Your character flashback.
How would you had written the brief flashbacks that revealed the fates for Kenny, Jane and Edith? If you had to write a death for each character. No cop outs saying "you simply wouldn't".
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who is Edith?
The guard at Wellington you talk to if you went with Kenny.
If I HAD to write a death for each character....
Edith- Her death would be the same. The only difference is that we would have gotten a hub area to explore in Wellington and would have had numerous flashbacks to the community throughout the episode.
Jane- Well, I would eliminate the pregnancy completely. Like Wellington, we would have had a couple of flashbacks. We would have gotten to walk around Howes, talk with the family(if you let them in, if not there would be a scene with them stealing supplies), and get to know more about Jane. Eventually, Howes would get overrun. If the family was there, they would end up dying in the attack. Jane, AJ and Clem would than be seen in Baltimore. They would be getting chased through the streets. They would get to a roof and get cornered. This is similar to how Jamie(Jane's sister) died. Jane realizes that there is no way for all of them to make it out. She shares one last moment with Clem before telling her to run. She fights as many walkers as she can before falling off the roof and being devoured.
Kenny- Oh boy......this is a tough one. If Kenny's going out, he's getting a memorable death. Here we go....
It finally happened. Kenny found a boat. He, Clem and AJ are sailing down the coast towards Florida. You can walk around the boat and talk with Kenny. You can ask him to stop in Savannah to either bury Lee(if you shot him) or kill Lee(if you left him to turn). Kenny will agree. They talk about how great things will be when they get to Florida. Sunshine and rainbows. Everything seems great....that is until a boat apporaches them and begins to board them. That boat is captained by none other than Randall(yes, Randall from Michonne). As you can imagine, Kenny doesn't take to kindly to this. The two groups start firing at each other. Kenny is hit and the boat starts sinking. Clem jumps overboard as Kenny takes AJ. There is a lengthy water sequence where Clem has to swim to shore and hide underwater to avoid the bullets. Eventually, they escape. They reach the shore. Unfortunately, Kenny is still shot. They walk for as long as they can. They are near Baltimore, so the two head for the city. Right outside the city, Kenny collapses. His death scene is long. It is peaceful however. He shares his final moments with Clem and AJ before finally passing away. Clem proceeds to bury him.
Yeah I believe your Kenny send off is much better than the actual New Frontier version. I guess they were thinking of ways to get Clem to have scars and tattoo in specific places on her face and hand. Jane's from New Frontier was kind of out of character but still fitting in a odd way to me atleast, since she was always kind of more selfish than Kenny.
Exploring Wellington should of been possible in New Frontier since we couldn't in season 2. Exploring Wellington during season 2 would of made more sense though. But I thought they kept it secret because they didn't want us to know if the people were bad or not.
Can you make a better alone ending flashback? I like all of these.
Thanks. Yeah, I'll add an alone one.
These are actually pretty good!
I really like the idea of Clem going back to Savannah to see Lee again.
I made a thread like this a while ago, so here's some copy/paste from that.
My flashback is with Kenny.
Set about a year and a half after season 2's ending, Kenny, Clementine, and AJ are all in Wellington. Kenny's helping with the wall maintenance and a group (not NF) approaches. The group makes threats, but Kenny's having none of that. He holds up a rifle that he had strapped over the shoulder, and dares them to make a move. His loud yelling catches the attention of just about everyone, especially Edith and Clementine. The group backs off and talks some more smack once they enter their vehicles. Kenny fires a shot and the group hurries off. Later that night Kenny talks with Clementine about the group that's been showing up there causing trouble. Clementine can suggest running, getting prepared, or making peace. Kenny refuses to run since this is the best place for them (Clem & AJ). Kenny is confident that he and Clementine can hold their own, but doubts the others. Kenny doesn't think these men can be negotiated with, "They're the 'all or nothing' kind, darling. We give them an inch, they'll take the whole damn arm and then some." Either way he's clearly stressed about the situation despite standing his ground against the group. An explosion wakes them up. Kenny makes sure that AJ and Clementine are both okay. He gets dressed so fast that he forgets his hat and eyepatch. He steps out for a few moments while Clementine gets dressed, and dresses AJ. Kenny comes back in a panic, he tells Clementine to hurry and grab everything she can. "We have to go," he looks at her with an expression she hadn't seen him show before. Clementine can grab Kenny's belongings, her belongings, and other supplies if the player's fast enough. Before they exit, he gives Clementine a gun and tells her to, "Keep moving, and shoot any shitstain you have to. If we get separated, I will find you. Keep AJ close, Clem." The three of them exit. Wellington is up in smoke and flames. The cries, screams, and shots are deafening. Amidst all the chaos, Clementine runs into the men that Kenny was arguing with. One of them aims a gun at Clementine but Kenny shoots him in the head. "Run, Clem," he yells and continues a shootout with the group. Wellington is clearly fighting back, but they're outmatched by the attacking gang - as you can see in the background while Clementine makes her escape. Just before dawn, Clementine goes back toward Wellington in order to find Kenny. She uses a knife to take out any walkers in her path while keeping AJ close and safe. Wellington is destroyed, a few fires remained, smoke has filled the air - a stark contrast from when they first arrived at Wellington to now. Clementine sees walkers, a lot of them, but she continues - an homage to Lee's heroic scene when he's approaching The Stranger's location. When she gets just a bit past the gate she sees Kenny. He stands just a couple of feet away from her as a walker. Clementine can run away, shoot him, or stab him. Running away leaves Clementine without a scar. If she shoots him, a ricochet grazes her forehead. If she chooses to stab him, during the struggle she gets a cut on the forehead.
wow that was pretty good. Could actually see that happening if telltale wasnt so worried about just killing the determinants off and giving them a scar.
So yeah im gonna post how i would have done the Jane flashback and maybe post one for kenny later so here it is:
The flashback opens up at Howe s with Jane , Clem and the Family fixing a fence that broke because a couple of walkers broke in, while you re fixing it Jane is talking to you about the things that took place in there like she states in the normal flashback ´´This place is full of Ghosts´´ then she names the people that died in here or because they tried to escape the place ((Reggie , Carlos, Sarita , Alvin )) .
She also mentions that she s worried because while they did kill all of the walkers there were some people from Howe s that she saw were missing and that she s worried they might be alive and come back to take the place again.
Clementine then can say something to reassure her or say that she s worried too.
Clem then finishes fixing the board and you get a hub to check the place out you can see the comics place which hasnt been fully reorganized by them . Gill ((The son of the Family )) will be there a reading a comic and you can talk to him Ask him what he s reading , what he thinks of Howe s and how he s doing.
You can check the other room where Kenny and Mike were working in and you see Patricia and Randy ((The parents )) there and if you talk to them you notice they re acting weirdly and you then leave the room.
After you leave the area Jane will come talk to Clem appearing really surprised and scared and she will then reveal that she s Pregnant with a baby
to which Clem can congratulate her but Jane will react badly saying that she doesnt want to be a liability and she doesnt someone else to suffer thought this world you can then try to comfort Jane but you re interrupted by Randy and Patricia calling them saying that another Board from the fence was loose. Jane and Clementine walk there and they see Tavia and the 400 days group with Randy and Patricia with A Worried Gill asking why his mom and Dad are doing this.
Randy reassures him saying its for the best Jane asks them why they did it and they said that Tavia offered them supplies she had gathered and told them about how they destroyed their Community.
Clem then tries to explain what really happened But Randy doesnt want to listen and he starts a shootout missing Jane and Clem . Clem then fires and Kills Wyatt while Jane Kills Becca which causes Shell to go into a state of shock , Jane prepares to shoot Shell but Vince pushes her out of the way and gets killed instead Shell then snaps out of it and shoots Jane in the elbow.
Gill then tries to stop the shootout but he gets shot By tavia to Patricia and Randy s surprise. In that moment of hesitation Tavia shoots Patricia and Russel becomes surprised at Tavia s cruelty .
Randy becomes enraged and starts punching tavia but he s interrupted by Shell shooting him.
Jane and Clem then begin to Run from Howe s but they re Chased by Shell, Tavia and Russel Jane tells Clem they should split up to which Clem can either agree or not but if you dont Agree Jane says that there s no time to argue and they split up. Shell goes after Jane while Tavia and Russel both run after Clem.
Tavia catches up to clem and a fight QTE Sequence begins where in the end Clem is overpowered and Tavia is about to shoot Clem but she s interrupted by a gunshot to her head .
Russel appears and tells Clem that he remembered why he left his old Group and it wasnt so he could continue the fucked up shit that steve did and he says that he s done with Groups and begins to leave Clem starts to run to where Jane went and she stops and you get a choice of Thanking Russel or not if you dont he just leaves while if you thank him he replies with a ´´Yeah whatever´´ and leaves.
Clem rushes to where Jane went and finds Shell shot in the head , A bloody Nail file and Jane with a gunshot wound in her stomach Jane tells her
That she should live on and that those days she had with her felt as if she was with Jaime again before it all happened. Jane then thanks her and she slowly closes her eyes as she takes her last breath. Clem then stops Jane from turning and Buries her while either keeping Jane s nail file or Burying it with her.
Thanks a lot!