Dead City (Finale)

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  • Good

    Lehfeels posted: »

    are the slaves good or bad people?

  • Had a strong feeling this would happen. :(

    Keep up the good work.

    Survivors and Bandits Chapter 6 (Choice-Wait(This was very even)) Anthony sits there as the figure stands there,it drops to its knees,

  • New part soon?

  • Might write the next The Mission chapter tonight.

    I haven't forgotten.

    Colton posted: »

    New part soon?

  • Great, really loving it so far :)

    Might write the next The Mission chapter tonight. I haven't forgotten.

  • I'm really loving this story! I can't wait for the next part(s) to come out!

    Might write the next The Mission chapter tonight. I haven't forgotten.

  • Alright I was extremely busy last night so im bringing the next The Mission part night and to make it up for the extended break, 6 parts tomorrow .

  • Alright internet went out so 7 parts tonight :P

  • edited September 2014

    Better hurry up or your gonna have 8 parts to do. Lol

    Alright internet went out so 7 parts tonight :P

  • Dont worry, im staying up late to bring you these, hopefully my internet doesnt go out.

    mr.quality posted: »

    Better hurry up or your gonna have 8 parts to do. Lol

  • Workin tonight, give me somethin awesome to come home to!

    Dont worry, im staying up late to bring you these, hopefully my internet doesnt go out.

  • hopefully youll get a lot.

    Colton posted: »

    Workin tonight, give me somethin awesome to come home to!

  • The Mission Chapter 4

    Captain Roland grabs the flashlight, pills, survival knife, revolver, and assault rifle

    CR-What are these pills for?

    X-Anxiety, William has anxiety.

    CR-Oh...

    Gerald grabs his shotgun

    G-Ill start the car

    Skylar grabs here assault rifle and Julia grabs a handgun

    S-We should go, William sounds like hes in trouble.

    Captain Roland,Skylar, and Julia all walk outside to the car where Gerald is sitting

    G-You ready?

    CR-Yes

    Everyone gets in the truck and Gerald starts driving

    G-So...The cure?

    CR- What about it?

    G-Everything, what do you know about it?

    CR-Classified

    J-The cure crashed with the convoy a while back.

    G-I saw that.

    S-You did?!

    G-Yes, crashed downtown, in one of those big skyscrapers.

    CR-Well we found it, now only for pick up and extraction.

    G-Not so fast sarge, we want first pick.

    CR-Its just data for the cure.

    G-Damn over three months in...Still no cure.

    The rest of the ride was quiet until they reached the gun store

    Many of the walkers had left

    J-Easy enough...

    **End of Chapter **

  • CR-What are these pills for?

    X-Anxiety, William has anxiety.

    Well, that was a good idea.

    Great part :P

    The Mission Chapter 4 Captain Roland grabs the flashlight, pills, survival knife, revolver, and assault rifle CR-What are these pills

  • Thanks, those pills may have saved a life.

    BlueShadiw posted: »

    CR-What are these pills for? X-Anxiety, William has anxiety. Well, that was a good idea. Great part :P

  • may have

    The suspense...xD

    Thanks, those pills may have saved a life.

  • Dont worry more will come.

    BlueShadiw posted: »

    may have The suspense...xD

  • I know.

    Gets out popcorn

    It's like a marathon :D

    Dont worry more will come.

  • Every 30 minutes or when I feel like it a new one will come out.

    BlueShadiw posted: »

    I know. Gets out popcorn It's like a marathon

  • S&B Chapter 7

    (Choice-Rebellion of unloyal guards)

    A-We could cause a rebellion.

    B-Not bad but whos going to be our diplomat?

    Sam and Brandon look at Anthony

    A-Fuck...

    Anthony waits till night then moves into the camp

    Anthony walks behind a guard then hides

    A-Hey...

    ???-Fuck...Who and where are you, Steven I swear if its you im going to kill you!

    A-Dont worry, I wont hurt you as long as you stay quiet, so you like your leader?

    ???-Who that crazy fuck Leon, no!

    A-Then were friends, good people are locked up in that camp, we want them out.

    ???-Come out...

    Anthony walks out to a woman

    A-So who are you?

    ???-You first.

    A-Anthony

    ???-Im O-

    ???-Hey Olivia you back here Another woman says

    Olivia-Oh hey Amari.

    Amari-Hey what are you doing?

    O-nothing...

    AM-Now I know somethings off!

    O-We need to start a rebellion against Leon.

    AM-Who gave you these crazy ideas?

    A-Me...

    AM-Oh Shit!

    O-Stay calm...Hes right Leon is crazy...We need to do this.

    AM-Youre right...We should rally Steven too, whats the plan?

    Anthony starts telling them the plan

    End of Chapter

  • very nice..i am enjoying these, very interested to see what you do with thomas

    S&B Chapter 7 (Choice-Rebellion of unloyal guards) A-We could cause a rebellion. B-Not bad but whos going to be our diplomat?

  • I will introduce him later in the Hunter Arc.

    crawfish posted: »

    very nice..i am enjoying these, very interested to see what you do with thomas

  • I am patient, between keeping up with these and Road of Bones, I am all good! Keep'em coming!!

    I will introduce him later in the Hunter Arc.

  • I submitted a character for that, its an awesome story.

    crawfish posted: »

    I am patient, between keeping up with these and Road of Bones, I am all good! Keep'em coming!!

  • Yes you did didn't you. I wonder who he's "bumped" into, or who's "bumped" into him

    I submitted a character for that, its an awesome story.

  • The Hunters Chapter 6

    Randy walks over to the doctors tent

    R-Hey Nick.

    N-Oh hello.

    R-So how are you doing?

    N-We are moving soon, so packing up.

    R-Moving?

    N-To the city, its how we stay safe, keep moving.

    R- Ill have to ask Savior about this.

    Randy walks out of the tent and towards Saviors

    Michel stops Randy

    M-Saviors busy right now wait a second.

    R-Are you his body guard?

    M-Yes...He saved my life and has been here for me after everything.

    R-Good man...

    M-Yes we are.

    Michel holds randy for a bit until Savior sees and says its okay

    Randy walks into Saviors tent

    S-Hey Randy!

    R-I heard we are moving to the city.

    S-Yeah, so you coming?

    R-Yeah sure!

    S-Alright so picked out a spot for the group.

    R-So we pack up and start moving?

    S-Yup, you got it.

    Everyone packs up everything and moves toward the city

    Eventually everyone gets to the spot, an old industrial warehouse

    Everyone starts to unpack

    S-Alright, so we need to go on a scouting run, so Michel and Randy you want to come?

    Michel and Randy agree and leave with Savior, while everyone else unpacks

    End of Chapter

  • All these hints!

    crawfish posted: »

    Yes you did didn't you. I wonder who he's "bumped" into, or who's "bumped" into him

  • Anyone want to make predictions?

    I love hearing predictions.

    The Hunters Chapter 6 Randy walks over to the doctors tent R-Hey Nick. N-Oh hello. R-So how are you doing? N-We are moving so

  • Thats all I can write tonight, there will be more tomorrow.

  • Alright, don't overload yourself.

    We've got all day tomorrow xD

    Thats all I can write tonight, there will be more tomorrow.

  • Well im going to be gone a lot today so you really have all night. XD

    BlueShadiw posted: »

    Alright, don't overload yourself. We've got all day tomorrow xD

  • All night, good thing it's Saturday xD

    Well im going to be gone a lot today so you really have all night. XD

  • Good show! Jolli good show!

    The Hunters Chapter 4 (Choice-Lower gun) Randy lowers his gun S-Good, now give it to me... R-No ???-Wrong answer Something

  • Haha sucks I couldnt get on, youll get some tonight.

    BlueShadiw posted: »

    All night, good thing it's Saturday xD

  • So ive been thinking and heres how many chapters will be in each arc (total):

    10 in Survivors and Bandits

    12 in Hunters

    9 in The Mission

    Then the finale

    I might write a second season if you want.

  • edited September 2014

    The Mission Chapter 5

    CR-Dont get too cocky kid, theyre everywhere.

    J-Sorry, okay...So where is he?

    Everyone walks inside the building

    G-Damn...Its dark.

    Roland pulls out the flashlight and shines it around

    Two walkers move, one boney and small like a child, and the other a large adult with a knife in its back

    Gerald walks to the kid and stomps its head in while Roland goes over and stabs the adult, then grabs its knife and throws it to Gerald

    G-Nice job sarge.

    A loud banging comes from a steel door in the back

    Roland walks around to the back to see one walker banging on a door

    Gerald goes around the corner right up to the walker and kills it

    ???-Hello?

    G-Open up the door William!

    The door opens to a young man wearing a snow jacket

    S-Hey kid anyone tell you its not winter yet?

    William-Yeah...Its for protection...Walkers have trouble biting through it.

    J-Smart!

    G-So one walker?

    W-Yeah...Listen did you bring my pills? Im breaking down here!

    Roland gives William his pills

    W-Thanks. So who are you all?

    CR- Captain Ro-

    G-Friends of professer X

    W-Oh okay...So can we leave?

    G-Yeah.

    The group walks outside towards the truck

    Suddenly a man in a leather jacket runs up wounded by gunshot yelling help

    J-We have to help!

    (Choice)

    http://strawpoll.me/2620098

  • We still need two more slaves.

  • edited September 2014

    Name: Damon
    Age: 16
    Description

    Damon is a mean person. He doesn't like others much and is better on his own. He prefers to be alone with his thoughts and has no problem killing walkers, or people if need be. He only stays with groups because its a necessity. He loves to play guitar.

  • edited September 2014

    Name: Daniel

    Group: Slaves

    Age: 22

    Gender: Male

    Background: Daniel is a coward, and is easily manipulated. He fears authority and does anything to save his own skin. He is shy and quiet and does not voice his opinions, as his opinions are usually the same as the authority that rules over him. He is neither mean or nice, he just does what he's told. He is quite weak and thin.

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