Episode 5 - Would this be better?
Okay, Jane comes back and everything is fine.
Mike is the one to fall into the water instead of Luke, so Bonnie does try to save him due to their interaction in Episode Four. Also it'd make sense for Mike to be able to hold a walker underwater and keep it away from Clementine, but get dragged down. As well as this, Mike could freeze to death.
Jane decides to leave with Arvo, even though she promised not to abandon you solely based on the fact she doesn't trust Kenny and it'd show she is a lone survivalist. She only trusted Arvo since she think he may know the area.
The argument in the car with Kenny and Luke could have been between how Kenny didn't like Luke's plan to go back to Howe's and recalls how Luke messed up at Howe's. Luke mentions Sarita and Kenny mentions people such as Nick, Rebecca, etc.
Eventually Luke has the baby, and he mentions how he tripped in the snow dazed and confused fended off some walkers, but didn't know where the baby was. Kenny thinks he's lying, and they go into a full-blown fight. Luke doesn't want to fight and tries his best only to disable Kenny however it doesn't work out. Suddenly Lukes machete is about to stab him, and Clementine has to make a choice.
After Clementines choice, the baby is heard crying and Clementine sees a silhouette in the distance. Clementines eyes widen, and it cuts to black and says 'Nine Days Later'.
With Luke, Clementine is heading to Howe's. And Luke mentions to another person that they're almost there. It shows who the third person is, and it is Christa who is holding the baby. Luke and Clementine have a brief conversation about how he was telling the truth, and he thanks Christa for being there to find the baby. She reveals she found the baby defenceless on the floor, as she was walking through the snow to get north to Wellington. You then get the choice to let the family in or don't.
Where Christa advises not to, Luke advises to let the family in.
With Kenny, they are going to a hill. Kenny offers to hold the baby, and the third person replies where it's said to be Christa. Kenny and Clementine have a brief conversation where Kenny knew he couldn't trust Luke to take care of the child. Clementine can be empathetic saying Luke tried his best, regret letting Luke die, think Kenny is right or be silent. Edith presumes Kenny and Christa are together, but they awkwardly mention they aren't a couple, or the actual mother/father. However Edith mentions they can only take an adult, and Clementine and the baby. Kenny argues that Edith let Christa, Clementine and AJ in Wellington.
Christa asks Clementine what she thinks, and you can either walk away with all of them or go into Wellington with Christa and AJ.
Do you guys think this would be better?
Comments
Christa finding the baby would be a bit weird and coincidental. Also I think the fact Jane came back shows that she cares and is trying to change for clem, shes there for clem no one else.
Also I didnt like that Luke died and would have liked an ending with him however I dont have a major problem with his death, he had a bum leg and bad luck. Things happen.
I'm not trying to being mean, but the death of Luke is what made the group divide. At least it's what I think.
:c
Well, i actually think it would be more difficulty for the players to choose if it were Kenny vs Luke, i'd probably choose Luke, and that's coming from a Kenny fan.
So yeah, i do think this is better.
Don't worry you're not being mean.
I like this, but I would prefer that Luke and Kenny would become better friends, thus making the choice to save either one harder, and not have the baby missing, instead of the save one of them from zombies, but both would tell Clem to save the other, oh yeah, and Jane be the one who falls in water.
This wouldn't be better as it wouldn't make sense , luke's not the guy who mouths off peoples dead families.