Meanwhile, in the diner.....
Becca leaves her small room, and walks outside. She is surprised to see a new girl at the group.
Becca: "… moreWho might you be? Newbie?"
Sarah: "My name is Sarah... What's your name?"
The knife that she had just recently found sticks out of her pocket.
Becca: "My name is- Why do you have a weapon?! Only trusted adults are aloud to have weapons in here! Eddie get over here, she has a weapon!"
Carlos and a new character named Josh runs over.
Carlos: Where did you get a knife sarah!
Eddie: Give up the knife before you get hurt… more!
Josh: Now hold on Eddie. She's just a little girl! Calm down. What harm is she going to do to us? Let's just let her keep it.
Carlos and a new character named Josh runs over.
Carlos: Where did you get a knife sarah!
Eddie: Give up the knife before you get hurt… more!
Josh: Now hold on Eddie. She's just a little girl! Calm down. What harm is she going to do to us? Let's just let her keep it.
Meanwhile, in the diner.....
Becca leaves her small room, and walks outside. She is surprised to see a new girl at the group.
Becca: "… moreWho might you be? Newbie?"
Sarah: "My name is Sarah... What's your name?"
The knife that she had just recently found sticks out of her pocket.
Becca: "My name is- Why do you have a weapon?! Only trusted adults are aloud to have weapons in here! Eddie get over here, she has a weapon!"
Eddie try's to take away the knife from Sarah.
Eddie : Give me that!
Sarah: No! Get away from me! Dad! Clem! Help me!
Eddie: Stop m… moreoving or I will hurt you !
Kenny who is not that far away see's what's happing. He runs over to Sarah.
Kenny: Hey leave her alone you (make up a name for Eddie)
Eddie try's to take away the knife from Sarah.
Eddie : Give me that!
Sarah: No! Get away from me! Dad! Clem! Help me!
Eddie: Stop m… moreoving or I will hurt you !
Kenny who is not that far away see's what's happing. He runs over to Sarah.
Kenny: Hey leave her alone you (make up a name for Eddie)
Kenny: "Hey, Leave her alone you dickbird!"
Eddie: "Who the hell are you? You think I'm going to listen to some newcomer? Ha! Asshole!"
… more Eddie strikes a punch at Kenny. Kenny immediately fires back, nailing him in the face causing blood to come gushing out of his nose.
Carlos: "Sarah! Get out of here you can't see this!"
Meanwhile, in the diner.....
Becca leaves her small room, and walks outside. She is surprised to see a new girl at the group.
Becca: "… moreWho might you be? Newbie?"
Sarah: "My name is Sarah... What's your name?"
The knife that she had just recently found sticks out of her pocket.
Becca: "My name is- Why do you have a weapon?! Only trusted adults are aloud to have weapons in here! Eddie get over here, she has a weapon!"
Vince runs over to the fight
Vince: Woah! Quit fighting! The both of you! What the Fuck is going on here?!?!
Kenny: This asshole think… mores he can ruff up a little girl over a knife!
Vince: Chill the fuck out man! Everybody get out before Bill gets involved in this mess. You know how he handles these types of situations.
Eddie leaves the room with an angry expression on his face.
Whoops, didn't see your post, I'll edit mine a bit. We had the same idea with the blood coughing part though, lol.
We even had the get out of here part the same... Wow..
Alvin: "Clem ge-.... Get out of here!" He says as he begins to cough up blood. "Go.. Now.."
Clementine begins to untie the straps, but is… more interrupted by a voice.
Carvers voice was coming from another room, along with a screaming Rebecca. "That's what you fucking get for fucking with me, and my baby.
Alvin: "Quick Clem!" Coughs up more blood.. "Hide before he sees you!"
"AHHHH" Carver winces as the knife is stuck in his arm, he pushes sarah back with great force... he also drops his gun.. but focuses his attention on sarah.
Clem sees the gun and lunges towards it
Carver: Just like your father eh? he says to sarah as he pulls the knife out of his arm and walks towards sarah not yet realising clem has picked up the gun.
Clem: Leave her alone or i swear ill shoot... Carver stops and turns to her..
Clem ignores Alvin and continues to unstrap Alvin until Carver catches her
Carver: You just had to go sneaking around didn't you clementi… morene?
Alvin: Fuck you Carver! Touch her and you're dead!
Carver: I'm the one who has the gun dumbass.
Carver forcefully grabs Alvin and throws him on the floor and is about to execute him until Sarah cuts his arm open with her knife
Carver: "Fine.... Fine... Just don't shoot... You hear me... I won't touch her just... Don't shoot.."
It had almost sounded like Carver was scared. Almost Clementine had looked through his eyes, and noticed him motioning someone behind her.
Clementine turns around and sees nothing. Right before she could turn around she is pushed to the ground.
Carver picks up the gun and begins to speak. "Now who has the gun?" Carver aims it at Clementine, and right when he is about to shoot he turns to Alvin and says two simple words. "Rebecca's mine." Right as the words come out he shoots Alvin's heart and he instantly died.
He then holsters the gun at Clementine, and commands her to get in his second pair of straps. "Alvin will be turning soon.... Gotta go!" He says as he un-straps Alvin.
"AHHHH" Carver winces as the knife is stuck in his arm, he pushes sarah back with great force... he also drops his gun.. but focuses his att… moreention on sarah.
Clem sees the gun and lunges towards it
Carver: Just like your father eh? he says to sarah as he pulls the knife out of his arm and walks towards sarah not yet realising clem has picked up the gun.
Clem: Leave her alone or i swear ill shoot... Carver stops and turns to her..
"AHHHH" Carver winces as the knife is stuck in his arm, he pushes sarah back with great force... he also drops his gun.. but focuses his att… moreention on sarah.
Clem sees the gun and lunges towards it
Carver: Just like your father eh? he says to sarah as he pulls the knife out of his arm and walks towards sarah not yet realising clem has picked up the gun.
Clem: Leave her alone or i swear ill shoot... Carver stops and turns to her..
Carver: "Fine.... Fine... Just don't shoot... You hear me... I won't touch her just... Don't shoot.."
It had almost sounded like Carver w… moreas scared. Almost Clementine had looked through his eyes, and noticed him motioning someone behind her.
Clementine turns around and sees nothing. Right before she could turn around she is pushed to the ground.
Carver picks up the gun and begins to speak. "Now who has the gun?" Carver aims it at Clementine, and right when he is about to shoot he turns to Alvin and says two simple words. "Rebecca's mine." Right as the words come out he shoots Alvin's heart and he instantly died.
He then holsters the gun at Clementine, and commands her to get in his second pair of straps. "Alvin will be turning soon.... Gotta go!" He says as he un-straps Alvin.
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Meanwhile, in the diner.....
Becca leaves her small room, and walks outside. She is surprised to see a new girl at the group.
Becca: "Who might you be? Newbie?"
Sarah: "My name is Sarah... What's your name?"
The knife that she had just recently found sticks out of her pocket.
Becca: "My name is- Why do you have a weapon?! Only trusted adults are aloud to have weapons in here! Eddie get over here, she has a weapon!"
Carlos and a new character named Josh runs over.
Carlos: Where did you get a knife sarah!
Eddie: Give up the knife before you get hurt!
Josh: Now hold on Eddie. She's just a little girl! Calm down. What harm is she going to do to us? Let's just let her keep it.
Sarah: "But Clementine told me to hold on to it-"
Sarah stops mid-sentence realizing her dad is right in front of her.
Carlos: "Clementine gave you this!? I knew she was not to be trusted."
Disregard this.
Eddie try's to take away the knife from Sarah.
Eddie : Give me that!
Sarah: No! Get away from me! Dad! Clem! Help me!
Eddie: Stop moving or I will hurt you !
Kenny who is not that far away see's what's happing. He runs over to Sarah.
Kenny: Hey leave her alone you (make up a name for Eddie)
Kenny: "Hey, Leave her alone you dickbird!"
Eddie: "Who the hell are you? You think I'm going to listen to some newcomer? Ha! Asshole!"
Eddie strikes a punch at Kenny. Kenny immediately fires back, nailing him in the face causing blood to come gushing out of his nose.
Carlos: "Sarah! Get out of here you can't see this!"
@iHeartTWD You might want to edit the Eddie runs over part as Eddie is already there. Nice job btw
Sarah: What about you dad ???
Carlos: I said get out of here!
Becca: Come on Eddie, kick his ass already !!!
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Vince runs over to the fight
Vince: Woah! Quit fighting! The both of you! What the Fuck is going on here?!?!
Kenny: This asshole thinks he can ruff up a little girl over a knife!
Vince: Chill the fuck out man! Everybody get out before Bill gets involved in this mess. You know how he handles these types of situations.
Eddie leaves the room with an angry expression on his face.
Hold on man we are getting too carried away. We should save Carver and clem for the main story
Ok and thanks
I didn't see you're comments after Random's first comment so I wrote that Xp
That's what I was thinking.
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You guys wanna end off Sarah's story and touch back up on the main story?
yes i have a few ideas for shit to hit the fan so can we get back to the main?
Alright, done.
So what choice should we go with?
Should Clementine go get help from Kenny?
Or go into the warehouse right away?
I think it would be easier to write if she handled it by herself.
Back at the warehouse....
Clementine sneaks inside the warehouse. She quietly approaches Alvin.
Clem: Alvin, what happened?
(This is the last scene of Eddie vs Kenny so don't respond until we go back at it)
Vince turns to Becca
Vince: And you Becca you should be ashamed of yourself, providing fights and cheering on them. What would Shel think all of this?
Becca: Why do I care what she thinks? Anyways, it's not like she cares...
Vince shuts his eyes
Vince: Look Becca, even if Shel is one of Carver's "right-hand girl" she still is your sister and cares for you no matter what
Alvin: Clem... Ge-..... Get out of here now.. (blood starts to pour down his mouth as he coughs)
Clem then goes to undo Alvins straps.
Alvin: "Clem ge-.... Get out of here!" He says as he begins to cough up blood. "Go.. Now.."
Clementine begins to untie the straps, but is interrupted by a voice.
Carvers voice was coming from another room, along with a screaming Rebecca. "That's what you fucking get for fucking with me, and my baby.
Alvin: "Quick Clem!" Coughs up more blood.. "Hide before he sees you!"
Whoops, didn't see your post, I'll edit mine a bit. We had the same idea with the blood coughing part though, lol.
We even had the get out of here part the same... Wow..
hahaha yea, If you start from :Clem get out of here" it still makes sense.
Disregard this
Clem ignores Alvin and continues to unstrap Alvin until Carver catches her
Carver: You just had to go sneaking around didn't you clementine?
Alvin: Fuck you Carver! Touch her and you're dead!
Carver: I'm the one who has the gun dumbass.
Carver forcefully grabs Alvin and throws him on the floor and is about to execute him until Sarah cuts his arm open with her knife
"AHHHH" Carver winces as the knife is stuck in his arm, he pushes sarah back with great force... he also drops his gun.. but focuses his attention on sarah.
Clem sees the gun and lunges towards it
Carver: Just like your father eh? he says to sarah as he pulls the knife out of his arm and walks towards sarah not yet realising clem has picked up the gun.
Clem: Leave her alone or i swear ill shoot... Carver stops and turns to her..
Carver: "Fine.... Fine... Just don't shoot... You hear me... I won't touch her just... Don't shoot.."
It had almost sounded like Carver was scared. Almost Clementine had looked through his eyes, and noticed him motioning someone behind her.
Clementine turns around and sees nothing. Right before she could turn around she is pushed to the ground.
Carver picks up the gun and begins to speak. "Now who has the gun?" Carver aims it at Clementine, and right when he is about to shoot he turns to Alvin and says two simple words. "Rebecca's mine." Right as the words come out he shoots Alvin's heart and he instantly died.
He then holsters the gun at Clementine, and commands her to get in his second pair of straps. "Alvin will be turning soon.... Gotta go!" He says as he un-straps Alvin.
Disregard
Que Credits! lol jk we can't stop there
erm.. Not trying to sound rude, but I posted a "Writing" 7 minutes ago.
disregard..
Disregard I agree with your guys Ideas
Sorry Ty...
I think we should have another major choice soon. Also, it should be once there is 10 total votes to make it shorter... What do you guys think?
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disregard.
yea, its getting confusing everything is jumbled up can we get bak on track haha
No I agree with you. I say we dump the whole Vernon thing. That old man wouldn't even be alive lol/