Ellie would probably be pissed at first, considering that they could be a threat to Glinda and the baby. But if they proved themselves to be good people, she would be appreciative and apologize for her actions before.
I was actually just thinking the same thing. Difference is that people continue to discuss yours, yet there have been next to no comments on mine since the formatting went down :c
Well we still don't have formatting yet.... How long is this going to take?
Anyway I'm giving it two more days and then I am continuing… more with or without bolding because I can't wait...
It feels like its been a month and we still don't have it back. They should have said it will come back **soon**....
Sorry for everyone who's waiting!
Damn, man. I miss your story, heh. It's been a bit over a week. I think if it goes on like this, you'll have no choice but to continue it without the bolding.
Well we still don't have formatting yet.... How long is this going to take?
Anyway I'm giving it two more days and then I am continuing… more with or without bolding because I can't wait...
It feels like its been a month and we still don't have it back. They should have said it will come back **soon**....
Sorry for everyone who's waiting!
I just don't like doing better then people that I think deserve it more then me. I legitimately believe you are a better writer then me...
I might be better but I will deny the fact. Your always trying to prove me that your worse. BUT YOUR NOT! Your better. I don't care what you or anyone else says. My thread is like a child's book compared to yours. Also you know how to properly write like the talking thing where you have to skip a line.
And no matter what, your thread will always be better because it has inspired people. You made the thread a better place by introducing this new idea.
I was actually just thinking the same thing. Difference is that people continue to discuss yours, yet there have been next to no comments on mine since the formatting went down :c
Proof that I'm worse.
Buddy Holly invented Rock and Roll. Does that make him the best? No. The only real problem with your thread is that you try to focus on everything at once. In my thread, people don't get what's happening a lot of times. Indicating my shitty writing.
I just don't like doing better then people that I think deserve it more then me. I legitimately believe you are a better writer then me...
… more
I might be better but I will deny the fact. Your always trying to prove me that your worse. BUT YOUR NOT! Your better. I don't care what you or anyone else says. My thread is like a child's book compared to yours. Also you know how to properly write like the talking thing where you have to skip a line.
And no matter what, your thread will always be better because it has inspired people. You made the thread a better place by introducing this new idea.
Your writing is fine. At times it can be a bit confusing but overall its still really good. My punctuation, and writing style is crap though. Hell I'm scared I'll mess up and I'm still thinking about what I should write next. Also I don't have a plan for anything, I just write in the moment, so whatever I post was the first thing that came to my mind. I also feel waiting adds more suspense so people want the next part more in your thread.
I might be better then you but I don't care. I really enjoy your thread and I hope you don't compare yourself to others, and feel bad about yourself. Your a great writer, and an awesome person. Let no one tell you otherwise.
Buddy Holly invented Rock and Roll. Does that make him the best? No. The only real problem with your thread is that you try to focus on everything at once. In my thread, people don't get what's happening a lot of times. Indicating my shitty writing.
“I’ll go. You’re my guest.” Gary said as he walked to the door.
When he got outside he saw the broken brick by the wall. Two men came out pointing guns at him. “We don’t mean you any harm… We just need some supplies. Could you give us some?” One of them said. “Well… There’s plenty but if were gonna make it, I need it.” He said. The two looked at each other and then began whispering.
“We have decided you can join us with your supplies. We have a secure place, and we could definitely use some good people.” The other guy said. Gary sighed, should he just trust these guys? He didn’t want to risk his life because he trusted some strangers. He then saw Greg sneaking up behind them with his gun. He looked at Gary as if waiting for a signal.
Gengar steps out into the open and the man points his gun at him. “Don’t shoot! I live here… Who are you? What are you doing here?” Gengar asked. The man put his gun down seeing this man was no threat. “I’m Matteo… I was just looking for some food—“ He stops as Gengar talks again “You can’t find anything here. I scavenged every bit of food here. You…” Gengar stopped and thought.
**“You can stay with me.”**
**“You should get back to where you came from. It isn’t safe here.”**
**“You are part of that group, with the guy in riot gear?”**
**Pull the man away and fight him, but don’t kill him.**
Rafael ran to the scene and pulled the man away. He yelled in anger and began attempting to punch Rafael down. Rafael with great agility dodged his punches, and kicks, and managed to beat the man down. The woman sighed, “Thanks…” Rafael nodded to her, but before he could say anything a man came from the road walking towards him. “He’s mine.” The man said as he got to Jake. Before Rafael could stop him, the man started kicking the guy’s ribs and pointed a gun at his head. “Whoa, whoa!! Hey!” Rafael said slapping the gun away from the man. The woman spit on the drunken guy. “Let him. He’s an asshole.” She said. “Thank you… Someone gets it.” The man says as he picks up the gun.
**“We need to work together.” James said** to Kharkand.
Kharkand nodded in agreement and they both took cover behind the counter. A man walked in with a baseball bat and looked around the room. “Come out, come out wherever you are.” He said as he laughed and started searching the room. James knew he had to do something or they would both be killed.
**Suggest running out the back door, to his car.**
**Gary Oak**
“I’ll go. You’re my guest.” Gary said as he walked to the door.
When he got outside he saw the broken brick by the w… moreall. Two men came out pointing guns at him. “We don’t mean you any harm… We just need some supplies. Could you give us some?” One of them said. “Well… There’s plenty but if were gonna make it, I need it.” He said. The two looked at each other and then began whispering.
“We have decided you can join us with your supplies. We have a secure place, and we could definitely use some good people.” The other guy said. Gary sighed, should he just trust these guys? He didn’t want to risk his life because he trusted some strangers. He then saw Greg sneaking up behind them with his gun. He looked at Gary as if waiting for a signal.
**“We’ll join you.”**
**Signal Greg to attack.**
**Say nothing**
**Signal Greg to stop**
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**Gary Oak**
“I’ll go. You’re my guest.” Gary said as he walked to the door.
When he got outside he saw the broken brick by the w… moreall. Two men came out pointing guns at him. “We don’t mean you any harm… We just need some supplies. Could you give us some?” One of them said. “Well… There’s plenty but if were gonna make it, I need it.” He said. The two looked at each other and then began whispering.
“We have decided you can join us with your supplies. We have a secure place, and we could definitely use some good people.” The other guy said. Gary sighed, should he just trust these guys? He didn’t want to risk his life because he trusted some strangers. He then saw Greg sneaking up behind them with his gun. He looked at Gary as if waiting for a signal.
**“We’ll join you.”**
**Signal Greg to attack.**
**Say nothing**
**Signal Greg to stop**
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Every book I own.
Example: Lord Of The Rings, Game Of Thrones, Hunger Games
They do this. "Insert talking here," said some guy. "Oh ye… moreah blah blah blah," other man responded.
They don't do it like this,
"Hello," said Bob
"Hey whats up bro?" Said Bobby
"Nothin much dude just chillin" Replied Bob
Also look at this thread. Most people do talking like that.
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/60116/what-comes-aftera-walking-dead-fan-fic
>>Zyphon Hartwell<<
The news spread fast. Some outbreak of people going crazy and eating people. It was crazy! Right now Zyph… moreon and people on his apartment floor were gathered in a room together. A radio was on giving everyone news. The only people with him was WeMissYouCarley and David. WeMissYouCarley was sitting beside Zyphon carefully listening to every detail of the news. David isolated himself in the corner like he didn't want to be there. "We better get out of the city Zyphon. Before the infected get onto the streets." WeMissYouCarley said.
Zyphon hadn't said much to the guy but he agreed. He began thinking about ways out. He knew the front door was not a good idea. He started thinking about the building. There was actually a platform on the 12th floor that he saw yesterday. They could take that down and then make a run to his car in the parking lot. "I have an idea. Follow me." He said. They all grabbed a knife and w… [view original content]
**Gary Oak**
“I’ll go. You’re my guest.” Gary said as he walked to the door.
When he got outside he saw the broken brick by the w… moreall. Two men came out pointing guns at him. “We don’t mean you any harm… We just need some supplies. Could you give us some?” One of them said. “Well… There’s plenty but if were gonna make it, I need it.” He said. The two looked at each other and then began whispering.
“We have decided you can join us with your supplies. We have a secure place, and we could definitely use some good people.” The other guy said. Gary sighed, should he just trust these guys? He didn’t want to risk his life because he trusted some strangers. He then saw Greg sneaking up behind them with his gun. He looked at Gary as if waiting for a signal.
**“We’ll join you.”**
**Signal Greg to attack.**
**Say nothing**
**Signal Greg to stop**
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**Say nothing**
*“You should get back to where you came from. It isn’t safe here.”**
**Stop him. This man doesn’t deserve to die.**
**Suggest killing the man.**
**Gary Oak**
“I’ll go. You’re my guest.” Gary said as he walked to the door.
When he got outside he saw the broken brick by the w… moreall. Two men came out pointing guns at him. “We don’t mean you any harm… We just need some supplies. Could you give us some?” One of them said. “Well… There’s plenty but if were gonna make it, I need it.” He said. The two looked at each other and then began whispering.
“We have decided you can join us with your supplies. We have a secure place, and we could definitely use some good people.” The other guy said. Gary sighed, should he just trust these guys? He didn’t want to risk his life because he trusted some strangers. He then saw Greg sneaking up behind them with his gun. He looked at Gary as if waiting for a signal.
**“We’ll join you.”**
**Signal Greg to attack.**
**Say nothing**
**Signal Greg to stop**
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**Gary Oak**
“I’ll go. You’re my guest.” Gary said as he walked to the door.
When he got outside he saw the broken brick by the w… moreall. Two men came out pointing guns at him. “We don’t mean you any harm… We just need some supplies. Could you give us some?” One of them said. “Well… There’s plenty but if were gonna make it, I need it.” He said. The two looked at each other and then began whispering.
“We have decided you can join us with your supplies. We have a secure place, and we could definitely use some good people.” The other guy said. Gary sighed, should he just trust these guys? He didn’t want to risk his life because he trusted some strangers. He then saw Greg sneaking up behind them with his gun. He looked at Gary as if waiting for a signal.
**“We’ll join you.”**
**Signal Greg to attack.**
**Say nothing**
**Signal Greg to stop**
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I was messing with the guys in the group chat for the Steam group and I changed my username to "..." and just kept saying "...", occasionally posting links to scary pictures.
My best guess is that someone stole the idea. I assume from the steam chat, but yesterday I did the same thing to some of my friends on another website, and I know for a fact that all of them read the "What Comes After" thread(btw, vote in the poll I set up). That's where he/she first showed up(I think), so they could be from that site as well.
Regardless, just ignore them, and unless you don't want to sleep at night, don't click any links that they post.
Ignore him. Or her.
I was messing with the guys in the group chat for the Steam group and I changed my username to "..." and just kept … moresaying "...", occasionally posting links to scary pictures.
My best guess is that someone stole the idea. I assume from the steam chat, but yesterday I did the same thing to some of my friends on another website, and I know for a fact that all of them read the "What Comes After" thread(btw, vote in the poll I set up). That's where he/she first showed up(I think), so they could be from that site as well.
Regardless, just ignore them, and unless you don't want to sleep at night, don't click any links that they post.
All she remembered that day was the pain. Her head was sore, and her vision was blurry. She put her hand to her head and felt nothing, only skin where her horns were. She was in a room, a locked room, with a bed, toilet, and a door. Food was given to her twice a day, it tasted awful but she needed to stay healthy. She had tried using her powers but to no avail. Her eyes were stuck, the right one red, and the left one blue. But they no longer sparked.
Now it almost felt like she was home. Trapped in a cell, waiting for freedom. But this time she had no powers she was now a human. Her horns were probably the source of her power so when they were excavated she had become full human, except the eyes. One day a man opened the door and led her to a small dim lit room. It seemed to be a chapel of some sort. The room was dark, the only light source being some candles. She was instructed to sit in one pew and that ‘everyone else’ would come shortly.
About five guards with guns were on watch and Azlyn was sure that any wrong moves, or attempts to escape could result in death.
She sat and noticed she was beside a little boy who looked at her and laughed. He grabbed her hand and rocked back and forth. “I have never played this game before!” He said as he smiled. Azlyn looked at him weirdly. “Uh… Yeah. This is a new game.” She tried to respond. Ruby hugged her “Will you be on my team?” He asked. Azlyn nodded not wanting to make him sad. He grinned and happily began humming to himself.
Another man who looked to be a cop sat beside her, one of his legs was made of metal. He sighed and put his face in his hands. Then another cop, sat beside the metallic legged guy, and pushed him up to see his face. “Puncake… Hey Puncake. It’s me John. Remember me? What… What happened to your leg?” John said. Puncake smiled, then frowned as he looked at his leg. “Got bit. Cut the fucker off and then these whackos gave me this thing.” Puncake said. John laughed and put his hand on Puncake’s shoulder. “I always knew you were one tough son of a bitch.” John said. “Mouths shut!” One of the guards yelled pointing his gun at them. They stopped and the room went quiet.
Then came a man in crutches sat down beside John. “That’s Sebastien! He’s on my team!” Ruby whispered smiling as he waved at Sebastien. Sebastien waved, and sat down quickly mumbling to himself.
Jordan sat beside Sebastien, but Azlyn said nothing, in fear of being shot. They exchanged glances, Jordan mouthed ‘It’ll be okay’ as he sat down. The last two walked in. The one that sat beside Jordan looked angry like he wanted to tear someone’s throat out, and kill somebody (A.K.A Gorked, A.K.A Harpadarpa), but he didn’t dare go against the guard’s guns.
The last guy sat at the end, and grunted in pain as he sat down. He had bruises and cuts all over his body(Tyranitar). As soon as he sat down, a man with a beard who seemed to be in his early fifties appeared at the front. “Welcome. I am Calvin, and---“ Calvin stops as a man bursts in the room. “Sir we have a problem!” Calvin looks angry and takes out his gun. “I’ve shot plenty of men in the war. And I’ve killed many men now. I don’t mind adding on to that list. Now this better be good.” He said.
The man looked scared, “We… Have a situation.” Calvin is not pleased. He takes the man out of the room. After a minute of loud voices, a gunshot is heard… Then another. “Wait… Two bullets?” One of the guards said. Three of the guards go to investigate, and screaming is heard. One of the remaining guards points his gun at the door; the other points it at the people in the pew.
The angry looking man tossed a hymnbook at the front. The guard watching them looked over there and the man dashed towards him. The man turned and shot but missed as the man tackled him down and beat him up. Meanwhile the door bursts open and zombies flood in eating the guard watching the door. Everyone gets up and begins trying to find a way to escape.
Puncake and John grabbed the guard’s guns and began shooting at the walkers. Tyranitar, and Harpadarpa were looking for exits other then the main door. They found a window and broke it. Everyone ran and got out of the window. Outside were hundreds of zombies, and fires everywhere. A siren is ringing, and all the people there were running.
Gunshots, smoke, screams in every direction. “We need to work together!” John shouts. Harpadarpa had already run off. Tyranitar, Puncake, John, Jordan, and Azlyn were fighting the zombies with weapons they had found off the bad people’s bodies. “You need to get out of here! Bring them with you!” Jordan yells to Azlyn, as he points to Sebastien, Tyranitar and Ruby, the least able of the group. “But…” Azlyn begins. “No buts! GET OUT OF HERE!” Jordan yells.
Azlyn complies, and her, Tyranitar, Ruby, and Sebastien escape through a broken fence. They continue to hear gunshots, but don’t stop running…
Holy just one part and it's long.... I feel like I bombed this part... Sorry if I screwed stuff up. I don't know what I'm doing :/
Azlyn
All she remembered that day was the pain. Her head was sore, and her vision was blurry. She put her hand to her head and felt not… morehing, only skin where her horns were. She was in a room, a locked room, with a bed, toilet, and a door. Food was given to her twice a day, it tasted awful but she needed to stay healthy. She had tried using her powers but to no avail. Her eyes were stuck, the right one red, and the left one blue. But they no longer sparked.
Now it almost felt like she was home. Trapped in a cell, waiting for freedom. But this time she had no powers she was now a human. Her horns were probably the source of her power so when they were excavated she had become full human, except the eyes. One day a man opened the door and led her to a small dim lit room. It seemed to be a chapel of some sort. The room was dark, the only light source being some candles. She was instructed to sit in one pew and that ‘everyone else’ would… [view original content]
I'm not sure about what your asking. I think I'm done for parts today.
I try to get new characters in as soon as possible but its hard to write parts for 40 people/characters. So sorry if it takes a while for you and other people to be introduced.
I'm not sure about what your asking. I think I'm done for parts today.
I try to get new characters in as soon as possible but its hard… more to write parts for 40 people/characters. So sorry if it takes a while for you and other people to be introduced.
**Gary Oak**
“I’ll go. You’re my guest.” Gary said as he walked to the door.
When he got outside he saw the broken brick by the w… moreall. Two men came out pointing guns at him. “We don’t mean you any harm… We just need some supplies. Could you give us some?” One of them said. “Well… There’s plenty but if were gonna make it, I need it.” He said. The two looked at each other and then began whispering.
“We have decided you can join us with your supplies. We have a secure place, and we could definitely use some good people.” The other guy said. Gary sighed, should he just trust these guys? He didn’t want to risk his life because he trusted some strangers. He then saw Greg sneaking up behind them with his gun. He looked at Gary as if waiting for a signal.
**“We’ll join you.”**
**Signal Greg to attack.**
**Say nothing**
**Signal Greg to stop**
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Comments
Anyway I'm giving it two more days and then I am continuing with or without bolding because I can't wait...
It feels like its been a month and we still don't have it back. They should have said it will come back **soon**....
Sorry for everyone who's waiting!
Proof that I'm worse.
I might be better but I will deny the fact. Your always trying to prove me that your worse. BUT YOUR NOT! Your better. I don't care what you or anyone else says. My thread is like a child's book compared to yours. Also you know how to properly write like the talking thing where you have to skip a line.
And no matter what, your thread will always be better because it has inspired people. You made the thread a better place by introducing this new idea.
I might be better then you but I don't care. I really enjoy your thread and I hope you don't compare yourself to others, and feel bad about yourself. Your a great writer, and an awesome person. Let no one tell you otherwise.
“I’ll go. You’re my guest.” Gary said as he walked to the door.
When he got outside he saw the broken brick by the wall. Two men came out pointing guns at him. “We don’t mean you any harm… We just need some supplies. Could you give us some?” One of them said. “Well… There’s plenty but if were gonna make it, I need it.” He said. The two looked at each other and then began whispering.
“We have decided you can join us with your supplies. We have a secure place, and we could definitely use some good people.” The other guy said. Gary sighed, should he just trust these guys? He didn’t want to risk his life because he trusted some strangers. He then saw Greg sneaking up behind them with his gun. He looked at Gary as if waiting for a signal.
**“We’ll join you.”**
**Signal Greg to attack.**
**Say nothing**
**Signal Greg to stop**
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**Gengar**
**I’ll go meet him**
Gengar steps out into the open and the man points his gun at him. “Don’t shoot! I live here… Who are you? What are you doing here?” Gengar asked. The man put his gun down seeing this man was no threat. “I’m Matteo… I was just looking for some food—“ He stops as Gengar talks again “You can’t find anything here. I scavenged every bit of food here. You…” Gengar stopped and thought.
**“You can stay with me.”**
**“You should get back to where you came from. It isn’t safe here.”**
**“You are part of that group, with the guy in riot gear?”**
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**Rafael**
**Pull the man away and fight him, but don’t kill him.**
Rafael ran to the scene and pulled the man away. He yelled in anger and began attempting to punch Rafael down. Rafael with great agility dodged his punches, and kicks, and managed to beat the man down. The woman sighed, “Thanks…” Rafael nodded to her, but before he could say anything a man came from the road walking towards him. “He’s mine.” The man said as he got to Jake. Before Rafael could stop him, the man started kicking the guy’s ribs and pointed a gun at his head. “Whoa, whoa!! Hey!” Rafael said slapping the gun away from the man. The woman spit on the drunken guy. “Let him. He’s an asshole.” She said. “Thank you… Someone gets it.” The man says as he picks up the gun.
**Stop him. This man doesn’t deserve to die.**
**Let him.**
**Say nothing.**
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**James**
**“We need to work together.” James said** to Kharkand.
Kharkand nodded in agreement and they both took cover behind the counter. A man walked in with a baseball bat and looked around the room. “Come out, come out wherever you are.” He said as he laughed and started searching the room. James knew he had to do something or they would both be killed.
**Suggest running out the back door, to his car.**
**Suggest killing the man.**
**Say nothing.**
Pretend the asterisks (this thing **) is bolding.
EDIT: Okay fixed I think.
Gengar - “You are part of that group, with the guy in riot gear?”
Rafael - Let him (He's mine :D)
James - Suggest running to his car
I hope your not disappointed with my writing
**Signal Greg to stop**
**“You are part of that group, with the guy in riot gear?”**
**Say nothing.**
**Suggest killing the man.**
*“You should get back to where you came from. It isn’t safe here.”**
**Stop him. This man doesn’t deserve to die.**
**Suggest killing the man.**
Gengar- **“You are part of that group, with the guy in riot gear?”**
Rafael- **Say nothing.**
James- **Suggest killing the man.**
I was messing with the guys in the group chat for the Steam group and I changed my username to "..." and just kept saying "...", occasionally posting links to scary pictures.
My best guess is that someone stole the idea. I assume from the steam chat, but yesterday I did the same thing to some of my friends on another website, and I know for a fact that all of them read the "What Comes After" thread(btw, vote in the poll I set up). That's where he/she first showed up(I think), so they could be from that site as well.
Regardless, just ignore them, and unless you don't want to sleep at night, don't click any links that they post.
*you should go back where you came from. It isn't safe here.*
*let him*
*suggest killing the man*
All she remembered that day was the pain. Her head was sore, and her vision was blurry. She put her hand to her head and felt nothing, only skin where her horns were. She was in a room, a locked room, with a bed, toilet, and a door. Food was given to her twice a day, it tasted awful but she needed to stay healthy. She had tried using her powers but to no avail. Her eyes were stuck, the right one red, and the left one blue. But they no longer sparked.
Now it almost felt like she was home. Trapped in a cell, waiting for freedom. But this time she had no powers she was now a human. Her horns were probably the source of her power so when they were excavated she had become full human, except the eyes. One day a man opened the door and led her to a small dim lit room. It seemed to be a chapel of some sort. The room was dark, the only light source being some candles. She was instructed to sit in one pew and that ‘everyone else’ would come shortly.
About five guards with guns were on watch and Azlyn was sure that any wrong moves, or attempts to escape could result in death.
She sat and noticed she was beside a little boy who looked at her and laughed. He grabbed her hand and rocked back and forth. “I have never played this game before!” He said as he smiled. Azlyn looked at him weirdly. “Uh… Yeah. This is a new game.” She tried to respond. Ruby hugged her “Will you be on my team?” He asked. Azlyn nodded not wanting to make him sad. He grinned and happily began humming to himself.
Another man who looked to be a cop sat beside her, one of his legs was made of metal. He sighed and put his face in his hands. Then another cop, sat beside the metallic legged guy, and pushed him up to see his face. “Puncake… Hey Puncake. It’s me John. Remember me? What… What happened to your leg?” John said. Puncake smiled, then frowned as he looked at his leg. “Got bit. Cut the fucker off and then these whackos gave me this thing.” Puncake said. John laughed and put his hand on Puncake’s shoulder. “I always knew you were one tough son of a bitch.” John said. “Mouths shut!” One of the guards yelled pointing his gun at them. They stopped and the room went quiet.
Then came a man in crutches sat down beside John. “That’s Sebastien! He’s on my team!” Ruby whispered smiling as he waved at Sebastien. Sebastien waved, and sat down quickly mumbling to himself.
Jordan sat beside Sebastien, but Azlyn said nothing, in fear of being shot. They exchanged glances, Jordan mouthed ‘It’ll be okay’ as he sat down. The last two walked in. The one that sat beside Jordan looked angry like he wanted to tear someone’s throat out, and kill somebody (A.K.A Gorked, A.K.A Harpadarpa), but he didn’t dare go against the guard’s guns.
The last guy sat at the end, and grunted in pain as he sat down. He had bruises and cuts all over his body(Tyranitar). As soon as he sat down, a man with a beard who seemed to be in his early fifties appeared at the front. “Welcome. I am Calvin, and---“ Calvin stops as a man bursts in the room. “Sir we have a problem!” Calvin looks angry and takes out his gun. “I’ve shot plenty of men in the war. And I’ve killed many men now. I don’t mind adding on to that list. Now this better be good.” He said.
The man looked scared, “We… Have a situation.” Calvin is not pleased. He takes the man out of the room. After a minute of loud voices, a gunshot is heard… Then another. “Wait… Two bullets?” One of the guards said. Three of the guards go to investigate, and screaming is heard. One of the remaining guards points his gun at the door; the other points it at the people in the pew.
The angry looking man tossed a hymnbook at the front. The guard watching them looked over there and the man dashed towards him. The man turned and shot but missed as the man tackled him down and beat him up. Meanwhile the door bursts open and zombies flood in eating the guard watching the door. Everyone gets up and begins trying to find a way to escape.
Puncake and John grabbed the guard’s guns and began shooting at the walkers. Tyranitar, and Harpadarpa were looking for exits other then the main door. They found a window and broke it. Everyone ran and got out of the window. Outside were hundreds of zombies, and fires everywhere. A siren is ringing, and all the people there were running.
Gunshots, smoke, screams in every direction. “We need to work together!” John shouts. Harpadarpa had already run off. Tyranitar, Puncake, John, Jordan, and Azlyn were fighting the zombies with weapons they had found off the bad people’s bodies. “You need to get out of here! Bring them with you!” Jordan yells to Azlyn, as he points to Sebastien, Tyranitar and Ruby, the least able of the group. “But…” Azlyn begins. “No buts! GET OUT OF HERE!” Jordan yells.
Azlyn complies, and her, Tyranitar, Ruby, and Sebastien escape through a broken fence. They continue to hear gunshots, but don’t stop running…
Holy just one part and it's long.... I feel like I bombed this part... Sorry if I screwed stuff up. I don't know what I'm doing :/
I try to get new characters in as soon as possible but its hard to write parts for 40 people/characters. So sorry if it takes a while for you and other people to be introduced.
Gengar- You a part of that group with the guy in a riot gear?
Rafael- Say nothing.
James- Suggest running out the back door, to his car.