@LeeTheProfessional
From Shadow's character bio.
Are you willing to sacrifice yourself in order to protect your family/friends?
Depending if they haven't messed with someone I care about.
Who has Raf messed with? MY DAD.
@LeeTheProfessional @TDMshadowCP
Elian made a theory for Gustav.
Gustav didn't get shot, he managed to get the Tobi's goon first, but his shotgun fell and hit Gustav in the head, resulting in him passing out.
Okay, guys. I'm going to head out later and won't be on until later at night. But... I'll leave the votes open for the last two parts, especially the Shadow part. Maybe you guys want to look that over...
_ Juice_Box_
(!) Use my knife, sneak up behind the hunting rifle bandit and take his gun.
All of the bandits were still distracted and… more focused on one spot. I put my gun away and then took out my hunting knife."Okay, Juicy. You can do this, just like Scarlet taught you." I said to myself. I looked over at Star who was still hiding behind a car, I peeked out and saw that the hunting rifle bandit was still waiting for my group member to come out of hiding."This is it..." I said.
I started moving closer to him, I was being extra careful not to make any loud noises as I approached him."Once you pop your head out, I'll be sure to shoot you..." The bandit said while looking through the scope. I got closer to him and then got ready to strike."Ehehe, these assholes messed with the wrong people." He says. I slowly got up a bit and then aimed for the back of his neck.
"Go around the back! I'll follow ya." I heard a bandit on the other side. … [view original content]
Okay, guys. I'm going to head out later and won't be on until later at night. But... I'll leave the votes open for the last two parts, especially the Shadow part. Maybe you guys want to look that over...
Okay, guys. I'm going to head out later and won't be on until later at night. But... I'll leave the votes open for the last two parts, especially the Shadow part. Maybe you guys want to look that over...
1) Spit in his face.
Tobi wont do anything. His intentions were to use Noncy as a drawing point to bring the group to him and possibly have Noncy as a hostage, he wont kill Noncy yet.
_ Juice_Box_
(!) Use my knife, sneak up behind the hunting rifle bandit and take his gun.
All of the bandits were still distracted and… more focused on one spot. I put my gun away and then took out my hunting knife."Okay, Juicy. You can do this, just like Scarlet taught you." I said to myself. I looked over at Star who was still hiding behind a car, I peeked out and saw that the hunting rifle bandit was still waiting for my group member to come out of hiding."This is it..." I said.
I started moving closer to him, I was being extra careful not to make any loud noises as I approached him."Once you pop your head out, I'll be sure to shoot you..." The bandit said while looking through the scope. I got closer to him and then got ready to strike."Ehehe, these assholes messed with the wrong people." He says. I slowly got up a bit and then aimed for the back of his neck.
"Go around the back! I'll follow ya." I heard a bandit on the other side. … [view original content]
I could have saved him ................ NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Its like my "Death" all over again but without the zombie reset button WHYYYYYYYYYYYYY?
Markd4547
(!) Drive around, run over some of the walkers.
BRATATAT! BRATATAT! BRATATAT! I kept firing at the walkers. I needed to get … moreinside Tobi's warehouse. I decided that maybe I could drive over some of them. I got out and then entered the driver side. I looked over at the walkers trying to reach me."Haha! Bunch of ugly sacks of shits! Time to have some fun!" I floored the pedal and then started driving through the horde. A bunch of them were getting piled up on the hood."HAHAHA! A new high score!" I shouted. I was almost to the side of the warehouse, I was killing a bunch of walkers in the way. I could almost hear Tobi begging for mercy."HAHAHA! Almost there!" I said to myself. BLAM! BLAM! Out of nowhere, I heard two gunshots and I start losing control of the HUMVEE."What the fuck?!" I shout as I try turning the steering wheel and then hitting the brakes. A loud screech could be heard as I'm approaching the concrete wall of the war… [view original content]
@LeeTheProfessional
From Shadow's character bio.
Are you willing to sacrifice yourself in order to protect your family/friends?
Depending if they haven't messed with someone I care about.
Who has Raf messed with? MY DAD.
This is the ONLY TRUTH of Mark but this is not his end For you see there is an infinite amout of Mark's saddly only ONE existed in THIS universe (story) but countless others remain some even go by other names ( spark from unending darkess for example) others have even been allied with alternate twistees ( shocking i know) so in truth THIS Mark is dead but the Others live on!
2) Shoot the walkers. Try to help Rafoli.
Mark is died haha what an assh*le I don't care ok maybe a little bit
Thanks Lee for hav… moreing my character in your story it was an honor but I need to be dramatic Markd one last time for my character
The truth behind my character Markd
His parents were killed by Walkers and he was blamed for their murder in a government cover up in the early days of the ZA with little to no social interaction.
His only bro Cornpopper he was the definition of insanity but they teamed up never letting their personal trauma restrict them escaping from the mental Asylum with a hatred for the human race after getting beaten to a pulp every night to keep them under control all rules and regulations his experiences left him with a sick sense of humour just to survive and a hatred of plans,rules and systems.
One day WTD shot and killed Mark's only friend Cornpopper a group of bandits maybe even terrorists … [view original content]
Mark NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
O god i should have been back soner
I could have saved him ................ NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Its like my "Death" all over again but without the zombie reset button WHYYYYYYYYYYYYY?
Well i just finished catching up ..............i spent the whole day doing it.......... and to be honest................
I WANNA CRY! My god this is...........is..........Wrong
Mark IS DEAD did i really just write that IS THIS A NIGHTMARE it must be there is no other explination For Mark's Death .........o god
Why........ Why........................ Not only him but Broken two and ........ And........ WTW........ This is NOT REAL IT CAN'T BE ......
......... IT'S like Carl died or Tyresse died or Rick died or Shane died ( scrash that last one) these people are too good TO DIE
I get Papai and me ( as mutch as i regret it happened) we were NEW and easily disposible
But some of these people were from chapther one ( witch by the way is ironicaly titled A REAL NIGHTMARE) they shouldn't die becouse of stupid choices.........GOD WHYYYYYYYYYY?
O yeah and
Stay with Rafoli ( im not letting anyone else die besides if they DO it's atleast poetic Rafoli's shot legs and CC broken legs)
If you're trying to make me hate your character then ............ You failed..........
I mean if someone like Mark died ( a main character in 3 chapters who got A TON of development ) then what chance do you have
Face it ! YOU ARE THE WALKING DEAD no matter how hard you try you are eventully dying ( unless you don't in that case Congrats i feel so happy for you )
Mark IS DEAD did i really just write that IS THIS A NIGHTMARE it must be there is no other explination For Mark's Death .........
It was Mark's time, unfortunately. Staying on the HUMVEE and shooting would've resulted in me sniping him; he got blown up in the **Get in the HUMVEE and drive over the walkers option, and apparently he was going to die a more badass death. SO Mark's dead. Sucks though
I get Papai and me ( as mutch as i regret it happened) we were NEW and easily disposible
Well, it WAS just one unlucky choice. But regardless, it may have been hard to keep you in the story comfortably. I know you're upset about your death, but it's time to get over it. Just look at Spooch and Blue. They aren't screaming to everybody, are they? Sorry bud, but you should move on.
But some of these people were from chapther one ( witch by the way is ironicaly titled A REAL NIGHTMARE) they shouldn't die becouse of stupid choices.........GOD WHYYYYYYYYYY?
they shouldn't die becouse of stupid choices.........GOD WHYYYYYYYYYY?
Unfortunately, although some choices may seem stupid, they are still choices we have to decide over. And at the time, when we're voting, they mostly always don't seem stupid until the voting's wrapped up and the next part's released. But the decision will have already passed, and we'd have needed to move past that.
Again, CS in the story will do whatever it takes to survive. So expect many more deaths.
Well i just finished catching up ..............i spent the whole day doing it.......... and to be honest................
I WANNA CRY! My … moregod this is...........is..........Wrong
Mark IS DEAD did i really just write that IS THIS A NIGHTMARE it must be there is no other explination For Mark's Death .........o god
Why........ Why........................ Not only him but Broken two and ........ And........ WTW........ This is NOT REAL IT CAN'T BE ......
......... IT'S like Carl died or Tyresse died or Rick died or Shane died ( scrash that last one) these people are too good TO DIE
I get Papai and me ( as mutch as i regret it happened) we were NEW and easily disposible
But some of these people were from chapther one ( witch by the way is ironicaly titled A REAL NIGHTMARE) they shouldn't die becouse of stupid choices.........GOD WHYYYYYYYYYY?
O yeah and
Stay with Rafoli ( im not letting anyone else die besides if they DO it's atleast poetic Rafoli's shot legs and CC broken legs)
If you're trying to make me hate your character then ............ You failed..........
I mean if someone like Mark died ( a main characte… morer in 3 chapters who got A TON of development ) then what chance do you have
Face it ! YOU ARE THE WALKING DEAD no matter how hard you try you are eventully dying ( unless you don't in that case Congrats i feel so happy for you )
Ok.
Mark IS DEAD did i really just write that IS THIS A NIGHTMARE it must be there is no other explination For Mark's Death .........
… more
It was Mark's time, unfortunately. Staying on the HUMVEE and shooting would've resulted in me sniping him; he got blown up in the **Get in the HUMVEE and drive over the walkers option, and apparently he was going to die a more badass death. SO Mark's dead. Sucks though
I get Papai and me ( as mutch as i regret it happened) we were NEW and easily disposible
Well, it WAS just one unlucky choice. But regardless, it may have been hard to keep you in the story comfortably. I know you're upset about your death, but it's time to get over it. Just look at Spooch and Blue. They aren't screaming to everybody, are they? Sorry bud, but you should move on.
But some of these people were from chapther one ( witch by the way is ironicaly titled A REAL NIGHTMARE) they shouldn't die becouse of … [view original content]
Don't worry i got over my death weak's ago i just pointed it out to give an example
And i do expect death's it just sad how pointlessly they're dying (((((((((((
Nah don't worry you're TWO MONTHS IN you're already a badass
And killing Mark and Broken ( even thought it hurt me) makes you AN EVEN BIGGER BADASS and COOLER CHARACTER
So to my own suprise ( and Probably that of everyone else) you just became one of my Top Favs and one of the BEST and MOST memorable characters in THE ENTIRE STORY ( i mean would you forget the guy who killed TWO main characters) and a MAIN CHARCTER
Well i just finished catching up ..............i spent the whole day doing it.......... and to be honest................
I WANNA CRY! My … moregod this is...........is..........Wrong
Mark IS DEAD did i really just write that IS THIS A NIGHTMARE it must be there is no other explination For Mark's Death .........o god
Why........ Why........................ Not only him but Broken two and ........ And........ WTW........ This is NOT REAL IT CAN'T BE ......
......... IT'S like Carl died or Tyresse died or Rick died or Shane died ( scrash that last one) these people are too good TO DIE
I get Papai and me ( as mutch as i regret it happened) we were NEW and easily disposible
But some of these people were from chapther one ( witch by the way is ironicaly titled A REAL NIGHTMARE) they shouldn't die becouse of stupid choices.........GOD WHYYYYYYYYYY?
O yeah and
Stay with Rafoli ( im not letting anyone else die besides if they DO it's atleast poetic Rafoli's shot legs and CC broken legs)
Im glad too althougth we sadly cannot say the same for poor Papai86 ( it hit him so hard he won't even join Forumlans [Borderlans community version of Forum Of The Dead] i feel bad for him )
Ok, I'm glad we're getting over everyone's deaths.
Also, the deaths may seem pointless because Pro had over 70 characters in the story and had to kill them off in this chapter.
Nah don't worry you're TWO MONTHS IN you're already a badass
And killing Mark and Broken ( even thought it hurt me) makes you AN EVEN B… moreIGGER BADASS and COOLER CHARACTER
So to my own suprise ( and Probably that of everyone else) you just became one of my Top Favs and one of the BEST and MOST memorable characters in THE ENTIRE STORY ( i mean would you forget the guy who killed TWO main characters) and a MAIN CHARCTER
IM ROTTING FOR YOU CS!
Maybe there'll be a decision?
1.) Stay and cry; let the walkers eat you.
2.) Pick yourself up; the fucker on the roof has to die!
3.) Kill Noncy and try to head back to the others.
TO VOTE, PLEASE REPLY TO THIS COMMENT. THANK YOU!
hm?
Maybe there'll be a decision?
1.) Stay and cry; let the walkers eat you.
2.) Pick yourself up; the fucker on the roof has to die!
3.) Kill Noncy and try to head back to the others.
TO VOTE, PLEASE REPLY TO THIS COMMENT. THANK YOU!
hm?
Pro stop giving people Clues and Hints they have STILL not understood how this chapter works and go by the logic of chapters 1-2 ( if you pick the option that most likely will spare them they live)
Sadly your wisdom goes unheard yet again..............
EVERYONE IS DYING, RIBS IN PEAS EVERYONE...
"But you could die..." Fan tells me.
"At least Sardines will be waitin' for me." I… more tell him.
Well, that's depressing as fuck. (But what wasn't this part?)
2) Shoot the walkers. Try to help Rafoli.
EDIT: Oh wait I forgot one comment I was going to make - I wonder if that was real ;_; the end bit thing with Gustav. wow. maybe it's a dream... maybe he's alive!! haha... ha...
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@LeeTheProfessional @TDMshadowCP
Elian made a theory for Gustav.
Gustav didn't get shot, he managed to get the Tobi's goon first, but his shotgun fell and hit Gustav in the head, resulting in him passing out.
A lot of people are voting for the other option...
"You won't be able to save everyone."
Gustav confirmed to be dead. Sorry, man.
You probably would have lived if Shadow went with you because then Rafoli would have followed you guys.
Now you've got to make a story arc for Gustav and Sardines in heaven.
Mwahahaha B]
Lol, Gustavdines, even after death.
Okay, guys. I'm going to head out later and won't be on until later at night. But... I'll leave the votes open for the last two parts, especially the Shadow part. Maybe you guys want to look that over...
LATTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm still not quite sure why people are voting for someone who barely knows how to shoot to save someone who just got shot in the legs.
;-;
Heh, Rafoli can't walk. But yeah, I have to go now, there probably wont be a new part until tomorrow or Monday. Choose wisely, people... B]
I'm going to PM you something bro.
So he is confirmed dead? ;~;
Sadly yes.
Now all I want is a story arc in heaven with Gustav and Sardines.
Unless he changes his mind. ODODOODODOOD
Well i haven't read the outcome of this yet but wasen't that the same thinking that got me and papai pointlessly killed?
Pro in that almost last line it's Sheep not Seep
Sorry if i bother you by correcting you twice
Mark NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
O god i should have been back soner
I could have saved him ................ NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Its like my "Death" all over again but without the zombie reset button WHYYYYYYYYYYYYY?
Plus, Pro has confirmed that Raf can't walk.
"Killing one in order to save many is part of survival. It's one of those choices that a weaker person can't make."
Raf wants Shadow to leave, meaning he doesn't want him to die :L
This is the ONLY TRUTH of Mark but this is not his end For you see there is an infinite amout of Mark's saddly only ONE existed in THIS universe (story) but countless others remain some even go by other names ( spark from unending darkess for example) others have even been allied with alternate twistees ( shocking i know) so in truth THIS Mark is dead but the Others live on!
I blew him up. And I'd do it again.
MWAHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHABABABABbb
Well i just finished catching up ..............i spent the whole day doing it.......... and to be honest................
I WANNA CRY! My god this is...........is..........Wrong
Mark IS DEAD did i really just write that IS THIS A NIGHTMARE it must be there is no other explination For Mark's Death .........o god
Why........ Why........................ Not only him but Broken two and ........ And........ WTW........ This is NOT REAL IT CAN'T BE ......
......... IT'S like Carl died or Tyresse died or Rick died or Shane died ( scrash that last one) these people are too good TO DIE
I get Papai and me ( as mutch as i regret it happened) we were NEW and easily disposible
But some of these people were from chapther one ( witch by the way is ironicaly titled A REAL NIGHTMARE) they shouldn't die becouse of stupid choices.........GOD WHYYYYYYYYYY?
O yeah and
Stay with Rafoli ( im not letting anyone else die besides if they DO it's atleast poetic Rafoli's shot legs and CC broken legs)
If you're trying to make me hate your character then ............ You failed..........
I mean if someone like Mark died ( a main character in 3 chapters who got A TON of development ) then what chance do you have
Face it ! YOU ARE THE WALKING DEAD no matter how hard you try you are eventully dying ( unless you don't in that case Congrats i feel so happy for you
)
Ok.
It was Mark's time, unfortunately. Staying on the HUMVEE and shooting would've resulted in me sniping him; he got blown up in the **Get in the HUMVEE and drive over the walkers option, and apparently he was going to die a more badass death. SO Mark's dead. Sucks though
Well, it WAS just one unlucky choice. But regardless, it may have been hard to keep you in the story comfortably. I know you're upset about your death, but it's time to get over it. Just look at Spooch and Blue. They aren't screaming to everybody, are they? Sorry bud, but you should move on.
Unfortunately, although some choices may seem stupid, they are still choices we have to decide over. And at the time, when we're voting, they mostly always don't seem stupid until the voting's wrapped up and the next part's released. But the decision will have already passed, and we'd have needed to move past that.
Again, CS in the story will do whatever it takes to survive. So expect many more deaths.
yeh i will die eventually, I just want to get a teeny bit of development and seem like a badass before I go, lol B]
Don't worry i got over my death weak's ago i just pointed it out to give an example
And i do expect death's it just sad how pointlessly they're dying
(((((((((((
Ok, I'm glad we're getting over everyone's deaths.
Also, the deaths may seem pointless because Pro had over 70 characters in the story and had to kill them off in this chapter.
Nah don't worry you're TWO MONTHS IN you're already a badass
And killing Mark and Broken ( even thought it hurt me) makes you AN EVEN BIGGER BADASS and COOLER CHARACTER
So to my own suprise ( and Probably that of everyone else) you just became one of my Top Favs and one of the BEST and MOST memorable characters in THE ENTIRE STORY ( i mean would you forget the guy who killed TWO main characters) and a MAIN CHARCTER
IM ROTTING FOR YOU CS!
WtW will probably die too :c
Im glad too althougth we sadly cannot say the same for poor Papai86 ( it hit him so hard he won't even join Forumlans [Borderlans community version of Forum Of The Dead] i feel bad for him
)
Tears :"(
i knoe, sew sad ;-;
Yay, I have A FAN!
lol XD thanks, though. Glad to see someone enjoys my character (so far).
Maybe there'll be a decision?
1.) Stay and cry; let the walkers eat you.
2.) Pick yourself up; the fucker on the roof has to die!
3.) Kill Noncy and try to head back to the others.
TO VOTE, PLEASE REPLY TO THIS COMMENT. THANK YOU!
hm?
Hug Noncy?
Oh god.
OH. GOD.
Good idea, but then if people pick the first or third option I'm dead anyway
LMFAO OKAY GOOD I WAS LIKE HOLY SHIT xD
lol the third one was a joke XD
edited.
XD was a joke, I edited.
Pro stop giving people Clues and Hints they have STILL not understood how this chapter works and go by the logic of chapters 1-2 ( if you pick the option that most likely will spare them they live)
Sadly your wisdom goes unheard yet again..............
y.
y u do dis.
They will be welcomed by your Awsomeness sardines you happily await them............
Btw im catching up with your fic and it's Amazing
You wanted it?
No.
I just had a heart attack imagining that scene.
Hugs Noncy Gets bitten and screams in agony as she is devourered
Thx, imagination.