... "No, you have to come with us, I'll help you" responds Clementine. Everyone gets down the ladder of the cabin and start running, Omid carries Christa as Clem walks rigt next to them pushing walkers away with a stick she finds on the floor. Kenny and Charlie are running ahead of them as they disappear in the night and the only thing you can hear are their screams "COME ON!!", "KEEP MOVING, I SEE SOMETHING UP AHEAD!!". Omid falls from exaustion and Clem is helplessly fighting a horde of walkers that's approaching. Everything seems lost until a tattoed guy with a hood shows up, he picks Christa and Omid up and says "Come with me!!". Clementine isn't sure about this guy, but it's her only choice. He takes them to the inside of a prison bus and locks it. "Thank you..." says Christa gasping for air, "what about Kenny and Charlie?" inquires Clem, "A kid and a guy with a hat? I saw them enter that coffe shop over there, the rest of my group is there too, we will go to them in the morning, for now we stay hiden here, the name is Eddie by the way what's yours? Are you duys her parents?" What does Clem answer: Let Christa/Omid answer (stay silent), "No, just a group" (tell the truth) or "yes, they are my parents" (lie)?
I imagined it like Charlie shot the man when he was aa bunch of meters far away so the time they had to spend climbing down the ladder was enough so the walkers overunned the area and there was no possibility to get to the machete
"Yes, sort of. We take care of her from now on, as if she was our own daughter" Omid says, sharing a stare with Christa, both having a smile on their face. Clem knows she should be thankful, but something in her wasn't ready to accept them as her "parents. "Do you know these guys out there? 20 miles away from here?" Omid continues. "The guys with military equipment, looking like soldiers and shooting at anything that moves? One of them had a machete, but we managed to get rid of him" "We sure do know who you are talking about," Eddie replies. "Our group prepares to get out of this place. These crazy fuckers are up to steal our supplies. We all know how this ends: with a bullet in your head.". "You got supplies? How about medicine." Clem asks, seeing hope for Christa and her baby. "Well" Eddie hems and haws "I know at least where you can get some. We have food and a few weapons, no guns and rifles though." Clem and Omid look very happy hearing this. "I see why you're asking. I mean... Her leg.. Looks gross" Eddie admits "nevermind: we have to make a plan."
... Eddie continues "Well, in my point of view, it's like two hours until sunrise and we are surronded by walkers so the ebst thing we can do is wait it out, not calling attention on ourselfs, you thnk you cna hold it up for two hours?" "I can!!" responds Christa with her serious face besides being noticibely weakened."She really needs medicine!! You have to do something!!" yells Omid, "SSSHHHH!! You are attracing walkers" (everyone ducks and start talking lower). "Sleep for two hours, as soon as the sun rises the walker must be all out of here, we will get to the cofee shop and to my group and your friends. "Ok, Christa hold on just a little more..:" says omid, "I'm fine, I'll just rest". As soon as Christa falls asleep Eddie pulls Omid towards him as Clem overhears the conversation "When we got to the coffe we will burn your girlfriends wound so it doesn't spread, but the medicine I was talking about, is in that military guys camp, we've been there some tims stealing just what we need so they don't notice it, are you willing to com with us?" explains Eddie. Omid looks at Christa and Clem as the last one pretends to be asleep, Omid agrees and they both get a little rest before the sun rising. In the morning, the four get up and go to the cofee, to meet this group...
"Yes, sort of. We take care of her from now on, as if she was our own daughter" Omid says, sharing a stare with Christa, both having a smile o… moren their face. Clem knows she should be thankful, but something in her wasn't ready to accept them as her "parents. "Do you know these guys out there? 20 miles away from here?" Omid continues. "The guys with military equipment, looking like soldiers and shooting at anything that moves? One of them had a machete, but we managed to get rid of him" "We sure do know who you are talking about," Eddie replies. "Our group prepares to get out of this place. These crazy fuckers are up to steal our supplies. We all know how this ends: with a bullet in your head.". "You got supplies? How about medicine." Clem asks, seeing hope for Christa and her baby. "Well" Eddie hems and haws "I know at least where you can get some. We have food and a few weapons, no guns and rifles though." Clem and Omid look very happy hearing thi… [view original content]
Might be a good idea. We could also cut all these posts up in different ''episodes'' and make a plot summary whenever an episode ends. It will… more all be in this forum, but there might be some more structure that way.
Anyway, I'll continue the story now.
and you're welcome to take it as a compliment also.
You portray the character perfectly, as exactly as they are and not like
"KENNY IS AN IMMORTAL ZEN WARRIROR WHO CAN NEVER BE BEATEN AND HAS TITANIUM SKIN AND THE CHARM OF TOM BAKER"
Clem meets Christa and Omid in the fields and they walk into a forest as the night fell
walkers approach, they are fleeing into a barn near a field, meeting a zombified Molly
they enter the barn, being trapped and an unrecognizable voice speaks through the walkie-talkie, which says to hang on, but they have no time
they manage to fight themselves through the horde to a jeep near the barn which is out of gas with a walker trapped in the backseat, as Christa gets bitten into her leg
as the walkers surround them a pick-up approaches, saving them - it's Nate, who makes rude comments about the ladies during the drive
they go past a zombified Doug, when a man waves his arms to stop the car: it's Kenny
Nate wants to shoot him, but Kenny overpowers him and takes over the car
there are explosions, which come from the fields because of uniformed people shooting at something in the distance. They decide to drive off unseen because the people look like danger
Christa is in pain because of the bite, this is why they decide to amputate the leg. They stop the car near a forest and chop the leg off
Christa screams and faints, which caused attention - flashlights are running through the distant trees
They decide to flee and manage to get wounded Christa into the car, where Clem finds some whiskey to deal with Christas wound, as well as a gun that she keeps secretly
they want to drive off when suddenly a young boy forces them with his rifle to join them. Gunshots come out of the forest as the lights come nearer
the mature acting boy introduces himself as Charlie (8yo), revealing he belonged to the group that tried to shoot them. He describes them as very horrible people in army gear, having very bad intentions
Kenny keeps driving while the car slowly runs out of gas. He explains how he managed to survive Savannah, telling them he just kept fighting the walkers one by one to save Clem like he promised Lee
they need to deal with Christas amputated leg. Charlie says medicine can be found either at his former settlement where the bad guys are or at the retirement home overrun by walkers where his grandma used to live. They choose the retirement home
as they step inside Lilly approaches. After a long fight she succeeds in shooting Kens leg and steeling the car
it's impossbile to get into the retirement home because of the walkers. They manage to flee into a ranger cabin (the highseat type)
surrounded by the walkers downstairs the group has an argument when a man steps inside wielding with a machete. It turns out he came for the boy, also trying to persuade the group to come with him, promising food, medicine and safety. Charlie disagrees as well as Clementine, Kenny isn't sure while Omid wants to go, admitting Christa is pregnant
it turns out the bad guys belonged to Crawford. They build a military settlement on the countryside, with almost the same rules as in Crawford, except of killing children. The kids are forced to fight each other, though - survival of the fittest. Eventually the group disagrees in joining him
the man arrogantly leaves the group behind, being convinced they are fated to die anyway either by the walkers or his group that is supposed to come to this area by sunrise
Charlie left a bullet in his rifle in case he meets the man, this is why the boy shoots him from behind. Clem tried to prevent him from doing it but he explains the man is responsible for the death of his brothers and sister as well as his mother
the gunshot attracts walkers, so they flee. The group gets seperated: Kenny and Charlie are gone and Clem is with wounded Christa and Omid, who is exhausted because of carrying his woman
everything seems hopeless, when suddenly help comes from a man leading them to a prison bus nearby, on the edge of a small town
it is Eddie, who says he saw Kenny and Charlie running into a coffee shop down the street, where Eddies group is
turms out Eddies group has got supplies such as food and a a few weapons - no firearms, though - and no medicine
they make up a plan, which is as followed: sleeping two hours until sunrise, hoping the walkers will be gone, then going into the coffee shop, preparing for leaving this place with their supplies since the Crawford group plans to steal from Eddies group. Christa needs medicine asap, thats why they also plan to steal it from New Crawford, like they already did a few times in the past without getting noticed
they wake up in the morning and step inside the coffee shop meeting Kenny, Charlie, Eddies girlfriend Jessica (blonde scenester), Tyler (a muscular blonde with a basecap, a few medical skills as a former vet) and Pascucci (real name is Luca, italian looking skinny guy)
they learn about another group member, Jacob who got lost the other night, supposably in the woods unarmed and hopefully alive. Jacob has very good survival skills and has been a big help since the outbreak
Charlie mentions a secret weapon storage of New Crawfords, hidden in the woods. He knows where to find it. The group packs up their stuff and load it on two jeeps
While preparing to leave the small town Clem struggles with the past, feeling respinsible for the dead of Lee. Charlie has sympathy, letting her know they share a similar past
(NOTE: English is not my native language. I'd really appreciate a corrected version of this by a native speaker)
Kenny and Charlie are sitting on the benches outside talking to each other. Charlie is looking away while Kenny is staring at him with wide eyes. he looks sad. A girl runs up and hugs eddie as he approaches while a 2 men approach.
The girl had blonde hair and had a pink hello kitty shirt on. she was slim and was average height she had a Nike backapck over her shoulder with a drink bottle in one of the slots and an umbrella poking out. she was in her late 20s
the first had long blonde hair and a manchester united hat. he was very tall and had a muscular build. hes hand are covered in blood and he seemed weary. he was caucasian american. he was in his mid thirties
The second had short brown hair and was wearing light green shorts with an orange t shirt witch DID NOT match. He had a slim build and was not very tall. he looked like clems prep sports teacher who was italian and had an affair with his wife. clem quickly pushed the thought out of her noggin. he was in his mid 30s and overweight
"Okay so this is jessica" said Eddie pointing to the girl
"Hi" she said shyly and hid behind Eddie as he bagan to blush
"This is Tyler. forgive him for not speaking he had a rough night......." Eddies sentience trailed away
"What what happened" asked omid
"Last night when we found your freind one of our freinds got lost. his name was Jacob. he was lost to the herd without a weapon we saw him escape but we are still worried. they... we all where close" said nate in a sad tone
"And we are not gay" chimed in Tyler
"was not thinking that at all" said omid
"And this is Luca but we call him by his second name Pascucci because he doest like it. we found him along with tyler and jacob" said eddie
"We where all college buddies we all where together in the same room when the outbreak came. jacob found a way out. he was always very good at that stuff" Said pascucci
"Here lets lay that girl down" said tyler "i was quite the keen vet in my day not sure if it will help...."
"Hey we need a prare answered you might just be it" said omid
Rushed breathing could be herd coming from around the corner.
"Hope thats the prare and not something else" said pascucci
Note: would you please rewrite it? It is hard to read and difficult to distinguish the newly introduced persons you made up. The story is good, just hard to read. E.g who gets the hug from the girl? Besides: you really brought Nate to this story? He got beaten up by Kenny, who stole his car and the whole group left him behind in the streets - I don't think he would welcome our group, that is illogical.
Edit: okay, seems you have mixed up the names: Eddie, not Nate
Kenny and Charlie are sitting on the benches outside talking to each other. Charlie is looking away while Kenny is staring at him with wide ey… morees. he looks sad. A girl runs up and hugs eddie as he approaches while a 2 men approach.
The girl had blonde hair and had a pink hello kitty shirt on. she was slim and was average height she had a Nike backapck over her shoulder with a drink bottle in one of the slots and an umbrella poking out. she was in her late 20s
the first had long blonde hair and a manchester united hat. he was very tall and had a muscular build. hes hand are covered in blood and he seemed weary. he was caucasian american. he was in his mid thirties
The second had short brown hair and was wearing light green shorts with an orange t shirt witch DID NOT match. He had a slim build and was not very tall. he looked like clems prep sports teacher who was italian and had an affair with his wife. clem quickly pushed the thought out … [view original content]
Note: would you please rewrite it? It is hard to read and difficult to distinguish the newly introduced persons you made up. The story is good… more, just hard to read. E.g who gets the hug from the girl? Besides: you really brought Nate to this story? He got beaten up by Kenny, who stole his car and the whole group left him behind in the streets - I don't think he would welcome our group, that is illogical.
Edit: okay, seems you have mixed up the names: Eddie, not Nate
Note: would you please rewrite it? It is hard to read and difficult to distinguish the newly introduced persons you made up. The story is good… more, just hard to read. E.g who gets the hug from the girl? Besides: you really brought Nate to this story? He got beaten up by Kenny, who stole his car and the whole group left him behind in the streets - I don't think he would welcome our group, that is illogical.
Edit: okay, seems you have mixed up the names: Eddie, not Nate
It was Christa, laying on the ground and crooking because of the pain. "We really should accomplish the plan we've made in the prison bus." Says Omid. "She needs her medicine. You should pack your stuff like you said and get out of here, before the rambo guys show up here. Let us get to their settlement for the medicine."Charlie intervenes "I can show you a secret storage in the woods, where they hide some weapons. I also know how to get into their headquarter." "Very good. We know how to get there. Let's pack." Eddie replies. Kenny looks grumpy and a bit puzzled, because he is losing influence on the guys around him. His group apparently made a decision without him in the prison bus, with people they don't really know. On the other hand he is fascinated by Charlie, who makes him think of Duck, his beloved son.
"I don't think I got your names right" Clementine admits "who is who? You are Jessica" she says pointing at the blonde girl. She continues while staring at Eddies tattooed arms "your name is Eddie. Then there is Jacob who got lost. Who is Tyler and who is Pascucci?" The italian looking man with green shorts and the orange shirt smiles at her and says "I am Pascucci, young Lady." "And my name's Tyler. And allow me to say that you got a very nice hat, little lady" the muscular man says, trying to make a happy face but failing because he is still thinking of Jacob. "Maybe we'll find Jacob in the woods when we go the weapon storage" he continues. "Maybe. But we shall go now, before these fuckers come after us! That boy shot one of their pals, remember? They might be very pissed." Kenny says, trying to take over control. They go inside and pack their supplies, tucking it on the two jeeps they hid in the backalley.
It was Christa, laying on the ground and crooking because of the pain. "We really should accomplish the plan we've made in the prison bus." Sa… moreys Omid. "She needs her medicine. You should pack your stuff like you said and get out of here, before the rambo guys show up here. Let us get to their settlement for the medicine."Charlie intervenes "I can show you a secret storage in the woods, where they hide some weapons. I also know how to get into their headquarter." "Very good. We know how to get there. Let's pack." Eddie replies. Kenny looks grumpy and a bit puzzled, because he is losing influence on the guys around him. His group apparently made a decision without him in the prison bus, with people they don't really know. On the other hand he is fascinated by Charlie, who makes him think of Duck, his beloved son.
"I don't think I got your names right" Clementine admits "who is who? You are Jessica" she says pointing at the blonde girl. She conti… [view original content]
Clementine watched as Kenny and Tyler packed their bags. The two seemed to get along. Eddie hands over his bag to Kenny, who grunts in pain as he catches it. "Ow! Shit, man." He looks down at his leg. Pascucci had bandaged and set a tourniquet on it, but it seemed to still hurt. "Fucking Lilly..."
Eddie helps him up.
"Ex-girlfriend?"
"What? No!"
"Sorry, man. I didn't mean anything by it. You gotta admit, though, it was possible."
Kenny just stares back, with the kind of face someone makes when they smell manure.
A groan comes from behind Clementine. Christa was still being tended to. Omid was with her and Pascucci, doing whatever he could. Jessica and Charlie were near the campfire, checking out their food. Tyler was by a table with a bag full of weapons.
Everyone's doing something. I should help too. Clementine walks up to Charlie and Jessica. The food there smelled good. She suddenly felt her stomach growl. I haven't eaten since... since... Memories come rushing back.
Lee faints. Growling. Surrounded. Looking for a way out. Past her parents. Locked themselves in. Have to find a way out. Walker. Keys and the gun. Handcuffs, Lee again. Chased by a walker. Baseball bat. Crushed skull. "You can take care of yourself, see?" "You're strong, Clem. You can do anything." "You know what you have to do."
"Are you okay?"
Clementine looks up. Her eyes and face feel wet. She realizes she's been crying. Charlie stares down at her. He looks at her sympathetically.
"You were thinking about someone you loved, weren't you?"
Clementine sniffs. How does he know?
"Y-Yeah..." Her voice cracks. There had hardly been any time for her to think about anything but the present moment. It all seemed like a rush, a blur. Even after meeting Eddie, she had quickly fallen asleep.
Charlie walks up to her and sits down next to her. He speaks softly. "I know how it feels. I lost my family too."
Family. Yes, Lee was family. "He-He died protecting me. It was my fault..." She could remember it. Lee, telling her about her parents. Crying. She had walked out of the house, and the Stranger had kidnapped her when Lee was asleep. She could remember it all, the cold hand, the cold voice, her trying to scream, the gun pressed to her forehead. It was so, so horrible, and it was all my fault.
Charlie comforts her. "Look, I don't know what happened, but I'm pretty sure it wasn't your fault." He looked at the campfire. "No, it wasn't you who killed him..." His voice trails off. Clementine looks up. He was staring off into the distance, as if going through his own flashback. It was strange. A little kid like him, even younger than her, but he looked so sad. A far cry from Duck.
Clementine wipes her tears. She looks around. Kenny, Eddie and Tyler were gone. Christa was sleeping, Omid watching over her. Jessica and Pascucci were at the campfire. She gets up. "Thanks, that helped.", she says to Charlie.
Charlie snaps out of his trance. "Huh, what? Oh, yeah, don't mention it."
Her stomach growls again. I'm still hungry... She walks over to Jessica and Pascucci. "Hello. Is there any food left?"
Pascucci responds. "Actually, we have not eaten yet. The food shall be ready in a few minutes."
"Oh. Well, can I help out?"
"Do not worry, little girl. We will take care of it. You should take some rest. We will wake you up when the food is ready."
"Oh, okay."
Clementine walks to the pile of cloth near the campfire and lies down. She yawns. I haven't slept in a while, too. Slowly, she closes her eyes, and drifts into sleep.
Oh my god, this was awesome! You have good skills. I choked out of laughter while eating popcorn by that part Kenny looked like he was smelling "manure" - Lilly and Kenny together? Never I also enjoyed the feels
Following the story past the post by TheMissus.
Clementine watched as Kenny and Tyler packed their bags. The two seemed to get along. Eddie… more hands over his bag to Kenny, who grunts in pain as he catches it. "Ow! Shit, man." He looks down at his leg. Pascucci had bandaged and set a tourniquet on it, but it seemed to still hurt. "Fucking Lilly..."
Eddie helps him up.
"Ex-girlfriend?"
"What? No!"
"Sorry, man. I didn't mean anything by it. You gotta admit, though, it was possible."
Kenny just stares back, with the kind of face someone makes when they smell manure.
A groan comes from behind Clementine. Christa was still being tended to. Omid was with her and Pascucci, doing whatever he could. Jessica and Charlie were near the campfire, checking out their food. Tyler was by a table with a bag full of weapons.
Everyone's doing something. I should help too. Clementine walks up to Charlie and Jessica. The food there smelled good. Sh… [view original content]
It was Christa, laying on the ground and crooking because of the pain. "We really should accomplish the plan we've made in the prison bus." Sa… moreys Omid. "She needs her medicine. You should pack your stuff like you said and get out of here, before the rambo guys show up here. Let us get to their settlement for the medicine."Charlie intervenes "I can show you a secret storage in the woods, where they hide some weapons. I also know how to get into their headquarter." "Very good. We know how to get there. Let's pack." Eddie replies. Kenny looks grumpy and a bit puzzled, because he is losing influence on the guys around him. His group apparently made a decision without him in the prison bus, with people they don't really know. On the other hand he is fascinated by Charlie, who makes him think of Duck, his beloved son.
"I don't think I got your names right" Clementine admits "who is who? You are Jessica" she says pointing at the blonde girl. She conti… [view original content]
The moment Clementine opens her eyes she has the feeling that something is wrong. She looks up, noticing that everything is packed, all bags being loaded onto both jeeps. A plate with corn and beans is right next to her feet at the fireplace. As she stands up her eyes lay on the group gathered around Omid and Christa "It didn't work" are the words Clem catches while walking towards them. Christa looks awful with her pale faceskin and dark circles around the eyes. "SHUT UP!!" Yells Omid, looking at Jessica. "Just saying... I mean: wake up! Look at her skin - she is all pale. We've seen this a couple of times and we all know how this ends." Omid is close to loose his mind, shaking his head and saying "No, no, no, no..." in a loop. "He is right, Jessica, stop it." Eddie agrees. "What if it was you? I'd never let you down.". Jessica keeps staring at Christas stump while Pascucci looks at Kenny "You mentioned you did that before, I mean an amputation. How did it end?" Kenny looks down at his feet and crossing his arms, then looking into Clementines eyes: "Tell them, Clem." She takes a deep breath and tries to gather all the strength in her to say it out loud: "He did not make it. He was doomed to turn. He could feel it. He... He looked horrible." Clementine drops a tear "He said he will miss me... Leeee..." Charlie grabs her shoulder and the group is overcome with sadness. "Talk to her" Tyler insists. Omid strokes Christas cheek, saying "Chris, Honey... Listen.. Can you hear me...? Are you going to turn...?" Christa replies after a while "I don't feel well... Get me some antibiotics... You know what to do, Omid... Take me with you ... And don't forget handcuffs" Christa falls asleep, still breathing. After a minute of silence Tyler remarks:"We should be gone by now. The brutes might come every second...
The moment Clementine opens her eyes she has the feeling that something is wrong. She looks up, noticing that everything is packed, all bags b… moreeing loaded onto both jeeps. A plate with corn and beans is right next to her feet at the fireplace. As she stands up her eyes lay on the group gathered around Omid and Christa "It didn't work" are the words Clem catches while walking towards them. Christa looks awful with her pale faceskin and dark circles around the eyes. "SHUT UP!!" Yells Omid, looking at Jessica. "Just saying... I mean: wake up! Look at her skin - she is all pale. We've seen this a couple of times and we all know how this ends." Omid is close to loose his mind, shaking his head and saying "No, no, no, no..." in a loop. "He is right, Jessica, stop it." Eddie agrees. "What if it was you? I'd never let you down.". Jessica keeps staring at Christas stump while Pascucci looks at Kenny "You mentioned you did that before, I mean an amputation.… [view original content]
I just want to remind the next poster: Don't forget about Nate. He's not mentioned in the last post, because when @Lord_Zasca mentioned him, it was in fact meant to be Eddie. There is currently no Nate in the group.
I just want to remind the next poster: Don't forget about Nate. He's not mentioned in the last post, because when @Lord_Zasca mentioned him, it was in fact meant to be Eddie. There is currently no Nate in the group.
''Clem, it's all right.'', Kenny says while walking towards Clementine, ''You don't have to be afraid, Everything is going to be alright.'' Clementine starts crying uncontrollably. ''It's all my fault, I shouldn't have.. I... Lee...''. ''We're all done packing, everyone in the cars!'' Tyler commands.
Kenny desperately tries to comfort Clementine, but to no avail. after ten minutes Kenny gives up and tells her to get into the car, Clementine listens to him and sits down next to Charlie. Pascucci sits down next to Omid, who's in the driver's seat, ''She's not going to make it. And even if we do get antibiotics, there's only a small chance that she'll recover.'' ''It's a chance I have to take, I am not letting her die, not like this.''
Omid turns on the car and starts driving right behind Eddie's car. They drive for a few miles before seeing two shadows off in the distance.
Dialogue choice: Just keep driving / We should stop the car / remain silent
I'm not trying to be a jrek or anything.. But I jsut read this posts and who is this Nate? Yhe group had Clem, Kenny, Christa and omid, then Charlie joined them, and now the new group has Eddie, Jessica, Pascucci and Tyler. If you are refering to the Nate from 400 days, i introduced in the story a while ago and then someone said taht kenny appeared and punched him out of his truck and drove away with Christa, Omid and Clem. So nate is not in the story right now unless he returns
I just want to remind the next poster: Don't forget about Nate. He's not mentioned in the last post, because when @Lord_Zasca mentioned him, it was in fact meant to be Eddie. There is currently no Nate in the group.
I assume he is referring to a misunderstanding a few posts ago: @Lord_Zasca had written Nate but truly meaning Eddie - he just mixed the names up. I guess @Zurrdroid once again makes clear it is not Nate but Eddie. The formulation is a bit puzzling though. Let's continue with the story
I'm not trying to be a jrek or anything.. But I jsut read this posts and who is this Nate? Yhe group had Clem, Kenny, Christa and omid, then C… moreharlie joined them, and now the new group has Eddie, Jessica, Pascucci and Tyler. If you are refering to the Nate from 400 days, i introduced in the story a while ago and then someone said taht kenny appeared and punched him out of his truck and drove away with Christa, Omid and Clem. So nate is not in the story right now unless he returns
Yeah, what @TheMissus said. I was originally confused by the post that LZ had made, because he had mentioned Nate in it. Turns out it was a typo, and he actually meant Eddie. I'll edit so it's more clear.
I'm not trying to be a jrek or anything.. But I jsut read this posts and who is this Nate? Yhe group had Clem, Kenny, Christa and omid, then C… moreharlie joined them, and now the new group has Eddie, Jessica, Pascucci and Tyler. If you are refering to the Nate from 400 days, i introduced in the story a while ago and then someone said taht kenny appeared and punched him out of his truck and drove away with Christa, Omid and Clem. So nate is not in the story right now unless he returns
Oh my god, this was awesome! You have good skills. I choked out of laughter while eating popcorn by that part Kenny looked like he was smelling "manure" - Lilly and Kenny together? Never I also enjoyed the feels
... Clementine says "they are scaring me, I think we should keep going", "You are right Clem we are keep going, Christa has no time for stops, or for anyone..." . replies Omid, with a serious look (almost never seen in him) as he looks at the fainted Christa in the back of the jeep. As Omid passes by the shadows, the group notices they are two men, 1 old man (problably on his 60's and a younger taller guy looking to be in his mid 20's). Omid keeps going but Pascucci suddendly yells "Wait!! They stopped" (refering to the jeep where Kenny, Eddie, Tyler and Jessica are). Omid stops the jeep a few meters ahead and when the two man approach the car, they see the taller man take a gun out of the jacket and point it towards the group in the car. Omid quickly backs the car trying to run them over and hits the old man, but sadly the tall guy gets a shoot and Charlie, Clem and Pascucci look terrified at the other jeep as they see Tyler got shot in the chest and faints...The shooter escapes but the old man is still moving and dragging himself through the tall grass, as Clementine is the only one that sees it, what does she say "He's still alive!!", "Run him over!!" or stay silent?
Yeah, what @TheMissus said. I was originally confused by the post that LZ had made, because he had mentioned Nate in it. Turns out it was a typo, and he actually meant Eddie. I'll edit so it's more clear.
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... "No, you have to come with us, I'll help you" responds Clementine. Everyone gets down the ladder of the cabin and start running, Omid carries Christa as Clem walks rigt next to them pushing walkers away with a stick she finds on the floor. Kenny and Charlie are running ahead of them as they disappear in the night and the only thing you can hear are their screams "COME ON!!", "KEEP MOVING, I SEE SOMETHING UP AHEAD!!". Omid falls from exaustion and Clem is helplessly fighting a horde of walkers that's approaching. Everything seems lost until a tattoed guy with a hood shows up, he picks Christa and Omid up and says "Come with me!!". Clementine isn't sure about this guy, but it's her only choice. He takes them to the inside of a prison bus and locks it. "Thank you..." says Christa gasping for air, "what about Kenny and Charlie?" inquires Clem, "A kid and a guy with a hat? I saw them enter that coffe shop over there, the rest of my group is there too, we will go to them in the morning, for now we stay hiden here, the name is Eddie by the way what's yours? Are you duys her parents?" What does Clem answer: Let Christa/Omid answer (stay silent), "No, just a group" (tell the truth) or "yes, they are my parents" (lie)?
Not a part of the game, but I just wanna say: SOMEONE PICK UP THE MACHETE!
EDIT: Too late. Oh well. xD
(Very good idea! I'm afraid it's too late though)
I imagined it like Charlie shot the man when he was aa bunch of meters far away so the time they had to spend climbing down the ladder was enough so the walkers overunned the area and there was no possibility to get to the machete
"Yes, sort of. We take care of her from now on, as if she was our own daughter" Omid says, sharing a stare with Christa, both having a smile on their face. Clem knows she should be thankful, but something in her wasn't ready to accept them as her "parents. "Do you know these guys out there? 20 miles away from here?" Omid continues. "The guys with military equipment, looking like soldiers and shooting at anything that moves? One of them had a machete, but we managed to get rid of him" "We sure do know who you are talking about," Eddie replies. "Our group prepares to get out of this place. These crazy fuckers are up to steal our supplies. We all know how this ends: with a bullet in your head.". "You got supplies? How about medicine." Clem asks, seeing hope for Christa and her baby. "Well" Eddie hems and haws "I know at least where you can get some. We have food and a few weapons, no guns and rifles though." Clem and Omid look very happy hearing this. "I see why you're asking. I mean... Her leg.. Looks gross" Eddie admits "nevermind: we have to make a plan."
We need a genius plan. It's your turn
... Eddie continues "Well, in my point of view, it's like two hours until sunrise and we are surronded by walkers so the ebst thing we can do is wait it out, not calling attention on ourselfs, you thnk you cna hold it up for two hours?" "I can!!" responds Christa with her serious face besides being noticibely weakened."She really needs medicine!! You have to do something!!" yells Omid, "SSSHHHH!! You are attracing walkers" (everyone ducks and start talking lower). "Sleep for two hours, as soon as the sun rises the walker must be all out of here, we will get to the cofee shop and to my group and your friends. "Ok, Christa hold on just a little more..:" says omid, "I'm fine, I'll just rest". As soon as Christa falls asleep Eddie pulls Omid towards him as Clem overhears the conversation "When we got to the coffe we will burn your girlfriends wound so it doesn't spread, but the medicine I was talking about, is in that military guys camp, we've been there some tims stealing just what we need so they don't notice it, are you willing to com with us?" explains Eddie. Omid looks at Christa and Clem as the last one pretends to be asleep, Omid agrees and they both get a little rest before the sun rising. In the morning, the four get up and go to the cofee, to meet this group...
I've made a summary, look at page 7
he does. hes kenny for god sake. i personally love kenny and was uttley shocked at the suicide of katjaa. however i hated duck like everyone else
And we cant stop and we wont sop #Miley
tanks brah
Rough summary (pages 1-7)
While preparing to leave the small town Clem struggles with the past, feeling respinsible for the dead of Lee. Charlie has sympathy, letting her know they share a similar past
(NOTE: English is not my native language. I'd really appreciate a corrected version of this by a native speaker)
Kenny and Charlie are sitting on the benches outside talking to each other. Charlie is looking away while Kenny is staring at him with wide eyes. he looks sad. A girl runs up and hugs eddie as he approaches while a 2 men approach.
The girl had blonde hair and had a pink hello kitty shirt on. she was slim and was average height she had a Nike backapck over her shoulder with a drink bottle in one of the slots and an umbrella poking out. she was in her late 20s
the first had long blonde hair and a manchester united hat. he was very tall and had a muscular build. hes hand are covered in blood and he seemed weary. he was caucasian american. he was in his mid thirties
The second had short brown hair and was wearing light green shorts with an orange t shirt witch DID NOT match. He had a slim build and was not very tall. he looked like clems prep sports teacher who was italian and had an affair with his wife. clem quickly pushed the thought out of her noggin. he was in his mid 30s and overweight
"Okay so this is jessica" said Eddie pointing to the girl
"Hi" she said shyly and hid behind Eddie as he bagan to blush
"This is Tyler. forgive him for not speaking he had a rough night......." Eddies sentience trailed away
"What what happened" asked omid
"Last night when we found your freind one of our freinds got lost. his name was Jacob. he was lost to the herd without a weapon we saw him escape but we are still worried. they... we all where close" said nate in a sad tone
"And we are not gay" chimed in Tyler
"was not thinking that at all" said omid
"And this is Luca but we call him by his second name Pascucci because he doest like it. we found him along with tyler and jacob" said eddie
"We where all college buddies we all where together in the same room when the outbreak came. jacob found a way out. he was always very good at that stuff" Said pascucci
"Here lets lay that girl down" said tyler "i was quite the keen vet in my day not sure if it will help...."
"Hey we need a prare answered you might just be it" said omid
Rushed breathing could be herd coming from around the corner.
"Hope thats the prare and not something else" said pascucci
......
Note: would you please rewrite it? It is hard to read and difficult to distinguish the newly introduced persons you made up. The story is good, just hard to read. E.g who gets the hug from the girl? Besides: you really brought Nate to this story? He got beaten up by Kenny, who stole his car and the whole group left him behind in the streets - I don't think he would welcome our group, that is illogical.
Edit: okay, seems you have mixed up the names: Eddie, not Nate
haahahah i relsied that too its pretty funny
il fix it though just not well i have limited time
fixed it
It was Christa, laying on the ground and crooking because of the pain. "We really should accomplish the plan we've made in the prison bus." Says Omid. "She needs her medicine. You should pack your stuff like you said and get out of here, before the rambo guys show up here. Let us get to their settlement for the medicine."Charlie intervenes "I can show you a secret storage in the woods, where they hide some weapons. I also know how to get into their headquarter." "Very good. We know how to get there. Let's pack." Eddie replies. Kenny looks grumpy and a bit puzzled, because he is losing influence on the guys around him. His group apparently made a decision without him in the prison bus, with people they don't really know. On the other hand he is fascinated by Charlie, who makes him think of Duck, his beloved son.
"I don't think I got your names right" Clementine admits "who is who? You are Jessica" she says pointing at the blonde girl. She continues while staring at Eddies tattooed arms "your name is Eddie. Then there is Jacob who got lost. Who is Tyler and who is Pascucci?" The italian looking man with green shorts and the orange shirt smiles at her and says "I am Pascucci, young Lady." "And my name's Tyler. And allow me to say that you got a very nice hat, little lady" the muscular man says, trying to make a happy face but failing because he is still thinking of Jacob. "Maybe we'll find Jacob in the woods when we go the weapon storage" he continues. "Maybe. But we shall go now, before these fuckers come after us! That boy shot one of their pals, remember? They might be very pissed." Kenny says, trying to take over control. They go inside and pack their supplies, tucking it on the two jeeps they hid in the backalley.
Thanks
Wow. The story is so long now. How long would it take to read from the start?
Following the story past the post by TheMissus.
Clementine watched as Kenny and Tyler packed their bags. The two seemed to get along. Eddie hands over his bag to Kenny, who grunts in pain as he catches it. "Ow! Shit, man." He looks down at his leg. Pascucci had bandaged and set a tourniquet on it, but it seemed to still hurt. "Fucking Lilly..."
Eddie helps him up.
"Ex-girlfriend?"
"What? No!"
"Sorry, man. I didn't mean anything by it. You gotta admit, though, it was possible."
Kenny just stares back, with the kind of face someone makes when they smell manure.
A groan comes from behind Clementine. Christa was still being tended to. Omid was with her and Pascucci, doing whatever he could. Jessica and Charlie were near the campfire, checking out their food. Tyler was by a table with a bag full of weapons.
Everyone's doing something. I should help too. Clementine walks up to Charlie and Jessica. The food there smelled good. She suddenly felt her stomach growl. I haven't eaten since... since... Memories come rushing back.
Lee faints. Growling. Surrounded. Looking for a way out. Past her parents. Locked themselves in. Have to find a way out. Walker. Keys and the gun. Handcuffs, Lee again. Chased by a walker. Baseball bat. Crushed skull. "You can take care of yourself, see?" "You're strong, Clem. You can do anything." "You know what you have to do."
"Are you okay?"
Clementine looks up. Her eyes and face feel wet. She realizes she's been crying. Charlie stares down at her. He looks at her sympathetically.
"You were thinking about someone you loved, weren't you?"
Clementine sniffs. How does he know?
"Y-Yeah..." Her voice cracks. There had hardly been any time for her to think about anything but the present moment. It all seemed like a rush, a blur. Even after meeting Eddie, she had quickly fallen asleep.
Charlie walks up to her and sits down next to her. He speaks softly. "I know how it feels. I lost my family too."
Family. Yes, Lee was family. "He-He died protecting me. It was my fault..." She could remember it. Lee, telling her about her parents. Crying. She had walked out of the house, and the Stranger had kidnapped her when Lee was asleep. She could remember it all, the cold hand, the cold voice, her trying to scream, the gun pressed to her forehead. It was so, so horrible, and it was all my fault.
Charlie comforts her. "Look, I don't know what happened, but I'm pretty sure it wasn't your fault." He looked at the campfire. "No, it wasn't you who killed him..." His voice trails off. Clementine looks up. He was staring off into the distance, as if going through his own flashback. It was strange. A little kid like him, even younger than her, but he looked so sad. A far cry from Duck.
Clementine wipes her tears. She looks around. Kenny, Eddie and Tyler were gone. Christa was sleeping, Omid watching over her. Jessica and Pascucci were at the campfire. She gets up. "Thanks, that helped.", she says to Charlie.
Charlie snaps out of his trance. "Huh, what? Oh, yeah, don't mention it."
Her stomach growls again. I'm still hungry... She walks over to Jessica and Pascucci. "Hello. Is there any food left?"
Pascucci responds. "Actually, we have not eaten yet. The food shall be ready in a few minutes."
"Oh. Well, can I help out?"
"Do not worry, little girl. We will take care of it. You should take some rest. We will wake you up when the food is ready."
"Oh, okay."
Clementine walks to the pile of cloth near the campfire and lies down. She yawns. I haven't slept in a while, too. Slowly, she closes her eyes, and drifts into sleep.
-Continue from here-
(This is why I've made the summary a few posts above)
Oh my god, this was awesome! You have good skills. I choked out of laughter while eating popcorn by that part Kenny looked like he was smelling "manure" - Lilly and Kenny together? Never
I also enjoyed the feels
Thx
Huh, that was a smart way to clear up confusion between names. Nicely done.
Thank you
The moment Clementine opens her eyes she has the feeling that something is wrong. She looks up, noticing that everything is packed, all bags being loaded onto both jeeps. A plate with corn and beans is right next to her feet at the fireplace. As she stands up her eyes lay on the group gathered around Omid and Christa "It didn't work" are the words Clem catches while walking towards them. Christa looks awful with her pale faceskin and dark circles around the eyes. "SHUT UP!!" Yells Omid, looking at Jessica. "Just saying... I mean: wake up! Look at her skin - she is all pale. We've seen this a couple of times and we all know how this ends." Omid is close to loose his mind, shaking his head and saying "No, no, no, no..." in a loop. "He is right, Jessica, stop it." Eddie agrees. "What if it was you? I'd never let you down.". Jessica keeps staring at Christas stump while Pascucci looks at Kenny "You mentioned you did that before, I mean an amputation. How did it end?" Kenny looks down at his feet and crossing his arms, then looking into Clementines eyes: "Tell them, Clem." She takes a deep breath and tries to gather all the strength in her to say it out loud: "He did not make it. He was doomed to turn. He could feel it. He... He looked horrible." Clementine drops a tear "He said he will miss me... Leeee..." Charlie grabs her shoulder and the group is overcome with sadness. "Talk to her" Tyler insists. Omid strokes Christas cheek, saying "Chris, Honey... Listen.. Can you hear me...? Are you going to turn...?" Christa replies after a while "I don't feel well... Get me some antibiotics... You know what to do, Omid... Take me with you ... And don't forget handcuffs" Christa falls asleep, still breathing. After a minute of silence Tyler remarks:"We should be gone by now. The brutes might come every second...
Please continue from here
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I just want to remind the next poster: Don't forget about Nate. He's not mentioned in the last post, because when @Lord_Zasca mentioned him, it was in fact meant to be Eddie. There is currently no Nate in the group.
What do you mean?
''Clem, it's all right.'', Kenny says while walking towards Clementine, ''You don't have to be afraid, Everything is going to be alright.'' Clementine starts crying uncontrollably. ''It's all my fault, I shouldn't have.. I... Lee...''. ''We're all done packing, everyone in the cars!'' Tyler commands.
Kenny desperately tries to comfort Clementine, but to no avail. after ten minutes Kenny gives up and tells her to get into the car, Clementine listens to him and sits down next to Charlie. Pascucci sits down next to Omid, who's in the driver's seat, ''She's not going to make it. And even if we do get antibiotics, there's only a small chance that she'll recover.'' ''It's a chance I have to take, I am not letting her die, not like this.''
Omid turns on the car and starts driving right behind Eddie's car. They drive for a few miles before seeing two shadows off in the distance.
Dialogue choice:
Just keep driving / We should stop the car / remain silent
I'm not trying to be a jrek or anything.. But I jsut read this posts and who is this Nate? Yhe group had Clem, Kenny, Christa and omid, then Charlie joined them, and now the new group has Eddie, Jessica, Pascucci and Tyler. If you are refering to the Nate from 400 days, i introduced in the story a while ago and then someone said taht kenny appeared and punched him out of his truck and drove away with Christa, Omid and Clem. So nate is not in the story right now unless he returns
I assume he is referring to a misunderstanding a few posts ago: @Lord_Zasca had written Nate but truly meaning Eddie - he just mixed the names up. I guess @Zurrdroid once again makes clear it is not Nate but Eddie. The formulation is a bit puzzling though. Let's continue with the story
But true.
Yeah, what @TheMissus said. I was originally confused by the post that LZ had made, because he had mentioned Nate in it. Turns out it was a typo, and he actually meant Eddie. I'll edit so it's more clear.
Thanks. It was a reference to Episode 1, when Lee tells Clementine what the smell in the barn is.
Yeah, I got it. Actually I belong to the impudent part of people that told Clem it smells like "shit".
... Clementine says "they are scaring me, I think we should keep going", "You are right Clem we are keep going, Christa has no time for stops, or for anyone..." . replies Omid, with a serious look (almost never seen in him) as he looks at the fainted Christa in the back of the jeep. As Omid passes by the shadows, the group notices they are two men, 1 old man (problably on his 60's and a younger taller guy looking to be in his mid 20's). Omid keeps going but Pascucci suddendly yells "Wait!! They stopped" (refering to the jeep where Kenny, Eddie, Tyler and Jessica are). Omid stops the jeep a few meters ahead and when the two man approach the car, they see the taller man take a gun out of the jacket and point it towards the group in the car. Omid quickly backs the car trying to run them over and hits the old man, but sadly the tall guy gets a shoot and Charlie, Clem and Pascucci look terrified at the other jeep as they see Tyler got shot in the chest and faints...The shooter escapes but the old man is still moving and dragging himself through the tall grass, as Clementine is the only one that sees it, what does she say "He's still alive!!", "Run him over!!" or stay silent?
Just gotta say sorry for my story confusion. i was late at night and just wanted to jump in!
IT WAS LATE AT NIGHT! I WAS TIRED!
It's ok. It's resolved and everyone understood it was a mistake, let's just move on