Shit, that many people died? I honestly expected my character to die in Ch.3 surprised I made it this far, but I guess we will be seeing more of everyone now, and the deaths wont seem forced because you don't need to kill people for the sake of shortening the cast anymore.
I'm sorry that I sounded like a dick, everyone. It's just that this is the only really successful fanfic I've been a part of. All the other ones I've died within 2 parts or just never showed up and then it was discontinued.
I'm sorry that I sounded like a dick, everyone. It's just that this is the only really successful fanfic I've been a part of. All the other ones I've died within 2 parts or just never showed up and then it was discontinued.
Shit, that many people died? I honestly expected my character to die in Ch.3 surprised I made it this far, but I guess we will be seeing mor… moree of everyone now, and the deaths wont seem forced because you don't need to kill people for the sake of shortening the cast anymore.
CS wasn't a bad guy, just on the opposite side, doing whatever it took to survive, just like the people from the mansion group. I'll reveal what I had planned for him during Ch.5.
I'm sorry that I sounded like a dick, everyone. It's just that this is the only really successful fanfic I've been a part of. All the other ones I've died within 2 parts or just never showed up and then it was discontinued.
I was going to name specifics, but that would've been mean. I'm rejoining your story though, and my character's still alive (from what you told me) so I'm happy about that. There were 3 or 4 other ones that disappointed me though.
I mean... You're character had like three parts, and my story was discontinued but not anymore, and you didn't die, so I just assumed you were saying mine wasn't successful (Which is probably true), but don't worry, sometimes being mean to be honest is more truthful, so I don't really mind, don't worry about it.
No, no, your story's pretty damn successful. I just didn't know if you remembered him or not, since you got the ban hammer around then. So no hard feelings, I didn't mean anything towards you.
I mean... You're character had like three parts, and my story was discontinued but not anymore, and you didn't die, so I just assumed you we… morere saying mine wasn't successful (Which is probably true), but don't worry, sometimes being mean to be honest is more truthful, so I don't really mind, don't worry about it.
No, no, your story's pretty damn successful. I just didn't know if you remembered him or not, since you got the ban hammer around then. So no hard feelings, I didn't mean anything towards you.
...I kept staring into Tobi's eyes."This is for everyone you've ever hurt or killed... this is for the people that you've mentally and physi… morecally scarred... For WtW, you left her with almost nothing... this is for Angel and Noncy... Guilty, Valky, Shadow... Gustav and CiD... for the church group that you captured... This is payback for every evil thing you've ever done, or anything you've ever done to hurt my people... my family... or anyone else... this is for them..." I said with a smile.
Tobi made a confused look."The fuck are you talking about? You lost!" He says to me.
I kept my smile while looking at him."Ever heard of the ring trick...?" I asked him.
"Ring trick? What are you..." I lifted my arm and opened my fist. Tobi noticed all the grenade pins on my fingers, and then he made a shocked look.
"This... is... for them..." I said to Tobi once more and grabbed on to him as tightly as I could. Tobi looked furious. I started l… [view original content]
...I kept staring into Tobi's eyes."This is for everyone you've ever hurt or killed... this is for the people that you've mentally and physi… morecally scarred... For WtW, you left her with almost nothing... this is for Angel and Noncy... Guilty, Valky, Shadow... Gustav and CiD... for the church group that you captured... This is payback for every evil thing you've ever done, or anything you've ever done to hurt my people... my family... or anyone else... this is for them..." I said with a smile.
Tobi made a confused look."The fuck are you talking about? You lost!" He says to me.
I kept my smile while looking at him."Ever heard of the ring trick...?" I asked him.
"Ring trick? What are you..." I lifted my arm and opened my fist. Tobi noticed all the grenade pins on my fingers, and then he made a shocked look.
"This... is... for them..." I said to Tobi once more and grabbed on to him as tightly as I could. Tobi looked furious. I started l… [view original content]
Pro left something behind that ATR has. Just in case him or Jon die, Jon is bit, so he won't last. ATR is still alive, so she has to find wh… moreat Pro left behind and tell them what they're going to do.
I already know how I want to end it, I think I know how to end this. But hopefully you guys like it. B]
Jon is bit, so he won't last.
Just realized...
Shadow better get him the faq outta there or take him out, or something, because soon he'll be to weak to travel, and too weak to stay alive.
Just food for thought, Pro xD
So... now that chapter 4 is over. Did any of your predictions come true? Do you think anyone else will die? What do you think will happen next? Are you happy that Tobi is finally dead?
So... now that chapter 4 is over. Did any of your predictions come true? Do you think anyone else will die? What do you think will happen next? Are you happy that Tobi is finally dead?
I called Pro's death, only thing is I thought it would end with Tobi surviving. That's not gonna happen, though xD
Tobi's head: "I surviiiiiive>:D"
Oh, people are definately gonna die.
ATR will be the new leader, and they'll relocate.
I predicted Tobi's death at the end, as well as Salts betrayal. I think a few will die, Jon(he is basically dead already) Sheep, Gary, Valky, Shadow,Puncake. What I think will happen next, They fine Jon tearing into Puncake(he was knocked out) and maybe Shadow is dead already, they head back to the mansion, ATR finds out what Lee left her and everyone splits up.
So... now that chapter 4 is over. Did any of your predictions come true? Do you think anyone else will die? What do you think will happen next? Are you happy that Tobi is finally dead?
I predicted Tobi's death at the end, as well as Salts betrayal. I think a few will die, Jon(he is basically dead already) Sheep, Gary, Valky… more, Shadow,Puncake. What I think will happen next, They fine Jon tearing into Puncake(he was knocked out) and maybe Shadow is dead already, they head back to the mansion, ATR finds out what Lee left her and everyone splits up.
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Hey, hopefully it makes some people feel bad.
You get Kenny's death theme
Lol yeah, a shit ton of them died, I expected only a few from the new people to die, but more ended up dieing.
Shit, that many people died? I honestly expected my character to die in Ch.3 surprised I made it this far, but I guess we will be seeing more of everyone now, and the deaths wont seem forced because you don't need to kill people for the sake of shortening the cast anymore.
I'm sorry that I sounded like a dick, everyone. It's just that this is the only really successful fanfic I've been a part of. All the other ones I've died within 2 parts or just never showed up and then it was discontinued.
Rip literally the entire RV group
The powers of Urban will prevail
Thanks man.
It's alright. At least you got a pretty emotional death scene.
I know, that's a LOT. But this was the theme of Ch.4. Nobody is safe forever, and hope is wearing thin. Ch.5 will be about trying to regain that hope.
CS wasn't a bad guy, just on the opposite side, doing whatever it took to survive, just like the people from the mansion group. I'll reveal what I had planned for him during Ch.5.
Ouch. I think.
I was going to name specifics, but that would've been mean. I'm rejoining your story though, and my character's still alive (from what you told me) so I'm happy about that. There were 3 or 4 other ones that disappointed me though.
Bye I meant successful for my character, not the actual story. Sounded mean there.
I mean... You're character had like three parts, and my story was discontinued but not anymore, and you didn't die, so I just assumed you were saying mine wasn't successful (Which is probably true), but don't worry, sometimes being mean to be honest is more truthful, so I don't really mind, don't worry about it.
No, no, your story's pretty damn successful. I just didn't know if you remembered him or not, since you got the ban hammer around then. So no hard feelings, I didn't mean anything towards you.
Please believe me ;-;
Negativity? Tisk tisk, Mr Blades.
I'm afraid I'm gonna have to disagree with you now.
Oh, well. To enjoy your story regardless if your disbelief.
HAHAHAHHAAHAHHA. HOLT SHIT THAT WAS AWESOME
http://youtu.be/acYDNlMYAaI
Nuuuu R.I.P pro. But at lease his death was freakin insane. What if ATR is the new leader? Heh, that would be cool.
Holy shit, Pro... that was just, amazing, argh. ;-;
RIP Pro, CS and, well, Tobi.
Just realized...
Shadow better get him the faq outta there or take him out, or something, because soon he'll be to weak to travel, and too weak to stay alive.
Just food for thought, Pro xD
I get to see my daughter :,)
Good. ;-;
I had faith in Dark_Star from the start, he was my fav.
:x
Gee, thanks CS. xD
Guilty and WtW are still there, plus they have a car now. B]
Wow, this is awesome. Amazing, DLB. B^]
I cri everytim.
I was planning to kill off my character since the beginning, heh. This was exactly the way I wanted it to be. B^]
So... now that chapter 4 is over. Did any of your predictions come true? Do you think anyone else will die? What do you think will happen next? Are you happy that Tobi is finally dead?
I called Pro's death, only thing is I thought it would end with Tobi surviving. That's not gonna happen, though xD
Tobi's head: "I surviiiiiive>:D"
Oh, people are definately gonna die.
ATR will be the new leader, and they'll relocate.
Tobi would have survived... but if another option was chosen. B^]
I can live with that death.
Pro sacrifice for the greater good.
I predicted Tobi's death at the end, as well as Salts betrayal. I think a few will die, Jon(he is basically dead already) Sheep, Gary, Valky, Shadow,Puncake. What I think will happen next, They fine Jon tearing into Puncake(he was knocked out) and maybe Shadow is dead already, they head back to the mansion, ATR finds out what Lee left her and everyone splits up.
Hmm, interesting. What do you think will be the cause of their deaths?
Lol, Shadow should take Jon out just like Clem took out Lee, so I could use Lee's death theme for the soundtrack B]