Oh, and also I forgot to add in the document that my character got her scar when a guy tried to rape and murder her at a bar in her late teens, and he sliced her face with a dagger.
[To serve this great House even more.]
[Largonis']
Okay, I just binge read all of the previous chapters, and my lord. I think I'm addicted… more.
In all seriousness though, I absolutely love this story! The characters and everything are so fantastic. I'm so excited to finally get to see the POV of a Lannister, this is surely going to be a hell of a ride. Honestly, I don't even know which choice is the best. I mean, after all it's Cersei, and she's very unpredictable. Loved this chapter a lot though!
Oh, and also, I submitted my own character. This is too cool to pass on!
Oh, and also I forgot to add in the document that my character got her scar when a guy tried to rape and murder her at a bar in her late teens, and he sliced her face with a dagger.
''The only thing i want is to serve this great house even more.'' Largonis said to his cousin,Cersei,who was taken aback ''You've already been serving this house for a very long time,Largonis. You spent time Jousting,fighting,and killing for us. You almost died in Oxcross,do you remember?'' Cersei asked his cousin Largonis,who nodded ''I know,but you could have me doing something safer.'' Largonis said,he was a truthful person,and he didn't want to get back on the battlefield. ''Perhaps. Perhaps not.'' Cersei said,and cupped her hands together,then she caressed Largonis' long blonde curls. They were just like Loras Tyrell's but blonde. ''You are doing this house a great service,all i ask is that you be safe and continue to serve our house.'' Cersei says and lightly kisses Largonis' cheek. ''But if your desire is to do this,so i shall make it come true.'' She says ''You will be sent to the Dreadfort,where you will become a messenger,between me and Roose Bolton,the Warden of the North.'' She said and looked at Largonis,taking a sip of wine from the cup she was holding. ''You're a brave man,Largonis,i trust you to do this with discretion. You can decide either to stay here,or accept my offer. I would like to hear your choice for tomorrow,in the mean time,i would like you to teach Tommen some other moves.'' ''I will do that.'' She then stepped closer to Largonis,and took his hands in hers. ''You aren't forced to go there,i can easily find someone else. You always can stay here and find some other things to do.'' ''How come you aren't forcing me?'' Largonis said,confused ''I don't want your blood on my hands,family is family.'' She said ''I never heard this tone of voice from her.'' He thought. Her voice had a deep,truthful tone to it,and that was strange. ''I'll think about this.'' ''You can always choose to go somewhere else.'' She said ''Thank you,Cersei.'' ''Come speak to me when you made up your mind.'' She said,and smiled at him,then she stepped out of his rooms,and left Largonis to the silence of his room.
He sat down on his bed,and sighed. ''The biggest task i want to accomplish is to prove my loyalty and importance to my family. I want to prove that i'm not a simple cousin. What should i do?'' He thought and drank some wine. Then he heard someone knocking on his door ,he got up from his bed,and walked to the door ''Come in'' he said as he opened the door,and he was greeted by a blonde haired woman. ''Well met,i am Brienne of Tarth,Ser Jaime sent me here.'' ''I am Largonis Lannister,son of Kevan Lannister and cousin of the Queen Regent Cersei.'' The woman was a bit taller than Largonis,who had to look up at her ''What did he want?'' Largonis asked,while letting her in his room. ''To pay my respects,i've been told you're a rather important member of the Lannister family.'' He felt satisfied ''Thank you,my lady.'' He said and bowed to her,she shook her head ''I'm not a lady. Get up'' She said,and he got up ''I've been told that you are renowned for your great sword skills,and i would like to see them.'' She said,and she gestured him to follow her. He followed her and she brought him outside the Red Keep,on a small yard facing the sea (This is the same place Bronn teaches Jaime how to fight with his left hand) And unsheathes her sword. He then unsheathes his,but this time he didn't have a hand behind his back. She then swung at him,and he parried the shot,then he quickly raised his sword and slashed at her,but she dodged the shot,ducking. She then hit Largonis in his crotch with the hilt of her sword. He then gasped and he stepped away from her. She then thrusted her sword at him again,but he easily dodged it,then he wielded his sword with two hands. ''That's how i prefer to handle mine,it's more comfortable.'' Brienne says,and swung at him. He parried the shot and punched Brienne in the face,she staggered backwards ''That wasn't fair.'' She said ''This wasn't either.'' Largonis said and pointed at his crotch,then he swung at her. She parried the shot but he kept swinging at her,until he disarmed her by forcing the hilt of her sword out of her hands. He took the two swords together.
''You fight pretty well.'' Largonis says,and shakes her hand. Then he looks at his sword ''That sword is beautiful...It really seems like Valyrian Steel.'' He says,and she smiles ''It is. It's beautiful isn't it?'' She says ''Can i?'' He asks,and she nods. He then wields her sword and looks at it pretty closely. The steel was shining,reflecting the hot sun of King's Landing off every angle. The hilt of her sword was made out of molten gold,and a red gem was stuck in the center of it. He was pretty jealous of her sword. He wanted a sword made out of Valyrian Steel,which was folded back on itself many times,making the sword as sharp as a pike's end,but much faster. He gave the sword back to her ''It's a really beautiful sword. I would like to have one of it myself one day.'' She gave him a weak smile ''Where did you find it? I'm sure there could be others around.'' He said,willing to look for one of them. ''House Stark's valyrian sword Ice was melted down by Tywin Lannister,and my sword was forged in that melted steel.'' Largonis' face changed from stupefied to horrified ''This isn't meant to be yours.'' She shook her head ''I swore my loyalty to Catelyn Stark,i'm not an enemy of the Starks.'' ''Catelyn Stark is now dead,her throat opened,probably in some of the carts full of dead bodies outside The Twins.'' ''They couldn't find her. It seems like she escaped.'' Largonis was now confused ''It can't be...'' He said,remembering seeing her dead body in a body cart outside the Twins,when he paid a visit to Lord Frey. ''I do not know what is going to happen,but the Freys better start to worry about bad luck.'' ''I...guess i will be going now,thank you for the sparring.'' He said,starting to walk away. ''Largonis'' She called him,and he turned to her ''I...have to go on a journey. To avenge someone.'' Largonis then started to listen carefully ''You seem like a truthful person,and a honorable knight. That's why i'm asking you to come with me.'' ''Me?'' ''I need a helping hand. You seem like a skilled warrior.'' Largonis then sighed ''I...will need to think about it.'' He said and started to walk towards the Red Keep. The last thing he heard of Brienne was ''I'll be waiting here,when you make up your mind come to me. I hope you will.''
He entered his chambers and laid on his bed. After countless hours of thinking,he made up his mind...
[Accept Cersei's Offer.][Ask Cersei to go somewhere else (If you choose this,write in the comments where you want him to go. Literally everywhere.)][Accept to go with Brienne. Lie to Cersei about where you are going][Accept to go with Brienne. Tell Cersei the truth.]
So guys! Part is over! Did you like it? I hope you did!
I'm doing Brandon's Thomas and Kevin's part next,because they are never picked. (Sad song)
Question Time!
Should Largonis....come across a Valyrian Sword? Maybe Truth...or Blackfyre...
Hi guys! New part!!
Largonis Lannister
''The only thing i want is to serve this great house even more.'' Largonis said to his cousin,C… moreersei,who was taken aback ''You've already been serving this house for a very long time,Largonis. You spent time Jousting,fighting,and killing for us. You almost died in Oxcross,do you remember?'' Cersei asked his cousin Largonis,who nodded ''I know,but you could have me doing something safer.'' Largonis said,he was a truthful person,and he didn't want to get back on the battlefield. ''Perhaps. Perhaps not.'' Cersei said,and cupped her hands together,then she caressed Largonis' long blonde curls. They were just like Loras Tyrell's but blonde. ''You are doing this house a great service,all i ask is that you be safe and continue to serve our house.'' Cersei says and lightly kisses Largonis' cheek. ''But if your desire is to do this,so i shall make it come true.'' She says ''You will be sent to the Dreadfort… [view original content]
Hi guys! New part!!
Largonis Lannister
''The only thing i want is to serve this great house even more.'' Largonis said to his cousin,C… moreersei,who was taken aback ''You've already been serving this house for a very long time,Largonis. You spent time Jousting,fighting,and killing for us. You almost died in Oxcross,do you remember?'' Cersei asked his cousin Largonis,who nodded ''I know,but you could have me doing something safer.'' Largonis said,he was a truthful person,and he didn't want to get back on the battlefield. ''Perhaps. Perhaps not.'' Cersei said,and cupped her hands together,then she caressed Largonis' long blonde curls. They were just like Loras Tyrell's but blonde. ''You are doing this house a great service,all i ask is that you be safe and continue to serve our house.'' Cersei says and lightly kisses Largonis' cheek. ''But if your desire is to do this,so i shall make it come true.'' She says ''You will be sent to the Dreadfort… [view original content]
Hi guys! New part!!
Largonis Lannister
''The only thing i want is to serve this great house even more.'' Largonis said to his cousin,C… moreersei,who was taken aback ''You've already been serving this house for a very long time,Largonis. You spent time Jousting,fighting,and killing for us. You almost died in Oxcross,do you remember?'' Cersei asked his cousin Largonis,who nodded ''I know,but you could have me doing something safer.'' Largonis said,he was a truthful person,and he didn't want to get back on the battlefield. ''Perhaps. Perhaps not.'' Cersei said,and cupped her hands together,then she caressed Largonis' long blonde curls. They were just like Loras Tyrell's but blonde. ''You are doing this house a great service,all i ask is that you be safe and continue to serve our house.'' Cersei says and lightly kisses Largonis' cheek. ''But if your desire is to do this,so i shall make it come true.'' She says ''You will be sent to the Dreadfort… [view original content]
[Accept to go with Brienne. Tell Cersei the truth.]
Awesome chapter, I love the idea of Brienne and Largonis meeting! It would be cool if this chapter foreshadowed him finding a Valyrian steel sword.
Hi guys! New part!!
Largonis Lannister
''The only thing i want is to serve this great house even more.'' Largonis said to his cousin,C… moreersei,who was taken aback ''You've already been serving this house for a very long time,Largonis. You spent time Jousting,fighting,and killing for us. You almost died in Oxcross,do you remember?'' Cersei asked his cousin Largonis,who nodded ''I know,but you could have me doing something safer.'' Largonis said,he was a truthful person,and he didn't want to get back on the battlefield. ''Perhaps. Perhaps not.'' Cersei said,and cupped her hands together,then she caressed Largonis' long blonde curls. They were just like Loras Tyrell's but blonde. ''You are doing this house a great service,all i ask is that you be safe and continue to serve our house.'' Cersei says and lightly kisses Largonis' cheek. ''But if your desire is to do this,so i shall make it come true.'' She says ''You will be sent to the Dreadfort… [view original content]
[Accept to go with Brienne. Tell Cersei the truth.]
Awesome chapter, I love the idea of Brienne and Largonis meeting! It would be cool if this chapter foreshadowed him finding a Valyrian steel sword.
[Accept Cersei's Offer.] Wow I like this character! Maybe he can get an old but sturdy sword that is relevant to the Lannisters, like one with a sculpted lion on the hilt or somethin'.
Hi guys! New part!!
Largonis Lannister
''The only thing i want is to serve this great house even more.'' Largonis said to his cousin,C… moreersei,who was taken aback ''You've already been serving this house for a very long time,Largonis. You spent time Jousting,fighting,and killing for us. You almost died in Oxcross,do you remember?'' Cersei asked his cousin Largonis,who nodded ''I know,but you could have me doing something safer.'' Largonis said,he was a truthful person,and he didn't want to get back on the battlefield. ''Perhaps. Perhaps not.'' Cersei said,and cupped her hands together,then she caressed Largonis' long blonde curls. They were just like Loras Tyrell's but blonde. ''You are doing this house a great service,all i ask is that you be safe and continue to serve our house.'' Cersei says and lightly kisses Largonis' cheek. ''But if your desire is to do this,so i shall make it come true.'' She says ''You will be sent to the Dreadfort… [view original content]
[Accept Cersei's Offer.] Wow I like this character! Maybe he can get an old but sturdy sword that is relevant to the Lannisters, like one with a sculpted lion on the hilt or somethin'.
Hi guys! We finally meet again! I am sorry if i couldn't write these days,but i had a test today and i studied for it all week,i think it went pretty well. Anyways,let's dive right into the Chapter!
I know i said that i would've brought Thomas,Kevin,and Brandon,but i had a great idea for them,make them appear late in the story,when Megan's (who is at the wall when Gared is going to Craster's,so it's around S4 E3. I will write some chapters about them and then i am going to bring them back.) story continues. Instead i am going to write about a character i created,don't judge guys,i am not getting anymore characters from people,so i wanted to create one of mine. (I want to remind you that if you want to introduce more than one character that is pretty fine for me. The most the better!)
Daegon Targaryen ''From Nowhere''
Daegon was sitting on the edge of the pier of King's Landing,when he saw a raven,high in the sky,flying towards him. He smirked and got up,he grabbed the raven by his brittle chest,and took the letter which was stuck in his claws. He then put the raven on the edge of the pier,he noticed he was staying still. He read the letter
My dear brother,
The dragon is getting stronger,and my power grows. Soon i will march on Westeros,and i will take the iron throne. I need your cooperation,keep spying on the court,and every one of their movements. You are my ears and eyes in King's Landing.
Don't worry little brother,i'll soon hug you. Dany
Daegon shed a small tear when he read the last sentence. He was Daenerys Targaryen's twin,he was always hidden by his family,fearing a disgrace on House Targaryen. Little did he know,that maybe his parents' doing saved his life,allowing him to escape with Daenerys and Viserys. He always loved his twin,Daenerys. He has plenty of memories with her: Happy ones,sad ones,and hateful ones. In fact he always was fighting with Viserys,who was despised by Dany too. ''With Khal Drogo's army. I would let his whole tribe fuck you - all forty thousand men - and their horses too if that's what it took.'' Those words still rang in his head. When he heard him say them,he tried to choke him. Unfortunately he was almost beaten to death by Viserys,who overpowered him. ''Now you've woken the dragon'' That,and his twin's cries were the last thing he heard before being dragged away,to a ship heading to King's Landing.
In King's Landing,he lived in Flea Bottom,in the filth,and in his own knowledge that his family was dead,and not knowing where the most important person in his life was. One day,his eyes caught the attention of someone,who took him in the real King's Landing,before going away. He was an old man,wearing a Kingsguard armor and apparently escaping King's Landing. After that day,he knew that there were still people like him in Westeros,and that he would've done anything to help them,and so he did. He gave part of his money,which he earned by cleaning King Joffrey's rooms,to a poor man in Flea Bottom. He always saw the man in King's Landing,and one day he came to talk to him. ''You,you are the lad who's helping me! I am grateful for your help,and i will repay you!'' He was going to keep that promise. ''My name is Kieron Cantell,and i am to be a Kingsguard,and i have something to tell you.'' Daegon remembered Kieron saying that his twin was still alive and well,and that she was sending him letters. ''But How? How did she knew you knew me?'' He asked Kieron ''A man,Barristan Selmy,told her she saw your eyes,it was then that she understood that you were still alive. He sent a few spies here to find you,and they succeeded. They saw you giving me money,covering your eyes and turning your face away from me. You didn't want to be recognized. In King's Landing it might be your last mistake'' He said,and Daegon proceeded to work with Kieron,who wrote to Dany,letting her know that her brother was still alive. She didn't waste any time writing him back. Daegon then took out from a pocket in his light armor a letter
*Daegon,*
I've heard you are alive! I cannot believe how you managed to live through years of suffering,but i ensure you that you will be living long enough to hug me again. Never forget what our family is,and that we are still alive and many. Dany
He started to write a letter to his sister
Daenerys,
I am glad to hear that you are getting more powerful,and i can't wait to hug you again,i have been missing you from too much time.
Daegon
He then put the letter in the small raven's claws,and made it fly. He watched as the raven flew to away from him,from the rotten place called King's Landing,to Essos,to his sister. He smiled and turned to go to the rather big house he lived in. He lived with a merchant,whose name was Jiao Ho,he always suspected he lived in Sothoryos. He walked past a road full of people,who were trading. ''I would like to come with you.'' He heard a blonde knight say to an even taller blonde Lady,who he recognized as Brienne of Tarth. A funny merchant blocked Daegon's path. ''Hello! I am a foreign merchant,who comes from the far east continent! There are great things there,but none as great as this!'' He said and showed him a small glass bottle,containing little black squares. ''What is this?'' Daegon asked him ''This is black salt! It will make you excited and feel good!'' He said and Daegon shook his head ''I don't want it.'' He said simply,the man tried to insist,but Daegon cut him off by giving him a hundred silver stags in his hand. The man stuttered ''Th-thank you..'' He said and his voice cracked. Daegon shook his head and walked away,towards the house. He felt good about giving him money,but saw a strange look in the man's eyes,almost as if they met with his lilac ones. He shook it off and arrived at his house,he entered and he saw Jiao sitting on a chair next to the table they dined on. ''Hi Jiao,how are you?'' He asked Jiao ''I am good,just a few....how do you call it?'' He said and gestured with his hands ''Problems?'' ''Yes.'' ''I'm glad to hear it'' ''And how are you?'' ''I am well,sold anything useful today.'' Jiao shook his head and pulled Daegon closer to him ''You need to go,someone spoke.'' He said,and Daegon sighed ''I have to hide again?'' ''No,you need to GO. This time is much worse.'' Jiao said ''They are sending out the whole Kingsguard to rat you out. Their methods are rather cunning.'' ''I should go to Essos,to find Daenerys.'' ''You can't,a ship is taking off but it's surely overrun by those damn guards,knowing it's taking off to Braavos.'' Jiao said. He knew Daegon's secret,he was the only person he trusted. ''Should i go look for Brienne? She could turn me away though...''
[Go find Brienne][Take off to Essos]
So guys! Did you enjoy the chapter? I hope you did. These two options are two shots in the dark,but what will be the better one? Is there even a better choice? We will find out...
Whose part do you want next?
[Hunter's] [Merrik's] [Mark's] [Jarger Kieron and Philip's] [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] [Korric's] [Megan's] [Damon's] [Saya's] [Talon chapter] [Largonis] [Daegon's]
Hi guys! We finally meet again! I am sorry if i couldn't write these days,but i had a test today and i studied for it all week,i think it we… morent pretty well. Anyways,let's dive right into the Chapter!
I know i said that i would've brought Thomas,Kevin,and Brandon,but i had a great idea for them,make them appear late in the story,when Megan's (who is at the wall when Gared is going to Craster's,so it's around S4 E3. I will write some chapters about them and then i am going to bring them back.) story continues. Instead i am going to write about a character i created,don't judge guys,i am not getting anymore characters from people,so i wanted to create one of mine. (I want to remind you that if you want to introduce more than one character that is pretty fine for me. The most the better!)
Daegon Targaryen ''From Nowhere''
Daegon was sitting on the edge of the pier of King's Landing,when he saw a raven,high in the sky,flying towards him. H… [view original content]
Hi guys! We finally meet again! I am sorry if i couldn't write these days,but i had a test today and i studied for it all week,i think it we… morent pretty well. Anyways,let's dive right into the Chapter!
I know i said that i would've brought Thomas,Kevin,and Brandon,but i had a great idea for them,make them appear late in the story,when Megan's (who is at the wall when Gared is going to Craster's,so it's around S4 E3. I will write some chapters about them and then i am going to bring them back.) story continues. Instead i am going to write about a character i created,don't judge guys,i am not getting anymore characters from people,so i wanted to create one of mine. (I want to remind you that if you want to introduce more than one character that is pretty fine for me. The most the better!)
Daegon Targaryen ''From Nowhere''
Daegon was sitting on the edge of the pier of King's Landing,when he saw a raven,high in the sky,flying towards him. H… [view original content]
Hi guys! We finally meet again! I am sorry if i couldn't write these days,but i had a test today and i studied for it all week,i think it we… morent pretty well. Anyways,let's dive right into the Chapter!
I know i said that i would've brought Thomas,Kevin,and Brandon,but i had a great idea for them,make them appear late in the story,when Megan's (who is at the wall when Gared is going to Craster's,so it's around S4 E3. I will write some chapters about them and then i am going to bring them back.) story continues. Instead i am going to write about a character i created,don't judge guys,i am not getting anymore characters from people,so i wanted to create one of mine. (I want to remind you that if you want to introduce more than one character that is pretty fine for me. The most the better!)
Daegon Targaryen ''From Nowhere''
Daegon was sitting on the edge of the pier of King's Landing,when he saw a raven,high in the sky,flying towards him. H… [view original content]
Hi guys! We finally meet again! I am sorry if i couldn't write these days,but i had a test today and i studied for it all week,i think it we… morent pretty well. Anyways,let's dive right into the Chapter!
I know i said that i would've brought Thomas,Kevin,and Brandon,but i had a great idea for them,make them appear late in the story,when Megan's (who is at the wall when Gared is going to Craster's,so it's around S4 E3. I will write some chapters about them and then i am going to bring them back.) story continues. Instead i am going to write about a character i created,don't judge guys,i am not getting anymore characters from people,so i wanted to create one of mine. (I want to remind you that if you want to introduce more than one character that is pretty fine for me. The most the better!)
Daegon Targaryen ''From Nowhere''
Daegon was sitting on the edge of the pier of King's Landing,when he saw a raven,high in the sky,flying towards him. H… [view original content]
Hi guys! We finally meet again! I am sorry if i couldn't write these days,but i had a test today and i studied for it all week,i think it we… morent pretty well. Anyways,let's dive right into the Chapter!
I know i said that i would've brought Thomas,Kevin,and Brandon,but i had a great idea for them,make them appear late in the story,when Megan's (who is at the wall when Gared is going to Craster's,so it's around S4 E3. I will write some chapters about them and then i am going to bring them back.) story continues. Instead i am going to write about a character i created,don't judge guys,i am not getting anymore characters from people,so i wanted to create one of mine. (I want to remind you that if you want to introduce more than one character that is pretty fine for me. The most the better!)
Daegon Targaryen ''From Nowhere''
Daegon was sitting on the edge of the pier of King's Landing,when he saw a raven,high in the sky,flying towards him. H… [view original content]
Hi guys! We finally meet again! I am sorry if i couldn't write these days,but i had a test today and i studied for it all week,i think it we… morent pretty well. Anyways,let's dive right into the Chapter!
I know i said that i would've brought Thomas,Kevin,and Brandon,but i had a great idea for them,make them appear late in the story,when Megan's (who is at the wall when Gared is going to Craster's,so it's around S4 E3. I will write some chapters about them and then i am going to bring them back.) story continues. Instead i am going to write about a character i created,don't judge guys,i am not getting anymore characters from people,so i wanted to create one of mine. (I want to remind you that if you want to introduce more than one character that is pretty fine for me. The most the better!)
Daegon Targaryen ''From Nowhere''
Daegon was sitting on the edge of the pier of King's Landing,when he saw a raven,high in the sky,flying towards him. H… [view original content]
Hi guys! We finally meet again! I am sorry if i couldn't write these days,but i had a test today and i studied for it all week,i think it we… morent pretty well. Anyways,let's dive right into the Chapter!
I know i said that i would've brought Thomas,Kevin,and Brandon,but i had a great idea for them,make them appear late in the story,when Megan's (who is at the wall when Gared is going to Craster's,so it's around S4 E3. I will write some chapters about them and then i am going to bring them back.) story continues. Instead i am going to write about a character i created,don't judge guys,i am not getting anymore characters from people,so i wanted to create one of mine. (I want to remind you that if you want to introduce more than one character that is pretty fine for me. The most the better!)
Daegon Targaryen ''From Nowhere''
Daegon was sitting on the edge of the pier of King's Landing,when he saw a raven,high in the sky,flying towards him. H… [view original content]
''Speak up.'' Korric said sternly to Larry,who cleared his throat ''I'll make sure you won't get killed,you must follow me and humor me everytime.'' He said and Korric nodded. He didn't know what to do apart from putting his trust in him,he felt like that was his chance to get out of Essos,and into Westeros. ''We'll need a horse,and i'll need to tie you up.'' He said,and Korric shrugged ''I'll ready the horse.'' Korric said and he walked to the small stables in the camp. ''Why am i even doing this? I should be going alone.'' He thought,getting closer to a white horse. He saw Larry getting some rope,and waiting for him. ''Should i just run away now?'' He thought to himself,eyeing the white horse...
''Here's the horse.'' He said to Larry,bringing him the horse,and pushing back every bad thought. ''Perfect. Now if you...'' Larry said and gestured with his hands to turn around,and Korric did. ''I'm the most dangerous sellsword in Yunkai...'' Korric trailed off. He wanted to scare Larry,he would have hunted him down in all Essos if he would've made any bad move against him. ''Do not worry,i won't do anything,i swear.'' Larry said,and tied Korric's hands together behind his back. He then got him on the horse ''We're going now.'' Larry said and started to gallop to Meereen's pier. ''I always didn't understand the heart you had sewn on your chest.'' Larry started a small talk ''It's R'hllor's fiery red heart. It's the symbol of the Lord of Light's belief. You can't understand.'' Korric said,and Larry shook his head ''Why? Is your religion a Westerosi one? Is this the reason why you want to go there?'' Larry said,and Korric was taken aback: He showed interest in Korric. ''No,it comes from a far,east continent. I am going to Westeros for honor.'' ''Ok,i mean,i won't go if i were you,but it's your decision.'' He said,and galloped faster. ''I would fight for House Baratheon of Dragonstone. I'll get paid and i will fight for what i believe in.'' Korric says,and looks to Larry,who falls silent.
After a hour of galloping Korric and Larry see Meereen's big port,and a great ship. ''Is that the ship that will take me to Westeros?'' ''Yes,it is. It's a pretty big ship too. Seems like you're lucky.'' Larry says,and after a couple of minutes they reach Meereen's pier and get off the white horse. Larry holds the reins,while Korric then gets closer to the ship,where he sees other people boarding the ship: Sellswords,merchants,lords and ladies. ''Where is this going...'' Korric trails off,and starts to feel uneasy. ''I don't know. I just know for sure that it's going to Westeros. It's owner told me.'' Larry said ''He was a pained lad,always had a look of horror on his face. I wonder what his house did to him...'' He added ''Do you remember anything else?'' ''He had short curly hair,said his name was 'Reek', i don't know who he is,and frankly i don't care. He asked me and other lads to round up some people. I'm a lazy lad,so i didn't find anyone,but you.'' He said,and clapped his hands together. ''I hope you have a great time in Westeros,i have to go to camp,i have work to do. Have fun in Westeros.'' He said,and got on the horse,who was eating some sand ''Don't do that'' Larry said,and spanked the horse on his back ''You shouldn't-'' Korric started,but was cut off by the Horse galloping wildly away ''Spank your horse.'' He finished the sentence,then got on the ship.
As he made his way to a casual room,he saw young ladies talking to each other and eating lemoncakes,and Korric smiled at them,and being the quite handsome man he was,the ladies smiled back. He then went to a room and decided to sleep off the entire day. The room was pretty small and had a few holes that were carved on purpose,to allow whoever was there to see where they were going. The bed was small,but it was comfortable. Korric laid down and closed his eyes ''I made it!'' Was his last thought before passing out.
When he woke up he felt a burning cold on his skin. He shivered and got out of bed,then he peeked out of the door of his small room: There was no one talking or no one walking around. He then turned to the small holes carved into the wood,and tried to see outside,but the holes were too small. He took his sword and stuck it in the thick wood,but he managed to cut a piece out and make the hole bigger. He peeked out and he saw that was snowing. ''WHAT IN THE SEVEN HELLS?!'' He yelled,but put hands on his mouth instantly. He peeked outside again,seeing snowflakes meeting the water and melting,he saw then a small strip of land,all covered in a thick white cloak of snow. ''EVERYBODY GET UP! WHITE HARBOR IS NEARING!'' A voice made Korric jump. ''White Harbor? We are in the North!?'' He said,feeling shocked. He heard voices outside his room. A man entered Korric's room ''What are you doing in the storage room?! Get going, White Harbor is nearing.'' He said,and Korric stepped out of the storage room. He saw a lot of people moving around and pacing nervously. He then saw all the people going towards the exit,and he followed them. After a few minutes he made it out of the ship to see White Harbor,the major seat of House Manderly. He was wearing just an armor that didn't even cover his arms,so the new,sudden climate. He started to shiver and walked towards a pub. He entered it and was greeted by the warmness of a crackling fire,and a lot of men drinking,swearing,and fighting each other. He tried to sit down at a table,but a man got in his way. ''Oi,are you another Essosi that came here?!'' He said,and Korric could smell the alcohol in his breath. Korric then balled his fist up,showed it to the man,who looked at it with a lopsided smile,then he swung at his head,knocking the man out cold. Everyone stares at him,and they erupt in cheers ''TANNED MAN! TANNED MAN! TANNED MAN!'' They were cheering him up,and he sat down at his table,grabbing the horn of ale the man was drinking. A girl with red hair eyes him,then she walks over to him,sitting in front of him. The girl stares in Korric's eyes...
[Stare back][Look away][Introduce yourself to the girl.]
So guys! This part is over! Did you like it? I hope you did,i put so much effort in what i do. And i hope you guys will enjoy every one of my chapters.
Question Time!
What did you think of this chapter?
Will this choice be important to Korric's storyline?
Whose part do you want next?
Whose part do you want next?
[Hunter's][Merrik's][Mark's][Jarger Kieron and Philip's][Brandon Thomas and Kevin's][Korric's][Megan's][Damon's][Saya's][Talon chapter] [Largonis] [Daegon's]
[Introduce yourself to the girl] [Show Brandon, Thomas and Kevin some love]
Nicely done, again! I wasn't sure Larry would get Korric to Westeros, but there he is. This seems like a minor choice at first, but I have a feeling it will have a bigger impact later, hmm... I also loved the brief mention of Theon/Reek, and how the horse comically ran off. xD
Hi guys! New part! I hope you enjoy it!
Korric Dedman
''Speak up.'' Korric said sternly to Larry,who cleared his throat ''I'll make s… moreure you won't get killed,you must follow me and humor me everytime.'' He said and Korric nodded. He didn't know what to do apart from putting his trust in him,he felt like that was his chance to get out of Essos,and into Westeros. ''We'll need a horse,and i'll need to tie you up.'' He said,and Korric shrugged ''I'll ready the horse.'' Korric said and he walked to the small stables in the camp. ''Why am i even doing this? I should be going alone.'' He thought,getting closer to a white horse. He saw Larry getting some rope,and waiting for him. ''Should i just run away now?'' He thought to himself,eyeing the white horse...
''Here's the horse.'' He said to Larry,bringing him the horse,and pushing back every bad thought. ''Perfect. Now if you...'' Larry said and gestured with his hands to turn around,and Ko… [view original content]
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Korric Dedman
''Speak up.'' Korric said sternly to Larry,who cleared his throat ''I'll make s… moreure you won't get killed,you must follow me and humor me everytime.'' He said and Korric nodded. He didn't know what to do apart from putting his trust in him,he felt like that was his chance to get out of Essos,and into Westeros. ''We'll need a horse,and i'll need to tie you up.'' He said,and Korric shrugged ''I'll ready the horse.'' Korric said and he walked to the small stables in the camp. ''Why am i even doing this? I should be going alone.'' He thought,getting closer to a white horse. He saw Larry getting some rope,and waiting for him. ''Should i just run away now?'' He thought to himself,eyeing the white horse...
''Here's the horse.'' He said to Larry,bringing him the horse,and pushing back every bad thought. ''Perfect. Now if you...'' Larry said and gestured with his hands to turn around,and Ko… [view original content]
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Korric Dedman
''Speak up.'' Korric said sternly to Larry,who cleared his throat ''I'll make s… moreure you won't get killed,you must follow me and humor me everytime.'' He said and Korric nodded. He didn't know what to do apart from putting his trust in him,he felt like that was his chance to get out of Essos,and into Westeros. ''We'll need a horse,and i'll need to tie you up.'' He said,and Korric shrugged ''I'll ready the horse.'' Korric said and he walked to the small stables in the camp. ''Why am i even doing this? I should be going alone.'' He thought,getting closer to a white horse. He saw Larry getting some rope,and waiting for him. ''Should i just run away now?'' He thought to himself,eyeing the white horse...
''Here's the horse.'' He said to Larry,bringing him the horse,and pushing back every bad thought. ''Perfect. Now if you...'' Larry said and gestured with his hands to turn around,and Ko… [view original content]
Hi guys! We finally meet again! I am sorry if i couldn't write these days,but i had a test today and i studied for it all week,i think it we… morent pretty well. Anyways,let's dive right into the Chapter!
I know i said that i would've brought Thomas,Kevin,and Brandon,but i had a great idea for them,make them appear late in the story,when Megan's (who is at the wall when Gared is going to Craster's,so it's around S4 E3. I will write some chapters about them and then i am going to bring them back.) story continues. Instead i am going to write about a character i created,don't judge guys,i am not getting anymore characters from people,so i wanted to create one of mine. (I want to remind you that if you want to introduce more than one character that is pretty fine for me. The most the better!)
Daegon Targaryen ''From Nowhere''
Daegon was sitting on the edge of the pier of King's Landing,when he saw a raven,high in the sky,flying towards him. H… [view original content]
House Karstark swore fealty to the Stark,so House Stark is House Karstark's liege house.
House Trant swore fealty to House Baratheon (Meryn Trant follows King Joffrey's orders because he thinks he's a Baratheon). So House Baratheon is House Trant's liege house.
Your example was correct,but i don't recall Gared having a house. He is a pig farmer.
You know...actually at first i wanted Korric to sail to Winterfell to meet Ramsay,but then i remembered. Winterfell doesn't have any port or harbor of sort....
[Introduce yourself to the girl] [Show Brandon, Thomas and Kevin some love]
Nicely done, again! I wasn't sure Larry would get Korric to W… moreesteros, but there he is. This seems like a minor choice at first, but I have a feeling it will have a bigger impact later, hmm... I also loved the brief mention of Theon/Reek, and how the horse comically ran off. xD
Hi guys! New part! I hope you enjoy it!
Korric Dedman
''Speak up.'' Korric said sternly to Larry,who cleared his throat ''I'll make s… moreure you won't get killed,you must follow me and humor me everytime.'' He said and Korric nodded. He didn't know what to do apart from putting his trust in him,he felt like that was his chance to get out of Essos,and into Westeros. ''We'll need a horse,and i'll need to tie you up.'' He said,and Korric shrugged ''I'll ready the horse.'' Korric said and he walked to the small stables in the camp. ''Why am i even doing this? I should be going alone.'' He thought,getting closer to a white horse. He saw Larry getting some rope,and waiting for him. ''Should i just run away now?'' He thought to himself,eyeing the white horse...
''Here's the horse.'' He said to Larry,bringing him the horse,and pushing back every bad thought. ''Perfect. Now if you...'' Larry said and gestured with his hands to turn around,and Ko… [view original content]
Hi guys! New part! I hope you enjoy it!
Korric Dedman
''Speak up.'' Korric said sternly to Larry,who cleared his throat ''I'll make s… moreure you won't get killed,you must follow me and humor me everytime.'' He said and Korric nodded. He didn't know what to do apart from putting his trust in him,he felt like that was his chance to get out of Essos,and into Westeros. ''We'll need a horse,and i'll need to tie you up.'' He said,and Korric shrugged ''I'll ready the horse.'' Korric said and he walked to the small stables in the camp. ''Why am i even doing this? I should be going alone.'' He thought,getting closer to a white horse. He saw Larry getting some rope,and waiting for him. ''Should i just run away now?'' He thought to himself,eyeing the white horse...
''Here's the horse.'' He said to Larry,bringing him the horse,and pushing back every bad thought. ''Perfect. Now if you...'' Larry said and gestured with his hands to turn around,and Ko… [view original content]
Hi guys! New part! I hope you enjoy it!
Korric Dedman
''Speak up.'' Korric said sternly to Larry,who cleared his throat ''I'll make s… moreure you won't get killed,you must follow me and humor me everytime.'' He said and Korric nodded. He didn't know what to do apart from putting his trust in him,he felt like that was his chance to get out of Essos,and into Westeros. ''We'll need a horse,and i'll need to tie you up.'' He said,and Korric shrugged ''I'll ready the horse.'' Korric said and he walked to the small stables in the camp. ''Why am i even doing this? I should be going alone.'' He thought,getting closer to a white horse. He saw Larry getting some rope,and waiting for him. ''Should i just run away now?'' He thought to himself,eyeing the white horse...
''Here's the horse.'' He said to Larry,bringing him the horse,and pushing back every bad thought. ''Perfect. Now if you...'' Larry said and gestured with his hands to turn around,and Ko… [view original content]
I'll make an example with two major houses:
House Karstark swore fealty to the Stark,so House Stark is House Karstark's liege house.
H… moreouse Trant swore fealty to House Baratheon (Meryn Trant follows King Joffrey's orders because he thinks he's a Baratheon). So House Baratheon is House Trant's liege house.
Your example was correct,but i don't recall Gared having a house. He is a pig farmer.
Hi guys! New part! I hope you enjoy it!
Korric Dedman
''Speak up.'' Korric said sternly to Larry,who cleared his throat ''I'll make s… moreure you won't get killed,you must follow me and humor me everytime.'' He said and Korric nodded. He didn't know what to do apart from putting his trust in him,he felt like that was his chance to get out of Essos,and into Westeros. ''We'll need a horse,and i'll need to tie you up.'' He said,and Korric shrugged ''I'll ready the horse.'' Korric said and he walked to the small stables in the camp. ''Why am i even doing this? I should be going alone.'' He thought,getting closer to a white horse. He saw Larry getting some rope,and waiting for him. ''Should i just run away now?'' He thought to himself,eyeing the white horse...
''Here's the horse.'' He said to Larry,bringing him the horse,and pushing back every bad thought. ''Perfect. Now if you...'' Larry said and gestured with his hands to turn around,and Ko… [view original content]
''Oh no,Thomas...'' Brandon thought,and started to walk towards the yard,guard and sword up. A wildling came up from behind him and took him down,Brandon struggled to get his sword,which was knocked away by that wildling that was now on top of him,wielding a spear. He raised his spear and brought it down,aiming at Brandon's neck. Brandon dodged the spear by an inch and punched it in the middle,breaking it. He grabbed ahold of the now stuck in the ground pointy end and stuck it in the wildling's throat. He made gurgling sounds,choking on his blood,and Brandon pulled out the spear's end,just to hastily stick it back in again,and again,and again. He was now all bloodied and so was the wildling,who fell to the ground,dead. He got up and grabbed his sword again,it was now getting dark so the sword started to glow a blue light. As he was walking he saw dozens of crows he knew,his friends,getting butchered under a wildling's sword,spear,axe or bow ''I need to find Thomas.'' He thought,and a wildling came running towards him,he spun on himself holding the sword in front of him,disemboweling and killing the wildling instantly ''You caught me on the shitter,but i made you shit your whole organs out.'' He thought,laughing to himself,and then he ran towards a boy,who was holding a bow ''What are you doing out here?! You'll be killed!'' Brandon said to the boy ''I'm protecting castle black! Is that your sword?'' He said and looked at the sword ''Yours is really the sword in the darkness,you could light a whole room with that.'' He said,looking at the now light blue glow the sword was emanating ''MY SWORD IS NOT IMPORTANT NOW! GET OUT OF HERE BEFORE I MAKE YOU!'' He screamed and turned to the yard,emptying minute by minute.
He ran in the fray that created in the center of the yard,and started to hack away at enemy wildlings,until he saw a person crawling on the ground. He ran towards him and he saw that Thomas was crawling towards him,two arrows in his chest. Brandon ran to him and he immediately broke the arrows in half ''Let me save you Thomas! We're gonna die here!'' Brandon said,and Thomas shook his head ''You have to find Kevin,he'll be needing help!'' Thomas said,coughing up some blood ''I'm alright,don't worry.'' He said to Brandon,who then took Thomas by the arm,and drug him away from battle. The sword was now glowing more than ever and a wildling lunged to Brandon,who dodged the axe by an inch,causing him to fall to the ground. The wildling brought his axe up on his shoulders,and let it fall on Brandon. He crawled away dodging the shot,and saw Thomas kicking the wildling's knee,who was now wobbling on his legs. Brandon took his chances and took out his dirk,and stuck it in his leg. The wildling screamed and let the axe go,then he punched Brandon in the face,causing him to bleed from his cheek. Brandon didn't give up,and turned the dirk in the wound,making the wildling scream,then he took out the dirk,and stuck it in his other leg,making him fall to the ground. He then took it out and stuck it in the wildling's stomach,and took it out again just to stab him through his neck. He then got on his feet and breathed in relief,looking at Thomas ''We're going to teach the next recruits what you just did there.'' Thomas said ''You always have to take your chances. Take this bow.'' He said,grabbing the small composite taut bow the wildling had slung on his back,and drug a small arrow holder to him. ''Cover me,will you?'' Brandon asked Thomas,who took an arrow,and shot it at the fray,wounding a wildling. ''That will do it?'' ''Yes it will,thank you brother. We will take Castle Black back,i assure you of that.'' Brandon said,then grabbed his sword from the ground ''You're going to teach me that,when we get out of this mess.'' Thomas said,looking at the bright blue sword of brandon ''Her name is Ice Star,not all swords do that!'' Brandon said,smiling at Thomas. He then ran into the fray and yanked a wildling by his hair,piercing his throat with the sword. Brandon was killing countless enemies,until he saw Jon Snow hugging the body of a girl with red hair. Brandon walked to him and took his shoulder ''Jon! Everybody's dying! We have to make sure our defenses stay up until we're ready!'' Brandon said,thinking back at the trap they sat a long time ago at the wall,he didn't even know what it was. It was like a giant,piece of metal ''Like an anchor'' was his opinion. Now it was covered in ten inches of ice,and it was a great time to use it. ''I don't care anymore.'' Jon said simply,caressing the girl's face,her expression peaceful. Brandon understood,and nodded ''I'm sorry,Jon. She loved you too.'' Brandon said. He was one of the few person not to think Jon was a turncloak. Brandon then ran away,planning to go look for Kevin,who was at the gates of the wall. ''I should be able to get to him by going in the castle.'' Brandon thought,and ran to the elevator. A group of wildlings saw him and started to fire arrows to him. He found a shield and raised it up,blocking all the arrows. When the elevator got up the wall,he got off and got on the edge of the wall,looking down,dreading to fall down the Wall. He saw that the gate was smashed and someone entered the Castle. ''Oh no,Kevin must be in trouble.'' He thought and opened the door leading to a Tower. When he opened three thenns wielding axes turned to him with a lopsided smile ''FUUCK!'' He screamed and closed the door. He heard the Thenns punching the door down. He saw a pick on the ground ''I might try to climb down the Wall,but i have a short chance of making it. The crows could soon start the metal trap.'' He thought,then the door broke down...
[Climb down The Wall][Prepare to Fight][Run back to the elevator]
So guys! Part's over! Did you like it? I hope you did man! School doesn't let me write,cut me some slack...Anyways!
Question Time
Why did you choose what you chose in this chapter?
Who do you think will have the worst ending between Thomas,Kevin and Brandon?
Whose part do you want next?
[Hunter's][Merrik's][Mark's][Jarger Kieron and Philip's][Brandon Thomas and Kevin's][Korric's][Megan's][Damon's][Saya's][Talon chapter][Largonis][Daegon's]
Are there some got junkies reading? Who read the books,watch the show,and know a lot of lore? I hope so...
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Brandon Woods
''Oh no,Thomas...'' Brandon thought,and started to walk towards the yard,guard and sword up… more. A wildling came up from behind him and took him down,Brandon struggled to get his sword,which was knocked away by that wildling that was now on top of him,wielding a spear. He raised his spear and brought it down,aiming at Brandon's neck. Brandon dodged the spear by an inch and punched it in the middle,breaking it. He grabbed ahold of the now stuck in the ground pointy end and stuck it in the wildling's throat. He made gurgling sounds,choking on his blood,and Brandon pulled out the spear's end,just to hastily stick it back in again,and again,and again. He was now all bloodied and so was the wildling,who fell to the ground,dead. He got up and grabbed his sword again,it was now getting dark so the sword started to glow a blue light. As he was walking he saw dozens of crows he knew,his friends,getting butc… [view original content]
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Brandon Woods
''Oh no,Thomas...'' Brandon thought,and started to walk towards the yard,guard and sword up… more. A wildling came up from behind him and took him down,Brandon struggled to get his sword,which was knocked away by that wildling that was now on top of him,wielding a spear. He raised his spear and brought it down,aiming at Brandon's neck. Brandon dodged the spear by an inch and punched it in the middle,breaking it. He grabbed ahold of the now stuck in the ground pointy end and stuck it in the wildling's throat. He made gurgling sounds,choking on his blood,and Brandon pulled out the spear's end,just to hastily stick it back in again,and again,and again. He was now all bloodied and so was the wildling,who fell to the ground,dead. He got up and grabbed his sword again,it was now getting dark so the sword started to glow a blue light. As he was walking he saw dozens of crows he knew,his friends,getting butc… [view original content]
[Climb down The Wall] and [Talon chapter] Great chapters as usual! I've been out the loop lately because of school, but keep up the great work! Seeing this battle makes me think of how Frostfinger says everyone will die at the wall... huh.
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Brandon Woods
''Oh no,Thomas...'' Brandon thought,and started to walk towards the yard,guard and sword up… more. A wildling came up from behind him and took him down,Brandon struggled to get his sword,which was knocked away by that wildling that was now on top of him,wielding a spear. He raised his spear and brought it down,aiming at Brandon's neck. Brandon dodged the spear by an inch and punched it in the middle,breaking it. He grabbed ahold of the now stuck in the ground pointy end and stuck it in the wildling's throat. He made gurgling sounds,choking on his blood,and Brandon pulled out the spear's end,just to hastily stick it back in again,and again,and again. He was now all bloodied and so was the wildling,who fell to the ground,dead. He got up and grabbed his sword again,it was now getting dark so the sword started to glow a blue light. As he was walking he saw dozens of crows he knew,his friends,getting butc… [view original content]
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Brandon Woods
''Oh no,Thomas...'' Brandon thought,and started to walk towards the yard,guard and sword up… more. A wildling came up from behind him and took him down,Brandon struggled to get his sword,which was knocked away by that wildling that was now on top of him,wielding a spear. He raised his spear and brought it down,aiming at Brandon's neck. Brandon dodged the spear by an inch and punched it in the middle,breaking it. He grabbed ahold of the now stuck in the ground pointy end and stuck it in the wildling's throat. He made gurgling sounds,choking on his blood,and Brandon pulled out the spear's end,just to hastily stick it back in again,and again,and again. He was now all bloodied and so was the wildling,who fell to the ground,dead. He got up and grabbed his sword again,it was now getting dark so the sword started to glow a blue light. As he was walking he saw dozens of crows he knew,his friends,getting butc… [view original content]
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Oh, and also I forgot to add in the document that my character got her scar when a guy tried to rape and murder her at a bar in her late teens, and he sliced her face with a dagger.
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Largonis Lannister
''The only thing i want is to serve this great house even more.'' Largonis said to his cousin,Cersei,who was taken aback ''You've already been serving this house for a very long time,Largonis. You spent time Jousting,fighting,and killing for us. You almost died in Oxcross,do you remember?'' Cersei asked his cousin Largonis,who nodded ''I know,but you could have me doing something safer.'' Largonis said,he was a truthful person,and he didn't want to get back on the battlefield. ''Perhaps. Perhaps not.'' Cersei said,and cupped her hands together,then she caressed Largonis' long blonde curls. They were just like Loras Tyrell's but blonde. ''You are doing this house a great service,all i ask is that you be safe and continue to serve our house.'' Cersei says and lightly kisses Largonis' cheek. ''But if your desire is to do this,so i shall make it come true.'' She says ''You will be sent to the Dreadfort,where you will become a messenger,between me and Roose Bolton,the Warden of the North.'' She said and looked at Largonis,taking a sip of wine from the cup she was holding. ''You're a brave man,Largonis,i trust you to do this with discretion. You can decide either to stay here,or accept my offer. I would like to hear your choice for tomorrow,in the mean time,i would like you to teach Tommen some other moves.'' ''I will do that.'' She then stepped closer to Largonis,and took his hands in hers. ''You aren't forced to go there,i can easily find someone else. You always can stay here and find some other things to do.'' ''How come you aren't forcing me?'' Largonis said,confused ''I don't want your blood on my hands,family is family.'' She said ''I never heard this tone of voice from her.'' He thought. Her voice had a deep,truthful tone to it,and that was strange. ''I'll think about this.'' ''You can always choose to go somewhere else.'' She said ''Thank you,Cersei.'' ''Come speak to me when you made up your mind.'' She said,and smiled at him,then she stepped out of his rooms,and left Largonis to the silence of his room.
He sat down on his bed,and sighed. ''The biggest task i want to accomplish is to prove my loyalty and importance to my family. I want to prove that i'm not a simple cousin. What should i do?'' He thought and drank some wine. Then he heard someone knocking on his door ,he got up from his bed,and walked to the door ''Come in'' he said as he opened the door,and he was greeted by a blonde haired woman. ''Well met,i am Brienne of Tarth,Ser Jaime sent me here.'' ''I am Largonis Lannister,son of Kevan Lannister and cousin of the Queen Regent Cersei.'' The woman was a bit taller than Largonis,who had to look up at her ''What did he want?'' Largonis asked,while letting her in his room. ''To pay my respects,i've been told you're a rather important member of the Lannister family.'' He felt satisfied ''Thank you,my lady.'' He said and bowed to her,she shook her head ''I'm not a lady. Get up'' She said,and he got up ''I've been told that you are renowned for your great sword skills,and i would like to see them.'' She said,and she gestured him to follow her. He followed her and she brought him outside the Red Keep,on a small yard facing the sea (This is the same place Bronn teaches Jaime how to fight with his left hand) And unsheathes her sword. He then unsheathes his,but this time he didn't have a hand behind his back. She then swung at him,and he parried the shot,then he quickly raised his sword and slashed at her,but she dodged the shot,ducking. She then hit Largonis in his crotch with the hilt of her sword. He then gasped and he stepped away from her. She then thrusted her sword at him again,but he easily dodged it,then he wielded his sword with two hands. ''That's how i prefer to handle mine,it's more comfortable.'' Brienne says,and swung at him. He parried the shot and punched Brienne in the face,she staggered backwards ''That wasn't fair.'' She said ''This wasn't either.'' Largonis said and pointed at his crotch,then he swung at her. She parried the shot but he kept swinging at her,until he disarmed her by forcing the hilt of her sword out of her hands. He took the two swords together.
''You fight pretty well.'' Largonis says,and shakes her hand. Then he looks at his sword ''That sword is beautiful...It really seems like Valyrian Steel.'' He says,and she smiles ''It is. It's beautiful isn't it?'' She says ''Can i?'' He asks,and she nods. He then wields her sword and looks at it pretty closely. The steel was shining,reflecting the hot sun of King's Landing off every angle. The hilt of her sword was made out of molten gold,and a red gem was stuck in the center of it. He was pretty jealous of her sword. He wanted a sword made out of Valyrian Steel,which was folded back on itself many times,making the sword as sharp as a pike's end,but much faster. He gave the sword back to her ''It's a really beautiful sword. I would like to have one of it myself one day.'' She gave him a weak smile ''Where did you find it? I'm sure there could be others around.'' He said,willing to look for one of them. ''House Stark's valyrian sword Ice was melted down by Tywin Lannister,and my sword was forged in that melted steel.'' Largonis' face changed from stupefied to horrified ''This isn't meant to be yours.'' She shook her head ''I swore my loyalty to Catelyn Stark,i'm not an enemy of the Starks.'' ''Catelyn Stark is now dead,her throat opened,probably in some of the carts full of dead bodies outside The Twins.'' ''They couldn't find her. It seems like she escaped.'' Largonis was now confused ''It can't be...'' He said,remembering seeing her dead body in a body cart outside the Twins,when he paid a visit to Lord Frey. ''I do not know what is going to happen,but the Freys better start to worry about bad luck.'' ''I...guess i will be going now,thank you for the sparring.'' He said,starting to walk away. ''Largonis'' She called him,and he turned to her ''I...have to go on a journey. To avenge someone.'' Largonis then started to listen carefully ''You seem like a truthful person,and a honorable knight. That's why i'm asking you to come with me.'' ''Me?'' ''I need a helping hand. You seem like a skilled warrior.'' Largonis then sighed ''I...will need to think about it.'' He said and started to walk towards the Red Keep. The last thing he heard of Brienne was ''I'll be waiting here,when you make up your mind come to me. I hope you will.''
He entered his chambers and laid on his bed. After countless hours of thinking,he made up his mind...
[Accept Cersei's Offer.] [Ask Cersei to go somewhere else (If you choose this,write in the comments where you want him to go. Literally everywhere.)] [Accept to go with Brienne. Lie to Cersei about where you are going] [Accept to go with Brienne. Tell Cersei the truth.]
So guys! Part is over! Did you like it? I hope you did!
I'm doing Brandon's Thomas and Kevin's part next,because they are never picked. (Sad song)
Question Time!
Should Largonis....come across a Valyrian Sword? Maybe Truth...or Blackfyre...
[Accept to go with Brienne. Lie to Cersei]
Another great chapter!
[Accept to go with Brienne. Tell Cersei the truth.]
great part!
[Accept to go with Brienne, Tell Cersei the truth]
[Accept to go with Brienne. Tell Cersei the truth.]
Awesome chapter, I love the idea of Brienne and Largonis meeting! It would be cool if this chapter foreshadowed him finding a Valyrian steel sword.
Oh well...
[Accept Cersei's Offer.] Wow I like this character! Maybe he can get an old but sturdy sword that is relevant to the Lannisters, like one with a sculpted lion on the hilt or somethin'.
I actually have got a big,big,big plan for Largonis. (If you really are into the books you could understand what i'm going to do...)
Hi guys! We finally meet again! I am sorry if i couldn't write these days,but i had a test today and i studied for it all week,i think it went pretty well. Anyways,let's dive right into the Chapter!
I know i said that i would've brought Thomas,Kevin,and Brandon,but i had a great idea for them,make them appear late in the story,when Megan's (who is at the wall when Gared is going to Craster's,so it's around S4 E3. I will write some chapters about them and then i am going to bring them back.) story continues. Instead i am going to write about a character i created,don't judge guys,i am not getting anymore characters from people,so i wanted to create one of mine. (I want to remind you that if you want to introduce more than one character that is pretty fine for me. The most the better!)
Daegon Targaryen ''From Nowhere''
Daegon was sitting on the edge of the pier of King's Landing,when he saw a raven,high in the sky,flying towards him. He smirked and got up,he grabbed the raven by his brittle chest,and took the letter which was stuck in his claws. He then put the raven on the edge of the pier,he noticed he was staying still. He read the letter
The dragon is getting stronger,and my power grows. Soon i will march on Westeros,and i will take the iron throne. I need your cooperation,keep spying on the court,and every one of their movements. You are my ears and eyes in King's Landing.
Don't worry little brother,i'll soon hug you.
Dany
Daegon shed a small tear when he read the last sentence. He was Daenerys Targaryen's twin,he was always hidden by his family,fearing a disgrace on House Targaryen. Little did he know,that maybe his parents' doing saved his life,allowing him to escape with Daenerys and Viserys. He always loved his twin,Daenerys. He has plenty of memories with her: Happy ones,sad ones,and hateful ones. In fact he always was fighting with Viserys,who was despised by Dany too. ''With Khal Drogo's army. I would let his whole tribe fuck you - all forty thousand men - and their horses too if that's what it took.'' Those words still rang in his head. When he heard him say them,he tried to choke him. Unfortunately he was almost beaten to death by Viserys,who overpowered him. ''Now you've woken the dragon'' That,and his twin's cries were the last thing he heard before being dragged away,to a ship heading to King's Landing.
In King's Landing,he lived in Flea Bottom,in the filth,and in his own knowledge that his family was dead,and not knowing where the most important person in his life was. One day,his eyes caught the attention of someone,who took him in the real King's Landing,before going away. He was an old man,wearing a Kingsguard armor and apparently escaping King's Landing. After that day,he knew that there were still people like him in Westeros,and that he would've done anything to help them,and so he did. He gave part of his money,which he earned by cleaning King Joffrey's rooms,to a poor man in Flea Bottom. He always saw the man in King's Landing,and one day he came to talk to him. ''You,you are the lad who's helping me! I am grateful for your help,and i will repay you!'' He was going to keep that promise. ''My name is Kieron Cantell,and i am to be a Kingsguard,and i have something to tell you.'' Daegon remembered Kieron saying that his twin was still alive and well,and that she was sending him letters. ''But How? How did she knew you knew me?'' He asked Kieron ''A man,Barristan Selmy,told her she saw your eyes,it was then that she understood that you were still alive. He sent a few spies here to find you,and they succeeded. They saw you giving me money,covering your eyes and turning your face away from me. You didn't want to be recognized. In King's Landing it might be your last mistake'' He said,and Daegon proceeded to work with Kieron,who wrote to Dany,letting her know that her brother was still alive. She didn't waste any time writing him back. Daegon then took out from a pocket in his light armor a letter
I've heard you are alive! I cannot believe how you managed to live through years of suffering,but i ensure you that you will be living long enough to hug me again. Never forget what our family is,and that we are still alive and many.
Dany
He started to write a letter to his sister
Daenerys,
I am glad to hear that you are getting more powerful,and i can't wait to hug you again,i have been missing you from too much time.
Daegon
He then put the letter in the small raven's claws,and made it fly. He watched as the raven flew to away from him,from the rotten place called King's Landing,to Essos,to his sister. He smiled and turned to go to the rather big house he lived in. He lived with a merchant,whose name was Jiao Ho,he always suspected he lived in Sothoryos. He walked past a road full of people,who were trading. ''I would like to come with you.'' He heard a blonde knight say to an even taller blonde Lady,who he recognized as Brienne of Tarth. A funny merchant blocked Daegon's path. ''Hello! I am a foreign merchant,who comes from the far east continent! There are great things there,but none as great as this!'' He said and showed him a small glass bottle,containing little black squares. ''What is this?'' Daegon asked him ''This is black salt! It will make you excited and feel good!'' He said and Daegon shook his head ''I don't want it.'' He said simply,the man tried to insist,but Daegon cut him off by giving him a hundred silver stags in his hand. The man stuttered ''Th-thank you..'' He said and his voice cracked. Daegon shook his head and walked away,towards the house. He felt good about giving him money,but saw a strange look in the man's eyes,almost as if they met with his lilac ones. He shook it off and arrived at his house,he entered and he saw Jiao sitting on a chair next to the table they dined on. ''Hi Jiao,how are you?'' He asked Jiao ''I am good,just a few....how do you call it?'' He said and gestured with his hands ''Problems?'' ''Yes.'' ''I'm glad to hear it'' ''And how are you?'' ''I am well,sold anything useful today.'' Jiao shook his head and pulled Daegon closer to him ''You need to go,someone spoke.'' He said,and Daegon sighed ''I have to hide again?'' ''No,you need to GO. This time is much worse.'' Jiao said ''They are sending out the whole Kingsguard to rat you out. Their methods are rather cunning.'' ''I should go to Essos,to find Daenerys.'' ''You can't,a ship is taking off but it's surely overrun by those damn guards,knowing it's taking off to Braavos.'' Jiao said. He knew Daegon's secret,he was the only person he trusted. ''Should i go look for Brienne? She could turn me away though...''
[Go find Brienne] [Take off to Essos]
So guys! Did you enjoy the chapter? I hope you did. These two options are two shots in the dark,but what will be the better one? Is there even a better choice? We will find out...
Whose part do you want next?
[Hunter's] [Merrik's] [Mark's] [Jarger Kieron and Philip's] [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] [Korric's] [Megan's] [Damon's] [Saya's] [Talon chapter] [Largonis] [Daegon's]
[Go find Brienne] [Korric's]
Great chapter as always! I'm worried because of the choice though...
[Go find Brienne] I hope this doesn't bite me in the end.
Great part!
Also, [Korric's]
[Take off to Essos] [Korric's]
[Take off to Essos] and [Korric's]
[Take off to Essos] and [Korric's]
You're back!
It's actually not going how i expected...pity,such a pity (That quote)
[Go find Brienne] [Korric's] Great !! : D
[Take off to Essos] and [Korric's]
Hi guys! New part! I hope you enjoy it!
Korric Dedman
''Speak up.'' Korric said sternly to Larry,who cleared his throat ''I'll make sure you won't get killed,you must follow me and humor me everytime.'' He said and Korric nodded. He didn't know what to do apart from putting his trust in him,he felt like that was his chance to get out of Essos,and into Westeros. ''We'll need a horse,and i'll need to tie you up.'' He said,and Korric shrugged ''I'll ready the horse.'' Korric said and he walked to the small stables in the camp. ''Why am i even doing this? I should be going alone.'' He thought,getting closer to a white horse. He saw Larry getting some rope,and waiting for him. ''Should i just run away now?'' He thought to himself,eyeing the white horse...
''Here's the horse.'' He said to Larry,bringing him the horse,and pushing back every bad thought. ''Perfect. Now if you...'' Larry said and gestured with his hands to turn around,and Korric did. ''I'm the most dangerous sellsword in Yunkai...'' Korric trailed off. He wanted to scare Larry,he would have hunted him down in all Essos if he would've made any bad move against him. ''Do not worry,i won't do anything,i swear.'' Larry said,and tied Korric's hands together behind his back. He then got him on the horse ''We're going now.'' Larry said and started to gallop to Meereen's pier. ''I always didn't understand the heart you had sewn on your chest.'' Larry started a small talk ''It's R'hllor's fiery red heart. It's the symbol of the Lord of Light's belief. You can't understand.'' Korric said,and Larry shook his head ''Why? Is your religion a Westerosi one? Is this the reason why you want to go there?'' Larry said,and Korric was taken aback: He showed interest in Korric. ''No,it comes from a far,east continent. I am going to Westeros for honor.'' ''Ok,i mean,i won't go if i were you,but it's your decision.'' He said,and galloped faster. ''I would fight for House Baratheon of Dragonstone. I'll get paid and i will fight for what i believe in.'' Korric says,and looks to Larry,who falls silent.
After a hour of galloping Korric and Larry see Meereen's big port,and a great ship. ''Is that the ship that will take me to Westeros?'' ''Yes,it is. It's a pretty big ship too. Seems like you're lucky.'' Larry says,and after a couple of minutes they reach Meereen's pier and get off the white horse. Larry holds the reins,while Korric then gets closer to the ship,where he sees other people boarding the ship: Sellswords,merchants,lords and ladies. ''Where is this going...'' Korric trails off,and starts to feel uneasy. ''I don't know. I just know for sure that it's going to Westeros. It's owner told me.'' Larry said ''He was a pained lad,always had a look of horror on his face. I wonder what his house did to him...'' He added ''Do you remember anything else?'' ''He had short curly hair,said his name was 'Reek', i don't know who he is,and frankly i don't care. He asked me and other lads to round up some people. I'm a lazy lad,so i didn't find anyone,but you.'' He said,and clapped his hands together. ''I hope you have a great time in Westeros,i have to go to camp,i have work to do. Have fun in Westeros.'' He said,and got on the horse,who was eating some sand ''Don't do that'' Larry said,and spanked the horse on his back ''You shouldn't-'' Korric started,but was cut off by the Horse galloping wildly away ''Spank your horse.'' He finished the sentence,then got on the ship.
As he made his way to a casual room,he saw young ladies talking to each other and eating lemoncakes,and Korric smiled at them,and being the quite handsome man he was,the ladies smiled back. He then went to a room and decided to sleep off the entire day. The room was pretty small and had a few holes that were carved on purpose,to allow whoever was there to see where they were going. The bed was small,but it was comfortable. Korric laid down and closed his eyes ''I made it!'' Was his last thought before passing out.
When he woke up he felt a burning cold on his skin. He shivered and got out of bed,then he peeked out of the door of his small room: There was no one talking or no one walking around. He then turned to the small holes carved into the wood,and tried to see outside,but the holes were too small. He took his sword and stuck it in the thick wood,but he managed to cut a piece out and make the hole bigger. He peeked out and he saw that was snowing. ''WHAT IN THE SEVEN HELLS?!'' He yelled,but put hands on his mouth instantly. He peeked outside again,seeing snowflakes meeting the water and melting,he saw then a small strip of land,all covered in a thick white cloak of snow. ''EVERYBODY GET UP! WHITE HARBOR IS NEARING!'' A voice made Korric jump. ''White Harbor? We are in the North!?'' He said,feeling shocked. He heard voices outside his room. A man entered Korric's room ''What are you doing in the storage room?! Get going, White Harbor is nearing.'' He said,and Korric stepped out of the storage room. He saw a lot of people moving around and pacing nervously. He then saw all the people going towards the exit,and he followed them. After a few minutes he made it out of the ship to see White Harbor,the major seat of House Manderly. He was wearing just an armor that didn't even cover his arms,so the new,sudden climate. He started to shiver and walked towards a pub. He entered it and was greeted by the warmness of a crackling fire,and a lot of men drinking,swearing,and fighting each other. He tried to sit down at a table,but a man got in his way. ''Oi,are you another Essosi that came here?!'' He said,and Korric could smell the alcohol in his breath. Korric then balled his fist up,showed it to the man,who looked at it with a lopsided smile,then he swung at his head,knocking the man out cold. Everyone stares at him,and they erupt in cheers ''TANNED MAN! TANNED MAN! TANNED MAN!'' They were cheering him up,and he sat down at his table,grabbing the horn of ale the man was drinking. A girl with red hair eyes him,then she walks over to him,sitting in front of him. The girl stares in Korric's eyes...
[Stare back] [Look away] [Introduce yourself to the girl.]
So guys! This part is over! Did you like it? I hope you did,i put so much effort in what i do. And i hope you guys will enjoy every one of my chapters.
Question Time!
What did you think of this chapter?
Will this choice be important to Korric's storyline?
Whose part do you want next?
Whose part do you want next?
[Hunter's] [Merrik's] [Mark's] [Jarger Kieron and Philip's] [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] [Korric's] [Megan's] [Damon's] [Saya's] [Talon chapter] [Largonis] [Daegon's]
[Introduce yourself to the girl] [Show Brandon, Thomas and Kevin some love]
Nicely done, again! I wasn't sure Larry would get Korric to Westeros, but there he is. This seems like a minor choice at first, but I have a feeling it will have a bigger impact later, hmm... I also loved the brief mention of Theon/Reek, and how the horse comically ran off. xD
[Introduce yourself to the girl.] What could go wrong? Other than everything...
What did you think of this chapter? I think it was pretty good. I liked it at least.
Will this choice be important to Korric's storyline? I... I don't know...
[Brandon Thomas and Kevin's]
[Stare back] [Largonis]
[Take off to Essos] [Hunter's]
what does liege house mean?
Basically the house you serve/swear loyalty to, i.e. House Forrester is Gared's liege house. (I think that's how it works at least)
I'll make an example with two major houses:
House Karstark swore fealty to the Stark,so House Stark is House Karstark's liege house.
House Trant swore fealty to House Baratheon (Meryn Trant follows King Joffrey's orders because he thinks he's a Baratheon). So House Baratheon is House Trant's liege house.
Your example was correct,but i don't recall Gared having a house. He is a pig farmer.
You know...actually at first i wanted Korric to sail to Winterfell to meet Ramsay,but then i remembered. Winterfell doesn't have any port or harbor of sort....
[Introduce yourself to the girl] [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's]
[Introduce yourself to the girl] and [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's]
[Introduce yourself to the girl.]
[Talon chapter]
I think it was a pretty good chapter.
The choice seems pretty minor right now.
Oh yeah, how silly of me. xD I guess a better example would've been that House Forrester's liege house is House Stark.
[Introduce yourself to the girl]
[Brandon Thomas and Kevin's]
Hi guys! New part! Enjoy it!
Brandon Woods
''Oh no,Thomas...'' Brandon thought,and started to walk towards the yard,guard and sword up. A wildling came up from behind him and took him down,Brandon struggled to get his sword,which was knocked away by that wildling that was now on top of him,wielding a spear. He raised his spear and brought it down,aiming at Brandon's neck. Brandon dodged the spear by an inch and punched it in the middle,breaking it. He grabbed ahold of the now stuck in the ground pointy end and stuck it in the wildling's throat. He made gurgling sounds,choking on his blood,and Brandon pulled out the spear's end,just to hastily stick it back in again,and again,and again. He was now all bloodied and so was the wildling,who fell to the ground,dead. He got up and grabbed his sword again,it was now getting dark so the sword started to glow a blue light. As he was walking he saw dozens of crows he knew,his friends,getting butchered under a wildling's sword,spear,axe or bow ''I need to find Thomas.'' He thought,and a wildling came running towards him,he spun on himself holding the sword in front of him,disemboweling and killing the wildling instantly ''You caught me on the shitter,but i made you shit your whole organs out.'' He thought,laughing to himself,and then he ran towards a boy,who was holding a bow ''What are you doing out here?! You'll be killed!'' Brandon said to the boy ''I'm protecting castle black! Is that your sword?'' He said and looked at the sword ''Yours is really the sword in the darkness,you could light a whole room with that.'' He said,looking at the now light blue glow the sword was emanating ''MY SWORD IS NOT IMPORTANT NOW! GET OUT OF HERE BEFORE I MAKE YOU!'' He screamed and turned to the yard,emptying minute by minute.
He ran in the fray that created in the center of the yard,and started to hack away at enemy wildlings,until he saw a person crawling on the ground. He ran towards him and he saw that Thomas was crawling towards him,two arrows in his chest. Brandon ran to him and he immediately broke the arrows in half ''Let me save you Thomas! We're gonna die here!'' Brandon said,and Thomas shook his head ''You have to find Kevin,he'll be needing help!'' Thomas said,coughing up some blood ''I'm alright,don't worry.'' He said to Brandon,who then took Thomas by the arm,and drug him away from battle. The sword was now glowing more than ever and a wildling lunged to Brandon,who dodged the axe by an inch,causing him to fall to the ground. The wildling brought his axe up on his shoulders,and let it fall on Brandon. He crawled away dodging the shot,and saw Thomas kicking the wildling's knee,who was now wobbling on his legs. Brandon took his chances and took out his dirk,and stuck it in his leg. The wildling screamed and let the axe go,then he punched Brandon in the face,causing him to bleed from his cheek. Brandon didn't give up,and turned the dirk in the wound,making the wildling scream,then he took out the dirk,and stuck it in his other leg,making him fall to the ground. He then took it out and stuck it in the wildling's stomach,and took it out again just to stab him through his neck. He then got on his feet and breathed in relief,looking at Thomas ''We're going to teach the next recruits what you just did there.'' Thomas said ''You always have to take your chances. Take this bow.'' He said,grabbing the small composite taut bow the wildling had slung on his back,and drug a small arrow holder to him. ''Cover me,will you?'' Brandon asked Thomas,who took an arrow,and shot it at the fray,wounding a wildling. ''That will do it?'' ''Yes it will,thank you brother. We will take Castle Black back,i assure you of that.'' Brandon said,then grabbed his sword from the ground ''You're going to teach me that,when we get out of this mess.'' Thomas said,looking at the bright blue sword of brandon ''Her name is Ice Star,not all swords do that!'' Brandon said,smiling at Thomas. He then ran into the fray and yanked a wildling by his hair,piercing his throat with the sword. Brandon was killing countless enemies,until he saw Jon Snow hugging the body of a girl with red hair. Brandon walked to him and took his shoulder ''Jon! Everybody's dying! We have to make sure our defenses stay up until we're ready!'' Brandon said,thinking back at the trap they sat a long time ago at the wall,he didn't even know what it was. It was like a giant,piece of metal ''Like an anchor'' was his opinion. Now it was covered in ten inches of ice,and it was a great time to use it. ''I don't care anymore.'' Jon said simply,caressing the girl's face,her expression peaceful. Brandon understood,and nodded ''I'm sorry,Jon. She loved you too.'' Brandon said. He was one of the few person not to think Jon was a turncloak. Brandon then ran away,planning to go look for Kevin,who was at the gates of the wall. ''I should be able to get to him by going in the castle.'' Brandon thought,and ran to the elevator. A group of wildlings saw him and started to fire arrows to him. He found a shield and raised it up,blocking all the arrows. When the elevator got up the wall,he got off and got on the edge of the wall,looking down,dreading to fall down the Wall. He saw that the gate was smashed and someone entered the Castle. ''Oh no,Kevin must be in trouble.'' He thought and opened the door leading to a Tower. When he opened three thenns wielding axes turned to him with a lopsided smile ''FUUCK!'' He screamed and closed the door. He heard the Thenns punching the door down. He saw a pick on the ground ''I might try to climb down the Wall,but i have a short chance of making it. The crows could soon start the metal trap.'' He thought,then the door broke down...
[Climb down The Wall] [Prepare to Fight] [Run back to the elevator]
So guys! Part's over! Did you like it? I hope you did man! School doesn't let me write,cut me some slack...Anyways!
Question Time
Why did you choose what you chose in this chapter?
Who do you think will have the worst ending between Thomas,Kevin and Brandon?
Whose part do you want next?
[Hunter's] [Merrik's] [Mark's] [Jarger Kieron and Philip's] [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] [Korric's] [Megan's] [Damon's] [Saya's] [Talon chapter] [Largonis] [Daegon's]
Are there some got junkies reading? Who read the books,watch the show,and know a lot of lore? I hope so...
[Run back to the elevator]
Questions: 1. Knowing thenns it would be best to avoid the thenns and get down the safest way
[Saya's]
Finally i got here. Ok ill just catch up with this THEN ill vote
[Run back to the elevator] I don't know, maybe it'll be for the better.
[Megan's]
[Climb down The Wall] and [Talon chapter] Great chapters as usual! I've been out the loop lately because of school, but keep up the great work! Seeing this battle makes me think of how Frostfinger says everyone will die at the wall... huh.
[Run back to the elevator] [Talon chapter]