Name: Patrick
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Group: The New Frontier
Relation: Max's step brother
Story: Patrick was living at Max's house until the apocalypse occurred which caused them to seek shelter at a military outpost. Unfortunately, a crisis occurred when the militants were falsely ordered to execute all civilians, causing chaos. Max and Patrick survived and decided to reside in the countryside for 2 years until a group of raiders took all their supplies and left them starving. Problems also arose when a herd of hundreds started ravaging the countryside and leading Max and Patrick to evacuate once more to the city. Unluckiness strikes again when the residents of the city of Richmond were the same raiders who stole Max's and Patrick's supplies. Max and Patrick were kept in captivity and were forced to do hard labour until the raiders were attacked by an armed group called The New Frontier. Patrick and Max were rescued by David and Badger who lead the attack as Richmond was a great supply zone filled with fortified buildings, unscavenged stores and a river giving easy access to water. Max and Patrick decided to join the group and quickly rose through the ranks as they were aggressive, yet reasonable men. Patrick was however considered "too kind" to survivors which led up to a civil war between the resident New Frontier side and the militia New Frontier side. Patrick was blamed by Badger and David but Max decided to stick up for him. Nonetheless, Patrick was banished from the group and Max left him supplies on his new journey.
Hopefully this wasn't a cringy story as I don't usually write stories
Here's mine:- he is a 14 yr old boy who lives in a small town somewhere in Georgia, he has ver serious anger issues, though nearly suppressed with the help of medications. He and his parents don't really know what's really going on, they think that some kind of disease and the government is calling the citizens to major cities to help them. So, despite arguments from the rest of the family, they decide to leave.
Now we will be seeing from the eyes of the boy
" stuck in traffic from an hour, thank god I didn't drink that juice with my father, and he shouldn't have either, he's covered sweat, oh and Ac is set at maximum, lol poor man
We see few people running in the opposite direction, father lowers the glass " hey you, what's happening why are you running" one them stops " RUN, THEY ARE COMING RUN!"
" I am gonna check out what's happening you two wait here " he hands mother the car keys and leave's. Ten minutes of utter silence pass
" I am going to see what's taking him so long, you stay here" she said to me, I try the handle, locked dammit. I think how o could get out, then I remember mom telling about having spare keys in her purse, and fortunately she left it here. I open the door and start walking and nearly stumble on one of the rods lying around, the road was lined on one side with under-construction buildings, which the mayor was planning to sell to offices and growing businesses, the idea was opposed by greenists because it involved cutting down trees. After a few minutes of walking I saw 2 people leaning down and they were making strange noises, like chewing, I tried to see what they were doing without attracting their attention. At first it looked like a disfigured animal, but when I looked closely, they were people with their legs half chewed, revealing their bones, and their faces scratched and bit(?) soo badly it was impossible to recognise them, but one of them were wearing a hat, my fathers hat, it was my father and the woman beside him was my mother, I let out a scream, the monsters who were eating them, turned towards me and tried to bite me, I pushed them away " STAY BACK!" i said withe tears flowing down my eyes and dropping from my cheeks, but they looked like they didnt understand whit i told them, i saw big stone lying beside the road, i threw it at the head of one of those creatures whose head was already cracked, looks like someone hit it with a hammer, it immediately fell down, its head cracked open, its brain flowed out, the other one lunged at me, i moved away and he fell down i picked up a metal rod and bashed its head. i went and sat down near my parents, and cried for what it seemed like hours but in truth were some minutes, "ughh" came from my father, i thought it was a miracle, my father came back to life! i thought and hugged him, even though he was covered in blood. i felt a small sharp sensation on my shoulder, he was tring to bite me , but his jaw was half broken from one side so he couldnt apply any force, i immediately lunged back, he started crawling towards me and at the same time other had too came back to " life" and started following him, " mother, father stop please! it me your son" i said with tears but they didnt react. a man came running, he had a gun, he shot them both grabbed my shoulder, " come on boy we have to go, they are coming " he said, i was confused, i thought he had killed my parents "you.....you killed them" i said " what, no they were already dead, they are coming theres no time for this we have to go, now" . i in a fit of anger took out my swiss knife, which was given to me by my hunting obsessed uncle, and slashed his throat "ggh." he fell down on the ground. i was standing there, confused, i didnt know what was happening or what just happend, then i saw more of those creatures coming, i looked at my parents with tears flowing " i am sorry" and ran away.
soo, i am not extremely good at writing, but i would like to listen to your guys comments though.
and if you like, please continue the story .
Here's mine:- he is a 14 yr old boy who lives in a small town somewhere in Georgia, he has ver serious anger issues, though nearly suppresse… mored with the help of medications. He and his parents don't really know what's really going on, they think that some kind of disease and the government is calling the citizens to major cities to help them. So, despite arguments from the rest of the family, they decide to leave.
Now we will be seeing from the eyes of the boy
" stuck in traffic from an hour, thank god I didn't drink that juice with my father, and he shouldn't have either, he's covered sweat, oh and Ac is set at maximum, lol poor man
We see few people running in the opposite direction, father lowers the glass " hey you, what's happening why are you running" one them stops " RUN, THEY ARE COMING RUN!"
" I am gonna check out what's happening you two wait here " he hands mother the car keys and leave's. Ten minutes of utter silence pass
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Hair: Light Brown, mid-back length, tied back in a ponytail.
Beard: Full, Graying.
Identifying marks: Bullet scar on left shoulder, Knife scar on left forearm, Skull Tattoo on right shoulder, and Celtics Cross Tattoo on right forearm.
Apparel:
Brown Coat.
Denim Shirt.
Black Jeans.
Black Army Boots.
Weapons:
AK47.
45 Caliber Revolver.
Bowie Knife.
Relationship: Younger brother to Kenny.
Status: Alive.
Personality:
Intelligent.
Driven.
Highly Self-confident, but not arrogant.
Hardworking.
Calm
Calculating.
Opportunistic.
Highly Intuitive.
Charismatic.
Persuasive.
Manipulative, (When the situation calls for it.)
Eloquent, (hardly ever swears, unlike his older brother.)
Resilient.
Cunning.
Cautious.
Sarcastic.
Habbits/Hobbies:
Poker player.
Drinker.
Cigar Smoker.
Occasional Pot Smoker.
Pool player.
Nascar enthusiast.
Rodio enthusiast and occasional Bull Rider.
Hardened Brawler.
Skills:
Decorated Marksman.
Welder.
Mechanic.
Trained in mixed Martial arts, and Boxing.
Tracker.
Improvised weapons expert.
Bio: Born and raised in Fort Lauderdale Florida. Enlisted in the Army at 18, served in Desert Storm.
Before returning home from the war, he spent 10 years in London, working as a dock worker, and later as a construction worker.
After 3 years in London, he met a woman, named Kelly, and the two began dating, and later became a couple. Two years later the couple had a son, whom they named John, and later a daughter, named Jenny.
After 7 years together, Kelly took the children and left Charles for another guy, wanting Charles to have no part of their children's lives. With no further reason to stay in London, he returned home to Florida.
Started doing Coccaine after being discharged from the army, and when he returned to the States, he was arrested and ended up in prison for three years. Gained quite a reputation as a brawler, as someone not to be messed with.
After his release and of his parole, he bought a motorcycle and began drifting across the country, taking up odd jobs here and there.
After two years, while in New Mexico, the 35 year old Charles met a 20 year old college student named Stacy. After a year of dating, the two married, and the following year they had a son, whom they named James.
When the apocalypse began, the 40 year old Charles took his family and headed to California, grabbed a boat, and headed out onto open water.
Looks : Hair similar to Javier's, Beard (similar to ricks (RIP beard) Black hair, Normal body, 6 foot 2
Personality : Kind enough to let you live but mean enough to fuck you over ten times worse than you fucked him in the first place (If you fucked him ... not. like that)
Occupation : Member of The New Frontier
Character relations : One of Lee's students pre-apoc
I have one:
Name: Jamie
Age: 12
Group: New Frontier
Relationship with other characters: was one of Clementine's pre-apocalyptic school friends.
Looks: Blonde hair, blue eyes, striped glasses, a bit taller than Clementine, always wears a blue hoodie.
Weapons: Glock 22, AK-12, Mossberg 590, pocket knife
Personality: Quite tough but caring to his friends/family, confident, has depression, outgoing, genius, sneaky, funny.
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Name: Patrick
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Group: The New Frontier
Relation: Max's step brother
Story: Patrick was living at Max's house until the apocalypse occurred which caused them to seek shelter at a military outpost. Unfortunately, a crisis occurred when the militants were falsely ordered to execute all civilians, causing chaos. Max and Patrick survived and decided to reside in the countryside for 2 years until a group of raiders took all their supplies and left them starving. Problems also arose when a herd of hundreds started ravaging the countryside and leading Max and Patrick to evacuate once more to the city. Unluckiness strikes again when the residents of the city of Richmond were the same raiders who stole Max's and Patrick's supplies. Max and Patrick were kept in captivity and were forced to do hard labour until the raiders were attacked by an armed group called The New Frontier. Patrick and Max were rescued by David and Badger who lead the attack as Richmond was a great supply zone filled with fortified buildings, unscavenged stores and a river giving easy access to water. Max and Patrick decided to join the group and quickly rose through the ranks as they were aggressive, yet reasonable men. Patrick was however considered "too kind" to survivors which led up to a civil war between the resident New Frontier side and the militia New Frontier side. Patrick was blamed by Badger and David but Max decided to stick up for him. Nonetheless, Patrick was banished from the group and Max left him supplies on his new journey.
Hopefully this wasn't a cringy story as I don't usually write stories
Here's mine:- he is a 14 yr old boy who lives in a small town somewhere in Georgia, he has ver serious anger issues, though nearly suppressed with the help of medications. He and his parents don't really know what's really going on, they think that some kind of disease and the government is calling the citizens to major cities to help them. So, despite arguments from the rest of the family, they decide to leave.
Now we will be seeing from the eyes of the boy
" stuck in traffic from an hour, thank god I didn't drink that juice with my father, and he shouldn't have either, he's covered sweat, oh and Ac is set at maximum, lol poor man
We see few people running in the opposite direction, father lowers the glass " hey you, what's happening why are you running" one them stops " RUN, THEY ARE COMING RUN!"
" I am gonna check out what's happening you two wait here " he hands mother the car keys and leave's. Ten minutes of utter silence pass
" I am going to see what's taking him so long, you stay here" she said to me, I try the handle, locked dammit. I think how o could get out, then I remember mom telling about having spare keys in her purse, and fortunately she left it here. I open the door and start walking and nearly stumble on one of the rods lying around, the road was lined on one side with under-construction buildings, which the mayor was planning to sell to offices and growing businesses, the idea was opposed by greenists because it involved cutting down trees. After a few minutes of walking I saw 2 people leaning down and they were making strange noises, like chewing, I tried to see what they were doing without attracting their attention. At first it looked like a disfigured animal, but when I looked closely, they were people with their legs half chewed, revealing their bones, and their faces scratched and bit(?) soo badly it was impossible to recognise them, but one of them were wearing a hat, my fathers hat, it was my father and the woman beside him was my mother, I let out a scream, the monsters who were eating them, turned towards me and tried to bite me, I pushed them away " STAY BACK!" i said withe tears flowing down my eyes and dropping from my cheeks, but they looked like they didnt understand whit i told them, i saw big stone lying beside the road, i threw it at the head of one of those creatures whose head was already cracked, looks like someone hit it with a hammer, it immediately fell down, its head cracked open, its brain flowed out, the other one lunged at me, i moved away and he fell down i picked up a metal rod and bashed its head. i went and sat down near my parents, and cried for what it seemed like hours but in truth were some minutes, "ughh" came from my father, i thought it was a miracle, my father came back to life! i thought and hugged him, even though he was covered in blood. i felt a small sharp sensation on my shoulder, he was tring to bite me , but his jaw was half broken from one side so he couldnt apply any force, i immediately lunged back, he started crawling towards me and at the same time other had too came back to " life" and started following him, " mother, father stop please! it me your son" i said with tears but they didnt react. a man came running, he had a gun, he shot them both grabbed my shoulder, " come on boy we have to go, they are coming " he said, i was confused, i thought he had killed my parents "you.....you killed them" i said " what, no they were already dead, they are coming theres no time for this we have to go, now" . i in a fit of anger took out my swiss knife, which was given to me by my hunting obsessed uncle, and slashed his throat "ggh." he fell down on the ground. i was standing there, confused, i didnt know what was happening or what just happend, then i saw more of those creatures coming, i looked at my parents with tears flowing " i am sorry" and ran away.
soo, i am not extremely good at writing, but i would like to listen to your guys comments though.
.
and if you like, please continue the story
.
What kind of relationship?
Tracy, Kenny's first wife.
She also killed herself.
Character stats:
Identifying marks: Bullet scar on left shoulder, Knife scar on left forearm, Skull Tattoo on right shoulder, and Celtics Cross Tattoo on right forearm.
Apparel:
Weapons:
Relationship: Younger brother to Kenny.
Status: Alive.
Personality:
Habbits/Hobbies:
Skills:
Bio: Born and raised in Fort Lauderdale Florida. Enlisted in the Army at 18, served in Desert Storm.
Before returning home from the war, he spent 10 years in London, working as a dock worker, and later as a construction worker.
After 3 years in London, he met a woman, named Kelly, and the two began dating, and later became a couple. Two years later the couple had a son, whom they named John, and later a daughter, named Jenny.
After 7 years together, Kelly took the children and left Charles for another guy, wanting Charles to have no part of their children's lives. With no further reason to stay in London, he returned home to Florida.
Started doing Coccaine after being discharged from the army, and when he returned to the States, he was arrested and ended up in prison for three years. Gained quite a reputation as a brawler, as someone not to be messed with.
After his release and of his parole, he bought a motorcycle and began drifting across the country, taking up odd jobs here and there.
After two years, while in New Mexico, the 35 year old Charles met a 20 year old college student named Stacy. After a year of dating, the two married, and the following year they had a son, whom they named James.
When the apocalypse began, the 40 year old Charles took his family and headed to California, grabbed a boat, and headed out onto open water.
Name : Jack Ryder (Not the one from BATMAN)
Age : 25
Looks : Hair similar to Javier's, Beard (similar to ricks (RIP beard) Black hair, Normal body, 6 foot 2
Personality : Kind enough to let you live but mean enough to fuck you over ten times worse than you fucked him in the first place (If you fucked him ... not. like that)
Occupation : Member of The New Frontier
Character relations : One of Lee's students pre-apoc
conveniant I know
But hey so is K from S2
I have one:
Name: Jamie
Age: 12
Group: New Frontier
Relationship with other characters: was one of Clementine's pre-apocalyptic school friends.
Looks: Blonde hair, blue eyes, striped glasses, a bit taller than Clementine, always wears a blue hoodie.
Weapons: Glock 22, AK-12, Mossberg 590, pocket knife
Personality: Quite tough but caring to his friends/family, confident, has depression, outgoing, genius, sneaky, funny.
No, just no.