A New Game Of Thrones Fanfiction,read thread to know how to enter!

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  • Whatchu saying, it was more like Sansa x Kieron

    Game Of Thrones is not about otps... Talia X Mark.. Heheheheehheheheh....

  • Yeah i know Sansa x Kieron Is officially over...maybe the time will come for Talia and Mark too...

    Whatchu saying, it was more like Sansa x Kieron

  • [Stay with Sansa]

    [Tell her your story]

    [Saya's]

    Hi guys! New part,enjoy it! (Yay finally posting dailyy) Jarger's POV (The choice was to allow the red head girl to come in the Vale o

  • Noooooooo, not Talia and Mark! D:

    Yeah i know Sansa x Kieron Is officially over...maybe the time will come for Talia and Mark too...

  • Yeeeeees, Talia and Mark! :D

    SerMarve posted: »

    Noooooooo, not Talia and Mark!

  • Hi guys! New chapter! Enjoy it!

    Megan Tuttle

    (Go talk to Jon Snow)

    Megan walked up to Jon Snow,who was cleaning Castle Black's tables,and touched his shoulder. Jon turned around and saw Megan ''Who are you?'' He said,his face confused ''A fiery supporter of House Stark,Jon. You still have friends in Westeros.'' Megan said,and Jon's expression was relieved and happy. ''Those Frey snakes will pay for what they have done.'' Jon said ''I need your help,i have to free Gared,he is my cousin.'' Jon hesitated,before shaking his head ''I can't.'' ''Please,he is my family,my cousin.'' She pleaded,and he gave in ''These are the keys to the shed he's locked in,make sure nobody sees you when you decide to free him.'' He said ''Thank you Jon! Hopefully i will be able to repay you.'' Megan thanked him ''Now go,before someone sees a lady prancing around Castle Black.'' Jon said and Megan got back in the storage room she used as a hiding spot,she had a plan,she was going to free Gared that night.

    When night set,Megan peeked out of the storage room,key in hand,ready to free Gared ''I'm coming to save you Gared.'' She walked out of the storage room and tiptoed towards the exit. Megan was soothed by the warmness of the castle,and when she set foot out of it,her bones chilled. Her eyes adjusted to the moonlight and she saw that some guards were walking around,patrolling the yard. She looked to her left,then to her right and then she started to slowly make her way around the guards. Her mind raced with a lot of thoughts: ''What if they already killed him?'' ''Where will we go?'' ''Did he survive this night? The cold must've killed him by now.'' She then focused on a blonde man pulling on a door ''That's the place!'' Megan said,recognizing the battered,run down shack in which her cousin Gared was kept in ''But why is there a man outside of it?'' She thought to herself,but she slowly snuck up on the man. When she was close enough,she put a hand around his mouth,making him whimper ''Screaming will be the last thing you'll ever do.'' Megan threatened him ''I'm friendly'' The man whispered,and Megan let him go. ''What's your name?'' She asked ''I am Cotter,i was trying to free my friend Gared.'' Megan's eyes widened at Cotter saying her cousin's name. ''He's my cousin,we need to help him.'' Megan said,and Cotter nodded in surprise. The two then noticed that Gared jammed the door open,and walked out of the shack. Megan's knees went soft,a knot formed in her throat. She hugged him and Gared slowly caressed her hair ''Megan,we need to get out of Castle Black,are you up for a little adventure?'' ''More like a death sentence.'' She said ''It's our only way out,that or we die.'' Gared said and then shook Cotter's hand ''Thank you for helping me.'' He said and Cotter nodded. ''I have a plan'' Cotter said ''What?'' Gared and Megan said at the unison ''We sneak around the guards,we get out of Castle Black and then we go North.'' Cotter said,and Megan shook her head ''Is that it?! So much for the plan'' She said,and Cotter shrugged,they then got down and started to slowly walk towards Castle Black's exit. Megan was behind his cousin. They stopped behind a cart,and they saw there were three guards,one in the yard,and two crossbowmen on the battlements. Megan then quietly ran towards another cart,and she crawled under it,almost being seen by a guard. Gared then does the same,and yanks her arm ''Why did you do that!?'' He whispered,and Megan swung her arm away ''I'm doing this since i was born. Remember the grove?'' She asked him,and he was taken aback ''Yes! Those were good times,you always were the last one to be found,we should play again when we get back to Ironra-'' ''FOLLOW ME!'' Megan whispered as she saw an opening and darted towards Castle Black's wide doors when the two guards on the battlements turned around and the one in the yard walked away. Gared followed her,and when they turned around they saw that Cotter was clumsily walking towards them. ''Gared,let me come with you.'' A man's voice said from behind them. Megan hastily turned around ''Finn?'' Gared said ''We need to go,Frostfinger believes i am covering for you,please let me come with you!'' Finn pleaded Gared,who sighed ''Alright,you can come with us.'' ''Thank you Gared!'' Finn said and Cotter caught up with them. ''Is he coming with us?'' ''Yes,why?'' Gared asked him ''We can't let him come with us! He is dangerous!'' ''He is coming.'' Cotter then shook his head and sighed ''Let's go!'' Megan said,and the four sprinted out of Castle Black,towards the North.

    ''You fucking liar,you said you weren't interested in coming north.'' Cotter said to Finn,who turned around to face him ''I WAS GOING TO DIE THERE! YOU WOULD'VE DONE THE SAME!'' He said and kicked some snow. ''You aren't even going to be useful for us,i mean what can you do?!'' ''What can i do!? I can fight,unlike you!'' ''I have a good wit,and that's more useful!'' ''Not here in the North,it's just fight for survival here.'' ''You need to stop bickering.'' Megan said,but Finn shoved her away,making her fall on the ground. ''DON'T DO THAT!'' Gared said and pushed Finn around,and Cotter helped Megan up ''Thank you.'' Megan said to him ''Lad doesn't know any good manners,just like when he called me Cotter the Potato Fucker.'' Megan started to laugh,and Cotter was taken aback ''Cotter the Potato Fucker,i will now call you that!'' Megan said,but Finn grabbed Cotter by the hair ''You aren't even supposed to be here,why are you so interested in going North?'' Finn said ''I could ask you the same question.'' ''I already told you. I think you have something to hide,don't you?'' Finn asked with a sly smile. Cotter shook his head ''No,why would i?'' Finn grabbed Cotter by the neck ''BECAUSE YOU'VE ALWAYS BEEN A GREAT LIAR!'' He said,and Cotter's expression was shocked. ''Please,let me go...'' Cotter pleaded...

    [Shove Finn away] [Press Cotter to answer]

    So guys! This is the end of the part! Did you like it? I really hope you did! I (hopefully) will post every day from now on.

    Current Mood

    Ever got that feeling that when you get 99 out of 100 answers right and everybody in the classroom is giving you the death stare? That's how i felt this morning :)

    How is your day so far?

    Mine is pretty good!

    Whose part do you want next?

    [Hunter's] [Merrik's] [Mark's] [Jarger Kieron and Philip's] [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] [Korric's] [Megan's] [Damon's] [Saya's] [Talon chapter] [Largonis] [Maryette] [Daegon's]

  • [Shove Finn away]

    Good job on the test man, I took a test in AP euro and thought I failed it, come to find out I got a 97 on it.

    [Saya's]

    Hi guys! New chapter! Enjoy it! Megan Tuttle (Go talk to Jon Snow) Megan walked up to Jon Snow,who was cleaning Castle Black's tabl

  • [Shove Finn away]
    Pretty good job on the test, I just passed a science test with flying colors and I know the feeling with everybody staring at you.

    I really like this part and enjoy how the story is really getting involved with game in a broader scale than just Ironrath.

    [Korric's]

    Hi guys! New chapter! Enjoy it! Megan Tuttle (Go talk to Jon Snow) Megan walked up to Jon Snow,who was cleaning Castle Black's tabl

  • [Shove Finn away] I like the chapter, Jon seems nicer in this chapter, but then again, he isn't Lord Commander just yet.

    I got a different feeling, I have a math test coming up, so I'm really curious on how well I'll do.

    [Your Vote] I can't figure out the character I want next, so many to choose from!

    Hi guys! New chapter! Enjoy it! Megan Tuttle (Go talk to Jon Snow) Megan walked up to Jon Snow,who was cleaning Castle Black's tabl

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    I hope you'll make it through! And....letting me decide is quite noice! Thank yew! And yes,i imagined Jon to be relieved knowing he had still friends that support the Starks

  • [Shove Finn away] [Merrik's]

    Nice job once again, with the chapter as well as the test! I got an A from an English test today and got some death stares as well. xD Then again I'm failing on every other subject so... :p

    Hi guys! New chapter! Enjoy it! Megan Tuttle (Go talk to Jon Snow) Megan walked up to Jon Snow,who was cleaning Castle Black's tabl

  • [Press Cotter to answer]
    Answers whilst this plays in the background

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    [Saya's]
    Good job on that! I have my first test of the year tomorrow which is science.

    Hi guys! New chapter! Enjoy it! Megan Tuttle (Go talk to Jon Snow) Megan walked up to Jon Snow,who was cleaning Castle Black's tabl

  • I hope you'll pass it! Good luck!!

    [Press Cotter to answer] Answers whilst this plays in the background enter link description here [Saya's] Good job on that! I have my first test of the year tomorrow which is science.

  • That's awesome! And i hope you fix your other grades!

    SerMarve posted: »

    [Shove Finn away] [Merrik's] Nice job once again, with the chapter as well as the test! I got an A from an English test today and got some death stares as well. xD Then again I'm failing on every other subject so...

  • Guys,another vote is up!

    You prefer that [I decide the next part's character] or will it be Saya,who got the most votes??

  • [You decide the next part's character] My brain can't handle all these characters to choose from...

    Guys,another vote is up! You prefer that [I decide the next part's character] or will it be Saya,who got the most votes??

  • [I decide the next part's character]

    Guys,another vote is up! You prefer that [I decide the next part's character] or will it be Saya,who got the most votes??

  • [I decide the next part's character]

    Guys,another vote is up! You prefer that [I decide the next part's character] or will it be Saya,who got the most votes??

  • Great story! I discovered it last week, I've read it all in less than 5 days. I'll submit a character, hope you like it!

    Guys,another vote is up! You prefer that [I decide the next part's character] or will it be Saya,who got the most votes??

  • Submitted character! Yay!

    Guschwell posted: »

    Great story! I discovered it last week, I've read it all in less than 5 days. I'll submit a character, hope you like it!

  • I am happy that you like it!

    Guschwell posted: »

    Submitted character! Yay!

  • Haha,i got used to it!

    SerMarve posted: »

    [You decide the next part's character] My brain can't handle all these characters to choose from...

  • [Saya]

    Guys,another vote is up! You prefer that [I decide the next part's character] or will it be Saya,who got the most votes??

  • [Saya's]

    Guys,another vote is up! You prefer that [I decide the next part's character] or will it be Saya,who got the most votes??

  • [Saya] 's chapter please ^.^

    Guys,another vote is up! You prefer that [I decide the next part's character] or will it be Saya,who got the most votes??

  • [Saya] :)

    Guys,another vote is up! You prefer that [I decide the next part's character] or will it be Saya,who got the most votes??

  • edited October 2015

    Hi guys! New part!

    You let me decide who to pick...

    Merrik

    ''What did you see? Tell me Merrik.'' Sylvi insisted ''I saw...you,and a small cub driven away by brown wolves...'' Merrik spoke slowly,and saw Sylvi's expression turn from normal to sad. ''I...i don't believe you.'' Sylvi said and started to pace back and forth in the small tent they were both in ''I am telling you the truth. Do you want to tell me something about your past? Maybe it's connected.'' Merrik said and got up from the warm cozy bed he was sitting into ''Or does it still hurt you?'' ''It does.'' Sylvi simply said,and got out of the tent. ''I probably shouldn't have pressed her like that.'' Merrik thought,and started to gnaw on the rabbit meat Sylvi cooked for the both of them. It had a familiar taste,it reminded him of the times he was hunting with Frord and Garen. ''How i miss those two...'' He thought ''Sooner or later,i'll see my two friends again.'' He then sat down on the bed,slowly drifting off to sleep. The process of warging into another body made him tired again,he slowly passed out on the bed,lulled by the warmness of the heavy furs sitting on it.

    Merrik was awoken by a loud scream ''Give us what we want and we will stop.'' An ominous voice said and then another scream of pain was heard. ''Sylvi!'' Merrik slowly whispered. He got out of bed and slowly took his spear that was sitting on a small wood table. He peeked out of the tent and saw two men,one holding Sylvi's arm,the other slowly slicing into it with his shortsword. Merrik's blood boiled at the sight of Sylvi suffering. He gripped his spear and slowly snuck out of the tent. He walked towards them ''LEAVE HER BE!'' He shouted to the two men,who turned around in fright. The two then laughed,as they were the double of Merrik's size. ''We will when you give us some food'' One of the two fat men said to Merrik. Sylvi shot a both worried and relieved look at Merrik. The wildling who was cutting her arm now was holding her in place,while the other wildling walked towards Merrik. ''You don't want to know what will happen if you don't give us your food.'' The wildling shot a menacing look at Merrik,who took a deep breath. ''You won't get any of OUR food,now leave,you don't want to know what will happen if you don't.'' Merrik said,his muscular body now hunched forward,ready to pounce on the man. ''Did you hear him?! We have to leave!'' The men exchanged amused looks,then the man who was walking towards Merrik unsheathed his axe. ''WE GAVE YOU A CHANCE,NOW YOU'LL SUFFER THE CONSEQUENCES!'' The man who was holding Sylvi kicked her in the gut,making her gasp for air. ''DON'T TOUCH HER!'' Merrik said and ran towards the man kicking Sylvi,thrusting his spear at him. The man cried out in pain as the spear pierced through his shoulder,blood was now all over the spear. Merrik yanked the spear out and punched the man in the face,knocking him to the ground. Sylvi got up and thrusted her spear in the other man's abdomen,killing him instantly. Merrik was fighting with the wildling on the ground,who punched Merrik in the face,which gave him enough time to blow his horn. Merrik stopped him immediately,yanking the horn out of his hand and then sticking it in his throat,but it was too late.

    Five wildlings came out from the woods,charging at full speed against Merrik and Sylvi. ''Good luck fighting against them,scrawny man.'' Sylvi challenged Merrik ''I'll kill more wildlings than you!'' Merrik said to her,and rushed in the crowd of men. He started to swing his spear around,but a wildling easily overpowered him. The wildling was swinging his axe at him,and Merrik continued dodging it. He then put his spear sideways,trying to block the shot,but the wildling easily broke it in two. Merrik then fell on the ground,stunned. The wildling got closer to him but he clumsily got on his feet ''I have no choice but to use these two pieces of wood.'' He thought. The wildling swung his axe at him,but he dodged it and quickly bludgeoned his head with a piece of wood. The wildling again went for a shot but Merrik parried it with a piece of wood,and stuck the other piece of wood,the one with the spearhead,in the wildling's shoulder. He dropped his axe and knelt to the ground,and Merrik easily finished him off,breaking his neck. He then knelt to grab his axe,and saw that Sylvi already killed two wildlings.

    The two other wildlings teamed up on Sylvi,and Merrik ran at them. He easily killed one from behind,sticking the axe in his head,but the other wildling reacted and pierced Merrik's leg with his spear. Merrik cried out in pain and dropped to the ground. He felt the warmness of his blood come in contact with the coldness of the snow,and saw the wildling punching Sylvi to the ground,Sylvi struggled against him,but he got on top of her. Merrik slowly crawled towards the wildling,who grabbed Sylvi by her neck,trying to choke her. Merrik then got up and jumped on his good leg towards the wildling. He saw Sylvi kick the man in his crotch,making the man fall on the ground,but he reacted instantly and unsheathed a dagger. Merrik jumped at the wildling with all his might and tackled him to the ground,to hear Sylvi scream out in pain once again. Merrik then swung the axe in the man's head,making his brains splatter all over the white snow.

    The men were all dead,and all he could hear was Sylvi's whining ''Merrik...'' She whispered,he turned around and saw that the dagger was stuck on a side of her shoulder. Merrik put his hand on Sylvi's mouth and took the dagger out of Sylvi's shoulder,who bit his hand. ''OW!'' Merrik said,clutching his hand ''Sorry,you were hurting me.'' She said,and slowly got on her feet. ''Get on your feet,scrawny man.'' She said,challenging him once again ''I can't!'' He said,clutching his leg,which was bleeding profusely. ''You won the challenge,you killed more wildlings,but that doesn't mean i'll cure your leg.'' She says,a smile on her face. She walked in the tent,and Merrik slowly drug himself in,too.

    Merrik slowly got on the bed ''You'll bleed all over it!'' Sylvi said,yanking Merrik to the ground by his bad leg. He howled in pain ''WHY IS IT YOU ALWAYS HAVE TO BE ROUGH!?'' He screamed and then passed out from the pain. When he woke up he saw Sylvi wrapping bandages around his leg. ''Merrik! I was...worried about you.'' Sylvi said ''Why?'' He asked ''The way you passed out was rough.'' ''How is your wound?'' Sylvi then looked at her shoulder,that was already bandaged ''Doesn't even hurt me. You saved my life.'' Sylvi said,and smiled briefly at Merrik. ''She never smiles...'' Merrik thinks ''You don't have to thank me.'' There was a long silence,then broken by Sylvi ''Did you really...dreamt about me?'' ''Yes i did.'' ''I had,have,a little brother,he was my whole world. I was kicked out my community because i was considered...an ill omen.'' She said,her eyes lucid. ''Poor girl...her eyes are just beautiful and her hair too,i can't imagine why someone could think that.'' Merrik thought but then shook it off,kicking himself mentally for even thinking that. ''They kicked my brother out too...i wasn't able to give my brother a good life,and it's just my fault...'' She looked at the ground ''Do it.'' Merrik thought,and pulled her in for a hug. She pushed her head in his chest,not crying,just breathing heavily. ''Let your emotions out'' Merrik said,caressing her hair,and she began to sob.

    When she lifted her head from his chest,she slowly walked outside the tent,scouting the place. ''We should move away from here,some wildlings might see the bodies.'' Merrik said,and Sylvi turned to him ''You can't walk yet.'' She says ''I will walk,trust me. We should go closer to Castle Black.'' Sylvi turned to him ''If we go,i won't carry you around like a dead weight. If your leg gives in,you'll be fresh meat for the crows.'' Sylvi warns him...

    [Disband the camp and go away from the zone.] [Stay]

    So guys! This part is over! I hope you liked it! Actually tell me in the comments!

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    Next part will be about Saya (I am sorry to all those people who wanted her,but i had this chapter ready,i promise that i will write about her tomorrow!)

    Hi guys! As usual,thank you for existing!!

    Whose part do you want next?

    [Hunter's] [Merrik's] [Mark's] [Jarger Kieron and Philip's] [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] [Korric's] [Megan's] [Damon's] [Saya's] [Talon chapter] [Largonis] [Maryette] [Daegon's]

  • [Disband the camp and go away from the zone]
    I was thinking about my character, and I'd like to change somethings. So I'll rewrite the backstory, to make it better. Nice chapter!

  • Already re-wrote it. I only wanted to change his background, but you can get the other characteristics of the old character. Thank you for the nice story!

    Guschwell posted: »

    [Disband the camp and go away from the zone] I was thinking about my character, and I'd like to change somethings. So I'll rewrite the backstory, to make it better. Nice chapter!

  • [Stay] This choice is so hard >A< And that fight scene was intense!

    I wish I could get Legend Of The Brofist, it looks great, but sadly I'm poor as hell...

    Hi guys! New part! You let me decide who to pick... Merrik ''What did you see? Tell me Merrik.'' Sylvi insisted ''I saw...you,and a

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    [Disband the camp and go away from the zone]
  • edited October 2015
    Whose part you want next? I edited the chapter see the end

    [Disband the camp and go away from the zone]

  • edited October 2015

    Whose part you want next? I edited the chapter see the end

    Guschwell posted: »

    Already re-wrote it. I only wanted to change his background, but you can get the other characteristics of the old character. Thank you for the nice story!

  • Sorry ot hear that! And,yeah,the fight scene better be worth it,it's 70% of the chapter! (this choice won't be so hard when the consequences will arrive) Also,whose part do you want next? I edited the chapter,see the end!

    SerMarve posted: »

    [Stay] This choice is so hard >A< And that fight scene was intense! I wish I could get Legend Of The Brofist, it looks great, but sadly I'm poor as hell...

  • **[Stay]** & **[Daegon's]** I loved the way Merrik passed out, geez that was hilarious.

    Hi guys! New part! You let me decide who to pick... Merrik ''What did you see? Tell me Merrik.'' Sylvi insisted ''I saw...you,and a

  • edited October 2015

    [Daegon's]

  • [Daegon's]

    Sorry ot hear that! And,yeah,the fight scene better be worth it,it's 70% of the chapter! (this choice won't be so hard when the consequences will arrive) Also,whose part do you want next? I edited the chapter,see the end!

  • Hi guys! New part! I hope you enjoy it! Grab some popcorn,some hot chocolate or what you usually eat when you read,and be sure to enjoy the plot twist,that will be this part.

    Daegon Targaryen
    (Daegon had the choice to go find Brienne of Tarth,and go with her on a journey,or embark on a ship,which was full of kingsguards,and take off to essos,people chose the second option)

    ''I'll take my chances'' Daegon said ''NO! You can't do that,they will kill you before you know it.'' Jiao Ho said,and Daegon shook his head ''It's not your choice. Soon,i will be hugging my sister again.'' Daegon said,his eyes shining,and started to walk out of the house,but Jiao Ho stopped him ''If you go,then i come with you.'' Jiao said,and Daegon shrugged ''Ok,you can come.'' He said,and the two exited the house,and started to walk towards King's Landing's pier,Daegon wore a big shadowy hood,that didn't show his face.

    ''We are almost there.'' Jiao Ho,putting a hand over his eyes,the warm sun of King's Landing briefly blinding him. ''Is that our ship?'' Daegon asked,eyeing a big ship with white sails ''Yes,that's the one.'' Jiao Ho said. The two walked towards the ship,where a horrifying sight would greet them.

    ''I told you,kingsguards are all over this ship!'' Jiao Ho said,angered. At least 10 kingsguards were on board,and another group was sitting outside the ship. ''We still have to try...'' Daegon said,not giving up. His sister was waiting for him,and he finally decided to leave the hateful place which is King's Landing. ''We have to split,i get on the ship first,i distract the kingsguards,then you get in when the ship is about to sail.'' Jiao Ho said ''That's a perfect plan,my friend. Soon,we will be enjoying the Essosi riches!'' Daegon said,smiling. Jiao Ho got on the ship,the kingsguards barely noticing him,as many people were getting on. He then got closer to a kingsguard ''Hey,i need a few information.'' Jiao said ''Where does this ship go?'' He asked ''You think i am going to answer your question?'' A kingsguard said and pushed Jiao to the ground. The ship was sailing,this was Daegon's moment. He picked up the pace and started to board the ship,but was stopped by a kingsguard. ''HEY! The ship's already sailing!'' The kingsguard shouted in his face. ''Sorry,i didn't see that.'' ''LOOK ME IN THE EYES WHEN YOU SPEAK TO ME!'' The kingsguard spat at his face,and Daegon slowly raised his head,his lilac eyes showing. ''Wait...YOU ARE-'' Daegon took out the shortsword that he was hiding under his black cloak and stabbed the kingsguard in the chest,he took the sword out and sliced his throat,making the kingsguard fall on the ground dead. The other kingsguards turned around to face him. Daegon grabbed the sword of the dead kingsguard,a heavy broadsword. ''KILL HIM! HE IS THE TARGARYEN BASTARD!'' A kingsguard shouted,and Daegon quickly got on the ship when it was about to take off,leaving the kingsguards that were sitting outside it. He then turned around to face Jiao who was holding a box in his hand,and smashed it over the head of a kingsguard,knocking him out. The kingsguards surrounded Daegon,who swung at one of them,but was easily parried. A kingsguard went for his shot but Daegon clumsily parried it,then he threw himself on three kingsguards,causing them to fall off the ship. Two kingsguards then tried to push Daegon off it as well,but Jiao Ho helped his friend by knocking them off instead ''YOU NEVER LEAVE A FRIEND BEHIND!'' Jiao Ho said,and helped Daegon to his feet,but a kingsguard easily picked Jiao up by his neck,and tossed him to the ground,knocking him out. There were three kingsguards still standing ''Come on Daegon,you can do this.'' He psyched himself up,and swung at a kingsguard,the swing was so strong that caused the sword of the latter to bend,Daegon recoiled and swung at him again,sticking the broadsword sideways in his neck. Daegon then turned to the other two kingsugards,and swung at one of them. The kingsguard parried it and thrusted his longsword towards Daegon,who couldn't dodge it,piercing his torso. Daegon gasped,and his body started to go numb. He dropped his sword to the ground,and the kingsguard swung at him again. Daegon grabbed the hilt of his sword and yanked it out of his hand,then stuck it in his abdomen. He saw that King's Landing was already far away from the ship. The other kingsguard swung at him but Daegon parried it with his sword. He dropped to the ground,and he threw his sword in a desperate attempt to kill him. The sword sliced through the last kingsguard's stomach,which sprayed out blood on the ship's ground. Daegon started to wonder who was the ship's captain,apparently his only job was to get the people to Meereen,alive or dead. Daegon then started to get up,but the last kingsguard did as well,snatching the shortsword out of Daegon's hand,then sticking it into his abdomen again. Daegon coughed up blood,and the kingsguard slowly got up,pushing the shortsword deeper into Daegon's wound. Then he pulled the sword out of his chest,and Daegon dropped to his knees. Through his now blurry vision,he saw the kingsguard fall unconcious on the ground. ''I'm-i'm sorry sister...i failed...'' He blurted out,his voice trembling. His thoughts were getting confused,his head heavier,the last thing he saw before passing away was Jiao Ho,who was peacefully sleeping on the ship's wooden floor.

    Hunter's POV

    ''My queen,there's a letter for you.'' Hunter said,giving the letter to Daenerys ''You know who sent it?'' ''The informant who kept you updated on your brother.'' Her face instantly turned from calm to worried,she quickly opened the letter...

    Jiao Ho

    Your brother told me he was going to go to Essos,he wanted to finally see you again,he told me he was going to board a ship to Essos,and i went with him. Unfortunately,we encountered kingsguards on the ship,your brother fought with honor,but he wasn't able to save his own life...i found his body with a stab wound on his chest. I'm now on this ship,which is full of slaves and is directed to Meereen,where you are. I'm now waiting for further instructions,

    Jiao Ho

    Tears began to flow out of Daenerys' eyes as she read the last sentence of the letter. Hunter started to hug her but Daenerys pushed him away,and she started to run to her own tent. First her whole family,then Drogo,and then her twin? ''Daenerys!'' Hunter started to run after her. He always tried his best to be her most loyal soldier,and he's going to show his loyalty now.

    When Hunter reached Dany's tent he saw her standing perfectly still in her tent. ''Daenerys?'' He slowly entered the tent,Daenerys stared at him ''They will pay.'' She said,Hunter was confused ''Who? Who will pay?'' He asked her ''The kingsguard,the King,Queen Cersei,they will all pay.'' ''Yes they will'' ''Starks,Lannisters,Baratheons,They're just spikes on a wheel,and i'm going to break the wheel.'' Daenerys is showing a side yet not seen to Hunter,and it confuses him ''To be a fair queen,you'll need to mete out punishment in the right way.'' Hunter said ''No,they will pay dearly for what they've all done. To my family.'' ''It's not right,Daenerys.'' ''You won't be the king,i'll be the queen,so you better get used to it.'' Hunter then speaks up...

    [''I'll be your hand,and what the Queen dreams,the hand builds.] [''I won't stand for this,i'd rather betray you and your house,than do the things you are speaking]

    So guys! This part's over! Did you like it? I didn't...Wipes tears away

    Question Time!

    Did you see the Plot twist coming?
    Is Hunterys or Danter official? Is it sailing? Did it sail? WILL IT SINK!? Smirk **
    **[McDonalds or Burger King?]

    Whose part do you want next?

    [Hunter's] [Merrik's] [Mark's] [Jarger Kieron and Philip's] [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] [Korric's] [Megan's] [Damon's] [Saya's] [Talon chapter] [Largonis] [Maryette] [Jiao Ho's]

  • [''I won't stand for this,i'd rather betray you and your house,than do the things you are speaking] Eh, er, um.... I don't know.... Maybe?

    [Megan's]

    Hi guys! New part! I hope you enjoy it! Grab some popcorn,some hot chocolate or what you usually eat when you read,and be sure to enjoy the

  • [''I'll be your hand,and what the Queen dreams,the hand builds.] and [Talon chapter] The feels man. The FEELS. Oh and I think I like Burger King's entrees but McDonalds' deserts.

    Hi guys! New part! I hope you enjoy it! Grab some popcorn,some hot chocolate or what you usually eat when you read,and be sure to enjoy the

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