A New Frontier, Re-written. [SPOILERS]

I like A New Frontier, but it's kinda dumb at some parts, especially in episode 4 and 5, (as you'll see) so I thought how I'd make it better. This is what I've came up with, feel free to add on or make your own A New Frontier.

Episode 1:

Only gonna change flashbacks because Kenny, Jane, and Edith's death were poorly fucking done. And if people want me to, then I'll write how each flashback plays out.

Kenny: Clem and AJ get separated from Kenny by a wolf attack on their camp. Kenny lives, but gets tons of scars, and Clem doesn't know he lives.

Jane: Let's be real here, all bias aside, Jane would probably ditch Clementine, for it either being too hard to take of her, or because she wants to start over.

Wellington: its fine except for the end, Clementine should hold AJ and Edith just goes in a different direction than Clementine.

Alone: this flashback is actually alright.

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Episode 2:

Nothing wrong with this, just Javier shouldn't be the only one saving Prescott citizens.

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Episode 3:

Just gonna give Conrad more dialogue and make Jesus call them roamers instead of walkers.

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Episode 4:

Max should have gone with Javi and David into quarantine to begin with, but Telltale decided it's too hard or something. Anyway, Max stays out of the family talk and argument. And Kate should NOT be in good enough shape to help Javier escape, Gabe should help Javi no matter what your choice was. When Jabi escapes and Max is alive, Javi can tell him to go seperate ways, or to come with Javi and Gabe. Cut content like, going into sewers and Gabe's apology, should be in the game. Then at the end when Kate almost drives into Javier, if Max is alive and you told him to come with you, then he'll push you out of the way if Conrad is dead.

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Episode 5:

This has a lot of writing... so if Max and Conrad are alive, they'll be with Ealanor helping Rufus or his wife. And Lingard should be helping Ealanor too. So when Tripp/Ava go on the roof, Max and Conrad follow them. When they get onto the highway there's no cars in the way and Tripp runs and jumps onto the other side of the gap. And if Max or Conrad are alive, they'll jump over the gap too, and Max will miss the jump, and you can save him, but if you don't then Conrad will. Once there at the water tower, Ava/Tripp will cover themselves in walker guts to save Javier if things go south, but they can only save you once. And there are 2 motorcycles instead of 1.

Tripp: this seems like a family thing you should handle Javi. Plus, I'm not letting more innocent people die.

Conrad: I agree with Tripp

Conrad if Tripp dead: I need to help those in need, Javi, you should get Gabe.

Ava: I'm not letting David realize his mistake before it's too late.

Max: I've done tons of shit that I really need to make up for, I'm going to help David realize that he's making a mistake.

Now we get into tons of shit, I'm going to list all of the endings but if Clementine doesn't save Kate when it's just Clem and Kate, then you know to correct that.

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Endings if Max and conrad are dead:

Tripp alive:

Javi and Tripp go with Kate and Clem comes along, David and Gabe die.

Javi and Tripp go with Kate, but Clem is with Gabe and David. David dies.

Javi goes after Gabe and David and Clem comes along, Kate dies. (Tripp isn't with her and he's saving people else where.)

Javi goes after Gabe and David alone, David dies.

Ava alive:

Javi and Ava go after Gabe and David with Clem, Kate dies.

Javi and Ava go after Gabe and David without Clem, no one dies.

Javi goes with Kate and Clem comes along, Gabe dies.

Javi goes with Kate and Clem goes with Ava, no one dies.

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Endings if Conrad lives but Max is dead:

Tripp alive:

Javi, Tripp and Conrad go with Kate and Clem comes along, then Gabe and David die, but Conrad might fall under the wheel of the bulldozer unless Javi or Clem saves him.

Javi, Tripp and Conrad go with Kate but Clem goes after Gabe and David, then David dies.

Javi goes after Gabe and David with Clem, Conrad and Kate die.

Javi goes after Gabe and David without Clem, David dies.

Ava lives:

Javi and Ava go after Gabe and David with Clem, Kate and Conrad die.

Javi and Ava go after Gabe and David but Clem goes with Kate, everyone lives.

Javi and Conrad go with Kate and Clem comes along, Gabe dies.

Javi and Conrad go with Kate but Clem goes after Gabe and David, everyone Lives.

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Endings if Max lives but Conrad is dead:

Tripp alive:

Javi and Tripp go with Kate and Clem comes along, Gabe dies.

Javi and Tripp go with Kate but Clem goes Gabe and David, everyone lives.

Javi and Max go after Gabe and David with Clem, Kate dies.

Javi and Max go after Gabe and David without Clem, everyone lives.

Ava lives:

Javi, Ava, and Max go after Gabe and David with Clem, Kate dies.

Javi, Ava, and Max go after Gabe and David without Clem, everyone lives.

Javi goes with Kate and Clem comes along, everyone lives.

Javi goes with Kate but Clem goes after Gabe and David, everyone lives.

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Endings if Max and Conrad lives

Tripp alive:

Javi, Conrad, and Tripp go with Kate and Clem comes along, Gabe dies.

Javi, Conrad, and Tripp go with Kate but Clem goes after Gabe and David, everyone lives.

Javi and Max go after Gabe and David with Clem, Conrad and Kate die.

Javi and Max go after Gabe and David without Clem, everyone lives.

Ava alive:

Javi, Ava, and Max go after Gabe and David with Clem, Kate and Conrad die.

Javi, Ava, and Max go after Gabe and David without Clem, everyone lives,

Javi and Conrad go with Kate and Clem comes along, everyone lives.

Javi and Conrad go with Kate but Clem goes after Gabe and David, everyone lives.

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Those were the endings that I came up with, if anyone can make them better, then go ahead. Also the cut. Intent with Joan in episode 5 should be in episode 5.

Clem takes a backpack full of gear with her, and Javi tells whoever in his family that's alive to be in-charge while he goes with Tripp/Ava and Clem to find AJ. And Ava only goes if Clem was nice to her in episode 4 flashback.

I'm not a writer so if it sucks, whatever. And the "Un-known" characters aren't unknown and are shown in Richmond at the end. I really need feedback if I'm going to make it better. Also if you want me to change other flashbacks, then I will.