Walking Dead Haiku
Hey dudes,
Thought this might be fun, so come up with your own walking dead game haiku poetry! (These are basically three line poems with 5 syllables in the first line, 7 syllables in the middle, and 5 syllables in the last!). Don't worry, they're surprisingly easy!
I have a few:
Clementine loved Lee
But he was not her father
His name was Edward
Lilly shot Carley
She felt anger inside her
Is there ever rest?
A broken man walks
He has lost as much as them
But they don't bully
A woman alone
She tries hard to improve but
Is she a lost cause?
A teenager yells
But she is scared like others
She, struggling, hides it
The dead eat thousands
Live humans kill even more
Who are the monsters
He runs up to her
Panting for food in a can
Soon death will find him
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Larry was a dick
Kenny dropped a saltlick
Lee held Lilly back
Your middle line doesn't have enough syllables
I know "dropped" is one syllable, but whatever.
Kenny was a prick
But I did not care at all
He remains my friend
(Not sure if I got the size right, but, anyway)
You nearly did, but your last line contains one syllable too many.
You get bit or shot
in a land where the dead walk...
Try not to get lost!
Change it to "Kenny had dropped a saltlick." 7 syllables right there.
Hey, a haiku thread!
I made one a while back
It's buried now though
"He will be my friend." 5 syllables.
Will fix that.
But that makes it sound like Larry was a dick after or because Kenny murdered him which doesn't make sense.
Yeah, that could work, too, but I changed it to "He remains my friend".
Never mind, "remains" sounds better.
Alright then. "Kenny dropped a big saltlick." 7 syllables and it makes sense.
Well...sort of.
Like, the saltlick isn't bigger than normal.
Sorry for your loss
This thread seemed to be cool
Shameful display
Hahahaha that was clever