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  • Mark Logan

    ''I told Royland to take you to their finest chambers! It's not my fault Yara'' Mark yelled to Yara,Talon watched the two of them ''You really aren't the closest friend'' ''Shut up,you Tyrion face'' Talon looked down and then straight ahead,he hated being called that,because he really was like Tyrion,just taller and with black hair ''You know what Mark? I am tired of being under your command'' Yara told Mark,who looked at her with a shocked expression ''You are my sworn sword! You are forced to be under my command!'' Mark yelled at her,the two were interrupted by Talon ''Smithon is up ahead! My lord'' Talon told Mark,the three galloped with their horses until they reached the iron gates of Smithon ''Open the gate'' Mark told the guards waiting. He entered into his hold and wandered around the smallfolk's houses,when he was sure everything was okay with his people,he entered his castle

    ''My lord,if there is one thing i cannot understand is,why do you worry so much about your smallfolk?'' Talon asked ''They are his people,you idiot'' Yara told him ''To ensure they live well in my lands.'' Mark told his two sworn swords ''I would like to become a lord like you one day my lord'' Talon told Mark,making him slightly smile ''You would be a great lord,for sure'' Mark states and goes to knock on his sister Lauryn's door ''Lauryn,has your brother bothered you with the roasted duck story?'' Mark asks,and enters Lauryn's room ''He didn't bother me,he just sat down on the floor waiting for you'' Lauryn smiles,his brother Brennon asked ''Can i have some duck now?'' Mark nods ''Go into the great hall and sit down at the table,i will have someone bring it to you.'' Brennon thanked Mark and bolted out of his sister's room ''I will go to my chambers to rest,Lauryn, if you need anything just call Talon,he will take care of you'' Mark then exits Lauryn's room and tells Talon ''Stick around Lauryn,please,and go into the kitchens to get some roasted duck,if there is any left,or tell the cooks to cook some'' Mark then gives him 300 silver stags ''Pay the cooks,and take some for you'' Talon nods ''Will do!'' And cheerfully walks to the kitchens. ''And he was a minstrel!'' Mark thinks ''I saved him from a life of poverty,or i put a sword in his hand and killed his happy spirit?'' Mark walks to his chambers and enters them,he then grabs a goblet which was sitting on his personal ironwood table and wondered ''This is the last goblet of dornish wine,i have to enjoy it'' He sits down on his bed,and brings the goblet to his nose,inhaling the sweet,spicy aroma of the dornish wine,the most expensive one. He then gulped it down and laid down on his bed

    Mark was awoken five hours later,at midnight,by Talon ''M'lord! Your sister Lauryn wants to talk to you!'' He said in a cheerful voice,Mark groaned and got out of bed ''Sister,come in!'' He said,with a stressed tone,his sister came in the room and took his hand ''Come! I have a surprise for you!'' 'What? I don't under-'' ''Mark!'' A sweet voice shouted,it was Talia ''TALIA! HOW DID YOU COME HERE?'' Mark asked her,his face shocked ''Well,i asked Rodrik,about the betrothal...he said you could be a potentially ally and he agreed to the betrothal.'' Talia said,a bright smile lighting up her face ''Thank the gods!'' Mark said,and ran towards her,the two were then locked in a passionate kiss. Talia then took out a new leather bracelet she made for Mark and slid it on his hand ''MY LORD!'' Yara yelled at Mark and interrupted the two's kiss. Mark then balled his fists ''WHY IN THE SEVEN HELLS I CAN'T EVEN HAVE SOME PRIVACY WITH MY BETROTHED?'' He screamed,everybody in the room fell silent: His sister,Talia,Talon and Yara,the master at arms Orell. After some seconds,Talon broke the silence ''At least you chose a gorgeous betrothed'' He smiled,trying to lighten the mood,Mark looked at him,then at Yara ''What were you saying Yara?'' Yara breathes deeply ''It's Ludd Whitehill,he came here at Smithon with a hundred soldiers or so,he wants to install a garrison in this hold.'' Mark then punches the wall ''He thinks we won't take control of the situation like the forresters did?!'' ''We won't let him in!'' Talia shouted ''Talia,it's best that you stay here while i go negotiate with that fat pig out there. Rodrik could get angry if he discovers i let Ludd know where his sister is at'' Talia then looked down and said ''Do what you must,but i can't promise you that i will stay here hidden.'' Talia said,Mark shakes his head and says ''Talon,stay here to protect Talia,Yara come with me'' Talon nodded ''I will,my lord,for House Logan! I will kill anyone who stands between me and Talia!'' He cheerfully said and placed himself in front of Talia ''See! I am already her personal bodyguard!'' Talon said ''Try not to die,ok?'' Mark said,and gave Talon a longsword and a dirk. Mark hoped Talon would be alright,he owed him a lot. Talon became Mark's personal sworn sword by killing a soldier who wanted to murder Mark by bludgeoning him to death with his lute,he owed him a new lute too. Yara became his sworn sword by offering her support to house Forrester and protecting Mark's life. He owed those two a lot,they weren't only his sworn swords,but his friends. Good hearted people,who had good lives,he wanted them and their families to be safe. Mark was walking towards the gate of the castle,which were shut,to meet the man who murdered his father, Lord Adam of house Logan,and his eldest son Brandt. His hand was placed on his sword,Fury ''Greetings,Lord Whitehill'' Mark said,with gritted teeth ''Greetings to you Lord Logan!'' He taunted him,still sitting on his horse ''What do you want?'' Yara told Ludd ''You will give me half of these lands'' Mark's face widened ''Are you completely mad?!'' ''No,i am just giving you a chance! Roose Bolton will hear of this,unless you would-'' Mark stopped listening to him and paid attention to Yara ''This is not his biggest army,we could take those men down'' Mark stared at Ludd's 50 men,they haven't got fine armor,and the majority didn't even have a shield ''They probably are farmers,we can take them down with no big effort'' Yara gripped her sword,Mark turned towards his castle,which was 40 meters far from where he was.He could have used the smallfolk's houses as a cover from Whitehill's arrows,and he could kill the majority of men in that position,as the enemy was forced to pass through there to enter the castle,he glanced over to the castle's main door,which was opened ajar,Talon peeking out of it with Talia behind him,Mark looked at him and Talon closed the doors,running in the castle's kitchens,which were at the third floor. ''So,what are you going to do? Give me the lands or die here'' Ludd said,Mark turned to face him,he spit at him ''You'll die here'' At that moment Mark unsheathed Fury and thrusted at Whitehill's horse,killing him and making Ludd fall to the ground ''MEN! ATTACK!'' Mark ordered his men,and he saw Orell charging at the Whitehills screaming. He turned around and saw a couple of Whitehill soldiers slashing towards him,he dodged their shots and killed one of them by putting Fury through his head,another soldier was coming,he thrusted at Mark but he parried the shot and swinged his sword,slitting his throat. Mark was in the middle of the battle and Yara was nowhere to be seen,he noticed that Whitehill archers had positioned on his own battlements and started raining down arrows on his men. He ran towards a house to get to cover but a whitehill man pinned him down and took out a dirk,he stabbed Mark in the chest,but he didn't give up,he took his dirk,headbutted him and stuck the dirk in his throat. Clutching his wound,which was bearable because his armor took most of the damage. He realized he had to take down the archers,so he took out the ironwood shield he had on his back, and ran towards the archers,they shot at him but the shield protected him. When he got close enough he bashed the shield on one archer's head breaking his neck,then he slashed forward,mortally wounding three archers,but one archer shot him in the knee,Mark fell on the ground ''MY LORD!'' Orell shouted,killing all the archers with a few more men. Orell then ran towards Mark,and helped him up.Mark then pushed him away and ran towards the fray,he saw Yara being punched by Ludd Whitehill,she tried to fight back but he got the upper hand and started hitting her harder,Mark then fell to the ground,Fury sliding a couple meters further,Mark turned to the castle to see Harys,Ludd Whitehill's bodyguard,drawing his sword and getting closer to Talia,Talon then jumped between the two,wielding the sword in his hand. Mark's finger reached the hilt of the sword...

    [Try to save Yara] [Try to save Talon] [Run Away from the battle]

  • I just added it! :)

    Hey amongst the various religions could you add an option that makes my character an atheist? I can't really craft a character who believes in any god.

  • edited August 2015

    [Try to save Talon] My reasoning is that Mark would try to help out his betrothed. But man, its one of these choices. I feel like I'm playing a Telltale game right here.

  • [Try to save Talon]

  • [Try to save Talon]

  • [Try to save Talon] Good job as always!

    Mark Logan ''I told Royland to take you to their finest chambers! It's not my fault Yara'' Mark yelled to Yara,Talon watched the two of t

  • [Try to save Talon]

    Mark Logan ''I told Royland to take you to their finest chambers! It's not my fault Yara'' Mark yelled to Yara,Talon watched the two of t

  • [Try to Save Talon]

    Mark Logan ''I told Royland to take you to their finest chambers! It's not my fault Yara'' Mark yelled to Yara,Talon watched the two of t

  • Choices matter!

    FlareBattle posted: »

    [Try to save Talon] My reasoning is that Mark would try to help out his betrothed. But man, its one of these choices. I feel like I'm playing a Telltale game right here.

  • [Try to save Yara]

    I trust Talon to protect Talia, Yara is in a more dangerous situation in my opinion.

    Mark Logan ''I told Royland to take you to their finest chambers! It's not my fault Yara'' Mark yelled to Yara,Talon watched the two of t

  • [Try to save Talon] I can't wait for more Night's Watch chapters.

    Mark Logan ''I told Royland to take you to their finest chambers! It's not my fault Yara'' Mark yelled to Yara,Talon watched the two of t

  • [Try to save Yara]

    Mark Logan ''I told Royland to take you to their finest chambers! It's not my fault Yara'' Mark yelled to Yara,Talon watched the two of t

  • [try to save Talon]

  • edited August 2015

    Submitted my character , Hope it's a good one , Don't hesitate to tell me if something 's missing, Love what you're doing !!^^

    Oh and [try to save Talon]

  • thank you for submitting!

    alikir34 posted: »

    Submitted my character , Hope it's a good one , Don't hesitate to tell me if something 's missing, Love what you're doing !!^^ Oh and [try to save Talon]

  • maybe i'll write Kieron today,and tomorrow Brandon/Thomas! Then i will maybe introduce some new characters

    RhysAndLee posted: »

    [Try to save Talon] I can't wait for more Night's Watch chapters.

  • edited August 2015

    Mark Logan

    ''Come fight me,you cunt!'' Talon threatened Harys,who was rushing towards him,Mark took Fury and ran towards Talon,who was in front of Talia,Harys lunged at Talon but Mark got in front of Talon and parried the shot. Harys grunted and thrusted towards Mark,who raised his shield and blocked the shot,Mark then kicked Harys in the groin and slashed Fury towards Harys,who dodged the shot and punched Mark in the face,stunning him. Harys then kicked Mark's shield away and thrusted at Mark's chest,sticking his sword in Mark's abdomen. ''MY LORD!'' Talon screamed,and started swiping his sword at Harys,who was parrying his shots,then he thrusted so hard that Harys sword broke ''THIS IS FOR MARK!'' Talon then wielded his sword with two hands and he plunged the sword in Harys' chest. Mark was coughing up blood,he tried to cover his wound but he kept bleeding ''MARK!'' Talia screamed,kneeling beside Mark,holding his head up ''Don't leave me,please!'' Talia kept shaking him,Mark knew better than to die in his future betrothed's hands,so he got up covering his wound and walked over to Talon,who was cleaning up his sword with blood ''The lord of Smithon tried to kill the bodyguard of Ludd,instead he roughed him up!'' Talon singed in a merry tone,Mark then grabbed his sword Fury and walked outside the castle,his ears ringing,he saw his guards struggling with the Whitehill forces,he saw Ludd Whitehill punching Yara, Mark then ran towards Whitehill and grabbed him by the hair,he punched his nose and broke it in two spots,then he got his sword and cut his right hand off ''AWW!! HOW DARE YOU LITTLE CUN-'' Mark then stuck Fury in Ludd's balls ''FUUUUCK! HEEELP!'' Two soldiers came to his rescue,while Mark was fighting one of them,the other took Ludd on a horse and he escaped Smithon ''That fucker'' Thought Mark,but then he heard a faint voice ''My lord...or sh-should i say Ma-Mark'' Yara whispered,he knelt down and held her in his arms ''I'm afraid Mark'' She said,her bruised and swollen eyes gazing at Mark. She never called her lord Mark ''Don't worry Yara,i will save your life'' Mark said and lifted her up,but Yara squirmed against him and fell to the ground ''I don't deserve it'' Her eyes welling up ''Why Yara? You deserve to live and honor this house!'' Mark said ''I am the real reason they came here'' Yara closed her eyes in pain ''I told them you would accept,and when you didn't,i knew i made a mistake,betraying this house and you'' She said,her voice cracking. Mark sat on the ground beside her,his men were dying under the whitehill soldiers' swords,the bitter taste of betrayal invaded Mark's soul. ''I'm sorry,My lord.'' Yara said,slowly getting on her feet ''I made a mistake,but i will redeem myself'' She took her sword from the ground,and charged against a small group of soldiers who were trying to enter the castle,she stabbed one of the soldiers in the back,''GO GET TALIA MY LORD! GET HER TO SAFETY! I WILL COVER YOUR BACK!'' Yara shouted to Mark,who was still getting up ''TAKE THIS YOU WHITEHILL SHIT!'' She said,and parried a shot of the whitehill soldiers,then she stuck her sword in his throat,another whitehill soldier was coming from behind,Mark got up and the soldier stabbed Yara in the back with a knife,but Mark pushed the soldier away from her and beheaded him with Fury. ''I'LL TAKE ALL OF YOU DOWN!'' Yara shouted,removing the knife from her back and stabbing another whitehill soldier to death,she finally opened up a safe path to Talon and Talia,''Talia come here!'' Mark shouted,and Talia followed him,Talon was hiding in a corner with Lauryn and Brennon ''You too!'' Mark said to Talon,who jumped and followed him,his knees trembling. They walked out,Yara still following them,they got away from the battle and Mark took Talia by the hand ''I need you to trust me.'' He said,Talia's eyes were shining ''Get on this horse and go to Ironrath,you will be safe there'' Talia's eyes widened ''I want to stay with you! Don't make me go!'' Mark grabbed her waist and pulled her in a long kiss ''Trust me'' He then helped her up on the horse and turned to face Talon ''You follow her and make sure she arrives safe to Ironrath'' Talon looked at Mark ''What about you my lord?'' His eyes then widened,he understood ''I will make sure that Talia and your brothers arrive and stay in Ironrath,my lord.'' ''I want you to stay there too Talon,you will be safe too'' Talon started whimpering ''It's the first time someone cared about me!'' He smiled and got on his horse,Mark's two siblings were crying and wanted to say goodbye to their brother,but there was no time to waste ''Don't worry kids! We will go to Ironrath and stay there for some time! In the meanwhile,i will sing you a ballad about Lord Mark Logan's courage!'' Talon said to the kids in a cracking cheerful voice,then he started moving ''When Lord Mark saw Ludd on his battlements he went insane,he thought he was going to bring Ludd the pain! And so he did,he cut off his balls,for he was a true hero and Ludd was not! And then he killed his bodyguard,who thought he was going to rough our great lord up!'' Mark started crying and he couldn't hear Talon's voice,as he was now too far. Then Talia followed Talon,and Mark was left alone,he decided he was going to battle the whitehills to the very end. He ran into the fray and started slashing away at countless whitehill soldiers. Mark was then overpowered by an elite guard,who was trying to stick him with his dagger,but Yara killed the man swiftly,saving Mark ''My lord!'' She yelled,and helped him up ''WE STILL HAVE SOME FIGHT IN US!'' She said and ran into the fray again,Mark couldn't stay on his feet,he fell on the ground and he saw Orell being killed by a few archers,his men were screaming ''SHOW ME YOUR STRENGTH!'' Yara screamed,and killed Ludd Whitehill's other bodyguard,who was still in the fray,she then screamed and started hacking away at the man,when he died,she saw Ludd walking towards her,she brought up her sword and tried to kill him but he dodged and stabbed her with a knife,she was starting to get weaker,but she didn't give up. She headbutted whitehill,and stabbed him in the stomach with his own knife,he fell to the ground. She then raised her sword up and killed another whitehill soldier,but an archer shot her in the chest. She fell to the ground,and Mark realized that most of his men were dead,only 20 or less were still fighting. Yara crawled towards Mark ''Will you forgive me my lord?'' She asked,her eyes locked with Mark's ''Yes,Yara,i forgive you'' She smiled,a tear running down her cheek ''Thank you'' She said,then she got up and charged towards the enemy once again,taking down three soldiers,but she was easily overpowered and stabbed to death. When she fell to the ground,her eyes met Mark's,and remained fixated on them until her last living moment ''Thank you,my lord'' She said one last time,and she passed away.

    Ludd Whitehill got up and sneered at Mark ''You! You did this to me!'' He pointed at his bloodstained crotch. He then stabbed Mark in the stomach ''This is what happens when you screw up with me. Mark's vision got blurry ''See that he doesn't die,and put him in my finest dungeons'' He says to a guard,Mark can't help but think he'll never see Talia again.

  • I didn't want to feel bad about Yara but

    Mark Logan ''Come fight me,you cunt!'' Talon threatened Harys,who was rushing towards him,Mark took Fury and ran towards Talon,who was in

  • The feelings in this chapter, if Mark dies from the injury, no just no

    Mark Logan ''Come fight me,you cunt!'' Talon threatened Harys,who was rushing towards him,Mark took Fury and ran towards Talon,who was in

  • Finaly Harys got what he deserved.

  • I just did :) I Updated this chapter's ending i couldn't before because my connection was bad but check out the ending!

  • I just updated the ending see it!

    The feelings in this chapter, if Mark dies from the injury, no just no

  • I just updated the ending!

    Finaly Harys got what he deserved.

  • what has just happened...

    Mark Logan ''Come fight me,you cunt!'' Talon threatened Harys,who was rushing towards him,Mark took Fury and ran towards Talon,who was in

  • :O

    Mark Logan ''Come fight me,you cunt!'' Talon threatened Harys,who was rushing towards him,Mark took Fury and ran towards Talon,who was in

  • Wow, I didn't expect all that happens in that post at all ! :o

    Ludd's balls being cut off, I would love to see that happen in episode 6 of the game. ^^

    Mark Logan ''Come fight me,you cunt!'' Talon threatened Harys,who was rushing towards him,Mark took Fury and ran towards Talon,who was in

  • Martin would be proud, good writing.

    I just updated the ending!

  • I've been reading this for some time and I've decided to send in a character. My brain was kinda mushy writing this so excuse me if some grammar is messed up or something, good job on these chapters though, you've had me hooked!

  • Liked this chapter, keep up the good work!

    Mark Logan ''Come fight me,you cunt!'' Talon threatened Harys,who was rushing towards him,Mark took Fury and ran towards Talon,who was in

  • Martin is my bro

    Martin would be proud, good writing.

  • Yup...

    what has just happened...

  • Thank you! It means a lot!

    WhatAJoker posted: »

    I've been reading this for some time and I've decided to send in a character. My brain was kinda mushy writing this so excuse me if some grammar is messed up or something, good job on these chapters though, you've had me hooked!

  • (I suggest you listen to a Night's Watch soundtrack while reading this chapter)

    Thomas Waters

    ''BRANDON!!!!'' Thomas screamed,picking his dragonglass up and impaling the White Walker from behind,he made a screeching sound,his dead cold eyes burned into Thomas' soul,he then fell to his knees and literally broke. ''I BROKE HIM BRAN! YOU GET THE JOKE? NO?'' Thomas pants,Brandon hugs him ''Thank you Brother'' Thomas hugs back ''Don't worry!'' ''THEY'RE COMING CLOSER!!'' A man with long hair in a ponytail ran to the two,who were still hugging ''WHAT ARE YOU DOING? HILDA CAN'T HOLD THEM OFF FOR TOO LONG!'' He pointed at his two handed axe,a wight was coming from behind,but he turned around and stuck Hilda in his brain. ''Let's run to Castle Black! We've no time to waste!'' The man said,they ran away from the wights until they saw a small burned house,and they decided to enter ''Come on! Be fast or they'll spot us!'' The man said ''Here,take Hilda'' He said to Brandon,who smashed the door in with it ''You are strong,maybe we'll survive with you'' The man stated,then he took Hilda,Thomas scouted the house ''It's clear'' He said,and the two entered the house,Thomas then pushed a burned wardrobe where the door was at,making the house pitch black. ''Someone got a torch?'' Brandon said,Thomas thought about the roasted duck he gave the woman,he still had the towel with some leftover grave and fat of the duck,he grabbed it,and he lit it on fire with Brandon's candle,then he threw it on the ground. The light was dim,but comfortable,the little windows that were to the sides of the door were still open,so Brandon decided to close them,the only light in the house was now the towel's. ''I am Kevin Harp'' The man said,the two shook his hand ''I am Thomas,he is Brandon'' Thomas presented himself and Brandon ''Anyone got something to eat?'' Kevin said ''Nothing,Thomas could have something left,he brought the food'' Brandon said to Thomas,who was gazing at an obscure part of the house,the men now could smell something rotten ''Tom? Have you got something left?'' Thomas was still fixated on that corner,it was like he was in a trance ''Thomas,we would like you to answer'' Brandon pointed out ''Bring the towel over here.'' Thomas said,his voice trembling,dreading that the towel would have revealed what he feared in that corner ''How can i do that? It's on fire'' Brandon said,and crossed his arms ''Drag it with your foot,bloody idiot'' He turned to Brandon,then he continued staring at the corner,Brandon dragged the towel close to the corner with his foot,revealing the old woman from before,dead,her eyes still opened and her body opened,it looked like it was eaten from the inside ''God...'' Thomas said,and covered his mouth ''It was the woman from before'' He said,looking at the woman,the roasted duck was still lying on her hands ''We'll have to eat that'' Thomas said,Brandon turned to him ''Are you serious?'' He said,and grabbed the duck from the woman's hands,he struggled with the woman's fingers,almost as if she wouldn't let go of the duck. ''Guys,are we going to stay here or not? I am uncomfortable here'' Kevin said,Brandon sliced the duck in pieces with his sword and ate one piece ''Just don't taste it and you won't throw up'' He said,giving the bloodstained pieces at his brothers too,Kevin chewed on it cheerfully ''It's not that bad'' The two pointed out the obvious ''YOU GOT THE LESS BLOODSTAINED PIECE YOU LUCKY SHIT!'' They screamed in unison,Kevin shut both of their mouths ''Who knows if they're gone? They could be looking for us'' The two nodded and shut up

    When the three young men finished nibbling on their duck,Thomas sat up and took out the wine flask which was strapped to his padded armor ''Want some?'' He said to the three,then gave the flask to Brandon ''Yes,thank you'' Brandon smiled,and brought the flask to his mouth,letting the sweet drink warm his body,he then passed it to Kevin ''Thank you'' He said to Brandon,then drank some,he then passed it to Thomas, who drank some,and then strapped the flask to his armor,his soul warmed at the thought that he could trust these two men,he always valued friendship as a precious thing,and he was glad to have those two men cover his back,while he covered theirs.The three men then laid on the ground ''Brandon could we switch places?'' Thomas said to Brandon,he was scared of sleeping in front of the old woman's body,so he asked his brother instead. ''Ready your blade Brandon'' Thomas warned him ''Why?'' Brandon asked ''They could still be looking for us'' He said,then the three men fell asleep,hugged to one another.

    Six hours later Thomas woke up,he didn't want to wake his brothers up so he got up and paced around the house. ''We should go to Castle Black,this morning we are going to get moving'' He thought,then jumped at a creeking sound. He then decided to sat on a wooden chair,to make sure he was the one producing the sound. After two minutes of sharp listening,Thomas heard another creak. ''How could it be? Brandon and Kevin are not moving... He tried to shake Brandon awake but to no avail,his eyes then gazed towards the woman,and with horror Thomas noticed she fell over,and her eyes seemed to follow Thomas around the room. ''There is no wind,how did she fell down'' He wondered. He then heard a groan,and a growl. He looked at the woman and her eyes lit up,they were dark blue,and they were moving. The woman,now a wight,got up and growled at Thomas,who backed away from her,but his cloak caught fire on the towel,which was still burning,he then took his cloak off and threw it on the ground. The woman charged at him and he screamed,waking up his brothers ''Thomas! Hold on!'' Kevin said,he then grabbed Hilda and stuck it on the woman's back,who didn't flinch. Thomas then drew his sword and stuck it in the woman's stomach,making her stumble,he kicked her away and grabbed his cloak,he threw it at her but she dodged it. He then took his dragonglass dagger out and stabbed her again,she screamed and she fell to the ground,breaking in pieces. The three were panting ''Are you okay Tom?'' Brandon said ''I'm fine Bran'' He said,catching his breath. Kevin spoke up ''If the woman became a wight...that means there's a White Walker nearby!'' He freaked out ''We have to get out of here'' Thomas said and bolted towards the wardrobe sealing the exit,but stopped when the towel and his cloak stopped burning. ''The cloak was just lit on fire,guys move!'' He said,and pushed the furniture out of the way. ''AH!'' He screamed in horror,when he saw that a frozen spear was poking out of the wardrobe. He grabbed the spear and pulled it,but something was holding on to it on the other side of the wardrobe. ''HELP ME!'' Thomas said to the two,they helped him pull the spear,they were all knocked back when they saw the spear came loose. Thomas grabbed the spear and put himself in front of the wardrobe ''You two push it out of the way'' He said,gripping the spear harder. Brandon and Kevin started to push the wardrobe out of the way. Thomas saw the White Walker behind the wardrobe and plunged the spear in his stomach. The white walker looked at him,he pulled the spear out and he grabbed it. Thomas then unsheathed his dragonglass dagger and lunged at him,he dodged,and almost immediately plunged the spear in Thomas' chest. Thomas covered his wound,he could feel it getting colder,his vision blurred,but he threw the dragonglass dagger to the White Walker,he cheered when it stuck between the White Walker's eyes. Brandon grabbed the dragonglass and gave it back to Thomas,who slightly smiled at him then the three bolted out of the house. When they got out they were blinded for seconds,as the sharp light was too bright. Kevin saw a wight getting closer to him,and he beheaded him with Hilda,the three ran ''Brandon turn around!'' Thomas said to him. Brandon turned around and he saw hundreds of wights jumping from a small mountain towards them. When they hit the ground they remained still ''They all died! Fuck you cunts! You should try being more cunning!'' Kevin said,then all the wights got up at the same time ''FUCK!'' Kevin screamed and the three ran as fast as they could,Thomas could feel the sharp winds of winter penetrate his skin,getting inside his body and freezing it. They were getting close to a small pier,with a boat waiting to be used. Thomas continued to run,but his body gave out,he fell to the ground. ''Thomas! Don't give up just now! We're almost there!'' Brandon offered his hand to his friend and helped him up. Thomas continued to run,but he spot a jar of wildfire sitting in a cart. He didn't know why it was there and if someone placed it,he just threw it as far as he could and watched as the jar broke and green fire spreaded to all the wights,setting them all on fire,creating a fire wall. ''Good job,Thomas! We are there!'' Thomas dropped to his knees,he fought to get to his feet but couldn't,his knees gave out. He couldn't move. Brandon was already on the boat,but he got off and ran towards Thomas ''Hold on my friend,you can do it!'' He helped Thomas up and made him lean on him. Kevin,who is very slim,ran towards the two ''I'll take him!'' ''You can't lift him up!'' Kevin pushed Brandon away and lifted Thomas up,they ran to the boat and they put Thomas on the boat. Brandon was pushing the boat in the water,when he was done,Frostfinger jumped out of his hiding spot,which was an old tree,and ran towards Brandon ''YOU RAN AWAY FROM THE BATTLE! YOU DISHONORED THE NIGHT'S WATCH!'' He shouted,and drew his sword. ''BRANDON! GET ON THE BOAT! YOU'RE GONNA DIE!'' Thomas yelled,but Brandon didn't want to ''I ALWAYS WAITED FOR THIS MOMENT!'' He drew his sword,Ice Star,which was glowing more than ever,and thrusted at Frostfinger,who parried the shot and tried to stab Brandon,but he ducked and swung the sword at his feet,making him fall. Frostfinger didn't give up,he tripped Brandon over,who fell face first in the water,then Frostfinger kept his head underwater,trying to drown him ''BRANDON!!!'' Thomas screamed,he was unable to help his friend,but he saw a bow and three arrows sitting in the boat,he took them and shot the first arrow,which landed on Frostfinger's shoulder,he grabbed it and this gave Brandon time to recover,he got up and stabbed Frostfinger in the stomach,then he left him to die and started swimming towards the boat,the icy cold water made his armor heavier and made it harder to swim,but Brandon pushed his muscles to the limit and was now getting closer to the boat ''Grab my hand!'' Kevin grabbed his hand,but then Brandon went underwater,yanking Kevin out of the boat too. Thomas screamed and put his head underwater, he could see dead wights in the lake,grabbing Kevin and Brandon's shoulders,a hand grabbed Thomas' throat and yanked him under too. He saw a wight screaming in his face,he pushed him away,the water making his movements slower and his strength weaker. He saw Kevin swimming up and getting on the boat,he grabbed his hand and Kevin threw him onboard. ''BRANDON!'' Thomas screamed,slowly looking at the water,they heard a loud thud on the boat's left side,and saw Brandon clutching his head ''Fuck,that was awful'' He said,getting on the boat. The three laughed and started rowing. Three hours later they could see Castle Black,they were happy they got back home. ''Hey guys,since someone will have to replace Frostfinger,who do you think should?'' They talked about this,until they reached land. But one thing looked off...

    Castle Black was being attacked by the Wildlings.

  • Nice chapter! I look forward to more!

    (I suggest you listen to a Night's Watch soundtrack while reading this chapter) Thomas Waters ''BRANDON!!!!'' Thomas screamed,picking

  • (I suggest you listen to Rains Of Castamere instrumental)

    Kieron Cantell

    ''Of course,my queen'' Kieron said ''I will take part in your feast'' Cersei smiles ''Very good. Go fetch your best clothes and come here afterwards'' She clasps her hands together and turns towards the throne. Kieron exits the Red Keep and goes to his chambers,trying to avoid Margaery,but it seemed she disappeared. When he arrived to his chambers he checked his wardrobe and found a red dress with the Lannister lion insignia on it,he took off his armor and put on the dress. He always felt better when he wore normal dresses,it made him feel lighter,and in fact he was. Before going to the Red Keep,he went to a goldsmith and bought a golden necklace with the Lannister Lion,the homage to House Lannister,he thought. He then walked to the Red Keep,he sensed a merry ambiance,almost like the one he found in Robert Baratheon's feasts,he remembers the good times when Robert would invite him in the castle,with other smallfolk to eat,talk and be merry. Unfortunately,when Robert died those feasts were no more. Joffrey prefers to torture people,not invite them at feasts,which is why Kieron was suspicious.

    Kieron ran into Mira on the way to the Red Keep,she smiled ''Kieron! You look really charming with this dress! It really brings out your blonde hair'' She says,getting closer to him,he kisses her on the lips ''Thank you,i was just going to the Red Keep'' She wipes her lips ''The Red Keep? You must really be in trouble'' Mira's expression getting worried ''No! I was just invited to a private feast with the Lannister family!'' He smiles ''Then,i repeat it. You really are in trouble.'' Mira says,an expression of worry mixed with fear on her face'' ''We'll see! I guess'' He says,then he hugs Mira and walks happily to the Red Keep. When he opened the door King Joffrey was waiting for him sitting on the throne. Kieron knelt in front of the king,the king smiled ''Rise. I was waiting for you'' Kieron nods ''I am late,your grace?'' King Joffrey shakes his head ''No,no no you aren't'' He then gets up and walks up to Kieron,Joffrey was smaller than him,but not by much. ''Did you ever wonder what it would be like sitting on the Iron Throne?'' Joffrey asks Kieron ''No,my lord,why?'' He asks ''Don't answer me with a question. I want you to sit on it'' A crazed look forms on his eyes ''My-My Lord,i don't know if the queen will appro-'' '' YOUR KING WANTS YOU TO! DON'T TALK ABOUT THE QUEEN!'' Cersei,who now came into the Throne room,had a slightly annoyed expression on her face. Kieron slowly approaches the Iron Throne,and sits on it. He feels all the swords and a slight sense of power. ''Well how is it?'' Joffrey asks ''It's quite uncomfortable,i wonder how you can sit on it more than five minutes'' Cersei laughs,Kieron now gets off the iron throne and Cersei gets closer to him,she takes his hand ''Come,i'll bring you to the whole family'' Kieron doesn't know why, 'whole family' makes him uneasy. After 5 minutes of walking,Cersei reaches a room (It's the room shown in the show,where Joffrey dines with Margaery,Cersei and Loras.) that had a table in the center and it was in the open,Kieron thought King's Landing was amazing at night,and so it was. ''Well met, Kieron Cantell'' Tywin Lannister says,cracking a polite smile ''Hi Kieron! It's really nice to meet you!'' A cunning voice chimes to Kieron,it was Tyrion Lannister,the little friendly dwarf,who succeeded in obtaining a couple of glares from Tywin and Cersei ''Well met, Lord Tyrion'' Kieron smiled and bowed down to the dwarf,who genuinely smiled ''Well Met, Lord Tywin Lannister of Casterly Rock'' He bowed to Tywin,who strangely nodded ''Your daughter,the Queen Regent Cersei Lannister invited me at this feast'' Kieron pointed out,Tywin laughed ''I already know that'' He said,then leaned back in his chair ''Well,now that you're here-'' Tywin was interrupted by Margaery entering the room ''Kieron? You were supposed to come to talk to me! Where are you when i need you?'' She yelled in Kieron's face,then she nervously walked to her place at the table. ''Where should i sit,my King?'' Joffrey shrugs ''You decide.''

    IMPORTANT CHOICE

    [Sit near Cersei] [Sit near Tywin] [Sit near the King] [Sit near Tyrion]

    This is a short chapter because tomorrow i will write the end of Kieron's first chapter! So be sure to vote and don't worry,after Kieron i will introduce a new character!

  • [Sit Near Cersei]

    (I suggest you listen to Rains Of Castamere instrumental) Kieron Cantell ''Of course,my queen'' Kieron said ''I will take part in your

  • Wondering who the new character is and where they are set... Would love to see a chapter over the seas, maybe in Meereen or Essos :)
    [Sit near Cersei]

    (I suggest you listen to Rains Of Castamere instrumental) Kieron Cantell ''Of course,my queen'' Kieron said ''I will take part in your

  • Sit near Tywin

    (I suggest you listen to Rains Of Castamere instrumental) Kieron Cantell ''Of course,my queen'' Kieron said ''I will take part in your

  • [Sit near Tywin]

    Wow, it's actually a harder choice than I thought ! I really don't know what will be the consequences. :o

    It makes me think about an other difficult table choice in TWD S2. ^^

  • After countless minutes thinking about this... [Sit near Cersei] sorrynotsorry

    (I suggest you listen to Rains Of Castamere instrumental) Kieron Cantell ''Of course,my queen'' Kieron said ''I will take part in your

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