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  • Ruby: Ask if you could go with Azlyn.

    **Ruby** **Sebastien takes Azlyn’s side** Ruby watched as his new team argued. His friend Sebastien spoke up. “Tyranitar… She’s ri

  • Voting closed. Ruby will agree with Sebastien.

    **Ruby** **Sebastien takes Azlyn’s side** Ruby watched as his new team argued. His friend Sebastien spoke up. “Tyranitar… She’s ri

  • edited May 2014

    >>Shu<<

    Befriend Lenny

    If he was going to be in this group him mine as well make some friends. Out of all of them he chose Lenny. Lenny was the person everyone liked, with him as an ally; maybe he could sway votes in the council. Sure Lenny voted for Jake to stay, but to have a guy on the other side, is always good. He walked over to Lenny and leaned on the car. Lenny looked up and smiled.

    “Hey Shu. What’s up?” Lenny said.

    “Oh nothing. Need any help?” Shu said offering a hand.

    “Nah I got it. So why did you come over here?” Lenny asked.

    “I wanted to get to know you better. You’re a pretty cool guy.” Shu said.

    Lenny smiled as put his hand on Shu’s shoulder. “Thanks man. But I’m not sure if we see eye to eye on things. I mean Jake should have stayed.” Lenny said.

    “Maybe you’re right… But still, if I’m going to stay here with you guys, I don’t want to be hated.” Shu lies.

    “It’s all right man. I’m there for you if you need anything. Tell you what. I’ll be you’re friend, but you need to convince Pavel to get off watch. He’s losing a lot of sleep, and he looks exhausted. If you could do me a favor and go help him out, that would be great.” Lenny says.

    “Cool… I’ll get on it. Thanks by the way.” Shu said walking away. Shu sighs. He’s too nice for his own good. It’s going to get him killed. Kordas must have given up on Pavel, but Shu knew he could be assertive when he needed to. “Pavel. Get down. Right now. We need to talk.” Shu says. Pavel climbs down, bags under his eyes.

    “What is it? If it’s about my watch, then don’t even start…” Pavel began.

    “NO. You are going to get some rest. I don’t care what you say.” Shu says.

    Pavel begins to get angry. “Lay off man. I’m the one who’s keeping this place safe. If you can’t appreciate that then you might not belong here.” Pavel said.

    “If you exhaust yourself, you’re going to get us all killed. Now go sleep. I’m being serious. We’re all worried about you. Especially Kordas and Lenny. Please just go.” Shu says.

    “Fine…” Pavel said angrily marching off to his quarters.

    God that guy… Well looks like I’m on watch. Shu climbs the tower and sits in a chair observing the surrounding area. It’s going to be a long night…


    >>???<<

    “Yeah, we need as much as we can get. If we go back he may be long gone.” The guy say’s to the other guy. The other guy nods and they chase after the car. It took a few hours, but the guy stopped and slept in the car. Once they began planning. “Just break the window, unlock the door, and I’ll pull him out. You hold him up, then we both get in the car and drive away.” The other guy says. They both are ready and commence the operation.

    The window shatters and the door opens fast. The man awakes and stabs the other guy in the leg. The other man yells. “Mr C!” He yells as he lunges his knife into the other man’s stomach. The other man reacts fast and smashes his face with his crowbar. Mr C gets up and the two grapple. Mr C fights his hardest, “F***!!! Jewfreeus HELP ME!” He says struggling against Xavier. Xavier pulls off his gas mask, and strikes Mr C in the face, and knees him in the crotch.

    Jewfreeus watches as Xavier pulls his shotgun out about to shoot Mr C. He tosses the meat hook as hard as he could. Xavier fired and Mr Cuddlesworth was dead.

    R.I.P Mr Cuddlesworth. Sorry WhatTheDuck. I never intended to get you killed, but Xavier was badass and it was either you or Jew. You were a really good character, and probably deserved longer time…

    The meat hook struck Xavier’s shoulder and he cried out. Xavier was about to pull it out when Jewfreeus grabbed the shotgun he dropped, and shot his legs. Jewfreeus got up, his face hurting really badly. He was about to get in the car. Xavier called out to him. “Coward. Come kill me. End it. F***ing bandit is all you are. Can’t survive without robbing.” Xavier says laughing, then coughing. Blood leaks from the side of his trench coat.

    Take the car. Leave Xavier to the walkers.

    Take the car. Kill Xavier.

    Leave the car. Leave Xavier to the walkers.

    Leave the car. Kill Xavier.

    **R.I.P Xavier King. Sorry TheNarwhalKing. You’re character was a bad ass. You tried to save Eli, but you couldn’t. It was an unfair fight. Two against one. Sadly you couldn’t beat them both. **

  • edited May 2014

    Damn...

    Take the car. Leave Xavier to the walkers.

    I'm not completely dead yet, this might give me a better chance...

    I am not completely dead yet right? RIGHT?

    >>Shu<< Befriend Lenny If he was going to be in this group him mine as well make some friends. Out of all of them he chose

  • Take the car. Leave Xavier to the walkers.

    Oh man, I miss the bolding.

    >>Shu<< Befriend Lenny If he was going to be in this group him mine as well make some friends. Out of all of them he chose

  • Damn, two people dead.

    Take the car. Leave Xavier to the walkers.

    >>Shu<< Befriend Lenny If he was going to be in this group him mine as well make some friends. Out of all of them he chose

  • Take the car. Leave Xavier to the walkers

    He doesn't fear death and wants to be killed no his punishment must be more severe let the Walkers sort him out

    >>Shu<< Befriend Lenny If he was going to be in this group him mine as well make some friends. Out of all of them he chose

  • Take the car. Leave Xavier to the walkers.

    >>Shu<< Befriend Lenny If he was going to be in this group him mine as well make some friends. Out of all of them he chose

  • Take the car. Leave Xavier to the walkers.

    >>Shu<< Befriend Lenny If he was going to be in this group him mine as well make some friends. Out of all of them he chose

  • Erm... Uhhhh...

    I already posted the R.I.P note, and the decision contain's you're death sentence... Sorry man.

    Damn... Take the car. Leave Xavier to the walkers. I'm not completely dead yet, this might give me a better chance... I am not completely dead yet right? RIGHT?

  • Take the car.Leave Xavier to the Walkers.

  • edited May 2014

    I knew it XD well, my character had a good run, I am just happy that I got to be in this story! Keep up the good work man.

    Meat Hook to the shoulder = INSTA-KILL

    P.S. I just had too, that was the first thing I thought when I read this part XD, BUT really, at the most Xavier should have been at least wounded mate, not dieing. You should probably re-write that part, like make him get shot in the stomach or something.

    XAVIER KING CONFIRMED FOR SEASON 2!!!

    ( insert shaking gif here)

    I had to do it.

    Erm... Uhhhh... I already posted the R.I.P note, and the decision contain's you're death sentence... Sorry man.

  • Ah sorry. I am but an amateur on that kind of stuff!

    I guess I'll add some more stuff :D.

    I knew it XD well, my character had a good run, I am just happy that I got to be in this story! Keep up the good work man. Meat Hook to t

  • Hey Raging, I know this really isn't the place for asking but I didn't want to revive the other thread if it turned out the answer was no! Are you still taking any more character submissions for this, or are you just sticking with what you have?

    Busy this weekend. Probably won't be able to get a part out. Sorry guys :(

  • edited May 2014

    Actually. I was just thinking about opening the door to new people. Lots of people are dieing, so I can add in more people. I'm going to break it up into chapters, and right now we're on chapter 3, so the new people will probably come around 4 or 5.

    I'll post an announcement on the old thread now.

    sardines posted: »

    Hey Raging, I know this really isn't the place for asking but I didn't want to revive the other thread if it turned out the answer was no! Are you still taking any more character submissions for this, or are you just sticking with what you have?

  • Oh, okay! Thanks for responding! Sorry to bother you, I look forward to submitting someone then! (Probably myself, lol.)

    Actually. I was just thinking about opening the door to new people. Lots of people are dieing, so I can add in more people. I'm going to bre

  • No problem! Welcome :)

    sardines posted: »

    Oh, okay! Thanks for responding! Sorry to bother you, I look forward to submitting someone then! (Probably myself, lol.)

  • Voting closed. Jewfreeus will take the car, and leave Xavier for the walkers.

    >>Shu<< Befriend Lenny If he was going to be in this group him mine as well make some friends. Out of all of them he chose

  • If anyone new here want's to incorporate a character into the story then feel free to create a character in my other thread. The link is at the top in my main post. You may appear later, but you're character will appear at some point!

  • Ruby

    Agree with Sebastien

    Ruby took Sebastien’s side. He was his friend after all. “No you should stay! It’s safer. Please. You have to!” Ruby said. Tyranitar looked at him, and couldn’t go against his opinion especially since he was a kid. “Fine… Good luck Azlyn. Where should we meet?” Tyranitar said in disbelief. Ruby was smirking. He didn’t think the adult’s would listen to him, but look’s like he did have a voice.

    “There’s this old hotel that was closed down before the apocalypse. It should still be there. Just follow the road, and keep heading east. There are signs you should be able to find it. Good luck, I’ll see you there.” Azlyn said. They were all pretty much strangers to each other so Azlyn was leaving without a goodbye. Ruby ran up to her and gave her a hug. “Don’t get tagged. You’re on my team.” He said smiling. She hugged him back, and left…


    Jewfreeus

    Take the car, and leave Xavier to the walkers.

    Jewfreeus got in the car and started it. Xavier laughed. “I knew you wouldn’t. Heh… Left Eli, and look at where I am now… F*** Karma…” Jewfreeus drove away, and all he could remember, was Xavier’s words, and that laugh, that dark laugh… He finally returned to the hotel. He hid the car in the parking garage, and put a tarp over it. The supplies inside could last them a couple months.

    Thing’s were beginning to look up, but was it worth it? Was stealing right? It was too late now. He wondered how he would break the news to Stephany. He climbed the ladder and got in. She was reading on her bed in her room. Jewfreeus stood beside the doorway, breathing in and out. Okay here I go…

    “Hey Jewfreeus! How was you’re day?” Stephany asked with that cute little smile of hers. Jewfreeus looked down, and then back at her in the eyes. He admired her, but he was scared about how she would react… “Good. But I have to tell you something…” Jewfreeus face got more serious. Stephany saw the look in his eye, and seemed worried. “What’s wrong? What happened?” She asked.

    Truth. Tell her that Mr Cuddlesworth died, and that he died because they have been stealing.

    Lie. Tell her Mr Cuddlesworth ditched him. Don’t tell her about the stealing.

  • Truth. Tell her that Mr Cuddlesworth died, and that he died because they have been stealing.

    I would of chose the other option but if she thinks his still alive she will go looking for him so say it and move on is best option

    Ruby Agree with Sebastien Ruby took Sebastien’s side. He was his friend after all. “No you should stay! It’s safer. Please. You have t

  • Truth. Tell her that Mr Cuddlesworth died, and that he died because they have been stealing.

    Ruby Agree with Sebastien Ruby took Sebastien’s side. He was his friend after all. “No you should stay! It’s safer. Please. You have t

  • Who's character would you like for me to write next? Reply to this comment to let me know. Yes you can vote for yourself!

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    There is character I like called Spark

    Who's character would you like for me to write next? Reply to this comment to let me know. Yes you can vote for yourself!

  • I knew it! But you got it, I was thinking Spark.

    Any other requests guys?

    Markd4547 posted: »

    There is character I like called Spark

  • Me!

    Who's character would you like for me to write next? Reply to this comment to let me know. Yes you can vote for yourself!

  • Okey dokey!

    Assassin's Puncake Part II will arrive soon :).

    Puncake32 posted: »

    Me!

  • Yay.

    Okey dokey! Assassin's Puncake Part II will arrive soon .

  • edited May 2014

    Puncake

    He felt like a monster after killing Harpadarpa. But he had lost everything. These men had taken them away from him, and they needed to die. It took him a few days, but he knew that Rafael was in the area. The last time he had saw him he was on the highway. If he was anywhere, he would be in the countryside near that area, and Puncake had thoroughly searched the area.

    He barely slept. The nightmares would just make him wake up again. The last time he slept was three days ago. But today was the day. He found Rafael and two other people traveling through the woods. Puncake takes out the sniper he retrieved from Calvin’s camp and finds a vantage point. He aims for Rafael’s head and holds it. Puncake whispers,” This is for Gerald…”


    Spark

    “Fu--! Out of ammo.” He straps the crossbow he stole onto his back. He heard a shout, and he was sure he shot something. Maybe he could finish whoever’s left. “Oh… Fu-- no… NO. Twistee you idiot… What were you thinking?!” Spark says bending over inspecting the bodies. “At least we got one of the fu--ers. He sees the arrow in Twistee. “Oh man… I’m so sorry. I couldn’t see!” Spark said his hand on it.

    Twistee coughs. His eyes are slammed shut, and he was bleeding out, slowly drifting away. Spark knew there was now saving him, even if he could escape, Twistee would bleed out, or the walkers would get them. Spark pours some water down his mouth. Twistee feeling a little rejuvenated opens his eyes to see Spark.

    “I thought you were the better shooter… Can you at least promise me one thing?” Twistee says laughing, then barely breathing.

    Spark nods “Yes what is it?”

    Twistee wheezed then opened his mouth “Kill them. For me.” And then his head drooped down probably dead. Spark pulled the arrow out and stabbed his head.

    Spark reloaded his crossbow, and pulled out his emergency grenade. “They better watch their asses. Because this time. I’ll fucking kill all of the them.”

  • Truth. Tell her that Mr Cuddlesworth died, and that he died because they have been stealing.

    Ruby Agree with Sebastien Ruby took Sebastien’s side. He was his friend after all. “No you should stay! It’s safer. Please. You have t

  • Whoops! three asterisks now gets you bold and italics, I'd suggest actually dropping some F bombs, or just say darn, or drat, or something.

    Puncake He felt like a monster after killing Harpadarpa. But he had lost everything. These men had taken them away from him, and they nee

  • I'm Badass.

    Puncake He felt like a monster after killing Harpadarpa. But he had lost everything. These men had taken them away from him, and they nee

  • Puncake32Puncake32 Banned
    edited May 2014

    Truth. Tell her that Mr Cuddlesworth died, and that he died because they have been stealing.

    Ruby Agree with Sebastien Ruby took Sebastien’s side. He was his friend after all. “No you should stay! It’s safer. Please. You have t

  • Haha. I noticed. I know, I don't like the F bomb, but he's an antagonist so he's supposed to swear.

    Sorry :/

    maxbear29 posted: »

    Whoops! three asterisks now gets you bold and italics, I'd suggest actually dropping some F bombs, or just say darn, or drat, or something.

  • edited May 2014

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    :') that was beautiful and deep superb perfection

    Puncake He felt like a monster after killing Harpadarpa. But he had lost everything. These men had taken them away from him, and they nee

  • I was hoping you would notice :).

    Markd4547 posted: »

    :') that was beautiful and deep superb perfection

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    I didn't just notice my inner fanboy reaction so epic thank you Rages ^

    I was hoping you would notice .

  • "You got it."

    :). I kept saw you posting it, and I needed you to have a bad ass line so there you go!

    Markd4547 posted: »

    I didn't just notice my inner fanboy reaction so epic thank you Rages ^

  • Noooooooooo!

    Puncake He felt like a monster after killing Harpadarpa. But he had lost everything. These men had taken them away from him, and they nee

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