Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
This is kinda hard and interesting decision, even if it probably isn't a major one Revealing the identity is not the right choice, Argella wouldn't want that. Letting Argella deal with him is of course an option, but then again if your princess is being treated like that you shouldn't just stand and do nothing. So talk or punch. Hmm... I'm pretty sure Torrence is not going to listen to Drent at this situation so...
[Punch Torrence] I just hope Torrence won't be too mad and Argella is okay with this kind of approach
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
I thought a bit about this one. As much as I think he deserves a punch, I don't think it's the best thing to do with everyone else around. I doubt that Torrence will listen to Drent, as noticed by other readers. And revealing her identity just doesn't seem like the right thing to do.
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
Yep, that's exactly her and she gets only worse when there are more people around her. However, at least her interaction with Drent at the beginning of this part was meant to show that she is not as superficial or catty as she appears to be on the surface. Despite some serious flaws, she has more than just a few positive qualities as well, but her most obvious character traits are definitely her arrogance and her bossiness. Though, I can tease that she will slowly get a lot better.
Thanks a lot It's great that so many people are still here from the very beginning and that many new people are still interested in joining the story. I'm very excited to reveal what I have planned for the parts over the next 1000 comments, I hope that everyone will still be here when this story reaches 4000 comments
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
thought that is his accent... try to read his text loud using Mario accent and you'll see what I mean.
Nobody and no-one will touch my princess [Punch Torrence]! Argella it's damn sweet and hot, but her story is sad. Nevermind I'm jealous because of that lucky bastard that she'll marry.
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
Thanks a lot It's great that so many people are still here from the very beginning and that many new people are still interested in joining… more the story. I'm very excited to reveal what I have planned for the parts over the next 1000 comments, I hope that everyone will still be here when this story reaches 4000 comments
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
Is a fanfic, it may happen, Drent will get over her, but as I know Liquid... he follow same pattern that is in the original story, it can be affection but she won't be "rollup", it may never be.
Drent
Drent took a deep breath as he looked into Argella's deep blue eyes. “It is Garen”, he revealed. “He repeatedly stated that he is d… moreispleased with the way you handle things here, my princess” Argella raised her eyebrows, looking slightly surprised at this reveal. “Garen?”, she asked. “This is unexpected. I never thought a mercenary would have an opinion at all” She leant forward, slightly smiling at him. “Thank you for your honesty, Drent. I appreciate it. Would you like some more wine?”
Drent gave her a slight nod and allowed to show the hint of a smile. “It would be a pleasure, my princess”, he answered. Argella looked at the carafe and it took Drent a moment to realize that she had no intentions of pouring him another glass herself. “You know what... keep the carafe. Arbor White... not exactly my favourite”, the princess said.
“Mine neither”, Drent agreed. “Arbor Red is clearly the best wine in this world” Argella gave him a … [view original content]
Well it's ok^^ I mean she dont have to change. Arrogand characters are so important in got and it fits her character. I mean of course she is arrogand: She is the Princess.
Yep, that's exactly her and she gets only worse when there are more people around her. However, at least her interaction with Drent at the b… moreeginning of this part was meant to show that she is not as superficial or catty as she appears to be on the surface. Despite some serious flaws, she has more than just a few positive qualities as well, but her most obvious character traits are definitely her arrogance and her bossiness. Though, I can tease that she will slowly get a lot better.
One Act, plus one finished chapter, and all the previous parts in this chapter.
You can read the summary here:
Book 1, Act 1: https://… moredocs.google.com/document/d/1v6k8HiFTEGK26_utnKmp_HRAigZ4uKZcUTcjt0a_wls/edit?usp=sharing
Book 1, Act 2: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bphe-q97n5370UtZrvhlWI_8qv36vAPIjatwN15yhZI/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
[Punch Torrence] too much alcohol, just take him inside tent and put him to sleep by a fist, he won't remember next morning :-D
(Try to break up the situation by talking)
[Let Argella deal with Torrence]
Hell yea Baby!
Come on guys lets punsh the shit out of him!
This is kinda hard and interesting decision, even if it probably isn't a major one
Revealing the identity is not the right choice, Argella wouldn't want that. Letting Argella deal with him is of course an option, but then again if your princess is being treated like that you shouldn't just stand and do nothing. So talk or punch. Hmm... I'm pretty sure Torrence is not going to listen to Drent at this situation so...
[Punch Torrence] I just hope Torrence won't be too mad and Argella is okay with this kind of approach
[Punch Torrence] Garen isn't going to take some swine having his hands all over his biat- I mean Princess.
[Punch Torrence]
Happy 3000 comments.
And to many more!
Yea!
[Try to break up the situation by talking]
[Punch Torrence]
[Try to break up the situation by talking] Doubt it will work. But maybe?
Great part
[Let Argelia deal with Torrence]
[Let Argella deal with Torrence]
I thought a bit about this one. As much as I think he deserves a punch, I don't think it's the best thing to do with everyone else around. I doubt that Torrence will listen to Drent, as noticed by other readers. And revealing her identity just doesn't seem like the right thing to do.
[Punch Torrence] I can't see the other choices having a desirable outcome besides... this way we get to punch a douchebag!
[Punch Torrence]
[Try to break up the situation by talking]
I somehow dont like Argella. She is so troublesome. She is like the typ of girl who knows everything better. I dont like this^^
[Punch Torrence] For the greater good.
[Punch Torrence]
Yep, that's exactly her and she gets only worse when there are more people around her. However, at least her interaction with Drent at the beginning of this part was meant to show that she is not as superficial or catty as she appears to be on the surface. Despite some serious flaws, she has more than just a few positive qualities as well, but her most obvious character traits are definitely her arrogance and her bossiness. Though, I can tease that she will slowly get a lot better.
Thanks a lot
It's great that so many people are still here from the very beginning and that many new people are still interested in joining the story. I'm very excited to reveal what I have planned for the parts over the next 1000 comments, I hope that everyone will still be here when this story reaches 4000 comments 
that will impress the princes
[Punch Torrence] F*** this guy!
Fucking Torrence, it sound like:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZhadLMDWcGA
thought that is his accent... try to read his text loud using Mario accent and you'll see what I mean.
Nobody and no-one will touch my princess [Punch Torrence]! Argella it's damn sweet and hot, but her story is sad. Nevermind I'm jealous because of that lucky bastard that she'll marry.
You should focus on quality instead of quantity it can be over 9000 comments if you want but it won't matter if they are just "empty" or nonsense.
DRENTxARGELLA calling it right now!
Hopefully Drent gets to tap that before Aegon's half-brother Orys does.
Is a fanfic, it may happen, Drent will get over her, but as I know Liquid... he follow same pattern that is in the original story, it can be affection but she won't be "rollup", it may never be.
[Punch Torrence]
Well it's ok^^ I mean she dont have to change. Arrogand characters are so important in got and it fits her character. I mean of course she is arrogand: She is the Princess.
How long storywise has it been from the Prologue to the latest part?
One Act, plus one finished chapter, and all the previous parts in this chapter.
You can read the summary here:
Book 1, Act 1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1v6k8HiFTEGK26_utnKmp_HRAigZ4uKZcUTcjt0a_wls/edit?usp=sharing
Book 1, Act 2: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bphe-q97n5370UtZrvhlWI_8qv36vAPIjatwN15yhZI/edit?usp=sharing
I meant like how many days
I'm wondering... are you going to eventually stop taking submitted characters? Surely eventually you'll have too many characters.
I think it is like 2 weeks and few days :-)
December 27 is when it came out. So yeah. I'm too lazy to find out how many days.
EDIT: Oh you mean the story days. Yeah I don't know. 2 weeks at least.
I thought that to I just wanted confirmation.