The Walking Dead: The Rise Of The Dead.

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  • Yeah, I`m gonna do that.

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    You can always submit another character.

  • Devyn was sardines, It's just the fact that I'm in Devyn's group in another fanfic.

    sardines posted: »

    DEVYN WAS ME NOOOO

  • Voting is closed!

    The option picked was (go with Amber)

    Just a quick notice, if you character has been killed off, you can always post another one. If you would like your character to be the same as the one that was killed off then I have added a new question in the submit form 'Do you have any ideas for your character or the story' then please inform me and I will just change the name slightly.

    Thank you!

  • Well, I decided to do different character. Hope you`ve already seen my submit.

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    Voting is closed! The option picked was (go with Amber) Just a quick notice, if you character has been killed off, you can always post

  • Devyn gets eat. John gets axed. Amber: "I'm glad we all made it out!"

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    The Walking Dead: Interactive Fanficton (Part Two) You chose (Attack John) I ran into John causing him to drop his hand gun. John was m

  • edited June 2014

    The Walking Dead: Interactive Fanficton! (Part Three) You chose (Go with Ambers side and attempt to get past the walkers)

    "Charlie c'mon!" shouted Amber.

    I quickly took my gun from my pocket and made a run towards Amber.
    I was so close to getting to her when a walker suddenly grabbed me.

    "Shit, help!" I screamed.

    Amber came running towards me. Shooting a walker that was about to grab her.
    Amber had just about got to me when a knife came whizzing past her. The blade sunk into the walkers head and it fell to the floor with a loud thud.
    I turned my head and there was Lia just behind Amber.

    "Thanks Lia" I said.

    "Don't worry about it, lets fucking go." she said.

    I turned back to see the others but they had gone. We ran to a nearby truck.

    "Will the rest of your group be okay?" I asked Mark.

    "Should be, not the first time this has happened." replied Mark.

    The group got into the truck. Lia and Mark in the front. The unnamed man, Amber and Charlie in the back.

    "The name is James" said the man.

    "Nice to meet you, James." said Amber offering her hand.

    They shook hands.

    "So what happened to you before all of the world went to shit?" He asked.

    "Well I was visting my parents in Atlanta, when they got bit. My sister Mia went missing in the first few days." said Amber slightly sad.

    "But now I have Charlie, she is like my sister." she added.

    "Sorry to hear about that, what about you?" He said, nodding at me.

    "Well, I was in Savannah with my sister Arya. We decided to go on an American road trip. It's always been her dream. She loves camping, but on that night it was rainy. We decided to stay in a hotel called The Marsh House. Then they started taking people away to work in a place called Crawford. They looked like bandits. I managed to hide but Arya couldn't, she went with them. She had to. Otherwise they would kill her." I said.

    "What really?" said James.

    "Yeah, why?" I said suspiciously.

    "Well there is a girl called Arya at our camp." He replied.

    "Does she have blonde hair and bright blue eyes?" I asked.

    "Yeah she does" He replied smiling.

    I began to think to myself that my sister might actually be alive.
    A smile crept upon my face.

    "So where is this camp?" asked Amber.

    "Just outside Macon." he said.

    "I know a man who lived in Macon. His parents owned a drugstore."

    "Well there's a massive military helicopter crashed in the roof." he said.

    Suddenly the truck came to a halt.
    Mark pulled open the door on the truck.

    "There's a walker trapped underneath the truck. James will you help me get it out? asked Mark.

    "Yeah, okay." he said.

    Charlie and Amber jumped out of the truck.

    "What's that smell?" asked Lia.

    Charlie looked behind her and saw a rotting corpse of a woman who looked to be about in her mid 20s.
    She was wearing a pinkish purple warmer.

    "That body is the smell. I said.

    "Smells like shit." added Lia.

    Suddenly they heard sound of a vehicle.

    "Everybody duck down." said Mark.

    An RV went past them at a fast speed. The woman inside looked pissed.

    "Shit, that was close." said James.

    "FUCK!" shouted Mark.

    "What is it?" asked Amber.

    "Fucking walker is trapped underneath, we ain't going anywhere." said Mark annoyed.

    "Camp ain't to far from here, just thought these woods." said James pointing at the woods opposite the corpse.

    "Okay, then what are we waiting for?" said Lia.

    The group walked through the woods with caution.
    When they got out of the woods they were welcomed with the sight of a massive camp surrounded with barbed wire.

    "Wow, this didn't take you long." I said.

    "We have lots of people from all over." he explained.

    The group reached the gates and they opened suddenly.

    "Who the fuck are these" said a man who looked quite young.

    "Ian, these are joining us." said James.

    "Well your going to have to---" said Ian.

    "Ian, ill explain later. But for now these are joining us." said James in a firm tone.

    The group walked through the camp. Amber, Charlie and Lia were getting very stern looks.

    "More fucking mouths to feed." said a woman whom they passed.

    "Bet there lazy fucking shits." said another man.

    The group had reached a small cabin at the end of the camp.
    It was labeled authorized personal only

    Mark knocked on the door and it opened almost instantly.
    They walked through. They were told to wait outside a door.
    Mark and James entered.
    After about 10 minutes, James came out asking them to go in.

    "She wants to speak to you." said James.

    Charlie walked in first. Followed by Amber and Lia.
    The woman was standing at the window. She turned around.

    "Hello Charlie." said Arya.

    "Oh my....god, Arya..." said Charlie gobsmacked.

    The two of them embraced in a hug.

    "I have decided that yourself and your friends are welcome to stay." she said.

    "You must be hungry, come on lets go and eat." said Arya.

    The two talked about what happened when they split up on the way to the canteen.
    Charlie filled her plate and went to sit down.

    "Charlie, over here!" said Arya.

    "Charlie, I saved you a seat!" said Amber.

    Choices:

    (Sit with Arya)
    (Sit with Amber)

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    edited June 2014

    [Sit with Arya]

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    The Walking Dead: Interactive Fanficton! (Part Three) You chose (Go with Ambers side and attempt to get past the walkers) "Charlie c'mon!

  • (sit with arya)

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    The Walking Dead: Interactive Fanficton! (Part Three) You chose (Go with Ambers side and attempt to get past the walkers) "Charlie c'mon!

  • Hey, just submitted a new character, can't wait to see him included in your story (or to be killed, lol)

    Your fanfiction is great, but there's one little thing I noticed and that's changing points of view from first person to third.
    For example here: "John gave Charlie a glare that made Charlie regret what she had said." There should be: "John gave me a glare that made me regret what I had said." or something like that. It's just a tiny little nitpick, otherwise awesome story. :-)

  • edited June 2014

    Oh no, not the table choice! It was the most difficult choice! D:

    Well, I would [Sit with Arya].

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    The Walking Dead: Interactive Fanficton! (Part Three) You chose (Go with Ambers side and attempt to get past the walkers) "Charlie c'mon!

  • Where did Carlos run off to? :(

  • Don't worry. I have something special planned for Carlos.

    TinyCarlos posted: »

    Where did Carlos run off to?

  • [Sit with Arya]
    I'm sure Amber will understand. :)

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    The Walking Dead: Interactive Fanficton! (Part Three) You chose (Go with Ambers side and attempt to get past the walkers) "Charlie c'mon!

  • Thank you. I didn't realise I did that, thank you for pointing it out.
    You character will be included soon but I didn't want to include him at Arya's camp
    I hope you don't mind.

    Pipas posted: »

    Hey, just submitted a new character, can't wait to see him included in your story (or to be killed, lol) Your fanfiction is great, but th

  • No problem, I understand. :)

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    Thank you. I didn't realise I did that, thank you for pointing it out. You character will be included soon but I didn't want to include him at Arya's camp I hope you don't mind.

  • Oh yaaaaay! :D

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    Don't worry. I have something special planned for Carlos.

  • Update!

    All characters not currently introduced will be introduced soon.
    I know that I am the writer but any ideas for new parts would be much appreciated.
    Also who would you like to see from TWDG appear in this fanficton?
    Voting time closes tomorrow at 3pm (British Time)

    Thank you for your support!

    Pipas posted: »

    No problem, I understand.

  • edited June 2014

    (Sit with Arya)

    Amber will understand.

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    The Walking Dead: Interactive Fanficton! (Part Three) You chose (Go with Ambers side and attempt to get past the walkers) "Charlie c'mon!

  • Maybe you could include some 400 days characters?

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    Update! All characters not currently introduced will be introduced soon. I know that I am the writer but any ideas for new parts would

  • I will try my best. Just a heads up, this is in a different universe than the original game. But Carley is dead in both universes and Lilly drove off in the RV etc.

    CatySky posted: »

    Maybe you could include some 400 days characters?

  • You should make a Lily cameo.

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    Update! All characters not currently introduced will be introduced soon. I know that I am the writer but any ideas for new parts would

  • Just throwing some ideas at you :)

    You could also include some unknown fate characters (maybe just cameos).

    Anyway, your fanfic is really cool, I like it!

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    I will try my best. Just a heads up, this is in a different universe than the original game. But Carley is dead in both universes and Lilly drove off in the RV etc.

  • Personally I'd prefer if we could somehow migrate from Georgia to some other state, away from all the canonical fallout.

    Hmm, I wonder if Lilly tried to follow the road to the RV, found it at the train wreck, and just took it then?

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    I will try my best. Just a heads up, this is in a different universe than the original game. But Carley is dead in both universes and Lilly drove off in the RV etc.

  • What a...Stark revelation!

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    The Walking Dead: Interactive Fanficton! (Part Three) You chose (Go with Ambers side and attempt to get past the walkers) "Charlie c'mon!

  • This is really good. Go with Zack!

    So, Daisy isn't really all that cheerful, just so you know. (She's an OC that I use and have actually developed a personality for.) She's kind of distrustful. I feel stupid for not mentioning that before. - I'm sorry. :(

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    The Walking Dead: Interactive Fanficton (Part Two) You chose (Attack John) I ran into John causing him to drop his hand gun. John was m

  • And I am dead in the first 5 minutes....JESUS ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME?

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    The Walking Dead: Interactive Fanficton (Part Two) You chose (Attack John) I ran into John causing him to drop his hand gun. John was m

  • (Sit with Arya)

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    The Walking Dead: Interactive Fanficton! (Part Three) You chose (Go with Ambers side and attempt to get past the walkers) "Charlie c'mon!

  • Okay, I will try and include Lilly soon.

    TWD_25 posted: »

    You should make a Lily cameo.

  • Okay, writing up Part Four later!

  • edited June 2014

    The Walking Dead: Interactive Fanficton! (Part Four) You chose (Sit with Arya)

    I took my plate and sat down next to Arya. I turned around to look at Amber and she looked at me. She looked devastated.

    "So, this Amber. You trust her?" asked Arya.

    "Yeah, I've been with her since the start. She's my friend." I replied.

    "Well Sis, any friend of yours is a friend of mine." she said.

    A man next to me stood up and was about to walk off. I realised it was the man from the gates who was talking to James about us.

    "Come on Ian. Stay for some dessert." said Arya.

    Ian stared at Arya and walked off.

    "What's his problem?" I asked.

    "He's pissed off." she replied.

    "Why?" I asked confused.

    "We don't have dessert!" she replied.

    We both laughed and Mark smiled as well.

    "Mark, where is Zack, Daisy and Clarice?" asked Arya.

    "We got split up, fucking walkers again." replied Mark.

    "One of them got stuck under the fucking truck. We had to shortcut through the forest." he added.

    "I'll radio them later." she said.

    "What! You have walkie talkies?" said Lia as her and Amber walked to Arya's table.

    "Yeah, we have a few left. If your prepared to do outside jobs you will be given one." said Arya.

    "I didn't catch your name. What was it?" added Arya.

    "Lia." she replied.

    I stood up and went to empty my plate. Amber came over.

    "It's okay. I understand." she said.

    "Understand what?" I asked.

    "That you wanted to sit with Arya. She is your sister after all." said Amber.

    "Okay, thank you." I said.

    Arya soon came over. Followed by James and another man.

    "I don't believe we've met. The name's Chris." said the man.

    "Charlie." I replied.

    Chris looked to be about my age. He had brown hair and was quite built.

    "James and Chris will show you around the camp." said Arya.

    "Any questions just ask us." added James.

    James and Chris led me, Amber and Lia outside the canteen.
    We went to the building next to it.

    "This is the nurse's station. Lauren is our nurse." said James.

    "Yep, can bandage and clean a cut up in under one minute." added Chris.

    I saw James smile. We moved to a massive building that looked like a block of apartments.

    "This is where people live." said James.

    "It's a good thing you have beds." said Amber.

    We then went past many buildings. Until we were back outside Arya's office.

    "Arya wanted to speak to you guys." said Chris.

    We walked through to Arya's office.
    Two men who looked quite young were standing outside the door.
    They moved so that we could enter her office.

    "Hi." said Arya.

    "Hello." said Lia.

    "Okay so hopefully they both showed you around." said Arya.

    "They did." said Amber.

    "Good, at least they did something right." she said in a depressed tone.

    "What's up?" I asked.

    "Someone has been stealing from our camp." she said.

    "What?" said Amber.

    "Really?" said Lia surprised.

    "It's all the good stuff like canned food, medicine. Even fucking guns." she said.

    "Do you have any idea who's taking it?" I asked.

    "Yes, a few bunch of people." she said.

    She walked over to the window and looked outside of it.

    "I need you guys to go out for supplies with them, question them." she said.

    "Shit, I suppose we could." said Lia.

    "Are they dangerous?" I asked.

    "Yeah, whoever is stealing our stuff is putting all of us at risk." she replied.

    "Wait, what if it was none of them. It could be anyone." said Amber.

    "These people handle these type of things." said Arya.

    "Lauren is always at the medical station. Grant handles the guns and Leila cooks for us all." she added.

    "So how does that prove they stole it?" I asked.

    "They all deny things going missing. I keep my own count and someone is fucking with it." she said.

    "How long is it until we run out. THERE FUCKING KILLING US!" she shouted.

    Arya slammed her hand on the table. Lia jumped startled.

    "Okay, we will. Won't we guys?" I said.

    I nudged Amber.

    "Oh... Yeah we will." she said.

    "Sure." said Lia.

    "Your young but Charlie trusts you" said Arya.

    "Thank you, you should all go and get some sleep." said Arya.

    She handed us some keys and we walked out.

    "Fucking too young!" said Lia annoyed.

    "Lia, Arya's right" said Amber.

    "Fuck you! I'm not to young to save Charlie's fucking life am I?" said Lia still annoyed.

    We all didn't talk until we reached our room. I put the keys in the lock and turned them.
    The door creaked open and we all looked inside.
    There was a double bed, a couch and a camp bed.

    "Double bed for me!" said Lia.

    Amber didn't argue nor did I.

    "I'll have the camper bed." said Amber.

    I walked over to the couch. There was a blanket neatly folded on the end accompanied by a pillow.
    I set up my bed and climbed in. I drifted off instantly.

    Next Morning

    "Charlie, wake up!" said Amber poking me.

    "We've got to go and meet Arya at the gun station." said Lia.

    We walked over to the gun station. Arya was there with what looked to be Grant, Lauren and Leila.

    "Okay, Here's your walkie talkies." she said handing us a walkie talkie each.

    "Your choice of weapon's." she added.

    Amber picked up a red climbing pick. Lia picked up a rifle. I decided to take a bow and arrow. Me and Amber took some ammo for our pistols aswell.

    "Hi, im Lauren." said one of the women. She was holding a dangerously sharp knife.

    "I'm Grant." said the man who was holding a vegetable knife.

    "Leila." added a woman holding a long sword.

    We introduced ourselves and set off into the woods.
    I found myself in conversation with Lauren. Lia was talking to Leila and Amber was talking to Grant.

    "So, your Arya's sister right?" she asked.

    "Yeah, why?" I asked suspicious.

    "Well many people don't agree on how she runs things." She said.

    "Hopefully your different." she added.

    I tried to avoid Lauren and I went over to talk to Amber.
    She was laughing and so was Grant.

    "I was just telling Grant about when you fell in the river when I first met you." she said.

    "God, it was freezing." I said smiling.

    The group of us reached a small town.

    "FUCK, WATCH OUT!" shouted Leila.

    We all jumped back avoiding an oncoming train.
    It was making alot of noise. The train passed them.

    "Shit!" said Lia.

    "Let's just get this over and done with." said Grant.

    We decided to go in partners and scavenge different parts of the town.
    I went with Amber. Lia went with Leila and Lauren and Grant went together.

    "Any problems shout okay?" said Lauren.

    "Okay." I replied.

    Me and Amber walked into a shop at the bottom of the street.

    "You trust Grant?" I asked.

    "He seems nice." she said.

    "Lauren seems weird. She said that people don't agree with the way Arya is running things." I said picking up a can of soup.

    "Well, I don't know about Leila. We will have to ask Lia." she added.

    We heard a shout. We ran out of the shop door and back up the street.

    "Fucking shoot them!" I heard Lauren say.

    "What the fuck is going on?" asked Amber.

    "Shit, Charlie. They're making me vote if I want to kill these people or not!" said Lia slightly scared.

    Lia pointed at two people. One was a young woman, the other was a man.

    "What do you vote Grant?" said Leila.

    "Kill them. We need supplies." replied Grant.

    "Same here!" said Amber.

    Lia looked at her mortified.

    "I vote not to kill them." said Leila.

    "I abstain." said Lia still looking at Amber.

    "I agree with Leila." said Lauren.

    "Well Charlie your the swing vote. What do you choose?" said Grant.

    "Help us!" said the woman desperately.

    "End this for us please." said the man.

    choices:

    (kill them)

    (save them)

  • Ummm... Arya is only 17, but she runs things in the camp? Kinda weird, but I like it.

    I would [save them].

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    The Walking Dead: Interactive Fanficton! (Part Four) You chose (Sit with Arya) I took my plate and sat down next to Arya. I turned around

  • It will be explained.

    Ummm... Arya is only 17, but she runs things in the camp? Kinda weird, but I like it. I would [save them].

  • Ive realised that ive made a massive mistake. I will edit it.

  • [Save them]

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    The Walking Dead: Interactive Fanficton! (Part Four) You chose (Sit with Arya) I took my plate and sat down next to Arya. I turned around

  • Save them

  • (Save them)

    Yeah, my character is introduced!

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    The Walking Dead: Interactive Fanficton! (Part Four) You chose (Sit with Arya) I took my plate and sat down next to Arya. I turned around

  • |]Save them[|

  • (kill them)

    "What do you say, Charlie? We just kill these folks and take all their stuff?"

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    The Walking Dead: Interactive Fanficton! (Part Four) You chose (Sit with Arya) I took my plate and sat down next to Arya. I turned around

  • Okay then.

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    It will be explained.

  • [Save them]

    ConaMurphy posted: »

    The Walking Dead: Interactive Fanficton! (Part Four) You chose (Sit with Arya) I took my plate and sat down next to Arya. I turned around

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