good summary...time to go on with the story then.
Some time later they finally arrived back at the bar. They were all out of… more breath and feeling very tired. " Lets just get inside and get some rest for today. We can hit the road tommorow! " Kenny said and they were all going inside the bar. " Hey man, how you holding up? Can i get you anything? Food,water, some Weed? " Eddie asked Wyatt with a grin on his face. " No dude i'm fine. Thanks for saving me before. I could just need some sleep. " Wyatt answered and Eddie recognized that their still was something that bothered him. " Listen man, i know you long enough to see that there is still something in the air that you wanna talk about. " Eddie responded . " Yes. Now that you mention it, there is still something i would like to talk with you about. How the fuck could could ever do this to me? Leaving me on the road like this to die? I was chased by this goddamn psychos for hours! … [view original content]
This is quality stache I read a good few of your chapters knew you were a very talented writer you should write more I demand you write story on my thread your a terrific writer
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lol....i would be biased but it all depends on how the chips fall though...
ok. I will start the episode.
Episode 5 - Until The Last Breath
Michael slowly walked over to Lola, but not looking her in the eyes. Lola thought about hugging him but she was still upset for the choice he made. She decided to just stay quiet and walked by him and sat down in a chair. Michael went over to the windows and pretended to look out them. Wyatt picked Jane up and placed her on a table. "Here." Wyatt looked up and saw Laz hand him a first aid box. " It will do the job for now. There are a lot more supplies in here. We will look through these boxes." Wyatt thanked Laz and went to work on Jane. Johnny and Justin began searching crates. Joe was hugging Breanna and she was smiling, when she looked at Laz she gave him a little smile as well. "Laz, come here for a minute." Michael said. Laz walked over and peered out the windows through the boards that were being used for protection. Laz saw about 11 walkers headed toward the library. Laz whispered something into Michael's ear. Then Laz opened the door and went out. Michael pushed a heavy box in front of the door. "Why are you doing that?" Breanna asked rushing over leaving Joe with a puzzled look on his face. " "Because he told me to. He said to protect your family. I wouldn't worry about him, Johnny and I have seen him kick walker ass. They do not scare him." Breanna looked out the window as well. Outside Laz watched the walkers get closer. He took a joint out of his pocket and lit it. Taking a few puffs he took the joint, rubbed out the flame and stuck it back where it came from. The walkers were 20 feet away from him now. "Sorry, not today." Laz said while grinning. He reached once again into his jacket with both hands and pulled out matching modified hatchets. They were extra sharp and had brass knuckles welded to the grip. On the brass knuckles there was a steel, long spike on each knuckle. "Need more cowbell,baby." Laz said and laughed at his own joke as he walked toward the walkers.
I did a small part just in case someone wanted to have characters talk inside. They can be talking right after Carver died. And Laz's part that I wrote can be in the same scene while he was in the bookstore with them. A same situation from a different view sort of thing. lol... I hope you don't kill Laz off bc we have a lot to do with the character. Adam, Shikada and his henchmen,as well as Ollie and Molly. And Russel, Doc and Dawn. Plus don't forget besides his long trench coat he wears like a steel mesh kind of armor under his clothes. As for killing the other characters i will when needed next season as i do not know where you are headed with their story arc this season.
I like how Laz just randomly has a joint in his pocket. I find that funny. Plus, going out to fight walkers while stoned. I'm sure this is a great idea.
Ok, I'll go next. BTW, for the purposes of the story, Russel, Dawn, and Doc went back, and saved Kenny, now they are outside of Wellington, trying to figure out what to do with a young, overly nervous 20 year old, and injured redneck (sorry Ken), a crippled little girl, and a cat. I didn't feel like writing that any longer than that.
Laz massacred the horde, and walked back inside. "We need to get moving soon. This city is dead, and we can't afford to die." Wyatt pointed out, and everyone agreed, as they heard Laz yell "Oh no! Guys!" and run inside, frantically trying to barricade the door even more. Micheal looked out the window, as it appeared that every inhabitant of the town, and the outskirts had surrounded the door. Quickly informing the group, everyone surrounded the door. Pushing, everyone was barely managing to keep it on the hinges as Johnny surveyed the room, spotting a hatch that lead to the roof. Abandoning the door, he climbed a shelf, opening the hatch, as an old, wooden ladder slid down, and Johnny yelled "GUYS! COME ON!" quickly climbing to the rooftop. Wyatt and Jane quickly followed suit, as they got to the top, leaving Micheal, Laz, Breanna, Justin, and Joe to hold the door. Joe and Laz were very strong, and everyone else was pretty in shape too, so they barely managed to keep the door on, as Joe managed to signal Breanna to run, making it up the ladder. Micheal made a run for it too, as the door collapsed, and Laz grabbed the others, and Justin tripped, while Laz made it to the top, leaving Joe to help him up, pushing him up the ladder, as Justin bent a rung, so when the heavy Joe went up, the rung broke off, and he fell to the ground. "JOE!" Breanna yelled, as he grabbed his leg in pain, barely able to stand up, as he immediately fell to 1 knee again, as he was almost surrounded. Jane noticed this, as she loaded her pistol, and yelled "JOE! CATCH!" as he looked up, and she dropped it down, and he barely caught it, as he solemnly said through the noise "Guys, leave. It's too late for me, no way, I'll make it up that ladder with a hurt knee in time. I'll find a hiding spot, or another way out or something, just leave me. Go!" he yelled, shooting 4 walkers down, limping out of their line of view. Justin closed the hatch, as they all faintly heard 2 more shots, a thump, and then everything was drowned out in walker noises. Everyone was standing on a roof, staring off at the horde of walkers all over the city, as Breanna began to sob, and Laz comforted her, and Wyatt sighed, and looked around. "Guys......how do we get out of here?" he said quietly, as everyone looked for a way out.
Just like Druken Master with Jackie Chan. Laz is an amazing fighter sober but when he gets high he becomes a lot more limber and doesnt get scared.
:O feels like you did the trapped in attic scene and Kenny "Death" scene in one! Joe better be dead because I heard a thump. And I hope we do at least half the episode in the attic since it would be really depressing and such.
The group looked around but couldn't find anything. Breanna was crying in the corner hands in her face, Jane, and Laz trying to comfort her. Wyatt, Justin, Johnny, Lola and Michael were looking around for an exit at no avail. There was only a window but its was too far down to survive if you jumped out.
"I'm sorry... Breanna. It should have been me and it wasn't." Laz said. She said nothing and tried to ignore him. Michael was getting really angry and tried kicking the walls for no reason. Johnny and Lola were looking around and managed to find a weeks worth of food and water. There were 2 couches and a bed which must have been Carver's. Everyone was out of ammo and didn't have a weapon. Wyatt soon found a gun on a table with 3 bullets... the only weapon they had. Laz was equipped with his weapons and so Wyatt and Laz were the only armed people.
Wyatt spoke up "We're going to have to stay in here for a couple of days. We have enough supplies to keep us going and we'll wait until the walkers clear out." Everyone agreed and began to get comfortable. Breanna had stopped crying but wasn't talking to anyone except Jane and Lola on one of the couches. Johnny and Justin were sitting on one couch talking to each other. Michael was talking to himself while pacing the dark corner of the room. Laz and Wyatt were discussing they're escape.
Soon night fell upon the town and everyone was asleep. Breanna on the bed. Johnny on the couch. Jane on the other couch all patched up. Everyone else slept on the floor in sleeping bags Justin and Johnny found in the crates downstairs. Justin sighed. He saw that everyone was asleep and decided to check on his wound. He lifted his shirt and it revealed a bite mark that had got him when he was holding the walkers back. He didn't feel that bad, It would probably be better in the morning he thought to himself. He lowered his shirt and fell into a deep sleep never to awake....
(We need people dead. There is way too many people. Let him bite at least one person please!)
Justin got up as a walker. Breanna had not slept, because she was grieving over Joe's loss. Turning around to see Justin wandering around, she walked up to him, and noticed he wasn't paying attention to her, so when his hat he was wearing fell off, she went to pick it up, and hand it to him, as he turned, biting her on the hand, as she screamed, waking everyone up, as Micheal saw a zombified Justin biting Breanna, and he grabbed the gun Wyatt had set down, shooting his shoulder, and he fumbled the weapon. Wyatt reached out for it, as Justin continued to eat Breanna's hand, he cocked it, and shot again, this time Justin whipped around, tackling him, as he shot and missed due to the momentum of the tackle, and Laz ran over, killing him with the hatchet. "Micheal, you missed man." Laz said as Micheal was holding his shoulder "It's just......my aim under pressure, when I just awake is horrible, okay?" Micheal said, checking his shoulder. Luckily, it was just a bump from the floor hen he got tackled, and checking his whole body, he wasn't bitten, and neither was anybody else, as Justin turning made them all check themselves. Except for Breanna, of course, who stared at her bleeding, mangled hand, crying. Micheal picked up the gun. 1 bullet left. "Saveit." Breanna said, as she sobbed, looking at the hatch. "I want to......be with Joe in my final hour." Laz sadly hugged her, as he opened the hatch, holding the ladder. There was still a massive horde, but they had mostly gone outside. "Goodbye......everyone." Breanna sadly said, jumping down, as they watched her hold her hand, spotting Joe's corpse, lying in a corner, sitting there, white, a huge hole in his stomach area, as Breanna cried, as she lied down, hugging Joe, as she slowly went unconscious. They also threw Justin's corpse down, as Laz wiped tears away, as everyone silently went back to sleep.
:O...... You killed the romance....
You said to kill someone.......She's the only character I couldn't come up with a different death for.......
Yes but why her
. Laz has armor so nope. It could have been Wyatt, Jane, Michael, Johnny, Lola. But whatever its fine.
It is cool. You never know when it is someones turn to go. Who knows who we run into next season. Laz is tough and it adds to the story. Right now in this group the most important characters ( from reading everything) is Lola and Wyatt. If my character's time has come while you are writing then feel free to do so. Just make sure it means something. Breanna's death did mean something. She wanted to be with Joe the whole time, so the way she chose to die was very respectable and I can see her doing that.
Michael motioned to Johnny and Laz to come talk to him. When the two got there,Michael whispered " We need to a house around here that we can stay in and feel safe. We need to heal physically and mentally." Johnny nodded "I agree. This place is way too big and the attic doesn't really say "temporary home" to me." Plus we need to resupply. Ammo, weapons,food and medical supplies. Plus I have to get my duffel bag outside. It is under Carver's truck. One problem, I am the only one with a gun and ammo for it. But as we came into town I saw a house with bars on it. Looked like a home with a business attached to it. The way it was built makes me think it use to be a weapons store of some kind. You just don't put bars on all your windows for nothing.And nothing was broken or smashed in and it would be perfect size for us. And the safest." Johnny looked at him. "Why would you say it is the safest?" Laz looked at Jane and Wyatt. "It is the first building when you drive into town. Do you know how many people actually do not look at the first building when they arrive in a town? 89 percent. Now to me, in this day and age you could probably add 4 more percent to that." "That makes sense and I am all for it." Michael replied. Laz looked around the room. " Everybody is tired and spent. They need rest as do you two. I will go out and take care of the rest of the walkers in this place and be nice and quiet about killing any others that are outside. Before you argue, Michael take this." Laz handed him the watch he was wearing. "It is 7:00 right now and the sun is going down. It will be dark soon. So I need to get going. And take my Golden Eagle, just in case. It has a silencer on it and a full clip." Reaching into his jacket he pulled out another clip and handed this one to Johnny. "Stay a team. You two know what we are trying to do. If I am not back in by 7 in the morning, then something happened. But you two will tell your friends here what we talked about. And give this to Jane. She looks like she can use it. Unless she is allergic to it than persist she smoke some." Laz handed Michael a joint and a lighter. Then he gave Johnny a joint. "That is in case anybody needs to release some stress. Now walk with me over to the door in the floor." Laz chuckled. The three of them walked over acting nonchalantly and stood by the attic door. Laz looked at them and all three men nodded. Laz whispered" Lock it and don't let no one leave. Give me till the morning. And do not show the gun unless it is a dire situation." In one swift movement Laz had unlocked the door jumped through and Johnny locked it back up. Michael and Johnny felt pretty confident. Laz was no lightweight. And he was a blades expert from the little they had seen. They gave each other a little smile and turned around and came face to face with Wyatt and Lola. "What the FUCK just happened?" Wyatt yelled at them.
Jane was very against drugs. She didn't even touch alcohol before the outbreak, and even forced Breanna to quit smoking. But after all that happened, her and Wyatt sat down on a couch, and shared a joint, to finally relax. Micheal considered joining them, and so did Johnny, but Johnny decided against it, because he needed to be alert, and Micheal simply didn't want to hurt his physical condition, hence why he didn't smoke before the outbreak, and hence why he hasn't since.The group had been heavily chipped away at. They were down to 6, Jane, Wyatt, Johnny, Laz, Lola, and Micheal, maybe Russel, Dawn, and Kenny. They were surviving though, even if Joe and Breanna were eaten, and Justin turned, they were still alive, and that was all that mattered. Johnny was the newest member of the team, and he was likable and nice, and Micheal and Laz trusted him a lot, so the others simply accepted it. Lola had been there longer than most of the team, except Wyatt, and Kenny and Russel if they were still alive. Micheal had been a member of the group for a long time, and was universally trusted, even if Lola had mixed emotions towards him, since he disappeared, Laz had been invaluable, and had really helped out a lot since they met at Wellington, Jane had been a trusted member since her and her sister accompanied them on the way to Wellington, and, of course, Wyatt, as one of the original core members that formed this group was very well trusted. The whole group was trusting each other, and even couples have been formed, so they were at least content with who they were around.
It was 3 o'clock when a walker blood-stained Laz climbed the bookshelf to open the attic, as he tiredly rolled into the attic, awaking everyone. "Sorry I'm late, I had a small funeral for Joe and Breanna, as well as Justin." Laz panted, as he lifted his shirt, checking for bites, then he rolled up his pants, sighing in relief. "I swear 1 bit me on the sole of my foot!" Laz chuckled, showing both of his feet to the group. They were bite-free. "It bit my thick boot. I'm one lucky son-of-a-bitch!" Laz exclaimed, as everyone gathered up their belongings. "Follow me." Laz whispered, as they snuck down the streets, and everyone spotted to the left, Justin's grave, and to the right, 1 a large grave, labeled "Joe and Breanna."
I know I just went, however it's been a day, and I want to post again. That's like an unwritten rule, don't go twice in a row, so I hope you guys don't mind!
They began down the street, hiding behind things, because Laz got the horde directly outside the shop, however there's plenty more walkers still around. So with Laz in the lead, and Lola taking up the rear, they snuck down the road. noticing a small horde, of about 10 or 15 just standing around, directly in their way. Laz pulled out his smallest weapon, a mousegun (If you don't know what that is, google it), but Jane stopped him "Let's save ammo....look!" she said, pointing to a ladder on the nearest building, "We'll go rooftop jumping until we're in the clear!" she suggested, as everyone agreed, and climbed the ladder. Reaching the top, everyone looked down into the alley between them, and the next building. Wide, and the fall was most likely fatal, but the length was possible. Taking a deep breath, without even consulting anyone, Laz leaped across the alley, getting from his waist up onto the building, and pulled himself up. Lola, being afraid of heights, decided to go last, and Micheal stayed there to talk to her. He kept talking, an apologising, as Johnny made the leap,almost missing, but as he began to plummet, Laz grabbed his hand, pulling him up. "Lola, I cannot apologize enough, I made a dumb decision. Please forgive me, Lola." Micheal said, as Jane successfully made the jump, and Wyatt followed. Now feeling conflicted, whether to forgive Micheal or not, Lola silently stood there, thinking about everything he said, and his actions, and after Micheal made the jump, successfully, Lola went for it, only realizing last minute how high up it was, and putting the brakes on, tripping over the edge of the roof, falling face-first into the alley. "LOLA NO!!!!" Laz screamed, as everyone gathered around to try and see Lola. "It's too damn dark!" Johnny exclaimed, as Micheal was ready to jump down. "Wait, Micheal!" La yelled, as he stopped, "I need to go help her!" Micheal said, desperately, as Laz shook his head. "IF she lived that fall, and that's a big if, and IF you live falling to go help her, she's definitely injured, and she won't be able to get up the ladder, and with all that blood, and lurkers being able to smell blood, she'd be a walker magnet, killing you BOTH! Plus, if she did live, she knows which way we're going, she'll follow us, and find us, and it'll all be fine. But to go help her........it'd be a death sentence." Laz said, as a frustrated Micheal, reluctantly agreed, asking for a weapon from Laz. "Just something small.....like a police baton." he said, as Laz handed him a sword-knife. "It's sharp and effective. Why?" Laz said, as Micheal dropped it into the alley. "If she lived, she'll be surrounded. It's to help her fight." Micheal said, as everyone moved on, continuing roof jumping.
About 1/2 an hour later
Lola awoke in a heap of garbage bags. She was disoriented, but she knew her left arm hurt like a bitch. Jesus christ, my mother-f*cking arm." she mumbled, moving the bags so she could see her arm. The fall had been so big, the force was enough to impale her elbow on a piece of rebar (the thing Bonnie killed Dee with). Luckily, she was right-handed, and managed to get her arm free, and wrap it in a garbage bag she emptied, so the bleeding would slow down temporarily. "I need to suture my arm, wrap it better, and, most importantly, find that gun store....." she stated, as she bent down, looking for a weapon. She spotted a sword-knife, just sitting on the ground. She picked it up, standing, checking for bites (she found none), and she limped off, clutching her arm, and wielding a sword-knife, as she walked off towards where her group was going.
So sorry guys. I really don't feel like writing anymore.... I'm tired of 3 members maximum.... I think I'm going to leave
. I will probably still be here reading but not writing. I have been here since page 5 and look... we have only got 10 pages more. No one is joining and I don't like our story anymore. Believe me its not you guys' fault its mine. Don't get me wrong you guys are great people and writers and I will miss contributing but I have simply lost interest. I hope you guys don't take offense and keep going until at least until season 1 is finished. I may write sometimes but not daily as I usually do. Bye guys 
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She got paralyzed from the waist down, she didn't break her legs. Otherwise, the summary is spot-on!
Walking mustache (if you ever contribute,) and TNTLee, it's just us now.......I'm a little disappointed. You will be missed Raging_blades
I will miss you to! And no offense but I never thought we would make it this far but keep on going! The life of 400 day's fan fic must live on!
Guys, I don't know if we should continue after episode 5. I mean, let's finish this, but we're running low on people, and I can't be the only one posting for 2 days. I think I'll start a new one after we're done, or even maybe today, because we're so close to the end, but yeah. No season 2
Just end it quickly. Maybe 1-3 more posts. Make it happy ending since the story is basically over. I will probably join new thread but only if we have at least like 5-10 people because I'm sick and tired of 1-3 people only. If you agree on ending it now you should probably finish it off since you were the creator but if you don't want to I could.
I'll finish it off.
Laz lead the guys to the gun store. He opened the door, to see a small group of people in black clothing, who all turned around, and pointed their guns at them. Then, to the surprise of everyone, Ollie stepped out, recoiling in fear at the sight of Laz. The men in black surveyed the group, before 1 of them said "Johnny? Holy jesus man, where've you been!" He yelled, as Johnny looked surprised, and the guy looked beside him. "You switched sides eh? You were always shifty as hell, man. It looks like your betrayal will be the end of ya." The guy said, realizing that this is the group of bandits Johnny was a part of. On your knees, everyone." Ollie ordered, as everyone got on their knees, with their hands behind their heads. "Eh, Leon, you know this 'Johnny' kid?" Ollie asked, as the guy, Leon, nodded, and Ollie pulled out a pistol, cocking it, pointing it to Johnny's forehead. Laz got up, punching Ollie in the face. Micheal attacked Leon, while Jane, Wyatt, and Johnny dealt with the other 3. Laz and Ollie traded punches, and were in a fair fight, while Jane managed to kick a bandit in the knee, grabbing his weapon, as she shot him at close range, right in the eye, as he collapsed, and she shot the one who was about to kill Johnny, and the other was surprised, so she shot him too. Johnny pointed out that the noise attracted a massive herd, at least 70-80 walkers, as Micheal punched Leon so hard, he knocked him out, and Ollie got Laz down to his knees with 1 blot to the head with the butt of his rifle, as Wyatt pointed out the bandit's car, and everyone ran to get in. Micheal noticed last, as Johnny got in the back, Wyatt got in front, and Jane rode shotgun, and he went to run to get in, as the bandit he thought was knocked out grabbed his leg, and Ollie took advantage, shooting, getting Micheal directly in the temple, killing him. Johnny was shocked, as he watched his friend, his best friend, get killed by someone he could have killed back at the campsite. Leon. Laz attacked Ollie, as he liked Micheal, and he just murdered him, as he rolled Ollie into the wall, as he left a large crack, and began punching Ollie, as Wyatt yelled "Laz, come on!!!", but Laz didn't hear, as he was so enraged. "He doesn't hear us, we gotta go!" Jane yelled, as Wyatt put in the keys, which were in the glove box, as Johnny got out of the car, yelling "I'm not leaving Laz!" as Jane told Wyatt to drive, as they were surrounded, and he obeyed, driving off, leaving Laz and Johnny behind. Laz broke Ollie's jaw, as he begged for mercy, and Laz got up, and broke his knees, as he screamed in agony, and Laz rolled him out side, as he yelled, high-pitched and desperate, "LAZ" PLEASE DON'T LAVE ME TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!" and walkers surrounded him, eating him. Johnny ran over, pulling out the golden eagle Lax gave him, calling Leon a son of a bitch, before executing him. Laz got back inside, covered in Ollie's blood, as Johnny was similarly covered in Leon's blood, as they waited for the horde to pass.
Wyatt and Jane drove back up north, panicking, as they saw 3 travelers on the side of the road.......a little girl in a wheel chair, followed by a young african-american boy, and a long haired redneck, holding his stomach........ Wyatt was shocked, as he pulled over, and the redneck pulled out his gun, as Wyatt rolled down the window. "Kenny?! Russel?! Dawn?!" Wyatt exclaimed, as Kenny lowered his gun, walking over joyfully, before getting in the backseat, laughing with happiness. Russel folded up Dawn's wheelchair, placing her down, before getting in, and driving off, explaining what had happened.
After the herd left, Johnny and Laz buried Micheal outside, placing a piece of wood for a headstone, placing his name, the date (guessed), and going back inside. They both grieved silently, before Laz pulled out a joint, and they both smoked it, before falling asleep. At about midnight, a groggy Lola, with a bleeding arm, stumbled up to the building. Barely reading the sign, she began to sniffle, and sob uncontrollably saying "Micheal.....why.......I forgive you........Micheal." Lola walked inside, still crying, as she saw Johnny and Laz, asleep, as she decided to do that to, lying down on the cold floor, and sleeping.
THE END
My new Fan-fic will be up within an hour, feel free to use any of the (living) characters in it, too!
Good Job! Sorry for not being able to post. a lot of homework and personal matters. I think anyone who plays should make their own character. different all the way around. no characters from anything b4. new story, different location. It might be just me but i feel as if maybe we should have the type of zombies in 28 days/weeks later. it would make it a hell of a lot harder and scarier. and you would have to be very careful of what you post as these are more intelligent and more dangerous as you can turn just by getting blood on a open sore, ur mouth and eyes. but i will do whatever you want to do. I came in late and didnt really know the other characters , and how they acted.
You should probably post the link to the other fan fic at the top.
And we should probably start over as our story should be done
. I don't want to continue off the same people. I think we should start again from scratch without 400 day's characters.
Thanks. No problem
. We are making a new fan fic with the same characters but I'm pretty sure you can introduce new ones. Laz and the others are still in it. I think were sticking to walkers because its called "The Walking Dead" but your idea sounds interesting as well! Thanks for joining!
no prob. i will still be laz of course as my primary. plus molly might be inserted. i think shakida and his 4 henchmen should wait til next season as we have a lot healing emotionally and physically. I think this new season we are going into could actually be a very emotional one. I like writing emotional scenes. i didnt do it last time but will this time
I did link to the new one at the original post (below the rules), just in case you didn't see.
Still not as good as Markd Thread lol REVENGE MUAHAHHAHA
lol. Your right. How did you find this thread? We ditched it months ago.
These were my amateur writing days
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No this thread is great basically half an hour ago stache asked me to take a look at this I said ok then I asked him for a link he responded fifteen minutes later that he couldn't find it but with that picture he said it still wasn't as good as Tobi's so just trolling the mighty stache lol
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/60314/twd-forum-comic-series-new-threads-part-2-in-making-1st-preview-on-page-5152/p52
(talking at the bottom with stache lol)
Looked for 2 seconds just googled your names and 400 days with telltale and came up found it in about 2 seconds lol
Ah okay. Cool!
This is quality stache I read a good few of your chapters knew you were a very talented writer you should write more I demand you write story on my thread your a terrific writer
Thanks Mark, when a " Fanfic god " like you says that, it means alot to me!
Sure, i will write on your thread sometime...it's confirmed!
Thanks YES!! can't wait to read it Stache I would give up being a fanfic god tomorrow for that godlike stache of yours lol