Episode 5 dialogues (IDEAS)
Hey guys.. I just wanted to start a new topic where you the ones that have creative minds can set up some scene and insert a dialogue in it like guys did in previous forums.
I want you guys to set up sth its interesting to read I am also going to insert my creation
The first scene after the crash:
Javi (yells): Kaaate
(runs to the car smashing zombie heads all the way to the car)
Javi: Oh no, I have to get her out of the car
(opens the back door seiing Kate lying on the ground with an iron bar piercing her chest)
Javi: Kate, I have to get you out of here the truck is going to blow up.
Kate: Javi, leave me here. There is a lot of muertos comming to the car.
(Clem[and Tripp] defending the car, killing walkers while Javi tries to rescue the Kate)
Clem: Javi, she is right . We have to move I won´t be able to hold them anymore.
You´ll have to choose whether you´ll Stay there and try to help her////Leave her to die
LEAVE HER TO DIE: (with feelings to KATE)
Javi: okay, okay... I just need a minute I´ll catch up with u guys.
Clem: Hurry up
Javi(cries): (holds Kate around the neck)
Javi: I love you Kate, I´ll never forget you. I´ll take care of Gabe such as he is my son.
Kate: I know Javi. Gabe will be alright in your custody. Just promise me you won´t leave him alone with David. David is not going to be a good traitor for him. He deserves better than David can give him.
Javi: Kate, this should not happen I was supposed to be here for you, to take care of you and Gabe (cries more)
Kate: Just promise me that you´ll look after Gabe.
Javi: I promise
** Kate:** Thank you for everything. You opened my eyes Javi, and having you there with me the whole time changed my view of life... I mean love. I just wanted to say its a pity I haven´t met you sooner uhh..
Javi: kisses Kate (a reaaaal long kiss)
(Kate dies)
Javi:( closes her eyes)
Javi: I am sorry Kate (stabs her in the head)
(runs away)
LEAVE HER TO DIE: (no feelings to KATE)
Javi: okay, okay... I just need a minute I´ll catch up with u guys.
Clem: Hurry up
Javi(cries): (holds Kate around the neck)
Javi: ll never forget you. I´ll take care of Gabe such as he is my son.
Kate: I know Javi. Gabe will be alright in your custody. Just promise me you won´t leave him alone with David. David is not going to be a good traitor for him. He deserves better than David can give him.
Javi: I promise...
Kate: Thank you for everything. You opened my eyes Javi, and having you there with me the whole time changed my view of life...
Javi: Life has been a lot easier with you. You helped in most of the things
Kate: We have always supported each other Javi
Javi: hugs Kate (a reaaaal long hug)
Kate: At least you won´t suffer like I do now. Falling in love with you really makes this thing a lot harder for me uhh...
Javi: Oh come one Kate I know I feel the same even when I don´t really love you. You were always everything for me.
Kate: Thanks Javi, you really made me feel better after this.
(Kate dies)
Javi:( closes her eyes)
Javi: I am sorry Kate (stabs her in the head)
(runs away)
Stay and help: (with feelings to KATE)
Javi: No way! I am not leaving her. Go clem we will catch up with you!
Clem: You are crazy Javi!
Javi: **Just go!
(Clem closes the backdoor of the car and runs away)
**Kate: This is stupid Javi, you have to run away from there or we will both die here!
Javi: I am ready to die for your safety Kate.
(kisses her)
Javi: You´re ready?
(javi prepares to pull out the iron bar of her chest)
Kate: I´m not sure about that
(Javi does everything to pull the bar out with suceed)
(Kate yells)
(javi takes off his T-shirt and holds in on the wound)
Javi: You´re gonna be okay Kate, your gonna be okay!
Kate: Javi I don´t really feel well.
(Kate passes out)
Javi: Kate no!
(Javi bandages her wound, picks her up in his arms, opens the backdoors)
Javi: oh no! (sees the hord of muertos enclosing the town)
(The hord notices him and goes after him)
(Javi runs with Kate in his arms)
( and than gets into a trap(muertos horde with no escaping point)
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(Jesus comes smashing walker heads)Javi: thank you Jesus
Jesus: Don´t thank me yet, lets get out of here
(runs to the safety where Kate wakes up)
Javi: Kate ahhh I´m happy your alive
Javi(cries): (holds Kate around the neck)
Kate: Well I don´t really feel alive Javi.
(shows him a bite from muertos)
Javi: (cries)
Javi: I love you Kate, I´ll never forget you. I´ll take care of Gabe such as he is my son.
Kate: I know Javi. Gabe will be alright in your custody. Just promise me you won´t leave him alone with David. David is not going to be a good traitor for him. He deserves better than David can give him.
Javi: Kate, this should not happen I was supposed to be here for you, to take care of you and Gabe (cries more)
Kate: Just promise me that you´ll look after Gabe.
Javi: I promise
Kate: Thank you for everything. You opened my eyes Javi, and having you there with me the whole time changed my view of life... I mean love. I just wanted to say its a pity I haven´t met you sooner uhh..
Javi: kisses Kate (a reaaaal long kiss)
(Kate dies)
Javi:( closes her eyes)
Javi: I am sorry Kate (stabs her in the head)
(runs away)
Stay and help: (no feelings to KATE)
Javi: No way! I am not leaving her. Go clem we will catch up with you!
Clem: You are crazy Javi!
Javi: **Just go!
(Clem closes the backdoor of the car and runs away)
**Kate: This is stupid Javi, you have to run away from there or we will both die here!
Javi: You risked your life to save me hell a lot of times. Time for revenue
(Hugs her)
Javi: You´re ready?
(javi prepares to pull out the iron bar of her chest)
Kate: I´m not sure about that
(Javi does everything to pull the bar out with suceed)
(Kate yells)
(javi takes off his T-shirt and holds in on the wound)
Javi: You´re gonna be okay Kate, your gonna be okay!
Kate: Javi I don´t really feel well.
(Kate passes out)
Javi: Kate no!
(Javi bandages her wound, picks her up in his arms, opens the backdoors)
Javi: oh no! (sees the hord of muertos enclosing the town)
(The hord notices him and goes after him)
(Javi runs with Kate in his arms)
( and than gets into a trap(muertos horde with no escaping point)
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(Jesus comes smashing walker heads)Javi: thank you Jesus
Jesus: Don´t thank me yet, lets get out of here
(runs to the safety where Kate wakes up)
Javi: Kate ahhh I´m happy your alive
Javi(cries): (holds Kate around the neck)
Kate: Well I don´t really feel alive Javi.
(shows him a bite from muertos)
Javi: (cries)
Javi: ll never forget you. I´ll take care of Gabe such as he is my son.
Kate: I know Javi. Gabe will be alright in your custody. Just promise me you won´t leave him alone with David. David is not going to be a good traitor for him. He deserves better than David can give him.
Javi: I promise...
Kate: Thank you for everything. You opened my eyes Javi, and having you there with me the whole time changed my view of life...
Javi: Life has been a lot easier with you. You helped in most of the things
Kate: We have always supported each other Javi
Javi: hugs Kate (a reaaaal long hug)
Kate: At least you won´t suffer like I do now. Falling in love with you really makes this thing a lot harder for me uhh...
Javi: Oh come one Kate I know I feel the same even when I don´t really love you. You were always everything for me.
Kate: Thanks Javi, you really made me feel better after this.
(Kate dies)
Javi:( closes her eyes)
Javi: I am sorry Kate (stabs her in the head)
(runs away)
I did my best with formating hope its eyecatchy :P Looking forward to your dialogues. I am sorry that mine does not seem to be emotional enough cause my vocabulary needs to be enriched because I am not from a English speaking country
Comments
There is supposed to be "tutor" not "traitor" sorry
-MRSHYGUY45
Thanks for the mention! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I can always make up more!
Do a Gabentine one!
(No, PLEASE DON'T!)
Gabentine!Gabentine!Gabentine!
Shush now.
I like that Dialogue, but Kate is going to have "mild sex" with Javi in episode 5. She'll live to bang another day, according the ratings.
As much as I hate this pairing, I guess I can do one.
Gabe: Hey Clem...
Clem: Oh, hey Gabe...
Gabe: So...you're really leaving?
Clem: Sorry, but this what I have to do for AJ. I can't stay here.
Gabe: Why not? It's finally safe here.
Clem: You don't get it. This place reminds me nothing but failure.
Gabe: Well if you're leaving, than so am I!
Clem: W-What?
Gabe: You've been through a lot and I want to be there when things get tough.
Clem: You can't abandon your family, Gabe.
Gabe: But I can't let you leave...I like like you. Like more than a friend.
Clem:...Really? Wow...
Gabe: You're smart, pretty, and pretty badass. All those times we were together, I really enjoyed it.
Clem: That's sweet, Gabe...but why fall for someone like me?
Gabe: why not?
Clem: I've seen things you couldn't even imagine.
Gabe: But I want to know you.
Clem: Thanks...but I can't stay. I'm sorry, Gabe.
Gabe: Oh...okay.
Gabe looks down at the ground before Clem lifts up his chin and gives him a peck on the lips
Clem: It's the least I can do.
Gabe: Oh, God, thank you! I'll never forget you, Clementine!
Damn you! Knowing it's fanfiction still makes my belly turn.
She didn't turn him down fully tho... so... later down the line... you know...
Don't worry, I almost threw up typing it lol.
Isn't it forbidden to post excessively gross stuff on the forum? I mean, put some warning at least man.
I've brought great shame to the forum...
Maybe... maybe a mod should look into this... "issue" (but not Blind Sniper, he's a Gabentine-lover).
Unfortunately for Gabe, Randy's family is at Mccarol ranch. Gill hears of this. And Gabe receives a hostile visit from man sized Gill.
E1 had a higher rating than Mild Sex, and the "best" we got was a kiss. So don't expect them to have any sex at all.
A Wild Gabe had appeared!!
Gabe: Hi Clem
Gabe died
More like:
A Wild Gabe has appeared!!
Gabe: Hi Clem
*Writers used "Poor Writing"!! It was super effective!!
Gabe died
Gabe uses Being Determinant
It's not very effective
I can't stop laughing. All of these characters having "very mild sex" with each other, according the rating. if a kiss is "Mild sex," then a hug would be considered "very mild sex."
And a stroke over the cheek + kiss would be Heavy Sex?
Edit: I mean Sex: Moderate Impact. I just had a look what the Season Pass got from the Australian Rating Board.
A Wild Gabe has appeared!!
Gabe: Hi Clem
Clem:[pull out gun and shot]
Gabe died
And every one lived so happy
Kate/Javi/David argument
JAVI WITH FEELINGS TO KATE
(David comes to safety place holding Joan/Clint as a hostage)
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(Than Clem, Javi, Kate, [Gabe,Tripp] comes there also)
David: Ahh Kate I'm glad you're okay! (Hugs her)
Kate: (pulls him away) I need to talk to you, in person.
David: Woaa, what's going on?
Kate: Just, come with me okay?
(Kate leads him to a empty room nearby -> Javi follows them)
David: Javi, she said she wanted to talk to me, not you!
Kate: It's okay, I want him there.
(David gets confused and angry)
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(In the room Javi closes the door and leans on to the wall, David and Kate stand next to each other)
Kate: You know, we haven't seen each other since the world got fucked up. Aaand, it has been years and ... it has always been me an Javi, helping each other.
David: What do you mean?
Kate: I mean, I don't want to be your wife anymore David, I just ... I just can't.
David: What the fuck?! Kate why?
Javi: Its right David... Kate and I are... are something now, you know.
David: Javi, you are my brother, how could you do that to me?!
(comes closer to Javi preparing to hit him)
Kate: David, it started a long time ago. Even before the apocalypse.
David Wait, whaat?! You were cheating on me with my own brother? !
(returns from Javi, comes to close to Kate)
David: What monsters are you two, you did it all the time behind my back?
Kate: Its not right, I know. But it happened okay? I love Javi David, even more since this all started.
David: (slaps Kate) You fucking whore!
Javi: (Grabs him from behind, gets elbow punch from David)
Kate: (Lies on the floor)
Javi: You should really learn how to control yourself David!
David: Don't, tell me what to do Javi! You're dead to me! (grabs his gun points it to Javi)
Kate: (Hits him in the head with vase)
David: (passes out)
Javi: Thanks Kate (smiles)
Kate: (Having "mild sex" with Javi in the empty room [just kidding :P])
Let me know if you like the dialogues to make more
Mild sex means literally nothing in the Australian Classifications.
I literally tensed up reading that last bit
Admit it, you hoped for more than a peck.
I expected a peck with a bullet
Seems like I am not really good at it
Clementine used "Friendzone"!! It killed she fucking shit out of him!!