"The Walking Dead" Text Adventure Game by Glacial [DEMO OUT NOW] [REVIEWED BY SivD1]
Play Season 1 - Episode 1 Demo right here!
Currently rated 4.12/5 Stars. Woah, thanks!
Hope you enjoy!
Please play it, give feedback, comment, report bugs and other things to me.
Review please.
Thanks!
Strawpolls -
Final Choice in "The Walking Dead" Text Adventure [WARNING - SPOILERS IF YOU HAVEN'T YET PLAYED AND FINISHED THE TEXT ADVENTURE]
Enjoy!
SivD1's Review -
"You then hear a very loud scream.
"What the fuck was that?" Stephen asks.
"That was a scream!" You answer."
Sorry, I just had to post that, made me laugh pretty hard.
Anyways, review time. I see you have a story to tell, and I'm sure that the full episode will explore it deeply, but the demo didn't really cut it for me.
It got off to a bad start with the opening credits, to be honest. Though I don't see a problem with you doing them, I would rather you put them at the end, or possibly just make it one long line of text describing every credit. It kind of turns people off when they have to click continue over and over again (especially at the start!)
It's a demo, so I won't judge the amount of choices or the length. I'll be honest, Stephen seemed like kind of a dick for the time we've been with him. I don't mind having un-likeable characters in the series (especially in one such as The Walking Dead), but having a major character that you start off with (in this case, your brother), is a bit of an odd choice.
However, I didn't spot too many grammatical or spelling errors, so that's always a plus (though for the full version, I recommend going back and revising a bit). Also, the next time trailer was quite interesting, and seems that the full episode might hold some promise (whether all of the situations will actually happen, I will have to find out for myself).
Anyways, ok demo, but I'll check back when the whole thing's out. Good luck!
My response to SivD1's review -
Okay, thank you very much SivD1, you are my favorite text adventure creator, and I was inspired by you. I edited the dialog, shortened the intro, and other things, thanks a lot. ^^
Comments
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I liked it man. Good luck with the first release I look forward to it.
Actualy it was interesting...waiting for more!
Good work. My one suggestion is, maybe a bit more character development apart from dialogue is needed. Like when Stephen says he doesn't want to talk about his family you could say why in a paragraph below. And what is our name by the way?
Thanks for the feedback, in the full episode you find out his name, it's like in the game where Lee doesn't say his name until later.
Thanks a lot!
Thanks, I'll make more.
Aight.
Updated, fixed a broken link, fixed a few spelling/grammar errors, and edited some dialog.
Please report any bugs, errors, and other things. Also, give feedback, reviews, and comment please!
@SivD1 is also here i think
My game now has 4.12/5 stars, thanks for the rating guys!