If you enjoy my writing style (which, to be fair, is completely different in most of my stories) then I suggest checking this out. Keep in mind I won't be writing for it for a while, this is just for preparation.
Meeting Curtis Mitchell (if he is not there yet) Inez being a pain in the ass
9/10 cause i know you can do it better
Not enough Yolanda and Faith (joking). I don´t know , i i am not good at saying REAL bad things about other things/people except that i am angry or tired
Alright, so:
Favorite character in Chapter 2?
Predictions for the Drug Dealer's Group in later chapters?
Overall opinion on the cha… morepter?
Any criticisms? Please, if you have any, give them to me. All criticism just makes me a better writer.
1. Naturally I liked Joana a lot. However, Howard was also pretty cool and would be my second favourite and Inez' whining was quite funny. I'm looking forward to learn more about these in later chapter(s)
2. I guess the condition of her brothers will cause some serious problem between Joana and Omar and that there will also be tensions between Omar and Damian
3. It was really great. I liked the ambiguity with these drug dealers. I mean, dealing drugs is obviously bad and Omar seems like a horrible person, but Howard was pretty okay and Inez was more hilarious than threatening. Especially from the characters I liked this chapter far more than the first. While the characters in Chapter 1 have been okay, they have been overall good guys, while here we have a cast of potential bad guys, which is an interesting change.
4. Ugh, negative criticism? I have a hard time finding negative criticism. But I'm good at positive criticism! Like I said, the moral ambiguity of these drug dealers was great, that some of them seemed to be pretty decent, while others... well, not so much. I have to say, I somehow imagined Omar to look a bit like Gus from Breaking Bad I also liked your overall writing, which is nearly flawless.
Alright, so:
Favorite character in Chapter 2?
Predictions for the Drug Dealer's Group in later chapters?
Overall opinion on the cha… morepter?
Any criticisms? Please, if you have any, give them to me. All criticism just makes me a better writer.
Alright guys, one little problem that I pretty much did to myself. There are a ton of characters I don't know the age of. That's my fault, all in all. But, for the following characters could you guys who created them send me their ages? Thanks in advance.
Alright guys, one little problem that I pretty much did to myself. There are a ton of characters I don't know the age of. That's my fault, a… morell in all. But, for the following characters could you guys who created them send me their ages? Thanks in advance.
Lloyd Morgan
Zayne Madison
Faith
Fiona Roberts
Herman Avery
Cole Dawnson
Yolanda Rodrigruez
George Lottman
Christine Valeria Rodrigruez
Shouna
Lindsay
Violet
Jacob Miles
Trevor Moore
Dustin Clark
Sasha Mirnov
Edgar Sevilla
I will say mines:
Lloyd Morgan 14
Zayne Madison 15
Faith 31
Fiona Roberts 39
Herman Avery 30
Cole Dawnson 25
Yolanda Ro… moredriguez 24
Christine Valeria Rodriguez 15
Shouna 15
Lindsay 17
Violet 27
Trevor Moore 29
Dustin Clark 17
What I really want to know is what is heddle hair? I looked it up on Google and it's a part of a loom apparently. Seriously, all your characters have it. What is it?
What I really want to know is what is heddle hair? I looked it up on Google and it's a part of a loom apparently. Seriously, all your characters have it. What is it?
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[Nobody should go to the encampment]
[Both John and Joana should go]
I don't know. At least Howard seems to be pretty okay for a drug dealer. I'd like to give them a chance.
[Both Joana and John should go]
As one of my other stories comes to a close, I've already prepared for the next.
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/91597/60-000-000-world-war-2-interactive-story-character-submissions-open?new=1
If you enjoy my writing style (which, to be fair, is completely different in most of my stories) then I suggest checking this out. Keep in mind I won't be writing for it for a while, this is just for preparation.
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Awesome Chapter!!!!!!
Alright, so:
Favorite character in Chapter 2?
Predictions for the Drug Dealer's Group in later chapters?
Overall opinion on the chapter?
Any criticisms? Please, if you have any, give them to me. All criticism just makes me a better writer.
PS: Inez is a name for woman in spanish XD
1. Naturally I liked Joana a lot. However, Howard was also pretty cool and would be my second favourite and Inez' whining was quite funny. I'm looking forward to learn more about these in later chapter(s)
2. I guess the condition of her brothers will cause some serious problem between Joana and Omar and that there will also be tensions between Omar and Damian
3. It was really great. I liked the ambiguity with these drug dealers. I mean, dealing drugs is obviously bad and Omar seems like a horrible person, but Howard was pretty okay and Inez was more hilarious than threatening. Especially from the characters I liked this chapter far more than the first. While the characters in Chapter 1 have been okay, they have been overall good guys, while here we have a cast of potential bad guys, which is an interesting change.
4. Ugh, negative criticism? I have a hard time finding negative criticism. But I'm good at positive criticism! Like I said, the moral ambiguity of these drug dealers was great, that some of them seemed to be pretty decent, while others... well, not so much. I have to say, I somehow imagined Omar to look a bit like Gus from Breaking Bad
I also liked your overall writing, which is nearly flawless.
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AWESOME TRALIER!!
This story needs and desevers more readers!!!
Great part! I'm looking forward for this chapter!
And I agree with supersagig, it really deserves more readers...
Great chapter!
Alright guys, one little problem that I pretty much did to myself. There are a ton of characters I don't know the age of. That's my fault, all in all. But, for the following characters could you guys who created them send me their ages? Thanks in advance.
Lloyd Morgan
Zayne Madison
Faith
Fiona Roberts
Herman Avery
Cole Dawnson
Yolanda Rodrigruez
George Lottman
Christine Valeria Rodrigruez
Shouna
Lindsay
Violet
Jacob Miles
Trevor Moore
Dustin Clark
Sasha Mirnov
Edgar Sevilla
I will say mines:
Lloyd Morgan 14
Zayne Madison 15
Faith 31
Fiona Roberts 39
Herman Avery 30
Cole Dawnson 25
Yolanda Rodriguez 24
Christine Valeria Rodriguez 15
Shouna 15
Lindsay 17
Violet 27
Trevor Moore 29
Dustin Clark 17
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You have a lot of characters.
And more xd .
MORECHARACTERSIDON´TCAREHOWMANYIDOIT´SCOOL
What I really want to know is what is heddle hair? I looked it up on Google and it's a part of a loom apparently. Seriously, all your characters have it. What is it?
Welp , it meant something like not curly XD
Not my fault. It´s google trasnlator fault.
Really like it! Def' followin
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Awesome Chapter!!!!
Pretty interesting. You think any of you could go and check out my fan fiction too? The character submission is open right now.
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/92014/the-walking-dead-blood-character-submission-open
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[go to the theater]
Considering it's Breaking Bad, 10/10 -IGN
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/92420/river-that-s-run-red-interactive-twd-story-chatacter-sumbission-open
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[Fuckers] XD
Awesome Chapter!!!!
[ fuckers] yup.
Great chapter!!
[Fuckers]
[Fuckers]
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[Help Miranda] Matthew should get that pussy
Awesome Chapter!!!
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[Help Miranda]
Great chapter!