The final hour
So I'm making a new series on the murder series subject! This is how you make a character.
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Personality:
Other info:
I hope you all like it! The first part will be December 30. Unless I get bored.
Characters: Rick Ross, Mary Martinez, Luke Thompson, Henry Samuel Lemming, Jake Kutcher, Kevin Hearty, Matthew Davids, Sydney Hill, Charcter submissions closed.
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Name: Rick Ross
Age: Late 30's
Appearance: Tall, Skinny, Blue Eyes, Blond Hair, Polo Shirt
Personality: Nice, caring, flirts with women a lot, and British.....
Other Info: Works with groups well but gets annoyed with others easily and sometimes likes being alone
Name: Mary Martinez
Age: 27
Appearance: black short heddle hair , brown eyes , 6,0 feet tall , brown skin
Personality: Silent , Thoughtful , Smart , Caring
Other info: Likes being alone
Thanks for the character!
Thanks for the character!
I'm waiting...
Name: Luke Thompson.
Age: 18
Appearance: short black hair, almost 6 feet tall.
Personality: Kind, caring, nice.
Other info: He thinks he's funny, he isn't funny.
Thanks for the character!
Waiting for more people to join...
Name: Henry Samuel Lemming
Age: 52
Appearance: Short, balding, a grey bushy mustache. Often wearing a Hawaiian shirt.
Personality: Grumpy, lazy and a bit on the greedy side. Not much of a moral code. A bit of a troublemaker in the past.
Other Info: Has an old TV, two ex-wives and a bad back. He's seen the inside of a prison cell more than once.
Thanks for the character!
We have 4 characters so far. And also The murders will take place in a guys house. I don't know who yet...
Name: Jake Kutcher
Age: 18
Appearance: black short Nathan Drake like hair, black five o'clock beard, dark blue eyes, wears a grey hoodie (usually wears the hood on his head), black jeans
Personality: Friendly, depressed, always willing to help, he's a pretty good fighter. He always stands by his decisions, smart.
Other info: He's bullied in his school, he only has a few good friends, but a few of them speak shit behind him too. He doesn't know why the bullies chose him, he's always nice to everybody but everybody are scumbags to him. He has tried suicide once, but he failed. It was 2 years ago, now his life is a little bit better since he doesn't want to kill himself anymore. The bullies have beat him a few times now, so he has took some lessons in street fighting.
Thanks for the character!
I don't think I'll be able to get this story out by Dec 30th unless we get more characters
Name: Kevin Hearty.
Age: 32.
Appearance: Long black hair, about 6 feet tall.
Personality: Kind of a hipster with a bad scents of humor.
Other info: Thinks of himself as a really funny person, but is somewhat bad a making jokes.
Thanks for the character!
Name: Matthew Davids
Age: 18
Backstory: some people see him as strange. He doesn't like to talk about his family, all he says is he wasn't close to them.
Relationship: his girlfriend, Sydney.
Personality: kind and caring, but a little secretive
Apperence: 6'5'', brown hair, green eyes, wears jeans and a leather jacket.
Something: suffers from sleep deprivation,
Name: Sydney Hill
Age: 18
Back story: came from a poor family, and was never able to ever get any money. What she did make, her parents took. She ran away after her father came home drunk and almost killed her mom. Then she met Matthew.
Relationship: Matthew, her boyfriend.
Appearance: 6'3'', long light brown hair, blue eyes, wears jeans and a faded jacket.
Personality: kind and very open with others, not afraid to make decisions.
Something: always worring about others
Thanks for the character!
Yup!
When do plan on starting the story?
sometime today or at least this weekend.
Cool.
The final hour part 1
It's a party at my house. Loud music is playing. Everyone's dancing horribly. It's great.
Luke Thompson: Hey, Rick.
Rick Ross: Hey, Luke.
Luke: Is it time to eat yet? I'm starving.
Rick: ... NOW is is.
Then we all sit down and Rick get's the food and we sit down.
Rick: I would like to thank you all for coming here. This is my birthday. And I would like to celebrate it by getting drunk and eating a lot of food.
Luke: Thompson: YEH!
Rick: Luke, your not even old enough to drink.
Sydney: Neither am I.
Henry: Shut up, girly.
Matthew: Shut up, Henry.
Kevin: Can I get some wine?
Then the lights go out and almost immediately after I hear a scream.
Sydney: What? What was that? Who's hurt?
Rick: I'll do something.
Try to turn light's back on or Go to the scream
Try to turn light's back on
I think is "Neither i am"
Awesome Chapter!!!!!!!!
Try to turn the light's back on
O yeh. :P thanks!
Also I'll be posting one chapter every 2 days. Unless I get bored.
Try to turn light's back on
Try to turn the lights on
Off to a good start.
Try to turn light's back on
The final hour part 2
I heard a scream, and decided it would be best to turn on the light's back on. I stumbled around for the light switch. I eventually found it and flipped it on. Kevin Hearty had a knife sticking out of his back.
Rick: OH MY GOD.
Mary: Holy shit!
Sydney started crying and cuddles Matthew. Everyone stares and Henry.
Henry: What?
Luke: Confess, Henry.
Henry: Hey, I didn't do shit. I was no where near the light switch when it went out, now was I?
Matthew: You could have done something to the electricity beforehand?
Henry: humph.
Matthew: Well, we better solve thi-
Luke: Wait, Matthew. Where's your knife?
They all looked down. His knife was gone.
Matthew: The killer could have just taken it! I mean, the person sitting closest to the light was Jake!
Jake Kutcher: Hey, I didn't do nothing, man. I just want to solve this.
Mary Martinez: Well, I think it was Jake. Who do you think it was, Rick?
Rick: Umm...
Jake, Henry or Matthew
Tell me what you guys think!
And see ya'll in 2 days!
Henry
Henry
Awesome work man!
Jake
Thanks!
Henry
The final hour part 3
Rick: I think it's Henry.
Matthew: Me too.
Then he elbows Henry in the face and Luke pins him to the table.
Luke: Confess, Henry.
Henry: I didn't do nothing.
Then the light's go out. A scream is heard. Then the light's go back on and Sydney is on the floor with a knife in her back. Matthew just stares in shock. Henry hasn't moved. Luke let's him go.
Henry: See? I didn't do shit.
Luke: Sorry... What should we do now, Rick?
Rick: Make a list of suspects or Call the police
Make a list of suspects
idk why, but i feel like calling the police will be a trap somehow
Great Job!