Our own Episode 3
Hello!
It'd be great, if we could write our own Episode 3 to the comment section. I decided to make this
thread to those people who would like to write their mutual episode. I don't know if this will succeed,
but let's find out! ^^
Rules - 1-3 sentences per comment - Continue the story from the previous comment - REPLY to the latest sentence!
NOTE Both Nick and Alvin are alive in this episode!
I'll start with a simple sentence: The group is walking on the bridge near the ski lodge.
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They see a shadow in the dark watching them
I have a few questions...well actualy just one:
In my playthough Nick and Alvin both died already. Everyone played their own stories and everyone has a different few of certain characters. For example, in the story you started Alvin and Nick might both be still alive. So how do we handle this 2 determinated characters?
Oh, I totally forgot about it. I'll edit it to the thread! Are you fine, if they stay alive?
Well, i'm not excited about it, but it's okay for me. I will go on then...
The dark silhouette, that was watching them from the other side of the bridge was slowly but surely approaching them.
It's just a walker. Bonnie takes it out.
I already wrote a comment before you wrote your's, but that doesn't matter...let's just say you'r comment happens after my did.
I suggest the one who is continueing with the stroy rights something like " ... " or " currently writting ", so this problem doesn't happen again.
Edit: Nvm
Hey, thanks for sorting things up in here!
This is starting to get confusing soon, reply to Tyranitar next, please, it'll be simpler.
You'r welcome... i like such threads alot!
Yes will do, i was just replying to you first.
Carver: " Let's keep moving. "
Kenny: " And if we don't? "
Carver pointing a gun at Sarita's head: " Then this is gonna happen! "
Kenny: "You piece of..."
Carlos: "Kenny, don't."
Kenny: She's my girl!
Kenny: "Don't hurt her! "
Carver: "Follow the rules and I won't. "
Kenny: " (sigh) How far away is your camp? "
Carver: " Very far...so like i said already, cut the shit and keep moving! "
Almost 5 days had passed and the group was getting very close to Carvers camp. The mood in the group was still very tense.
Carver: " Sorry 'bout your fingers Carlos. "
Carver: " We found a great doctor during your absense. "
Carver: " He's a wise fellow. His name is Vernon. "
I have another idea to improve the quality of this thread, every here and then there should be a big decision where we can vote about what happens next. Simillar to the big decisions that happen in the game. So there should be around 5big decisions where we get to vote!
Kenny: Vernon who? That motherfucker who stole our boat?!"
Carver: I don't know about your boyfriends, man, but would you shut the fuck up?!"
If we could get the system to work, then yes!
Carver: " Let's settle here for tonight and get some sleep. Tommorow is the big day, we are finally gonna get back to our camp. "
Clem: I know that you are just trying to do you'r best here Kenny, but please watch your temper. Good people have already died because you weren't carefull.
Kenny: Clem, i don't know if we could have saved Walt or not. But i know one thing for sure, one of us didn't just give up!
Clem: Why did you shoot?
Kenny: That son of a bitch captured my friends, and my girl, and you tell me to calm down?
Clem: Look, just... Just be careful out there, don't lose it. People are gonna die, no matter what.
Kenny: Let's just forget about it and get a good nights rest. Lord knows we need it.
Sarah wakes Clem up late at night while everyone is sleeping.
Sarah: Psst! Clem! I found this knife! Should I hold on to it... Or do you want it?
" Kenny: I was sure, I was sure that I would hit him. But no, I'm a loser. Now Walter's gone. "
I won't reply to this...first of all, Kenny would never say something like this. Secondly, Kenny did perfectly hit his target, remember?
Instant edit!
I just keep forgetting things.
That's much better! lol
Clem: I want you to keep it Sarah. You need to be able to protect yourself. Just use it, as i showed you yesterday.
Clem: But...please don't tell you'r Dad about it.
Clem: ...and please don't get yourself killed.
The Group awakes early in the morning.
Carver: See anybody escape Bonnie?
Bonnie: Everybody is here.
Carver: Great.
Carver: Okay, folks, we're reaching our camp tonight!
Carlos: And what's in there? Hell?
Thank you, it's much better now!
Carver: Cut the damn attitude Carlos
Carver: The so called "Hell" didn't change much since you bailed
Carver: So I suggest you shut t-
Justin: Bill? Is that you?
The group arrives to the camp.
Carver: What you doing out here Justin?
Justin: Hunting with Vince.
Vince: So you found them?
Carver: Let's head back to camp. Then we can talk
Vince: So what are we going to do with these guys Bill?
Carver: Let's remember, these are our brothers and sisters, and they all have a vital role to play in this community.
Carver: They strayed from the flock, yeah, but that don't mean they can't earn their way back into the fold.
Carver: ...and I don't mean we have to find it in our hearts to forgive them. Knowing full well, those who choose not to accept our loyalty, will surely wish that they had.
I'll go to bed now, so I won't be around here for a while.
Follow the thread to keep track of the story! ^^
Later man! Great stuff so far
Everyone gets settled in while Bonnie has a conversation with Clem.
Bonnie: Hello.. Clem is it?
Clem: What do you want?
Bonnie: I just want to apologize for everything that's happened.
Bonnie: I wasn't lying when I said I have a little girl. She's not mine, but I still take care of her.
Bonnie: Her name is Becca. You should talk to her sometime. Won't be too hard to find as she is the only other kid here besides your friend.
Clem: It's okay, I forgive you.
Clem walks out of the room to be approached by Nick.
Nick: Psst! Clem! I have been keepin' an eye on everything and i've noticed that Alvin,Carver, and Rebecca went into that ware house over there.
Nick: You should sneak in. I'll keep a look out.
Clem approaches the warehouse window to see a beat up Alvin sitting on a chair.
I'm getting to in to this. I'll let someone else come up with some.
Should Clementine go get help from Kenny?
Or go into the ware house right away?
http://strawpoll.me/1397686/r
EDIT: Sneak into warehouse without Kenny won
Edit: Nevermind, comments are going so fast. How do i vote?
disregard this comment c: i was doing a reply but arthur^^^ beat me
Type the url without the r at the end.
Bump
Ready for the first major choice. let me know what you think